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senya - Koakuma Apple (EUROBEAT Remix)

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Chocopikel
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Chocopikel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月26日 at 22:13:17

Artist: senya
Title: Koakuma Apple (EUROBEAT Remix)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Bad apple gensokyo Lotus Land Story yuuhei satellite
BPM: 157
Filesize: 7038kb
Play Time: 04:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.72 stars, 389 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.99 stars, 513 notes)
  3. Normal (3.07 stars, 236 notes)
Download: senya - Koakuma Apple (EUROBEAT Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map song + EUROBEAT ver.
April 3rd 2012 - changed artist name. please reDL
Last edited by Chocopikel , edited 28 times in total.
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
1bannnnnnnn


ちょこ氏ぷろ
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix

General:

  1. 1 min without Objects... Is bad. I know you can start mapping in 00:39:156 Minimun.
  2. Combo Colours are.. rares.. Try use this.. are the same but.. Better? xD 
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 185,115,255
    Combo2 : 115,185,255
    Combo3 : 255,145,255
  3. This song need a Taiko Diff
Normal:
  1. 01:23:488 (3) - Move the 2nd Slider Point one Grid up [Grid lvl: 3]
  2. 01:25:398 (1) - Ugly Compared with all the Others sliders. Don't try make a Couple with the last Slider. Try make This / Remove NC and put the NC in The next Note.
  3. 01:41:832 (3) - Ugly Slider :c ... Try make other..
  4. 02:49:093 (3) - Move the 2nd Slider Point one Grid down [Grid lvl: 3]
  5. 02:51:003 (1) - The same with 01:25:398 (1)... Wait. you use Copy paste :c
  6. 03:07:437 (3) - The same with 01:41:832 (3) ... Try make other xD
  7. 03:10:112 (3) - Move this Slider one Grid down [Grid lvl: 4]
Hard:
  1. Nothing bad for me
Insane:
  1. 02:26:735 (2,3,4,5,1) - Bad Star x: This can be better 
    02:26:735 (2) - x:300|y:332
    02:26:927 (3) - x:220|y:212
    02:27:118 (4) - x:212|y:352
    02:27:309 (5) - x:302|y:245
    02:27:500 (1) - x:160|y:280
    All in grid lvl 4
  2. 03:30:367 (1,1,1) - Okay. The same Pattern. In all the Diffs. This is very unnecessary... You can make a Good patterns with 0,50 of S.V not only in this Diff.
[quote="DaxMasterix":476f1]OKAY. little mod.. Good map. This win a KdStar :> Good luck in Rank this \o/
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hiiiiii ;_;

[General]
Nothing found ;_;

[Insane]
SPOILER

  • 01:03:615 (1) - add finish (hard/normal diff have it)
    01:34:570 (4) - feels empty, note mb ? or add reverse arrow (to make same rhytm with all map like here 01:40:685 (1) -
    01:39:921 (5) - clap head/finish tail (normal/hard both have it)
    01:46:035 (3) - clap
    01:54:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this rhytm sounds very confusing for me, try this http://puu.sh/nuj8
    01:56:545 (4) - remove this slider and add note 01:56:640 (4) -
[Hard]
SPOILER

  • 03:48:711 (5) - finish (insane have it)
    04:00:940 (5) - ^

    I think adding notes here sounds much better for this diff
    01:34:570
    01:40:685
    01:46:800
    03:00:176
    03:06:290
    03:12:405

Couldn't find any major problems ;_;
everything is good for me~
Good luck~
Chocopikel
319 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Chocopikel
updated.
Thanks DaxMasterix and cRyo[iceeicee].
Last edited by Chocopikel , edited 1 time in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2010
Saten
hai Choco~

