1. Collab (4,38 stars, 255 notes)
2. Easy (1,17 stars, 127 notes)
3. Hard (4,75 stars, 391 notes)
4. Normal (2,8 stars, 209 notes)

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Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 130.000
Offset: 180

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shikyu wrote:

mod4mod request. I just mod easy and normal diff (since it has finished). OK let's start

[General]
there are timings that not snapped (not stacked on a bar), fix it

[Easy]
00:07:564 - (1) reduce 1 repeat
00:19:333 - (1) fix slider (some parts closed by HP bar)
00:23:949 - (1) lenghten until 00:26:026
00:47:949 - (3) shorten until 00:49:795
00:50:718 - (1) lenghten until 00:54:641
01:06:872 - (1) move to 01:06:641
01:11:949 - (3) shorten until 01:14:718
01:49:756 - (1) lenghten until 01:42:180
02:33:872 - (4) new combo?

[Normal]
00:20:718 - (4,5) fix sliders
00:41:603 - (1) lenghten until 00:42:410
00:42:410 - (2) delete note
00:47:949 - (3) fix slider
00:57:410 - (1) delete some finish hitsounds, annoying
01:00:180 - (4) add clap at the first white bar
01:01:564 - (4) ^
01:11:141 - (1) move to 01:11:026, reduce 1 repeat, lenghten until 01:11:487
00:33:410 - (1) note doesn't snapped
02:02:256 - (1) move to 02:02:487, shorten until 02:02:949
02:18:526 - (2) move to 02:18:614

Hope it useful

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

General
00:26:949 (X) - Kiai time shouldn't be here. It should be at 00:26:026 Maybe 00:26:256


Easy
00:14:206 (4) - Aligned this with (2)
00:19:333 (1) - Make this a circle instead of this
00:26:026 (1) - Add finish
00:31:564 (1) - Too near to (5)
01:36:641 (5) - One grid left
01:59:719 (1) - Too far from previous combo (2)
02:20:487 (1) - One grid left
At least you can follow the rhythm~

Normal
00:43:975 (1,2,3) - Straighten this combo
01:25:664 (5) - Add finish remove clap
02:02:487 to 02:16:875 - If you want to do a jumping section here, at least balance the spacing
Also, try not to let notes to be overlapped

Hard
This is seems fine~
Except for overlapping notes
_____________________________________________________
Good luck~
My map is at the link below as you promised MOD4MOD

Oh thanks!!!! First of all I am going to finish an easy diff to my other beatmap, after this I'll mod your beatmap

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1. Fix kiai times please in all diffs:
2. The first on the white big line, precisaly start it at 00:26:095 and end at 00:55:633 >.<
3. The second start at 01:17:787 and end at 01:47:325
4. The third 02:24:249 to 02:57:479
5. About combo colours don't use black and add a red plz

1. 00:09:248 (2) - Fix the spacing with distance snap, move it at x240 y40 or where you want.
2. 00:18:710 (2) - Add finish
3. 00:22:633 (1) - Spinner, start it at 00:22:172 on the red line
4. 00:27:941 (2) - Remove whistle and use finish
5. 00:29:787 (4) - ^
6. 00:31:633 (1) - Remove clap at the and and add a finish
7. 00:35:325 (2) - Finish
8. 00:37:172 (4) - ^
9. 00:39:479 (1) - Add finish at beginning and end, and start it on white big tick please.. There isn't a reason to place an "hole" here..
10. No new combo
11. 00:41:787 Add a circle with new combo
12. 00:42:479 (1) - No new combo
13. 00:56:556 (2) - Remove finish
14. 00:57:479 (3) - Remove whistle
15. 00:58:402 (4) - Finish at the end
16. 01:03:017 (1) - Add finish and remove whistle
17. 01:04:864 (3) - ^
18. 01:06:710 (1) - Remove claps, but add a finish only at the beginning.
19. 01:10:402 You have to add a circle here with a finish
20. 01:15:940 (1) - Finish
21. 01:17:787 (4) - New combo and finish, no whistle
22. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove new combo
23. 01:22:863 (1) - End it on the white big line (01:25:172) and use finish
24. 01:36:248 (4) - Finish
25. 01:39:825 (1) - Spinner.. start it on white big line and end at 01:41:787
26. 01:42:710 Add a circle
27. 01:54:710 (4) - Add finish
28. 02:52:633 (1) - Delete
29. 02:52:633 Add a circle
30. 02:53:095 ^
31. 02:53:556 ^ with finish
32. 02:53:787 Circle with finish ^

1. Circle size +1 is better imho
2. 00:03:479 (1) - Add a finish on first repeat (00:03:941)
3. 00:11:325 (1) - Finish
4. 00:22:171 (5) - http://puu.sh/6jVT Please fix it, don't overlap elements..
5. 00:26:094 (5) - New combo and add finish, remove clap
6. 00:27:017 (1) - No newcombo
7. 00:33:017 (3) - 1 grid down
8. 00:38:440 (1) - Finish
9. 00:50:094 (4) - No clap
10. 00:51:825 (1) - Start it on white big line
11. 01:10:402 (3) - finish
12. 01:32:556 (6) - ^
13. 01:54:710 (5) - ^
14. 02:09:479 (1) - Start it with a finish

1. 00:04:403 (3) - Move it on x192 y192 and add a finish
2. 00:04:865 (4) - No finish
3. 00:05:788 (7) - Add finish remove whistle
4. 00:33:480 (4) - Remove clap and add finish
5. 01:32:557 (6) - finish
6. 01:54:710 (7) - ^
7. 01:56:557 (2) - ^
8. 02:39:018 (5) - ^

DJNightmare wrote:

Red = Recommended
Blue = Suggestion
Green = Comments

Erm, i don't think you have read the rules, this song is going towards the 3 min mark and it's only allowed if there are only 2 difficulties.
Apparently you have 3 difficulties...
HOWEVER, i'll give you the modding anyway since i just opened my own modding queue, good luck on your map =3 Yes, I read the rules, but it's not important the difficulties that you mod it, Thanks to mod all diff.

[Easy]
00:24:249 (1,2,3,4) - I would make this symmetrical, but it's up to you Nah, it's fine to play and flow very well right now
02:00:249 (1) - Move 2 Grid > Why? It's unnecesary
Pretty Much it...

