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altc3000
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月27日 at 上午 03:35:51

Artist: SoundTeMP
Title: Rose of Sharon
Source: Ragnarok Online
Tags: MMORPG Tsusuko
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3376kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Hard (4.43 stars, 211 notes)
  3. Insane (4.98 stars, 521 notes)
  4. suko's Normal (3.35 stars, 149 notes)
Download: SoundTeMP - Rose of Sharon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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RANGNAROK Online ost
Insane/NS3000 remade on 22/10
please redownload

Easy : Done. Ready for mod
Normal (by Tsusuko): Done. Ready for mod
Hard: Done. Ready for mod
Insane : Done. Ready for mod

Thanks for those who modded this map :)
chaotic_iak, Static Noise Bird, Tsusuko ,PCBlossom, Flower, cirno-, Louis Cyphre, yurunneram, Jacob, -Kirito, oob360, blackabyss, alacat
chaotic_iak
From queue!

[NS1000]
You say that you don't want this to be modded? Okay.

[NS3000]
Slider speed seems too fast.
Try to make sliders instead of all circles.
00:17:863 (2) - Don't stack unexpectedly
00:18:720 (2) - ^
00:21:291 (2) - ^
00:22:148 (2) - ^
00:34:578 (1) - Jump too large; perhaps reduce previous slider's repeat into one repeat
00:48:721 (1) - No NC
00:49:578 (1) - No NC
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:02:006 (3) - NC
01:06:935 (4) - Don't stack unexpectedly
01:07:792 (4) - ^
01:08:649 (4) - ^
01:11:435 (17) - NC
01:20:863 (13) - NC
01:50:006 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:51:720 (12) - NC

Try to map more at the end. Okay it's more than 80% but you should try doing even more since it's still possible.

Basically you seem to love streams so much...that you forgot to make NCs properly or you start to ignore spacing. Better work on that.
Topic Starter
altc3000

chaotic_iak wrote:

From queue!

[NS1000]
You say that you don't want this to be modded? Okay.

[NS3000]
Slider speed seems too fast. still considering....
Try to make sliders instead of all circles.
00:17:863 (2) - Don't stack unexpectedly
00:18:720 (2) - ^
00:21:291 (2) - ^
00:22:148 (2) - ^
00:34:578 (1) - Jump too large; perhaps reduce previous slider's repeat into one repeat
00:48:721 (1) - No NC
00:49:578 (1) - No NC
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:02:006 (3) - NC
01:06:935 (4) - Don't stack unexpectedly
01:07:792 (4) - ^
01:08:649 (4) - ^
01:11:435 (17) - NC
01:20:863 (13) - NC
01:50:006 (1,2,3,4) - Use larger spacing
01:51:720 (12) - NC

Try to map more at the end. Okay it's more than 80% but you should try doing even more since it's still possible.Its quite hard to map more imo

Basically you seem to love streams so much...that you forgot to make NCs properly or you start to ignore spacing. Better work on that.
All done~ Thanks for modding :)
happy623
kbps should be 128kbps - 192 kbps
Topic Starter
altc3000

happy623 wrote:

kbps should be 128kbps - 192 kbps
kbps?
happy623
kbps?
xd this http://puu.sh/1dDYu
Topic Starter
altc3000

happy623 wrote:

kbps?
xd this http://puu.sh/1dDYu
有限?
happy623

altc3000 wrote:

有限?
有啊0 0
OnosakiHito
Oh, beautiful Ragnarok Online. <3
Artist is SoundTeMP
Topic Starter
altc3000

OnosakiHito wrote:

Oh, beautiful Ragnarok Online. <3
Artist is SoundTeMP
IC!
Gonna change it now :P
Birdy
[General]
BG image needs to be at least 600 pixels tall and 800 pixels wide
.mp3 must not be VBR (convert to 128kbps, or PM me to do it)
Delete "unknown - unknown.osb" from files folder
01:53:435 - End Kiai section here
Also inconsistency between Kiai sections (the first one) is unrankable
Use less "New Combo"s

[Easy]
00:14:006 (1,1) - Make rounder sliders (should be easy with the new slider system)
00:30:720 (2) - Either stack properly or move away for normal distance
00:41:435 (1) - ^
01:07:577 (2,3) - Incorrect spacing
01:09:720 (2) - Move further away
01:22:578 (1,1,1) - Incorrect spacing
01:27:720 (1) - Move to the right a bit
01:32:863 (1,1) - More round sliders please
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not suitable for Easy

[Hard]
00:13:149 (1,1) - Overlap
00:42:292 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:22:149 (4,1) - Spacing
01:39:720 (1) - Sudden fast slider for no reason, no thanks
01:39:720 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:43:149 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Weird placements (or normal, not familiar with this kind of diffs), but nice rhythm and hitsounds.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
altc3000

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
BG image needs to be at least 600 pixels tall and 800 pixels wide done!
.mp3 must not be VBR (convert to 128kbps, or PM me to do it)done! But Im not sure is it correct or not, plz check it if its wrong
Delete "unknown - unknown.osb" from files folderdone!
01:53:435 - End Kiai section heredone!
Also inconsistency between Kiai sections (the first one) is unrankable done!
Use less "New Combo"s

[Easy]
00:14:006 (1,1) - Make rounder sliders (should be easy with the new slider system)
00:30:720 (2) - Either stack properly or move away for normal distance
00:41:435 (1) - ^
01:07:577 (2,3) - Incorrect spacing
01:09:720 (2) - Move further away
01:22:578 (1,1,1) - Incorrect spacing
01:27:720 (1) - Move to the right a bit
01:32:863 (1,1) - More round sliders please
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not suitable for Easy

[Hard]
00:13:149 (1,1) - Overlap
00:42:292 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:22:149 (4,1) - Spacing
01:39:720 (1) - Sudden fast slider for no reason, no thanks
01:39:720 (1,2,3) - Spacing
01:43:149 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Weird placements (or normal, not familiar with this kind of diffs), but nice rhythm and hitsounds.

