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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on September-14-12 at 9:42:36 PM

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.)
Source: Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags: ending Moonlight Nyquill
BPM: 131
Filesize: 14707kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.08 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Insane (4.93 stars, 316 notes)
  3. Moonlight's Hard (4.73 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Normal (4.12 stars, 167 notes)
  5. Nyquill's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 539 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ano Natsu de Matteru ED - Vidro Moyou
Please enable the video for full experience~~(no flashes or anything ^_^)

2nd Submitted Map, 1st Ranked~
Started this with a friend cause i love this song~~
(OMG STARS EVERYWHERE)

Febuary 19th: Moved to pending
March 4th: Fixed some stuff, changed diff name
March 11th: Changes
March 20th: added taiko bg, fixed some issues
April 4th: hitsound fixes
April 13th: changed artist name
May 19th: changed some stuff
May 27th: changed more stuff
June 30th: did alot of changes in the month
August 15th: changed bg, video, file names etc., please redownload
September 14: last full submit


[Mapset]
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Moonlight's Hard: Done by Moonlight
Insane - Done
Nyquill's Taiko Oni - Done by Nyquill
Nyquill
Meant to be played on DT.

>>Edit: http://puu.sh/fefx You sir, need an award.

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (short size) (jonathanlfj) [Nyquill's Taiko Oni].osu
mochi
offset: 1547
KuronumaSawako
I love this! Can make Easy or hard?
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

KuronumaSawako wrote:

I love this! Can make Easy or hard?
wait do you mean YOU make or I make...?
yess someone to help orz
already have a friend making hard, so u can make easy i guess...
thanks ^_^
Moonlight
GiNa
Hi, request from my queue!
And, I love this song and anime <3

[General]
-Oops, 256 kbps is unrankable, make it 192 kbps
-"Ano_Natsu_de_Matteru_ED_TV_Size.osb", deletes this file then full submits
-Set lead-in (Song Setup -> Audio -> Lead-in) at least 500 for all diff.
-Consider adding “ending” in the Tags.
-Add a green line at 01:44:142 to stop your kiai time
-Instead of (Short Ver.), maybe use (TV Size)

[Easy]
-Keep the speed constant, so it won’t be too hard for beginners
00:01:547 (1,2) – nice :D
00:27:195 (4) – NC, try to keep the combo shorter in easier diff
00:34:524 (5) – ^
00:43:684 (4) – ^
00:59:256 (2,3,4,5) – these might confuse beginners, please change either 2, 3 or 4, 5 to a slider. Basically, something like 00:45:058 (6,7,1) is enough already
01:07:043 (4) – (nazi) overlaps with 01:05:669 (3) a little, consider use different shape for (3)
01:12:997 (1) – hard to read, maybe change this to a spinner ?
01:28:569 (4,5,6,1) - same as 00:59:256 (2,3,4,5)
01:40:478 (1) – I’m not sure about this one, but it’s much readable compared to 01:12:997 (1), so I guess you can keep it as it
01:44:142 (1) – too long, I think stop at 01:47:806 is enough. By the way, either you take my suggestion or not, please silence the end of the spinner (volume: 10% or 5%)

[Normal]
-I would rather suggest you increase slider velocity as the difficulty goes up (or lower Easy’s)
00:01:547 (1), 00:08:875 (1) – hey, nice again
00:27:195 (4) – NC
00:38:188 (2,3,4) – mmm … spacing
00:43:684 (6) – NC
01:12:997 (1) – same as Easy
01:24:447 (6) – NC
01:34:753 (4) – ^
01:44:142 (1) – same as Easy

[Moonlight’s Diff]
-This diff name is strength, use “Moonlight’s Hard” instead ?
-Spacings are pretty messed up now, recheck all of them and use Distance Snap please (except the jumps you want to keep)
00:25:593 (1) – meaningless NC
00:28:799 (1) – ^, and remove finish
00:31:776 (2) – maybe take out two repeats and add notes, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249508 (I don’t look at the spacing atm, fix it by yourself)
00:33:379 (3) – NC here
00:36:585 (8) – ^
00:47:349 (7) – ^
01:09:333 (7) – ^
01:24:447 (8) – ^
01:34:982 (5) – ^
01:44:371 (1) – how about ends this at 01:47:806 ?

[Insane]
00:05:211 (1) – wow !
00:39:562 (7) – copy 00:39:104 (6), then Ctrl+H, then Ctrl+J, so it looks constant and better
01:44:142 (1) – same as Easy
This diff looks nice to me!

Good luck guys :3
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

GiNa wrote:

SPOILER
If I didn't leave a comment, that means I followed the suggestion...don't want to type too many "ok" or "got it" lol
Hi, request from my queue!
And, I love this song and anime <3

[General]
-Oops, 256 kbps is unrankable, make it 192 kbps I swear it says 190kbps in my properties...
Apparently this is encoded with a variable bitrate, which may have sections over the bitrate of the rank criteria. From what I heard, this is rankable, or I will ask BAT/MAT for confirmation on this
-"Ano_Natsu_de_Matteru_ED_TV_Size.osb", deletes this file then full submits
-Set lead-in (Song Setup -> Audio -> Lead-in) at least 500 for all diff.
-Consider adding “ending” in the Tags.
-Add a green line at 01:44:142 to stop your kiai time
-Instead of (Short Ver.), maybe use (TV Size) Since the mp3 is a slight extension, I would prefer it to be "short version"

[Easy]
-Keep the speed constant, so it won’t be too hard for beginners that was so much work orz
00:01:547 (1,2) – nice :D
00:27:195 (4) – NC, try to keep the combo shorter in easier diff
00:34:524 (5) – ^
00:43:684 (4) – ^
00:59:256 (2,3,4,5) – these might confuse beginners, please change either 2, 3 or 4, 5 to a slider. Basically, something like 00:45:058 (6,7,1) is enough already changed placement
01:07:043 (4) – (nazi) overlaps with 01:05:669 (3) a little, consider use different shape for (3)
01:12:997 (1) – hard to read, maybe change this to a spinner ?
01:28:569 (4,5,6,1) - same as 00:59:256 (2,3,4,5) I really want to keep this one...its the only star orz
01:40:478 (1) – I’m not sure about this one, but it’s much readable compared to 01:12:997 (1), so I guess you can keep it as it
01:44:142 (1) – too long, I think stop at 01:47:806 is enough. By the way, either you take my suggestion or not, please silence the end of the spinner (volume: 10% or 5%)

[Normal]
-I would rather suggest you increase slider velocity as the difficulty goes up (or lower Easy’s) lowered velocity on easy
00:01:547 (1), 00:08:875 (1) – hey, nice again
00:27:195 (4) – NC
00:38:188 (2,3,4) – mmm … spacing I would prefer keeping this as it creates a nice patters...its not a very hard space change anyways
00:43:684 (6) – NC
01:12:997 (1) – same as Easy changed to something else
01:24:447 (6) – NC
01:34:753 (4) – ^
01:44:142 (1) – same as Easy

[Moonlight’s Diff] Waiting on my friend for this one
-This diff name is strength, use “Moonlight’s Hard” instead ?
-Spacings are pretty messed up now, recheck all of them and use Distance Snap please (except the jumps you want to keep)
00:25:593 (1) – meaningless NC
00:28:799 (1) – ^, and remove finish
00:31:776 (2) – maybe take out two repeats and add notes, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249508 (I don’t look at the spacing atm, fix it by yourself)
00:33:379 (3) – NC here
00:36:585 (8) – ^
00:47:349 (7) – ^
01:09:333 (7) – ^
01:24:447 (8) – ^
01:34:982 (5) – ^
01:44:371 (1) – how about ends this at 01:47:806 ?

[Insane]
00:05:211 (1) – wow !
00:39:562 (7) – copy 00:39:104 (6), then Ctrl+H, then Ctrl+J, so it looks constant and better oh snap learned new shortcuts ^_^
01:44:142 (1) – same as Easy
This diff looks nice to me!

Good luck guys :3
Thanks for your mod~~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


Easy

  1. fine
Normal

  1. sliders good
  2. 01:26:737 (3) - clap at end
  3. 01:27:424 (4) - remove clap
  4. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section
Moonlight's Diff

  1. hmm why is it called "Moonlight's Diff", rename to "Moonlight's Hard"?
  2. 00:54:905 (1) - new combo..?
  3. 00:55:135 (2) - move to (152,200)
Insane

  1. 00:05:211 (1) - I think this shape needs to be adjusted a little http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot226-1.jpg
  2. 00:26:050 (1,3,4) - whistle here sounds good
  3. 00:27:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about having some distance,, http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot227-2.jpg
  4. 00:30:401 (4,5,6,7) - arrange this stream like this, as to keep the zigzag-stream pattern before, and it fits the song well http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot228-0.jpg
  5. 01:04:524 (2,3,4,5,6) - this spacing should be larger imo..
  6. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section
that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

SPOILER
If i didn't leave a comment, then i've taken the suggestion
Hi, from my queue


Easy

  1. fine
Normal

  1. sliders good
  2. 01:26:737 (3) - clap at end see below
  3. 01:27:424 (4) - remove clap This clap follows the background drum
  4. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section
Moonlight's Diff Moonlight will fix this

  1. hmm why is it called "Moonlight's Diff", rename to "Moonlight's Hard"?
  2. 00:54:905 (1) - new combo..?
  3. 00:55:135 (2) - move to (152,200)
Insane

  1. 00:05:211 (1) - I think this shape needs to be adjusted a little http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot226-1.jpg If u rotate this 15 degrees cw, it becomes vertical, and i adjusted accordingly
  2. 00:26:050 (1,3,4) - whistle here sounds good
  3. 00:27:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about having some distance,, http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot227-2.jpg
  4. 00:30:401 (4,5,6,7) - arrange this stream like this, as to keep the zigzag-stream pattern before, and it fits the song well http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot228-0.jpg
  5. 01:04:524 (2,3,4,5,6) - this spacing should be larger imo..
  6. 01:44:142 (1) - needs a 5% volume green section
that's all

Good luck~
Thanks for your mod~~(and star)
Moonlight

GiNa wrote:

[Moonlight’s Diff]
-This diff name is strength, use “Moonlight’s Hard” instead ? will do
-Spacings are pretty messed up now, recheck all of them and use Distance Snap please (except the jumps you want to keep) ok working on it
00:25:593 (1) – meaningless NCfixed
00:28:799 (1) – ^, and remove finish
00:31:776 (2) – maybe take out two repeats and add notes, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249508 (I don’t look at the spacing atm, fix it by yourself)
00:33:379 (3) – NC here
00:36:585 (8) – ^
00:47:349 (7) – ^
01:09:333 (7) – ^
01:24:447 (8) – ^
01:34:982 (5) – ^^fixed
01:44:371 (1) – how about ends this at 01:47:806 ?ok

GiNa wrote:

hmm why is it called "Moonlight's Diff", rename to "Moonlight's Hard"? ok
00:54:905 (1) - new combo..?ok
00:55:135 (2) - move to (152,200)im plan to change this part a bit, seems a bit too hard.
will send jonathan the new file after.

