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AtemiskKun
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AtemiskKun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 01, 2010 at 7:55:02 PM

Artist: 630
Title: Chip Tears
Tags: Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Shulin xierbaliti IncrediBeast NicoNicoDouga
BPM: 128
Filesize: 7001kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chipped Tears (4.49 stars, 149 notes)
  2. Nini's Broken Tears (4.76 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Shulin's Perfect Tear (1.57 stars, 91 notes)
Download: 630 - Chip Tears
Download: 630 - Chip Tears (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
03.26.10

-Started Beatmap-
*Added Dusty's Fix
*Added Killers Fix's
*Added Rust's Fix's
-Added new Diff-
*Added Ygo's Fix's
-Added New Diff-

03.27.10
*Added H-boys Fix's
*Added Xier's hitsounds <3
-Added New Diff-
*Added Natteke's Fix's
*Added Sushi's Fix's
*Added Orion's Fix's

03.28.10

*Added Fix's did storyboard map is complete~
*Added Beuchi's Storyboard <33
-Finished Map-
Last edited by AtemiskKun , edited 53 times in total.
Sakura
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Sakura
Umm... cant really find any errors plus the song is amazing and the pattern of the notes gives it a nice feeling playing it, you werent kidding when you said this was awesome :D +Star~
James2250
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James2250
looks like this is going to be a very nicely done map as its coming along great so far
call me when its all finished and I will mod it fully, but have a star for now :)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
OK

suggestion time
[Chipped]
00:05:366 (4) - I think it looks better using Linear sliders for this stuff rather than red slider-points
00:13:335 (3,4) - it stacks weirdly, messing up spacing (I only notice because your spacing is so constant)

00:37:007 (1) - Why a spinner? :? it doesn't feel like much of a spinner-y section to me
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
...

ok then...

[chipped tears]

00:02:085 (3) - move left one square

00:06:538 (6) - move up one and right one.

00:06:773 (7) - move up one and left one

00:07:007 (8) - move up one (this one and the previous two suggestions will make it a square. neat

00:52:241 (4,5) - not very fond of these irregular sliders. maybe neaten them up?

00:53:648 (5) - make this note end on the white beat, not the red one

00:59:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move all of these one square to the right to match it up with the (7) slider

00:59:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - move it all down one square to match the following notes.

01:18:023 (3) - move this up a bit to align. its not on any grid so just click and drag it a tiny bit up to snap.

still has a way to go... (looking at the length of song...) but still quite good


grr... Miku =.=

encouragement star! :)
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
00:41:460 (8) - This is hard to see.

That's all I found, I won't give a star now since you don't even have one diff, complete, but I will wish you good luck in mapping this, even if it is miku.
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
General:

Delete the .osb file in the Song Folder and Full Submit.

Chipped Tears:

Combo Mod~
Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Chipped Tears].osu
Sakura
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Sakura
Here's my diff ^_^

Update: Oops! thought it went only until end of kiai XD anyways here's the updated version

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
Last edited by Sakura , edited 1 time in total.
rayxdgreatx
52 posts
Joined February 2010
rayxdgreatx
not modding guest diffs...

[Chipped Tears]
00:30:391 (x) - Remove unnecessary break here if you want
01:08:581 (2) - Little uncomfortable about stacks here and other similar places but that's just feeling
01:24:080 (5) - Too close to (4), maybe place it below

...that's all i got

anyway nice map
Shulin
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Joined August 2009
Shulin
Easy :D

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Shulin's Perfect Tear].osu
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Delete .osb file and full submit
Crop the .mp3.
Make kiai consistent between diffs?
Also make preview points the same for each diff

Sakura301's Lyrical
Set a preview point
00:25:523 (4) - The tail of the slider is blocked by the image burst (300,100,50) of 00:24:116 (7) when snaking sliders is off
01:31:265 (1) - Move 1/4 back

Chipped Tears
01:24:116 (5) - Spacing
AtemiskKun
112 posts
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Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
^^ Thankies~
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AtemiskKun
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Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
[quote="AtemiskKun"][quote="NoHItter"]Delete .osb file and full submit
Crop the .mp3.
Make kiai consistent between diffs?
Also make preview points the same for each diff

Sakura301's Lyrical
Set a preview point
00:25:523 (4) - The tail of the slider is blocked by the image burst (300,100,50) of 00:24:116 (7) when snaking sliders is off
01:31:265 (1) - Move 1/4 back

Chipped Tears
01:24:116 (5) - Spacing the 5 is keeping a nice pattern not really wanting to change it because id have to move the rest
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[Chipped Tears]
01:24:116 (5) - This was pretty confusing at the first time since it's so close to the previous note.