Good luck!
Have changed all~ Thanks for mapping :) :)
creampuff
Here's the normal diff~
http://puu.sh/1saCe
Topic Starter
altc3000

Tsusuko wrote:

Here's the normal diff~
http://puu.sh/1saCe
done! Thanks!! :P
Cherry Blossom
Hi from #modreqs ~
Just suggestions :p

[Easy]

00:27:720 (1) - Add whistle ?
00:29:006 (2) - ^
00:30:720 (2) - ^
01:00:292 (2) - ^
01:27:720 (1) - ^
01:32:863 (5) - Add New combo ?
01:50:435 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:51:292 (4) - ^
01:52:149 (2) - ^
01:53:435 (1) - Remove Clap ?

[Hard]

Maybe AR5 or 6 ?


00:26:006 (1) - Add Whistle ?
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:42:292 (2) - 1 grid down ?
01:16:578 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:53:435 (1) - Add Finish ?

[Insane]

00:55:149 (1) to 00:56:113 (6) - That is confusing, you should space more...
01:02:863 (1) - Sould be spaced more...
01:09:613 - Add a note ?
01:10:578 (9) - Add New combo ?
01:12:292 (9) - ^
01:19:363 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:19:792 (4) - ^
01:22:792 (2) - ^
01:23:220 (4) - ^
01:23:649 (2) - ^
01:24:078 (4) - ^
01:45:506 (6) - Space more...
01:46:363 (6) - ^
01:53:434 (17) - Add Finish ?
00:57:935 to 01:53:434 (17) - Why use soft hitsounds ? Just use normal like the others diffs...

Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
altc3000

PCBlossom wrote:

Hi from #modreqs ~
Just suggestions :p

[Easy]

00:27:720 (1) - Add whistle ?
00:29:006 (2) - ^
00:30:720 (2) - ^
01:00:292 (2) - ^
01:27:720 (1) - ^
01:32:863 (5) - Add New combo ?
01:50:435 (2) - Add Clap ?
01:51:292 (4) - ^
01:52:149 (2) - ^
01:53:435 (1) - Remove Clap ?
Done :)
[Hard]

Maybe AR5 or 6 ?


00:26:006 (1) - Add Whistle ?
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:42:292 (2) - 1 grid down ?
01:16:578 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:53:435 (1) - Add Finish ?
Done now AR6
[Insane]

00:55:149 (1) to 00:56:113 (6) - That is confusing, you should space more...
01:02:863 (1) - Sould be spaced more...
01:09:613 - Add a note ? I am not sure how to add a note here :?
01:10:578 (9) - Add New combo ?
01:12:292 (9) - ^
01:19:363 (2) - Add Whistle ?
01:19:792 (4) - ^
01:22:792 (2) - ^
01:23:220 (4) - ^
01:23:649 (2) - ^
01:24:078 (4) - ^ Whistles sound a bit strange for me here sorry
01:45:506 (6) - Space more...
01:46:363 (6) - ^
01:53:434 (17) - Add Finish ?
00:57:935 to 01:53:434 (17) - Why use soft hitsounds ? Just use normal like the others diffs...
Others done :)
Good Luck ~
Thanks for modding :D
Flower
Hi~ mod from the queue~

咦第一张图么 要有的改了(无雾)
仙境传说 话说我也在做这游戏的歌……

[General]
现在的质量离rank还挺远,除了normal基本都要remap
现在rank图最差的质量是这张:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33761 (多做几次完爆它应该是没什么压力的吧)
一些要点:作图的时候把Grid调成最小或者干脆关掉;Easy Normal Hard在做的时候基本都不应该关掉Distance Snap;DS的设置按照外观来看的话最好能做到note基本不重叠。
offset改成00:03:720 - 因为你有在红线之前的note
把Tsusuko加入tags

[Hitsound]
现在的打击音太吵了,请把声音调小到50%左右
或者改成Soft,那么音量应该在70%左右
可以做到的难度(N,H,I)每两个白线(也就是次重拍)加一个clap,慎用Normal Whistle,除非你很有把握。改成Soft的话会好掌握得多。
有些whistle可以用clap和finish来代替,一般来说whistle都是在kiai来加强节奏,但是这里kiai部分不够燃好像不是很搭配……

[Easy]
DS全程1.0,重新摆放。
New Combo方面,建议每两个长白线加一个NC,否则这种迪西梗容易让人困惑
00:03:720 (1) - 这种形状的slider请用新的P算法slider(也就是随便拉一条新的三点slider)做好看
Example:
00:24:292 (1,1) - 这种音效尽量避免
00:31:149 (1,1) - 转盘太短了,后面的note也靠的太近 建议至少留两拍的空,并且保证转盘auto转到9000分
00:48:292 (1,1) - 不要有这类的重叠,尽量分散方向让玩家看清

[Normal]
reduce all hitsound volume to 50% (including kiai) because the whole song is kinda flat, and your current effect volume is a bit noisy.
others OK.