Jonny, can you change the name when you update the map? thanks!

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.) (jonathanlfj) [Moonlight's Diff].osu
yongtw123
[Easy]
For kiai time, I suggest either remove all whistles, or place them
01:14:829 (1) - this object is too close in time after the spinner. Perhaps end it at 01:14:371
01:14:829 (1) - i'd simply do this and add whistles at start and claps at the end of them:01:23:531 (3) - whistle at end?
01:23:531 (3) - change to clap?
01:25:363 (6) - ^
01:25:821 (1) - finish at start
01:25:821 (1) - i suggest this, and place the corresponding claps:
[Normal]
00:05:211 (1,2) - whistle at start of sliders?
00:12:539 (1,2) - ^
01:27:424 (4) - hmm, shuoldn't this clap be at (3)'s end? Besdies, this combo doesn't play out that well with the vocal. Listen carefully and judge yourself where there should be a "hold" action.

[Moonlights's Hard]
The first 1/3 of the map has no hitsound, but i am sure you can at least use some whistles. Please do so.

00:16:204 (1,2,3) - watch out spacing, (2) is too close with (1)
00:53:990 (4) - new combo
00:55:593 (1) - remove new combo
01:00:859 (1) ~ 01:13:684 (4) - please use some hitsounds!

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
sorry can't mod taiko...

[Insane]
OD 7 is enough

00:52:844 (4) - finish at start maybe?
00:58:798 (3) - finish?
01:17:348 (5) - i just come up with this, see if you like to put a clap at end of this slider. if you like it, consider do so to other similar sections, like 01:32:463 (6).

========================

soft song and nice maps

Good luck!

Shizuroh
Mododododododmod XD

Easy
00:26:050 Maybe a vertical slider instead of a oblique one?
00:49:180 Odd slider
01:43:455 No new combo needed :3

Normal
01:28:340 Somehow i think this part is too fast x.x
01:43:455 No new combo needed

Moonlight's Hard
00:49:180 Put slider closer to the last circle
00:58:340 ^
01:29:485 I think the distance is too big between this circle and the last circle o-o please change it
01:40:478 Way too long, maybe make two sliders of it instead of one? c:

Insane
00:20:554 Just have to say i love the idea you had at this part :3

Anyway i love insane XD
Mitsuneko
My mod, as requested.

It's TV size, not short ver


Easy

00:01:547(1) Add finish in the beginning, remove whistle at end.
00:07:959(2) Remove whistle at end
00:16:203(1) Add finish at the end
01:12:997- Shorten to 01:14:371
01:14:371(1) add clap at the end?
01:40:478(1)- No to the no. How are beginners gonna read this? Remove the red stuff.

[Normal

00:01:547- Add finish in the beginning

lol I don't have much to give..just add a finish to the beginning of each diff XD (Well, except for the taiko I guess)

Good luck~
Moonlight

yongtw123 wrote:

[Moonlights's Hard]
The first 1/3 of the map has no hitsound, but i am sure you can at least use some whistles. Please do so. you are right, it does feels something missing. will add whistle

00:16:204 (1,2,3) - watch out spacing, (2) is too close with (1) fixed.
00:53:990 (4) - new combo fixed
00:55:593 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:00:859 (1) ~ 01:13:684 (4) - please use some hitsounds! will do

SkyDevil wrote:

Moonlight's Hard
00:49:180 Put slider closer to the last circle I actually intended to separate them a bit.
00:58:340 ^
01:29:485 I think the distance is too big between this circle and the last circle o-o please change it i think jump here is appropriate.
01:40:478 Way too long, maybe make two sliders of it instead of one? c: was trying to fit into the video, and i don't really know where to split them in to two...
its's tv size, not short ver.
well it was Short Ver. when we started...
It also make sense to be Short Ver since the beginning has vocal, while the tv size doesn't.
and... it is longer than TV size...so...

Thank you guys for modding!

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.) (jonathanlfj) [Moonlight's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
If i didnt leave a comment, then i followed the suggestion
SPOILER

yongtw123 wrote:

[Easy]
For kiai time, I suggest either remove all whistles, or place them followed suggestions below
01:14:829 (1) - this object is too close in time after the spinner. Perhaps end it at 01:14:371
01:14:829 (1) - i'd simply do this and add whistles at start and claps at the end of them:[attachment=1:38ba3]04.jpg[/attachment:38ba3]01:23:531 (3) - whistle at end?
01:23:531 (3) - change to clap?
01:25:363 (6) - ^
01:25:821 (1) - finish at start
01:25:821 (1) - i suggest this, and place the corresponding claps:[attachment=0:38ba3]05.jpg[/attachment:38ba3]
[Normal]
00:05:211 (1,2) - whistle at start of sliders?
00:12:539 (1,2) - ^
01:27:424 (4) - hmm, shuoldn't this clap be at (3)'s end? Besdies, this combo doesn't play out that well with the vocal. Listen carefully and judge yourself where there should be a "hold" action. This follows the background drum. Rearranged the sliders and circles to fit vocal

[Moonlights's Hard]
The first 1/3 of the map has no hitsound, but i am sure you can at least use some whistles. Please do so.

00:16:204 (1,2,3) - watch out spacing, (2) is too close with (1)
00:53:990 (4) - new combo
00:55:593 (1) - remove new combo
01:00:859 (1) ~ 01:13:684 (4) - please use some hitsounds!

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
sorry can't mod taiko...

[Insane]
OD 7 is enough

00:52:844 (4) - finish at start maybe?
00:58:798 (3) - finish?
01:17:348 (5) - i just come up with this, see if you like to put a clap at end of this slider. if you like it, consider do so to other similar sections, like 01:32:463 (6). sounds good

========================

soft song and nice maps

Good luck!

SkyDevil wrote:

Mododododododmod XD

Easy
00:26:050 Maybe a vertical slider instead of a oblique one?
00:49:180 Odd slider changed to less odd looking lol
01:43:455 No new combo needed :3

Normal
01:28:340 Somehow i think this part is too fast x.x fixed this section with the previous mod
01:43:455 No new combo needed

Moonlight's Hard
00:49:180 Put slider closer to the last circle
00:58:340 ^
01:29:485 I think the distance is too big between this circle and the last circle o-o please change it
01:40:478 Way too long, maybe make two sliders of it instead of one? c:

Insane
00:20:554 Just have to say i love the idea you had at this part :3 Thanks, I love that part too

Anyway i love insane XD

nekonomitsu wrote:

My mod, as requested.

It's TV size, not short ver Moonlight explained why its short ver. not TV size


Easy

00:01:547(1) Add finish in the beginning, remove whistle at end.
00:07:959(2) Remove whistle at end
00:16:203(1) Add finish at the end
01:12:997- Shorten to 01:14:371
01:14:371(1) add clap at the end?
01:40:478(1)- No to the no. How are beginners gonna read this? Remove the red stuff. orz this slider isn't very fast...k i modified it so its less clustered up

[Normal

00:01:547- Add finish in the beginning

lol I don't have much to give..just add a finish to the beginning of each diff XD (Well, except for the taiko I guess) aite

Good luck~
Thanks for the mods (and star~~)!
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ jonathanlfj ~ :)

Mod time for Moonlight PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Setting 'PreviewTime: 74600' pls (all diff).
  2. Romove 'ed' in tags and add 'ending' pls.
  3. Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.
  4. Yor mp3 file is 458kbps,This is unrankable,need change 192kbps or following.

[Insane]


  1. 00:23:531 (5) - Add new combo.
  2. 00:38:188 (4) - ^
  3. 01:09:333 (6) - ^
  4. 01:03:837 - Add finish.
  5. 01:14:829 - ^
  6. 01:33:837 (5) - Try perfect stack on 01:33:150 (3) - end point.
  7. 01:14:600 - KIAI time Must be start on white line.

[Moonlight's Hard]


  1. 00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make more better star.
  2. 00:26:966 - Add a note to here,have vacal to here.
  3. 00:54:906 (1,2,3,4) - Make symmetry.
  4. 01:03:837 - Add finish.
  5. 01:07:501 - ^

[Normal]


  1. AR-1 much better play with this song.
  2. 01:14:600 - KIAI time Must be start on white line.

[Easy]


  1. 01:14:600 - KIAI time Must be start on white line.

That's all ~

Good luck ~
Moonlight

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Mod time for Moonlight PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


[*]Yor mp3 file is 458kbps,This is unrankable,need change 192kbps or following.
[/list]

under windows 7 Pro 64bits, properties.



under foobar2000.


it's just VBR...

[Moonlight's Hard]


  1. 00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make more better star. <--- I'll consult with star expert jonathan to see what I can do here.
  2. 00:26:966 - Add a note to here,have vacal to here. <-- ok, it seems both could do.
  3. 00:54:906 (1,2,3,4) - Make symmetry. looks symmetric to me... ill get into the small details :D
  4. 01:03:837 - Add finish. ok.
  5. 01:07:501 - ^
ok.
Thanks for modding!
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ jonathanlfj ~ :)

Mod time for Moonlight PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

If i didn't leave a comment, then I did the change

[General]


  1. Setting 'PreviewTime: 74600' pls (all diff).
  2. Romove 'ed' in tags and add 'ending' pls.
  3. Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.
  4. Yor mp3 file is 458kbps,This is unrankable,need change 192kbps or following. As moonlight said...VBR

[Insane]


  1. 00:23:531 (5) - Add new combo.
  2. 00:38:188 (4) - ^
  3. 01:09:333 (6) - ^ The combo change in this section is trying to accommodate the background colours...can't change
  4. 01:03:837 - Add finish.
  5. 01:14:829 - ^ Already have a finish on the previous note, so this one is not necessary
  6. 01:33:837 (5) - Try perfect stack on 01:33:150 (3) - end point.
  7. 01:14:600 - KIAI time Must be start on white line.

