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angela - Spiral (TV Size)

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Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 lutego 2010 at 15:47:48

Artist: angela
Title: Spiral (TV Size)
Source: Asura Cryin'
Tags: opening
BPM: 151
Filesize: 13533kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,57 stars, 83 notes)
  2. Hard (4,85 stars, 165 notes)
  3. Normal (4,16 stars, 133 notes)
Download: angela - Spiral (TV Size)
Download: angela - Spiral (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th beatmap. Asura Cryin' OP.
Last edited: 12 February 10

Please redownload this beatmap if you downloaded it before 31 January 2010!
Last edited by Polaris03_old , edited 19 times in total.
EiJi
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EiJi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
Thanks, fixed.
EiJi
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EiJi
Okay, first off, timing is wrong. These are some drastic timing changes I am proposing. Take them as you will.

1) Delete the second timing section. Change the first timing section's offset to 6,930 and BPM to 150.00. Do this for all difficulties. You may need to resnap notes, so be sure you go over the song a few times and make sure everything is correctly snapped where it belongs.

Other things may not sound correctly, such as 00:15:85 (5) - on normal. This is why it is crucial that you time a song correctly before you map it.

I'm not going to get much into this until the timing is correct. But meanwhile, I will add that Kiai time feels abused. Way too long.

And once again. Take it as you may. The timings I provided sound correct to me. I am not saying they ARE correct.
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
(Now) timing is good. I think that BPM 151 is much better than 150 (I checked also ranked version of "spiral" by Kyoukyou and BPM of that beatmap is 151 too).
And kiai time is now shorter.
James2250
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James2250
You still need to change offset to 6,930 like EiJi said (then resnap all notes) atm its 6482
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
But why? when i do this, the beatmap is completely bad...!
James2250
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James2250
I didnt personally check offset I just believe Eiji as a person that knows what he is talking about lol

make sure to click resnap all notes under timing when u do it?
if it still sounds bad to you then ignore offset comment :P
EiJi
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EiJi

Polaris03 wrote:

But why? when i do this, the beatmap is completely bad...!
It sounds bad because you made a beatmap to an incorrectly timed song. As a result, when it is timed correctly, lots of work (well, not really...) needs to go into it to make sure everything is where it needs to be. And clicking resnap is not enough. Make sure you go through the song and verify that everything is where it belongs.
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
Ok, I changed offset. I hope the beatmap is good now...
Cicada
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Cicada
Te spiny mnie wykończą. :?
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Topic Starter
Polaris03_old
what now?!
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Ichigo-Sora
[All]
You should set a preview point somewhere (Timing > Set Current Position as Preview). A good spot would be around 00:31:96

[Easy]
00:57:79 (1) - Might be too short for an easy difficulty. Also, having a note right after a spinner might be too hard as well.

[Normal]
00:51:43 (2) - New Combo

[Hard]
00:52:62 (1) - Get rid of this note
01:24:21 (1) - This spinner might be unrankable (Auto Play can't get 2000 on it)

Good map though ^^
Droid803
22 posts
Joined August 2009
Droid803
[Easy]
01:13:08 (3) - Remove this note? Maybe extend the slider before it.
01:16:26 (3) - Remove this note? Maybe extend the slider before it.

[Normal]
00:53:82 (6) - Feels off, but I don't think it actually is.

[Hard]
00:55:40 (3) - Remove this note?

STAR.
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Polaris03_old
Fixed! :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
[Overall]

BPM: 151,00 - Offset: 6.936 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Easy]

Seems Normal.

00:48:026 (2) - New combo.
00:51:043 (1) - A note after spinner is too hard for an easy map.
00:51:043 (1,2) - Resnap these notes.
00:52:082 (3,4,5,6) - Too hard for an easy map.
01:26:090 (1) - Sounds bad.

[Normal]

Seems Hard.

00:06:053 (1) - You have a note before the offset here.
01:03:075 (5) - New combo.