[Hard]
这个难度太简单了,明显是Normal的难度。
参考http://osu.ppy.sh/b/43679
CS改成4
HP5 OD5 左右(酌情处理)
AR的话看你自己,打着嫌慢不HR就没法FC的话就AR7。
SV1.0就太慢了 除非适合音乐 或者你喜欢鬼畜mapper Snowy Dream的那种慢滑条乱跳 1.3-1.6左右都比较适合
尽量把半拍的note摆开,偶尔加点小跳。(例子:SV1.4,DS1.1)

[Insane]
AR→8
1.3有点小慢,1.5-1.8都不错。(不过还是看你自己,喜欢慢滑条的话就要注意放一些跳)
00:04:149 (2) - 像这种最好要么和前面的滑条尾stack,要么摆开,第一次玩还以为是1/4拍。
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 摆不开就显得难看
00:30:292 (9,13) - finish
00:29:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这一串就摆的很丑,所以摆的时候就要把grid snap关了 或者从slider转换
00:36:292 (1) - 这一串也是,而且和前面的离得太近太过胆小
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - 这什么……
另外串请在00:58:578 - 结束
这个难度的圈用的太多了忽视了slider而且很有overmap嫌疑 最好重做的时候想想怎么摆看着舒服 打着舒服

Good luck~
cirno-_old
General
Combo colors should change. I did this for easy. http://i.imgur.com/NwCB3.png Too lazy to change for the others. Also noticed a diffirence in backgrounds so they might need different colors than these as well. I hate default colors.

Easy
SPOILER
HP drain rate and OD could use +1 or 2.
00:29:435 (1) - Finish on slider end
00:30:720 (2) - Finish
00:33:720 (1) - Closer to center
00:44:863 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That's a lot of NC's in a short period of time. I'd fix that. ex:
00:45:720 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:578 (1) - ^
00:49:148 (1) - ^
00:50:005 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and add a slider with reverses
00:56:863 (1,1,1) - Are these NC's necessary?
01:02:005 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a long period of time without sliders. Might be okay though.
01:36:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
suko's Normal
SPOILER
00:41:862 (1,2) - This could use tweaking. Make the sliders 4/4 shorter each. Add a circle where they would have ended. It sounds so much better. Maybe even a second circle as well. http://i.imgur.com/D4DXj.png I did that and I liked it.
01:16:148 (1,2) - Maybe the same thing as above.

Hard
SPOILER
01:41:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pointless triplets
01:44:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I understand what you're doing, but it would be better if you mapped it the way you were, or added more triplets like this:
http://i.imgur.com/wLwnh.png

Insane
SPOILER
CS4 feels better for this
HP Drain rate is a bit too high. I'd make it 6 or 7.
AR8 not 7

Lots of overmapped streams. Replace some of them, not all, with regular mapping.
00:03:720 (1,2) - I think these should be spaced apart, like how you have 00:14:006 (1,2) spaced.

01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -Has ugly uneven/not smooth positioning
01:21:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:56:006 (5,6) - Turn into slider
01:50:863 (5,6) - ^
Louis Cyphre
[General]

your mp3 is 112 kb/s, which is unrankable, minimum must be 128 kb/s and maximum 192 kb/s.
New mp3 [192 kb/s]: http://puu.sh/1u5Gb
New offset: 3835
Tags: remove 'Ragnarok Online', because it is already in source, add this: 'MMORPG'
Background: images on insane and hard are wrong, must be 4:3 min:800x600, max:1024x768. I highly recomend you to use just 1 image for all difficulties. Here i found for you nice one with perfect resolution of 1024 x 768: http://puu.sh/1u5Tx



Good luck
Topic Starter
altc3000

Flower wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~ mod from the queue~

咦第一张图么 要有的改了(无雾)
仙境传说 话说我也在做这游戏的歌……

[General]
现在的质量离rank还挺远,除了normal基本都要remap
现在rank图最差的质量是这张:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33761 (多做几次完爆它应该是没什么压力的吧)
一些要点:作图的时候把Grid调成最小或者干脆关掉;Easy Normal Hard在做的时候基本都不应该关掉Distance Snap;DS的设置按照外观来看的话最好能做到note基本不重叠。
offset改成00:03:720 - 因为你有在红线之前的note
把Tsusuko加入tags

[Hitsound]
现在的打击音太吵了,请把声音调小到50%左右
或者改成Soft,那么音量应该在70%左右
可以做到的难度(N,H,I)每两个白线(也就是次重拍)加一个clap,慎用Normal Whistle,除非你很有把握。改成Soft的话会好掌握得多。
有些whistle可以用clap和finish来代替,一般来说whistle都是在kiai来加强节奏,但是这里kiai部分不够燃好像不是很搭配……

[Easy]
DS全程1.0,重新摆放。
New Combo方面,建议每两个长白线加一个NC,否则这种迪西梗容易让人困惑
00:03:720 (1) - 这种形状的slider请用新的P算法slider(也就是随便拉一条新的三点slider)做好看
Example:

00:24:292 (1,1) - 这种音效尽量避免
00:31:149 (1,1) - 转盘太短了,后面的note也靠的太近 建议至少留两拍的空,并且保证转盘auto转到9000分
00:48:292 (1,1) - 不要有这类的重叠,尽量分散方向让玩家看清

[Normal]
reduce all hitsound volume to 50% (including kiai) because the whole song is kinda flat, and your current effect volume is a bit noisy.
others OK.

