This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 22 de marzo de 2010 at 12:53:36

Artist: Haruka Shimotsuki
Title: Hartes ciel, melenas walasye.
Source: Ar tonelico II
Tags: world of love loving people hymnos game
BPM: 85
Filesize: 11041kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,52 stars, 110 notes)
2. Hard (4,47 stars, 573 notes)
3. Normal+ (4,07 stars, 343 notes)

Download: Haruka Shimotsuki - Hartes ciel, melenas walasye.
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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26/10/2010
*YES Normal again =), finished pliss test it, but I already check it a lot of times (Normal starts 00:45:176 - Finish 03:38:117)
*all distances are intentional so please no mod this, thx

If U use MixMeister.. well no thx, first play the song!

06/03/2010
*sonnyc mod rdy
*Insane 100% please check combos :3 (Insane starts 00:00:000 - Finish 04:12:235)

07/03/2010
*Shulin mod rdy in normal, AND REALY SPECIAL THX FOR YOUR MOD =)
*+minor fixes
*Shulin mod rdy in Insane now Hard+, THX again
*NEW easy (easy starts 00:00:000 - Finish 02:27:226, please test it i can't make it more easy xDD
*Hard+ fixed and +sliders :3, added time x2 img
*+minor fix

08/03/2010
*Hard+ fix and thx to onigiri-lol for test the song a lot of times xD
*easy space fix
*Auto fix, lol?

09/03/2010
*Garven mod rdy
*orioncomet mod rdy
*normal -> normal+, hard+ -> hard :X

10/03/2010
*Colin Hou Mod rdy
*Dusty Mod rdy

11/03/2010
*Breeze mod rdy
*al2e10 mod rdy
*Auto mod rdy xD

12/03/2010
*xxheroxx mod rdy
*xxheroxx mod v2.0 rdy

13/03/2010
*FishHook Nazi mod rdy thx :3

14/03/2010
*YGOkid8 mod rdy

15/03/2010
*Beuchi-chan Mod rdy
*Shulin Mod rdy, you are always welcome, thx =)

19/03/2010
-Auto mod rdy :3
-AngelHoney Mod rdy

22/03/2010
-VanMoNky Mod rdy

Title: Hartes ciel, melenas walasye
Tags: world of love loving people hymmnos hymnos

[Hard]
The hitsounds are too loud, they drown out the music; in the Timing panel you can move the volume slider down to half

In Song Setup, you can move around the difficulty sliders; I think Overall Difficulty should maybe go 1 right and maybe Circle Size should go 1 tick left.

The spacing is weird. Sometimes, the spacing is good, but sometimes, your hitcircles are too close together. If it isn't a fast song with lots of streams (this one is a slow song), usually hitcircles shouldn't be overlapping.

01:54:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here is good spacing, most of the notes aren't overlapping each other.
00:45:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - However, this spacing is ugly, because most of the notes overlap each other. Make the distance between these ones the same as in the above screenshot.
00:47:294 (9,1) - This spacing is bad spacing, because there's the same distance on the screen even though in the music they're very far apart.

Finally, I like the heart sliders, those are nice.

thx

checking and repairing....

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beatmap fixed, waiting for new comments

Hello Astom
This song is one of my favorite artonelico series song very nice

[General]
- Change the title and tags just like in Dusty's post and also add game in the tags
- A 4 minutes 36 second song is very long for some people, consider cutting the song.

[Normal]
- Maybe add another hit sound just like you did in hard diff
02:30:588 - 02:53:294 This is a very long break consider mapping this part
03:16:235 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This stream of spinner is very tiring, try using a combination of spinner and slider instead, remember that the spinner should have minimum of 2000 bonus score in auto play.

[Hard]
Okay the problem that I notice in this diff is practically the same with normal
There are also some nazi issue but I'm not good with nazi, so find someone else you can go to here for help http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60 Read the rules carefully

That's all I can help you
Good luck

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hello Astom
This song is one of my favorite artonelico series song very nice

[General]
- Change the title and tags just like in Dusty's post and also add game in the tags
- A 4 minutes 36 second song is very long for some people, consider cutting the song.

