This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 23, 2009 at 8:42:29 PM

Artist: Steve Aoki (w/ Yelle)
Title: Je Veux Te Voir
Source: Pillowface and the Airplane Chronicles
Tags: steveaoki yelle je veux te voir loogie
BPM: 132.7
Filesize: 2471kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:

1. Difficile v2 (4.61 stars, 248 notes)
2. Facile (2.48 stars, 139 notes)
3. La version folle d'Alice (4.81 stars, 276 notes)
4. Ordinaire (4.48 stars, 238 notes)

Download: Steve Aoki (w/ Yelle) - Je Veux Te Voir
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Je Veux Te Voir (Steve Aoki Remix) By: Yelle.
From Steve Aoki's album, Pillowface and the Airplance Chronicles.

Note : "Difficile" is now "Ordinaire" because I added a harder map.
Super-Mega Thanks to Alice Margatroid for he guest difficulty!~

Recent updates
[10/20] kino77's mod suggestions,
[10/23] MaxwellDemon + JarJarJacob's mod suggestions

All updates
[10/3] Thanks anamisk, bmin11
[10/4] Added a spinner to difficile.
[10/6] Added SEXY storyboard.
[10/7] Shinde + Matma Rex's mod suggestions. Worked on SB some more. WHOLE NEW Skin!----
[10/8] Behonkiss + RandomJibberish's mod suggestions.
[10/9] Zekira + Azure_Kyle's mod suggestions.
[10/11] Yes + CrimmiSkye + Tai's mod suggestions + new score-x.png
[10/12] EEeee + ouranhshc's mod suggesions.
[10/13] Sushi971 is cool + Insane (beta)/Technical. It has no hitsounds and is incomplete.
[10/14] Difficile v2 FINISHED!
[10/16] Added samplesets + hitsounds to all difficiulties.
[10/17] Whymeman + Ema Skye + KillerRind's mod suggestions. La version fou d'Alice added.
[10/18] Kurai_'s mod suggestions.
[10/20] kino77's mod suggestions,
[10/23] MaxwellDemon + JarJarJacob's mod suggestions

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Thanks, and updated.

Offset: 437
BPM: 132.7 (might be 132.71, can't exactly tell)

Please resnap all the notes because some of the notes were off before.
Also, I advise you keep a constant spacing throughout the entire map because the way you changed spacing was unintuitive. The best way to make sure your spacing in consistent is through distance snap. Another way to check your spacing is through AIMod (ctrl + shift + a)

Good luck mapping.

Try adjusting offset to 20.

and try snapping the beats to red/white/blue ticks.

Then I'll mod it.

Ugh.. This was a pretty hard map to mod...
Well, first snap all the beats to red/white/blue ticks as NoHItter said....It's hurting the map allot!
Also use distance snap on most of the beats (some parts are extremely lame due to that)

Another thing is that you should add a break at 01:36:77 and at 02:09:77 (but i suggest that you map the 02:09:77 instead)

One question i have is that why do you want this for approval? (I don't get it....)

Anyway, i just don't want to star this right now, mainly because it feels like it need to be improved in a lot of places.
I also suggest you get a easier difficulty to this map...

I can't really mod this map yet since its still under work, but I can at least give you this...


Osz. File Check (Done)


BPM/Offset Scan (Done)


Since the map is still under work, I feel that I can't star it just yet, but you can forum PM once the map is complete and ready to be modded.

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Please RESNAP all notes. Whenever you change anything in timing you have to do this.

Facile.
00:54:27 (20) - unrankable slider!

Ahh. Call me back (PM) after you've fixed the resnapping T~T I can't mod it like this because everything is off.

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You still have some bad spacing in a lot of the areas of the map; use AIMod as a guide (ctrl-shift-A). With the spacing still screwed up it's hard to get into more detail, but your map also seems like it needs some variety... mix your sliders and your beats. Also, the spinners are horrible; the first one is way way way to long and then the second batch is just spamming spinners rather than actually mapping. Keep working at it.