[Hard]

Fine~
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
Fixed
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
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DeadAlready
Nice song <3

stared :D

uh...and an advice. 0.0

I think the hitsound are a little noisy. XD
maybe change them to 50~60% will be better. :)

ah, and this just an advice. If you don't want to change it, that's ok~
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
You're right, thanks!
KeiON_old
2 posts
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KeiON_old
I like it!
Good beatmap, my friend!
Ale i tak dobra. :D
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
:)

Easy:
00:15:876 [5]one tiny square to the left D:
00:36:737 [1,2] i don't think this combo is necassary but whatever ~
00:50:247 [1] slider should end at the white tick ~

Normal:
00:50:247 [1] too clooose >_<

Hard:
00:56:008 [3]new combo?
00:57:598 [1]this should start at 00:57:796 and end at 00:58:591

Star ~
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
Fixed!!! :D
DJPop
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DJPop
~Easy~
00:50:247 (1,2,1) - unsnapped
01:24:816 (1,2,3,1) - ^

~Normal~
00:15:876 (5) - new combo
00:17:465 (1) - add hitfinish, remove clap
00:47:068 (1) - start on 00:46:571 (optional)

~Hard~
00:47:068 (1) - start on 00:46:571 (optional)
00:55:412 (3) - move 1/2 right
00:57:598 (1) - start on right white tick
01:23:972 (1) - unsnapped, add hitfinish


+Star
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
WITAJ!!!!

[General]
1) Tags?

[Easy]
00:34:154 (x) - Add note?
00:40:909 (x) - ^

[Normal]
00:34:154 (x) - Add note?

GREAT ANIME!!!!!!!
STAR
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Polaris03_old
Ok, thanks :)
Sushi
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Sushi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
OK beatmap

Make sure the Kiai Times are aligned to the ticks

[Hard]
I don't like the way you used claps, they don't go very well with the music
For example, at 00:35:147 (1,2,3,4) they don't sound very good the way the first on is on a red tick and then the rest are on white ticks.

Sometimes you have lots of finish in one section and then lots of clap in another section, try to balance them out some more.

00:40:313 (6) - Usually you shouldn't have finish on both the start and end of a slider, I don't think that sounds good here.
01:01:571 (4) - ^
01:02:565 (3) - ^, double click one end and remove it
01:25:412 (1,2) - Delete finish from 1? Two finishes 1/2 apart sound bad

Also you have two empty .osb's which you don't need in your song folder. One of them probably came from a song rename comfusing osu!, so delete both of them and full resubmit.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
The circle on the centre of the spinner should be exactly centred (align tool to help you)

[Hard]
Just a note that hitsounds are often doesn't fit if they are in a row

[Normal]
00:35:147 (1) - (looks) too close. I know it is correct with the distance snap but still...
00:36:737 (1) - ...... I think you should increase your distance snap since other notes are on different spacing like (down) 00:33:558 (1,2,3,4) - this...
I would note the same as [Hard] too. This diff needs the spacing to be equalize as I noted above

[Easy]
Looks good

Nicely done
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Turn the volume down a bit.
2. 00:06:538 to 00:16:472 - Make the sound soft.

[Easy]
The distance snaping is set to 0.8x, right? But why there are so many spacing error?
00:06:936 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:15:876 (5) - Add clap at the beginning.
00:16:472 (1) - Go backward one 1/2 tick. Extend one 1/2 tick.
00:50:247 (1) - No jump for an easy diff.

[Normal]
00:06:936 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.

[Insane]
00:06:538 (1) - Add finish at the end.
Star.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi!

[Easy]

00:39:121 (2) - Align this with the other notes :P


Nice map, have a star!
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Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hi

Generally, I think there are many Finishes in the kiai point,
and I think thats little noisy~

[Easy]
  • 00:44:286 (5) Finish
[Normal]
  • 00:17:465 (1) Hit sound none
[Hard]
  • 00:57:200 (x) add note
    How about kiai Flash in 00:59:386?
Fine enough
Starred :)
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Polaris03_old
I think all is fixed! ;)
Armin
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Armin
The video and the BG are ugly. o_o
Please download these new media:




video: http://up.ppy.sh/files/spiral.avi

[Easy]

Overall: No major problems found. Hitsounds seems a little random in some parts. Download the file .osu at the end of the post.

00:06:538 (1,2,3,4) Ulgy position. Try something like that?



00:15:876 (5) Move it 2/4 next and then also the next spinner?

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Normal]

Overall: As above, no problems found.

00:56:008 (5) Add othe 2 repeats
00:57:796 (1) A litte "hard" for a normal difficulty. Move it back of 2/4, and then longer of 1/1 (and delete the hitcircle at 00:58:988, which coincides with the spinner's end)

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Hard]

Overall: Nice difficulty. I can't found nothing of really wrong XD

00:55:412 (3) It doesn't follow the rythm. Try to move it 1/2 next?

Overall Rating: 9/10

Download: angela - Spiral (TV Size) (Polaris03) [Easy].osu
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
Thank you, Armin! :D
Babble
230 posts
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Babble
Hiya! (EPIC SKIN!)

