1. Bronze (3.99 stars, 134 notes)
2. Emdyion's Silver (4.93 stars, 278 notes)
3. Gold (4.99 stars, 440 notes)
4. Platinum (5 stars, 678 notes)
5. Rust (1.46 stars, 77 notes)
6. Silver (4.86 stars, 258 notes)

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Needs a Namco influenced taiko.

1. beginner?
2. 00:10:312 (2) - 1/2 beat longer
3. 00:19:646 (2) - move to (72,272)
4. 00:34:908 - 20 seconds on break is too long... add some long sliders?
5. 01:07:979 (4,5,6) - clap only on 5?
6. 01:08:979 (1) - clap on end
7. 01:11:646 (1) - ^
8. 01:14:312 (1,2) - ^
9. 01:16:979 (1,3) - add finish on end
10. 01:32:979 (1,2) - add finish on end

1. 00:13:312 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down...
2. 00:25:646 (4) - last point 1 grid left...
3. 00:27:646 (2) - move to (272,240)
4. 00:28:979 (1) - I think it should end on white line (creates hitsound, then 1/4, the next spinner
5. 00:56:979 (1) - (408,112)

1. nice streams...
2. 01:04:646 (13,14,15) - curve
3. 01:21:479 (7,8) - this jump is too far? it's just 1/4......
4. 01:37:312 (1) - new combo
5. 01:38:312 (12) - add note, new combo
6. 01:38:646 (1) - remove new combo
7. 01:39:312 (1) - new combo
8. 01:40:312 (1) - ^

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs~
✔
✘
[Starter]

1. ✘ beginner? Yes it is, but i'm not changing. lol
2. ✔ 00:10:312 (2) - 1/2 beat longer
3. ✔ 00:19:646 (2) - move to (72,272)
4. ✘ 00:34:908 - 20 seconds on break is too long... add some long sliders?
5. ✘ 01:07:979 (4,5,6) - clap only on 5?
6. ✔ 01:08:979 (1) - clap on end
7. ✔ 01:11:646 (1) - ^
8. ✔ 01:14:312 (1,2) - ^
9. ✔ 01:16:979 (1,3) - add finish on end
10. ✔ 01:32:979 (1,2) - add finish on end

[Medium]

1. ✔ 00:13:312 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down...
2. ✔ 00:25:646 (4) - last point 1 grid left...
3. ✔ 00:27:646 (2) - move to (272,240)
4. ✔ 00:28:979 (1) - I think it should end on white line (creates hitsound, then 1/4, the next spinner
5. ✔ 00:56:979 (1) - (408,112)

[Victory]

1. ✔ nice streams... <3
2. ✔ 01:04:646 (13,14,15) - curve lol, i changed the whole combo.
3. ✘ 01:21:479 (7,8) - this jump is too far? it's just 1/4. the end note before the jump was a slider so i think it's fine
4. ✘ 01:37:312 (1) - new combo
5. ✔ 01:38:312 (12) - add note, new combo changed note (23) to slider inside
6. ✘ 01:38:646 (1) - remove new combo
7. ✘ 01:39:312 (1) - new combo
8. ✘ 01:40:312 (1) - ^

Good luck~

SakiK wrote:

hi~ from modque
✔
✘
[General]

looks fine.

[Starter]

✔ deleat a tag 'O2Jam'
✔ 00:21:646 (5) - DS
✔ 01:11:646 (1) - DS
✔ 01:12:979 (2,3,4,5) - ^
✔ 01:13:979 (5) - 1 grid down
✔ 01:17:979 (2) - DS
✔ 01:51:646 (3) - NC and 01:52:979 (1) - Rm NC

[Medium]

✔ 00:24:979 (3) - DS
✔ 00:25:646 (4) - move to 00:25:979 - end of slider
✔ 00:26:312 (1) - DS
✔ 00:27:646 (2) - 1 grid left
✘ 00:57:646 (2) - DS
✔ 01:02:979 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left
✔ 01:05:646 (4) - 1 grid left and01:05:979 (5) - is 1grid up
✘ 01:53:646 (4) - DS