[Hard]
这个难度太简单了,明显是Normal的难度。
参考http://osu.ppy.sh/b/43679
CS改成4
HP5 OD5 左右(酌情处理)
AR的话看你自己,打着嫌慢不HR就没法FC的话就AR7。
SV1.0就太慢了 除非适合音乐 或者你喜欢鬼畜mapper Snowy Dream的那种慢滑条乱跳 1.3-1.6左右都比较适合
尽量把半拍的note摆开,偶尔加点小跳。(例子:SV1.4,DS1.1)

[Insane]
AR→8
1.3有点小慢,1.5-1.8都不错。(不过还是看你自己,喜欢慢滑条的话就要注意放一些跳)
00:04:149 (2) - 像这种最好要么和前面的滑条尾stack,要么摆开,第一次玩还以为是1/4拍。
00:27:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 摆不开就显得难看
00:30:292 (9,13) - finish
00:29:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这一串就摆的很丑,所以摆的时候就要把grid snap关了 或者从slider转换
00:36:292 (1) - 这一串也是,而且和前面的离得太近太过胆小
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - 这什么……
另外串请在00:58:578 - 结束
这个难度的圈用的太多了忽视了slider而且很有overmap嫌疑 最好重做的时候想想怎么摆看着舒服 打着舒服
Good luck~
全部都改了~~ 謝謝~

cirno- wrote:

General
Combo colors should change. I did this for easy. http://i.imgur.com/NwCB3.png Too lazy to change for the others. Also noticed a diffirence in backgrounds so they might need different colors than these as well. I hate default colors.

Easy
SPOILER
HP drain rate and OD could use +1 or 2.
00:29:435 (1) - Finish on slider end
00:30:720 (2) - Finish
00:33:720 (1) - Closer to center
00:44:863 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That's a lot of NC's in a short period of time. I'd fix that. ex:
00:45:720 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:578 (1) - ^
00:49:148 (1) - ^
00:50:005 (1) - ^
00:55:149 (1,2,3,4) - Delete and add a slider with reversesI think these 4 notes are better
00:56:863 (1,1,1) - Are these NC's necessary?
01:02:005 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a long period of time without sliders. Might be okay though.
01:36:292 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^
All Done!
suko's Normal
SPOILER
00:41:862 (1,2) - This could use tweaking. Make the sliders 4/4 shorter each. Add a circle where they would have ended. It sounds so much better. Maybe even a second circle as well. http://i.imgur.com/D4DXj.png I did that and I liked it.
01:16:148 (1,2) - Maybe the same thing as above.
Still considering, maybe I will change it later
Hard
SPOILER
01:41:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pointless triplets
01:44:864 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I understand what you're doing, but it would be better if you mapped it the way you were, or added more triplets like this:
http://i.imgur.com/wLwnh.png
Done~
Insane
SPOILER
CS4 feels better for this
HP Drain rate is a bit too high. I'd make it 6 or 7.
AR8 not 7

Lots of overmapped streams. Replace some of them, not all, with regular mapping.
00:03:720 (1,2) - I think these should be spaced apart, like how you have 00:14:006 (1,2) spaced.
Did it as stick together on the previous one
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -Has ugly uneven/not smooth positioning
01:21:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

00:56:006 (5,6) - Turn into slider
01:50:863 (5,6) - ^
Done~!

Thanks for modding :)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

SPOILER
[General]

your mp3 is 112 kb/s, which is unrankable, minimum must be 128 kb/s and maximum 192 kb/s.
New mp3 [192 kb/s]: http://puu.sh/1u5Gb
New offset: 3835
Tags: remove 'Ragnarok Online', because it is already in source, add this: 'MMORPG'
Background: images on insane and hard are wrong, must be 4:3 min:800x600, max:1024x768. I highly recomend you to use just 1 image for all difficulties. Here i found for you nice one with perfect resolution of 1024 x 768: http://puu.sh/1u5Tx



Good luck
Have changed the mp3. I re-converted a new one ~ Thanks
Tag added
Thanks for the BG but i think my BG is better~

Thanks for modding :)
yurunneram
Easy
00:29:006 (2) - Don't hide the circle under the slider. Novices can't see them.
00:30:720 (2) - ^
00:33:720 (1) - Erm... I don't suggest you do this cuz you have to give them time to find their cursor.
00:37:149 (1) - ^

No prob in norm

Hard
00:17:435 (1,2) - Why don't add one repeat to each slider? It goes with the music and all...
00:20:862 (1,2) - ^
00:33:292 (2,3,4) - Overlap a bit more

That's all ^^
you have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Topic Starter
altc3000

yurunneram wrote:

Easy
00:29:006 (2) - Don't hide the circle under the slider. Novices can't see them. Sorry but I think its OK, will reconsider it if someone say it too
00:30:720 (2) - ^
00:33:720 (1) - Erm... I don't suggest you do this cuz you have to give them time to find their cursor. Did this and reduced the time of spinner
00:37:149 (1) - ^

No prob in norm

Hard
00:17:435 (1,2) - Why don't add one repeat to each slider? It goes with the music and all... I think this suits the song better... Will need some consideration
00:20:862 (1,2) - ^
00:33:292 (2,3,4) - Overlap a bit more Done!