[Moonlight's Hard]


  1. 00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make more better star.
  2. 00:26:966 - Add a note to here,have vacal to here.
  3. 00:54:906 (1,2,3,4) - Make symmetry.
  4. 01:03:837 - Add finish.
  5. 01:07:501 - ^

[Normal]


  1. AR-1 much better play with this song.
  2. 01:14:600 - KIAI time Must be start on white line.

[Easy]


  1. 01:14:600 - KIAI time Must be start on white line.

That's all ~

Good luck ~
Thank you for the mod~~
popner
Hi, jonathanlfj ~ Mod from Scorpiour's Queue. Just suggestions.

[General]
Fine~


[Easy]

00:59:256 (2,3,4,5,1) - Difficult for Easy.
01:28:569 (4,5,6,1,2) - ^

01:12:997 (1) - remove finish?
01:14:829 (1) - add finish at the beginning?
01:29:485 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
01:33:837 (2) - remove finish?

00:37:730 (1) - RNC
00:38:188 (2) - NC
00:41:394 (1) - RNC
00:41:852 (2) - NC
00:43:684 (1) - RNC
00:48:035 (1) - RNC
00:49:180 (2) - NC
00:58:340 (1) - RNC


[Normal]

00:38:188 (2,3,4) - not fit the rhythm...make them 1/2 tick shorter?
00:41:852 (4) - change to a slider from 00:41:852 to 00:42:310 and a circle at 00:42:539
00:55:363 (6) - delete
01:11:165 (1,2,3,4,1) - make a little jump
01:28:111 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - change to a smarter pattern?
01:33:837 (3) - move 1/2 tick later, then add circles at01:33:837 and 01:34:982?

01:13:684 (2) - remove finish?
01:14:600 (1) - remove finish?
01:14:829 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
01:29:485 (2) - add finish at the beginning?


[Insane]

00:04:638 (9,10) - make them parallel to 00:04:409 (7,8) (copy)
00:11:508 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

01:13:913 (9) - remove finish at the end?
01:14:829 (1) - add finish at the beginning?

That's all. GL~
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

popner wrote:

If i didn't leave a comment then i made the change
Hi, jonathanlfj ~ Mod from Scorpiour's Queue. Just suggestions.

[General]
Fine~


[Easy]

00:59:256 (2,3,4,5,1) - Difficult for Easy.
01:28:569 (4,5,6,1,2) - ^

01:12:997 (1) - remove finish?
01:14:829 (1) - add finish at the beginning?
01:29:485 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
01:33:837 (2) - remove finish? This fits the background music

00:37:730 (1) - RNC
00:38:188 (2) - NC
00:41:394 (1) - RNC
00:41:852 (2) - NC
00:43:684 (1) - RNC
00:48:035 (1) - RNC
00:49:180 (2) - NC
00:58:340 (1) - RNC


[Normal]

00:38:188 (2,3,4) - not fit the rhythm...make them 1/2 tick shorter? I think this is ok...
00:41:852 (4) - change to a slider from 00:41:852 to 00:42:310 and a circle at 00:42:539 fitting with the pattern in previous section
00:55:363 (6) - delete
01:11:165 (1,2,3,4,1) - make a little jump
01:28:111 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - change to a smarter pattern? I think its fine, not too hard to read
01:33:837 (3) - move 1/2 tick later, then add circles at01:33:837 and 01:34:982? mapping vocal here

01:13:684 (2) - remove finish? I think finish fits well here
01:14:600 (1) - remove finish?
01:14:829 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
01:29:485 (2) - add finish at the beginning?


[Insane]

00:04:638 (9,10) - make them parallel to 00:04:409 (7,8) (copy)
00:11:508 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

01:13:913 (9) - remove finish at the end?
01:14:829 (1) - add finish at the beginning?

That's all. GL~
Thank you for the mod~~
BeatofIke
Normal mod request from my modding queue. :)

[General]
-In your taiko difficulty, your offset is different.
-You have two OSB files. Do you need both of them?

[Easy]
-Good.

[Normal]
-Okay, but could use some polarity.

[Moonlight's Hard]
-HP Drain (-1)
-Overall Difficulty (-1)
-00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe make this a hexagon instead?
-00:18:264- Add note.
-00:27:196 (1) - Pretty short spinner you got here.
-00:58:111 (6) - Add clap.
-00:58:341 (1) - Remove clap.
-00:59:257 (4) - Remove clap.
-01:40:478 (1) - lol
-There are some inconsistent blanklets, spacing, and hitsounds.

[Insane]
-01:40:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - STAR STREAM! <3

Good map overall, but hard difficulty needs work.
giO-
Hello from my queue~

General

Use same Preview Point in all difficults, PreviewTime: 74600 , you missed it in "Nyquill's Taiko Oni"

Easy

Approach Rate -1?

00:22:386 (3) - move on 00:22:157 - and make it finish to 00:23:073 - ? sound better http://puu.sh/kJ7h
00:36:356 (3) - this slider have ugly overlap with previous, fix it http://puu.sh/kJ7s
00:44:600 (4) - whistle?
00:57:424 (2) - add clap on end of slider, http://puu.sh/kJ7H
01:28:569 (4) - delete one repeat?

Moonlight's Hard

00:21:928 (6) - new combo?
00:27:196 (1) - map something instead of spinner, sound weird
00:33:379 (1) - fix 2nd point ( http://puu.sh/kJaH ) of this slider on x:56 y:20 http://puu.sh/kJaG
00:34:524 (3) - overlap, fix this, 2nd point on x:228 y:204 http://puu.sh/kJaU
00:57:653 (4) - delete clap
00:57:882 (5) - add clap
00:58:341 (1) - delete clap
00:58:799 (2) - add clap
00:59:257 (4) - delete clap
01:11:165 (1) - ugly slider :p
01:13:684 (4) - move on x:332 y:184
01:17:348 (10) - fix slider shape
01:40:478 (1) - mmmm ok, maybe change with something else, not all but last part
01:44:371 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner

Insane

00:05:211 (1) - ç.ç sorry but it's ugly
01:03:379 (7) - add clap
01:03:608 (8) - delete clap
01:10:821 (10) - sound bad, delete it?
01:44:142 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner

Good Luck~ :)
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

BeatofIke wrote:

Normal mod request from my modding queue. :)

[General]
-In your taiko difficulty, your offset is different. got it for now, still have to ask Nyquill for permission
-You have two OSB files. Do you need both of them? what there are no osb files in my folder...

[Easy]
-Good.

[Normal]
-Okay, but could use some polarity. let me see what i can do here

[Moonlight's Hard] moonlight will fix this
-HP Drain (-1)
-Overall Difficulty (-1)
-00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe make this a hexagon instead?
-00:18:264- Add note.
-00:27:196 (1) - Pretty short spinner you got here.
-00:58:111 (6) - Add clap.
-00:58:341 (1) - Remove clap.
-00:59:257 (4) - Remove clap.
-01:40:478 (1) - lol
-There are some inconsistent blanklets, spacing, and hitsounds.

[Insane]
-01:40:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - STAR STREAM! <3 thanks~~

Good map overall, but hard difficulty needs work.
SPOILER

giO- wrote:

Hello from my queue~ If i didnt comment then i fixed it

General

Use same Preview Point in all difficults, PreviewTime: 74600 , you missed it in "Nyquill's Taiko Oni"

Easy

Approach Rate -1? I think it makes it harder to read...

00:22:386 (3) - move on 00:22:157 - and make it finish to 00:23:073 - ? sound better http://puu.sh/kJ7h It fits the rythm set by the previous notes
00:36:356 (3) - this slider have ugly overlap with previous, fix it http://puu.sh/kJ7s
00:44:600 (4) - whistle? whistle as normal whistle? sounds weird to me...
00:57:424 (2) - add clap on end of slider, http://puu.sh/kJ7H following background drums here
01:28:569 (4) - delete one repeat?

Moonlight's Hard Moonlight will fix this

00:21:928 (6) - new combo?
00:27:196 (1) - map something instead of spinner, sound weird
00:33:379 (1) - fix 2nd point ( http://puu.sh/kJaH ) of this slider on x:56 y:20 http://puu.sh/kJaG
00:34:524 (3) - overlap, fix this, 2nd point on x:228 y:204 http://puu.sh/kJaU
00:57:653 (4) - delete clap
00:57:882 (5) - add clap
00:58:341 (1) - delete clap
00:58:799 (2) - add clap
00:59:257 (4) - delete clap
01:11:165 (1) - ugly slider :p
01:13:684 (4) - move on x:332 y:184
01:17:348 (10) - fix slider shape
01:40:478 (1) - mmmm ok, maybe change with something else, not all but last part
01:44:371 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner

Insane

00:05:211 (1) - ç.ç sorry but it's ugly orz this is slider art mimicking the spaceship...got mostly positive feedback on it
01:03:379 (7) - add clap following drums
01:03:608 (8) - delete clap ^
01:10:821 (10) - sound bad, delete it?
01:44:142 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner

Good Luck~ :)
Thanks for the mods~~~
Heatherfield
aiaiclala fans club presents
Nice song, 黑喂狗.
BTW don't forget my mods are always just suggestions if not specified.
[General]
2 "ending" in tags? I know you mean Anime ending and ending separately but it seems that actually it makes no difference.
Remove jonathanlfj from tags
[Insane]
Nice hitsounds.
Some sliders in this diff is a little bit slow for me, especially in those 0.8 bpm parts. Not a big deal though.
00:05:211 (1) - Would you consider silence sliderslide? May sound better. Also, the end of the slider is a little bit overlapped, it's fine imo though.
00:12:539 (1) - ^ and this slider is a little bit ugly because of this part:
but I don't know how to make it better haha
00:29:371 (6) - add a note here
00:29:943 (3) - replace with a tripple hit
01:05:669 (7) - try this? lol just suggestion
01:44:085 (1) - spinner start here?
01:47:692 (1) - and end here?
[Taiko]
Seems fine, needs a taiko BG though.
[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this..
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxing
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.
[Normal]
This diff really needs to silence the sliderslide lol
Circle is too large so that the sliders are pretty stuck together, maybe you should try circlesize 4
AR 5 seems better for me
[Easy]
Many objects starts from red line in the beginning part, don't know if it's ok for Easy.