[Victory]

very hard o/
NC suggestion
✔ 00:16:312 (5) - NC
✘ 00:18:979 (7) - ^
✘ 00:21:646 (7) - ^
✘ 00:25:646 (7) - ^
✘ 01:09:646 (9) - ^
✘ 01:12:311 (9) - ^
✘ 01:10:979 (7) - ^
✘ 01:13:645 (7) - ^
✘ 01:14:978 (9) - ^
✘ 01:21:646 (8) - NC and this Jump is too hard to almost player
✘ 01:36:979 (9) - NC
✔ 01:37:646 (17) - NC
✔ 01:39:979 (5) - ^
✘ 01:54:979 (9) - ^
✘ 01:55:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this spacing is too hard to almost player too

that's all. fight~ thanks <3

Midasmens wrote:

This is my first time to mod
✔
✘
General
✔ The map doesn't have a preview point. Go to timming setting and select a preview point.

Starter

✔ Fine

Medium

✘ 00:24:646(2) move to x:432 y:72 (if you don't like it.Do what you want.)

Victory
✔ It is a great diff and hard to play for me.

✘ First 01:13:394 ? snapped the note.
✘ 00:18:646 add a new color this ain't a TAG4 lol
✘ 00:18:979 ^ ^
✘ 00:19:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:21:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:21:646 ^ ^
✘ 00:22:062 ^ ^
✘ 00:24:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:25:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:25:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:08:312 ^ ^
✘ 01:08:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:10:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:10:979 ^ ^
✘ 01:11:312 ^ ^
✘ 01:13:312 ^ ^
✘ 01:13:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:13:979 ^ ^
✘ 01:21:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:29:562(5,6,7,8) it doesn't fit the music~ add a new note here and move (5,6,7,8) to 01:29:646
✘ 01:30:896(5,6,7,8) ^ do the same thing~ make sure to fit music
✘ 01:32:229(5,6,7,8)^
✔ 01:35:312(10) make reverse to 01:35:562
✘ 01:36:979(9) new color
✘ 01:37:646(9) ^
✘ 01:54:979(9) ^
✔ 01:55:062(10,11,12,13,14,15,16) it is strange~ the distance is 0.5X?

That is it~~ Crazy music! I like it!
Good Luck~

Combo3 : 255,128,192

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1. offest is a bit late. -4ms to adjust it
2. Diff spread is obviously "im-balanced". To meet all players' need, there should be a diff between 【M】 and 【V】

LKs wrote:

1. offest is a bit late. -4ms to adjust it

1. fix the artist, title, source, and tags. should be like this.
2. why 2 timing lines at the start? remove one. and offset should be 979

1. 01:13:394 (5) - Object isn't snapped.

Emdyion wrote:

Finished. You might want to replace a difficulty (I suggest Gold/Platinum, but your choice if you want to replace anything)

1. Is neccesary put two times "fantasy" in Tags?,remove one a Full submit

Philippines wrote:

[*]Emydion's Silver (4.93 stars, 278 notes)

Emdyion wrote:

Spellcheck please

Rename to Emdyion's Silver please.

KingsAL2 wrote:

==Emdyion's Silver==
-- Combo Problem --
00:09:146 (5) - NC (Jumped) Done
00:16:979 (5) - ^ (Started another spacing) Done
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
01:32:644 (8-3rd) - A bit noise for this wistle and strange. Lower the timing section to 80% or lower is better. Done
-- Other(S) --
01:11:144 (7) - Change it to 01:11:311 maybe better. Coz I think there is a bit strange. Don't really know about this one. I'll think about it
01:56:979 (X) - After... Not as the finished point as other. I think that isnt acceptable. Rust, Bronze and Silver finish at the same time as this. I don't see why this isn't acceptable.