[Normal]
01:01:172 (4) - Move 1 Grid < Yeah! Moved
><

[Hard]
00:51:479 (4,1) - The spacing seems to be too far, however it's up to you if you would like to change it =3 Nope, It's fine because it's a Hard diff. No problem with that
01:10:402 (7,8) - The spacing here seems awkward, try putting the hitcircle somewhere else I Couldn't find any problem with that
01:20:787 (2,5) - Move 2 Grid Up Nope, plays perfect with the Slider (1)
02:46:172 (3) - Try Making this slider more symmetrical Hmm looks fine, But I just have to move the a little one Slider point, so ok.

Nicely Done, good luck =3

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

DJNightmare wrote:

Red = Recommended
Blue = Suggestion
Green = Comments

Erm, i don't think you have read the rules, this song is going towards the 3 min mark and it's only allowed if there are only 2 difficulties.
Apparently you have 3 difficulties...
HOWEVER, i'll give you the modding anyway since i just opened my own modding queue, good luck on your map =3 Yes, I read the rules, but it's not important the difficulties that you mod it, Thanks to mod all diff.

[Easy]
00:24:249 (1,2,3,4) - I would make this symmetrical, but it's up to you Nah, it's fine to play and flow very well right now
02:00:249 (1) - Move 2 Grid > Why? It's unnecesary Well, 02:00:249 (1,2,3,4) - This part seems to be nice if you make it into a proper square motion, you can ignore this though
Pretty Much it...

[Normal]
01:01:172 (4) - Move 1 Grid < Yeah! Moved
><

[Hard]
00:51:479 (4,1) - The spacing seems to be too far, however it's up to you if you would like to change it =3 Nope, It's fine because it's a Hard diff. No problem with that
01:10:402 (7,8) - The spacing here seems awkward, try putting the hitcircle somewhere else I Couldn't find any problem with that
01:20:787 (2,5) - Move 2 Grid Up Nope, plays perfect with the Slider (1)
02:46:172 (3) - Try Making this slider more symmetrical Hmm looks fine, But I just have to move the a little one Slider point, so ok.

Nicely Done, good luck =3

Thanks a lot for mod DJNightmare

W h i t e wrote:

I can't find it!!! Good map... I give star (sorry and thx~)

l1106188 wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[Easy]
remove 02:53:787's green line,I can't see it have effect Yes it is unnecesary , Removed

00:11:325 (1) - remove clap at rotation ?! Nope, plays fine with vocal
00:22:402 (4) - add clap at end ?~ I don't like it how to play the double Clap
00:45:018 (1) - ^ Hmm... Ok
01:10:864 (4) - add clap ? Ok
01:14:095 (3) - ^ at end ? I don't like the double Clap here, so, no

[Normal]
remove 02:53:787's green line Sure, Removed

00:19:172 (3) - add clap ~? Added
01:10:864 (5) - ^ Ok
01:14:095 (3) - it look not pretty . I think that it's ok, also it's not a big mistake
02:39:941 (1) - remove clap at top ? Nah, sounds fine to me

[Hard]
remove 02:53:787's green line Removed

00:25:633 (5) - add finsh at end ? Doesn't fit very well with the song
00:34:864 (3) - add clap The Clap doesn't sounds very well here
00:37:633 (5) - ^ Here, plays well. Ok
00:51:479 (4) - ^ Ok
00:57:018 (5) - ^ Nope, I don't like it here
01:09:018 (4) - ^ at top Ok
02:21:710 (3) - ^ Nope, doesn't fit very well the double Clap
02:33:018 (3) - ^ Hmmm... Ok
02:49:172 (2,3) - distance not same I think that it's fine
02:51:710 (6) - add clap ? Nah, it's fine without it


good song!!!
and sorry to my poor English
and only find sound
star~

popner wrote:

Though I don't like English Songs, this one is good.

[Easy]

Fine.
00:33:018 (3) - ds, but if you want symmetry, ignore me. haha, yes this is Intentional


[Normal]

00:03:941 (1) - it's not so symmetric, but never mind. (nazi mod) Nah, It's fine, it's not a big mistake because it's a little unsymetric
01:45:941 (1) - delete? No, plays fine with the instrumental and vocal
01:49:633 (1) - ds, and change to a circle & a slider? Since it's a 1/2 pattern I decided to Stack, also I think that sounds well like that.
01:57:248 (2) - change to a slider & a circle? Nope
02:22:864 (1) - delete? Nope, sorry plays fine
02:25:864 (2,1,2,3,4) - I prefer to this:
Nope, becuase I play only with the vocal here
02:38:095 (3,4,5,6,7) - May be a little too difficult for Normal. I don't think so, it's easy to read it


[Hard]

00:45:710 (1,2,3,4,1) - change to this?: I prefer my pattern

00:55:864 (2) - delete? Nope, sorry
01:21:249 (4) - ds. It's Intentional
02:27:479 (1,2) - change to a slider may be better? I prefer the notes here
02:28:402 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:33:249 (4,5) - delete (5) (or change(4,5) to a slider.) Nope, sounds fine like that
02:18:479 (3) - delete? Nope

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright since you said you re-mapped all diffs, i'll see what i can find.

General:
CLEAR!

Easy:
00:15:479 (1) - how about making a curved slider as it blankets the previous slider? move it here because i noticed (3) is supposed to stack on (3) at the previous combo. Yeah. Made it
00:16:864 (3) - make it look like (1) if you follow the suggestion above. ^
00:22:402 (4,1) - add the clap at the end to keep consistency for (4) and replace the clap for a finish at (1) but i think it'd be better if you can decrease the volume for the finish. 40 or 50% is ok. Nah, I think that sounds fine
01:01:172 (2) - i was expecting this to look the same as the previous slider because the lyrics repeat. so make it look the same as (1) and add a repeat if you do so. Nah, I think tha plays fine like that, also I think that I have support to add a Reverse Arrow
01:15:941 (1) - same as 00:22:402 on (1) Nope
01:22:402 (1) - remove the finish at the beginning since the finish isn't there on the 1st kiai. Good Reason, Removed
01:29:787 (1) - ^ ^
02:01:864 - extend the break till 02:02:095 because that's where the guitar starts. 2nd modder to said that, so, ok

Normal:
00:51:018 (3) - make this a curved slider as it blankets (1). It's not necessary
02:01:864 - same as easy. Ok
02:17:325 (1) - same as 00:51:018 but at the next note. Nope
02:24:710 (3) - stack this perfectly on (1) (no distance snap). it looks nicer if you do so. OK
02:41:787 (3) - Ctrl+R to make it a bit fun? Hmm... Ok

Hard:
00:25:633 (1) - replace the clap for a finish. sounds a lot nicer as it goes in sync with the cymbals. Nice, added
02:01:864 - same as easy. Ok
02:23:325 (3) - make this a curved slider as it blankets (1). like this Hmmm... Well, I made something like that

This is the best i can do. GL

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mancusojuanmattos ~ HI Rika!