Pretty good map, good luck.
Nyquill
Got really bored, so thought I might as well...
Moonlight

BeatofIke wrote:

[Moonlight's Hard]
-HP Drain (-1)ok, i did noticed that the hp is a bit hard to go backup...
-Overall Difficulty (-1) I think diff is not that bad.
-00:10:937 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe make this a hexagon instead? ok
-00:18:264- Add note. ok
-00:27:196 (1) - Pretty short spinner you got here. deleted spinner and added some notes.
-00:58:111 (6) - Add clap. the hit sound seems ok...
-00:58:341 (1) - Remove clap. ^
-00:59:257 (4) - Remove clap. ^
-01:40:478 (1) - lol lol as in a good thing or bad thing...i cant tell...
-There are some inconsistent blanklets, spacing, and hitsounds. fixed lots of them, others i cant tell... I wonder where are you talking about? a few of them are intentional.

giO- wrote:

Moonlight's Hard

00:21:928 (6) - new combo? ok
00:27:196 (1) - map something instead of spinner, sound weird ok
00:33:379 (1) - fix 2nd point ( http://puu.sh/kJaH ) of this slider on x:56 y:20 http://puu.sh/kJaG nice
00:34:524 (3) - overlap, fix this, 2nd point on x:228 y:204 http://puu.sh/kJaU ok
00:57:653 (4) - delete clap I'll speculate a bit more on this...
00:57:882 (5) - add clap^
00:58:341 (1) - delete clap^
00:58:799 (2) - add clap ^
00:59:257 (4) - delete clap ^
01:11:165 (1) - ugly slider :pwhat do you think on how to change it?
01:13:684 (4) - move on x:332 y:184rankable? ok
01:17:348 (10) - fix slider shape........ok.....
01:40:478 (1) - mmmm ok, maybe change with something else, not all but last partso whats your suggestion on how to change it? and why?
01:44:371 (1) - i think you can delete the finish on this spinner deleted.

Heatherfield wrote:

[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this.. ok... changed...
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxingok
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?ok
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.the timing is too insane!
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.ended with soft whistle
thanks for the mods~
updated map

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (Short Ver.) (jonathanlfj) [Moonlight's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Heatherfield wrote:

If i didnt comment, then i followed the suggestion
aiaiclala fans club presents
Nice song, 黑喂狗.
BTW don't forget my mods are always just suggestions if not specified.
[General]
2 "ending" in tags? I know you mean Anime ending and ending separately but it seems that actually it makes no difference. opps
Remove jonathanlfj from tags just realized that its not necessary...
[Insane]
Nice hitsounds.
Some sliders in this diff is a little bit slow for me, especially in those 0.8 bpm parts. Not a big deal though.
00:05:211 (1) - Would you consider silence sliderslide? May sound better. Also, the end of the slider is a little bit overlapped, it's fine imo though. got it, did it for all other diff too
00:12:539 (1) - ^ and this slider is a little bit ugly because of this part:
but I don't know how to make it better haha enlarged it so the circles overlap less
00:29:371 (6) - add a note here
00:29:943 (3) - replace with a tripple hit made reverse slider instead
01:05:669 (7) - try this? lol just suggestion reverse slider again, and i didnt do the 5 note stream...too sudden imo
01:44:085 (1) - spinner start here?
01:47:692 (1) - and end here?
[Taiko]
Seems fine, needs a taiko BG though.
[Moonlight's Hard]
00:07:043 (4) - o_o I don't understand this..
00:44:600 (3,4,5) - this jump is quiet big, while other parts of the map is so relaxing
01:12:997 (1) - maybe new combo here?
Also, same last spinner suggestion as Insane.
Ending with normal finish might not be a good idea, I don't know.
[Normal]
This diff really needs to silence the sliderslide lol
Circle is too large so that the sliders are pretty stuck together, maybe you should try circlesize 4 looks better, dunno how much difficulty level it will raise though
AR 5 seems better for me got it
[Easy]
Many objects starts from red line in the beginning part, don't know if it's ok for Easy. I think its ok, after all its a slow song lol

Pretty good map, good luck.
Thanks for your mod~~
jossieP
hello <:

[Easy]

just want to point the unconcistant spacing for this diff, although Im not getting mad with it
  1. 00:01:547 (1,2) - first at all you are using a spacing of 1,20x for this diff, and I tried to make a heart might pattern, keeping the 1,20x spacing, dont know if you are going to like it, but if you dont, maybe you can think on other pattern for this or a better heart might shape, this is the best I can make
    SPOILER
    256,120,1547,54,0,B|160:12|40:104|60:232|168:240|168:240|200:240|244:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
    256,120,5211,2,0,B|352:12|472:104|452:232|344:240|344:240|312:240|268:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
  2. 00:08:875 (1) - then the spacing from previous object would be moar easy to fix, space this object correctly please, nice shape by the way
  3. 00:16:890 (1) - although this was on the centre of the circled shaped slider this must be spaced correctly
  4. 00:17:119 (2) - remove the whistle from slider body, sounds unnecesary, looks like you have a pattern here and on some of the incoming sliders, but Im not sure where are you supporting it, also the whistle of slider body dont sounds so good, especially on this slider 00:27:195 (1)
  5. 00:23:531 (1) - next slider comes 1,37x spacing, different from usual 1,20x
  6. 00:26:050 (3) - then suddenly the spacing get to 1,40x; remember that this is an [Easy] diff and is supposed to have the same spacing on whole map
  7. 00:30:859 (1) - incoming objects get 1,00x spacing O_o please again use an unique and constant spacing
  8. 00:34:524 (1,2) - make them a bit less "triangular"? the start and end are touching them and that may be confusing for newbies
  9. 00:36:356 (3) - no whistle on slider body, also maybe but just maybe exteend this to 00:37:730? where (3) is currently
  10. 00:45:516 (1) - back to 1,20x spacing
  11. 00:49:180 (1) - less compressed maybe?
  12. 01:00:172 (1) - back to 1,00x spacing
  13. 01:03:379 (6) - clap and ↓
  14. 01:03:837 (1) - no whistle on start of slider, sounds better if you keep your common pattern
  15. 01:16:661 (2) - finish on start of slider instead whistle, the previous slider lenght is the same also that gives a nice hitsound symmetry on those 2 sliders, oh 1,40x spacing >:
    wow so nice ;_; but spacing is not ok, feel free to wait for a second opinion about spacing

[Normal]

[Normal] diffs are also supposed to have the same spacing on whole map
  1. 00:23:073 (8) - whistle maybe?
  2. 00:24:447 (2) - hmm again the whistle on slider bodies, maybe check them on this diff also?

[Moonlight's Hard]

  1. 00:22:845 (4) - why you are silencing this slider end? give a solid reason or remove that 5% volume section please
  2. 00:27:195 (7) - whistle at start of slider
  3. 00:29:944 (5) - finish on end of slider, personal prefference
  4. 00:32:692 (5) - no whistle here, only whistles on red ticks sounds nice ovo
  5. 00:47:120 (5) - no whistle, is so close from previous clap, also start whistles on 00:48:036 (2), sounds moar concistant and interesting
  6. 00:58:112 (6) - no whistle, clap instead the battery that you was following on 00:57:654 (4) is present here not..↓
  7. 00:58:341 (1) - no clap on start of slider
  8. 00:58:799 (2) - finish or whistle for increase the effect on the song
  9. 00:59:256 (4) - for keep the battery clap on end of slider and ↓
  10. 00:59:943 (6) - clap here, leave (5) witouth hitsounds sounds nice that way
  11. 01:23:302 (5) - I dont like the whistle on this slider body, can you remove it >:?
  12. 01:33:837 (3) - no whistle on slider body, the finish on start gives a nice effect on silent body
  13. 01:36:814 (1,3) - same dislike about whistle on slider bodies >_<
  14. 01:40:478 (1) - a personal suggest, add 3 or 4 sliders instead this only?

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

remove the video from this diff, taiko diffs, the video is croped to half size on taiko mode, and the custom bg image is enough
  1. 00:16:203 (1) - D?
  2. 00:17:119 (1,1,1,2,1) - dkk k d just to follows the piano
  3. 00:30:859 (1) - D, follows better the bass effect
  4. 01:07:501 (2) - D, I love this pattern ;_; 01:06:814 (2,1,1,2) and Ill love it moar if the last don have a finish ;_;
  5. 01:44:142 (2) - D? the previous note is a katsu so..

