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630 - Chip Tears

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AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 01, 2010 at 7:55:02 PM

Artist: 630
Title: Chip Tears
Tags: Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Shulin xierbaliti IncrediBeast NicoNicoDouga
BPM: 128
Filesize: 7001kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chipped Tears (4.49 stars, 149 notes)
  2. Nini's Broken Tears (4.76 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Shulin's Perfect Tear (1.57 stars, 91 notes)
Download: 630 - Chip Tears
Download: 630 - Chip Tears (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
03.26.10

-Started Beatmap-
*Added Dusty's Fix
*Added Killers Fix's
*Added Rust's Fix's
-Added new Diff-
*Added Ygo's Fix's
-Added New Diff-

03.27.10
*Added H-boys Fix's
*Added Xier's hitsounds <3
-Added New Diff-
*Added Natteke's Fix's
*Added Sushi's Fix's
*Added Orion's Fix's

03.28.10

*Added Fix's did storyboard map is complete~
*Added Beuchi's Storyboard <33
-Finished Map-
Last edited by AtemiskKun , edited 53 times in total.
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Umm... cant really find any errors plus the song is amazing and the pattern of the notes gives it a nice feeling playing it, you werent kidding when you said this was awesome :D +Star~
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
looks like this is going to be a very nicely done map as its coming along great so far
call me when its all finished and I will mod it fully, but have a star for now :)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
OK

suggestion time
[Chipped]
00:05:366 (4) - I think it looks better using Linear sliders for this stuff rather than red slider-points
00:13:335 (3,4) - it stacks weirdly, messing up spacing (I only notice because your spacing is so constant)

00:37:007 (1) - Why a spinner? :? it doesn't feel like much of a spinner-y section to me
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
...

ok then...

[chipped tears]

00:02:085 (3) - move left one square

00:06:538 (6) - move up one and right one.

00:06:773 (7) - move up one and left one

00:07:007 (8) - move up one (this one and the previous two suggestions will make it a square. neat

00:52:241 (4,5) - not very fond of these irregular sliders. maybe neaten them up?

00:53:648 (5) - make this note end on the white beat, not the red one

00:59:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move all of these one square to the right to match it up with the (7) slider

00:59:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - move it all down one square to match the following notes.

01:18:023 (3) - move this up a bit to align. its not on any grid so just click and drag it a tiny bit up to snap.

still has a way to go... (looking at the length of song...) but still quite good


grr... Miku =.=

encouragement star! :)
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
00:41:460 (8) - This is hard to see.

That's all I found, I won't give a star now since you don't even have one diff, complete, but I will wish you good luck in mapping this, even if it is miku.
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:

Delete the .osb file in the Song Folder and Full Submit.

Chipped Tears:

Combo Mod~
Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Chipped Tears].osu
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Here's my diff ^_^

Update: Oops! thought it went only until end of kiai XD anyways here's the updated version

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
Last edited by Sakura , edited 1 time in total.
rayxdgreatx
52 posts
Joined February 2010
rayxdgreatx
not modding guest diffs...

[Chipped Tears]
00:30:391 (x) - Remove unnecessary break here if you want
01:08:581 (2) - Little uncomfortable about stacks here and other similar places but that's just feeling
01:24:080 (5) - Too close to (4), maybe place it below

...that's all i got

anyway nice map
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Easy :D

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Shulin's Perfect Tear].osu
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Delete .osb file and full submit
Crop the .mp3.
Make kiai consistent between diffs?
Also make preview points the same for each diff

Sakura301's Lyrical
Set a preview point
00:25:523 (4) - The tail of the slider is blocked by the image burst (300,100,50) of 00:24:116 (7) when snaking sliders is off
01:31:265 (1) - Move 1/4 back

Chipped Tears
01:24:116 (5) - Spacing
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
^^ Thankies~
Last edited by AtemiskKun , edited 1 time in total.
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
[quote="AtemiskKun"][quote="NoHItter"]Delete .osb file and full submit
Crop the .mp3.
Make kiai consistent between diffs?
Also make preview points the same for each diff

Sakura301's Lyrical
Set a preview point
00:25:523 (4) - The tail of the slider is blocked by the image burst (300,100,50) of 00:24:116 (7) when snaking sliders is off
01:31:265 (1) - Move 1/4 back

Chipped Tears
01:24:116 (5) - Spacing the 5 is keeping a nice pattern not really wanting to change it because id have to move the rest
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[Chipped Tears]
01:24:116 (5) - This was pretty confusing at the first time since it's so close to the previous note.

[Sakura301's Lyrical]
-No preview point set
00:20:015 (6) - I think this note here doesn't fit in, but it's only my opinion.
00:25:288 (3) - Spacing
00:27:163 (7) - ^
01:18:960 (6) - ^

And the mp3 is lot longer than the map is, you should cut it. But overall the map was good and played well~ Star. ^^
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
i think you need clip the song...