Haruhi_sama wrote:

aha.I‘m not very good at modding.So you can skip it:D
[Easy]
00:24:979 (2) - maybe add finish?k
00:28:979 (1) - ^k
00:30:310 (1) - ^k
EDIT:A lot of notes unsnapped..
[attachment=0:9462f]snapped.jpg[/attachment:9462f]
00:54:312 (1) - delete green lines. you can't use green lines to change slider volume really? no

01:56:977 - why you use 90 bpm? use 0.5x is better. eh
[normal]
00:54:310 (1) - delete green lines. you can't use green lines to change slider volume! really? no
nothing to say
It's too far to bubble it :3

• Timing inconsistencies. Use the timing from Emdyion's difficulty for the whole mapset, because it's using the correct timing signature for each section. Then also resnap all notes, fix preview time and fix any possible unsnapped inherited section you notice for each difficulty (as they will probably get unsnapped thus messing up hitsounding, KIAI time or other stuff).
  Add "Emdyion" to tags
  I would +15% the volume of every timing section for each difficulty (except for Emdyion's), it's kinda low right now imho.

• The Scale and Move values you used for "bg_fade" are not good enough and because of that the "fade" effect is not alligned correctly. Considering that you're also using a non-conventional BG size, Let's just do a one-fix for everything altogether:
  
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  Download: SB_fix.zip
  
  This package includes resized BGs (to 1024*768 keeping the correct aspect ratio) and various script fixes, including the correction for the Scale value and the removal of a faulty Rotation value.
  Remember to Full Submit!
  The rest looks nice and seems to work correctly so I won't try messing up with it.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   01:35:646 (1,1,2,3) - i somehow find this weird, but i can't think of anything better that's also easy enough, so I'm just telling you to make you aware of it.
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:17:977 - add a beat here
   00:23:310 - add a beat here
   00:58:979 (1) - remove new combo; 01:00:644 - add beat; 01:00:979 (2) - New Combo
   01:05:977 - add a beat here
   01:43:310 - add a beat here
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:00:644 - add a beat here
   01:39:644 (4) - new combo; 01:39:977 (1) - remove new combo; 01:40:977 (4) - new combo; 01:41:310 (1) - remove new combo
   01:46:310 (1) - make this end at 01:48:310; 01:48:977 - add a beat with new combo; 01:49:644 (1) - remove new combo
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   An unsnapped beat. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
   01:43:644 (1) - this has to end at 01:45:644.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Maybe the difficulty gap from Bronze is a bit high. Not that bad anyway.
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:33:477 (4) - remove this?
   01:17:477 (4) - 01:18:144 (4) - 01:18:810 (4) - 01:19:477 (4) - remove all of these
   01:20:977 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - move them a tiny bit more to the left
   01:27:644 (1,2) - kinda big and unexpected jump at this point, maybe just make it a bit more lenient
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   An unsnapped beat. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
   01:46:477 (1) - it's fairly logic to miss 01:48:310 (1) as it is now, so this spinner has to end at 01:48:310 following the same pattern as the other one; 01:48:310 (1) - remove one repetition and Reverse Selection.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   01:54:478 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - weird sound pattern. It doesn't really sound bad, but is it intentional?
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:43:312 (4) - remove two repetitions; 01:43:978 (1) - make this start at 01:43:644.
   01:46:311 (1,1) - I'd say to do the same thing as Silver, but this is a harder difficulty and also the higher AR helps a bit more, so it's up to you to decide here.
   02:07:644 (3) - i'd remove the repetition and add a beat at 02:10:312
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
   Overall Difficulty +1

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   01:07:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - wow. Kudos for having the idea of having them play like triplets and thus more playable and enjoyable. Same goes for the other similiar patterns
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:30:144 - 01:31:477 - 01:32:810 - all these balnk spaces feel weird actually
   01:35:310 (10) - remove a repetition.
   01:41:310 (5) - DDDDDDDD: move farther
   01:46:310 (1,1,2,3,4) - same as Gold
   02:07:644 (1) - same as Gold
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
   Overall Difficulty +2. +1 at the very least.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   I would +10% the volume of KIAI sections.
   I like this map
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
   Missing epilepsy warning.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Emdyion's Silver:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   I would +10% the volume of KIAI sections. Added.
   I like this map Thanks! XD
2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing Fixed.
   Missing epilepsy warning.Fixed.

Philippines wrote:

Emdyion, ill just add a note by myself on kevincelo's modding. if its okay with you

NVM, i doubt you want add a note. I think it's better.