[Insane]

  1. 00:05:211 (1) - O_o a sword?
  2. 01:13:913 (9) - you are missing an 1/8 note, add an extra repeat to this slider and make the next slider a bit closer for avoid the combo break
  3. 01:17:348 (5) - no clap on end of slider? there is no moar double clap patterns incoming
  4. 01:32:463 (6) - same as avobe
    nice star patterns <:
that is all >_< cant star due spacing on [Easy] and [Normal] diffs
hope this helps ;_;
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello <:

[Easy]

just want to point the unconcistant spacing for this diff, although Im not getting mad with it I fixed all the spacing related issues on easy with an uniform 1.00x spacing, so i wont comment on these pointers in the mod
  1. 00:01:547 (1,2) - first at all you are using a spacing of 1,20x for this diff, and I tried to make a heart might pattern, keeping the 1,20x spacing, dont know if you are going to like it, but if you dont, maybe you can think on other pattern for this or a better heart might shape, this is the best I can make
    SPOILER
    256,120,1547,54,0,B|160:12|40:104|60:232|168:240|168:240|200:240|244:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
    256,120,5211,2,0,B|352:12|472:104|452:232|344:240|344:240|312:240|268:264|256:316,1,480,4|0
    Fixed this issue by reversing the second slider so there is an overlap
  2. 00:08:875 (1) - then the spacing from previous object would be moar easy to fix, space this object correctly please, nice shape by the way
  3. 00:16:890 (1) - although this was on the centre of the circled shaped slider this must be spaced correctly
  4. 00:17:119 (2) - remove the whistle from slider body, sounds unnecesary, looks like you have a pattern here and on some of the incoming sliders, but Im not sure where are you supporting it, also the whistle of slider body dont sounds so good, especially on this slider 00:27:195 (1) Fixed all slider slide sounds in easy
  5. 00:23:531 (1) - next slider comes 1,37x spacing, different from usual 1,20x
  6. 00:26:050 (3) - then suddenly the spacing get to 1,40x; remember that this is an [Easy] diff and is supposed to have the same spacing on whole map
  7. 00:30:859 (1) - incoming objects get 1,00x spacing O_o please again use an unique and constant spacing
  8. 00:34:524 (1,2) - make them a bit less "triangular"? the start and end are touching them and that may be confusing for newbies got it
  9. 00:36:356 (3) - no whistle on slider body, also maybe but just maybe exteend this to 00:37:730? where (3) is currently
  10. 00:45:516 (1) - back to 1,20x spacing
  11. 00:49:180 (1) - less compressed maybe? made a regular slider
  12. 01:00:172 (1) - back to 1,00x spacing
  13. 01:03:379 (6) - clap and ↓ at this point the background drums change pattern, so the clap pattern also change a bit
  14. 01:03:837 (1) - no whistle on start of slider, sounds better if you keep your common pattern changed to finish
  15. 01:16:661 (2) - finish on start of slider instead whistle, the previous slider lenght is the same also that gives a nice hitsound symmetry on those 2 sliders, oh 1,40x spacing >: alrite
    wow so nice ;_; but spacing is not ok, feel free to wait for a second opinion about spacing

[Normal]

[Normal] diffs are also supposed to have the same spacing on whole map This map has changing slider speeds, so the spacing changes throughout. I made sure that everything is at 1.20x spacing with their associated slider speeds (AI mod lol), except that triangular slider pattern part
  1. 00:23:073 (8) - whistle maybe? aite
  2. 00:24:447 (2) - hmm again the whistle on slider bodies, maybe check them on this diff also? Fixed all

[Moonlight's Hard]

Moonlight will handle this
  1. 00:22:845 (4) - why you are silencing this slider end? give a solid reason or remove that 5% volume section please
  2. 00:27:195 (7) - whistle at start of slider
  3. 00:29:944 (5) - finish on end of slider, personal prefference
  4. 00:32:692 (5) - no whistle here, only whistles on red ticks sounds nice ovo
  5. 00:47:120 (5) - no whistle, is so close from previous clap, also start whistles on 00:48:036 (2), sounds moar concistant and interesting
  6. 00:58:112 (6) - no whistle, clap instead the battery that you was following on 00:57:654 (4) is present here not..↓
  7. 00:58:341 (1) - no clap on start of slider
  8. 00:58:799 (2) - finish or whistle for increase the effect on the song
  9. 00:59:256 (4) - for keep the battery clap on end of slider and ↓
  10. 00:59:943 (6) - clap here, leave (5) witouth hitsounds sounds nice that way
  11. 01:23:302 (5) - I dont like the whistle on this slider body, can you remove it >:?
  12. 01:33:837 (3) - no whistle on slider body, the finish on start gives a nice effect on silent body
  13. 01:36:814 (1,3) - same dislike about whistle on slider bodies >_<
  14. 01:40:478 (1) - a personal suggest, add 3 or 4 sliders instead this only?

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

Nyquill will fix this
remove the video from this diff, taiko diffs, the video is croped to half size on taiko mode, and the custom bg image is enough
  1. 00:16:203 (1) - D?
  2. 00:17:119 (1,1,1,2,1) - dkk k d just to follows the piano
  3. 00:30:859 (1) - D, follows better the bass effect
  4. 01:07:501 (2) - D, I love this pattern ;_; 01:06:814 (2,1,1,2) and Ill love it moar if the last don have a finish ;_;
  5. 01:44:142 (2) - D? the previous note is a katsu so..

[Insane]

  1. 00:05:211 (1) - O_o a sword? the spaceship in the anime, its true identity has been revealed in the last episode...man in black lol
  2. 01:13:913 (9) - you are missing an 1/8 note, add an extra repeat to this slider and make the next slider a bit closer for avoid the combo break got it
  3. 01:17:348 (5) - no clap on end of slider? there is no moar double clap patterns incoming this double clap pattern sounds nice to me, so im keeping it
  4. 01:32:463 (6) - same as avobe ^
    nice star patterns <: Thanks~~~
that is all >_< cant star due spacing on [Easy] and [Normal] diffs
hope this helps ;_;
Thank you for your mod~~
jossieP
xD sorry I haven't see this anime, also getting back to point some stuff on [Easy]
  1. 00:17:119 (2) - previous object still 1,20x
  2. 00:20:783 (2) - ↑ same as avobe
  3. 01:24:447 (4) - stack on 01:22:615 (2) start?
anyway take your star x3
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

ikari_kyon wrote:

xD sorry I haven't see this anime, also getting back to point some stuff on [Easy]
  1. 00:17:119 (2) - previous object still 1,20x
  2. 00:20:783 (2) - ↑ same as avobe
  3. 01:24:447 (4) - stack on 01:22:615 (2) start?
anyway take your star x3
Thanks for the star~~~
I will fix these problems and update when i receive updated maps from the other diff makers
P.S. I'm supposed to give a second kudosu as i did rite?
jossieP
nope >; ask someone can denied it
Edit: now is ok
Edit2: D: I saw that is ok that it was denied >_<
Edit3: dont kudos me again >:!
MoodyRPG
Another Short Ver. :)

General
  1. Well,you have a inconsistent kiai times here so fix that please
  2. 01:44:142 (1) - Considered to extend this spinner to 1/2 in all diffs
  3. "Moonlight's Hard" don't have Audio Lead-In,Why?
Easy
  • - 00:30:630 (5) - Delete this note because is hard to read for newbies players in my opinion
    - 00:45:287 (6) - ^
Normal
  • -- Looks nice
Moonlight's Hard
  • -- So you have a unsnapped section here 00:17:133,so resnap this section
Nyquill's Taiko Oni
  • -- Perhaps you should to remove the video in my opinion
    -- And yeah,you have a unsnapped circles here:
    00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 
    00:29:406 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:017 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:093 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:246 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:322 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
Insane
  • -- Ok
Yep.
jossieP
mod bassed on aiBAT o:
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

MoodyRPG wrote:

Another Short Ver. :)

General
  1. Well,you have a inconsistent kiai times here so fix that please k i'll fix it
  2. 01:44:142 (1) - Considered to extend this spinner to 1/2 in all diffs this was a change made from a previous suggestion, since the spinner approach circle starts simultaneously with the down beat of the music, and ends where there is a fade away in music. I think this is ok because its a fairly long spinner
  3. "Moonlight's Hard" don't have Audio Lead-In,Why? forgot to fix that when he updated his diff, i'll fix it
Easy
  • - 00:30:630 (5) - Delete this note because is hard to read for newbies players in my opinion k
    - 00:45:287 (6) - ^ k
Normal
  • -- Looks nice
Moonlight's Hard moonlight will fix this
  • -- So you have a unsnapped section here 00:17:133,so resnap this section
Nyquill's Taiko Oni nyquill will fix this
  • -- Perhaps you should to remove the video in my opinion
    -- And yeah,you have a unsnapped circles here:
    00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 
    00:29:406 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:017 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:093 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:246 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:322 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
Insane
  • -- Ok
Yep.
Thank you~~~
10nya
suggestion orz

[Normal]
01:36:814 (5) - Add finish

[Insane]
The kiai ends at 01:40:478 right ? owo

its a good map seriously XD
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

vwxcrossover wrote:

suggestion orz

[Normal]
01:36:814 (5) - Add finish ok

[Insane]
The kiai ends at 01:40:478 right ? owo forgot to change lol

its a good map seriously XD
thanks~~
suzutsukikanade
Ok as you requested in my queue...

[General]
Can't see nothing wrong here.

[Easy]
This diff is fine

[Normal]

Oh, creative sliders here :D

00:41:165 (1,2,3): Fix spacing here.
00:55:363: add a note?
01:29:027 (9): NC here? Is a long combo for a Insane.

[Hard]
Oh you used many whistles here o.o
And slider sounds annoying here, sorry but your hard is a little annoying for me.

00:01:547 (1): Remove whistle and add finish.
00:28:111 (8): ^ in repeat.
00:28:798 (1): Remove Finish
00:29:485 (3): ^
00:30:631 (6): Remove whistle
00:44:600 (3,4,5): Remove claps here

Insane is ok

Your map is good, find more mods and this map will be good.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Ok as you requested in my queue...

[General]
Can't see nothing wrong here.

[Easy]
This diff is fine

[Normal]

Oh, creative sliders here :D

00:41:165 (1,2,3): Fix spacing here. k
SPOILER
[attachment=0:cd6d5]screenshot009.jpg[/attachment:cd6d5]
00:55:363: add a note? aite...wait why did i delete that anyways lol
01:29:027 (9): NC here? Is a long combo for a Insane. k NC on the white tick

[Hard]
Oh you used many whistles here o.o
And slider sounds annoying here, sorry but your hard is a little annoying for me.
This is guest diff, since the creator is somewhat afk due to exams i will take over the fixes

00:01:547 (1): Remove whistle and add finish.
00:28:111 (8): ^ in repeat.
00:28:798 (1): Remove Finish
00:29:485 (3): ^
00:30:631 (6): Remove whistle
00:44:600 (3,4,5): Remove claps here

Insane is ok

Your map is good, find more mods and this map will be good.
Thank you for the mod~~
Mystica
Here comes my mod.
[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - clap at end fits more
01:03:379 (6) - add clap
01:03:379 (6) - finish at end
01:36:814 (6) - finish

[Normal]
Sweet slider
00:35:211 (2,3,6,1) - whistle at every two white line and cancel the whistle on 00:36:356 (4,6)

[Hard]
00:09:562 (2,3) - add whistle at beginning of slider
00:13:226 (2,3) - ^
some greenlines seems not very fit

[Insane]
may think add more finish at kiai

Sweet song.Good map.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.
[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - clap at end fits more using bg drum as reference for claps
01:03:379 (6) - add clap as above
01:03:379 (6) - finish at end this is a circle...but i merged two with a slider and added clap instead
01:36:814 (6) - finishok

[Normal]
Sweet slider
00:35:211 (2,3,6,1) - whistle at every two white line and cancel the whistle on 00:36:356 (4,6) i think u mean change from 4& 6 to 3 & 5...it does sound better

[Hard]
00:09:562 (2,3) - add whistle at beginning of slider k
00:13:226 (2,3) - ^ k
some greenlines seems not very fit i will take a look into that...not my diff so dunno how it works

[Insane]
may think add more finish at kiai added a few to make finishes sound consistant

Sweet song.Good map.
Thanks for the mod~~
kanpakyin
Artist: yanaginagi

this is the cover of this single.

Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

kanpakyin wrote:

Artist: yanaginagi

this is the cover of this single.

got it. saw the ranked version a few days ago. Thanks!
Edit: Title change is so troublesome orz
ertyukjh010


Yo~您好
mod了9個英文終於有個中文QAQ

[Easy]

HP+1 ??
00:16:890 (1) - 搬到00:16:661比較適合喔,EZ也盡量減少1/2
00:18:722 (3) - 明顯沒對稱:3 善用Ctrl+H將它弄成對稱(必要時在中間放第5點來調整)
00:20:325 (1) - 盡量減少1/2
00:23:531 (1) - 在00:23:989結束,節奏上我聽不出需要用1/2嘛
00:30:859 (1) - 黏住了前面的Note,不好看
00:36:356 (3) - 比較理想就不要重疊到00:34:524 (1),Anyway這並不重要
00:52:844 (1) - 明顯沒有對稱,型狀也怪怪的lol 換成筆直的Slider可以了
00:57:424 (2) - 怎麼Clap放在折返點,而不是放在結尾XDD 放音效放到頭昏腦脹了~www
01:26:508 (2) - 弄成弧形比較好看,一般來說不建議做起角的Slider;尾巴放Clap
01:27:424 (3) - 開頭除去Clap

[Normal]

AR-1
00:01:547 (1) - 第一眼我就看不到方向了orz 要不要加Sb做提示
00:39:104 (3,4) - 有點跟00:37:501 (1)重疊,更重要的是Normal不適合做變距
00:42:768 (4,1) - 同樣Normal不適合做變距
01:03:608 (6) - 用whistle取代Clap??

[Moonlight's Hard]

OD-1
01:03:379 (6) - 開頭比結尾適合Clap
Clap聲音很亂,嘗試用這個方法下音效:

[Insane]

OD-1, 這個OD等於2012 Orz
00:05:211 (1) - 前後的部份是連點,這裡突然1個長Slider很奇怪,這種形狀Slider比較適合EZ;建議刪掉
00:12:539 (1) - ^

That all, Good luck :)
jossieP
not sure about artist, even google says that is yanagi nagi
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

ikari_kyon wrote:

not sure about artist, even google says that is yanagi nagi
I have changed the title, don't know how to change it on forum topic...
I will update soon but currently buzy with some school work
Edit: According to the ranked version and such, it is without the space...i would personally go with space but i guess i should follow what everyone else does...
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Yo~您好
mod了9個英文終於有個中文QAQ
什么也没写就是说我使用了提议

[Easy]

HP+1 ??
00:16:890 (1) - 搬到00:16:661比較適合喔,EZ也盡量減少1/2
00:18:722 (3) - 明顯沒對稱:3 善用Ctrl+H將它弄成對稱(必要時在中間放第5點來調整)
00:20:325 (1) - 盡量減少1/2
00:23:531 (1) - 在00:23:989結束,節奏上我聽不出需要用1/2嘛 钢琴
00:30:859 (1) - 黏住了前面的Note,不好看
00:36:356 (3) - 比較理想就不要重疊到00:34:524 (1),Anyway這並不重要
00:52:844 (1) - 明顯沒有對稱,型狀也怪怪的lol 換成筆直的Slider可以了
00:57:424 (2) - 怎麼Clap放在折返點,而不是放在結尾XDD 放音效放到頭昏腦脹了~www 背景鼓点
01:26:508 (2) - 弄成弧形比較好看,一般來說不建議做起角的Slider;尾巴放Clap 还是背景鼓点
01:27:424 (3) - 開頭除去Clap 一样是背景鼓点。。。

[Normal]

AR-1
00:01:547 (1) - 第一眼我就看不到方向了orz 要不要加Sb做提示 slider加大了,可以更好的分辨了
00:39:104 (3,4) - 有點跟00:37:501 (1)重疊,更重要的是Normal不適合做變距 全改shorter了
00:42:768 (4,1) - 同樣Normal不適合做變距 同上
01:03:608 (6) - 用whistle取代Clap?? 背景鼓点

[Moonlight's Hard]
这个给我朋友改吧,他考完试了
OD-1
01:03:379 (6) - 開頭比結尾適合Clap
Clap聲音很亂,嘗試用這個方法下音效:
[attachment=0:73c1b]Clap.png[/attachment:73c1b]

[Insane]

OD-1, 這個OD等於2012 Orz 这个我先hold住,毕竟这个insane比较简单。。。改的话score会悲剧orz
00:05:211 (1) - 前後的部份是連點,這裡突然1個長Slider很奇怪,這種形狀Slider比較適合EZ;建議刪掉 这是我insane里面唯一的骄傲。。。删什么也不能删这个
00:12:539 (1) - ^ 同上,normal里面的star是这个缩小后得来的

That all, Good luck :)
有关clap的问题,因为在那两个问题区域鼓点会落在红线上,而我的clap是跟随鼓点的,所以。。。我觉得还是很好听的
谢谢mod!
Kanari
Ohhaii~ ;D
Ano Natsu de Matteruu ~ <3
I lovee this song >w<


[General]
- Remove " anime " from the tags.
- Combo colors can be better ?


[Moonlight's Hard]
- End kiai time at 01:44:027 like the other diffs.
- Set Audio lead-in at 500 like the other diffs as well.
00:17:133 - Unsnapped timing point.


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
- End kiai time at 01:44:027 like the other diffs.
00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^


Well mapped! ^^
Good luck and star~
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Ohhaii~ ;D
Ano Natsu de Matteruu ~ <3
I lovee this song >w<


[General]
- Remove " anime " from the tags. aite
- Combo colors can be better ? i got the combo colour codes directly from the ed video (character theme colour), so i think its ok


[Moonlight's Hard]
- End kiai time at 01:44:027 like the other diffs. k
- Set Audio lead-in at 500 like the other diffs as well. k
00:17:133 - Unsnapped timing point. didnt see it in AI mod...


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
- End kiai time at 01:44:027 like the other diffs. k, dunno if its ok that i fix it...
00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle. i believe these are all 1/6 notes, so its ok
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^


Well mapped! ^^
Good luck and star~
Very buzy with end term work rite now orz...will update soon
Edit: Fixed some issues. Thank you for mod and star!
Starry_old
Looks like you put quite the amount of work in this.

[General]

Video starts late or its suppose to be like that? o-o

[Easy]

00:48:035 (5) - Add a Whistle. It sounds nice here :)
01:02:921 (5) - ^

[Normal]

00:56:508 (4) - Finish the start.
01:15:974 (3) - Whistle this.

[Moonlight's Hard]

01:04:524 (2) - Curve this a bit more.
01:10:020 (1) - New Combo here.
01:13:455 (2) - Put this below the next slider.
01:17:348 (5) - Uh remove the clap at the end of the slider?


[Insane]

01:06:356 (8) - New Combo. This combo feels long.
01:31:776 (4) - http://puu.sh/vHR4

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I must say, Your sliders are beautiful.

Good Luck On Rank.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Starry wrote:

Looks like you put quite the amount of work in this.

[General]

Video starts late or its suppose to be like that? o-o the mp3 is extended, video starts at 16s yes. (hence its not TV Size)

[Easy]

00:48:035 (5) - Add a Whistle. It sounds nice here :) yep
01:02:921 (5) - ^ yep

[Normal]

00:56:508 (4) - Finish the start. k
01:15:974 (3) - Whistle this. k

[Moonlight's Hard]

01:04:524 (2) - Curve this a bit more. ok
01:10:020 (1) - New Combo here. character theme colour as the background video shows...
01:13:455 (2) - Put this below the next slider. wow plays better!
01:17:348 (5) - Uh remove the clap at the end of the slider? alrite


[Insane]

01:06:356 (8) - New Combo. This combo feels long. character theme colour orz
01:31:776 (4) - http://puu.sh/vHR4 alrite...needed to reposition the squares too

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I must say, Your sliders are beautiful. Thank you!

Good Luck On Rank.
accounting isu RAGEEEE
will update in 2 days orz...
Edit: Fixed whatever necessary. Thank you for mod~~
Shohei Ohtani
Desu?

Overall:
01:44:027 (1) - Add whistle

Insane:
k

Hard:
00:03:379 (4) - Nope.avi. This might be unrankable, actually, since there's no signification that this is a slider speed-up
00:07:043 (4) - ^

Normal:
k

Easy:
k
MMzz
Sorry this took a few days, I was lazy xD.

  • Insane:

    00:25:363 (5,1) - start new combo on 5, remove new combo from 1.
    00:29:027 (5) - new combo and remove new combo on 00:29:485 (1).
    00:36:585 (8) - shorten this down to 1 repeat instead of 2, it fits the music and helps ease into that jump better.
    00:40:249 (6) - ^ same as before
    00:47:348 (6,1) - new combo on 6, remove new combo on 1.
    00:49:180 (4,1) - new combo on 4, remove new combo on 1.
    00:52:157 (1,3) - maybe move these two to where 00:51:470 (6) was, for a similar stack.
    00:52:844 (4) - new combo here.
    01:05:669 (7) - ^
    01:09:333 (6) - ^
    01:27:653 (6) - new combo, and remove new combo from 01:28:340 (1) - .