[Normal]
- Maybe add another hit sound just like you did in hard diff
02:30:588 - 02:53:294 This is a very long break consider mapping this part
03:16:235 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This stream of spinner is very tiring, try using a combination of spinner and slider instead, remember that the spinner should have minimum of 2000 bonus score in auto play.

[Hard]
Okay the problem that I notice in this diff is practically the same with normal
There are also some nazi issue but I'm not good with nazi, so find someone else you can go to here for help http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60 Read the rules carefully

That's all I can help you
Good luck

nazi xD? I will review

thanks for the comments

Nice map Uncle Astom ~!!
;3

Yay Re-Check

The stream are much better now, but there are some problem

- Are you sure you didn't cut the song ? cause it's very long IMO
- Okay you still didn't change the tags yet, you should change it. Change the tags into world of love loving people hymnos game and delete the world of love loving people in the title
- Set the preview point at 02:19:058 to do this click Timing--> Set current position as preview point
- The combo is a mess but I'm not good in combo you should post your map in the queue forum

OK that's all I guess keep up the good work

Sallad4ever wrote:

Yay Re-Check

The stream are much better now, but there are some problem

- Are you sure you didn't cut the song ? cause it's very long IMO
- Okay you still didn't change the tags yet, you should change it. Change the tags into world of love loving people hymnos game and delete the world of love loving people in the title
- Set the preview point at 02:19:058 to do this click Timing--> Set current position as preview point
- The combo is a mess but I'm not good in combo you should post your map in the queue forum

OK that's all I guess keep up the good work

- Set the preview point at 02:19:058 to do this click Timing--> Set current position as preview point rdy
- Are you sure you didn't cut the song ? cause it's very long IMO Maybe I can do another difficulty shorter? I like the whole song =)
-Okay you still didn't change the tags yet, you should change it. Change the tags into world of love loving people hymnos game and delete the world of love loving people in the title some problems but is ready
-The combo is a mess but I'm not good in combo you should post your map in the queue forum thanks for the suggestion


thanks for the comments

Overall :
Remove this extra .osb file"Haruka Shimotsuki - Hartes ciel, melenas walasye. (World of Love, Loving People) (Astom).osb"
BPM: 114.380
Offset: 11,340(i'm not sure)
dont forget resnap all note
Obviously,the speed of rhythm bemcore faster and faster. you need multi-bpms...
well.i'm not good at measuring the multi timings...so i can't help you more xD

[Normal]
make slidertick decrease to 1.0
00:28:235 (1,2,3) - remove clap.(clap is not suitable for this part.only whistle fit it.of course, you can add clap in some highlight of the music)
00:30:823 (7,1,1) - ^
00:53:647 (1,1,1) - remove clap and add whistle
01:17:647 (1) - make slider end on 01:20:470
00:55:764 (1) - make it end on 00:56:117
00:56:470 (2) - make it end on 00:56:823
02:49:058 (2,3) - remove clap and add whistle
02:50:470 (5) - ^
03:20:470 (1) - too short and too hard for[Normal](you can use this length of spinner on [Hard/Insane],but [Normal/Easy] is unrankable pattern)
change all spinners like this.
04:31:882 (1) - replace the slider with spinner(it'll sound better and looks more beautiful)
04:36:117 (1) - remove whistle and finish.i'd make this spinner totally silence

[Hard]
make sildertick decrease to 1.0
you added too many clap in this dff ;_;
remove some clap and use more soft-whistle : )

Star

gdeath wrote:

Overall :
Remove this extra .osb file"Haruka Shimotsuki - Hartes ciel, melenas walasye. (World of Love, Loving People) (Astom).osb"
BPM: 114.380
Offset: 11,340(i'm not sure)
dont forget resnap all note
Obviously,the speed of rhythm bemcore faster and faster. you need multi-bpms...
well.i'm not good at measuring the multi timings...so i can't help you more xD