1. there're something wrong with the file name of 'Emdyion's Silver', it is DM Ashura - Fantasie Impromptu %28Philippines%29 %5BEmdyion%27s Silver%5D.osu now, looks strange, try to fix please
2. Preview time is different in Emdyion's Silver.
3. SliderMultiplier is strange in Bronze and Rust, please fix them via osu file directly.

1. i suppose there's overuse of clap, finish, and normal-whistle. imo, claps' position should be consitent, for example, 2/4 clap or 4-clap, and finishes just only put on downbeats or emphatic beats. Really a good stream but the hit sound is mess...please try to make it better and this map will be great
2. 00:26:977 (3,4) - change to a five-notes stream?
3. 00:54:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i suppose an anti-stream here is better~~up to u~
4. 00:56:979 (1) - change to notes like prev stream?
5. 00:58:312 (1,2,3) - add two repeats and remove (2,3)?or reduce 2 repeats and add 2 notes?
6. 01:07:979 (4) - to these jumps, because of the different between slider and note, highly recommend to put slider before notes~
7. 01:31:479 - i suppose u miss a note here~
8. 01:32:812 - ^
9. 01:55:645 (1) - omg, u must be mad! but it's really coooooooooooooool~
10. 01:56:979 - and then, i suppose i'd like end my map here, the rest part is excrescent and boring.

1. same issues on hitsounds
2. 01:10:478 (2) - remove it?
3. 01:56:979 - same suggestion as Plantium diff.

1. 00:08:477 (4) - add a repeat?
2. 00:09:810 (4) - ^
3. 00:13:811 (4) - ^
4. 01:11:311 - add a note here? or move (8) to here?
5. 01:15:978 - add a note here?

Samah wrote:

[Emdyion's Silver]
00:10:977 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Fixed.
00:58:645 (2) - Maybe move this up one to centre it between 1 and 3? Fixed.

Scorpiour wrote:

Emdyion's Silver:

1. 00:08:477 (4) - add a repeat? No; following the music
2. 00:09:810 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:13:811 (4) - ^ ^
4. 01:11:311 - add a note here? or move (8) to here? Done. Thinking about changing back though..
5. 01:15:978 - add a note here? Don't think so.

A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels").

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nold_1702 wrote:

So quicky o_o~BTW,Grats.(:33

1. Timing: Your timing is off. Also it's completely off at one spot.
   You need 1 more red line than you have atm, here is the timing:
   
   BPM 180, OFFSET 2308, 4/4 time signature
   BPM 180, OFFSET 34307, 3/4 time signature
   BPM 180, OFFSET 54330, 4/4 time signature
   BPM 180,OFFSET 55650, 4/4 time signature
   BPM 90, OFFSET 116983, 4/4 time signature
   
   The underlined one is the one you're missing.
   Don't forget to adjust timings in your storyboard as well.
   
2. Tags: You have incorrectly spelled "emdyion" in your tags.

1. 00:02:302 (2) - I would suggest a new combo for this, because the first note is not the downbeat and it's a "pre-note", while this note actually "starts" the song, or so you could say. This would bring consistency throughout this section as well, because your combos are 1-13, and this one is the only one which is 1-14.
2. 00:24:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You could bring some dynamics here, each triplet could be louder than the previous one, cause the music is more intense. Also it bugs me that 00:25:636 (7) doesn't have a finish on it, because it's the "heaviest" note of all of them imo. Adding it could be overusing your finish cause you have it just after it, so see if you want to change this somehow (you did something similar in your Silver diff).
3. 00:32:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Similarly to the above, you could bring some dynamics here. 456 could be louder than the 123, and 789 could be louder than 456, to bring out the music better.
4. 00:54:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These notes should be snapped to 1/3, not 1/4. Also this is that spot where the timing is off, so apply your timing change first, then snap these to 1/3 manually, else your streams will break.
5. 01:21:469 (7,8) - You should totally tone down this spacing. Best way to do it would be to make a better curve in the previous stream so the stream where the 7 is located in is a bit higher (and 8 a bit lower, since the section is kinda symmetrical). 8.46x jump on 1/4 180bpm is not something I am comfortable with approving (ranking).
6. 01:51:635 (1) - Add a finish here perhaps? (same goes for 01:52:969 (5), they are in the music and it would follow the music a bit better)
7. 01:51:802 (2,4,6,8) - I would actually suggest that you either ctrl+r all of them (cause as they are they play extremely uncomfortable for me, cause it breaks the flow of movement), or atleast ctrl+r 4 and 8, to make the jumps a bit easier. Even when reversed, they are still very challenging but they are just better to play.
   One more thing about those, they aren't really lined up properly, you could say the incrementing spacing was a bit random, you could try lining them up better, something like this.
8. 02:07:635 (1) - Remove the repeat? It ends pretty much nowhere, while as a normal slider it would end where the last note starts.