Yoshi348 wrote:

You still have some bad spacing in a lot of the areas of the map; use AIMod as a guide (ctrl-shift-A). With the spacing still screwed up it's hard to get into more detail, but your map also seems like it needs some variety... mix your sliders and your beats. Also, the spinners are horrible; the first one is way way way to long and then the second batch is just spamming spinners rather than actually mapping. Keep working at it.

Used AIMmod and fixed everything there. I'll map the section with the Sliders later.

The BPM is really screwing with this map >:-(


Well, I got 265.400 BPM for the whole song to keep the timing marks in the 1/4 range.

But if you still want to do lower than that and end up with 1/8 timing marks, then you can try 132.700 BPM. (Though 1/8 is not recommended...)

Though its best to test those two to see how well it works for you.

But make sure to check over the whole map as well since changing the timing also moves to notes around. Even when you resnap all of the notes, some of them will end up misplaced. Also, the sliders will be effected by BPM changes as well.

Je Voux Te osu!

00:03:576 (1) - Shorten by 1/8 tick.
00:05:769 (8,9,10,11,12) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:07:096 (1,2,3,4, 1,2,3,4,5) - Move forward by 1/8 rick.
00:09:923 (5) - *slider at the top* Shorten this by 1/8 tick.
00:10:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:19:096 (6) - Move to 00:19:153.
00:19:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:29:307 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:32:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,11,12) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:37:961 (1) - I suggest to 00:39:692 and just deleting the note there.
00:40:615 (1,2) - Move this forward by 1/8 tick.
00:42:403 (3) - Move forward by 1/4 tick.
00:43:326 (4,5,6) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:46:096 (7) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.
00:46:442 (8,9) - Move forward by 1/4 tick.
00:47:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move forward by 1/8 tick.

I'll stop there. This map is kind of hard to mod...

But your map has many notes that don't correspond to the beat. Try fixing those.

Add more diffs, please only use white or red ticks and rarely blue ticks to map.
Use alot less spinners please, maybe you could even better remap this.

When it's done you can try again.

happy30 wrote:

Add more diffs,

Good god, no.

happy30 wrote:

please only use white or red ticks and rarely blue ticks to map.

I use blue ticks wen necessary.

happy30 wrote:

Use alot less spinners please, maybe you could even better remap this.

The spinners are temporary, i plan to map that part.

hmm.. this is tricky, the offset here is actually -26, but you can't place note before the song starts.. you may have to go into audacity and add a bit of silence before the beginning.

But yeah, do that and then go through and resnap everything to 1/2. Then get back to me

Loogiesquared wrote:

happy30 wrote:

Add more diffs,

Good god, no.

happy30 wrote:

please only use white or red ticks and rarely blue ticks to map.

I use blue ticks wen necessary.

happy30 wrote:

Use alot less spinners please, maybe you could even better remap this.

The spinners are temporary, i plan to map that part.

You actually have just 1 diff, that's not rankable you know?

"you use blue ticks when necessary" when I hear the song they are not necessary at all, you just happen to have a wrong timing.

Oh, this map is W.I.P. then please dont bother my modding queue which is for completed maps please.

Please follow the music of the note !!
And use 4/1 of Beat Snap Divisor~

like
00:01:695 to 00:03:051

And turn Slider Tick Rate to 2
Please, make a easy DIF.~

al2e10 wrote:

Please follow the music of the note !!
And use 4/1 of Beat Snap Divisor~

like
00:01:695 to 00:03:051

And turn Slider Tick Rate to 2
Please, make a easy DIF.~

Thanks

You actually have just 1 diff, that's not rankable you know?

"you use blue ticks when necessary" when I hear the song they are not necessary at all, you just happen to have a wrong timing.

I'll do the 2nd difficulty, just reluctantly.
Also, could you tell me where do you see blue ticks that are unnecessary, please?