[Normal]
make slidertick decrease to 1.0
00:28:235 (1,2,3) - remove clap.(clap is not suitable for this part.only whistle fit it.of course, you can add clap in some highlight of the music)
00:30:823 (7,1,1) - ^
00:53:647 (1,1,1) - remove clap and add whistle
01:17:647 (1) - make slider end on 01:20:470
00:55:764 (1) - make it end on 00:56:117
00:56:470 (2) - make it end on 00:56:823
02:49:058 (2,3) - remove clap and add whistle
02:50:470 (5) - ^
03:20:470 (1) - too short and too hard for[Normal](you can use this length of spinner on [Hard/Insane],but [Normal/Easy] is unrankable pattern)
change all spinners like this.
04:31:882 (1) - replace the slider with spinner(it'll sound better and looks more beautiful)
04:36:117 (1) - remove whistle and finish.i'd make this spinner totally silence

[Hard]
make sildertick decrease to 1.0
you added too many clap in this dff ;_;
remove some clap and use more soft-whistle : )

Star

thx, working on the suggestions =)

Edit:

-Obviously,the speed of rhythm bemcore faster and faster. you need multi-bpms...
well.i'm not good at measuring the multi timings...so i can't help you more xD I use "beat snap divisor" in 1/6 and 85 BPM works good =/

[normal]
-00:55:764 (1) - make it end on 00:56:117
00:56:470 (2) - make it end on 00:56:823 I think they are fine as they are

[Hard]
-make sildertick decrease to 1.0 I did not realize this change in [hard]

[Normal] 100%
[Hard] 100%

General:

-- Resize combo burst it should not exceed 500 pixels width.
-- Cursor is distracting.
-- Find a better BG, it's pretty low res and there are plenty of images out there.
-- The hitcircle overlay looks bad on the sliders.
-- hit100 and hit100k look like the same image...
-- The return arrow on the slider is difficult to see with the pink combo color, imo remove pink combo color and pick another.
-- Take the "[]" out of tags.
-- The spinner is somewhat distracting when you actually spin it.
-- Your strobes are out of sync with the music.
-- I'll come back and check the timing later ~

First Stage:

-- Remove the countdown.

00:15:529 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:352 (1) - ^
00:19:764 (3) - New combo here.
00:28:941 (4,5,6) - Maybe a little too confusing for easy. Reposition 5 imo.
00:51:529 (4) - Confusing change in rhythm for easy because you follow the vocal for the rest of the combo.
00:59:294 (1) - Confusing rhythm ~ same reason as ^
01:01:882 (6) - New combo
01:13:411 (2) - Same about the rhythm change.
01:17:647 (1) - Confusing slider, redraw it the you can't see one of the swirls.
01:24:705 -- Unused timing section
01:31:058 ^ etc etc go delete everything that isn't used after the difficulty is finished.

Second Stage:

-- I'm confused why does this start later than Easy? Actually... why does this start where Easy left off?
-- Remove the countdown.
-- Delete the unused inheriting sections before the map starts.
-- Need a skip button at the end.
-- Preview point is different to the others.

01:30:352 (1) - Ninja spinner is a bit annoying, spinner so fast makes the next note hard to see.

Not bad, some of the new combo spam is a little unnecessary.

Final Stage:

-- Hm, so now I get the play the last part of the song...
-- + 1 on circle size imo.
-- Minus 1 on the hp drain.

02:47:647 -- Weird gaps in the song, I just watch the HP bar drain.
02:50:470 ^

Well I understand why you'd want to split up a very long song but into 3 different difficulties but I'm not sure if its a great idea. Well that's all for now I'll come back and star later

1- I don't like the skin
The external circles of the circles are too transparent imo. you can't properly know if the approach circle is on or not. the slider ball is huh. the hticircles seems the same. the spinner is just a circle with image in.
the cursor is just 'what'.

