1. Another (5 stars, 395 notes)
2. Beginner (3 stars, 140 notes)
3. Hyper (4.54 stars, 224 notes)
4. Normal (4.02 stars, 191 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
now let's see...

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[General]
nice song~
and i think you should mapping till the end, very very seriously.
I dunno, I think it ends at a good spot. If I change my mind later I'll fill it in, but argh effort! >_<

[Beginner]
nicely playable but is it really a beginner diff? imo it's too hard for beginners XD
I think it's fine for beginners.
00:18:461(3) - new combo.
I'm trying to keep the combos mostly with the music.
00:47:880(1) - the spinner is too short, try some other things here.
Yeah this was rather annoying. It's probably too short for Beginner, but I couldn't really move it or lengthen it without it messing up the flow. I've just removed it.
01:29:686(5) - new combo.
Done.
01:35:300(1) - remove new combo.
Yeah that was an accident, thanks.
01:35:880(1) - i think this spinner do not needs any vocal. try to reduce the sound volume?
I've lowered the hitsound for that a bit.

[Normal]
00:17:106(x) - add a note.
I dun wanna...
00:33:945(6) - new combo.
Done.
00:40:138(1) - remove new combo.
Done.
01:31:041(1) - the spinner does not fits the lyric...
I've extended the spinner a bit and lowered the hitsound.

[Hyper]
00:18:267(3) - try to overlay the next note?
00:22:138(4) - ^
Uhh... I don't get you :/
00:27:751(4,5) - don't like this jumpoh well...
I do...
00:32:977(2) - try to overlay the next note?
00:34:526(5) - ^
Still don't get you.

[Another]
00:19:622(2) - add clap
I prefer the whistle.
00:19:816(x) - add a note with clap
Don't wanna... >_>
01:04:912(1) - quite noisy...
I removed some claps.
01:20:396 - 01:23:299 - maybe use some jump here? also you can make the hitsound very light at first, but more and more heavy with the combo.
Nice idea, but I think I like it as it is.

great song and great map.
so
star~

XepherX3 wrote:

very very niice...maybe map hyper and another full lenght

special kiai effect storyboard if u like

[attachment=0:24e8a]Kiai effect.zip[/attachment:24e8a]

Ayeen wrote:

Ok as per request in IRC:

Here is some Ayeen's mod:

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Beginner:
All seem good except silence on 02:03:654
kk

Normal:
AR+2
+1
00:38:396 Delete (7)
No
02:03:654 Make it silence here
Yep
Funny thing is i think your normal is much harder than hyper, maybe that because of much circles here compared to your hyper.
Hyper has more jumps.

Hyper:
AR+2
Yep
01:02:396 (1,2,3,4,5) make it more curvy (Nazi nazi mod )
01:03:945 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
Done
01:54:461 (1,2,3,4) Hitsound on blue tick is odd/ not rythmic with song. Either make the blue tick silence or make circles on white and red ticks. For me, 8 circles with finish on every red ticks here is sound better. just suggestion here.
I made the bounce and end on each slider quieter.
02:03:654 make it silence here.
Yep

Another:
Hitsound suggestion from me
00:13:816 (1) Delete clap
Hmm... ok.
00:14:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7) add finish on (3,4,6,7)
00:15:751 (1) add finish
00:15:945 (2,3,4,5,6,7) add finish on (2,4,5,7)
I don't want that many finishes.
00:17:299 (3) remove clap, add finish
Ok
00:17:686 (6) ^
00:20:396 (3) ^
00:20:783 (6) ^
I'll leave these ones I think.
02:03:654 make it silence here
Yep
The rest should just leave it.

Mostly suggestion

Good luck in ranking the 3rd map

DJPop wrote:

3.08 star is too high for the easiest diff
I was hoping no-one would notice... Fixed.

~Beginner~
00:47:880 - add note (?)
Added note and slider.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hyper~
00:27:751 (4) OR (5) - new combo
Done.
00:36:848 (3) - ^
Done.
01:40:332 (5) - ^
Done, and I also changed the first chorus's version of it.

~Another~
Volume levels are different from other diffs.
I might leave this, because it sounds like a mess if I match the volumes with the other diffs.
01:12:654 (7) - new combo
Done.
01:12:848 (1) - remove new combo
Done.

+Star

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI
Here is my m4m of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700
All suggestions

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[Beginner]
Ah..I think it's an Easy but not Beginner
For my maps, generally Beginner = Easy, Normal = Normal, Hyper = Hard, Another = Insane.
00:40:138 (2,3,4,5) - noisy
I think it fits.
00:56:977 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - things on red line is too hard for a beginner I think
No.
01:09:364 (4,5,1,2) - ^
^
01:46:525 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
^
01:50:977 (1,2,3) - change to slider
^
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
I want it to end on the bar.