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'rock' in tags. Nope, because if the map is Ranked, Rock is going to appear in the Genre of the map

[Hard]

1. 00:21:249 (7) - This slider should end to here 00:21:710. Are you sure?? I think that plays perfect where is it now
2. 00:43:402 (6,1,2,3) - Try like this rhythm,will be better with me. Really, sounds much better, thanks
   
3. 01:04:864 (5) - Add new combo to here,Vocal start to here. Sure, Added
4. 01:21:249 (5,6) - Change a 1/1 slider. Ok, changed
5. 01:25:172 - Add finish. Hmmm... I don't have support to add a Finish here, so nope
6. 01:45:018 (6) - Stack on 01:43:172 (4). This is Intentional, also when you played the diff. you don't detect if there are stacked or not
7. 02:19:633 (3) - Remove this note much better. Nope, fit fine with the drum
8. 02:47:556 (4,5) - Try move to center. Sure
9. 02:48:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ like this. I made something like that
   

[Normal]

1. AR-1,low BPM with this song. Hmm... No changes, I think that fit fine
2. 01:07:172 (1) - Remove clap for repeat,and add clap start,end point. Nope, because I make it the clap in the word way, I think that it's the best position to add Claps
3. 01:22:402 (2) - Add new combo to here,and Remove 01:22:172 (1). Hmmm... Ok
4. 02:38:095 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not good stream,try unstack this. You've reason, this pattern doesn't look very fine. Now it's better

That's all ~

Good luck ~

Fenya wrote:

Hi :3~~

General:
Si no tendras s... Meh, ocupa 1 kb, dejalo ahi (?)

Easy:
00:25:172 (2) - 1 grid hacia abajo, para que quede simetrico con el (1) (si es que querias hacerlo simetrico) haha, no me habia dado cuenta de esto xD, hecho
00:50:095 (3) - 1 grid hacia abajo (creo que ya sabes por que 3:) Sii, Ok
00:51:479 (4) - (opinion personal) Y si lo cambias al lado? o.o http://puu.sh/iTm7 Aca quise que me quede asi, para que juegue bien con ambos Sliders (2,3), asi que nope
01:57:941 (3) - spacing o.o Es minimo xD, lo cambie porque ya me viene el Break enseguida, sino no era problema

Normal:
00:45:479 (3) - 1 grid hacia la derecha Asi esta bien
01:27:479 (3) - (opinion personal) Y si lo bajas 5 grid para que quede parejo con el (1)? (me dirasc Nope, mucho cambio para algo que no es del todo necesario

Hard:
00:37:633 (5) - 1 grid hacia abajo Okie
00:37:864 (6,7) - Muevelo 2 grid hacia la derecha Ok
00:40:633 (2) - 1 grid hacia abajo Hecho
00:54:710 (3) - 1 grid hacia arriba Ok
00:57:018 (5) - 1 grid hacia abajo A pesar que buscas simetria, lo cual esta bien, en este caso no lo hago porque tengo que hacer algun que otro cambio con los Sliders, y la verdad no es del todo necesario ya que no afecta a la hora de jugar el map
00:57:249 (6) - muevelo a http://puu.sh/iTJ7 (pd: todo el modeo del hard, hasta ahora, es para que se vea simetrico~) Igual que arriba, y si ya me di cuenta xD
01:21:249 (5) - corre el ultimo slidertick a x:240 y: 232 (para que el slider se vea "Derecho") No, asi esta bien, esta parte fue un poco re-mapeada y la verdad no quiero que me afecte en el Spacing con la siguiente nota, ya que el Siguiente pattern me quedo bien
01:32:325 (8) - muevelo a http://puu.sh/iTKK Hecho
01:34:172 (4) - Arregla el ultimo slidertick... Esta chueco Mi intencion no era hacer algo completamente recto xD
01:35:556 (4) - 1grid hacia la izquierda (simetria~) Hecho

Bueno, sabes que no soy buena y me que me fijo en cosas nazis o:
Espero que te sirva de algo, buena suerte~
PD: Me gusto mas este map que el otro o: Esto me lo imaginaba xD

1. 00:03:941 (1) - pretty slider :3 but I think that it does not match music a little . 00:05:787 matches finish. http://puu.sh/iZSg try rhythm and code ↓
   

   120,144,3941,2,0,B|112:72|204:44|256:132|256:132|308:44|400:72|392:144,1,400,4|0
   488,168,6249,1,8

2. 00:16:864 (3) - Suggestion of the form. http://puu.sh/iZUY
3. 00:26:556 (2) - add finish ( same as 00:33:941 (4) ) but please take a look at 02:23:325 suggestion
4. 00:27:018 (1) - spacing too far a little.(1.13x) grid move to x140,y72 and Rotate by 3° ( Clockwise , Selection Centre )
5. 00:40:864 (2) - add finish. In KIAI Time, I think that it is too quiet if there is not it
6. 01:10:402 (1) - add NC ? music rhythm change point
7. 01:21:941 (4) - why use DS 1.1x ? ;x; i think use DS1.0x is better
8. 01:18:249 (3) - add finish ( same as 01:25:633 (3) ) but please take a look at 02:23:325 suggestion
9. 01:29:787 (1) - add finish to end of the slider. In KIAI Time, I think that it is too quiet if there is not it
10. 02:23:325 (1,2) - Why is only here different from other KIAITIME in hitsound? but I think that finish matches the opening of KIAITIME like this. so ( 00:26:095 (1) - add finish instead to clap, 00:26:556 (2) - add clap , 01:17:325 (2) - add finish to end of the slider , 01:18:249 (3) - add clap is better IMO )
11. 02:31:633 (3) - add finish instead to clap to end of the slider. ( In the same way as others ? )

1. 00:26:556 (2) - I prefer not let stack
2. 01:10:402 (4) - add NC ? music rhythm change point
3. 01:38:095 (3,4) - why use DS 0.9x ;x;. use DS 1.0x is better. Suggestion of the form and grid code↓
   

   460,328,97172,2,0,B|392:367|324:347,1,140,0|4
   184,336,98095,2,0,B|121:292|51:307,1,140,0|4

4. 01:43:633 (1) - spinner start 01:43:402 is match a vocal
5. 02:23:325 (2) - add finish to end of the slider (same as other diff)
6. 02:33:941 (1) - add repeat. because only here is different from others in rhythm. 02:34:402 - I have no sense of incongruity here even if there is sound
7. 02:45:018 (3) - add finish instead to clap ?