2- How is that mapped?
Why is this cut in parts in all diffs? i really don't like that.

Though it seems well mapped, i can't mod this for the moment. do something about that.

i like my skin TT_TT well okay working.... this is my first song so be patient with me

PD fallen down is the second one

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Resize combo burst it should not exceed 500 pixels width.rdy
-- Cursor is distracting. rdy, new one now :3
-- Find a better BG, it's pretty low res and there are plenty of images out there. rdy
-- The hitcircle overlay looks bad on the sliders.rdy
-- hit100 and hit100k look like the same image...rdy
-- The return arrow on the slider is difficult to see with the pink combo color, imo remove pink combo color and pick another.rdy
-- Take the "[]" out of tags.rdy
-- The spinner is somewhat distracting when you actually spin it.rdy
-- Your strobes are out of sync with the music.rdy
-- I'll come back and check the timing later ~thanks, I'm reviewing this but I need some help =)

First Stage:

-- Remove the countdown.

00:15:529 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:352 (1) - ^
00:19:764 (3) - New combo here.
00:28:941 (4,5,6) - Maybe a little too confusing for easy. Reposition 5 imo.this is normal =) not easy
00:51:529 (4) - Confusing change in rhythm for easy because you follow the vocal for the rest of the combo.this is normal =) not easy
00:59:294 (1) - Confusing rhythm ~ same reason as ^this is normal =) not easy
01:01:882 (6) - New combo rdy
01:13:411 (2) - Same about the rhythm change. this is normal =) not easy
01:17:647 (1) - Confusing slider, redraw it the you can't see one of the swirls.rdy
01:24:705 -- Unused timing section
01:31:058 ^ etc etc go delete everything that isn't used after the difficulty is finished.

Second Stage:

-- I'm confused why does this start later than Easy? Actually... why does this start where Easy left off?because the song is too long, I already mapped the full song tree times (normal, hard, insane) but I decide make this in 3 shoot because have people with complaints
-- Remove the countdown.rdy
-- Delete the unused inheriting sections before the map starts.rdy
-- Need a skip button at the end.??
-- Preview point is different to the others.rdy

01:30:352 (1) - Ninja spinner is a bit annoying, spinner so fast makes the next note hard to see.try now with the new skin

Not bad, some of the new combo spam is a little unnecessary. thx =)

Final Stage:

-- Hm, so now I get the play the last part of the song...yea xD
-- + 1 on circle size imo. rdy
-- Minus 1 on the hp drain. rdy

02:47:647 -- Weird gaps in the song, I just watch the HP bar drain.
02:50:470 ^

Well I understand why you'd want to split up a very long song but into 3 different difficulties but I'm not sure if its a great idea. Well that's all for now I'll come back and star later

Well, there is still a reason to separate the song, at the end of this there are several changes of BPM, therefore, I prefer this section only in insane.

If u can help me with the changes in BPM I really would be grateful

Astom wrote:

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Resize combo burst it should not exceed 500 pixels width.rdy
-- Cursor is distracting. rdy, new one now :3
-- Find a better BG, it's pretty low res and there are plenty of images out there. rdy
-- The hitcircle overlay looks bad on the sliders.rdy
-- hit100 and hit100k look like the same image...rdy
-- The return arrow on the slider is difficult to see with the pink combo color, imo remove pink combo color and pick another.rdy
-- Take the "[]" out of tags.rdy
-- The spinner is somewhat distracting when you actually spin it.rdy
-- Your strobes are out of sync with the music.rdy
-- I'll come back and check the timing later ~thanks, I'm reviewing this but I need some help =)

First Stage:

-- Remove the countdown.

