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altc3000
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月27日 at 上午 03:35:51

Artist: SoundTeMP
Title: Rose of Sharon
Source: Ragnarok Online
Tags: MMORPG Tsusuko
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3376kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Hard (4.43 stars, 211 notes)
  3. Insane (4.98 stars, 521 notes)
  4. suko's Normal (3.35 stars, 149 notes)
Download: SoundTeMP - Rose of Sharon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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RANGNAROK Online ost
Insane/NS3000 remade on 22/10
please redownload

Easy : Done. Ready for mod
Normal (by Tsusuko): Done. Ready for mod
Hard: Done. Ready for mod
Insane : Done. Ready for mod

Thanks for those who modded this map :)
chaotic_iak, Static Noise Bird, Tsusuko ,PCBlossom, Flower, cirno-, Louis Cyphre, yurunneram, Jacob, -Kirito, oob360, blackabyss, alacat
chaotic_iak
From queue!

[NS1000]
You say that you don't want this to be modded? Okay.

[NS3000]
Slider speed seems too fast.
Try to make sliders instead of all circles.
00:17:863 (2) - Don't stack unexpectedly
00:18:720 (2) - ^
00:21:291 (2) - ^
00:22:148 (2) - ^
00:34:578 (1) - Jump too large; perhaps reduce previous slider's repeat into one repeat
00:48:721 (1) - No NC
00:49:578 (1) - No NC
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:02:006 (3) - NC
01:06:935 (4) - Don't stack unexpectedly
01:07:792 (4) - ^
01:08:649 (4) - ^
01:11:435 (17) - NC
01:20:863 (13) - NC
01:50:006 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:51:720 (12) - NC

Try to map more at the end. Okay it's more than 80% but you should try doing even more since it's still possible.

Basically you seem to love streams so much...that you forgot to make NCs properly or you start to ignore spacing. Better work on that.
Topic Starter
altc3000

chaotic_iak wrote:

From queue!

[NS1000]
You say that you don't want this to be modded? Okay.

[NS3000]
Slider speed seems too fast. still considering....
Try to make sliders instead of all circles.
00:17:863 (2) - Don't stack unexpectedly
00:18:720 (2) - ^
00:21:291 (2) - ^
00:22:148 (2) - ^
00:34:578 (1) - Jump too large; perhaps reduce previous slider's repeat into one repeat
00:48:721 (1) - No NC
00:49:578 (1) - No NC
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:02:006 (3) - NC
01:06:935 (4) - Don't stack unexpectedly
01:07:792 (4) - ^
01:08:649 (4) - ^
01:11:435 (17) - NC
01:20:863 (13) - NC
01:50:006 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:51:720 (12) - NC

Try to map more at the end. Okay it's more than 80% but you should try doing even more since it's still possible.Its quite hard to map more imo

Basically you seem to love streams so much...that you forgot to make NCs properly or you start to ignore spacing. Better work on that.
All done~ Thanks for modding :)
happy623
kbps should be 128kbps - 192 kbps
Topic Starter
altc3000

happy623 wrote:

kbps should be 128kbps - 192 kbps
kbps?
happy623
kbps?
xd this http://puu.sh/1dDYu
Topic Starter
altc3000

happy623 wrote:

kbps?
xd this http://puu.sh/1dDYu
有限?
happy623

altc3000 wrote:

有限?
有啊0 0
OnosakiHito
Oh, beautiful Ragnarok Online. <3
Artist is SoundTeMP
Topic Starter
altc3000

OnosakiHito wrote:

Oh, beautiful Ragnarok Online. <3
Artist is SoundTeMP
IC!
Gonna change it now :P
Birdy
[General]
BG image needs to be at least 600 pixels tall and 800 pixels wide
.mp3 must not be VBR (convert to 128kbps, or PM me to do it)
Delete "unknown - unknown.osb" from files folder
01:53:435 - End Kiai section here
Also inconsistency between Kiai sections (the first one) is unrankable
Use less "New Combo"s