To be honest the reason I said no to the Beginner changes is because when I simplified things the star rating went UP (over 3). I have no idea how osu! calculates that, but it's fail. :/

[Normal]
00:47:880 (1) - short
It's fine for normal.
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
See above.

[Hyper]
AR+1
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
See above.

[Another]
AR+1
02:02:396 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
See above.

Good map~
Star~

Ekaru wrote:

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Not doing Another because it's such a high level of difficulty that I feel I can't mod it properly. Anyways...
Awwww cmon it's not that hard... D:

All of these suggestions I recommend you try out, and then just revert back if you don't like how it plays. Pretty much all of these are "feel" things, really.

Hyper:

The main problem here is having too many sliders that disrupt the map's flow. The input of a "click" is different from that of a "hold and release", if that makes sense. Do remember that when I'm referring to splitting up a slider, I mean to place hit circles timeline-wise where the sliders start and end; you'll often have to make new patterns.
I like sliders.

00:13:816 (1,2,3) - Try making this a combo of five hit circles. The sliders feel weird. Place them at the sliders' start and end points.
Nope.
00:17:299 (1) - Try making this two hit circles, where the sliders start and end.
^
00:20:396 (1) - This would also feel better as two hit circles instead of a slider.
^
00:23:880 (2,3,4,5) - I would just get rid of the sliders here period, and make these hit circles. Wherever there's currently a slider start, end, or repeat, put a hit circle there (with a different pattern of course).
^
00:36:267 (2) - Try splitting this slider up, also. It feels better to me.
^
00:39:557 (4,5) - I would move these away from (2,3). I feel movement between 3 and 4, and no movement just feels weird.
^
00:45:945 (3) - Again, try making it into 2 hit circles.
^
01:08:396 (1,2) - As usual, try splitting these sliders up into hit circles where these sliders start and end.
^
01:13:429 (3,4,5,6) - I would add another hit circle on the red tick between 3 and 4 and make this a stream. Just me, though.
Added that circle and rearranged a bit, but not as a stream.
01:20:396 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This feels cramped to me. That's just me, though.
That's because it's 0.75x.
01:45:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should all be hit circles.
You just hate sliders! D:
01:47:687 (1) - Feels weird, probably just me, though.
Maybe, but it matches the vocals.

Good map overall, though. I just think it would play better.

Normal:

I would space the 1/2s out so they're not overlapping like that. Just me, though. Only thing I can find is a few 1/2s that just play too fast for this difficulty.

00:14:783 (3) - Consider deleting that. Feels too fast here IMO.
I think it's fine.
00:16:138 (5,6,7,8) - Consider deleting this and putting a 1-beat-long repeat slider 1/2 before the (5).
Nah.
00:25:428 (5,6) - Consider making this a stack of just 3 1/2 notes.
Hmm... I tried it but it messes up the spacing with the next combo and I don't want to move that.
00:38:590 (1) - This slider looks funny.
If by funny you mean AWESOME. I can't really think of anything more symmetric to do with it, so it'll be ok I think.
01:27:557 (3) - Feels too fast IMO, try deleting it.
I like it.
01:29:106 (3) - ^
^

Pretty good map. Flowed better than Hard IMO.

Beginner:

I'd tap that. ~

Good map set overall. Star. I feel Hyper could flow better, but that's about all I could really find. Mod4Mod this was, BTW. *posts in your Mod Queue now*

Jarby wrote:

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01:14:203 - Logically, kiai time should end here instead of at 01:05:299. Seems to do this on difficulties but Another anyway. As for the second point, it should restart at 01:51:364 and end at 02:03:751; the storyboard should also continue until that point and not fade out until then.
Ah thanks, that was an accident from adding the volume change.
As for the second point, the map ended there originally, until I got told to map the rest. Looks like I forgot to fix the kiai for it.

Normal:

Very similar to Hyper in terms of object density and difficulty. In fact, it only has 8 less objects than Hyper. I highly recommend you tone this down a bit by removing some stuff. That will give the set as a whole more variety and appeal to a wider audience.
Removed some stuff.

Hyper:

00:15:170 (3) - Move one space to the right on grid level 3 to make the spacing more consistent and less unnecessarily overlappy.
Ok.
00:25:622 (5) - Move one space down on grid level for more correct symmetry.
That breaks spacing.
00:27:751 (1,2) - I think this jump is too cruel for this difficulty. I'd switch the start and end points around on 2 to combat this.
I tried that but then I need to move (3) too and I couldn't find an aesthetic spot for it.
00:36:267 (2,1) - Same jump problem. Actually, it's more like a recurring theme. I'd still make these styles of jumps weaker though.
Yeah this one's a bit of a killer. I've reduced it somewhat.