00:15:529 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:352 (1) - ^
00:19:764 (3) - New combo here.
00:28:941 (4,5,6) - Maybe a little too confusing for easy. Reposition 5 imo.this is normal =) not easy
00:51:529 (4) - Confusing change in rhythm for easy because you follow the vocal for the rest of the combo.this is normal =) not easy
00:59:294 (1) - Confusing rhythm ~ same reason as ^this is normal =) not easy
01:01:882 (6) - New combo rdy
01:13:411 (2) - Same about the rhythm change. this is normal =) not easy
01:17:647 (1) - Confusing slider, redraw it the you can't see one of the swirls.rdy
01:24:705 -- Unused timing section
01:31:058 ^ etc etc go delete everything that isn't used after the difficulty is finished.

Second Stage:

-- I'm confused why does this start later than Easy? Actually... why does this start where Easy left off?because the song is too long, I already mapped the full song tree times (normal, hard, insane) but I decide make this in 3 shoot because have people with complaints
-- Remove the countdown.rdy
-- Delete the unused inheriting sections before the map starts.rdy
-- Need a skip button at the end.??
-- Preview point is different to the others.rdy

01:30:352 (1) - Ninja spinner is a bit annoying, spinner so fast makes the next note hard to see.try now with the new skin

Not bad, some of the new combo spam is a little unnecessary. thx =)

Final Stage:

-- Hm, so now I get the play the last part of the song...yea xD
-- + 1 on circle size imo. rdy
-- Minus 1 on the hp drain. rdy

02:47:647 -- Weird gaps in the song, I just watch the HP bar drain.
02:50:470 ^

Well I understand why you'd want to split up a very long song but into 3 different difficulties but I'm not sure if its a great idea. Well that's all for now I'll come back and star later

Well, there is still a reason to separate the song, at the end of this there are several changes of BPM, therefore, I prefer this section only in insane.

If u can help me with the changes in BPM I really would be grateful

Nice the song x3

consider make hitsounds louder (just a little)

[Second stage]
02:04:941 (8) - finish 1/3 beat later, sounds better imo

[Final Stage]
02:41:882 (x) - Here,
02:42:588 (x) - here,
02:43:294 (x) - here,
02:44:235 (x) - and here, it feels like there's a note missing. the player can bue confused as he doesnt really know what part of the music the streams are based on.
04:15:726 (2) - put on 1/3
04:22:305 (1) - unsnapped
04:26:715 (7) - ^

the song is <3

Sushi971 wrote:

consider make hitsounds louder (just a little)

[Second stage]
02:04:941 (8) - finish 1/3 beat later, sounds better imordy

[Final Stage]
02:41:882 (x) - Here,rdy
02:42:588 (x) - here,rdy
02:43:294 (x) - here,rdy
02:44:235 (x) - and here, it feels like there's a note missing. the player can bue confused as he doesnt really know what part of the music the streams are based on.rdy
04:15:726 (2) - put on 1/3rdy
04:22:305 (1) - unsnapped??
04:26:715 (7) - ^??

the song is <3

thx =)

I don't like these cuts between the difficulties... are they necessary? You should map this song without them imo
Also, spacing is weird :S you should make the circles and the sliders more symmetrical, don't place them randomly on the grid.

[First Stage]

Slider Velocity: 120

[Second Stage]

Slider Velocity: 130

[Final Stage]

02:42:588 (6) - New combo
02:43:294 (11) - ^
02:43:764 (14) - ^
02:46:117 (5) - ^

Well... the mapping is good, nothing wrong with it, I might even say your a good mapper.
However, the map and song is uninteresting. All three difficulties. Sorry

Copy paste into timing points in notepad:

11300.8182773109,705.882352941176,4,2,0,26,1,0
252715.684210526,631.578947368421,4,2,0,26,1,0
257737,582.52427184466,4,2,0,26,1,0
260067,606.060606060606,4,2,0,26,1,0
262520.504672897,560.747663551402,4,2,0,100,1,0
266977,495.867768595041,4,2,0,100,1,0
268962,689.655172413793,4,2,0,100,1,0
271950,689.655172413793,4,2,0,100,1,0
276127.384615385,461.538461538462,4,2,0,100,1,0

This is by no means perfect, timing dynamic bpm isn't easy, but this timing should allow you to map it (imo just don't map the end it would be a lot easier ~) but imo you should pick one part of the song and map three difficulties for it like xxheroxx and Sushi have already said, that way you could skip the end.