[Easy]
00:14:006 (1,1) - Make rounder sliders (should be easy with the new slider system)
00:30:720 (2) - Either stack properly or move away for normal distance
00:41:435 (1) - ^
01:07:577 (2,3) - Incorrect spacing
01:09:720 (2) - Move further away
01:22:578 (1,1,1) - Incorrect spacing
01:27:720 (1) - Move to the right a bit
01:32:863 (1,1) - More round sliders please
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not suitable for Easy

[Hard]
00:13:149 (1,1) - Overlap
00:42:292 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:22:149 (4,1) - Spacing
01:39:720 (1) - Sudden fast slider for no reason, no thanks
01:39:720 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:43:149 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Weird placements (or normal, not familiar with this kind of diffs), but nice rhythm and hitsounds.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
altc3000

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
BG image needs to be at least 600 pixels tall and 800 pixels wide done!
.mp3 must not be VBR (convert to 128kbps, or PM me to do it)done! But Im not sure is it correct or not, plz check it if its wrong
Delete "unknown - unknown.osb" from files folderdone!
01:53:435 - End Kiai section heredone!
Also inconsistency between Kiai sections (the first one) is unrankable done!
Use less "New Combo"s

[Easy]
00:14:006 (1,1) - Make rounder sliders (should be easy with the new slider system)
00:30:720 (2) - Either stack properly or move away for normal distance
00:41:435 (1) - ^
01:07:577 (2,3) - Incorrect spacing
01:09:720 (2) - Move further away
01:22:578 (1,1,1) - Incorrect spacing
01:27:720 (1) - Move to the right a bit
01:32:863 (1,1) - More round sliders please
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not suitable for Easy

[Hard]
00:13:149 (1,1) - Overlap
00:42:292 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:22:149 (4,1) - Spacing
01:39:720 (1) - Sudden fast slider for no reason, no thanks
01:39:720 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:43:149 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Weird placements (or normal, not familiar with this kind of diffs), but nice rhythm and hitsounds.

Good luck!
Have changed all~ Thanks for mapping :) :)
creampuff
Here's the normal diff~
http://puu.sh/1saCe
Topic Starter
altc3000

Tsusuko wrote:

Here's the normal diff~
http://puu.sh/1saCe
done! Thanks!! :P
Cherry Blossom
Hi from #modreqs ~
Just suggestions :p

[Easy]

00:27:720 (1) - Add whistle ?
00:29:006 (2) - ^
00:30:720 (2) - ^
01:00:292 (2) - ^
01:27:720 (1) - ^
01:32:863 (5) - Add New combo ?
01:50:435 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:51:292 (4) - ^
01:52:149 (2) - ^
01:53:435 (1) - Remove Clap ?

[Hard]

Maybe AR5 or 6 ?


00:26:006 (1) - Add Whistle ?
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:42:292 (2) - 1 grid down ?
01:16:578 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:53:435 (1) - Add Finish ?

[Insane]

00:55:149 (1) to 00:56:113 (6) - That is confusing, you should space more...
01:02:863 (1) - Sould be spaced more...
01:09:613 - Add a note ?
01:10:578 (9) - Add New combo ?
01:12:292 (9) - ^
01:19:363 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:19:792 (4) - ^
01:22:792 (2) - ^
01:23:220 (4) - ^
01:23:649 (2) - ^
01:24:078 (4) - ^
01:45:506 (6) - Space more...
01:46:363 (6) - ^
01:53:434 (17) - Add Finish ?
00:57:935 to 01:53:434 (17) - Why use soft hitsounds ? Just use normal like the others diffs...

Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
altc3000

PCBlossom wrote:

Hi from #modreqs ~
Just suggestions :p

[Easy]

00:27:720 (1) - Add whistle ?
00:29:006 (2) - ^
00:30:720 (2) - ^
01:00:292 (2) - ^
01:27:720 (1) - ^
01:32:863 (5) - Add New combo ?
01:50:435 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:51:292 (4) - ^
01:52:149 (2) - ^
01:53:435 (1) - Remove Clap ?
Done :)
[Hard]

Maybe AR5 or 6 ?