  • Moonlight's Hard:

    00:18:264 (5) - new combo? You put a new combo here for every spot like this ahead.
    00:35:898 (5) - replace this slider with a few notes instead? Issue one is that you are breaking your next combo by ending the slider on the downbeat, issue two it that this is very boreing. If you add new notes make sure to new combo where the slider would have ended and remove new combo from: 00:36:585 (1)
    00:40:020 (4) - new combo
    00:56:509 (1) - finisher on start?
    01:05:669 (5,6,7,8) - I don't like these, I can hear what you are mapping to but it is very suttle and some players might not catch it. Consider a slider instead? If not, new combo on: 01:05:669 (5).
    01:09:333 (7) - new combo
    01:10:707 (9,10) - How about you make a triplet stack to match the drums in the back? Dele 10 then make the stack under 9, then move it over about 3 grid points for a nice even jump. http://puu.sh/wCnj
    01:33:837 (3) - fix this slider up, it's not perfectly symmetrical, just a little off.
    01:34:982 (1,2,3,4) - I think these jumps might be to far for a Hard diff, make them just a little bit smaller?
    01:44:256 (1) - start this spinner on the white tick before it?(01:44:142) Sounds like it starts there.

    Your combos in the kiai are very off, you should stick to the down beat like you did before! Feel free to message me on IRC and I can help you fix them, I didn't want to make a super long post about new combo here and remove combo there.

  • Normal:

    HP Drain -1!
    01:07:043 (5) - remove this slider and make it two notes instead. Ending the slider on the downbeat is messing up your next combo, and it doesn't sound very great! Make sure to add a new combo on the 2nd note (where the slider would have ended) and remove new combo from 01:07:959 (1) - .
    01:08:188 (2) - Point this slider to the right more? So it doesn't go over the previous note's placment. http://puu.sh/wCxY
    01:23:531 (5) - same issue as before with ending the slider on the downbeat, please fix it.
    01:32:921 (1,2) - remove new combo from 1 and add new combo on 2.
    01:34:753 (3) - remove new combo if you did above.^
    01:36:814 (7) - new combo
    01:37:959 (1) - remove combo
    01:42:310 (5) - add combo.

    I think this normal is a little to hard, consider making your future normals more straight forward and less complex!

  • Easy:

    01:12:997 (1) - end this spinner earlier, will take time for new players to recover from spinning and you arn't leaving them a very good time frame to recover.

  • Nyquill's Taiko Oni:

    Really good Taiko Nyquill! <3
    One thing concerns me, in the begining you are useing a very long stretch pattern with lots of 1/4th beats. You should calm it down a little bit, it's the intro to the song and it's very calm and you should give players time to ease into the more complicated beats if understand what I;m talking about xD. But notewise it's pretty much perfect. <3
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

CDFA wrote:

Desu?

Overall:
01:44:027 (1) - Add whistle k

Insane:
k

Hard:
00:03:379 (4) - Nope.avi. This might be unrankable, actually, since there's no signification that this is a slider speed-up alrite, didnt know that lol
00:07:043 (4) - ^ yep

Normal:
k

Easy:
k
SPOILER

MMzz wrote:

Sorry this took a few days, I was lazy xD.

  • Insane:

    00:25:363 (5,1) - start new combo on 5, remove new combo from 1. k
    00:29:027 (5) - new combo and remove new combo on 00:29:485 (1). k
    00:36:585 (8) - shorten this down to 1 repeat instead of 2, it fits the music and helps ease into that jump better. yes cutting score down
    00:40:249 (6) - ^ same as before yeah
    00:47:348 (6,1) - new combo on 6, remove new combo on 1. k
    00:49:180 (4,1) - new combo on 4, remove new combo on 1. k
    00:52:157 (1,3) - maybe move these two to where 00:51:470 (6) was, for a similar stack. aw gosh made so many changes to this section so the stack make sense orz
    00:52:844 (4) - new combo here. k
    01:05:669 (7) - ^ for char theme colour consistency (im matching combo with background colour), no new combos
    01:09:333 (6) - ^ same as above
    01:27:653 (6) - new combo, and remove new combo from 01:28:340 (1) - . aite

  • Moonlight's Hard:

    i just did everything mentioned unless otherwise specified...not really my diff but im now responsible for it
    00:18:264 (5) - new combo? You put a new combo here for every spot like this ahead.
    00:35:898 (5) - replace this slider with a few notes instead? Issue one is that you are breaking your next combo by ending the slider on the downbeat, issue two it that this is very boreing. If you add new notes make sure to new combo where the slider would have ended and remove new combo from: 00:36:585 (1) aww dont want to change this...i think its ok
    00:40:020 (4) - new combo
    00:56:509 (1) - finisher on start?
    01:05:669 (5,6,7,8) - I don't like these, I can hear what you are mapping to but it is very suttle and some players might not catch it. Consider a slider instead? If not, new combo on: 01:05:669 (5).
    01:09:333 (7) - new combo
    01:10:707 (9,10) - How about you make a triplet stack to match the drums in the back? Dele 10 then make the stack under 9, then move it over about 3 grid points for a nice even jump. http://puu.sh/wCnj
    01:33:837 (3) - fix this slider up, it's not perfectly symmetrical, just a little off.
    01:34:982 (1,2,3,4) - I think these jumps might be to far for a Hard diff, make them just a little bit smaller?
    01:44:256 (1) - start this spinner on the white tick before it?(01:44:142) Sounds like it starts there. i unified this with all other diffs

    Your combos in the kiai are very off, you should stick to the down beat like you did before! Feel free to message me on IRC and I can help you fix them, I didn't want to make a super long post about new combo here and remove combo there.

  • Normal:

    again did everything metioned
    HP Drain -1!
    01:07:043 (5) - remove this slider and make it two notes instead. Ending the slider on the downbeat is messing up your next combo, and it doesn't sound very great! Make sure to add a new combo on the 2nd note (where the slider would have ended) and remove new combo from 01:07:959 (1) - .
    01:08:188 (2) - Point this slider to the right more? So it doesn't go over the previous note's placment. http://puu.sh/wCxY
    01:23:531 (5) - same issue as before with ending the slider on the downbeat, please fix it.
    01:32:921 (1,2) - remove new combo from 1 and add new combo on 2.
    01:34:753 (3) - remove new combo if you did above.^
    01:36:814 (7) - new combo
    01:37:959 (1) - remove combo
    01:42:310 (5) - add combo.

    I think this normal is a little to hard, consider making your future normals more straight forward and less complex! http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41140&m=0 this is the first normal i played on osu!, and ever since then normal traumatizes me orz

  • Easy:

    01:12:997 (1) - end this spinner earlier, will take time for new players to recover from spinning and you arn't leaving them a very good time frame to recover. moved it to the red tick, but kinda sound awkward...

  • Nyquill's Taiko Oni:

    Really good Taiko Nyquill! <3
    One thing concerns me, in the begining you are useing a very long stretch pattern with lots of 1/4th beats. You should calm it down a little bit, it's the intro to the song and it's very calm and you should give players time to ease into the more complicated beats if understand what I;m talking about xD. But notewise it's pretty much perfect. <3
I will update tmmrw.
Updated. Thanks to both for mod!
and CDFA for star...ahh just need one more
Cygnus
  • Easy
  1. 00:18:722 (3) - This blanket could still be improved. Fix it.

  2. 00:49:867 (2) - This one too.

  3. Bump your Overall Difficulty +1.

  • Normal
  1. 00:08:875 (1) - Move 6th point three grids left.

  2. Bump HP Drain +1.

  • Hard
  1. 00:35:898 (5,1) - Would be better if you try to avoid this overlap.

  2. Reduce OD by 1 then bump HP +1.

  • Insane
  1. 00:27:653 (2,4) - I suggest you switch the position of these notes.

  2. 01:44:027 (1) - Make this spinner end on 01:47:806.

  3. Reduce Overall Difficulty -1.
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[Easy]
00:17:119 (2) - spam whistle is not good :<
00:20:783 (2) - ^
00:22:386 (3) - a bit strange when click it
01:12:997 (1) - such a short spinner for easy?


[Normal]
Nice

[Moonlight's Hard]
Nice

[Insane]
00:03:150 (1) - delete newcombo
00:04:180 (5) - newcombo
00:30:401 (5,6,7,8,1) - should be such as this
00:55:134 (2) - move away from 00:53:989 (4)?
01:05:669 (7) - newcombo
01:17:348 (5) - ctrl+r
01:44:027 (1) - why whistle?0.0
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Great Mapset
;) and yanaginagi ww
Good Luck
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Philippines wrote:

  • Easy
  1. 00:18:722 (3) - This blanket could still be improved. Fix it. aite

  2. 00:49:867 (2) - This one too. k

  3. Bump your Overall Difficulty +1. ok


  • Normal
  1. 00:08:875 (1) - Move 6th point three grids left. moved 2

  2. Bump HP Drain +1. k

  • Hard
  1. 00:35:898 (5,1) - Would be better if you try to avoid this overlap. repositioned the sliders,its fine now

  2. Reduce OD by 1 then bump HP +1. kk

  • Insane
  1. 00:27:653 (2,4) - I suggest you switch the position of these notes. yayy star formation

  2. 01:44:027 (1) - Make this spinner end on 01:47:806. its the same as all the other diffs, its where the audio tunes down

  3. Reduce Overall Difficulty -1. nah i think its fine as it is, its a pretty easy insane already
SPOILER

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[Easy]
00:17:119 (2) - spam whistle is not good :< took one off
00:20:783 (2) - ^ took one off
00:22:386 (3) - a bit strange when click it ?? i think its fine
01:12:997 (1) - such a short spinner for easy? changed to slider


[Normal]
Nice

[Moonlight's Hard]
Nice

[Insane]
00:03:150 (1) - delete newcombo k
00:04:180 (5) - newcombo k
00:30:401 (5,6,7,8,1) - should be such as this got it, doesnt look exactly the same but something like it
00:55:134 (2) - move away from 00:53:989 (4)? the notes are pretty far timed...i think its fine
01:05:669 (7) - newcombo character theme colour, dont want to change it
01:17:348 (5) - ctrl+r dont see the point of reversing it...
01:44:027 (1) - why whistle?0.0 ...aite changed back to non-whistle, so did for all other diffs
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Great Mapset
;) and yanaginagi ww
Good Luck
Thanks for mods~~
Genkishi
  • Hello~!