Easy
00:15:280 - (4) Take clap off the start of this slider, but have a clap on the end of the slider

Normal
Looks fine

Hard
Also looks fine

Star
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
Thanks ;)
Teara
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Teara
Nice, apart from background that was broken, no problems, Star.

Tell people to re download ( date the new media was uploaded )
[Normal]

00:15:876 (5) - New Combo?
01:16:273 (5) - New combo?
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Polaris03_old
OK!
Shulin
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Shulin
Easy:

Good.

-- End the kiai at the end with an inheriting section.

Normal:

00:08:128 (3) - Remove clap.
00:09:717 (1) - ^ add it to the second return (red tick)
00:11:306 (4) - ^
00:13:094 (2) - Remove clap from the start.
00:13:690 (3) - Remove clap
00:13:889 (4) - Add clap.
00:15:280 (8) - Remove clap.
00:15:479 (9) - Add clap.
00:41:505 (1) - Remove clap from red tick.
00:42:498 (3) - Remove clap.
00:56:008 (5) - Remove some of the claps here, clap of returns doesnt sound good.
00:59:386 (1) - A finish is more appropriate here.
01:01:373 (5) - Move to white tick?
01:02:167 (1) - Remove clap from the start
01:08:326 (1,2) - Plays a little weird (slight jumps), maybe 4 returns?
01:10:313 (7) - Kill clap.
01:13:492 (4) - Sounds slightly weird maybe move to the next white tick?
01:27:399 (2,3,4) - Stack this, these slight jumps are a bit odd...
-- End the kiai at the end with an inheriting section.

Wow almost exclusively hitsounds.. and I never mod hitsounds lol. But those claps started to hurt my ears.

Hard:

00:51:836 (3) - No clap.
00:52:631 (x) - Note?
00:52:830 (1,2,3,4) - Use the pattern of the last set of notes, all of these should not be clap.
00:56:008 (1,2,3) - Reduce the claps here.
00:59:585 (3) - No clap.
01:00:777 (2) - ^
01:02:366 (2) - ^
01:03:955 (2) - ^
01:05:346 (1) - ^ 2nd return.
01:06:141 (3) - ^
01:07:730 (4) - ^
etc etc...

Actually I'm not too bothered where you remove the claps so long as you reduce some of them (finding a consistent pattern would help ^^), a 1 min 30 sec song should not consist of 60-70% clapping, at least in my opinion.

That's all lol.

~ Star.
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
General
It's a bit confusing when the hircircle's edges aren't the same as the approach circle. However, I tried making a custom hitcircle from the hitcircleoverlay, but, fail :(

Oh well, not a big thing anyway.

Easy
00:54:618 (5) - New Combo.
00:59:386 (2) - ^

00:56:008 (1) - No New Combo.
00:58:988 (1) - ^

Normal
A bit Hard for Normal, but okay.

Hard
Fine.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[General]
It's a bit confusing when the hircircle's edges aren't the same as the approach circle.


[Easy]
00:58:988 (1,2) - swap new combos
01:26:952 (1) - remove new combo

[Hard]
00:40:313 (6) - symmetry
00:43:492 (3) - ^
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Topic Starter
Polaris03_old
Thanks, this beatmap really sounded bad, but now is much better. I don't know how I could give so many claps there. ^^'
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Easy]
Circle size: Large?
Excepting too much clap hitsounds, I see no severe issues.

[Normal]
00:34:353 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:35:942 (3,1) - ^

[Hard]
[00:59:386] - Start kiai here.

Lovely skin.
Good job.
+star.
Lissette
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1,496 posts
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Lissette
Capitalize the artist name
That spinner make me dizzy @.@

Hard
increase the HP drain one tick
increase the overall diff one tick
00:32:267 - this timing section is doing nothing
00:44:982 - same
00:45:677 (4) - i suggest to shorten half beat and add note here 00:46:273 -
00:51:637 (2) - remove maybe?
00:52:631 (1) - same
00:54:618 (2,3,1) - a wrong spacing here
00:57:598 - this timing section is doing nothing
01:04:949 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:717 - this timing section is doing nothing
check the timing section in the other difficulties too

Normal
01:24:816 (1,2,3,4) - space this combo evenly

Easy
make circle size larger, just suggesting

Star!
Polaris03_old
54 posts
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Polaris03_old
Fixed...
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Really love the song and the skin :)

Can I do a diff? :D

EDIT: I've done it, in the end :P
Add it, if you want :D

Download: angela - Spiral (TV Size) (Polaris03) [Kuro Insane].osu
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