[Sakura301's Lyrical]
-No preview point set
00:20:015 (6) - I think this note here doesn't fit in, but it's only my opinion.
00:25:288 (3) - Spacing
00:27:163 (7) - ^
01:18:960 (6) - ^

And the mp3 is lot longer than the map is, you should cut it. But overall the map was good and played well~ Star. ^^
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
i think you need clip the song...

Shulin's Perfect Tear
00:22:710(3) - end at 0:23:648

Sakura301's Lyrical
00:02:320(1) - Make symetric
00:09:820(1) - ^
00:20:015(6) - delete
00:27:398(8) - remove clap
00:28:335(x) - add a note with whistle
00:33:491(6) - end at 00:34:195

Chipped Tears
00:46:851~00:50:601 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make symetric
00:55:991(1) - end at 00:59:038
00:59:507(x) - add a note with finish,and turn the vioce down
00:59:741(1) - delete
00:59:976(x) - add a note with whistle
01:24:116(5) - spacing?
01:29:507(3) - delete and like this


star~
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
-General-
I added some custom hitsounds.Try to use them if you like. :)
Delete the .osb file and you need full submit.

-Chipped Tears-
The list what I changed:
Added hitsounds.
Kiai time:01:02:320~01:16:616 and 01:17:320~01:32:320
00:28:570 (1) - end this spinner at 00:31:851
00:37:007 (1) - end this spinner at 00:39:351
00:51:538 add a circlr here
00:55:991 (1) - end at 00:59:038.
01:24:116 (5) - new combo and remove new combo form 01:24:819 (1) .
01:27:866 (1) - Added new combo
01:28:570 (2) - removed new combo
01:29:507 (4) - Added new combo
01:29:976&01:30:445 - added 2 circles.

Just suggestions.You can choose any part if you like. :3

Download: hitsounds.rar

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [．＿．].osu
AtemiskKun
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Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

H-boy wrote:

i think you need clip the song...

Shulin's Perfect Tear
00:22:710(3) - end at 0:23:648

Sakura301's Lyrical
00:02:320(1) - Make symetric
00:09:820(1) - ^
00:20:015(6) - delete
00:27:398(8) - remove clap
00:28:335(x) - add a note with whistle
00:33:491(6) - end at 00:34:195

Chipped Tears
00:46:851~00:50:601 (4,5,1,2,3) - Make symetric Done
00:55:991(1) - end at 00:59:038 done
00:59:507(x) - add a note with finish,and turn the vioce down not really needed
00:59:741(1) - delete i think its perfectly fine there to be honest
00:59:976(x) - add a note with whistle ^
01:24:116(5) - spacing? it follows a nice pattern and is perfectly readable if your paying attention
01:29:507(3) - delete and like this done but tweaked
[attachment=0:89b08]1.jpg[/attachment:89b08]


thankies ^^
star~
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
[General]

- Why only about 30% of the song is mapped? Cut the mp3 then.
- Omg, the offset is a bit late, I can really feel it when listeting to the hitsounds and when play I get ~22ms early hits.
- How is Hatsune Miku related to this song? o.0


[Shulin's Perfect Tear]

Looks fine to me.


[Sakura301's Lyrical]

Use more hitsounds

- 00:07:995 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is different comapring to 00:06:120 (1,2,3,4)
- 00:24:870 (1,2,3) - spacing is different on 3rd note
- 00:33:541 (6) - this slider must end at 00:34:010
- 01:31:315 (1) - start this spinner on 01:31:198 and end at 01:32:370


[Chipped Tears]

Fine.
Sakura
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Sakura

NoHItter wrote:

Sakura301's Lyrical
Set a preview point Done
00:25:523 (4) - The tail of the slider is blocked by the image burst (300,100,50) of 00:24:116 (7) when snaking sliders is off Fixed
01:31:265 (1) - Move 1/4 back Done