That's all ^^
you have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Thanks for modding~ and thanks for the star :)
Low
General

- Your timing is off by a decent amount. You should get someone's help with that, since I'm not good with timing.
- You need to set a preview point for all difficulties. I suggest putting it at 00:58:578
- Capitalize the word "online" in the source.
- The tags are inconsistent in the difficulties. Make them the same as suko's Normal, those kiai times are nice. Also, you don't need "Ragnarok Online" in the tags since it is in the source already.
- The kiai times start at weird places and are inconsistent throughout the difficulties. Please make them the same.

Easy

00:25:149 (1) - You don't need a new combo here. It looks silly.
00:27:720 (1,2) - Don't stack circles under sliders in an easy difficulty. It's a bit hard to read for newer players.
00:29:435 (1,2) - ^
00:31:148 (1,1) - Two long spinners here? I don't really think this is suitable, neither does it fit well. It seems like you just got lazy when mapping here. Please map this out.
01:02:862 (1) - Remove this new combo.
01:04:577 (1) - ^
01:34:577 (2) - Please space this a bit farther by using distance snap.
01:41:434 (1) - You should not have slider speed changes anywhere in an easy difficulty. I highly suggest making these normal speed due to the difficulty.
01:50:434 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't have random spacing changes in an easy difficulty either. This seems too hard.

Normal

00:54:720 (1) - This doesn't follow the rhythm well at all. I suggest starting it one white tick later and putting a beat where it used to be. Don't forget to delete 00:56:434 (2) if you do this.
01:30:720 (2) - Don't make this slanted. Make it vertical, since the previous slider was vertical as well.

This difficulty was pretty well constructed. Good job.

Hard

- This has a bunch of unsnapped stuff in it.
- Make either the HP drain or overall difficulty higher. 5 for both is too easy.
00:51:720 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't add a new combo to every one of these. It looks silly.
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

This difficulty felt rather linear and boring, especially at the beginning. It needs some work.

Insane

- There's a lot of objects that are unsnapped.
- Be careful with random new combo notes.

Same thing as hard, this needs some work and remapping. Don't worry, it's only your first map.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
altc3000

Jacob wrote:

General

- Your timing is off by a decent amount. You should get someone's help with that, since I'm not good with timing.
- You need to set a preview point for all difficulties. I suggest putting it at 00:58:578
- Capitalize the word "online" in the source.
- The tags are inconsistent in the difficulties. Make them the same as suko's Normal, those kiai times are nice. Also, you don't need "Ragnarok Online" in the tags since it is in the source already.
- The kiai times start at weird places and are inconsistent throughout the difficulties. Please make them the same.

Easy

00:25:149 (1) - You don't need a new combo here. It looks silly.
00:27:720 (1,2) - Don't stack circles under sliders in an easy difficulty. It's a bit hard to read for newer players.
00:29:435 (1,2) - ^
00:31:148 (1,1) - Two long spinners here? I don't really think this is suitable, neither does it fit well. It seems like you just got lazy when mapping here. Please map this out.
01:02:862 (1) - Remove this new combo.
01:04:577 (1) - ^
01:34:577 (2) - Please space this a bit farther by using distance snap.
01:41:434 (1) - You should not have slider speed changes anywhere in an easy difficulty. I highly suggest making these normal speed due to the difficulty.
01:50:434 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You shouldn't have random spacing changes in an easy difficulty either. This seems too hard.

Normal

00:54:720 (1) - This doesn't follow the rhythm well at all. I suggest starting it one white tick later and putting a beat where it used to be. Don't forget to delete 00:56:434 (2) if you do this.
01:30:720 (2) - Don't make this slanted. Make it vertical, since the previous slider was vertical as well.

This difficulty was pretty well constructed. Good job.

Hard

- This has a bunch of unsnapped stuff in it.
- Make either the HP drain or overall difficulty higher. 5 for both is too easy.
00:51:720 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't add a new combo to every one of these. It looks silly.
01:50:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

This difficulty felt rather linear and boring, especially at the beginning. It needs some work.

Insane

- There's a lot of objects that are unsnapped.
- Be careful with random new combo notes.

Same thing as hard, this needs some work and remapping. Don't worry, it's only your first map.

Good luck!
Done! Thanks for modding :)
-Neipezi
Hi~ Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[Easy]
00:11:434 (2,4) - remove Clap
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:24:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:27:720 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:29:005 (2) - Clap
00:29:435 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:32:862 (3,4) - Slide the tail section Clap
00:36:291 (3,4) - ^
00:43:149 (3) - Slide the tail section Finishi
00:44:863 (1) - slide the head Finish on, the tail section of Craps
00:47:434 (4) - remove Clap
00:48:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:50:863 (4) - ^
01:02:005 (1,2,1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
01:06:291 (3) - Slide the tail section Clap
01:08:005 (3) - ^
01:09:720 (2) - remove clap
01:09:935 (1) - Finishi here
Besides this night I beat a billion Clap change please.

[suko's Normal]
00:24:505 (2) - remove
01:39:720 (7) - NC
01:40:148 (1) - remove NC
01:47:434 (2,3,4) - slider change (Arrow 1 add)
01:52:577 (5) - Slide the tail section Finish

[Hard]
00:27:720 (1,2) - remove Whistle
00:28:148 - Combo add?
00:29:005 (1) - 00:28:791 - move (Accrete interval.)
00:34:577 (1) - ~ 00:38:005 (1) - Please add to the notes in between the combo.
00:39:291 (2) - Combo and Clap add?
00:41:005 (4) - ^
00:43:148 (3) - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:44:220 - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:47:862 - Combo and Clap add?
00:51:291 - 1/2 Slider add?
00:55:148 (1) - clap
01:42:720 (11) - combo add?