1. 00:02:302 (2) - Just like I suggested for the highest diff, you should probably add a new combo here.
2. 00:55:635 (1) - The 2 finishes here bother me, remove the 2nd one.
3. 01:54:302 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Whistles on these sliders seemed pretty random. Try removing all of those, and add them to 01:54:469, 01:54:802, 01:55:135, 01:55:469 and see how that works out. I think this sounds better because it brings out more important parts of the music.
4. 02:04:969 (1) - Remove this new combo for this section to be consistent with the highest diff.
5. 02:07:635 (3) - Add a new combo here instead. Also, consider removing the repeat, same reason like I wrote in Platinum diff.

1. 00:28:969 (5) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:29:636 (1).

1. 00:02:303 (2) - Consider adding a new combo here, same reason as the other diffs.
2. 01:32:972 (3) - New combo here and remove it from 01:33:638 (1), makes more sense as it follows the music better. If you think the combo will be long, just add a new combo to 01:34:305 (3) then, cause it makes the pattern prettier as well.

1. 00:08:969 (3) - Well, I think you were aiming for symmetry maybe, but this clearly isn't symmetrical.
2. 00:23:636 (1) - Sounds like you're missing a finish at the start.
3. 01:50:969 (4) - I would suggest to remove this whistle cause it sounds off, as you didn't use it before this in this section.

1. -

lolcubes wrote:

01:21:469 (7,8) - You should totally tone down this spacing. Best way to do it would be to make a better curve in the previous stream so the stream where the 7 is located in is a bit higher (and 8 a bit lower, since the section is kinda symmetrical). 8.46x jump on 1/4 180bpm is not something I am comfortable with approving (ranking).

lolcubes wrote:

Players hitting that or not, 8.5x spacing on 1/4 @180 bpm is too much. Excuse such as "that player can play it" is not a valid excuse for something that doesn't make much sense in a map.
Keep in mind that this map goes for ranking and it's not a gimmick superhard map for approval. I could hit that note myself after a couple of retries, but that still doesn't change the fact that it's just too big of a spacing. Since I can't rank this because of the timing change, I could rebubble without that change though, but you should really tone it down.

However the timing is still off. While the first offset is debatable cause it's a <10ms change, the offset 00:55:635 is just way too early. You can even hear it's too early. I strongly suggest to apply my timings, or if you are keen on keeping your first offset, just apply all other timings I provided with -5 on all of them.

edit: spelling.

Philippines wrote:

Okay, reduced the jump part. Any more?

lolcubes wrote:

However the timing is still off. While the first offset is debatable cause it's a <10ms change, the offset 00:55:635 is just way too early. You can even hear it's too early. I strongly suggest to apply my timings, or if you are keen on keeping your first offset, just apply all other timings I provided with -5 on all of them.

Kite wrote:

BPM 180,OFFSET 55650, 4/4 time signature
You should totally apply this offset from lolcubes timing, current one at that section is too early.
+15 is a bit too much imo though so I would suggest offset 55645. Rest seems pretty good to me.
(silly 1/4 jumps in Platinum diff, but that's just me)

Philippines wrote:

ill just wait for CNF's response about this by tomorrow. Since I'm still afraid touching the timing section. I might just give some mess.. again.