0_o wrote:

hmm.. this is tricky, the offset here is actually -26, but you can't place note before the song starts.. you may have to go into audacity and add a bit of silence before the beginning.

But yeah, do that and then go through and resnap everything to 1/2. Then get back to me

good idea.

Your timing is still wrong.
Offset is still set at 0

BPM: 132,70 (Don't double it, remember to change your slider speed back to 1.2)
Offset: 1.678 (Could be a liiitle off, bit it's close enough to map with)

Get rid of the lead-in time, and resnap everything to 1/2 (You will have to go through and correct some placement on the timeline) There shouldn't be anything on a blue tick after this except for the short repeating sliders.

0_o wrote:

BPM: 132,70 (Don't double it, remember to change your slider speed back to 1.2)
Offset: 1.678 (Could be a liiitle off, bit it's close enough to map with)

Get rid of the lead-in time, and resnap everything to 1/2 (You will have to go through and correct some placement on the timeline) There shouldn't be anything on a blue tick after this except for the short repeating sliders.

Done, thanks

offset: 3504

I'll see if I can get anything close.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

offset: 3504

I'll see if I can get anything close.

Thank you.

In french "complex" is written "complexe". Idk if you wanted to set this diff name into english to make an exception but it was just to told you.

Complex
00:05:31 (5) - spacing
00:15:93 (1) - change this.. I don't like shape and, makes some notes to go with
00:17:97 (1) - spacing
00:22:49 (5) - spacing
00:28:59 (5,6,7) - 1/2 later. Also spacing. + new combo?
00:30:85 (2) - spacing
00:37:45 (6) - why stopping here? The sentence continues..
00:41:03 (4) - spacing
00:41:48 (1) - spacing+sounds weird
00:43:06 (1) - WTF
1. spacing O__o
2. why new combo?
3. sounds.. strange..
00:44:19 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - recheck spacing on that part.
00:57:53 (9,1) - s..spacing...
01:00:47 (11) - confusing (spacing!)
01:00:47 (11,1) - spacing 0.0
But personally instead of that horrible jump i recommend you to:
-delete (1) and set the previous (2) to new (1) (sounds better with song.....)
-continue the combo that comes.. again, the sentence don't stop....
01:02:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why spacing change suddenly? Plays bad. And AGAIN sentence continue and stop to 7 plays/sounds/something really bad!
01:04:31 (1,2,3) - Again, spacing changes.. Use distance snap the whole song.. please..
01:05:22 (4) - omgwtfbbq spacing. way too close. use distance... ^ zz
01:06:80 (11,12,13,14) - emergency distance snap here.
01:07:48 (1) - add returns, the sentence don't stop here
01:08:38 (2) - new combo
01:08:38 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - emergency distance snap
01:12:00 (1) - .. wtf
01:12:00 (1,2,3,4) - recheck spacing here too.

Neeeedddd some distance snap. PLEASE >__<
Also. Diversify mapping. I just won't bubble/rank this if I would be bad. Sorry but, really, it's a bit repetitive and boring.. Try using triplets, more slider sometimes but mixed with notes, more note sometimes but mixed with sliders. All that.. Need work. Really. But this is still a good try remember there's worse. Put lots of efforts on it, and take every suggestions as considerations. This can end up ranked with all that.

Simple
Just to say
if you wanted to do the translation for "easy"
the most correct thing would be "aisé" in fact.. but that's more litteral, same base.
To say it naturally it would be "Facile".
"Simple" is ok too.. But I think facile is better.
00:04:74 (1) - symetrical??? http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2425/lolwut.png
00:12:43 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - I'm not ok with silent. Neither with kiai.
00:17:85 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too early... 1/4 later..
00,24,64 (1) - why new combo
00:50:52 (9) - out of map
00:57:76 (1) - 1. out of map. in hard rock it would be unplayable.
2. finished too early.
01:12:34 (1,2, and til the end!) - errrrr
recheck timeline
kinda all is too early

