This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 05 de mayo de 2010 at 21:23:18

Artist: Demetori
Title: Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Source: Touhou
Tags: Linkred2 sakuya Kotomi-chan
BPM: 160
Filesize: 10768kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:

1. Extra Stage (5 stars, 691 notes)
2. Kotomi's Hard (4,25 stars, 239 notes)
3. Linkred's Mild (1,82 stars, 94 notes)
4. Lunatic (5 stars, 518 notes)

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map. Play and comment in the forum
La mayor parte del skin es de touhou que es de S i R i R u , espero que no alla ningun problema . Tambien darle las gracias a FPRC16 que me ayudo en el tema del skin

Mosr of the skin is of the Touhou one which belongs to S i S i R i. I hope it doesn't cause any problem. Also Ywanna thank FPRC16 who help me on the skin theme (so I can rea it)

Pubbled

Star... ya te mando el map con el timing corregido...

Toma como referencia esta diff. a la hora de arreglar las otras diffs ^^

Suerte :3

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Lunatic].osu

realmente me ha gustado mucho el mapa lord ^^ espero que te vaya muy bien con el ;3

starred ^^

Esta muy bueno para ser tu primer map así que...Te mereces una estrellita

me gusto mucho tu beatmap lord espero ke te lo rankeen prke esta muy bueno te mereces la estrella

Great beatmap. Too many jumps in Lunatic, but I think you planned it on that way.

hola lord ta weno tu map soy liukang pero esta es la cuenta de mi hermano porque a mia en el foro no la acepta te dare una estrella

etto... muy bueno tu map, yo creo que deven aver uno detalles en los que te faltan y para eso deves pedir ayuda, yo no te podria decir todos los detalles, pero lo que te falta es un poco mas de skin.
trata de pedir la ayuda en los foros para mejorar tu map y tambien le puedes pedir ayuda a beu.
y eso xD.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Buen map, aunque en Lunatic hay muchos jumps xD...
¡Star! ;3

PD. dale créditos a S i R i R u por usar parte de su skin en el de la song xD

Recently I noticed you have a break time at the end of the Lunatic diff. That break isn't needed, and it produces the song doesn't end on Taiko. Please, erase it manually on a text editor.

ok, let's me try.. orion's mod go!!

~[General]~
- set BG color to Black is better
- set PreviewTime in all diffs (Menu- Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview) and make sure that all of difficulty have the same
- delete Creato's name out of tag because it's your map you don't need it ~
- add name of guest's diff on the TAG

~[Linkred's Easy+]~
- add offset like other diffs 3200
00:32:250 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:04:687 (2) - ^
01:06:187 (5) - ^
02:08:062 (6,7) - ^

~[Hard]~
- I think this diff is Insane >_<
- Silder Velocity faster then [Lunatic]
00:32:825 (5) - spacing
00:33:200 (6) - ^
01:22:700 - 01:46:700 this part KIAI time too long shorten it at 01:34:887 maybe
01:36:950 (7) - end this silder at 01:37:325 is better more on blue trick, IMO
01:37:512 (8,9,10) - spacing
01:44:450 Insert break time
02:04:325 (14) - insert 1 stack
03:14:075 (7) - end this silder at 03:14:450 is better more on blue trick, IMO
03:21:012 (1) - try sound finish

~[Lunatic]~
like [Hard] 01:22:700 - 01:46:700 this part KIAI time too long shorten it at 01:34:887 maybe
end KIAI time at 03:21:200
LOL i don't know how will i mod this diff but [Lunatic] jump's part so funny

star then goodluck~

[General]

Remove "Lunar Clock Luna Dial demetori" from tags.
Uh oh, you seem to have deleted 2 of the background images. When the "xxx.jpg and xxx.jpg files are unused, remove?" dialogue pops up, click No. They're actually the background for the 2 other difficulties.
Comboburst is too wide, max is 500px width.
Unused files:
- ranking-back.png
- ranking-replay.png
- ranking-retry.png
- .osb file
Lots of little white patches near the edges for skin elements, clean those up?
Don't really like the spinner, since it doesn't give much of a sense of where the center actually is, and how fast it's spinning. As well, the background seems vertically squished.