Another:

Hitsounds on this difficulty are a lot quieter than the others. I think they're more suitable like this, so change the others to match. This includes the final spinner, don't make it quiet!
I've changed the hitsound volumes, but I want to reduce the impact from the final spinner.

01:04:912 (1) - I suggest changing this to a 1/4 kick slider instead because I don't think it makes much sense for this to be 1/8.
Ok.
01:12:848 (2) - Increase the spacing (moving down three spaces on grid level 3 is adequate) to avoid confusion with this.
I moved the following notes up instead.
01:26:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it would be a good idea to add whistles to the ends of all of these sliders to complement the changed percussion. This would also make sense at 01:01:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) actually.
Too noisy. D:
01:56:783 (3,4) - AAAA UNSYMMETRICAL. So move 4 one space to the right on grid level 3.
That's the first time I've ever done that...

YGOkid8 wrote:

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General:
- Remove the letterboxing. During breaks with the flashing-ish storyboard, it looks weird and ugly :/
Ok.

Beginner:
- This is a pretty hard easy diff., because of the very frequent beats on the white ticks, eg.
00:18:461 (3,4,5,6) -
00:40:138 (2,3,4,5,1) -
Stuff like that would normally be in a normal diff.
Hmmm I think it's alright as long as there aren't heaps of red ticks.

Normal:
- Rename to Normal+? Otherwise make it easier a bit, this one is hard-ish because of the beats on the red ticks, eg.
00:14:590 (2,3,4) -
00:16:138 (6,7,8,9) -
I think in future I won't make four diffs for IIDX songs. It's too hard to balance difficulty.

Another:
- A lot of the streams and mini-streams don't really fit, they feel more like they're there just to make the difficulty more difficult.
00:29:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally, I don't like this. It looks weird and it plays funny imo.
But I like it...

1. 00:49:816

MDuh wrote:

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Easy:
nothing to say, very nice


Normal:
looks like normal+ to me since there's sneaky traps on it
People keep saying this, but I'm not changing the difficulty names unless I have to.
Remove the flashing SB in 01:26:590 onwards since its not kiai time.. it looks odd to me IMO
Sure.
can't find anything to change more


Hyper:
Increase Approach rate?
Ok, +1
Decrease Slider Tick Rate? (I found 1 part that its too noticeable and not to good)
Hmm... I see what you mean, but I think I'll leave it.

1. 00:49:816

Too Far?:
00:54:848 (1,2) -
01:44:397 (1,2) -
01:21:557 (4,1) - More like Tag-ish
01:23:106 (4,1) - More like Tag-ish
01:24:654 (4,1) - More like Tag-ish
They're all fine.
01:54:461 (1,2,3,4) - maybe some Differend Hitsounds?
I made the bounces a bit louder.
the map would be great as a Tag map
....I have no idea what you mean >_>

Another:
00:24:267 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make it a moving sliders rather than static
I spread them out a bit.
00:25:428 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to change it to >>, It sounded better IMO
Nah I prefer it like it is.

that's all I can mod,
sorry If I didn't help to your map much, still a beginner mapper
You put some effort in, and I took some suggestions, therefore kudosu! <3
~starred

akrolsmir wrote:

Thanks for trying out the queue I set up! Although no one else has replied yet. Anyways, here's a free mod:

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Beginner:
Looks great!

Normal:
00:20:396 (2,4) - Make these less pointed?
Ok.
01:06:654- Circle here? (for the first beat in "Away")
^
01:54:461 (1) - Noticeably taller than its width, fix if it's supposed to be symmetric.
I think I'll leave it.

Hyper:
00:26:203 (1) - Somewhat ugly curve, b/c not symmetric and also doesn't fit around (2) properly.
Fixed.
00:56:009 (2,4) - Very minor, but looks flat against the circles, perhaps adjust the 2nd and 4th points on each? (same for its repeat later)
I can't quite get it looking how I want, so I'll leave it.
01:08:396 (1,2) - Could be adjusted into a more perfect semi-circle if that was what you were going for.
Nah it's fine.
01:51:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is a half-beat off of lyrics. Even if intentional, feels weird since most of the rest of the song sticks to the vocals.
^

Hyper is still close to normal in terms of difficulty, perhaps make it harder? Especially since it's far, far easier than Another right now.
When I'm mapping, I tend to make Normal and Hyper fairly similar in difficulty (Hyper a bit harder) but follow a different rhythm.

Another:
Combination of jumps and streams make it quite challenging.
That's the intention

Nice song and intuitively mapped (except for Another but that's probably because I'm just not good enough yet). Starred!

Fight69 wrote:

Hoi o/
\o
I'm here for some mod4mod (I've read your modding queue)

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[General]
Hey, why the Kiai time is not the same in each diff ? o.o
Because the Kiai starts and ends on notes.