Ok.. This diff is way better but
Overall
Complex= as i said: too easy and boring.. Sometime it's just simple but with smaller circles.. lol :/
Mp3 seems soo silent.. are you sure it's a good quality? cause I don't think so.
And.. Wow, this remix is so close to the original one. But they are not the same, i know.
I horribly want to map an harder diff.. I used to listen this song repeatively when I was younger. But if you don't want to that's ok .__. But anyway if you want to,, call me when fixes are done
If I don't found too many things next mod I'll star. If you don't fix correctly then I'm afraid I'll just have to repeat what I said ):

I did basically everything. Thanks!~

Overall:
Try rechecking all notes with distance snap. I can see some notes which should be further away.

For example: In Facile: 01:30:316 (1)

or notes that should be nearer to each other

For example: In Dificile: 00:51:430 (1)

Facile
Good job here although ^
Also it feels cut off. Try extending to the same length in Dificile?

Dificile
Distance snap...
00:56:856 (8) - Shorten this slider to the white tick before it.
01:08:160 - Remove this break and fill with notes.
01:23:420 (3) - Move this forward to the white tick.
(4) - Delete
(5) - Move this backward to the white tick. Then make it repeat.
01:37:549 (10) - Move it backward to the white tick.
01:39:358 (2,3) - Shorten these sliders to the red tick.

NoHItter wrote:

Overall:
Try rechecking all notes with distance snap. I can see some notes which should be further away.

For example: In Facile: 01:30:316 (1)

or notes that should be nearer to each other

For example: In Dificile: 00:51:430 (1)

Facile
Good job here although ^
Also it feels cut off. Try extending to the same length in Dificile?

Dificile
Distance snap...
00:56:856 (8) - Shorten this slider to the white tick before it.
01:08:160 - Remove this break and fill with notes.
01:23:420 (3) - Move this forward to the white tick.
(4) - Delete
(5) - Move this backward to the white tick. Then make it repeat.
01:37:549 (10) - Move it backward to the white tick.
01:39:358 (2,3) - Shorten these sliders to the red tick.

while i didn't check with Distance Snap, i checked with AIMod. there were onlt 5 or 6 errors, which i fixed.

AIMod is to check after you distance snap. And sometimes AIMod is wrong too.

Distance snap is usually used often.

NoHItter wrote:

AIMod is to check after you distance snap. And sometimes AIMod is wrong too.

Distance snap is usually used often.

i just checked with Distance. Also, updated.

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Ema Skye wrote:

Hi, great choice of song and language

Hmm my first comment will be this : Difficile is written with a double ff =) hmm then when i see that you use blue ticks very often, i guess there's a problem with your timing, but i'm really NOT a pro ^^
If you want the lyrics and a translation in english (which could be cool in a story board) then you can contact me, i'll be happy to do this =)

When the timing will be fixed, i'll do my comments about the map ^^
bye!

the timing is supposed to be like that. i don't know why, but the song is in 1/4 at times, and 1/8 at times.

[Facile]
Offset 793 or used the same offset from [Difficile] for now
Remove the Inherited Timing Section near the first timing section
00:19:78 (5) - End repeats on white ticks
00:31:53 (6) - Re-add break after this note
00:27:01 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing for these combos is too close. Make them farther.
It ends at a weird location...

[Difficile]
00:17:97 (1,2) - Spacing looks a bit off
00:28:59 (1) - Shorten to white tick
00:56:85 (8) - ^
01:04:54 (1) - This combo is too close to the previous one
01:26:69 (1) - ^
01:28:50 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing is terribly messy
01:37:55 (10) - Readjust this slider
01:39:35 (2,3) - ^

Not too bad...

Ema: The timing is like this I think.. Oo

Loogies about the storyboard, you are wrong. Je veux te voir isn't "I want to see" but "I want to see you"

Alice Margatroid wrote:

Ema: The timing is like this I think.. Oo

Loogies about the storyboard, you are wrong. Je veux te voir isn't "I want to see" but "I want to see you"

it has a "you".