Jumping from 2 stars to 5 is a bit harsh, consider a middle Normal?

[Linkred's Easy+]

Eh, Easy+ is weird. Is it Easy or Normal?
Unrankably low stack leniency.
This map has countdown different from the other diffs.

01:22:700 (1,2,3) - Awkward sounding repeats...

[Hard]

More like an Insane.

00:42:200 (1,2,3) - Watch spacing; 1-2 and 2-3 are equally spaced, but time-wise, are different.
00:53:075 (1) - Spacing in this section is messed.
01:24:387 (1,1,1) - Don't need so many new combos. I'm also concerned with how the slider heads fall on the off-beats (Red ticks) instead of the white ones, which plays much nicer.
01:27:387 (1,1,1) - ^
01:35:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very random pattern. (also finishes hurt the ears, including the parts after this)
02:04:700 - This break doesn't make much sense.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - Random and unexpected, repeats are concealed by the hitbursts.
02:25:325 - End kiai before the break?

Same comments as before for the last section of the map.

[Insane]

Max score is quite high.

00:25:325 (4) - Totally out of nowhere.
00:36:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^, and spacing between sliders is inconsistent.
00:48:950 (1,2,3) - Bleh, antijump.
01:00:387 - Remove this break; too short.
01:09:575 - Weird place to start a break, map a bit more.
01:22:700 - Spacing here is ridiculous, make it more reasonable.
01:35:825 (1,2) - Weird timing.
01:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern.
01:42:199 (15,1) - Spacing is way too big already, why this jump mid-stream?
01:46:700 - Stream is way too long, not fun.
01:52:887 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.

Not going to keep modding this, mostly just the spacing is way too crazy and it feels like a really long stream with a few breaks. I recommend you scrap this difficulty, make Hard your Insane, and map a proper Normal/Hard.

Good luck!

Its really cool~ take it, star~

irc mod, lol.

I don't know a blank spinner circle is rankable or not...


~Linkred's Easy+~
02:04:418 (4) - move 1/4 left

~Lunatic~
SliderTickRate:1
00:29:262 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:762 (1) - ^
00:53:450 (1) - ^
00:53:825 (1) - ^
00:58:325 (3) - new combo
01:12:200 (4) - ^
01:13:887 (10) - ^
01:35:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move up 1 grid & left 2 grids (Lv3)
01:39:387 (7) - new combo
01:42:387 (1) - remove new combo
01:48:575 (11) - new combo
01:51:575 (6) - ^
01:54:575 (11) - ^
01:57:575 (11) - ^
02:00:575 (6) - ^
02:03:575 (6) - ^
02:17:450 (4) - ^
02:23:450 (2) - ^
02:33:387 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:887 (1) - ^
02:38:825 (4) - new combo
02:40:512 (13) - ^
03:12:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
03:16:512 (7) - new combo
03:19:512 (1) - remove new combo

~Extra Stage~
00:16:700 (5) - new combo
00:22:700 (5) - ^
02:17:450 (4) - ^
02:19:043 (1) - remove new combo
03:23:825 - end the map here


+Star

Edit: Added sounds and changed the diff to a less-weird name.

Alright bg image was submitted.

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Linkred's Mild].osu

En general no le veo nada "malo" al map excepto que es muy dificil xDD me gusto la cancion y esos blanco,azul y rojo sugestivos xDDDD

El unico detalle sep es que en extra stage son muy rapidos los sliders.

Mi estrellita man y suerte.

La dif que me pediste, y el bg que me gustaría que le pusieras <3
Si le falta algo, dime por PM in-game

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Normal].osu

Kotomi-chan wrote:

La dif que me pediste, y el bg que me gustaría que le pusieras <3
Si le falta algo, dime por PM in-game

Te quedo bacano, man.