1. 00:04:402 (3) - add clap ?
2. 00:09:941 (4) - one grid right
3. 00:25:633 (1) - add clap instead to finish to start of the slider. and add finish instead to clap to end of the slider. (same as other diff suggestion )
4. 00:26:556 (2) - add clap instead to whistle
5. 00:33:018 (7) - I think that do not match music a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/j0qo
6. 00:45:018 (4) - add finish instead to clap ?
7. 01:36:710 (1) - ^
8. 01:38:556 (5) - ^

kosiga wrote:

hi~ mancusojuanmattos

from mod4mod queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]
[*]fine

[Easy]

1. 00:03:941 (1) - pretty slider :3 but I think that it does not match music a little . 00:05:787 matches finish. http://puu.sh/iZSg try rhythm and code ↓ Hmm... I think that plays perfectly with the vocal, also the Clap at the end of this Slider make sense with vocal
   

   120,144,3941,2,0,B|112:72|204:44|256:132|256:132|308:44|400:72|392:144,1,400,4|0
   488,168,6249,1,8

2. 00:16:864 (3) - Suggestion of the form. http://puu.sh/iZUY Sure, changed
3. 00:26:556 (2) - add finish ( same as 00:33:941 (4) ) but please take a look at 02:23:325 suggestion Ok, In (1) I add a finish in (2) a Clap
4. 00:27:018 (1) - spacing too far a little.(1.13x) grid move to x140,y72 and Rotate by 3° ( Clockwise , Selection Centre ) Done, Good Eyes
5. 00:40:864 (2) - add finish. In KIAI Time, I think that it is too quiet if there is not it I don't have support to add a Finish,also doesn't sound very well
6. 01:10:402 (1) - add NC ? music rhythm change point Hmm... Ok
7. 01:21:941 (4) - why use DS 1.1x ? ;x; i think use DS1.0x is better Done
8. 01:18:249 (3) - add finish ( same as 01:25:633 (3) ) but please take a look at 02:23:325 suggestion Added a Finish at the end of this Slider and added a Clap in Next Note
9. 01:29:787 (1) - add finish to end of the slider. In KIAI Time, I think that it is too quiet if there is not it Nope
10. 02:23:325 (1,2) - Why is only here different from other KIAITIME in hitsound? but I think that finish matches the opening of KIAITIME like this. so ( 00:26:095 (1) - add finish instead to clap, 00:26:556 (2) - add clap , 01:17:325 (2) - add finish to end of the slider , 01:18:249 (3) - add clap is better IMO ) Done
11. 02:31:633 (3) - add finish instead to clap to end of the slider. ( In the same way as others ? ) Hmm.. Ok

[Normal]

1. 00:26:556 (2) - I prefer not let stack Stacked to next Slider, because it's not necesary to make a lot of chnages for that
2. 01:10:402 (4) - add NC ? music rhythm change point In (3) plays better
3. 01:38:095 (3,4) - why use DS 0.9x ;x;. use DS 1.0x is better. Suggestion of the form and grid code↓ Done
   

   460,328,97172,2,0,B|392:367|324:347,1,140,0|4
   184,336,98095,2,0,B|121:292|51:307,1,140,0|4

4. 01:43:633 (1) - spinner start 01:43:402 is match a vocal Yes, sounds better, moved
5. 02:23:325 (2) - add finish to end of the slider (same as other diff) I chnaged the pattern and I forgot to add it, thanks to remark it
6. 02:33:941 (1) - add repeat. because only here is different from others in rhythm. 02:34:402 - I have no sense of incongruity here even if there is sound Hmmm... Hmm.. Ok
7. 02:45:018 (3) - add finish instead to clap ? No, because I'm following a Pattern with Claps

[Hard]

1. 00:04:402 (3) - add clap ? Ok
2. 00:09:941 (4) - one grid right Nope, It's fine like that
3. 00:25:633 (1) - add clap instead to finish to start of the slider. and add finish instead to clap to end of the slider. (same as other diff suggestion ) Ok
4. 00:26:556 (2) - add clap instead to whistle Yes, totally agree
5. 00:33:018 (7) - I think that do not match music a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/j0qo Yeah, sounds much better
6. 00:45:018 (4) - add finish instead to clap ? Ok
7. 01:36:710 (1) - ^ ^
8. 01:38:556 (5) - ^ ^

Good map~ Star☆~~ and sorry, poor mod This is not True, because was helpful!!

Good luck~

agussdg wrote:

hi
mod aqui :B

Easy:
00:25:172 (2) - quedaria mejor si pones copy paste al slider anterior y "flip horizontaly" Hmmm... Es el mismo Slider xD
00:25:172 (2) - fijate si no te gusta mas asi http://puu.sh/j1Eb fijate que muchos mapas hacen como "circulos" "medios circulos" con circulos... si es que me entiendes Me gusta como esta
01:10:864 (2) - aca tambien, ^
01:54:249 (5) - asi? http://puu.sh/j1F7 como zig zag (? Hmm... Buena Idea. Hecho

Normal:

00:21:941 (4) - tal vez asi quede mejor http://puu.sh/j1Ga Hmmm... no seria demasiado cambio por algo que no es necesario, asi esta bien, ademas si lo pongo como me decis vos queda overlapped con el Slider (3)
consejo: intenta mover mas los circulos, para que sea mas divertido jugar el mapa
por ejemplo:
01:06:710 (5) - aca podrias hacer asi: http://puu.sh/j1GR No, ademas lo Stackee porque la segunda nota sigue el Instrumental, si lo muevo puede que cause confusion en algunos jugadores
01:08:556 (2) - ponlo mas arriba del 1, si es necesario desactiva SOLO AHI el distance snap Estan exactamente en el mismo lugar
01:51:479 (1) - esta muy cerca del 2 anterior Problema?? Esta bien distanciado de (3) xD

Hard:

00:09:018 (3) - esta muy cerca del 2 anterior Movido un par de Grids a la Derecha
00:43:172 (5) - es medio confuso Confuso te parece?? Lo unico que hay que hacer es mover el mouse hacia atras, ademas tenes que pensar que es una Hard
01:17:787 (1) - me gusta este slider haha Gracias
01:21:249 (5) - este no, queda feo por el slider anterior, tal vez tendrias que copiar el otro, pegarlo y flip horizontaly o verticaly, fijate... capaz que quede mejor, son solo consejos igual, si te gusta dejalo Ya lo explique en otro mod, y creo que lo hice en Español tambien, pero bueno lo vuelvo a explicar, esta parte fue un poco remapeada ya que la primera vez que la hice (La segunda mejor dicho) no me sonaba del todo bien, para que no me afecte el Spacing con la siguiente nota (1) lo deje asi, ya que el pattern siguiente se ve bien, ademas no es nada malo y esto ya entra a un plano Nazi
01:43:172 (4) - no te gusta mas asi? http://puu.sh/j1JV La verdad que no, juega y fluye mucho mejor como lo esta ahora

buen mapa :B me gusto, suerte

ikari_kyon wrote:

mucho nazi por aca :/
ah hola >3< y bueno, ahora uso el codigo este para el modpost haha queda lindo

[Hard]

- soy yo o al principio dice "I never fap"??