Lanttu wrote:

[Sakura301's Lyrical]
-No preview point set Already done on previous mod
00:20:015 (6) - I think this note here doesn't fit in, but it's only my opinion. It's following the lyrics
00:25:288 (3) - Spacing Fixed
00:27:163 (7) - ^ ^
01:18:960 (6) - ^ ^

Natteke desu wrote:

][Sakura301's Lyrical]

Use more hitsounds I need help from a hitsound expert for that

- 00:07:995 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is different comapring to 00:06:120 (1,2,3,4) Fixed i think
- 00:24:870 (1,2,3) - spacing is different on 3rd note DS says otherwise Oo
- 00:33:541 (6) - this slider must end at 00:34:010 Fixed
- 01:31:315 (1) - start this spinner on 01:31:198 and end at 01:32:370 Did that on previous mod ^^
Thanks for the input! ^^
Kudosu should be awarded to Natteke desu, that helped my guest diff o.o

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
Sushi
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Sushi
[Sakura's]
00:20:065 (6,7,8) - obvious spacing error. Is (6) really needed?
00:54:870 (Break) - Considering the length of the song, I think this is a quite big break. Besides, it can be easily filled
01:04:948 (6,1) - Is this kind of Anti jump wanted? Even if I know it's here, i keep on clicking it too early. very annoying
01:19:948 (8,1) - (8) Hides the repeat of (1). This is problematic. and same thing on anti jumps

[Chipped]
Nothing really wrong, but if you want, you can check AIMMod for minor spacing stuff


I like the song, though
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Shulin's Perfect Tear:

01:07:995 (5) - Too far to the left
01:24:870 (1,4) - Make these go at 45 degrees like (2) and (3)

Sakura301's Lyrical:

00:02:370 (1) - Perhaps make this symmetrical? :)
00:09:870 (1) - ^
01:05:416 (1) - Too close to (6)
01:20:416 (1) - Too close to (8)

Chipped Tears:

00:15:495 ~ 00:21:120 and 00:23:932 ~ 00:28:620 - These breaks seem a bit unnecessary IMO... I don't know if you plan on mapping through them but I'd recommend doing so.

Nini's Broken Tears: Nothing wrong so far

Nice work so far! :) *star*
Sakura
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Sakura

Sushi971 wrote:

[Sakura's]
00:20:065 (6,7,8) - obvious spacing error. Is (6) really needed? Fixed, how did that (6) get in there X_X
00:54:870 (Break) - Considering the length of the song, I think this is a quite big break. Besides, it can be easily filled I like it the way it is
01:04:948 (6,1) - Is this kind of Anti jump wanted? Even if I know it's here, i keep on clicking it too early. very annoying LOL, XD, ok let's see, it was required to be there and im not sure if i should flip this vertically, i had it there because that way the jump isnt too big, and i dont want this diff being too hard as it's supposed to be regular Normal
01:19:948 (8,1) - (8) Hides the repeat of (1). This is problematic. and same thing on anti jumps Fixed the combo burst hiding the repeat


I like the song, though
Deserves Kudosu!

pieguy1372 wrote:

Sakura301's Lyrical:

00:02:370 (1) - Perhaps make this symmetrical? That was the intention, but im not good at making a bezier symetrical yet
00:09:870 (1) - ^ It was a copy/paste so yeah... same thing as above
01:05:416 (1) - Too close to (6) In my defense... that's a new combo
01:20:416 (1) - Too close to (8) ^
Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Hm...perhaps try something like:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5830

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5831
Dark
60 posts
Joined February 2010
Dark
All done! Here's my difficulty:

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Nini's Broken Tears].osu
orioncomet
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orioncomet
just some suggestions.

[General]
- Add 'Shulin xierbalit IncrediBeasti' to tag and make sure that your tag all the diffs are the same
- delete .osb file and full submission again

[Sakura301's Lyrical]
00:27:448 (8) - remove sound clap at last silder (00:27:916)?