Wow, que bueno el mapa!! :O

[Linkred's Mild]

01:37:512 (5,6) - Spacing
01:39:012 (8) - ^

[Kotomi's Hard]

00:35:825 (4,5) - Puedes alinear esto con la nota anterior?
01:52:793 (1) - Yo empezaría el spinner en el tick blanco (01:52:700), pero acábalo en el mismo sitio ee xD
01:55:700 (1) - Acaba el spinner en el tick blanco (01:58:721)
02:35:825 (1) - Alinea esto con la nota anterior (?)
Veamos, hay un pequeño lío con unas notas, colócalas dónde te digo ok? (usa 1/6) ^^
02:52:575 (1), 02:52:825 (2), 02:53:075 (3), 02:53:325, 02:53:575 (5), 02:53:825 (6)
02:56:825 (8) - New combo
03:14:825 (6) - ^

[Lunatic]

AWESOME!

[Extra Stage]

Resnap all notes!


Bueno, y eso es todo creo, te doy una estrella!

The whole map looks really messy, mostly because of confusing skin elements (like sliderfollowcircle.png, hit50.png, hit100.png which are almost 100% black), but it's about putting notes too.


[Linkred's Mild]

Set the slider tick value to 1. 2 sounds odd.

00:37:887 (2,3) - Spacing. Stack it on vanishing end of the slider or move somewhere else.
00:58:700 (5) - New combo.
[01:22:700] - Start kiai?
01:25:700 (2) - New combo.
01:28:700 (3) - ^
01:31:700 (4) - ^
01:31:700 (1,1) - Spacing.
01:55:700 (2) - New combo.


[Kotomi's Hard]

Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?

00:36:200 (5) - New combo.
[00:57:200] - Add a note.
00:57:575 (7) - Delete clap from first repeat (00:57:950) and from the end (00:58:700) and add a clap to the start (00:57:575) and to the second repeat (00:58:325). Sounds much better.
00:59:075 (8) - Add a clap and new combo.
00:59:450 (2) - Delete clap.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:40:700 (9) - ^
02:17:450 (9) - ^
02:22:512 (6) - Unrankable hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:22:512 (6,1) - Also spacing.
[03:11:825] - Start kiai again.


[Lunatic]

Raise HP Drain a bit (1-2 ticks).

[00:46:325] - Add a note.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:13:887 (1) - This slider is hidden. Please move the repeat up (read the spoilerbox).
01:26:825 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
01:28:325 (4) - ^
01:42:200 (2) - New combo.
01:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds it the same like 01:46:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).
[02:04:700] - Add a note.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - This slider placement isn't okay. I don't know what to expect about this pattern while playing. Please unstack them and space with Distance Spacing.
02:40:512 (1) - The same problem with hidden hitsound like before. Move the repeat up.
03:03:950 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
03:05:450 (4) - ^
03:19:512 (3) - ^
03:24:950 (1) - Make this slider looks normal. It looks like a note and don't fit this place.
03:27:950 (4) - ^
03:31:512 (1,2,3) - Unrankable. Move (2,3) somewhere else.


[Extra Stage]

Awwr. Overmapped.
Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?
Also I have no idea why is it mapped with soft-hitsounds type.

00:33:012 (15,1) - Spacing. I didn't know it's the continue of the stream or the 1/4 break.
00:34:418 (14,15) - ^
00:37:325 (1,2,1,2) - Samples sound odd. Hitsounds it the same like 00:36:762 (1,2).
00:38:450 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:40:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Please do something with these hitsounds. All of the notes are claps and it's totally out of the rhythm.
01:47:637 (11) - New combo.
01:50:637 (11) - New combo.
02:01:700 (1) - Hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:14:450 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The way how it sounds... It's weird. If you delete the clap from 02:14:450 (1) and make all of the triples sound like this, it will be much better.
02:19:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:450 (6) - New combo.
02:32:075 (1) - Make this slider straight?
02:52:512 (1) - End this slider at [02:53:825].
[02:54:012] - Add a break.
[02:59:825] - [03:23:450] - I don't like how this part has been copy-pasted.
03:18:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same problem with hitsounding.

+star

Star mah niggah (am i allowed to say that? D: )

I didn't check the whole map, but i have to say that i am impressed o.o

A really great work for a first map, really.