00:26:006 (1) - Add Whistle ?
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:42:292 (2) - 1 grid down ?
01:16:578 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:53:435 (1) - Add Finish ?
Done now AR6
[Insane]

00:55:149 (1) to 00:56:113 (6) - That is confusing, you should space more...
01:02:863 (1) - Sould be spaced more...
01:09:613 - Add a note ? I am not sure how to add a note here :?
01:10:578 (9) - Add New combo ?
01:12:292 (9) - ^
01:19:363 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:19:792 (4) - ^
01:22:792 (2) - ^
01:23:220 (4) - ^
01:23:649 (2) - ^
01:24:078 (4) - ^ Whistles sound a bit strange for me here sorry
01:45:506 (6) - Space more...
01:46:363 (6) - ^
01:53:434 (17) - Add Finish ?
00:57:935 to 01:53:434 (17) - Why use soft hitsounds ? Just use normal like the others diffs...
Others done :)
Good Luck ~
Thanks for modding :D
Flower
Hi~ mod from the queue~

咦第一张图么 要有的改了(无雾)
仙境传说 话说我也在做这游戏的歌……

[General]
现在的质量离rank还挺远,除了normal基本都要remap
现在rank图最差的质量是这张:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33761 (多做几次完爆它应该是没什么压力的吧)
一些要点:作图的时候把Grid调成最小或者干脆关掉;Easy Normal Hard在做的时候基本都不应该关掉Distance Snap;DS的设置按照外观来看的话最好能做到note基本不重叠。
offset改成00:03:720 - 因为你有在红线之前的note
把Tsusuko加入tags

[Hitsound]
现在的打击音太吵了,请把声音调小到50%左右
或者改成Soft,那么音量应该在70%左右
可以做到的难度(N,H,I)每两个白线(也就是次重拍)加一个clap,慎用Normal Whistle,除非你很有把握。改成Soft的话会好掌握得多。
有些whistle可以用clap和finish来代替,一般来说whistle都是在kiai来加强节奏,但是这里kiai部分不够燃好像不是很搭配……

[Easy]
DS全程1.0,重新摆放。
New Combo方面,建议每两个长白线加一个NC,否则这种迪西梗容易让人困惑
00:03:720 (1) - 这种形状的slider请用新的P算法slider(也就是随便拉一条新的三点slider)做好看
Example:
00:24:292 (1,1) - 这种音效尽量避免
00:31:149 (1,1) - 转盘太短了,后面的note也靠的太近 建议至少留两拍的空,并且保证转盘auto转到9000分
00:48:292 (1,1) - 不要有这类的重叠,尽量分散方向让玩家看清

[Normal]
reduce all hitsound volume to 50% (including kiai) because the whole song is kinda flat, and your current effect volume is a bit noisy.
others OK.

[Hard]
这个难度太简单了,明显是Normal的难度。
参考http://osu.ppy.sh/b/43679
CS改成4
HP5 OD5 左右(酌情处理)
AR的话看你自己,打着嫌慢不HR就没法FC的话就AR7。
SV1.0就太慢了 除非适合音乐 或者你喜欢鬼畜mapper Snowy Dream的那种慢滑条乱跳 1.3-1.6左右都比较适合
尽量把半拍的note摆开,偶尔加点小跳。(例子:SV1.4,DS1.1)

[Insane]
AR→8
1.3有点小慢,1.5-1.8都不错。(不过还是看你自己,喜欢慢滑条的话就要注意放一些跳)
00:04:149 (2) - 像这种最好要么和前面的滑条尾stack,要么摆开,第一次玩还以为是1/4拍。
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 摆不开就显得难看
00:30:292 (9,13) - finish
00:29:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这一串就摆的很丑,所以摆的时候就要把grid snap关了 或者从slider转换
00:36:292 (1) - 这一串也是,而且和前面的离得太近太过胆小
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - 这什么……
另外串请在00:58:578 - 结束
这个难度的圈用的太多了忽视了slider而且很有overmap嫌疑 最好重做的时候想想怎么摆看着舒服 打着舒服

Good luck~
cirno-_old
General
Combo colors should change. I did this for easy. http://i.imgur.com/NwCB3.png Too lazy to change for the others. Also noticed a diffirence in backgrounds so they might need different colors than these as well. I hate default colors.