1. 00:03:941 (1,2) - bueno, el finish no suena tan bien, preferiria que estas dos notas no lleven hitsound, deja al vocal mas limpio y comenzar el hitsounding en 00:04:402 (3), queda muy elegante, aunque el whistle en 00:04:172 (2) - tambien esta en tu patron, bueno, solo el finish en (1) no se ajusta al hitsounding Me suena bien con el comienzo de la cancion, asi que nope
2. 00:06:941 (5) - whistle, diras que sigues el vocal, pero la verdad la cancion es mas audible y no rompe tu patron de whistle Va bien con el patron de Whistle que llevo, asi que Ok
3. 00:11:210 (2) - whistle, nose Asi esta bien
4. 00:15:710 (3) - no whistle, para acompañar el vacio en 00:14:787 No me gusta como juega sin el Whistle, creo que va bien con la voz, y no tiene demasiado que ver el vacio que deje ahi, asi que nope
5. 00:15:941 (4) - whistle al inicio del slider, para compensar al de arriba No sigue del todo el resto de mis patterns, creo que en (3) ya es suficiente
6. 00:17:095 (3) - whistle Aca si me gusto, listo
7. 00:18:018 (5) - whistle, esta algo vacio de whistle en esta parte Hmm... Creo que tienes razon, agregado
8. 00:18:710 (5) - clap al final del slider o3o Totalmente :3
9. 00:20:787 (5) - whistle Listo
10. 00:22:172 (1) - whistle No me gusta como suena, parece un sobreuso the Whistle
11. 00:24:018 (5) - clap El Instrumental, en donde puedo agregar Claps termina en (4) asi que es totalmente innecesario y ademas no suena bien si agrego un Clap ahi
12. 00:27:249 (2) - no whistle, deja que el patron de whistle empieze en esos sliders simetricos que vienen adelante Hmm.. pero juega bien con la voz
13. 00:30:479 (7) - whistle al repeat y al final del slider Al final me suena bien, pero en el Repeat realmente no sigue nada
14. 00:32:787 (6) - clap ↓ No se porque, pero realmente no me va bien ese Clap ahi
15. 00:33:018 (7) - no clap en el repeat, para seguir el doble clap de 00:31:864 (2,3), digo aca no seguiste la bateria; finish en el final del slider↓ Asi esta bien
16. 00:33:941 (8) - clap en lugar de finish Juega bien con el termino de seccion
17. 00:34:402 - ok de aca dejaste la bateria de lado D; Aca ya empiezo con la voz nuevamente, use la bateria porque no tenia voz
18. 00:37:864 (6) - finish, solo sigo el patron que usaste en 00:35:787 (6,1) Son algo distintos eso Patterns D:
19. 00:40:633 (2) - whistle al final del slider, termina el clap del inicio Hmmm... puede que tengas razon, asi que agregado
20. 00:43:172 (5) - uh clap en lugar de finish, ese efecto de la cancion es suficiente
21. 00:45:018 (4) - ↑
22. 00:46:402 (2) - ↑ lo mismo para el final del slider Hecho en los 3 casos
23. 00:57:018 (5) - clap Me suena demasiado el Clap ahi, es como que queda demas, asi que no lo agrego
24. 01:14:095 (1) - finish al principio del slider Sii, queda mas consistente
25. 01:25:172 (3) - o: que buen efecto de silencio xD
26. 01:26:095 (1) - no clap, el patron debe comenzar en (3) Ok
27. 01:33:479 (1) - ↑ Aca juego con la bateria (again) creo que van bien los claps
28. 01:42:710 (2,3) - clap, tal vez solo en (2) No estoy de acuerdo
29. 01:46:402 (3) - finish, el silencio aca no va bien No juega bien el Finish, pero bueno, agregue un Clap que suena mejor
30. 01:58:864 (1) - clap Ok
31. 02:19:633 (3) - no clap Realmente no se por que lo agregue xD
32. 02:21:710 (2) - clap Nope, como esta, juega bien
33. 02:32:556 (1) - no clap, tus otros patrones empiezan en el tercer objeto k
34. 02:33:941 (1) - clap, este patron esta conectado con el anterior Ok
35. 02:39:941 (1) - no clap Ok
36. 02:50:556 (2) - clap al inicio del slider

[Normal]

1. 00:03:941 (1) - de nuevo, el finish no me suena muy bien al principio, con un whistle basta Realmente no me gusta el Whistle aca, es como que no va del todo bien
2. 00:26:556 (2) - clap en vez de whistle, si quieres compensar la falta de clap en el siguiente slider, simple agrega un custom slidertick con tu custom clap Agregado, y como dije no me gustan esas cosas D:
3. 01:53:787 (4) - no clap, para seguir el bonito silencio que tenias D; Ok
4. 02:39:941 (1) - no clap al inicio del slider Hmm... No lo tiene
5. 02:43:172 (1) - clap en vez de finish, similar a lo señalado en [Hard] Cambiado

[Easy]

- no hay mucho que decir, no te arriesgaste mucho con los hitsounds aca, para evitar tantos claps perdidos, de nuevo, puedes agregar un custom slider tick con tu custom clap. Hmmm... no me gusta ese estilo de cosas, pero bue... vere lo que hago

1. 01:07:172 (1) - clap en lugar de whistle Me quedan muchos claps juntos y realmente no me gustan como queda,le puse el Whistle para que le de otro Toque
2. 01:08:556 (2) - no clap al inicio No le encuentro nada malo, va bien con la voz
3. 01:17:325 (2) - clap al inicio del slider Me gusta, agregado
4. 01:57:479 (2) - no clap, pense que querias una seccion sin hitsounds Si, queda raro ese Clap ahi, eliminado
5. 02:27:018 (3) - no clap en el repeat, aca es buen ejemplo para usar el custom slider tick Hmm... creo que no hay problema aca y como ya dije no me gustan como quedan esas cosas xD