Anyway I'll recheck the rest later.

Shulin wrote:

Copy paste into timing points in notepad:

11300.8182773109,705.882352941176,4,2,0,26,1,0
252715.684210526,631.578947368421,4,2,0,26,1,0
257737,582.52427184466,4,2,0,26,1,0
260067,606.060606060606,4,2,0,26,1,0
262520.504672897,560.747663551402,4,2,0,100,1,0
266977,495.867768595041,4,2,0,100,1,0
268962,689.655172413793,4,2,0,100,1,0
271950,689.655172413793,4,2,0,100,1,0
276127.384615385,461.538461538462,4,2,0,100,1,0

This is by no means perfect, timing dynamic bpm isn't easy, but this timing should allow you to map it (imo just don't map the end it would be a lot easier ~) but imo you should pick one part of the song and map three difficulties for it like xxheroxx and Sushi have already said, that way you could skip the end.

Anyway I'll recheck the rest later.

okey okey I understad... u know?, I remap ALL AGAIN

Hi

Normal

• 01:25:882 (8) New combo
  02:29:647 (10) Not a good idea in a Normal
  02:44:941 (8) New combo
  03:07:058 (6) Spacing

Star

sonnyc wrote:

Hi

Normal

• 01:25:882 (8) New combo rdy
  02:29:647 (10) Not a good idea in a Normal mm ok, rdy
  02:44:941 (8) New combo rdy
  03:07:058 (6) Spacingrdy

Star

^^ thx

Star! para la song ^^
algunas cosas por areglar que te lo digan los que saben , yo no me manejo mucho xP pero engeneral esta buena
mucha suerte ^^

Sorry for the delay.

General:

-- Add an Easier difficulty (3.5 stars or under) since this is a relaxing song it should be easy to make ^^
-- The skin is looking much better now.
-- Delete the SB when the map has finished.

Normal:

-- There are quite a few overlaps, maybe change the direction of some combo's so they overlap less.

00:47:294 (9,1) - Spacing?
01:00:235 (2,3,4,5) - Slightly confusing maybe rearrange them so they are not all clustered around the slider?
01:04:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Spacing? Compare with 01:01:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:14:117 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe move this in a different direction to minimise overlap?

Insane:

-- Maybe increase the circle size?
-- Well... this really isn't insane imo it doesn't flow as well as normal, I'd reccommend using bigger circlesand spreading this out a bit more and the score really comes from the length and absence of lots of sliders. Actually Normal would proibably suffice as you easiest difficulty but it's up to you ^^

00:11:294 (2) - Move this from under the slider?
00:30:117 (8,1,2,3,4) - These overlaps don't look so great, spread those sliders out a little?
01:17:647 (10) - You could try and make this symmetrical if you wanted to XD
01:23:647 (2,3,4) - Way too confusing respace this please.
01:25:764 (1,2,3) - Doesn't fit the music.
01:26:117 (4) - Weird jump.
01:45:882 -- You may need a x2 warning here.
02:05:411 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - The new combos aren't really necessary here.
02:07:764 (1) - Reshape?
02:11:294 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:16:941 (1) - ^
02:29:411 (9) - Confusing shape.
02:41:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - These 1/6 streams don't fit that well imo. Also add some hitsounds if you want to keep it because its hard to follow with the low volume soft (maybe increase the audio volume?)
02:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ The spacing is probably too close to.
02:49:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Same thing remember add hitsounds.
03:21:176 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:21:411 (2) - Delete?

That's all for now, there's still a bit more modding to be done here so make sure to ask for more opinions but I can see you've put effort into remapping this so here's a star

Shulin wrote:

Sorry for the delay.