[Normal]
This diff looks like more a Normal+ than a Normal
So everyone says, but these are IIDX difficulty names and I'm not changing them.
00:46:332 (1,2,3,4) - Delete the claps and add whistles
Nah.

[Beginner]
00:42:848 (3,4) - A bit hard to see for a Easy
Changed to a circle.
00:49:428 (1) - Spacing
...how the hell did I miss that? o_O

I guess that's all, nice job !
~Starz'd !

eldnl wrote:

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[Begginer]

00:16:912 (1,2) This pattern are hard to read for a new players.
Maybe, but I think I'll leave it.
00:24:654 (5) Sliders with more than 1 repeat are confusing to new players.
I think it's fine.
00:59:299 (3,4) Notes are very close do not go very well with easy diffs.
^
01:04:912 (1,2) Sliders with more than 1 repeat are confusing to new players. (But in this case is easy to read, I tell you just to consider it in the future maps)
^
01:32:783 (1,2,3,4) Sliders with more than 1 repeat are confusing to new players and this pattern is confusing.
^
01:50:977 (1,2,3) Notes are very close do not go very well with easy diffs.
Removed one note.

Remember that these difficulties are for new players, try not to do very confusing patterns next time.

[Normal]

4.14 Stars ? So much for a normal difficulty. (Remember, a good normal is always between 2.50 to 3.50 stars)
Normal is just a name. It's hard to balance out four difficulties, and Beginner/Normal/Hyper/Another are the names for IIDX.

00:33:557 (5) 1 Grid Left.
Messes up symmetry.
00:35:106 (5) 1 Grid Right.
^
00:42:074 (2,3) Spacing.
Intentional, otherwise I'd need to switch to grid 4 to make it centred.
00:42:848 (4,5) ^
^
00:58:525 (2,3) ^
^
01:32:783 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) Hard to read for a normal.
It's fine.
01:48:074 (2,3) Spacing.
Intentional.
02:00:461 (2,3) ^
^

[Hyper]

00:27:751 (1) Remove new combo.
It's fine.
00:36:848 (1) ^
^

Fine.

[Another]

00:13:816 (1~) Make a good organization of new combos.
It's fine.
00:19:235 (1,2) Spacing.
It breaks symmetry, but ok.
01:21:170 (1) Remove new combo.
I want four combos.
01:22:719 (1) ^
^
02:02:203 (11) Suggestion, Rides this note in the previous (8) ?
I'd like to, but it would break spacing.

Very nice, star.

nicktoons wrote:

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Beginner:
hm... seems ok.
Normal: (only some suggestions overall the map is fine)
00:50:396 - add circle?
Hmm... it sounds a bit strange for Normal.
00:51:945 - ^
^
00:52:912 (2) - delete circle?
I'd have to shuffle things around a bit, and I don't like the big gap. I think that would interrupt the flow a bit.
01:02:783 - add circle
I want to, but it might not fit for Normal.
01:04:332 - ^
^
01:39:945 - ^
^
01:41:493 - ^
^
01:42:461 (2) - del
Same as above.
01:52:332 - ^
^
01:53:880 - ^
^
Hyper:
hmm seems ok =/
Another:
liked playing this. interresting and hard =)
only 1 thing.
here.01:12:654 -
maybe make smth like that.
I like the current rhythm since it matches the music.
very nice song. star.

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

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[Easy]
Seems fine

[Normal]
00:43:235 seems a little ugly.May use three spots to make it?
other fine.
Done.

[Hyper]
00:37:622 Well.I got miss this part three times.
Fixed spacing.
01:01:816 add clap?
01:11:106 ^
I changed some hitsounds in this area.
01:54:461 ur.....This part seems a little overmap
Ima leave it.

[Another]
01:04:912 clap sudden disappered?
Added claps to the start and end.
02:02:009 may make like this?
Ok.

Nice storyboard.Also good map.(I can hardly find mistakes)
Star for it.

Zelos wrote:

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I decided to take your request in #modreqs

Folder:

Everything is good in here.

Please note all my mods are suggestions and can be freely ignored.

Beginner:

Everything is good here.

Normal:

00:23:493 (1) - grab the 2nd white box on this slider and move down 1, it makes the slider more symmetrical.
Done.

00:43:816 (7,8,1,2) - why not center this? it would look a bit neater.
I reworked this section to fix some strange spacing I didn't notice before.

01:11:880 (3) - grab the 2nd white box on this slider and mvoe to the left 1, it looks a little less un-even this way.
I copy pasted the previous slider instead.

Hyper:

Everything is good here.

Another:

Everything is good here too.

If I were MAT I would bubble.

Star.

Lizzehb wrote:

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Saw ya in #modreqs. hi!