[Nini's Broken Tears]
00:59:088 - add break? (and clean your timing selection on this part too)

I like the song ~
starr ~
Sakura
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Sakura

orioncomet wrote:

[Sakura301's Lyrical]
00:27:448 (8) - remove sound clap at last silder (00:27:916)? Done
Aditionally i added some more hitsounds throughout the song, i shouldnt depend on others to tell me the hitsounds so i am trying to create my own style ^^

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
James2250
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James2250
guess I can't complain about all of the different breaks and kiai times as everyone made a difficulty
add Shulin to tags on all difficulties
have stack leniency the same on all the difficulties
Preview point on Sakura301's: 59273 (make it 59742 like the others...very small detail I know)
1 difficulty that is below 4 stars then 3 that are above it I suggest making Sakura301's below 4 stars
why is the Beatmap by Incredibeast shown on all difficulties?

Shulin's Perfect Tear:
00:58:620 (1) - start at 00:58:385? (same endpoint)

Sakura301's Lyrical:
I think when you have claps you should continue the rhythm of them more (look at Chipped tears to see what I mean)
lower overall diff/hp drain by 1
00:06:120 (1,2,3,4) - keep equal spacing throughout this
00:15:495 - oddly placed break..I would map this part as the break seems kinda random, maybe put the break like in chipped tears
00:30:260 (6,7,1) - don't think all the claps sound good together here
00:34:713 (2) - add clap
00:54:870 - this is a long break for the length of the song..and there isn't a big reason for it, try and remove some of it and map it?
01:04:948 (6,1) - spacing
01:19:948 (8,1) - spacing
01:31:198 (1) - remove clap

Chipped Tears:
go through the map and make sure all your combo's follow some sort of pattern as I didn't follow it at some points
00:22:057 (4) - add note

Nini's Broken Tears:
make countdown on normal (not halftime) like all the other difficulties?
00:21:120 - I would prefer you shorten this break and map some of it (then you can put a break later in the song if you want)
00:27:916 (4,5,1) - spacing
00:38:698 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:541 (1,2) - align these
01:00:495 - put break here
01:02:135 (2,4) - align
01:04:479 (1,2,3) - make this a straight line?
01:22:995 (1) - remove new combo?
01:24:166 (1,3) - align
01:30:729 (1) - start at 01:30:495 (same endpoint) + add finish

PM me after all the fixes and I will see what I can do about a pubble
Lissette
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Lissette
Nini's Broken Tears
00:04:713 (4,5) - too close together
00:14:088 (2,3) - same
00:26:510 (1,2) - same
00:59:088 - insert break-time
delete all inherited timing section (green lines) that you are not using plz like in this section 00:59:088 - 01:01:432 -

Chipped Tears
01:15:026 (7,8) - wrong spacing
same, delete green lines that you are not using
00:59:557 - why dont you put the "Beatmap by IncrediBeast" in a breaktime? so it can be read it

Sakura301's Lyrical
unable countdown like in the others difficulties
01:30:963 (9) - move half beat later, same with the start point of the spinner

Shulin's Perfect Tear
unable countdown like in the others difficulties

Nice map!
Star!
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
;~; A slow song. Also holy this is hard to hitsound.

Anyways

Shulin:

00:02:370 (1) - Add clap on end of slider and remove whistle
00:06:120 (1) - ^
00:07:995 (2) - Add finish on end of slider
00:34:713 (2) - Add clap on beginning and end of slider (not on repeat)
00:37:526 (2) - Add clap
00:37:760 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
00:39:401 (5) - Add clap
00:41:276 (2) - ^
00:43:151 (4) - ^

Sakura:
00:17:370 (1) - Add finish, remove clap
00:22:526 (4) - Add clap
00:24:166 (7) - Add clap on end of slider
00:24:870 (1) - Add finish, remove clap
00:25:573 (4) - Add clap on end of slider
00:29:557 (3) - Add clap
00:37:057 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
00:39:401 (2) - Add clap
00:39:870 (1) - Remove clap
00:42:448 (3,4) - Add clap
00:42:916 (5) - Add clap on end of slider
00:46:901 (2) - Add clap
01:03:541 (3) - ^
01:05:416 (1) - Add clap on repeat
01:06:354 (2) - Remove clap
01:06:588 (3) - Add clap
01:09:166 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:10:338 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:12:916 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:14:088 (3) - Add clap
01:15:963 (9,10) - ^
01:21:354 (2) - Remove Clap
01:21:588 (3) - Add clap
01:24:166 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:25:338 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:27:916 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:29:088 (3) - Add clap
01:30:495 (7,8,9) - ^