General:

-- Add an Easier difficulty (3.5 stars or under) since this is a relaxing song it should be easy to make ^^mm ok
-- The skin is looking much better now.thx
-- Delete the SB when the map has finished.ok

Normal:

-- There are quite a few overlaps, maybe change the direction of some combo's so they overlap less.ok

00:47:294 (9,1) - Spacing?I did it on purpose, but I can change it
01:00:235 (2,3,4,5) - Slightly confusing maybe rearrange them so they are not all clustered around the slider?rdy
01:04:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Spacing? Compare with 01:01:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - made on purpose, but no problems in change it
01:14:117 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe move this in a different direction to minimise overlap?mmm ok

Insane:

-- Maybe increase the circle size?ok and rdy
-- Well... this really isn't insane imo it doesn't flow as well as normal, I'd reccommend using bigger circlesand spreading this out a bit more and the score really comes from the length and absence of lots of sliders. Actually Normal would proibably suffice as you easiest difficulty but it's up to you ^^I change it to Hard+, and yea I make a review en the sliders

00:11:294 (2) - Move this from under the slider?rdy
00:30:117 (8,1,2,3,4) - These overlaps don't look so great, spread those sliders out a little?mm rdy
01:17:647 (10) - You could try and make this symmetrical if you wanted to XDI try but it's hard to do hahaha xD
01:23:647 (2,3,4) - Way too confusing respace this please.rdy
01:25:764 (1,2,3) - Doesn't fit the music. i follow a instrument :3 listen again
01:26:117 (4) - Weird jump.rdy
01:45:882 -- You may need a x2 warning here.ok
02:05:411 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - The new combos aren't really necessary here.rdy
02:07:764 (1) - Reshape? naa xD
02:11:294 (1) - Remove new combo. rdy
02:16:941 (1) - ^ rdy
02:29:411 (9) - Confusing shape.rdy

fixed... I haven't problems with this but i change it
02:41:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - These 1/6 streams don't fit that well imo. Also add some hitsounds if you want to keep it because its hard to follow with the low volume soft (maybe increase the audio volume?)
02:43:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ The spacing is probably too close to.
02:49:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Same thing remember add hitsounds.

03:21:176 (1) - Remove new combo.rdy
03:21:411 (2) - Delete? naa, i like the "la la" xDD

That's all for now, there's still a bit more modding to be done here so make sure to ask for more opinions but I can see you've put effort into remapping this so here's a star thx =)

Thx for u help and time ;3

[Easy]
00:48:705 This slider sticks out from all the other sliders. Try to smooth the curve out a bit.
01:28:941 This spinner's end feels really close to the next set of notes for an easy mode, though there doesn't feel like there's a better place for it. Maybe just map some more regular beats in place of this spinner.
02:11:294 ^

[Normal]
02:52:941 Move this down 1 and left 1 grid (level 3)

[Hard]
231 second play time... that's getting pretty long, especially with only one break period.
04:12:235 [4] This beat feels like it shouldn't be there. The rhythmic phrase off the vocals feels like it should end at [3]. If you want to finish that visual pattern, just steal one from the previous combo's stacks.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:705 This slider sticks out from all the other sliders. Try to smooth the curve out a bit.mmm.. rdy
01:28:941 This spinner's end feels really close to the next set of notes for an easy mode, though there doesn't feel like there's a better place for it. Maybe just map some more regular beats in place of this spinner.I consider it, but I don't think there will be a problem
02:11:294 ^same

[Normal]
02:52:941 Move this down 1 and left 1 grid (level 3)rdy

[Hard]
231 second play time... that's getting pretty long, especially with only one break period.yea maybe
04:12:235 [4] This beat feels like it shouldn't be there. The rhythmic phrase off the vocals feels like it should end at [3]. If you want to finish that visual pattern, just steal one from the previous combo's stacks.I follow the claps no vocals (in this part)

thx =)