Easy
SPOILER
HP drain rate and OD could use +1 or 2.
00:29:435 (1) - Finish on slider end
00:30:720 (2) - Finish
00:33:720 (1) - Closer to center
00:44:863 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That's a lot of NC's in a short period of time. I'd fix that. ex:
00:45:720 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:578 (1) - ^
00:49:148 (1) - ^
00:50:005 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and add a slider with reverses
00:56:863 (1,1,1) - Are these NC's necessary?
01:02:005 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a long period of time without sliders. Might be okay though.
01:36:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
suko's Normal
SPOILER
00:41:862 (1,2) - This could use tweaking. Make the sliders 4/4 shorter each. Add a circle where they would have ended. It sounds so much better. Maybe even a second circle as well. http://i.imgur.com/D4DXj.png I did that and I liked it.
01:16:148 (1,2) - Maybe the same thing as above.

Hard
SPOILER
01:41:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pointless triplets
01:44:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I understand what you're doing, but it would be better if you mapped it the way you were, or added more triplets like this:
http://i.imgur.com/wLwnh.png

Insane
SPOILER
CS4 feels better for this
HP Drain rate is a bit too high. I'd make it 6 or 7.
AR8 not 7

Lots of overmapped streams. Replace some of them, not all, with regular mapping.
00:03:720 (1,2) - I think these should be spaced apart, like how you have 00:14:006 (1,2) spaced.

01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -Has ugly uneven/not smooth positioning
01:21:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:56:006 (5,6) - Turn into slider
01:50:863 (5,6) - ^
Louis Cyphre
[General]

your mp3 is 112 kb/s, which is unrankable, minimum must be 128 kb/s and maximum 192 kb/s.
New mp3 [192 kb/s]: http://puu.sh/1u5Gb
New offset: 3835
Tags: remove 'Ragnarok Online', because it is already in source, add this: 'MMORPG'
Background: images on insane and hard are wrong, must be 4:3 min:800x600, max:1024x768. I highly recomend you to use just 1 image for all difficulties. Here i found for you nice one with perfect resolution of 1024 x 768: http://puu.sh/1u5Tx



Good luck
Topic Starter
altc3000

Flower wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~ mod from the queue~

咦第一张图么 要有的改了(无雾)
仙境传说 话说我也在做这游戏的歌……

[General]
现在的质量离rank还挺远,除了normal基本都要remap
现在rank图最差的质量是这张:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33761 (多做几次完爆它应该是没什么压力的吧)
一些要点:作图的时候把Grid调成最小或者干脆关掉;Easy Normal Hard在做的时候基本都不应该关掉Distance Snap;DS的设置按照外观来看的话最好能做到note基本不重叠。
offset改成00:03:720 - 因为你有在红线之前的note
把Tsusuko加入tags

[Hitsound]
现在的打击音太吵了,请把声音调小到50%左右
或者改成Soft,那么音量应该在70%左右
可以做到的难度(N,H,I)每两个白线(也就是次重拍)加一个clap,慎用Normal Whistle,除非你很有把握。改成Soft的话会好掌握得多。
有些whistle可以用clap和finish来代替,一般来说whistle都是在kiai来加强节奏,但是这里kiai部分不够燃好像不是很搭配……

[Easy]
DS全程1.0,重新摆放。
New Combo方面,建议每两个长白线加一个NC,否则这种迪西梗容易让人困惑
00:03:720 (1) - 这种形状的slider请用新的P算法slider(也就是随便拉一条新的三点slider)做好看
Example:

00:24:292 (1,1) - 这种音效尽量避免
00:31:149 (1,1) - 转盘太短了,后面的note也靠的太近 建议至少留两拍的空,并且保证转盘auto转到9000分
00:48:292 (1,1) - 不要有这类的重叠,尽量分散方向让玩家看清

[Normal]
reduce all hitsound volume to 50% (including kiai) because the whole song is kinda flat, and your current effect volume is a bit noisy.
others OK.