MMzz wrote:

Ahhh nostolgia, I love drake and josh <3

Easy:

00:27:018 (1) - remove new combo Here starts the chorus, so, the NC is necesary
01:51:479 (1) - ^ Agree in that
01:52:864 (2) - add new combo ^

A lot of your sliders ended on the start of new stanzas, you shouldn't do that because it breaks new combos. I used long Sliders, this is the reason, also there are the easisest pattern for beginners, also it's not a problem, because if you saw the consistency, the most of my combo are consistent

Normal:

AR -1 3rd person to suggest me that, so AR-1

00:07:633 (6) - add new combo This note belongs from this pattern, because if you follow the Vocal, it appears in next note, I also plays with Instrumental here
00:08:095 (1) - remove new combo Nope, same reason as above
00:15:018 (7) - add new combo Nope
00:15:479 (1) - remove new combo ^
00:18:249 (1) - ^ Nope, because here it's beginning a Instrumental Section, so the New Combo is totally necesary
00:18:710 (2) - add new combo Nope
00:19:633 (1) - remove new combo Nope, following the Vocal, plays perfectly
00:27:018 (1) - ^ Starts the chorus
00:35:787 (1) - ^ Nope
00:43:172 (1) - ^ Nope
00:51:018 (1) - ^ The Vocal change completly D:
01:06:710 (5) - add new combo Nope
01:07:172 (1) - remove new combo It's fine
01:09:941 (1) - ^ Following the Instrumental
01:10:402 (2) - add new combo Nope
01:11:325 (1) - remove new combo ^
01:18:710 (1) - ^ ^
01:29:325 (1) - fix this slider, the middle part where is makes a V is crooked, take the red point at the bottom and move it to the left once on tiny sized grid. Hmm... sorry, but this is not a problem, also it's a common Shape this kind of Sliders
01:42:710 (1) - remove new combo Nope, following the Vocal
02:33:941 (1) - ^ Nope

Hard:

Combos are really broken in here, you need to remember a new combo starts every or every other stanza, NOT to the vocals. It's depends, because if you map the mostly of the map with (like me), you have to follow a lot the vocals and add it following it, because if I don't make that, the combo don't follow nothing in General

All in all a fun map though! :>

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hola Mancuu !! Aca un Mod De mi parte

[General]:

- Todo esta muy bien pero no me convensen los ComboColours (parecen de Navidad) he aqui unos mejores creo yo : Hey, buenos colores, realmente estan buenos (no tanto el combo 4), pero meh los agregue a todos

Colores

[Colours]
Combo1 : 181,106,106
Combo2 : 255,89,89
Combo3 : 136,255,136
Combo4 : 215,215,215

Pruebalos que no te cuesta

- Otra cosa que se me ocurrio xD Fue que los nombres de las dificultades serian asi: haha, no gracias, Easy, Normal y Hard lucen mejor xD

Easy Way
Normal Way
Hard Way

Creatividad espontanea \:D/

[Easy]

00:11:325 (1) - Agrega whistle al inicio Tenes razon, queda mas consistente con (3)
00:16:864 (3) - Remueve el clap al inicio y agregalo al final, Remueve NC ? me parece inescesario Nope, asi va bien con la voz, y Remueve NC no lo entendi, si esta en (3), quizas me quisiste decir en la proxima nota, y no lo saco porque es cuando comienza la parte del Instrumental
00:17:787 (1) - Remueve clap al inicio pare ser mas consistentes con 00:16:864 (3) Como no lo saque ahi, tampoco lo hago aca
00:30:710 (2) - Uhmm no creo que fluya con una vocal larga ademas la siguiente nota esta muy lejos http://puu.sh/jcu5 Hmm... Creo que fluye bien un Slider largo, con una vocal larga, ademas el siguiente Slider lo hice asi intencional para que me quede simetrico con el Centro del Slider, no es mayor problema arreglarlo y creo que queda mejor asi
00:41:325 (x) - Talvez agrega nota con finish Nope, asi juega bien para ser un Easy
01:08:556 (2) - Reemplaza el clap al inicio por un whistle Tenia Clap + Whsitle, creo que me olvide de sacarlo, ahora ya esta con Whistle solo
01:14:095 (3) - Agrega clap al inicio Hmm... no, el whistle juega bien ahi
01:15:941 (1) - Reemplaza clap for finish al inicio No luce del todo bien un Finish, creo que al final como esta, luce mucho mejor
01:33:018 (2) - Agrega nota con finish ? No

[Normal]

00:26:095 (1) Remueve finish agregalo aca 00:26:556 (2) Si miras mis otras dificultades, todas tienen un Finish al comienzo del Kiai, asi que por consistencia lo debo dejar, ademas creo que suena mejor asi como esta
00:48:249 (1) - Intenta no salirte del cuadro xD http://puu.sh/jcyD haha esta fuera del Grid, pero no afuera de pantalla asi que esto no es problema xD

SPOILER

01:07:172 (1) - clap al inicio y al final, Remueve el clap en el reverse arrow Segunda persona que lo recomienda, y viendo el panorama creo que ambas tienen razon, asi que Hecho
01:17:787 (1) - Remueve el finish agregalo aca 01:18:249 (2) Nope, misma razon que el primer Kiai
01:27:479 (3) - Agrega clap al inicio, Remueve el clap al final Ok
01:34:864 (4) - Agrega finish (creo que escuche uno en fondo de la cancion xD) Si, puede ser, pero puse el Clap porque con el finish de la cancion ya basta xD
02:23:325 (2) - Remueve el finish al final ponlo aca 02:24:710 (3) Nope, misma razon al resto de los Kiai
02:41:325 (2) - Agrega finish ? Con el Finish de la musica ya basta, como dijo ikari_kyon, por eso esta asi
02:43:172 (1) - Agrega finish al inicio y al final Misma razon que arriba
02:45:018 (3) - Agrega finish ^
02:45:941 (5) - ^ ^

[Hard]

00:11:210 (2) - Agrega clap (suena divertido ) No me gusto, sorry
00:33:018 (7) - Envez de un reverse que tal esto http://puu.sh/jcCe Hmm... no porque lo que hice entra perfecto con la bateria
00:34:864 (3) - Olvidaste el clap, Agregalo Sii xD
00:57:018 (5) - ^ ^
01:33:479 (1) - Remueve el clap Hmmm... si, puedes que tengas razon
01:39:941 (2) - Remueve clap al final Se escucha muy vacio sin el Clap
02:33:479 (5) - Remueve el clap Si, la verdad que suena de mas xD
02:44:556 (4) - ^ Ok
02:50:556 (2) - Agrega clap al inicio Agregado

Buen mapa pero recomiendo mas mods nose tu ! Espero sea de ayuda Hmmm... estoy esperando a 2 MATs para que me modeen, esperare lo que me digan ellos xD

Buena Suetre y Estrella !