Shulin's Perfect Tear
00:22:710(3) - end at 0:23:648

Sakura301's Lyrical
00:02:320(1) - Make symetric
00:09:820(1) - ^
00:20:015(6) - delete
00:27:398(8) - remove clap
00:28:335(x) - add a note with whistle
00:33:491(6) - end at 00:34:195

Chipped Tears
00:46:851~00:50:601 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make symetric
00:55:991(1) - end at 00:59:038
00:59:507(x) - add a note with finish,and turn the vioce down
00:59:741(1) - delete
00:59:976(x) - add a note with whistle
01:24:116(5) - spacing?
01:29:507(3) - delete and like this


star~
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
999 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
-General-
I added some custom hitsounds.Try to use them if you like. :)
Delete the .osb file and you need full submit.

-Chipped Tears-
The list what I changed:
Added hitsounds.
Kiai time:01:02:320~01:16:616 and 01:17:320~01:32:320
00:28:570 (1) - end this spinner at 00:31:851
00:37:007 (1) - end this spinner at 00:39:351
00:51:538 add a circlr here
00:55:991 (1) - end at 00:59:038.
01:24:116 (5) - new combo and remove new combo form 01:24:819 (1) .
01:27:866 (1) - Added new combo
01:28:570 (2) - removed new combo
01:29:507 (4) - Added new combo
01:29:976&01:30:445 - added 2 circles.

Just suggestions.You can choose any part if you like. :3

Download: hitsounds.rar

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [．＿．].osu
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

H-boy wrote:

i think you need clip the song...

Shulin's Perfect Tear
00:22:710(3) - end at 0:23:648

Sakura301's Lyrical
00:02:320(1) - Make symetric
00:09:820(1) - ^
00:20:015(6) - delete
00:27:398(8) - remove clap
00:28:335(x) - add a note with whistle
00:33:491(6) - end at 00:34:195

Chipped Tears
00:46:851~00:50:601 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make symetric Done
00:55:991(1) - end at 00:59:038 done
00:59:507(x) - add a note with finish,and turn the vioce down not really needed
00:59:741(1) - delete i think its perfectly fine there to be honest
00:59:976(x) - add a note with whistle ^
01:24:116(5) - spacing? it follows a nice pattern and is perfectly readable if your paying attention
01:29:507(3) - delete and like this done but tweaked
[attachment=0:89b08]1.jpg[/attachment:89b08]


thankies ^^
star~
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
[General]

- Why only about 30% of the song is mapped? Cut the mp3 then.
- Omg, the offset is a bit late, I can really feel it when listeting to the hitsounds and when play I get ~22ms early hits.
- How is Hatsune Miku related to this song? o.0


[Shulin's Perfect Tear]

Looks fine to me.


[Sakura301's Lyrical]

Use more hitsounds

- 00:07:995 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is different comapring to 00:06:120 (1,2,3,4)
- 00:24:870 (1,2,3) - spacing is different on 3rd note
- 00:33:541 (6) - this slider must end at 00:34:010
- 01:31:315 (1) - start this spinner on 01:31:198 and end at 01:32:370


[Chipped Tears]

Fine.
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura

NoHItter wrote:

Sakura301's Lyrical
Set a preview point Done
00:25:523 (4) - The tail of the slider is blocked by the image burst (300,100,50) of 00:24:116 (7) when snaking sliders is off Fixed
01:31:265 (1) - Move 1/4 back Done

Lanttu wrote:

[Sakura301's Lyrical]
-No preview point set Already done on previous mod
00:20:015 (6) - I think this note here doesn't fit in, but it's only my opinion. It's following the lyrics
00:25:288 (3) - Spacing Fixed
00:27:163 (7) - ^ ^
01:18:960 (6) - ^ ^

Natteke desu wrote:

][Sakura301's Lyrical]

Use more hitsounds I need help from a hitsound expert for that

- 00:07:995 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is different comapring to 00:06:120 (1,2,3,4) Fixed i think
- 00:24:870 (1,2,3) - spacing is different on 3rd note DS says otherwise Oo
- 00:33:541 (6) - this slider must end at 00:34:010 Fixed
- 01:31:315 (1) - start this spinner on 01:31:198 and end at 01:32:370 Did that on previous mod ^^
Thanks for the input! ^^
Kudosu should be awarded to Natteke desu, that helped my guest diff o.o

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
[Sakura's]
00:20:065 (6,7,8) - obvious spacing error. Is (6) really needed?
00:54:870 (Break) - Considering the length of the song, I think this is a quite big break. Besides, it can be easily filled
01:04:948 (6,1) - Is this kind of Anti jump wanted? Even if I know it's here, i keep on clicking it too early. very annoying
01:19:948 (8,1) - (8) Hides the repeat of (1). This is problematic. and same thing on anti jumps

[Chipped]
Nothing really wrong, but if you want, you can check AIMMod for minor spacing stuff


I like the song, though
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