Some suggestions, in the meanwhile:

- Skin:

• I think you need a spinner, or at least draw a dot to let the player see the centre xD
  cont3.png is not so good, Sakura is squashed xD

- Extra Stage:

• From 00:28:700 to 00:31:500, the pattern is really ugly in play mode because of the stacking: you should turn stacking down until you don't get that effect or place them a little differently... D:

Kd-star, keep up the good work, maybe i'll make a full mod soon for this one ^^

[General]

1. "touhou" doesn't need to be in tags, since it's already set for source. Also, tags must be the same for all difficulties.
2. The ending for each map is rather awkward IMO, but I guess you had no choice, since the max score would be too high.

[Skinning]

1. The files that were mentioned by Kytoxid weren't deleted (or you deleted them but didn't full submit).

Kytoxid wrote:

Unused files:
- ranking-back.png
- ranking-replay.png
- ranking-retry.png
- .osb file

• Also the "scorebar-colour.png" image seems to be unused.

1. Please shrink up the "spinner-circle.png" image to 1x1 or similar, players might have performance issues with that size. BATs might not rank it with a transparent spinner anyway.
2. Please resize/crop all background images to 1024x768 or similar.
3. Crop the upper side of the comboburst, it's unnecessary transparency which needs to be deleted.
4. Maybe write up some numbers in the countdown?
5. Maybe include a white border for the "Are you ready?" and "Start!" images? They're barely visible right now.

[Linkred's Mild]

1. Why is stack leniency set like that? I can understand the sliders, but 00:17:450 (4,5,1) just won't work, since it's unrankable. You could change either these patterns or all those slider stacks.

[Kotomi's hard]

1. Capitalize the h in "hard".
2. While the map is technically fine, I suggest you to recheck overall spacing. There were some iffy parts in the map that might need fixing, like 01:03:200 (3,4) for example.
3. Also, you might want to reduce the finish hitsounds a bit...

[Extra Stage]

1. The max score attainable is a bit too high, I think... the difficulty is just overmapped.

~ ~ ~

Everything else is quite fine, though I think it can be even better. If you want, call me back to do an IRC mod so I can help you out even more.

LinkRed's Mild
01:22:700 (1) - clap this slider's start
02:07:700 (5,6,7) - move them a square down (and a square right for 6th)

Kotomi's Hard
[General] You had better to see some of the fixes suggested by AIMod about spacing. (Ctrl+Shift+A in Edit mode)
00:49:700 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end
00:57:575 (7) - end it with finish instead of clap
00:59:825 (3) - clap here
01:34:325 (7) - add a repeat on this slider
02:52:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - find a more intuitive spacing for these 1/3 beats... to put them into a single pile won't be so fun for players to understand the rhythm...

Lunatic
00:34:418 (2,5) - remove claps here

Extra Stage
00:31:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - refine spacing... some beats are further than others!

Hitsound-placing can be better, but for a 1st attempt of mapping this is a good starting foot!
Keep up the good work! (Star'd.)

[Other Stuff]
The spinner is freaking invisible and I can't see the center point. Add a few knives and make the center a little more obvious. Look at Cyclone's touhou skin for an example.
Also, you could make the spinner a clock, with the I, II, III and so on.

Dislike the flashy and distracting silderball and the circle surrounding the sliderball, but that's just my opinion.


[Lunatic]
01:26:825 (1,1,2,3) - Godammit all this stacking from the previous notes makes this hard to follow. Difficulty is not an excuse.
01:44:825 - End kiai before the break, because it makes the red combo after the break flash. Try it.
From 01:49:700 (1) to 02:00:200 (5) - Borrrinngggg.
02:17:450 (1) - Ugly and hard to follow.
02:23:450 (1) - ^
02:49:325 (1) - ^
03:03:950 (1,1,2,3) - Godammit all this stacking from the previous notes makes this hard to follow. Difficulty is not an excuse.


[Extra]
Why do I even bother modding this streamfuck

JInxyjem wrote:

[Other Stuff]
The spinner is freaking invisible and I can't see the center point. Add a few knives and make the center a little more obvious. Look at Cyclone's touhou skin for an example.
Also, you could make the spinner a clock, with the I, II, III and so on.

Dislike the flashy and distracting silderball and the circle surrounding the sliderball, but that's just my opinion.

"Also, you could make the spinner a clock, with the I, II, III and so on."
If done the spinner of clock it would look bad.

... I COULD use this opportunity to make the Sakuya spinner I've been promising people...