[Hard]
这个难度太简单了,明显是Normal的难度。
参考http://osu.ppy.sh/b/43679
CS改成4
HP5 OD5 左右(酌情处理)
AR的话看你自己,打着嫌慢不HR就没法FC的话就AR7。
SV1.0就太慢了 除非适合音乐 或者你喜欢鬼畜mapper Snowy Dream的那种慢滑条乱跳 1.3-1.6左右都比较适合
尽量把半拍的note摆开,偶尔加点小跳。(例子:SV1.4,DS1.1)

[Insane]
AR→8
1.3有点小慢,1.5-1.8都不错。(不过还是看你自己,喜欢慢滑条的话就要注意放一些跳)
00:04:149 (2) - 像这种最好要么和前面的滑条尾stack,要么摆开,第一次玩还以为是1/4拍。
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 摆不开就显得难看
00:30:292 (9,13) - finish
00:29:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这一串就摆的很丑,所以摆的时候就要把grid snap关了 或者从slider转换
00:36:292 (1) - 这一串也是,而且和前面的离得太近太过胆小
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - 这什么……
另外串请在00:58:578 - 结束
这个难度的圈用的太多了忽视了slider而且很有overmap嫌疑 最好重做的时候想想怎么摆看着舒服 打着舒服
Good luck~
全部都改了~~ 謝謝~

cirno- wrote:

General
Combo colors should change. I did this for easy. http://i.imgur.com/NwCB3.png Too lazy to change for the others. Also noticed a diffirence in backgrounds so they might need different colors than these as well. I hate default colors.

Easy
SPOILER
HP drain rate and OD could use +1 or 2.
00:29:435 (1) - Finish on slider end
00:30:720 (2) - Finish
00:33:720 (1) - Closer to center
00:44:863 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That's a lot of NC's in a short period of time. I'd fix that. ex:
00:45:720 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:578 (1) - ^
00:49:148 (1) - ^
00:50:005 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and add a slider with reversesI think these 4 notes are better
00:56:863 (1,1,1) - Are these NC's necessary?
01:02:005 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a long period of time without sliders. Might be okay though.
01:36:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
All Done!
suko's Normal
SPOILER
00:41:862 (1,2) - This could use tweaking. Make the sliders 4/4 shorter each. Add a circle where they would have ended. It sounds so much better. Maybe even a second circle as well. http://i.imgur.com/D4DXj.png I did that and I liked it.
01:16:148 (1,2) - Maybe the same thing as above.
Still considering, maybe I will change it later
Hard
SPOILER
01:41:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pointless triplets
01:44:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I understand what you're doing, but it would be better if you mapped it the way you were, or added more triplets like this:
http://i.imgur.com/wLwnh.png
Done~
Insane
SPOILER
CS4 feels better for this
HP Drain rate is a bit too high. I'd make it 6 or 7.
AR8 not 7

Lots of overmapped streams. Replace some of them, not all, with regular mapping.
00:03:720 (1,2) - I think these should be spaced apart, like how you have 00:14:006 (1,2) spaced.
Did it as stick together on the previous one
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -Has ugly uneven/not smooth positioning
01:21:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:56:006 (5,6) - Turn into slider
01:50:863 (5,6) - ^
Done~!

Thanks for modding :)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

SPOILER
[General]

your mp3 is 112 kb/s, which is unrankable, minimum must be 128 kb/s and maximum 192 kb/s.
New mp3 [192 kb/s]: http://puu.sh/1u5Gb
New offset: 3835
Tags: remove 'Ragnarok Online', because it is already in source, add this: 'MMORPG'
Background: images on insane and hard are wrong, must be 4:3 min:800x600, max:1024x768. I highly recomend you to use just 1 image for all difficulties. Here i found for you nice one with perfect resolution of 1024 x 768: http://puu.sh/1u5Tx



Good luck
Have changed the mp3. I re-converted a new one ~ Thanks
Tag added
Thanks for the BG but i think my BG is better~

Thanks for modding :)
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