I don't see it. O.O Full submit??

done.

offset (for [Facile]): 3,063 maybe? resnap won't require from this

[Facile]
00:19:79 (5) - make a bit longer so the U-Turn will be placed one tick farther
01:00:92 (1) - make it closer or change the previous slider's end closer(players are use to previous distance snap from this point)
01:30:31 (1) - Too close. lets keep it simply (I don't really like close up)

[Difficile]
00:05:53 (6) - spacing
Can you increase the distance snap rates? I can see that you are pulling the circles right to the edge and some note looks like a different distance snap with other.
00:29:16 (6,7,8) - sounds weird. Is this based on bass?
00:58:21 (3) - Yup, looks unspaced
01:23:08 (1) - I don't like close up, but can't be a problem for diff [Hard]

The color black is really hard to see due to BG and I think it needs more hitsounds
Nice skin though
Starred because of the possiblity

bmin11 wrote:

offset (for [Facile]): 3,063 maybe? resnap won't require from this

[Facile]
00:19:79 (5) - make a bit longer so the U-Turn will be placed one tick farther
01:00:92 (1) - make it closer or change the previous slider's end closer(players are use to previous distance snap from this point)
01:30:31 (1) - Too close. lets keep it simply (I don't really like close up)

[Difficile]
00:05:53 (6) - spacing
Can you increase the distance snap rates? I can see that you are pulling the circles right to the edge and some note looks like a different distance snap with other.
00:29:16 (6,7,8) - sounds weird. Is this based on bass?
00:58:21 (3) - Yup, looks unspaced
01:23:08 (1) - I don't like close up, but can't be a problem for diff [Hard]

The color black is really hard to see due to BG and I think it needs more hitsounds
Nice skin though
Starred because of the possiblity

thanks, done.

Facile
00:04:86 (1) - whistle all except the start
00:24:75 (6) - whistle
00:50:52 (9) - clap?
00:56:85 (8) - horrible placement
01:14:03 (5) - end with whistle
01:17:20 (4) - whistle
01:19:01 (4) - ^
01:29:86 (4) - ^
01:31:67 (4) - ^

Difficile
00:39:22 (11,12) - horrible placement

Blue Dragon wrote:

Facile
00:04:86 (1) - whistle all except the start
00:24:75 (6) - whistle
00:50:52 (9) - clap?
00:56:85 (8) - horrible placement
01:14:03 (5) - end with whistle
01:17:20 (4) - whistle
01:19:01 (4) - ^
01:29:86 (4) - ^
01:31:67 (4) - ^

Difficile
00:39:22 (11,12) - horrible placement

thanks, and done.

[Overall]
Each difficulty's offset is not the same. Why?
I suggest using same offset for each difficulty......

[Facile]
00:19:79 (5) - 00:24:76 (6) -> Between this part(empty part) is kinda boring for me......
31:775(Break)-> This break time sucks. You have to redo this.

[Difficile]
01:13:812(Break)-> Redo this break please! It'll lengthen a bit.
01:20:82 (4,5) -> This spacing might confuses the player.

Sorry for late response......

minyeob wrote:

[Overall]
Each difficulty's offset is not the same. Why?
I suggest using same offset for each difficulty......

[Facile]
00:19:79 (5) - 00:24:76 (6) -> Between this part(empty part) is kinda boring for me......
31:775(Break)-> This break time sucks. You have to redo this.

[Difficile]
01:13:812(Break)-> Redo this break please! It'll lengthen a bit.
01:20:82 (4,5) -> This spacing might confuses the player.

Sorry for late response......

Thanks, done.

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Sushi971 wrote:

Offset : 3472
[Facile]
00:10:70 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this overlap.
00:24:044 (x) - Fill this hole. the (6) is just surprising.
00:30:37 (1,2,3) - we can't understand properly what's happening. move them
00:57:72 (9,1) - ugly overlap
01:02:875 (x) - Fill this hole.
01:15:81 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3........) - DAMN GET OUT OF THAT LINE
01:31:64 (4) - eh, this end is quite brutal.