[Beginner]

00:59:299 (3,4) - To difficult for an easy IMO.
Think I'll leave this.
01:46:912 (5) - I think this would look better if you lined it up with (4).
How do you mean? Stack it on the end of the slider? It looks nice, but I'm not sure if that's good for Easy. I'll hold off on it for now, but I might do it on my next submit.
01:48:848 (3,4) - To difficult for an easy IMO.
See above.

[Normal]

00:47:880 (1,1) - Spinner and slider are to close together in my opinion. Instead I would Start a slider at 00:47:880 and end it at 00:48:654 then place a note at 00:49:041 instead.
I think it's alright.

[Hyper]

Nada~

[Another]

-AI mod is saying you have to many jumps lol, this is not an issue just thought it was funny.
Jumps are fun!
I really like this song, I used to play this in DDR all the fucking time so please get this ranked! And GL. :3

STARS IN MY EYES IN THE COLOR OF BLUUEEEE. (Get it 'cause stars on here are blue....)

1. sky-colors.png is 1024x768, the SB image limit is 800x600

1. In my opinion, AR 3 would fit more than AR 2 here
2. 00:16:912 (1) - This slider is hided by 00:15:364 (3), it's not easy to read for new players, so I would suggest you to flip (1) and (2) horizontally to fix (Don't forget you will have to fiw the spacing of the next pattern).
3. 00:59:299 (3,4) - You should continue to use slider for 1/2, it's not a slow song so 1/2 is not recommanded in easy difficulties.
4. 01:48:848 (3,4) - As it's copy/paste, same remark as previous

1. 00:16:719 (9) - This circle sounds really bad, as you have based your pattern on white ticks, it's weird that the pattern ends on a red tick like that, it's not appropriate to the rest of the pattern. So move this circle to 00:16:912.
2. 00:19:622 (6) - This whistle is ugly, a clap would be better
3. 00:22:719 (7) - Obviously, the same thing for this one
4. 01:13:041 (1) - This spinner looks really late. Start it 1/2 earlier.

1. 00:33:945 (4) - Stacking this sliders kinda confusing, it feels like (4) is 1/2 later from (3) but it isn't.
2. 00:36:848 (1) - A new combo mark is not needed here, but it is at 00:37:622 (2).

1. 00:20:977 (7,1,2,3,4) - Wow, this pattern is totally unreadable, It's impossible to discern what is a slider or a circle in it. You ought to change it :/
2. 00:22:912 (4) - I know there's a beat here, but the song suggests the end of the pattern at 00:22:719 (3) with that loud beat. So this circle is kinda overmapped, it would be much better if you remove it !

KuraiPettan wrote:

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Yo

StoryBoard

1. sky-colors.png is 1024x768, the SB image limit is 800x600
   Fixed.

Beginner

1. In my opinion, AR 3 would fit more than AR 2 here
   k
2. 00:16:912 (1) - This slider is hided by 00:15:364 (3), it's not easy to read for new players, so I would suggest you to flip (1) and (2) horizontally to fix (Don't forget you will have to fiw the spacing of the next pattern).
   I flipped the first combo instead.
3. 00:59:299 (3,4) - You should continue to use slider for 1/2, it's not a slow song so 1/2 is not recommanded in easy difficulties.
   Reorganised it a bit.
4. 01:48:848 (3,4) - As it's copy/paste, same remark as previous
   ^

Normal

1. 00:16:719 (9) - This circle sounds really bad, as you have based your pattern on white ticks, it's weird that the pattern ends on a red tick like that, it's not appropriate to the rest of the pattern. So move this circle to 00:16:912.
   I want to keep it that way.
2. 00:19:622 (6) - This whistle is ugly, a clap would be better
   Agreed.
3. 00:22:719 (7) - Obviously, the same thing for this one
   I think I'll keep this one.
4. 01:13:041 (1) - This spinner looks really late. Start it 1/2 earlier.
   Ok.

Hyper

1. 00:33:945 (4) - Stacking this sliders kinda confusing, it feels like (4) is 1/2 later from (3) but it isn't.
   It's fine.
2. 00:36:848 (1) - A new combo mark is not needed here, but it is at 00:37:622 (2).
   Agreed.

Another

1. 00:20:977 (7,1,2,3,4) - Wow, this pattern is totally unreadable, It's impossible to discern what is a slider or a circle in it. You ought to change it :/
   Same rhythm, but got rid of some of the overlapping.
2. 00:22:912 (4) - I know there's a beat here, but the song suggests the end of the pattern at 00:22:719 (3) with that loud beat. So this circle is kinda overmapped, it would be much better if you remove it !
   I dunno, I think I like that trailing half note feel though.

That's all.

