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Seth "Beatfox" Peelle - Sunslammer

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Silarial
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Silarial
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, September 29, 2011 at 11:32:26 PM

Artist: Seth "Beatfox" Peelle
Title: Sunslammer
Source: Homestuck
Tags: MS Paint Adventures What Pumpkin Cheesewarlock
BPM: 140
Filesize: 4232kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. CW's Insane (4.99 stars, 447 notes)
  2. Easy (1.54 stars, 169 notes)
  3. Hard (4.7 stars, 327 notes)
  4. Normal (3.36 stars, 221 notes)
Download: Seth "Beatfox" Peelle - Sunslammer
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap.

Sunslammer comes from Homestuck, a webcomic that involves a fusion of music, flash movies, and interactive walkthroughs. Homestuck tells the story of four teens trying to avoid an apocalyptic future, with various parodies of RPGs along the way. The musicians of Homestuck produce their music under the label What Pumpkin, which can be checked out here: http://whatpumpkin.com/. Sunslammer is a remix of Sunsetter by Toby "Radiation" Fox.

Thanks to CheeseWarlock for the Insane difficulty!
Last edited by Silarial , edited 62 times in total.
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
BPM is right,but it will be better if you put offset : 5 954
Star
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 140.000
Offset: 5927
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there!
I had a go with your maps, and here's what I think (warning: it's a long list XD):
kurohacker's mod (^^)
[General]
These are suggestions that apply to all the difficulties.
- Make sure that the kiai time is the same for all difficulties. Somehow, this is a must for the maps.
- Remove 'Homestuck' from the tags, and there is no need for commas between the tags.
- I think it's better if you can set custom colours for your notes, in the Colours tag in the Song Setup menu.
- There are a lot of distance spacing (distance between notes) and snapping (snapping of notes to grid) issues in your maps. I suggest that you use distance spacing and grid snap at least for the Easy and Normal maps, since beginners usually can't play notes that are spaced differently from each other. Also, try to use a grid level of 3 in the Grid Level tab under the View menu, so that you can place your notes more precisely and making it nice in the process.
- You can add hitsounds like claps and finishes to certain notes of the song (usually the 4th beat of a song with 4/4 time signature like yours), to give emphasis and rhythm to the song.

[Easy]

Try to make the combos shorter (like maybe 5 in a combo) for an Easy map.
Also, you might want to map this difficulty to the end of the song, for the sake of completeness.

0:09:355 [5] - Start a new combo here.
0:11:927 - Try adding a new circle here, to keep with the beat of the song.
0:14:069 - Same here.
0:14:498 [1] - Delete new combo here.
0:20:927 [4] - Start a new combo here.
0:22:641 [old 5] - Same here.
0:32:498 - Try adding a new circle here.
0:33:355 - Same here.
0:56:498 [1] - Delete new combo here, and....
0:57:355 [2] - Start a new one here instead.
1:25:212 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner so that it ends at 1:28:212 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound here.
1:38:069 [1] - I suggest removing one reverse here and moving it so that it starts at 1:38:498 instead.
1:45:355 [spinner] - For this spinner, shorten it so that it stops at 1:50:498 instead (I would like to make it longer, to go with the vibration sounds, but
spinners can't last too long, especially for Easy maps). Also, add a finish hitsound here.
1:55:641-1:58:212 - Kinda empty here, since the vibration sounds stop here, so maybe add some notes to fill in the gap?
2:00:355 [3] - New combo here.
2:02:069 [old 5] - Same here.
2:03:784 - Add a circle here, to match the earlier notes. Also, make a new combo here.
2:05:069 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here.
2:11:069 - Maybe add a circle here?
2:16:212 - Same here.
2:17:069 [6] - Start a new combo here.
2:22:212 - Add a circle here. Also, remove the break time before this point.
2:23:927 [1&2] - Add finish hitsounds here.

[Normal]

0:15:355 [2-3, 1] - This feels kinda weird, maybe you could change them.
before -->
after -->
0:20:927 [4] - New combo here.
0:22:641 [old 7] - Same here.
0:26:498 [2] - Maybe new combo here?
0:28:212-0:31:641 - Kinda empty here, maybe add a few notes.
0:33:355 [2] - New combo here.
0:35:498 [old 5] - New combo here.
0:36:569 [1] - I suggest you remove the slider here and put in a circle instead, to fit the electric guitar.
0:36:998 [1] - Delete new combo here.
0:43:212 - Add a circle here.
0:43:427 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner and change its position so that it starts at 0:43:641 and ends at 0:46:212 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound
here.
0:47:498 [2] - Remove a reverse here, and....
0:28:355 - Add a circle here, to fit the electric guitar better.
1:04:212 [3] - Move this circle to 1:03:998 instead.
1:13:212 [4] - New combo here.
1:16:427 [4] - Change the notes here, like so:
before -->
after-->http://puu.sh/1fEm
1:22:641 [3] - New combo here.
1:25:212 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner so that it ends at 1:28:212 instead.
1:38:069 [1] - Add one reverse to the slider and move it so that it starts at 1:37:855 instead.
1:39:569 [4] - New combo here.
1:45:355 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner so that it ends at 1:48:784 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound here.
2:01:641 [1&2] - Delete [2], and move [1] one 1/2 beat back.
2:03:355 [1&2] - Same here.
2:15:784 [4] - Move this one 1/2 beat forwards, and...
2:15:998 and 2:16:641 - Add circles here.
2:40:427 [3] - The slider looks kinda ugly...
2:57:355 [spinner] - Move this spinner to 2:56:927, lengthen it so that it ends at 2:59:712 instead, and add a finish hitsound here.

[Insane]
I assume that you changed the BPM and offset for this diffoculty recently. Please resnap all the notes to the new timing settings!
(Click Timing tab -> Timing Setup Panel -> Choose "Snap to New Timing" under the "When applying timing changes..." section.)
After that,

0:06:998 [6] - Move this to 0:07:212 instead.
0:10:641 [1] - Delete new combo here and...
0:11:177 [3] - Start a new one here.
0:12:784 [10] - Start new combo here.
0:13:212 [1] - Delete new combo here.
0:17:605 [5-7] - Push them one 1/4 beats back.
0:24:355 - Add a circle here.
0:29:177 [1-4] - Push the back by 1/4 beats.
0:31:105 [5] - I think you should shorten this slider and move it, so that it starts at 0:31:641 and ends at 0:32:498 instead.
0:35:069 [8] - Start new combo here.
0:35:498 [1] - Delete new combo here.
0:36:891 [old 5] - I would like to suggest that you delete this slider and put a circle at 0:36:998 instead.
0:41:605 [1] - Push this back by 1/4 beats.
0:44:069 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here.
0:57:141 [11] - Start new combo here.
0:57:569 [1] - Delete new combo here.
1:04:212 [10] - Start new combo here.
1:05:177 [new 4] - Push this back by 1/4 beats, and...
1:05:498 - Add a circle here.
1:08:608 [5] - Push this back by 1/4 beats.
1:11:498 [5] - Add a reverse in the slider.
1:12:248 [spinner] - Lengthen the slider so that it ends at 1:14:069 instead.
1:24:677 [spinner] - Same here, to end at 1:28:212 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound here.
1:39:462 [4] - Push this back by 1/4 beats.
1:43:534 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here.
2:25:641 [8] - Shorten the slider so that it ends at 2:26:069 instead.
2:35:927 [8] - Start new combo here.
2:39:141 [1] - Delete new combo here, and....
2:39:355 [2] - Add a new one here.
2:52:427 - Add a circle here.
2:56:819 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here.

Despite requiring a lot of work, somehow I like the song so much that I can't stop modding it (it was 3am here when I finished and I started at around midnight). The SB is also very nice, and kinda weird at the same time. So, for that, I give you a star~

All the best with your maps! :)


Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Thank you kurohacker, that was very helpful! I completed the Easy and Normal suggestions. I was going to do Insane, but it’s 4:00 a.m. now so I’ll finish that up tomorrow.

[General]
These are suggestions that apply to all the difficulties.
- Make sure that the kiai time is the same for all difficulties. Somehow, this is a must for the maps. Okay, I made sure to make Kiai time start at 02:23:910 and end at 02:45:332 for all three difficulties.
- Remove 'Homestuck' from the tags, and there is no need for commas between the tags.
- I think it's better if you can set custom colours for your notes, in the Colours tag in the Song Setup menu. Didn’t even realize this was an option! Done.
- There are a lot of distance spacing (distance between notes) and snapping (snapping of notes to grid) issues in your maps. I suggest that you use distance spacing and grid snap at least for the Easy and Normal maps, since beginners usually can't play notes that are spaced differently from each other. Also, try to use a grid level of 3 in the Grid Level tab under the View menu, so that you can place your notes more precisely and making it nice in the process. That’s weird, I mapped all of the maps with distance snapping and grid snapping in place, but you’re right, there were some weird issues on the map. I tried fixing this up in Easy and Normal, hope I got them all.
- You can add hitsounds like claps and finishes to certain notes of the song (usually the 4th beat of a song with 4/4 time signature like yours), to give emphasis and rhythm to the song.

[Easy]

Try to make the combos shorter (like maybe 5 in a combo) for an Easy map.
Also, you might want to map this difficulty to the end of the song, for the sake of completeness. Mapped it to the end like you suggested.

0:09:355 [5] - Start a new combo here. Done.
0:11:927 - Try adding a new circle here, to keep with the beat of the song. Done.
0:14:069 - Same here. Done.
0:14:498 [1] - Delete new combo here. Done.
0:20:927 [4] - Start a new combo here. Done.
0:22:641 [old 5] - Same here. Done.
0:32:498 - Try adding a new circle here. Done.
0:33:355 - Same here. Done.
0:56:498 [1] - Delete new combo here, and.... Done.
0:57:355 [2] - Start a new one here instead. Done.
1:25:212 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner so that it ends at 1:28:212 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound here. Done.
1:38:069 [1] - I suggest removing one reverse here and moving it so that it starts at 1:38:498 instead. Done.
1:45:355 [spinner] - For this spinner, shorten it so that it stops at 1:50:498 instead (I would like to make it longer, to go with the vibration sounds, but
spinners can't last too long, especially for Easy maps). Also, add a finish hitsound here. Done.
1:55:641-1:58:212 - Kinda empty here, since the vibration sounds stop here, so maybe add some notes to fill in the gap? Done.
2:00:355 [3] - New combo here. Done.
2:02:069 [old 5] - Same here. Done.
2:03:784 - Add a circle here, to match the earlier notes. Also, make a new combo here. Done.
2:05:069 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here. Done.
2:11:069 - Maybe add a circle here? Done.
2:16:212 - Same here. Done.
2:17:069 [6] - Start a new combo here. Done.
2:22:212 - Add a circle here. Also, remove the break time before this point. Done.
2:23:927 [1&2] - Add finish hitsounds here. Done.

[Normal]

0:15:355 [2-3, 1] - This feels kinda weird, maybe you could change them.
before -->
after -->

Remapped like you suggested.
0:20:927 [4] - New combo here. Done.
0:22:641 [old 7] - Same here. Done.
0:26:498 [2] - Maybe new combo here? Done.
0:28:212-0:31:641 - Kinda empty here, maybe add a few notes. Done.
0:33:355 [2] - New combo here. Done.
0:35:498 [old 5] - New combo here. Done.
0:36:569 [1] - I suggest you remove the slider here and put in a circle instead, to fit the electric guitar. Done.
0:36:998 [1] - Delete new combo here. Done.
0:43:212 - Add a circle here. Done.
0:43:427 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner and change its position so that it starts at 0:43:641 and ends at 0:46:212 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound Done.
here.
0:47:498 [2] - Remove a reverse here, and.... Done.
0:28:355 - Add a circle here, to fit the electric guitar better. You put 0:28:355 but did you mean 00:48:647? The timestamp you placed went back to early in the song.
1:04:212 [3] - Move this circle to 1:03:998 instead. Done.
1:13:212 [4] - New combo here. Done.
1:16:427 [4] - Change the notes here, like so:
before -->
after-->http://puu.sh/1fEm Done.
1:22:641 [3] - New combo here. Done.
1:25:212 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner so that it ends at 1:28:212 instead. Done.
1:38:069 [1] - Add one reverse to the slider and move it so that it starts at 1:37:855 instead. Done.
1:39:569 [4] - New combo here. Done.
1:45:355 [spinner] - Lengthen the spinner so that it ends at 1:48:784 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound here. Done.
2:01:641 [1&2] - Delete [2], and move [1] one 1/2 beat back. Done.
2:03:355 [1&2] - Same here. Done.
2:15:784 [4] - Move this one 1/2 beat forwards, and... Done.
2:15:998 and 2:16:641 - Add circles here. Done.
2:40:427 [3] - The slider looks kinda ugly... Fixed.
2:57:355 [spinner] - Move this spinner to 2:56:927, lengthen it so that it ends at 2:59:712 instead, and add a finish hitsound here. Done.
Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Finished up changes to Insane. Next I'll start working on trying to add hitsounds to all difficulties.

[Insane]
I assume that you changed the BPM and offset for this diffoculty recently. Please resnap all the notes to the new timing settings!
(Click Timing tab -> Timing Setup Panel -> Choose "Snap to New Timing" under the "When applying timing changes..." section.) Oops, I snapped the other two but I guess I forgot to snap Insane. >_< Fixed.
After that,

0:06:998 [6] - Move this to 0:07:212 instead. Done.
0:10:641 [1] - Delete new combo here and... Done.
0:11:177 [3] - Start a new one here. Done.
0:12:784 [10] - Start new combo here. Done.
0:13:212 [1] - Delete new combo here. Done.
0:17:605 [5-7] - Push them one 1/4 beats back. Done.
0:24:355 - Add a circle here. Done.
0:29:177 [1-4] - Push the back by 1/4 beats. Done.
0:31:105 [5] - I think you should shorten this slider and move it, so that it starts at 0:31:641 and ends at 0:32:498 instead. Done.
0:35:069 [8] - Start new combo here. Done.
0:35:498 [1] - Delete new combo here. Done.
0:36:891 [old 5] - I would like to suggest that you delete this slider and put a circle at 0:36:998 instead. Done.
0:41:605 [1] - Push this back by 1/4 beats. Done.
0:44:069 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here. Done.
0:57:141 [11] - Start new combo here. Done.
0:57:569 [1] - Delete new combo here. Done.
1:04:212 [10] - Start new combo here. Done.
1:05:177 [new 4] - Push this back by 1/4 beats, and... Done.
1:05:498 - Add a circle here. Done.
1:08:608 [5] - Push this back by 1/4 beats. Done.
1:11:498 [5] - Add a reverse in the slider. Done.
1:12:248 [spinner] - Lengthen the slider so that it ends at 1:14:069 instead. Done.
1:24:677 [spinner] - Same here, to end at 1:28:212 instead. Also, add a finish hitsound here. Done.
1:39:462 [4] - Push this back by 1/4 beats. Done.
1:43:534 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here. Done.
2:25:641 [8] - Shorten the slider so that it ends at 2:26:069 instead. Done.
2:35:927 [8] - Start new combo here. Done.
2:39:141 [1] - Delete new combo here, and.... Done.
2:39:355 [2] - Add a new one here. Done.
2:52:427 - Add a circle here. Done.
2:56:819 [spinner] - Add a finish hitsound here. Done.
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Hi from V.B.R's studio

[General]
add preview point
resnap all notes

[Easy]
00:12:804 (1) - spacing is not right
00:17:945 (3) - ^
00:20:498 (x) - add note
00:50:498 (1) - spacing is not right
01:04:212 (4) - ^
01:17:927 (4) - ^
01:18:784 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:11:284 (3) - spacing is not right
00:16:855 (4) - ^
00:26:498 (1) - ^
00:36:569 (4) - ^
01:07:855 (3) - move to 01:08:069
02:14:284 (2) - cut down one turn
02:16:427 (x) - add note
02:46:641 (2) - spacing is not right

[Insane]
00:07:212 (6) - move to 00:06:998
00:07:426 (1) - remove
00:07:641 (x) - add note,new combo
00:08:926 (5) - remove
00:11:176 (1) - ^
00:11:284 (2) - add new combo
00:14:712 (1) - cut down two turns
00:15:141 (x) - add note
00:22:212 (4) - move to 00:22:427,add new combo
00:23:391 (6) - move to 00:23:498
00:23:712 (7) - move to 00:23:927
00:26:819 (1) - move to 00:26:927,end at 00:27:141
00:34:641 (6,7) - spacing is not right
00:55:319 (1) - move to 00:55:641
00:55:748 (2,3,4,8) - remove
00:57:141 (1) - spacing is not right
01:04:534 (2) - move to 01:04:641
01:09:355 (6) - move to 01:09:141,end at 01:09:784
01:12:248 (1) - move to 01:12:141,end at 01:14:069
01:24:676 (1) - move to 01:24:784,end at 01:28:212
01:40:641 (7) - spacing is not right
01:41:926 (2) - ^
01:42:998 (7) - cut down one turn
01:43:534 (1) - move to 01:43:427,end at 01:47:498
01:59:926 (5) - cut down one turn
02:02:712 (5) - end at 02:03:355
02:03:569 (6) - cut down one turn
02:04:534 (1) - move to 02:04:212,end at 02:09:355
02:16:319 (8) - cut down one turn
02:17:926 (3) - add one turn
02:32:391 (9) - move to 02:32:498
02:32:819 (1) - move to 02:32:927,end at 02:33:355
02:35:927 (8) - end at 02:36:355
02:37:105 (3) - move to 02:36:998

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Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Thanks Beren!

[General]
add preview point Done.
resnap all notes Done.

[/b][Easy][/b]
00:12:804 (1) - spacing is not right Done.
00:17:945 (3) - ^ Done.
00:20:498 (x) - add note Done.
00:50:498 (1) - spacing is not right Done.
01:04:212 (4) - ^ Done.
01:17:927 (4) - ^ Done.
01:18:784 (5) - ^ Done.

[/b][Normal][/b]
00:11:284 (3) - spacing is not right Done.
00:16:855 (4) - ^ Done.
00:26:498 (1) - ^ Done.
00:36:569 (4) - ^ Done.
01:07:855 (3) - move to 01:08:069 Done.
02:14:284 (2) - cut down one turn Done.
02:16:427 (x) - add note Done.
02:46:641 (2) - spacing is not right Done.

[Insane]
00:07:212 (6) - move to 00:06:998 Done.
00:07:426 (1) – remove Done.
00:07:641 (x) - add note,new combo Done.
00:08:926 (5) – remove Done.
00:11:176 (1) - ^ Done.
00:11:284 (2) - add new combo Done.
00:14:712 (1) - cut down two turns Done.
00:15:141 (x) - add note Done.
00:22:212 (4) - move to 00:22:427,add new comboDone.
00:23:391 (6) - move to 00:23:498 Done.
00:23:712 (7) - move to 00:23:927 Done.
00:26:819 (1) - move to 00:26:927,end at 00:27:141 Done.
00:34:641 (6,7) - spacing is not rightDone.
00:55:319 (1) - move to 00:55:641 Done.
00:55:748 (2,3,4,8) – remove Done.
00:57:141 (1) - spacing is not right Done.
01:04:534 (2) - move to 01:04:641 Done.
01:09:355 (6) - move to 01:09:141,end at 01:09:784Done.
01:12:248 (1) - move to 01:12:141,end at 01:14:069 Done.
01:24:676 (1) - move to 01:24:784,end at 01:28:212 Done.
01:40:641 (7) - spacing is not right Done.
01:41:926 (2) - ^ Done.
01:42:998 (7) - cut down one turn I think I’m going to keep this.
01:43:534 (1) - move to 01:43:427,end at 01:47:498 Done.
01:59:926 (5) - cut down one turn Done.
02:02:712 (5) - end at 02:03:355 Done.
02:03:569 (6) - cut down one turn Done.
02:04:534 (1) - move to 02:04:212,end at 02:09:355 Done.
02:16:319 (8) - cut down one turn I think I’m going to keep this.
02:17:926 (3) - add one turn Done.
02:32:391 (9) - move to 02:32:498 Done.
02:32:819 (1) - move to 02:32:927,end at 02:33:355 Done.
02:35:927 (8) - end at 02:36:355 Done.
02:37:105 (3) - move to 02:36:998 Done.
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
New to mapping ?? I'm always glad to help new mappers >w<

General;
- "Normal" preview time is different from other diffs
- Use grid level 4 (most precise) for all diffs, or grid level 3

Skin;
- Ohh nice skin just some stuff ~
- Cut the not necessary transparency in "go.png", "ready.png", "spinner-clear", "spinner-osu", spinner-spin"
- There is a very little tiny point right next to the head of the fruit-ryuuta, get rid of it
- The 2 little people on the spinner-metre shouldn't be there because when you are filling up the spinner-metre you're "filling them up too, just feels weird, sorry if you don't understand, to make it more simple, you don't need the 2 little people on the spinner-metre, just the metre. You can leave it like how it is if you don't understand or ask me to help you
- Fix the section-pass, the transparecy on the shirt look weird also it had a tiny point next to the face
- Is necessary for you to add a "hitcircle-overlay and a "approach-circle" also a "approach-spinnercircle"
- Ask me for any kind of help WITH THE SKIN if you want ~

Easy;
- Slider velocity is too much for Easy
- You have many spacing issues, please fix them, use distance snap of 0.7x and re-arranged ALL objects on the playfield, check that the spacing is correct on ALL the map
- Create a pattern with whistles and/or claps
- Linear sliders are BORING, please make them curved nice fun ones, linear sliders are fine but not on all the map
- 00:10:212 >> Align better with (2)
- 00:10:641 (4,5,6) >> Make a 90 degrees angle with the slider points, also make a triangle pattern with the end of (4) and (5)(6)
- 00:17:927 >> Make it reverse at 00:18:355 then add notes on 00:19:212 and 00:19:641 (this one with new combo) also remove new combo at 00:20:927
- 01:35:069 >> Remove a repeat and add a note where the repeat ended
- 01:38:498 >> ^
- 02:17:069 (1,2,3,4) >> Anti-jumps aren't nice they confuse the new players . . . By the way you make a lot of anti-jumps through Easy which isn't nice at all, they confuse new players
- 02:56:927 >> End at 02:59:712
- Overall . . . not a very fun Easy ;w;

Normal;
- Fix all those spacing issues !!
- Normal doesn't mean "normal" size of circle, bigger circle please >w<
- WTF, Slider velocity is the same as Easy ?!
- 00:10:212 >> Remove all repeats then extend to 00:10:641 and add just one repeat
- 00:15:355 (2,3,4) >> Replace with a slider instead
- 00:47:498 >> Remove the new combo
- 01:20:927 >> ^
- 01:42:998 >> More symmetrical ~
- 01:54:141 >> Move to 01:53:927
- 02:40:427 >> More symmetrical ~

Insane;
- 00:06:998 >> Move to the next blue tick (not recommended but sounds quite nice) or move to the next white tick (recommended)
- 00:28:855 >> Move to the previous white tick
- 00:30:034 (3,45) >> What the - why are these on blue ticks ? Move them to the next red (3), white (4) and red (5) ticks in that order
- 01:09:141 >> Sounds bad when the reverse arrow falls on a blue tick, do something ~
- 01:24:784 >> Finish ?
- 02:19:212 >> Doesn't sound nice
- 02:26:498 >> ^, probably delete (1) and (2)
- Fix spacing, more symmetrical sliders and also WTF same slider velocity as Easy and Normal

* Overall nice try for a first map, your best diff in my opinion is Insane >w<
* Star
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
NORMAL

01:00:802 (1) make it more curvy?
1:05:787 put finish sounds on the sliders?

02:32:856 when making a pair just cut one on the time line and ctrl v
ctrl h it



very nice song !


STARED
Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Fixed up the elements of the skin suggested by lovhim456, now working on lovhin456 and mebins suggestions. It'll probably take awhile now that spring break has ended. x_x
Ayeen_old
316 posts
Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
Hi, time for me to mod via modding queue (sorry for late as Im busy and others thing).

Blue: Consider recheck
Red: Change

General:
Hitcircle donation for your map :

Right click, save

Try to use grid level 3
you used all same Slider velocity :| . Lower Slider Velocity (SV) = slower slider , Increase SV = Higher Speed
Funky map xDD
Smooth-en the edge of comboburst. look so pixellete


Easy:
HP drop down 2 tick lower
Slider velocity is a bit high for easy.
In edit mode: Go to file, AImod. you should realize there some spacing issues here. Easy mean no spacing issue detected by AImod
00:17:927 Slider (3) too below consider making it a bit higher
00:40:212 till 00:41:927 Insert break time
01:04:212 till 01:05:927 Insert break time
01:12:784 till 01:14:498 ^
01:21:355 till 01:23:069 ^
01:36:784 till 01:38:498 ^
01:41:212 till 01:41:927 ^
01:43:641 till 01:45:355 ^
02:09:355 till 02:11:069 ^
02:49:641 till 02:51:355 ^
You sure got lots of timeframe gap in easy but with HP drain 6 :|

Normal:
Same as easy, normal shouldn't have no spacing issues detected by AImod
01:18:784 till 01:20:498 Insert break time[/color]
01:55:212 till 01:57:355 ^
02:09:355 till 02:11:927 ^
02:22:212 till 02:23:927 ^

Insane:
Suggesting change name to Hard
00:31:641 (6) smooth-en this slider. It look ugly and not neat.
01:21:355: (1) Same as above
02:09:355 till 02:13:641 Insert break time. Time frame gap is too large
02:33:891 (3) and (4) dont overlap.
Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Today I fixed up the easy difficulty, which included a combination of modding from lovhin456 and Ayeen, as well as fixing up the storyboard. I will work on fixing up normal next. Big thanks to Ayeen for the hitcircle donation. :)

General;
- "Normal" preview time is different from other diffs Fixed.
- Use grid level 4 (most precise) for all diffs, or grid level 3 Okay.

Skin;
- Ohh nice skin just some stuff ~
- Cut the not necessary transparency in "go.png", "ready.png", "spinner-clear", "spinner-osu", spinner-spin" Fixed.
- There is a very little tiny point right next to the head of the fruit-ryuuta, get rid of it Fixed.
- The 2 little people on the spinner-metre shouldn't be there because when you are filling up the spinner-metre you're "filling them up too, just feels weird, sorry if you don't understand, to make it more simple, you don't need the 2 little people on the spinner-metre, just the metre. You can leave it like how it is if you don't understand or ask me to help you I kinda like them there, I think I’m going to keep them.
- Fix the section-pass, the transparecy on the shirt look weird also it had a tiny point next to the face Fixed.
- Is necessary for you to add a "hitcircle-overlay and a "approach-circle" also a "approach-spinnercircle"
- Ask me for any kind of help WITH THE SKIN if you want ~

Easy;
- Slider velocity is too much for Easy Changed to 1.10 velocity.
- You have many spacing issues, please fix them, use distance snap of 0.7x and re-arranged ALL objects on the playfield, check that the spacing is correct on ALL the map. I think I got them all this time, thanks to AImod.
- Create a pattern with whistles and/or claps Added hitsounds.
- Linear sliders are BORING, please make them curved nice fun ones, linear sliders are fine but not on all the map. Fixed all linear sliders and made them curved.
- 00:10:212 >> Align better with (2) Okay.
- 00:10:641 (4,5,6) >> Make a 90 degrees angle with the slider points, also make a triangle pattern with the end of (4) and (5)(6) Fixed.
- 00:17:927 >> Make it reverse at 00:18:355 then add notes on 00:19:212 and 00:19:641 (this one with new combo) also remove new combo at 00:20:927 Fixed.
- 01:35:069 >> Remove a repeat and add a note where the repeat ended Fixed.
- 01:38:498 >> ^ Fixed.
- 02:17:069 (1,2,3,4) >> Anti-jumps aren't nice they confuse the new players . . . By the way you make a lot of anti-jumps through Easy which isn't nice at all, they confuse new players Fixed.
- 02:56:927 >> End at 02:59:712 Fixed.
- Overall . . . not a very fun Easy ;w; Hopefully it’s more fun now! >_<
Easy:
HP drop down 2 tick lower Okay.
Slider velocity is a bit high for easy. It’s been changed to 1.10 velocity.
In edit mode: Go to file, AImod. you should realize there some spacing issues here. Easy mean no spacing issue detected by AImod. I didn’t even realize there was a AImod till now, that was very helpful. Fixed!
00:17:927 Slider (3) too below consider making it a bit higher Okay.
00:40:212 till 00:41:927 Insert break time Okay.
01:04:212 till 01:05:927 Insert break time Okay.
01:12:784 till 01:14:498 ^ Okay.
01:21:355 till 01:23:069 ^ Okay.
01:36:784 till 01:38:498 ^ Okay.
01:41:212 till 01:41:927 ^ Okay.
01:43:641 till 01:45:355 ^ Okay.
02:09:355 till 02:11:069 ^ Okay.
02:49:641 till 02:51:355 ^ Okay.
You sure got lots of timeframe gap in easy but with HP drain 6 Fixed!
Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Fixed up Normal difficulty, which now includes hitsounds. I will work on Hard next.

Normal;
- Fix all those spacing issues !! Done!
- Normal doesn't mean "normal" size of circle, bigger circle please >w< Okay.
- WTF, Slider velocity is the same as Easy ?! Slider velocity has been changed in Easy.
- 00:10:212 >> Remove all repeats then extend to 00:10:641 and add just one repeat Sounds weird without it, I think I’ll keep it for now.
- 00:15:355 (2,3,4) >> Replace with a slider instead I had sliders here before, but I changed them after kuro’s mod, I like the circles.
- 00:47:498 >> Remove the new combo Fixed.
- 01:20:927 >> ^ Fixed.
- 01:42:998 >> More symmetrical ~ Okay, I think I got it more symmetrical
- 01:54:141 >> Move to 01:53:927 It doesn’t follow the beat at 01:53:927 though… :/
- 02:40:427 >> More symmetrical ~ Okay, I think I got it more symmetrical now too
Normal:
Same as easy, normal shouldn't have no spacing issues detected by AImod Fixed.
01:18:784 till 01:20:498 Insert break time Okay.
01:55:212 till 01:57:355 ^ Okay.
02:09:355 till 02:11:927 ^ Okay.
02:22:212 till 02:23:927 ^ Okay.
NORMAL

01:00:802 (1) make it more curvy? I made it curvier.
1:05:787 put finish sounds on the sliders? Done.
02:32:856 when making a pair just cut one on the time line and ctrl v
ctrl h it Okay.
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
star!
Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Thanks for the star LuPiiTa! :)

Today I finished fixing up the suggestions for the Insane difficulty, which I had renamed Hard due to Ayeen's suggestion. I also added hitsounds to this difficultly.
Insane;
- 00:06:998 >> Move to the next blue tick (not recommended but sounds quite nice) or move to the next white tick (recommended) Moved to blue tick.
- 00:28:855 >> Move to the previous white tick Fixed.
- 00:30:034 (3,45) >> What the - why are these on blue ticks ? Move them to the next red (3), white (4) and red (5) ticks in that order Fixed.
- 01:09:141 >> Sounds bad when the reverse arrow falls on a blue tick, do something ~ Changed it so the slider reverses on the white tick.
- 01:24:784 >> Finish ? Fixed.
- 02:19:212 >> Doesn't sound nice Maybe it sounds better with the hitsounds now?
- 02:26:498 >> ^, probably delete (1) and (2) Got rid of the sliders and put single beats.
- Fix spacing, more symmetrical sliders and also WTF same slider velocity as Easy and Normal Easy has a different velocity now.
Insane:
Suggesting change name to Hard Changed to Hard.
00:31:641 (6) smooth-en this slider. It look ugly and not neat. Smoothed it out.
01:21:355: (1) Same as above Smoothed it out.
02:09:355 till 02:13:641 Insert break time. Time frame gap is too large Okay.
02:33:891 (3) and (4) dont overlap. Okay.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi~ Nymph_ here~

General : I think the hitsounds is a little mess , especially the clap sound , it is a little loud for this music I think . so maybe try this softclap , then enable custom overrides and lower the volumn a little bit. I think this hitsound just fit the music~

Easy:

KIAI time a little miss, fix it.
00:19:212 (6,7) - spacing left 1 grid.
00:20:498 (1,2) - up 1 grid
00:27:355 (6) - down 1 grid
00:56:498 (4) - right 1 grid
01:01:641 (2) - left 1 grid
01:14:498 (1) - left 1 grid
01:18:784 (5) - left 1

Normal:

I think distance spacing 0.7 is a little low. I think 0.8-1.0 would be better. but , just suggestion.
00:06:784 (3) - spacing right 1 grid.
00:34:212 (3) - left and up 1 grid
01:37:855 (1) - left 1
02:21:355 (3) - right 1
02:29:926 (3,4) - down 1
02:56:069 (5,6) - right 1

Hard:

00:56:069 (2) - maybe stack these? just suggestion.
01:23:069 (4) - spacing these 4 circles , make them beautiful~

I think this song would be very very nice to hear if it have good hitsounds, so keep on making it better and better!

star~

Oh by the way: really nice job on skin! it is just awesome~

PS: you can open rar. file right? if not ,pm me. I wil remake the file with 7zip.

Download: soft-hitclap.rar
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
[General]
Why easy has 4/4 in Time signature and Hard and Normal have 3/4?
I think that 4/4 is correct so change Hard and Normal from 3/4 to 4/4.
(Press F6 then go to "Time Signature (affects metronome)" box and change)

From 02:11:069 to 02:21:784 - I suggest to add some timing points and to gradually change the hitsounds volume to fit to the song.
Here is the code I've done if you want to try it (to add the code go on the map folder and open a .osu file with a text editor, then search [TimingPoints] and replace the code with this) :
5927,428.571428571429,4,2,0,100,1,0
131927,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
133641,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
135141,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
136427,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
137069,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
138784,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
140498,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
141784,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
143910,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
143910,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
165332,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
Do it for all diffs.

[Easy]
02:17:069 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle

[Normal]
02:20:498 (1,3,5) - Add whistle

[Hard]
This diff has many spacing problems.
I suggest to try to fix with AiMod (Press CTRL + Shift + A and go to the Spacing Tab).
00:08:498 (4) - Add a repeat?
00:24:998 (2,2,2,2) - Replace finish with whistle? I think that sounds less aggressive in that way XD
00:26:498 (3) - Add finish
00:54:998 (3) - Move to 00:55:105 -
01:06:141 (2,2,2,2) - Replace finish with whistle?
01:07:641 (3) - Add finish at the start of silder and whistle at the end.

No star for now, sorry.
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
My lazy mod weekend -.-

[General]
- I think this song hard to add sound.
- I think your beatmap is not suitable about clap sound.
- All short break (red break) you should delete it.
- All sound mod you can fix or not. :D

My suggestion ~

- Follow my sound mod in Easy difficulty then you can fix sound in another difficulty. (pattern like easy diff.)

[Easy]

SPOILER
00:05:927 (1) - front of slider add finish.
00:07:641 (3) - clap.
00:09:355 (1) - ^
00:10:641 (4~6) - change clap to whistle.
00:12:784 (1) - front of slider add finish.
00:14:498 (1) - clap
00:15:355 (3) - end of slider add clap.
00:19:212 (6) - del clap.
00:20:498 (1) - del whistle.
00:20:927 (2) - on slider del whistle at 00:21:784 & 00:22:212
00:22:641 (1) - whistle
00:23:069 (2) - ^
00:26:498 (5) - finish.
00:27:355 (6) - end of slider add whistle.
00:30:784 (2,4) - whistle
00:31:641 (3) - unclap.
00:33:355 (5) - finish.
00:39:355 (2) - add whistle in middle and end of slider.
00:49:212 (2,3) - whistle.
00:50:498 (1) - front of slider add clap & the end add whistle
00:51:355 (2) - whistle.
00:53:069 (2) - ^
00:53:927 (3) - front of slider finish & the end clap.
00:56:498 (4) - whistle.
00:57:355 (1) - clap
01:00:784 (1) - finish.
01:01:641 (2) - front of slider del whistle.
01:03:784 (3,4) - whistle.
01:07:641 (5) - finish.
01:08:498 (6) - slider at middle and end add whistle.
01:10:641 (1) - spinner start at 01:10:427
01:14:498 (1) - finish.
01:15:355 (2) - front of slider del whistle.
01:18:355 (x) - add note ?
01:38:498 (1) - why you use clap sound ? whistle please.
01:57:355 (3) - clap.
02:02:069 (3) - whistle all slider
02:18:784 (2,4) - whistle

I'm not sure about Kiai time you should find next modder to check it.

Star+

P.S. I think blank slider sound is better then now.

Download: soft-sliderslide.rar

Silarial
53 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Silarial
Made changes to Easy today, while making sure to make the hitsounds soft. I wanted to make the spaces between beats more than .7, but AIMod goes crazy and says there's a bunch of spacing issues if I do, even though distance snapping says it's fine. o_o

Easy:

KIAI time a little miss, fix it.
00:19:212 (6,7) - spacing left 1 grid. Fixed
00:20:498 (1,2) - up 1 grid Fixed
00:27:355 (6) - down 1 grid Fixed
00:56:498 (4) - right 1 grid Fixed
01:01:641 (2) - left 1 grid Fixed
01:14:498 (1) - left 1 grid Fixed
01:18:784 (5) - left 1 Fixed
[General]
Why easy has 4/4 in Time signature and Hard and Normal have 3/4?
I think that 4/4 is correct so change Hard and Normal from 3/4 to 4/4.
(Press F6 then go to "Time Signature (affects metronome)" box and change) Changed.

From 02:11:069 to 02:21:784 - I suggest to add some timing points and to gradually change the hitsounds volume to fit to the song.
Here is the code I've done if you want to try it (to add the code go on the map folder and open a .osu file with a text editor, then search [TimingPoints] and replace the code with this) :
Code:
5927,428.571428571429,4,2,0,100,1,0
131927,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
133641,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
135141,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
136427,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
137069,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
138784,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
140498,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
141784,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
143910,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
143910,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
165332,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

Do it for all diffs. Used this code. Thank you so much!
[Easy]
02:17:069 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle Fixed.
00:05:927 (1) - front of slider add finish. Fixed
00:07:641 (3) - clap. Fixed
00:09:355 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:10:641 (4~6) - change clap to whistle. Fixed
00:12:784 (1) - front of slider add finish. Fixed
00:14:498 (1) – clap Fixed
00:15:355 (3) - end of slider add clap. Fixed
00:19:212 (6) - del clap. Fixed
00:20:498 (1) - del whistle. Fixed
00:20:927 (2) - on slider del whistle at 00:21:784 & 00:22:212 Fixed
00:22:641 (1) – whistle Fixed
00:23:069 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:26:498 (5) - finish. Fixed
00:27:355 (6) - end of slider add whistle. Fixed
00:30:784 (2,4) – whistle Fixed
00:31:641 (3) - unclap. Fixed
00:33:355 (5) - finish. Fixed
00:39:355 (2) - add whistle in middle and end of slider. Fixed
00:49:212 (2,3) - whistle. Fixed
00:50:498 (1) - front of slider add clap & the end add whistle Fixed
00:51:355 (2) - whistle. Fixed
00:53:069 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:53:927 (3) - front of slider finish & the end clap. Fixed
00:56:498 (4) - whistle. Fixed
00:57:355 (1) - clap Fixed
01:00:784 (1) - finish. Fixed
01:01:641 (2) - front of slider del whistle. Fixed
01:03:784 (3,4) - whistle. Fixed
01:07:641 (5) - finish. Fixed
01:08:498 (6) - slider at middle and end add whistle. Fixed
01:10:641 (1) - spinner start at 01:10:427 Fixed
01:14:498 (1) - finish. Fixed
01:15:355 (2) - front of slider del whistle. Fixed
01:18:355 (x) - add note ? Fixed
01:38:498 (1) - why you use clap sound ? whistle please. Fixed
01:57:355 (3) - clap. Fixed
02:02:069 (3) - whistle all slider Fixed
02:18:784 (2,4) - whistle Fixed
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