EDIT: You want me to decrease -5 on all offsets & diffs?

lolcubes wrote:

[Emdyion's Silver]

1. 00:28:969 (5) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:29:636 (1). Agree

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Emdyion's Silver]
not a fan of those offbeat sliders..
01:55:644 (1) - why lower the volume... a 60% Normal-hitfinish would fit it fine. Also the green line here is useless. That was set by Philippines, not me. I also agree on this.

nold_1702 wrote:

[Emdyion's Silver]

00:59:311 (5) - Add whistle at the end :33? Sure

01:36:311 (1) - Del NC :33 Don't really know about this one, I think the NC is fine

Philippines wrote:

Anything you want me to change? Emdyion?

1. Storyboard: A few seconds above 5.0x load won't hurt, but if it can be avoided it's best to do so. The thing is, your storyboard goes up to 6.2x in play (test) mode, and this CAN be avoided if you set the ending fade for your lights at 55496. This is 1/4 earlier than it ends right now, because on the next tick, the SBLoad goes crazy. Since it's only a fraction of a second, I won't hold it against you, but you should definitely change this if you can, seeing how you made the storyboard, you have the knowledge on how to do this.

1. 00:18:307 - In this section, when I suggested to add dynamics, I didn't mean that you should just reduce the volume for each part. I meant that you progressively increase the volume from that point. For example: 00:18:307 - here you should use the volume you have now, but 00:18:641 - here you increase it by 5%, and you increase it again by 5% for the next round of notes (up to the part where you have 80% volume obviously). This creates a crescendo which is really nice. The same applies to the section at 00:20:974, section at 00:23:641. This does not apply for 00:26:307 this section though, so you should leave the volume at 80% here.
   
   Note: This dynamics suggestion works for all diffs (except for Emdyion's diff). This is only a suggestion, and you don't have to change it if you don't want to. I just think it would sound nicer if you do just that though.
   
2. 01:35:644 (1) - Add a finish? (also applies to 01:36:311 (1))
3. 01:52:978 (5) - Same as the above, a finish here would follow the music better and would sound nice.
4. 01:56:978 (17) - ^, however, here you should use 80% volume for this red section.
5. 01:56:979 - This green section is too close to the red one, and will overwrite the volume change. Move it atleast a tick further, to 01:57:144.

1. 01:14:811 (6) - This finish sounds a bit off. I think it's best you remove it. (same goes for 01:15:478 (12))
2. 01:22:311 - You have a finish here in your Platinum diff, add it here too?
3. 01:28:311 (9) - Sounds like you have an extra whistle on this slider located on 01:28:728. I suggest you remove it.
4. 01:54:478 (2) - This whistle on the end of the slider also sounds like an extra, maybe remove it?
5. 01:56:978 - Here you should use 65% volume for this red section and set it to normal hitsounds.
6. 01:56:979 - This green section is too close to the red one, and will overwrite the volume change. Move it atleast a tick further, to 01:57:144.

1. 01:35:644 (1,1) - This is somewhat inappropriate for a normal diff. The circle 1 comes kinda too soon after a spinner. Best way to handle this would be to end the spinner at 01:37:644 with a soft hitsound set with 5% volume, and then you put back normal hitsounds of 65% volume to 01:37:644, and you map a note here. This also means removal of the new combo on 01:38:644 (1) and adding a finish to the newly mapped note at 01:38:311.
   Something like this.

1. 00:54:330 (1) - This slider has an unsnapped slider end. Due to the limitations of the editor, it's sort of impossible to snap it correctly and has to be done through notepad. I suggest you change it to a circle at 00:55:645, or you can use this code for the slider:
   
   SPOILER

   136,160,54330,6,0,B|336:80|240:224|464:144,1,315.2,0|4

   .
   Find a similar line in your .osu by using notepad (it should start the same, so take first ~15 characters for referrence) and overwrite it with this code.

lolcubes wrote:

Round 2!

