Hi there, mod from queue~~
General:
I suppose 'pure colors' are not very suitalbe for this map (both music and background), and it looks like u forget to set them?
here's a suggestion:
color1: 0,128,128
color2:128,64,64
color3: 0,64,128
color4:128,0,128
there's over 30s before ur first note...i highly recommend u to cut short ur mp3 file...
Stack Leniency is not recommended to change...set it back to 7, i advise:)
Easy:
OD-1
Slider Tick Rate : 2->1. It's not a good idea that use str to adjust score, and str2 is also not suit for an easy diff.
and more, there're many blanks where u can add notes to increase score, for example, 00:36:155
remove all stacks. It's not recommended, MAT may unbubbled ur map for that.
(remove some sliderslide sound, that make ur map noisy. U can set this sound, copy it into ur map folder, and change ur audio to soft:custom 1.)
01:09:155 (2) - i thought it's better to stop it at a white line..and remove sliderslide effect. if u wanna add a whistle, please click the slider first, and then click the head (or end) circle of the slider to make it red, and then add whistle.
(more: i found similar sliderslide sound problems in all diffs, maybe u need to fix them if it is not designed).
01:10:869 (2) - ^
01:40:012 (6,7,8) - it's not suitable for an easy diff, frankly speaking, it's too hard
01:46:869 (2,3,4) - ^, and triple finish is...noisy...i suppose triple whistle is enough
similar problems appeared following...
03:01:869 (1,1) - they're close...and i thought the first spinner is unnecessary...maybe u can replace it by something more interesting.
Normal:
HP-1 AR-1
Slider Tick Rate: 2->1.
01:09:048 (2) - from here, i suppose all sliders should have only 1 whistle, both at the beginning or end are ok, maybe that because u don't know how to set it, and i've told u above.
01:46:440 (1,2,3,4) - noisy finishes...
01:51:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - it's too hard for a normal diff, and the shape looks ugly...suggest to remap here
01:55:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
02:04:440 (3,4) - and 02:06:154 (3,4) - and more , they're maybe unrankable in this diff. Actually it's really not a good idea to use blue line in normal diff because blue lines always means...expert or pro
the last spinners - same as easy.
Hard:
AR-1 OD-1
01:40:012 (2,3,4) - noisy finish.....
01:46:869 (2,3,4) - ^
I thought it's good
Insane:
about combo : generally, mapper select to keep one DS in a combo exept stacks, that is, u'd better start a new combo if u change ur ds. An opposite sample is there's no same DS between all notes in a combo, but that is special case. I thought , u should arrange ur combos
00:51:583 (2,3) - they're looks strange because u choose to use smooth but not hard curves...
01:29:298 (1,2,3) - ^
01:35:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:38:726 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - ^...actually i suppose the shape is really ugly...
01:58:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - another ugly style...and combo
02:31:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - style...
03:00:155 (1,2,3,4) - A suddenly bake in kiai time maybe not suit here...yes they're jump but i suppose it's not impossible jump with 1/2 beats due to the speed is not very fast
okay that's all:)