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
timing is kinda off imo , offset=255(+6) is better to me Sounds better, changed
why canceled letterbox during breaks? there aren't video or sb in the mapset Because doesn't look fine with my BG, looks better my BG without it

[Easy]
00:51:479 (4) - I suggest put this note up a bit , it is nearly out of screen.. Hmm... Ok moved
00:55:633 (1) - ctrl+h? flow much better I don't think so, In my opinion fit better like that
02:45:479 (3) - move this slider up a bit plz.. Ok, moved a little to up

[Normal]
AR+1 plz , it is kinda low imo asdas Some people said me to put AR4 and another tell me to put AR5, so I'll decide it. AR5 plays better
00:50:095 - this clap sound too loud imo , I suggest turn volume down a bit Hmm... I think that it's ok
00:58:402 (2) - I suggest change direction of this sldier , its reverse arrow is kinda invisible Invisble?? Nah, looks fine, and it's not difficult to see
01:29:325 (1) - this shape is confusing , not overlap slider itself too much plz I don't understand why the shape is confusing, but oh well, I made another shape
02:38:095 (3,4,6,7) - change this to 2 sliders plz , it is very hard to play as a Normal diff I thought that, but I test the map with a friend, and he is not a good player, and he haven't got any problem with that
02:49:402 (2,3,4) - ^ , here should change to a repeat sldier Same as above

[Hard]
00:57:479 (1) - ctrl+r , flow much better Hmm... I disagree, I think that flow very well like that
01:10:402 (7,8) - this anti-jump is confusing imo , I suggest use 1.0x spacing here Do you really think that?? Because all my streams are compressed

that's all
diffs are fine , but diff spread is bad imo. there is a big difficulty distance between Normal and Hard diff
I suggest you use a bit more 1/2 beat notes in Normal diff , and add a bit more spinner in Hard diff
only when the diff spread get better , plz call me back

Frozen Child wrote:

Easy
00:04:408 - you can copy and rename ur hitclap for ticks like that ? ( for drums ) Nope, It's ok like that
00:22:408 (4) - whistle Hmmm... nope, the finish fit perfect
00:25:178 (2) - delete this note and copy 00:24:255 (1) -. After that u can ctrl h and ctrl R for a good combo Nope, I prefer like that
00:40:870 (2) - finish Nope, doesn't fit well
02:16:870 - note + finish here ? I prefer to start this section with vocal

Normal
00:04:408 - you can copy and rename ur hitclap for ticks like that ? ( for drums ) Nope, same as Easy
00:48:255 (1) - remove finish Nope, sorry

Hard
00:22:870 - you can copy and rename ur hitclap for ticks like that ? ( for drums ) No sorry

it's m4m ( here is the map for you viewtopic.php?f=6&t=73501&p=1381931#p1381931) i'll post on ur queue

Katsuri wrote:

General

• 
  Tags & Source

1. I don't agree with keeping 'Drake & Josh' at source, I'd rather set it to tags, considering it's not an opening and none of episodes of the show it plays the full song. Hmmm... I'm not agree with that, on a lot of full versions, appear the serie in Source, so I think that it's ok
2. What about adding 'Drake and Josh' to tags? There is a lot of maps that have 'name & name' and 'name and name' at tags, why not adding it here?
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   Design
3. Bleh! This myspace link at background, I found an BG for which is cleaner and is still awesome(thanks JhowM for removing publicity). You can download it here: http://puu.sh/jYeO. YAY!! I like it
4. Try to make the Combo 4 brighter like this: http://puu.sh/jYhO, considering that the BG is a bit darkness, a brighter color would look better. Changed the Colours
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Easy

• 
  General Comments

1. I liked the way you worked your hitsounds, but they sound a bit off in some parts, where the fill-in kind of failed, but maybe it's just my impression. At hitsounds you did a great job. At mapping, some overlaps look weird and play weird, but you look to avoid the overlaps, and it's really good. Almost every big slider, you did something weird, thing that dissapointed me. Some parts I feel the voice follow/ rhythm follow a bit inconsistent, where sometimes you follow the voices and sometimes the drums, sometimes you follow nothing and sometimes you follow both, it's a bit weird, but I would require you a remap, and it's not really necessary xD. I think it was awesome the way you worked the flow of patterns, really impressed me. Hmm... In some points I'm not totally agree, and thanks
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   General Settings
2. The difficulty settings are perfect in my opinion, that's the way I would probably set a diff like that. haha... Thanks xD
3. I'd rather use the slider tick rate at 2, because this way people can't cheat sliders and the 1/2 rhythm will keep constant all the time. Hmm... nope sorry, sounds a lot of Ticks and in the mostly of case, there are not necesary
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   Mapping
4. 00:03:947 (1) - This slider looks a bit weird at the arcs, why don't you make them straighter, like this: http://puu.sh/k995? Oh, and it would be lovely if you make it completely symmetric. Hmmm... nah, it's fine like that
5. 00:22:408 (4) - This slider looks quite weird at all, consider making the red point less noticeable or remove it, like this: http://puu.sh/k9ac. Nope, I think that I've to change the notes, and really, the Slider Shapes are not totally ''necesary'' when you play the map, I know that maybe looks better the map, but if I make something like that, this wouldn't be a big problem
6. 00:30:716 (2) - It looks quite random for me, you should try making something like http://puu.sh/k9aR, because symmetry saves the pattern giving it sense. Really, I prefer my shape
7. 00:41:331(x) - Don't you miss a note here? ? I can hear a finish at drums, then I think you should add a note with finish here! Sure added
8. 01:08:562 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - There are 3 sliders that are exactly the same, but you use them like that:
   

   1st - End of phrase, start of prelude.
   2nd - Mid of prelude.
   3rd - End of prelude.