Star~

Ayeen wrote:

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Hi

Some minor mod from me :

General:
I think you should extent the map to 02:05:299, and if you decided to change it, it is more appropriate to make 4th kiai time end at 02:02:203
Nooooooooooo D:
First kiai time is more appropriate to end at 01:00:267, second kiai time start at 01:01:428. Well, if you dont like this suggestion, I think you should remove the starting kiai time coz it will become bad visual effect from kiai fountain.
I want the kiai fountain there D:
End 2nd kiai time at 01:12:654, i think it more appropriate here
^
Same like the first and second kiai time suggestion:
^
3rd kiai time should end at 01:49:816, it is more appropriate here imo or just delete the beginning of 4th kiai time if you dont want
^
4th Kiai time start at 01:50:977 and more appropriate end at 02:02:203
^

Beginner:
00:42:074 (2) remove clap at white tick. This will make it alike the other pattern like this one
No D:
02:02:203 (1) Spinner seem to short for beginner
One bar is fine.
Else should be good

Normal:
I Have no issue with your patterns

Hyper:
Same as normal

Another:
00:49:428 (1,2,3,4,5) maybe do DS 0.9 like the other pattern? (5) seem to a little too far in this stream btw
I think it's alright.
00:50:977 (1,2,3,4,5) ^ I think this is a CTRL +C, CTRL+V work here
What's wrong with that? D:
01:11:106 (1) remove new combo?
Ok.
01:11:493 (2) new combo here
I put it at 01:10:912 instead.

That all from me
<3

A good mapset as always

Aleks719 wrote:

SPOILER

General
fine! ...but... Are you sure in Artist/Title? It could be : dj TAKA - Colors (remixed by Yokota Shokai) and "eurobeat" into the tags
Nah I prefer it as it is.

Another
AR +1, since this diff is hardest
I think it's alright.
00:54:461 (5) - add clap?
Yep, that sounds much nicer.

Hyper
00:36:267 (2,3) - pretty confused jump
Might leave this one.
00:44:783 (1,2) - jump here too, try this pattern?
That looks really nice, but it turns one jump into two and don't really like the way it plays.
01:49:816 (1,2,3,4) - sounds a bit overclapped No more than that
Yeah, but I can't think of anything else to change it to.

Normal
"Normal" as name of diff sounds a bit strange in this mapset oO If i were you i named it "Advanced" or something like this
I'm locked into those diff names since the intention is to match IIDX.

Beginner
I can say only : OD 0 and 2.98 stars, meh, nvm :<
The way osu! calculates star ratings is crazy. I removed some sliders and the difficulty rating went up!

Mapset is pretty nice, without anything wrong, I'll give you a star

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

Hello, my little mod

SPOILER

[Beginer]
00:44:783 (1) - add finish > OK
00:47:880 (6) - ^ > No
00:49:428 (1) - 2 grid left and add finish > Only added finish
00:50:977 (3) - 1 grid right > No
01:26:590 (1) - add finish > No
01:38:977 (1) - ^ > OK
01:54:461 (3) - ^ > No

[Normal]
00:19:622 (6) - add whistle? > OK
00:25:041 (4) - add finish > No
00:49:428 (1) - ^ > OK
00:50:977 (1) - 2 grid left > No
00:51:751 (2,3) - 2 grid down? > No
01:34:332 (1) - 1 grid right > No
01:34:719 (2) - ^ > No
01:40:526 (1) - 2 grid right > No
01:41:300 (2,3) - 2 grid up > No
01:50:203 (2) - 2 grid left > No

[Hyper]
00:21:170 (2) - add whistle? > No
00:32:977 (2) - 2 grid down > No
00:34:526 (5) - ^ > No
00:37:622 (1) - add finish? > No
01:38:977 (1) - add finish > OK
02:00:461 (2,3) - 2 grid right > No

[Another]
00:25:816 (4) - Remove finish, add whistle? > OK
00:32:396 (1) - add finish > OK
00:32:783 (2) - 2 grid Left > Nope, intentional
00:33:170 (3) - ^ > ^
00:34:332 (2) - 2 grid right > ^
00:34:719 (3) - 2 grid right > ^
00:51:751 (2) - 1 grid right? > ...why? o_O
00:58:428 (2) - remove clap > Hmm... OK
01:03:364 (1) - 1 grid left > No
01:03:751 (2) - ^ > No
01:04:138 (3) - ^ > No
01:04:525 (4) - ^ > No
01:06:848 (1) - 1 grid left > No
01:23:493 (1) - 1 grid right > No
01:28:138 (1) - ^ > No
01:28:525 (2) - ^ > No
01:28:912 (3) - ^ > No
01:29:299 (4) - ^ > No
01:29:686 (1) - 1 grid right > No
01:38:977 (1) - add finish > OK
01:39:751 (2) - 1 grid right > ...why???