Chipped:
WAAAH TIMING SECTIONS ;~;
00:28:620 (1) - Add clap

Nini:
WAAAH TIMING SECTIONS ;~;
00:04:948 (5) - Add clap
00:05:182 (6) - Add clap on repeat
00:25:338 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider
00:26:276 (4) - Add clap
00:27:916 (4) - Add whistle
00:28:151 (5) - Add clap
00:29:557 (4) - Add whistle
00:30:026 (6) - Add clap
00:37:057 (3) - Add clap on second repeat
00:38:698 (3) - Remove new combo
00:50:182 (4) - Add clap on end of slider
00:54:870 (2) - Add finish
00:57:213 (4) - ^
00:57:682 (6,8) - Add claps
00:58:854 - Add break here
01:03:073 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue
01:05:651 (4) - Add clap
01:10:807 (6) - ^
01:20:651 (4) - ^
01:21:588 (7) - ^
01:26:276 (6) - ^
01:28:151 (2,6) - ^
01:30:026 (9,10) - ^
LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs
hi

hitsound

Shulin's Perfect Tear

[00:03:76] remove whistle?
[00:05:65] ^
[00:07:52] ^
[00:09:40] ^
[00:25:33] Put a "soft-slidertick" into the folder and add a green line (C1) here .
[00:30:26] add a normal green line so as to stop use C1
[00:50:65] add clap ,remove whistle
[00:52:52] move the whistle to [00:52:99]
[00:53:46] move .... .......... to [00:53;93]

Sakura301's Lyrical

[00:04:10] no need a whistle here, but maybe use custom ( soft-whistle ) "soft-slidertick2" on some white line this long slider? (cause i saw many ticks ..)
[00:17:27] ^
[00:00:00] ~ [00:32:20] volume too loud , i think use 80% is ok
kiai tima part : start at [01:02:37] and end at [01:1619]
[01:03:30] clap
[01:04:24] ^
[01:04:94] ^
[01:05:65] ^
[01:05:85] remove clap
[01:06:58] clap
[01:07:05] ^
[01:07:52] ^
[01:07:99] ^
[01:08:46] ^
[01:09:63] (slider) clap [ (slider) clap = all slider's begining & ending should use clap ]
[01:10:80] clap
[01:13:83] (slider) clap
[01:14:55] clap
[01:15:02] ^
[01:15:49] ^
[01:15:96] ^
[01:31:19] remove clap

Chipped Tears

[00:24:16] remove the clap slidertick

Nini's Broken Tears

[00:20:60] turn down the volume to 50%

STAR
Dark
60 posts
Joined February 2010
Dark

James2250 wrote:

why is the Beatmap by Incredibeast shown on all difficulties?

Fixed. I'll give him the new .osb when I can.

Nini's Broken Tears:
make countdown on normal (not halftime) like all the other difficulties? Check
00:21:120 - I would prefer you shorten this break and map some of it (then you can put a break later in the song if you want) Do you think I should shorten it or just completely get rid of it? And, should I map more towards the beginning or the end of the currently existing break?
00:27:916 (4,5,1) - spacing Check
00:38:698 (1) - remove new combo Check
00:48:541 (1,2) - align these Check
01:00:495 - put break hereCheck
01:02:135 (2,4) - alignCheck
01:04:479 (1,2,3) - make this a straight line? Check
01:22:995 (1) - remove new combo? Check
01:24:166 (1,3) - align Check
01:30:729 (1) - start at 01:30:495 (same endpoint) + add finish Check

PM me after all the fixes and I will see what I can do about a pubble
Deserves Kudosu
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Dark
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Joined February 2010
Dark

Lissette wrote:

Nini's Broken Tears
00:04:713 (4,5) - too close together Check
00:14:088 (2,3) - same Check
00:26:510 (1,2) - same Check
00:59:088 - insert break-time Check
delete all inherited timing section (green lines) that you are not using plz like in this section 00:59:088 - 01:01:432 - I'll get Ateh to look at it.