Buen mapa lord :B ojala lo suban luego

#spanish mod let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Source: Si "Il Mondo dove e finito il Tempo" es el nombre del álbum en el que aparece la canción, elimínalo. Pon Touhou en su lugar.

~Linkred's Mild~
00:24:200 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
01:25:700 (1) - ^
01:31:700 (1) - ^
02:05:825 (3) - Arregla el spacing.

~Kotomi's hard~
- Pon la h de Hard en mayúsculas.
- Uhhh... muchos finish hitsounds en mi opinion x_x

00:49:513 (5) - Arregla el spacing.
00:55:700 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:825 (4) - Colócalo encima de (1)?
01:16:325 (2) - Arregla el spacing.
02:14:825 (2) - ^
02:20:075 (3) - ^
02:43:325 (3) - ^
02:56:075 (6) - ^
02:59:450 (6) - ^

~Lunatic~
- El combocolour rojo resulta muy dificil de ver a veces debido al rojo intenso del fondo xD Cambialo a otro que se vea mejor x3

00:43:700 (3) - Colócalo debajo de (2)
00:45:387 (2) - La flecha de repetición del slider está escondida, no es rankeable >.<
00:45:950 (4) - ^
01:10:700 (3) - Copia y pega (1) y haz un flip horizontal.
01:13:325 (7,8) - Colócalos debajo de (1,2)
01:15:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Haz que los finales coincidan en un mismo punto.
01:26:825 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - Esta parte es muy dificil de ver teniendo los circulos de antes x_x
02:04:325 (9) - Coloca el slider al final del stream y no debajo?
02:15:950 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Sepáralos un poco más.
02:17:450 (1) - Este slider es muy dificil de ver con los circulos de antes (a lo mejor si los mueves se ve un poco mejor, no se o.o)
02:39:950 (7,8) - Colócalos debajo de (1,2)
03:03:950 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - Lo mismo de antes... son muy dificiles de ver :/
03:24:200 (3) - New Combo.
03:24:575 (5) - ^
03:28:887 (3) - ^
03:29:262 (5) - ^

~Extra Stage~
- El combocolour blanco es muy dificil de ver aquí debido al blanco del fondo xD Cambialo a uno que se vea mejor.
- Sigo diciendo que veo esta dificultad para ir a approved xD

00:25:325 (4) - Tienes que hacer un aviso para el 2xbpm
00:36:200 (1) - ^
01:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - o_o' Creo que esto es mucho xD
01:43:700 (15) - Arregla el spacing.
03:15:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Digo lo mismo de antes xDDD
03:20:825 (15) - Arregla el spacing.

*star*~ Buena suerte :3

EDIT: Speed-up/slow-down Storyboard by request:


Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Extra Stage].osu

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Linkred's Mild~
00:24:200 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
01:25:700 (1) - ^
01:31:700 (1) - ^

fartownik wrote:

[Linkred's Mild]
01:25:700 (2) - New combo.
01:31:700 (4) - ^

Uhh...

ise todos los cambio solo me faltan monitos para señalar el 2xbpm

estrellado lord, lindo mapa :3

01:37:231: has que ese lado del slider no suene o cambiale el hitsound

el lado derecho es el que molesta el izquierdo esta bien

01:53:450-01:54:387: has esos jump más largos que los anteriores

01:53:450: New combo (?)

[Lunatic]

• • 00:54:012 (6,1) - Spacing
  • 02:03:200 (5,1) - ^

[Extra Stage]

• • 02:36:387 (1,2) - 1 square up (grid level 3)
  • 02:36:950 (1,2) - 1 square down (grid level 3)

EDIT:

• Delete the .osb, then "Full submission".
• "Konachan.com - 66199 gray_hair izayoi_sakuya kanaria_(artist) maid red_eyes ribbons short_hair touhou weapon.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels :S


EDIT:

Pubbled~

THX xxheroxx

Star!

Lo jugaré

estrellita

una estrella al mapa :B xd

exe : )

esta geniaal x3

aunque el kotomi hard esta medio facil

me gusto mucho haci que estrella x3

te amo weon :B

esta entrete el map asi que te doy la estrella merecida eh!

good

nice