[Insane]
00:56:112 (6) - 1/2 Slider chenge
00:55:148 - ~ 00:58:362 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
64,32,55148,5,8,0:0:0
144,192,55362,1,8,0:0:0
24,152,55577,1,8,0:0:0
184,72,55791,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56005,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56112,2,0,P|360:64|416:56,1,99.9999940395356
432,80,56434,1,0,0:0:0
444,108,56541,1,0,0:0:0
444,136,56648,1,0,0:0:0
436,164,56755,1,0,0:0:0
420,188,56862,1,0,0:0:0
404,212,56969,1,0,0:0:0
396,240,57077,1,0,0:0:0
400,268,57184,1,0,0:0:0
416,296,57291,1,0,0:0:0
432,320,57398,1,0,0:0:0
436,348,57505,1,0,0:0:0
420,372,57612,1,0,0:0:0
392,384,57719,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,57934,5,0,0:0:0
280,324,58041,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58148,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58362,1,0,0:0:0
01:50:005 - ~ 01:53:434 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
152,28,110005,5,0,0:0:0
16,104,110219,1,0,0:0:0
176,120,110434,1,0,0:0:0
40,196,110648,1,0,0:0:0
72,276,110862,2,0,P|52:332,1,49.9999970197678
152,360,111184,1,0,0:0:0
172,332,111291,1,0,0:0:0
204,320,111398,1,0,0:0:0
240,324,111505,1,0,0:0:0
272,340,111612,1,0,0:0:0
296,364,111719,5,0,0:0:0
304,328,111827,1,0,0:0:0
332,308,111934,1,0,0:0:0
368,304,112041,1,0,0:0:0
400,316,112148,1,0,0:0:0
436,312,112255,1,0,0:0:0
464,292,112362,1,0,0:0:0
476,260,112469,1,0,0:0:0
492,228,112577,5,4,0:0:0
460,212,112684,1,0,0:0:0
436,188,112791,1,0,0:0:0
424,156,112898,1,0,0:0:0
428,120,113005,5,4,0:0:0
388,108,113112,1,0,0:0:0
352,92,113219,1,0,0:0:0
320,68,113327,1,0,0:0:0
296,36,113434,1,4,0:0:0
The other thing is all good. :oops:
Do not jump too. Please specify the lot.

That I can see here.
Ranked Hope~ :oops:
Topic Starter
altc3000

-Kirito wrote:

Hi~ Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[Easy]
00:11:434 (2,4) - remove Clap
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:21:720 (2) - ^
00:24:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:27:720 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:29:005 (2) - Clap
00:29:435 (1) - Arrow Clap (Slide the tail section Clap remove)
00:32:862 (3,4) - Slide the tail section Clap
00:36:291 (3,4) - ^
00:43:149 (3) - Slide the tail section Finishi
00:44:863 (1) - slide the head Finish on, the tail section of Craps
00:47:434 (4) - remove Clap
00:48:292 (1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
00:50:863 (4) - ^
01:02:005 (1,2,1,2) - ^(Slide the head fixed Clap)
01:06:291 (3) - Slide the tail section Clap
01:08:005 (3) - ^
01:09:720 (2) - remove clap
01:09:935 (1) - Finishi here
Besides this night I beat a billion Clap change please.
Done~
[suko's Normal]
00:24:505 (2) - remove
01:39:720 (7) - NC
01:40:148 (1) - remove NC
01:47:434 (2,3,4) - slider change (Arrow 1 add) Um I think 3 notes are better
01:52:577 (5) - Slide the tail section Finish
Done~
[Hard]
00:27:720 (1,2) - remove Whistle
00:28:148 - Combo add?
00:29:005 (1) - 00:28:791 - move (Accrete interval.)
00:34:577 (1) - ~ 00:38:005 (1) - Please add to the notes in between the combo.
00:39:291 (2) - Combo and Clap add?
00:41:005 (4) - ^
00:43:148 (3) - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:44:220 - Please add 1 1/4 slides Arrow.
00:47:862 - Combo and Clap add?
00:51:291 - 1/2 Slider add?
00:55:148 (1) - clap
01:42:720 (11) - combo add?
Done~
[Insane]
00:56:112 (6) - 1/2 Slider chenge
00:55:148 - ~ 00:58:362 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
64,32,55148,5,8,0:0:0
144,192,55362,1,8,0:0:0
24,152,55577,1,8,0:0:0
184,72,55791,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56005,1,8,0:0:0
320,32,56112,2,0,P|360:64|416:56,1,99.9999940395356
432,80,56434,1,0,0:0:0
444,108,56541,1,0,0:0:0
444,136,56648,1,0,0:0:0
436,164,56755,1,0,0:0:0
420,188,56862,1,0,0:0:0
404,212,56969,1,0,0:0:0
396,240,57077,1,0,0:0:0
400,268,57184,1,0,0:0:0
416,296,57291,1,0,0:0:0
432,320,57398,1,0,0:0:0
436,348,57505,1,0,0:0:0
420,372,57612,1,0,0:0:0
392,384,57719,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,57934,5,0,0:0:0
280,324,58041,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58148,1,0,0:0:0
280,324,58362,1,0,0:0:0
01:50:005 - ~ 01:53:434 - part here (I tried the cleanup.)
SPOILER
152,28,110005,5,0,0:0:0
16,104,110219,1,0,0:0:0
176,120,110434,1,0,0:0:0
40,196,110648,1,0,0:0:0
72,276,110862,2,0,P|52:332,1,49.9999970197678
152,360,111184,1,0,0:0:0
172,332,111291,1,0,0:0:0
204,320,111398,1,0,0:0:0
240,324,111505,1,0,0:0:0
272,340,111612,1,0,0:0:0
296,364,111719,5,0,0:0:0
304,328,111827,1,0,0:0:0
332,308,111934,1,0,0:0:0
368,304,112041,1,0,0:0:0
400,316,112148,1,0,0:0:0
436,312,112255,1,0,0:0:0
464,292,112362,1,0,0:0:0
476,260,112469,1,0,0:0:0
492,228,112577,5,4,0:0:0
460,212,112684,1,0,0:0:0
436,188,112791,1,0,0:0:0
424,156,112898,1,0,0:0:0
428,120,113005,5,4,0:0:0
388,108,113112,1,0,0:0:0
352,92,113219,1,0,0:0:0
320,68,113327,1,0,0:0:0
296,36,113434,1,4,0:0:0
The other thing is all good. :oops:
Do not jump too. Please specify the lot.

That I can see here.
Ranked Hope~ :oops:
Done~~ Thanks for modding~
oob360
[Easy]
00:21:720 (2) - should be clap if consistent with last measure
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:32:005 (2) - ^
00:35:434 (2) - ^
00:47:434 (4) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4) - Clap, none, none, Clap
01:15:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - none, clap, none, none, clap
01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:005 (1,1) - none, clap
01:32:862 (1,2) - ^
01:39:720 (1) - none or finish

[suko's Normal]
00:54:720 (5) - clap
00:55:148 (1) - none
01:24:291 (3,4,5,6) - confusing to me because the five is under the three. preference

[Hard]
00:38:005 (1) - slide tail clap
01:44:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is there any reason you don't have the whistles from before here?

I couldn't play Insane :oops:
Topic Starter
altc3000

oob360 wrote:

[Easy]
00:21:720 (2) - should be clap if consistent with last measure
00:26:863 (2) - ^
00:32:005 (2) - ^
00:35:434 (2) - ^
00:47:434 (4) - ^
01:13:149 (1,2,3,4) - Clap, none, none, Clap
01:15:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - none, clap, none, none, clap I changed this in my way cause I think that will suits better
01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:005 (1,1) - none, clap
01:32:862 (1,2) - ^
01:39:720 (1) - none or finish
Done~
[suko's Normal]
00:54:720 (5) - clap
00:55:148 (1) - none
01:24:291 (3,4,5,6) - confusing to me because the five is under the three. preference
Done~. I think the 5 is clear enough so I didnt change that
[Hard]
00:38:005 (1) - slide tail clap
01:44:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is there any reason you don't have the whistles from before here?
Done~
I couldn't play Insane :oops:
Thanks for modding~
blackabyss
hi there, mod from my queue :D

[Easy]

01:14:862 - add note here?
01:18:291 - ^
01:14:005 - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/1wdL4
if you like the patterns, here's the code:
104,120,14005,6,0,P|192:48|272:120,1,240.000001788139
271,199,15720,2,0,P|350:270|438:198,1,240.000001788139
01:18:291 - add note?
01:21:720 - ^

[Normal]

btw, hi tsusuko xD

00:51:720 - add finish? in the head of sliders?
00:55:148 - ^
01:22:577 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:16:577 - add finish?
00:17:434 - ^ just in the head
00:44:862 - add finish?
01:05:005 - add whistle?
01:10:577 - add finish in the end of sliders
01:42:934 - NC
01:43:148 - remove NC

[Insane]

00:16:577 (7) - add finish on the head
00:17:005 (8) - add finish :|
01:11:434 (1, 5) - ^
01:12:291 (1) - ^
01:38:862 (3, 4) - ^ on the head sliders
01:39:720 (1) - ^

Really beautiful maps. :)
here stars for you xD
Topic Starter
altc3000

blackabyss wrote:

hi there, mod from my queue :D

[Easy]

01:14:862 - add note here?
01:18:291 - ^
01:14:005 - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/1wdL4
if you like the patterns, here's the code:
104,120,14005,6,0,P|192:48|272:120,1,240.000001788139
271,199,15720,2,0,P|350:270|438:198,1,240.000001788139
01:18:291 - add note?
01:21:720 - ^
I think thats the style for my maps so I didnt change this sorry
[Normal]

btw, hi tsusuko xD

00:51:720 - add finish? in the head of sliders?
00:55:148 - ^
01:22:577 (1) - ^
Done~
[Hard]

00:16:577 - add finish?
00:17:434 - ^ just in the head
00:44:862 - add finish?
01:05:005 - add whistle?
01:10:577 - add finish in the end of sliders
01:42:934 - NC
01:43:148 - remove NC
Done except the NC part cause I think that is a new sentence for the music. Will consider it if someone suggest it again
[Insane]

00:16:577 (7) - add finish on the head
00:17:005 (8) - add finish :|
01:11:434 (1, 5) - ^
01:12:291 (1) - ^
01:38:862 (3, 4) - ^ on the head sliders
01:39:720 (1) - ^
Done~
Really beautiful maps. :)
here stars for you xD
Thanks for the mod and the star~ :)
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●try to change bit rate of mp3 file? 192kbps is best :3