Good map :3

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Set tick rate 2 - it sounds better and makes the beats 1/4 after sliders much more readable
Done.
Comboing is all over the place in some sections: Try and keep combo length consistent, e.g. one combo per two bars of music.
Fixed.

Another
A lot of the 1/4 felt out of place, not because of not fitting the song but because the rest of the map is pretty slow paced in terms of rhythms and spacing :/

Hyper
01:54:461 (1,2,3,4) - Mmm, these were kinda random compared to the rhythms in the rest of the map
Fixed.

Beginner
00:58:719 (3,4,5) - The rhythm doesn't make a lot of sense and could easily throw a new player off
Simplified.
01:32:783 (1,2,3,4) - ^
^

Overall a pretty good map - just needs a little more polish before it can really shine. Ohohoho.
/me gets the cool shoe shine.

1. Timing: The bpm seems off. At first I was late on everything, and later in the song I was too early.
   Try using these settings, when I SSed hyper in the editor I had 8% mistimed with this (with your's I had over 30%):
   BPM 155,020
   Offset 1444
   It's best to double check with a pro timer, but I'm pretty sure these are much better than yours atleast.
   In any case, be really careful how you resnap your objects, some of the sliders broke for me, and don't forget to correctly place other timing sections you used.
2. Enable epilepsy warning for all diffs. Such color changing can still be messed up for some people. You have an intro anyway, so the warning won't cover anything that's meant to be played anyway.
3. Since you use a custom hitcircleoverlay.png you should add a line into the colors section of your .osu file which colors the slider border.
   If you want it white, here is how to do it:
   

   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

   If you want another color, just input the color's RGB value instead of those 255s. If you don't know how to do this, just ask and I can help you with that. You need to do this for every difficulty.
4. You have an extra .osb in your folder, remove it and full submit.

1. AR+1. The map looks much cleaner and more fun to play, plus you used AR7 in hyper.
2. 00:25:235 - It felt like there was note missing here, you should probably add it. Follows the music better.
3. 01:11:493 (4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern gets me every time. Don't get me wrong, it's correct, but to me it's slightly confusing. If you don't wanna change it, or don't know how to change it, I guess that's fine, but this played bad and I recommend to change this. Just as suggestion.
4. 01:50:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to ctrl+r each pair. As they are now, they kinda break the flow and are very difficult to hit, compared to anything else on the map. By doing this, the flow is much better in my opinion.

1. 01:45:171 (1) - Move this new combo to 01:45:558 (2) instead? You were following the vocal mostly, and this would make it more consistent, as the slider starts the next vocal section.

1. In general I think you have too many hitcircles and everything is too crowded. Slightly hard for a normal imo. For such hitcircle heavy normals, I suggest that you don't use OD higher than 3, as new players might get tired clicking all that, and destroy their accuracy as they play.
2. 00:47:880 (1,1) - In all fairness, I think this is too hard for a normal. If it wasn't such fast paced all the time I would be fine with this, but this is kinda too much. What I think you should do is remove the slider completely and extend the spinner to where the slider starts. With that small break between the spinner and the upcoming circle, the map still sounds nice but the new people have some time to readjust their hand.
3. 00:52:912 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern sounds nice, but imo it's not something that should be used in a normal. Maybe try something like this? It still sounds nice and is much easier to play.
4. 01:05:493 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing pretty much, same suggestion too. Although this one isn't as bad because it has a slider first. Should just make some consistency in your map, or variety, whichever you prefer, but try to keep it as simple as possible.
5. 01:54:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

1. This diff has different kiai times than your other diffs. Looking at the map, it makes sense kinda, but it should still be changed, if for anything, because in taiko, those areas will stop glowing, even if there are no notes. Change it to how you have in your other diffs.
2. Contrary to what RJ said about tickrate in his post, I strongly suggest tickrate 1 for this diff. You didn't use almost any 1/2 in the map, and with such slow and short sliders, those ticks look really ugly. I don't think that the ticking sound which is not everywhere is worth destroying the visual appeal of the map, so I recommend to change tickrate to 1 for this diff.
3. 01:01:428 - Maybe add a note to connect the two sections? It felt kinda empty like this. There is a vocal on this spot anyway so it's okay, plus you used it in your 2nd kiai like this as well (01:50:977 (1)).

1. Skin: Since you have a custom hitcircle and the overlay, you need a reversearrow.png in your set as well. If you don't have a custom one, use the one from the template skin. This is required because not everyone uses default skin, and their reversearrows might be different.

lolcubes wrote:

SPOILER

Hello there!