Lunatic
How about Stack Leniency 7? It would look better on notes such as this for example 01:46:800 (1,1) -
01:26:354 (4,1) - Try to make a custom stack on these notes?
01:52:532 (1) - Finish at the beginning
02:27:500 (1,2) - Finish on all parts
02:51:959 (4,1) - Custom stack?
03:10:112 (4) - 1 grid up
03:14:316 (6) - Ctrl+R?
03:30:558 (1) - Make this spinner-ending soft? Sounds better imo~

Hard
02:01:226 (4,1) - this might be too hard, considering swapping places on 02:01:704 (1,2) - ?
02:27:500 (1,2) - Finish on all parts
03:30:558 (1) - soft finish end on this spinner

Normal
02:27:500 (1,2) - Finish on all parts
03:30:558 (1) - like I mentioned before~

頑張って~
Chocopikel
319 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Chocopikel
updated~
Thanks Saten-san!!
Last edited by Chocopikel , edited 1 time in total.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Really nice map, I don't have much to say, just some little suggestions. =3=7

[Lunatic]
01:17:373 (5) - Rotate 4 degrees selection centre?
01:21:195 (4) - Rotate 10 degrees selection centre?
02:25:398 (5) - Rotate 7 degrees selection centre?

[Hard]
01:08:965 (4) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/nALz
01:23:488 (2) - Rotate -10 degrees selection centre?
01:41:449 (3) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/nAMB

[Normal]
Maybe rise overall difficulty by 1?
01:15:844 (1) - Move last square one grid down and three grids left? (lvl4)
01:17:373 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/nAP0

~ :3
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
よ

General
- 1 minute intro..a bit long xD

Normal
01:47:946 (2) - Reverse arrow looks funny facing directly left, like this http://puu.sh/nAB5
02:56:736 (1) - Style suggestion: http://puu.sh/nAF5
03:08:965 (1,2,3) - Rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/nAGn (ignore the mapping lol) matches vocals

Hard
01:42:405 (5) - Delete, then move (6) to the 1/2 tick, looks like this http://puu.sh/nALC, then start a slider or something at 01:43:360
03:09:156 (1) - Delete note

Lunatic
01:26:545 (1) - Move out instead http://puu.sh/nAR1
02:28:456 (2) - Something like this http://puu.sh/nATa, looks nice with 02:29:220 (1)
02:52:150 (1) - Same as before
02:59:411 (3) - Move a bit closer http://puu.sh/nAVl, puts more space between this and 03:00:176 (1); also 02:58:838 (2) will make a nice blanket :)
03:12:787 (1) - move to x:312 y:76
03:14:316 (6) - Not perfectly stacked with 03:13:169 (3)
03:59:793 (3,4) - Ctrl + R these separately http://puu.sh/nAXR

Old Insane
- kanpeki!

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Chocopikel
319 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Chocopikel
updated.
Thanks Lanttu and LunarSakuya.
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Lunatic

00:47:564 (5) - New combo here
00:48:328 (1) - if you put the new combo (^), delete this new combo
00:54:730 (3) - This whistle doesn't fit here
01:26:354 (4,1) - This is a little bit confusing, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/283772 (or fix this in your way)
02:20:335 (2) - Same as 00:54:730
02:51:959 (4,1) - Same as 01:26:354, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/283774 (or fix this in your way)
Nothing more

Hard

00:42:405 (2) - Delete the whistle in the repeat of the slider ><
00:54:634 (2) - ^
02:20:239 (2) - ^

Normal is fine
Chocopikel
319 posts
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Topic Starter
Chocopikel
updated.
Thanks Verdisphena.
mercury2004
615 posts
Joined February 2010
mercury2004
In game Request

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
-Folder OK
Can you increase all 5% timing section volume to 10%? a BAT told me to avoid it.