   Never use copy/paste for making this kind of weird stuff, it looks weird and plays as weird as it looks. Try to improve this patterns. Nope sorry, I made that because fit perfect with song
9. 01:22:408 (1) - This arc looks so... ;_;. Please try to make it better ;_;. Oh man, this is a common shape
10. 01:42:716 (1) - Look, you use the same slider, but it follows NOTHING, it's really weird man, I would rather make something like http://puu.sh/k9eN. Try to listen the drums + vocal at the same time
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    Hitsounds
11. 00:16:870 (3) - This fill-in sounds a bit empty, try adding a clap at the end of the slider, it will make it more c'mon. Hmm... OK
12. 00:45:024 (1) - You should enfatizate the ticks where the drummer plays the finish. I will show you an awesome way(teached by Gonzvlo). Nice!
    

    1st - Set beat snap divisor to 1/8.
    2nd - Add a green timing section with hitsounds NORMAL and with 100% of volume at 00:45:947 and at 00:47:793. 
    3rd - Add a green timing section with hitsounds SOFT and with 70% of volume at 00:46:005 and at 00:47:851.

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Normal

• 
  General Comments

1. Good worked hitsounds and new combos, and the start symmetrical mapping really looked awesome, but you stopped mapping symmetrical, and mapped the rest of difficulty kind of wierd and random, with badflowing some times, it dissapointed me.
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   General Settings
2. I'm used to make the HP drain rate and Overall Difficulty the same, then I think you should set overall difficulty to 4. Yes, It's better
3. I'd rather use the slider tick rate at 2, because this way people can't cheat sliders and the 1/2 rhythm will keep constant all the time. Nope
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   Mapping
4. 00:22:408 (1) - This slider flows and looks weird, and one tip, when you make a long slider following a long voice word, try to make it symmetrical. I did a slider which I think you should use, it's here: http://puu.sh/kcaK. Bad Flow? Do you rally think that?? I think that plays perfect this shape.
   

   140,60,22408,6,0,B|152:96|192:112|232:96|232:96|256:112|256:112|280:96|280:96|320:112|360:96|

5. 00:48:255 (1) - Same tip as before, try to make it symmetrical, something like this: http://puu.sh/kccd. Nope, sorry
   

   144,196,47793,1,8
   100,248,48024,1,0
   68,312,48255,6,0,B|80:352|116:388|188:360|188:308|188:308|188:248|256:204|324:248|324:308|324:308|324:360|

6. 01:14:101 (5) - Here, I think this slider flow terrible, a arc should work better, try something like this: http://puu.sh/kcda. Ok, Changed, I thought the same
7. 01:22:408 (2) - This slider sounds really awkard, looks like it's placed at the wrong place, as you can hear the voices. try removing the note before it and moving the slider 1/2 sooner, this way you will follow the vocals perfectly. Hmm... Maybe, But I think that palys fine now too.
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Hard

• 
  General Comments

1. I'd love to see it mapped symmetric, why don't you try to remap it? If you want to collab with me, I already started mapping this here: http://puu.sh/kbMq. Sorry, I think that it's fine, the players and modders don't have any problem with, maybe I can map with more symetry on my next proyects
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Mod finished~

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Hard]
00:05:331 (1,2) - ctrl+4 , 1 gird right Ok

call me back after this

wcx19911123 wrote:

diff spread is better now , but I think some jumps in Collab is too huge , try to reduce some spacing plz , or it is much harder than Normal.. no

[Collab]
AR-1? ok
00:19:408 (2,4) - I suggest move this 2 sldier down a bit I don't think so, this jump plays fine and looks fine in my opinion
00:45:024 (2,4) - move (2) right a bit and (4) left a bit Ok
00:46:178 (5,7) - move this 2 sliders closer Nah! xD
01:21:255 (7,8) - ^ , maybe stack their end would look ugly, but pending Kenezz
02:35:101 (6,7) - ^ would look ugly, but pending kenezz
really nice diff

[Hard]
00:05:331 (1,2) - ctrl+4 , 1 gird right

call me back after this

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Collab]
AR-1?
01:21:255 (7,8) - ^ , maybe stack their end hmm no
02:35:101 (6,7) - ^ ^
really nice diff

1. Combo Colours: Black looks slightly odd, you should try a different shade of black.

1. This difficulty has some really nice symmetric patterns and jumps BUT there are also many forced jumps/symmetric patterns. I'll list all of them so you can take a look at them and decide whether you want to reduce/fix them or not. I'd like to remark how most of the times these jumps kill the flow of the map.
2. 00:18:716 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if you were trying to force symmetry here but either way this should be easy to fix with or without symmetry.
3. 00:46:178 (5,6,7) - ^
4. 01:21:255 (7,8) - Whoops, this jump doesn't fit much o3o
5. 01:31:408 (2) - This jump would be awesome if (2) were 1/2 beat later.
6. 02:27:716 (5,6) - This one isn't that bad but could be reduced a bit.
7. 02:35:101 (6,7) - Same as before D:
8. 02:43:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The consistency and how the spacing increased gradually made this pattern really fun to play. This one is okay!

1. 01:10:408 (7,1) - This part sort of killed the flow, I think these 2 objects need more spacing between them.
2. 02:42:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels really weird, I think the sliders placement is not following the music correctly. Try something like this.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Combo Colours: Black looks slightly odd, you should try a different shade of black.

Yes, looks better, changed

[Hard]

1. 01:10:408 (7,1) - This part sort of killed the flow, I think these 2 objects need more spacing between them. Hmm... I'm not totally agree with that. I think that the flow is correct, I made that to change the rhythm and also I want to start the pattern x1,0 in 01:10:807 (1), so I think that it's not bad
2. 02:42:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels really weird, I think the sliders placement is not following the music correctly. Try something like this. Yeah! sounds better, so, changed

That's all, let me know when you're ready and we'll see what to do next.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Collab]

1. This difficulty has some really nice symmetric patterns and jumps BUT there are also many forced jumps/symmetric patterns. I'll list all of them so you can take a look at them and decide whether you want to reduce/fix them or not. I'd like to remark how most of the times these jumps kill the flow of the map.
2. 00:18:716 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if you were trying to force symmetry here but either way this should be easy to fix with or without symmetry.
3. 00:46:178 (5,6,7) - ^
4. 01:21:255 (7,8) - Whoops, this jump doesn't fit much o3o It's okay o:
5. 01:31:408 (2) - This jump would be awesome if (2) were 1/2 beat later. Magic!, Fixed~
6. 02:27:716 (5,6) - This one isn't that bad but could be reduced a bit. hmm now is okay D:
7. 02:35:101 (6,7) - Same as before D: Same D:!!
8. 02:43:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The consistency and how the spacing increased gradually made this pattern really fun to play. This one is okay!

That's all, let me know when you're ready and we'll see what to do next.