[Difficile]
raise overall difficulty.
00:28:82 (5,6) - ugly. try to make the two ends stack.
00:32:44 (1,2) - align?
00:44:536 (x) - Damn, isn't it supposed to be difficult? this part is so boring! and stack properly the notes at least!
01:02:73 (1) - too close
01:14:120 (x) - Why a break here?
01:23:98 (5) - timing's wrong! (resnap the end of this slider)
01:37:55 (1) - ^
01:39:35 (2,3) - ^

err, it seems you won't do a harder diff.
Make this map better and i'll star.

got it.

cool map
starred

i would try a bpm of 132.80 or 132.75. 132.70 sounds a tad late. im leaning more towards 132.75

facile

00:32:139 - add a note here
00:39:648 - put claps on this slider

difficile
00:32:204 add note here
00:41:470 - reinsert break
00:44:181 to 00:57:289 - this part is kind of boring to me

[Overall]
- Background is ugly and storyboard is ugly. These "light" on top of screen are almost invisible. Flashing red color is crappy. Custom reverse-arrow is ugly, too. And what the hell is "i.png" displaying at 00:00:002 in pass layer? Or WVIK-something at 00:04:483?
- The background displaying in thumbnail is much better. Restore it?
- What's that "I Want To See You"? Anyway, instead of just appering, it appears and then moves a bit. You messed with it in SB editor too much.
- I suggest to use English difficulty names, not French ones.
- Too loud hitsounds.

[Facile]
Kinda... dull diff.
00:24:75 (6,1) - place new combo at [current] (6), not at [current] (1).
00:32:10 (7) - 1/4 forward. Place new combo.
00:32:44 (1,1,1) - remove new combos.
00:34:47 (5) - place new combo.
00:37:41 (1) - remove new combo.
00:39:67 (7) - does not fit music well, remove it? Or at least remove claps.
00:41:48 (8) - HOLY SHIT CLAPSMAP DO NOT DO IT!. Also, new combo?
01:31:78 (1) - that's a loooong spinner. Delete it and map some regular notes/slider until 01:41:167.


[Dificile]
It has different BPM that Facile, notes are not snapped to ticks on timeline. Fix it!
Dull, too.
Raise spacing multiplier, the re-space whole song. It's a bit clustered.
01:40:37 (1) - like in Normal.

Matma Rex wrote:

[Facile]
Kinda... dull diff.
00:24:75 (6,1) - place new combo at [current] (6), not at [current] (1).
00:32:10 (7) - 1/4 forward. Place new combo.
00:32:44 (1,1,1) - remove new combos.
00:34:47 (5) - place new combo.
00:37:41 (1) - remove new combo.
00:39:67 (7) - does not fit music well, remove it? Or at least remove claps.
00:41:48 (8) - HOLY SHIT CLAPSMAP DO NOT DO IT!. Also, new combo?
01:31:78 (1) - that's a loooong spinner. Delete it and map some regular notes/slider until 01:41:167.


[Dificile]
It has different BPM that Facile, notes are not snapped to ticks on timeline. Fix it!
Dull, too.
Raise spacing multiplier, the re-space whole song. It's a bit clustered.
01:40:37 (1) - like in Normal.

Done.

Matma Rex wrote:

[Overall]
- Background is ugly and storyboard is ugly. These "light" on top of screen are almost invisible. Flashing red color is crappy. Custom reverse-arrow is ugly, too. And what the hell is "i.png" displaying at 00:00:002 in pass layer? Or WVIK-something at 00:04:483?
- The background displaying in thumbnail is much better. Restore it?
- What's that "I Want To See You"? Anyway, instead of just appering, it appears and then moves a bit. You messed with it in SB editor too much.
- I suggest to use English difficulty names, not French ones.
- Too loud hitsounds.

Eh.