[General]:

1. Timing: The bpm seems off. At first I was late on everything, and later in the song I was too early.
   Try using these settings, when I SSed hyper in the editor I had 8% mistimed with this (with your's I had over 30%):
   BPM 155,020
   Offset 1444
   It's best to double check with a pro timer, but I'm pretty sure these are much better than yours atleast.
   In any case, be really careful how you resnap your objects, some of the sliders broke for me, and don't forget to correctly place other timing sections you used.
2. Enable epilepsy warning for all diffs. Such color changing can still be messed up for some people. You have an intro anyway, so the warning won't cover anything that's meant to be played anyway.
   Done.
3. Since you use a custom hitcircleoverlay.png you should add a line into the colors section of your .osu file which colors the slider border.
   If you want it white, here is how to do it:
   

   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

   If you want another color, just input the color's RGB value instead of those 255s. If you don't know how to do this, just ask and I can help you with that. You need to do this for every difficulty.
   Done.
4. You have an extra .osb in your folder, remove it and full submit.
   Done.

[Another]:

1. AR+1. The map looks much cleaner and more fun to play, plus you used AR7 in hyper.
   Done.
2. 00:25:235 - It felt like there was note missing here, you should probably add it. Follows the music better.
   Done.
3. 01:11:493 (4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern gets me every time. Don't get me wrong, it's correct, but to me it's slightly confusing. If you don't wanna change it, or don't know how to change it, I guess that's fine, but this played bad and I recommend to change this. Just as suggestion.
   Hmmm I think I'll leave it for now.
4. 01:50:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to ctrl+r each pair. As they are now, they kinda break the flow and are very difficult to hit, compared to anything else on the map. By doing this, the flow is much better in my opinion.
   Done.

[Hyper]:

1. 01:45:171 (1) - Move this new combo to 01:45:558 (2) instead? You were following the vocal mostly, and this would make it more consistent, as the slider starts the next vocal section.
   Done.

[Normal]:

1. In general I think you have too many hitcircles and everything is too crowded. Slightly hard for a normal imo. For such hitcircle heavy normals, I suggest that you don't use OD higher than 3, as new players might get tired clicking all that, and destroy their accuracy as they play.
   Changed OD to 3.
2. 00:47:880 (1,1) - In all fairness, I think this is too hard for a normal. If it wasn't such fast paced all the time I would be fine with this, but this is kinda too much. What I think you should do is remove the slider completely and extend the spinner to where the slider starts. With that small break between the spinner and the upcoming circle, the map still sounds nice but the new people have some time to readjust their hand.
   Done.
3. 00:52:912 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern sounds nice, but imo it's not something that should be used in a normal. Maybe try something like this? It still sounds nice and is much easier to play.
   Done.
4. 01:05:493 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing pretty much, same suggestion too. Although this one isn't as bad because it has a slider first. Should just make some consistency in your map, or variety, whichever you prefer, but try to keep it as simple as possible.
   Removed a note and extended the slider.
5. 01:54:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   ^

[Beginner]:

1. This diff has different kiai times than your other diffs. Looking at the map, it makes sense kinda, but it should still be changed, if for anything, because in taiko, those areas will stop glowing, even if there are no notes. Change it to how you have in your other diffs.
   Done.
2. Contrary to what RJ said about tickrate in his post, I strongly suggest tickrate 1 for this diff. You didn't use almost any 1/2 in the map, and with such slow and short sliders, those ticks look really ugly. I don't think that the ticking sound which is not everywhere is worth destroying the visual appeal of the map, so I recommend to change tickrate to 1 for this diff.
   Done.
3. 01:01:428 - Maybe add a note to connect the two sections? It felt kinda empty like this. There is a vocal on this spot anyway so it's okay, plus you used it in your 2nd kiai like this as well (01:50:977 (1)).
   Done.

I guess that's it. Enjoyable maps, just some tiny tweaks needed.
While the timing can't be felt that much during playing (on hyper and below that is) because of low OD, it definitely feels completely off in Another.
Your normal is kinda too hard, would be best to be on a lookout where you can remove some notes to make it easier, constant 1/2 bashing can be tiresome for new players.
It's hard to balance four difficulties, and I need to use those diff names if I want to keep with the IIDX standard.

Overall very nice mapset!
<3

EDIT: Almost forgot heh.

[P.S. General]:

1. Skin: Since you have a custom hitcircle and the overlay, you need a reversearrow.png in your set as well. If you don't have a custom one, use the one from the template skin. This is required because not everyone uses default skin, and their reversearrows might be different.
   Done.

Hopefully you see this addition.

Lybydose wrote:

Offset is 1433

lolcubes wrote:

I guess I am still human and sleep deprivation is bad when you time stuff. Thankfully Lyby gave us a hand and solved the matter in question.
Here's your bubble!

ouranhshc wrote:

can't wait to see this get ranked

osuplayer111 wrote:

Ranked~

Sakura Hana wrote:

And congrats Samah!