Star!
Deserves Kudosu
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Glass
Glass
Woah you sure finished this quick. Sorry didn't have time to check everything yet, been busy redoing my map's timing.
Dark
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Dark

CDFA wrote:

Nini:
WAAAH TIMING SECTIONS ;~;
00:04:948 (5) - Add clap Check
00:05:182 (6) - Add clap on repeat Check
00:25:338 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider Check
00:26:276 (4) - Add clap Check
00:27:916 (4) - Add whistle Check
00:28:151 (5) - Add clap Check
00:29:557 (4) - Add whistle Check
00:30:026 (6) - Add clap Check
00:37:057 (3) - Add clap on second repeat Check
00:38:698 (3) - Remove new combo Check
00:50:182 (4) - Add clap on end of sliderCheck
00:54:870 (2) - Add finish Check
00:57:213 (4) - ^ Check
00:57:682 (6,8) - Add claps Check
00:58:854 - Add break here Check
01:03:073 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue Is this better? I had a bit of a hard time with it.
01:05:651 (4) - Add clap Check
01:10:807 (6) - ^ Check
01:20:651 (4) - ^ Check
01:21:588 (7) - ^ Check
01:26:276 (6) - ^ Check
01:28:151 (2,6) - ^Check
01:30:026 (9,10) - ^ Check
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Dark
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Dark

LKs wrote:

Nini's Broken Tears

[00:20:60] turn down the volume to 50% Check

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Dark
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Dark
Okay, here it is so far. I haven't mapped the break yet but I'll do that shortly.

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Nini's Broken Tears].osu
Sakura
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Sakura

James2250 wrote:

guess I can't complain about all of the different breaks and kiai times as everyone made a difficulty
add Shulin to tags on all difficulties
have stack leniency the same on all the difficulties
Preview point on Sakura301's: 59273 (make it 59742 like the others...very small detail I know)
1 difficulty that is below 4 stars then 3 that are above it I suggest making Sakura301's below 4 stars Ehh... but if i go putting even more notes on those breaks the star difficulty will increase instead X_X
why is the Beatmap by Incredibeast shown on all difficulties?

Sakura301's Lyrical:
I think when you have claps you should continue the rhythm of them more (look at Chipped tears to see what I mean)
lower overall diff/hp drain by 1 Done
00:06:120 (1,2,3,4) - keep equal spacing throughout this I think it's fixed... kinda hard to see the grid X_X
00:15:495 - oddly placed break..I would map this part as the break seems kinda random, maybe put the break like in chipped tears Fixed, i hope
00:30:260 (6,7,1) - don't think all the claps sound good together here You think so? Oo ok
00:34:713 (2) - add clap Done
00:54:870 - this is a long break for the length of the song..and there isn't a big reason for it, try and remove some of it and map it? As i said on IRC im kind of blocked right now, this will have to wait
01:04:948 (6,1) - spacing Is it such a big deal? it's a new combo, and it's the opposite of a jump
01:19:948 (8,1) - spacing ^
01:31:198 (1) - remove clap Done
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CDFA wrote:

Sakura:
00:17:370 (1) - Add finish, remove clap Done
00:22:526 (4) - Add clap Done
00:24:166 (7) - Add clap on end of slider Done
00:24:870 (1) - Add finish, remove clap Done
00:25:573 (4) - Add clap on end of slider Done
00:29:557 (3) - Add clap Done
00:37:057 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider Done
00:39:401 (2) - Add clap Done
00:39:870 (1) - Remove clap Done
00:42:448 (3,4) - Add clap Done
00:42:916 (5) - Add clap on end of slider Done
00:46:901 (2) - Add clap Done
01:03:541 (3) - ^ Done
01:05:416 (1) - Add clap on repeat Done
01:06:354 (2) - Remove clap Done
01:06:588 (3) - Add clap Done
01:09:166 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done
01:10:338 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider Done
01:12:916 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done
01:14:088 (3) - Add clap Done
01:15:963 (9,10) - ^ Done
01:21:354 (2) - Remove Clap Done
01:21:588 (3) - Add clap Done
01:24:166 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done
01:25:338 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider Done
01:27:916 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done, wow im losing track of what im doing
01:29:088 (3) - Add clap Done
01:30:495 (7,8,9) - ^ Done
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At LKs: Seeing as CDFH already did a hitsound mod dont think yours is needed now

Download: 630 - Chip Tears (AtemiskKun) [Sakura301's Lyrical].osu
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