[Easy]
●Approach Rate +1
●00:03:720 (1,2,3,4) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:11:433 (2,4) - add clap
●00:14:005 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:17:435 (1) - add finish
●00:14:005 (1,2) - 1 grid left ?
●00:19:148 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:22:577 (3) - ^
●00:24:292 (1,2,1) - try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/513634
●00:39:720 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:47:434 (4) - add clap
●00:50:005 (3) - this note is confusing many beginners >_< Please dont overlap
●00:50:863 (4) - add clap
●00:51:505 (1) - try to put spinner's start here ? 00:51:720 -
●00:58:578 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:03:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●01:09:720 (2) - add clap
●01:14:434 (3) - ^
●01:15:720 (1) - remove clap
●01:19:148 (1) - ^
●01:20:006 (2) - add clap
●01:24:292 (1) - new combo is unnecessary here
●01:27:720 (1) - ^
●01:40:578 (2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:434 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:44:863 (1,2) - ^ and remove clap head
●01:49:791 - This green line is unnecessary
●01:50:006 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too close (1.50x) it is better to use DS1.0x

try to put sound with constant rhythm :)

[suko's Normal]
●00:17:434 (6,1) - switch these newcombos ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●00:31:148 (5,1) - ^
●00:58:577 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:16:148 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's repeat
●01:36:291 (4) - add new combo
●01:41:005 (4) - add clap on the slider's head

[Hard]
●OD7 is not suitable at all. at least reduce OD please, because it's same as Insane diff
●00:28:577 (2) - add clap
●00:35:862 (4) - add whistle
●00:36:291 (5) - add new combo
●00:37:577 (8) - add whistle
●00:39:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●00:47:862 (6,1) - not stack better imo~ maybe , confusing this note
●00:55:148 (1) - add finish
●01:03:291 (3) - try to move to x:224 y:60 ?
●01:04:577 (2) - remove finish from the end since it follows nothing.
●01:11:862 (2) - add finish
●01:12:291 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:23:541 (1) - add finish
●01:39:077 (2,3) - ^
●01:39:719 (1) - add finish on the slider's head and add clap end
●01:43:148 (1) - add clap on the slider's end

[Insane]
●00:04:148 (2,4,6,8) - add clap
●00:07:577 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:11:005 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:14:434 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:17:434 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●00:20:434 (1) - remove new combo
●00:20:541 (1) - ^
●00:24:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - try to put more hit sound here
●00:31:041 (16) - remove note ?
●00:56:434 (7,11,15) - add clap
●00:59:648 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●01:10:362 - add whistle
●01:15:719 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●01:41:434 (7) - add new combo because you changed slider speed here.

I want more hit sound >_<

good luck ~ :P
Topic Starter
altc3000

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 from My queue.

[General]
●try to change bit rate of mp3 file? 192kbps is best :3

[Easy]
●Approach Rate +1
●00:03:720 (1,2,3,4) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:11:433 (2,4) - add clap
●00:14:005 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:17:435 (1) - add finish
●00:14:005 (1,2) - 1 grid left ?
●00:19:148 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:22:577 (3) - ^
●00:24:292 (1,2,1) - try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/513634
●00:39:720 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:47:434 (4) - add clap
●00:50:005 (3) - this note is confusing many beginners >_< Please dont overlap
●00:50:863 (4) - add clap
●00:51:505 (1) - try to put spinner's start here ? 00:51:720 -
●00:58:578 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:03:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●01:09:720 (2) - add clap
●01:14:434 (3) - ^
●01:15:720 (1) - remove clap
●01:19:148 (1) - ^
●01:20:006 (2) - add clap
●01:24:292 (1) - new combo is unnecessary here
●01:27:720 (1) - ^
●01:40:578 (2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:434 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:44:863 (1,2) - ^ and remove clap head
●01:49:791 - This green line is unnecessary
●01:50:006 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - spacing too close (1.50x) it is better to use DS1.0x

try to put sound with constant rhythm :)

[suko's Normal]
●00:17:434 (6,1) - switch these newcombos ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●00:31:148 (5,1) - ^
●00:58:577 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:16:148 (1,2) - add clap on the slider's repeat
●01:36:291 (4) - add new combo
●01:41:005 (4) - add clap on the slider's head

[Hard]
●OD7 is not suitable at all. at least reduce OD please, because it's same as Insane diff
●00:28:577 (2) - add clap
●00:35:862 (4) - add whistle
●00:36:291 (5) - add new combo
●00:37:577 (8) - add whistle
●00:39:720 (1) - remove clap on the slider's head
●00:47:862 (6,1) - not stack better imo~ maybe , confusing this note
●00:55:148 (1) - add finish
●01:03:291 (3) - try to move to x:224 y:60 ?
●01:04:577 (2) - remove finish from the end since it follows nothing.
●01:11:862 (2) - add finish
●01:12:291 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:23:541 (1) - add finish
●01:39:077 (2,3) - ^
●01:39:719 (1) - add finish on the slider's head and add clap end
●01:43:148 (1) - add clap on the slider's end

[Insane]
●00:04:148 (2,4,6,8) - add clap
●00:07:577 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:11:005 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:14:434 (2,4,6,8) - ^
●00:17:434 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●00:20:434 (1) - remove new combo
●00:20:541 (1) - ^
●00:24:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - try to put more hit sound here
●00:31:041 (16) - remove note ?
●00:56:434 (7,11,15) - add clap
●00:59:648 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●01:10:362 - add whistle
●01:15:719 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●01:41:434 (7) - add new combo because you changed slider speed here.

I want more hit sound >_<

good luck ~ :P
All done~ and added some more hit sound on Insane~

Thanks for modding~ :)
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