    Here's my mod

    [General]
  1. I suggest you remove the kiai in this part 01:25:821 and put a new kiai here 01:29:485

    [Easy]
  2. 01:02:005 (4) - move this slider by 1 grid down
  3. 00:29:485 (2,3,4,1) - try making this pattern? and change the shape of the slider as shown on the pic http://puu.sh/xE3I
  4. 00:47:348 (4) - add whistle on the head of this slider
  5. 00:49:180 (1) - ^
  6. 00:54:676 (4) - ^
  7. AP -1?

    [Normal]
  8. 00:08:875 (1) - Rotate this slider by -5? and after that, fix the spacing
  9. 00:18:722 (7) - make the slider shape like at 00:19:867 (1)

    [Moonlight's Hard]
  10. 01:08:188 (1) - New combo here?

    [Insane]
  11. Seems fine
That's all :D
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

Genkishi wrote:

  • Hello~!

    Here's my mod

    [General]
  1. I suggest you remove the kiai in this part 01:25:821 and put a new kiai here 01:29:485 aite

    [Easy]
  2. 01:02:005 (4) - move this slider by 1 grid down kk
  3. 00:29:485 (2,3,4,1) - try making this pattern? and change the shape of the slider as shown on the pic http://puu.sh/xE3I got it
  4. 00:47:348 (4) - add whistle on the head of this slider did it
  5. 00:49:180 (1) - ^ added finish i think
  6. 00:54:676 (4) - ^ k
  7. AP -1? alrite

    [Normal]
  8. 00:08:875 (1) - Rotate this slider by -5? and after that, fix the spacing did +14 so the slider seems to get blanket by the other slider
  9. 00:18:722 (7) - make the slider shape like at 00:19:867 (1) k symmetry

    [Moonlight's Hard]
  10. 01:08:188 (1) - New combo here? theme colour consistancy, wont change this

    [Insane]
  11. Seems fine
That's all :D
Updated. Thanks for mod~~
Mythol
Request from Mito~

[Easy]
01:02:692 (5) - Shorten this slider to 01:03:379. This rhythm is too hard for an easy and also this plays a lot better.

[Normal]
01:11:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Spacing is too big, going from x1.2 to x2.0 is a huge change in a normal. Make it smaller~
01:28:569 (7,8) - Switch to a 1/2 slider? I don't think note spams are very fun to play..
01:32:921 (9) - Shouldn't NC be here instead?
01:32:692 (8) - NC here instead to stay consistent with the previous NC

[Hard]
00:16:204 (1) - This slider velocity decrease doesn't fit at all, remove?
00:37:043 (2) - Use x1.5 spacing, I don't see a reason to change to x1.6 for just this slider. Also maybe Ctrl+R for better flow
01:10:707 (9) - Clap here, and change to whistle on 01:10:936 (11)?
01:13:455 (2) - This jump is too big, I know you want to avoid overlapping, but I think this looks great too. 01:14:600 - Add note here
01:40:478 (1,1,1) - No need to NC here o.o

[Insane]
OD 7 PLEASE
00:59:714 (7,8,9,10,1) - Reduce spacing? D:
01:40:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Looks really nice, but doesn't play very well.. I think you should change, but its up to you~

Good map :D
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Mythol wrote:

Request from Mito~

[Easy]
01:02:692 (5) - Shorten this slider to 01:03:379. This rhythm is too hard for an easy and also this plays a lot better. k

[Normal]
01:11:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Spacing is too big, going from x1.2 to x2.0 is a huge change in a normal. Make it smaller~ 0.8x smaller
01:28:569 (7,8) - Switch to a 1/2 slider? I don't think note spams are very fun to play.. got it
01:32:921 (9) - Shouldn't NC be here instead? ?
01:32:692 (8) - NC here instead to stay consistent with the previous NC yeah this one got it

[Hard]
00:16:204 (1) - This slider velocity decrease doesn't fit at all, remove? k
00:37:043 (2) - Use x1.5 spacing, I don't see a reason to change to x1.6 for just this slider. Also maybe Ctrl+R for better flow aite
01:10:707 (9) - Clap here, and change to whistle on 01:10:936 (11)? drum sound in the bg suggest clap at 11
01:13:455 (2) - This jump is too big, I know you want to avoid overlapping, but I think this looks great too. redesigned this place for shorter jump01:14:600 - Add note here k
01:40:478 (1,1,1) - No need to NC here o.o changed, though i think that makes it look fancier...

[Insane]
OD 7 PLEASE since many people suggested OD 7, i guess i will have to change...
00:59:714 (7,8,9,10,1) - Reduce spacing? D: reduced spacing on all major mini streams
01:40:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Looks really nice, but doesn't play very well.. I think you should change, but its up to you~ yeah i know it looks good but doesnt play well, even when i play it myself i screw up. but i reduced it to scale at 0.9x and with an OD of 7, it should be better

Good map :D
Thank you for the mod~~
Niko-nyan
here we go from my queue!

Easy
01:25:821 add kiai in here

Normal
same with easy

Moonlight's hard
same with easy
CS+1

Taiko mode by Nyquill same with easy
insane too + CS+1
ririco
the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

frans_niko wrote:

here we go from my queue!

Easy
01:25:821 add kiai in here aite

Normal
same with easy ^

Moonlight's hard
same with easy ^
CS+1 i prefer bigger circle

Taiko mode by Nyquill same with easy kk
insane too + CS+1 kiai time followed, circle size same as hard
thank you for mod~

-Sekai- wrote:

the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<
well the audio is 1:44...i just pulled the ed video from the anime so yeah...
i will ask around to see what others think.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[Easy]

整体很好,尤其拉的slider很用心,很美观的

00:58:798 (1) - 这个结尾处用一个soft的finish吧

关于NC的建议

00:40:936 (4) - 加个NC
00:41:852 (1) - 去掉NC
00:43:684 (3) - 加个NC

[Normal]

00:58:798 (2) - soft finish?

[Moonlight's Hard]

00:10:936 - add a NC here
00:14:600 - ^
00:45:287 - add a circle? stack with next (1)
00:17:133 - useless green timing
01:25:249 - ^
01:25:821 - ^
01:29:485 - ^

[Insane]

00:51:012 (4) - 左移一格 下移一格
00:51:699 (7) - ^
01:13:913 - 多余的绿线

很好的insane~

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^

Good luck!
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
SPOILER

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[Easy]

整体很好,尤其拉的slider很用心,很美观的

00:58:798 (1) - 这个结尾处用一个soft的finish吧 用了normal finish

关于NC的建议

00:40:936 (4) - 加个NC ok
00:41:852 (1) - 去掉NC ^
00:43:684 (3) - 加个NC ^

[Normal]

00:58:798 (2) - soft finish? normal finish

[Moonlight's Hard]

00:10:936 - add a NC here
00:14:600 - ^ ^
00:45:287 - add a circle? stack with next (1) ok
00:17:133 - useless green timing 删了
01:25:249 - ^ 这个和下面的重新排了一下
01:25:821 - ^
01:29:485 - ^

[Insane]

00:51:012 (4) - 左移一格 下移一格 下移了一格
00:51:699 (7) - ^ ^
01:13:913 - 多余的绿线 修复了volume transition

很好的insane~

[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]

00:29:330 (2) - Unsnapped circle 我相信这些是1/6拍
00:29:406 (3) - ^
00:30:017 (2) - ^
00:30:093 (3) - ^
00:30:246 (5) - ^
00:30:322 (6) - ^

Good luck!
谢谢mod~~
Leorda
Hello there

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider?


[Normal]
* AR +1?

01:24:447 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at head and tail slider), it's annoying
01:24:905 (3) - ^
01:25:363 (4) - ^
01:26:508 (2) - Add clap at tail slider
01:28:569 (7) - Add clap at head slider


[Insane]
* AR -1?

01:07:157 (11) - New combo for 0,5x slider
01:13:913 (9) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players can click the next notes with perfect timed
01:34:524 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
* This diff has 6 unsnapped notes. You better snap it


Once you done, forum PM me
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[Easy]
00:57:424 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider? alrite, though im not sure if two repeats is suitable for easy


[Normal]
* AR +1? kk

01:24:447 (2) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at head and tail slider), it's annoying didnt even catch that lol, fixed
01:24:905 (3) - ^ ^
01:25:363 (4) - ^ ^
01:26:508 (2) - Add clap at tail slider done
01:28:569 (7) - Add clap at head slider done


[Insane]
* AR -1? I think ar8 is good for this map

01:07:157 (11) - New combo for 0,5x slider hmm i dont have a 0.5x slider here...and the combo is trying to match with video color so im keeping this unchanged
01:13:913 (9) - Remove 1 repeating slider so players can click the next notes with perfect timed fixed (yeah i never got a 300 here while testing)
01:34:524 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar moved down a bit


[Nyquill's Taiko Oni]
* This diff has 6 unsnapped notes. You better snap it wow now i understand why so many people pointed out this issue...its not snapped on the 1/6 ticks orz...k fixed


Once you done, forum PM me
thanks for mod~~ will pm u now ^_^
Yume_old_old
:oops:

-Sekai- wrote:

the right title is:

Artist: yanaginagi

Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

it's not Short Ver. >.<
plz do what Sekai Said > < Short Ver is not allowed now, because of new rule~
Moonlight

ztrot wrote:

To all MAT and BAT start popping bubbles that use any variant of Short Full Cut Ver unless it is in the title of the song. Amended

There is no need to use any of these types unless they are part of the real song's title
you know what:
http://www.geneonuniversal.jp/rondorobe ... 00000.html
http://www.discas.net/netdvd/cd/goodsDe ... 1673855739

it explicit stated short Ver. if you have a music player that recognize the mp3 id3 tags, you will see the original title(not the file title).


if you need the download to verify, pm me ;) .
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi from my queue
this is going to be short and sweet because i didn't find much wrong with the map

Moonlight's Hard
HP+1
OD+1

Insane
CS+1
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