[General]

1. Storyboard: A few seconds above 5.0x load won't hurt, but if it can be avoided it's best to do so. The thing is, your storyboard goes up to 6.2x in play (test) mode, and this CAN be avoided if you set the ending fade for your lights at 55496. This is 1/4 earlier than it ends right now, because on the next tick, the SBLoad goes crazy. Since it's only a fraction of a second, I won't hold it against you, but you should definitely change this if you can, seeing how you made the storyboard, you have the knowledge on how to do this.DONE

[Platinum]

1. 00:18:307 - In this section, when I suggested to add dynamics, I didn't mean that you should just reduce the volume for each part. I meant that you progressively increase the volume from that point. For example: 00:18:307 - here you should use the volume you have now, but 00:18:641 - here you increase it by 5%, and you increase it again by 5% for the next round of notes (up to the part where you have 80% volume obviously). This creates a crescendo which is really nice. The same applies to the section at 00:20:974, section at 00:23:641. This does not apply for 00:26:307 this section though, so you should leave the volume at 80% here. I didn't change it since I think it sounds quite fine now.
   
   Note: This dynamics suggestion works for all diffs (except for Emdyion's diff). This is only a suggestion, and you don't have to change it if you don't want to. I just think it would sound nicer if you do just that though.
   [/color]
2. 01:35:644 (1) - Add a finish? (also applies to 01:36:311 (1))DONE
3. 01:52:978 (5) - Same as the above, a finish here would follow the music better and would sound nice.DONE
4. 01:56:978 (17) - ^, however, here you should use 80% volume for this red section. DONE
5. 01:56:979 - This green section is too close to the red one, and will overwrite the volume change. Move it atleast a tick further, to 01:57:144.DONE[/color]

[Gold]

1. 01:14:811 (6) - This finish sounds a bit off. I think it's best you remove it. (same goes for 01:15:478 (12))DONE
2. 01:22:311 - You have a finish here in your Platinum diff, add it here too?DONE
3. 01:28:311 (9) - Sounds like you have an extra whistle on this slider located on 01:28:728. I suggest you remove it.DONE
4. 01:54:478 (2) - This whistle on the end of the slider also sounds like an extra, maybe remove it?DONE
5. 01:56:978 - Here you should use 65% volume for this red section and set it to normal hitsounds.DONE
6. 01:56:979 - This green section is too close to the red one, and will overwrite the volume change. Move it atleast a tick further, to 01:57:144.DONE[/color]

[Bronze]

1. 01:35:644 (1,1) - This is somewhat inappropriate for a normal diff. The circle 1 comes kinda too soon after a spinner. Best way to handle this would be to end the spinner at 01:37:644 with a soft hitsound set with 5% volume, and then you put back normal hitsounds of 65% volume to 01:37:644, and you map a note here. This also means removal of the new combo on 01:38:644 (1) and adding a finish to the newly mapped note at 01:38:311.DONE
   Something like this.

[Rust]

1. 00:54:330 (1) - This slider has an unsnapped slider end. Due to the limitations of the editor, it's sort of impossible to snap it correctly and has to be done through notepad. I suggest you change it to a circle at 00:55:645, or you can use this code for the slider:
   
   SPOILER

   136,160,54330,6,0,B|336:80|240:224|464:144,1,315.2,0|4

   .
   Find a similar line in your .osu by using notepad (it should start the same, so take first ~15 characters for referrence) and overwrite it with this code.DONE[/color]

1. 01:54:478 (2) - The whistle should be at the start, not end.
2. 01:56:978 - You used your normal hitsounds until this point, if you don't wanna use a normal finish for the end, raise the volume to 85%. Current finish sounds weak. If you swap to normal hitsounds, just leave the volume alone.

1. 01:56:978 (17) - You didn't add finish here. Add it please.

CELEBRATING 1 MONTH OF THIS SONG'S BEATMAP'S EXISTENCE. LOL

you are the best RUCKER! I SALUTE YOU! D:

EDIT: At last, I can prove this song is FCable even with Mod. 8D

lolcubes wrote:

It's always best to double check any change you make, so you don't have to wait like this btw. ;x;

Philippines wrote:

Oh, i had a recheck. I think it was fine without finish cause it sounds way too noisy when i tried adding it. I hope it's fine. D: