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Tomohito Nishiura - The Great Don Paolo

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RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 05 June 2010 at 22:18:59

Artist: Tomohito Nishiura
Title: The Great Don Paolo
Source: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
Tags: NoHItter
BPM: 161.95
Filesize: 3954kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.7 stars, 210 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 320 notes)
  3. NoHItter's Easy (2.02 stars, 109 notes)
  4. Normal (3.39 stars, 174 notes)
Download: Tomohito Nishiura - The Great Don Paolo
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Last edited by RandomJibberish , edited 50 times in total.
Matma Rex
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Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
These combo colors are unreadable - too dark.

Some comments about skin (you copied your Layton skin here, right?)
- hit300 is too big, it obscures playfield a bit.
- I dont like pause menu buttons, that color is sad D:
- sliderball (sliderhat?) doesn't reverse after hitting reverse arrow; it's unfortunately unfixable without skin.ini, and it doesnt work on beatmap-level; try to rotate hat by 90 degree.


Nice SB, lol. But that SBd eye gets some ugly grey border, I think it's due to the way osu! scales things. Solution:Use them both. I moved the eye a bit to cover original one, I think it also looks better now.

Also, don't you think that instead of "switch" - open/closed eye there should be a little more "detailed" animation? If yes, make me an image of half-closed eye and I'll do it :)


Poke me when this map is finished to receive more modding :)


RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
I put a half closed eye in the updated folder, Matma, so you can add a more fluid animation. It's got the filename "halfeye.png". I don't know how to make transitions between Fail and Pass yet :P

I'll make a more substantial update later~
Matma Rex
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Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
SB~

Download: 9977 Tomohito Nishiura - The Great Don Paolo.rar
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Thanks a lot. Updating now...
NoHitter
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NoHitter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - The Great Don Paolo (RandomJibberish) [Easy].osu
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
NoHitter
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NoHitter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Hrm, I think it makes more sense for it to be full length. If you don't want to extend it it's fine though~
DJPop
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DJPop
lol @ eye

I think BPM & offset might be wrong, but too hard for me to find them :<

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
01:22:63 (4) - why this note different from previous?
01:53:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this part is confused imo

~Insane~
Unfinished.


Will give star when move to pending ;)
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Here's the full version.

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - The Great Don Paolo (RandomJibberish) [Easy].osu
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MrCheeze_old
13 posts
Joined September 2009
MrCheeze_old
Now this is someone I didn't expect to see here. (I'm from C-R if you don't know me)
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Ah, MrCheeze, I wouldn't expect to see you here either XD. I was introduced by DramaticaXIV2 (IamnotShinta here). He brought in a few AAO users :P
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Overall:
You might want to double-check the distance spacing of the notes, and afterwards use AImod to recheck.
You may deviate from distance snapping on Hard and Insane diffs, but don't overuse it.
Suggestion - Set preview point (for all maps) to 01:05:600

Normal
I notice some combos that could be arranged better; (arrangement, symmetrical)
Example:
00:24:118 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could make it symmetrical to the previous combo.

00:29:304 (4) - Finish
00:32:267 (4) - ^
00:35:970 (5) - New combo
00:36:711 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:118 (6,1) - Sounds weird. Maybe remove the whistle at (1)?
01:13:378 (3,4) - Sounds weird...
01:34:489 (2) - Whistle and end of this slider
01:37:822 (2) - Finish
01:45:600 (7) - New combo
01:58:933 (1) - Lower the volume at the end of the spinner.

Hard

01:17:452 ~ 01:23:007 - Maybe you can reduce the volume at the end of each slider.
01:58:563 (2) - Finish not clap
01:58:933 (1) - Lower the volume at the end of the spinner.

Insane

Generally when you play a map on auto; spinners must get at least 2000 bonus to be rankable.
00:31:526 (5) - New combo

Bah! Tiring.
theowest
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theowest
IMO, This beatmap is terrible!! It's so WRONG!!! GRAVEYARD IT OR IMPROVE IT!! NOW!! :evil:
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
I'm genuinely confused as to whether that's a joke or a troll or bad taste :/
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[All]

Preview points.
Volume seems a bit loud.

[Easy]

No real issues, although it ends kinda suddenly.

[Normal]

01:24:11 (2,1) - Spacing.
01:41:15 (1) - Maybe line this up with the notes before it.
01:53:00 (1,2) - ^ (stack the start points)
01:55:97 (1,2) - ^
01:58:93 (1) - End this a bit quieter.

[Hard]

00:32:26 (4) - Put this where the 3 will be?
01:58:93 (1) - Quieter.

[Insane]

00:18:19 (1,1) - Unrankable spinners.
00:44:48 (4) - 1 grid right for a nicer triangle.
01:06:83 (2) - 1 grid up.
01:09:30 (8,9,10) - Weird pattern, lol.
01:10:04 (1) - Unrankable spinner.
01:57:45 (1) - I'd take this slider at 1/2 BPM so that the ? isn't so cramped.

Pretty nice overall, just loud in many parts because of the repeating sliders and high hitsound volume. Try lowering that. Starred. :)
Shulin
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Joined August 2009
Shulin
Skin:

Imo the hat on the 300 is a bit too big, but otherwise a nice skin.

Easy:

00:55:097 (5) - Whistle
00:56:034 (6) - Remove whistle
01:00:041 (2) - Finishes sound odd, whistle the start finish the end.
01:03:037 (2) - ^
01:41:015 (1) - Too many claps, try clap, clap, whistle, whistle, normal beat. Do a similar pattern on the others to.
01:42:063 (1) - ^
01:44:011 (1) - ^
01:45:060 (1) - ^

Normal:

Fine :D

Hard:

Too many claps on those repeating sliders imo: Just one example - 00:38:093 (1,2,3,4) - sounds better in whistles, or maybe a mixture of both.

01:53:037 (3) - Whistle
01:54:011 (6) - ^
01:54:085 (3) - ^
01:55:022 (4) - Clap
01:55:047 (5) - Whistle
01:55:060 (6) - Finish.
01:56:034 (3) - Whistle

Otherwise its a nice difficulty :D

Insane:

Maybe turn down the difficulty and hp drain rate by one? If not then I'd recommend moving the streams a little closer together.

00:06:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I preferred the pattern set at 00:03:037 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
00:18:093 (1) - Remove new combo
00:19:030 (2) - New combo
00:19:067 (1) - Remove new combo
00:33:007 - 00:41:526 - For all the returning sliders for this section
00:48:006 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These single beats need more hitsounds, find something you like :D
00:50:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

01:35:106 - 01:58:810 No hitsounds you should add some XD

Apart from that nice maps ~~ Star!
NoHitter
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NoHitter
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Download: Tomohito Nishiura - The Great Don Paolo (RandomJibberish) [Easy].osu
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