Normal Difficulty

AR-1 ? for me this is very fast for beginner
01:01:895 (1) - Finish all ? since you fin 01:26:545 (1,2,3,4) - this all
01:02:851 (2) - Finish head?
01:08:201 (1,2) - delete 2 and use reverse slider? and then add note 01:09:347 here? sound a lot better for me
01:11:258 (3) - Delete this note 01:11:640 (4) - place the slider here 01:11:258 and add note 01:11:640 here?
03:36:481 - use soft here?
03:42:214 - ^

Hard Difficulty
Star Rating is very high for a hard difficulty
OD -1 ?
00:48:328 (1) - This slider placement break the flow put it here
SPOILER
01:01:895 (1) - Fin all? same reason as easy dif
01:02:851 (2) - Fin head?
01:52:532 - This timing section use 60% audio volume? 80 ruin the song for me
02:27:500 (1,2) - Fin all? except 2's tail
03:07:054 (3) - I think you forgot to clap here
03:36:481 - use soft here?
03:45:271 (4) - NC here


Insane Difficulty
01:01:895 (1) - Fin all? same reason as easy dif
01:02:851 (2) - Fin head?
00:46:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - swap jump like this?
SPOILER
flow better
01:52:532 - This timing section use 60% audio volume? 80 ruin the song for me
02:27:500 (1,2) - Fin all? except 2's tail
03:12:405 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:481 - use soft here?


Comment : I can't be cheap skate for this map. This's a very well done beatmap. Especially Lunatic. The jump is perfect (too easy though). star for you


If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
Chocopikel
319 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Chocopikel
updated.
Thanks mercury2004.
jamxx
501 posts
Joined November 2010
jamxx
☆～
前回の小悪魔りんごも楽しかったですが今回も心地良いジャンプが多くてよかったです(*´ω｀*)
Insane
01:26:545 (1,2,3,4) - 、02:52:150 (1,2,3,4) - 楽しかったです
頑張ってください～
Chocopikel
319 posts
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Topic Starter
Chocopikel

jamxx wrote:

☆～
前回の小悪魔りんごも楽しかったですが今回も心地良いジャンプが多くてよかったです(*´ω｀*)
Insane
01:26:545 (1,2,3,4) - 、02:52:150 (1,2,3,4) - 楽しかったです
頑張ってください～
☆ありがとうございます！
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
Normal
  1. 02:03:233 (1) - I'd start it on red tick, not on this blue one
Hard
  1. 01:34:570 — what if you add a note here? Feels empty without it
  2. 01:40:685 — same? Just to keep rhythm and avoid these little breaks between notes
  3. 01:46:800 ^ (and other moments like these)
  4. 02:02:373 (6) - better add extra repeat and delete 02:02:946 (7)
  5. 03:45:653 (6) - shouldn't NC be here?
  6. 03:48:711 (5) - same (add it here and remove from next slider)
  7. 04:04:570 (2) - I don't know if it's a good idea. You put slow slider right after some jumps at the end of map
Insane
  1. 03:54:825 (7) - add new combo here and remove it from next slider
  2. 04:00:940 (7) - same
The only thing I don't really like is background. Could you change it to something more.. uh, I don't know... bright and clear?
But the map itself is cool, I like it!
Chocopikel
319 posts
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Topic Starter
Chocopikel
updated.
Thanks TicClick!!
JauiPlaY
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Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
Hi
Some suggestions:

[General]
If the .osb file is useless, remove it.
The tag apple could be removed since it has been already in your title.

[Normal]
01:29:602 (3) - Add clap to the reverse arrow?
01:31:131 (1) - ^
Also there are many similar sliders like this, so same suggestion for them.
02:26:927 (3,1,2) - This stacking may be a little bit ugly.
And I supposed AR-1.

[Hard]
01:53:870 (x) - I expect a note here.
01:56:927 (x) - ^
Also same suggestion for 01:58:456, 01:59:984, 02:03:042. I don't really understand why you stop at those blue lines.
03:52:532 (1) - Should starts at 03:52:437.
03:59:411 (1,2,3,4) - Add some whistles may sounds better.

[Lunatic]
Awesome.

That's all. Good luck~
Chocopikel
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Chocopikel
updated.
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