1. Coward Haku (4,82 stars, 465 notes)
2. Easy (1,89 stars, 185 notes)
3. Hard (4,88 stars, 449 notes)
4. Neo's Taikoward (4,89 stars, 1127 notes)
5. Normal (3,7 stars, 292 notes)

Ain053 wrote:

[General]

BG Resolution is 640 x 480, this is not allowed. The allowed BG resolution is 800 x 600 & 1024 x 768. (You may resize the BG if you wish, though)

[Easy]

00:15:375 (3-4) - Seems off by one grid, move to left 1 grid.
00:16:375 (1-3) - ^
00:17:875 (4) - The slider overlaps a circle, ugly.

[Normal] & [Hard]

No problem as I can see.

-kevincela- wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:14:375 (1) - Questo anti-jump potrebbe far confondere moolta gente inesperta. Dovresti fixarlo. Fix
2. 00:17:875 (4) - ^. Se vuoi,puoi utilizzare questo pattern: Fix
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:28:125 (2,3,4) - Ti suggerirei di posizionarle nella timeline così,accorciando lo slider: Fix
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:125 (2) - Spacing Fix
5. 01:14:375 (1) - Muovilo 1/2 dopo,e accorcialo affinchè non finisca a 01:14:875 - Fix
6. 01:18:375 (1) - Come sopra,ma fallo finire a 01:19:125 - Fix
7. 01:20:125 (3) - Spacing Fix
8. 01:22:125 (1) - Muovilo 1/2 dopo,e accorcialo affinchè non finisca a 01:22:875 - Fix
9. 01:32:125 (3,4,5) - Fai come 00:28:125 (2,3,4) - Fix

[Normal]

1. 00:32:125 (3) - New combo? Fix
2. 01:19:375 - Aggiungi una nota Fix
3. 01:27:375 - ^ Fix
4. 01:28:375 (1) - Mettilo 1/2 dopo,così suona male Fix
5. 02:04:375 (5) - Spacing Fix
6. 03:09:375 (1) - E' un jump troppo grande per una normal,dovresti ridurlo D: Fix
7. 03:19:375 (5) - Spacing Fix

[Hard]

1. I clap nei tick rossi suonano davvero male :\ Dovresti cambiare la loro posizione sui tick bianchi A me piace così lol
2. 00:04:125 (3) - 1 grid a destra Fix
3. 00:51:375 (3) - Spacing Nu (Fatto apposta)
4. 00:57:125 (5) - ^ ^
5. 01:06:125 (1) - ^ Fix
6. 01:55:375 (3) - ^Nu (Fatto apposta)
7. 01:57:125 (2) - Mettilo 4 grid in basso e fallo combaciare con la fine dello slider 01:56:375 (6) - Fix
8. 02:09:125 (5) - Spacing Nu (Fatto apposta)
9. 02:10:125 (1) - ^ Fix
10. 02:10:620 - Questo break è davvero troppo lungo :\ Dovresti mapparci qualcosa WIP
11. 02:54:375 (3) - Spacing Nu (Fatto apposta)
12. 03:00:125 (5) - ^ Nu (Fatto apposta)
13. 03:09:125 - Aggiungi una nota Nu
14. 03:12:125 (2) - Mettilo 4 grid in basso e fallo combaciare con la fine dello slider 03:11:375 (6) - Fix
15. 03:24:125 (1) - Spacing Nu (Fatto apposta)
16. 03:27:875 - Aggiungi una nota Fix

1. i think it's just square patterns and random sliders 1/2 everywhere, you should make some variation to this...
2. 02:09:125 (5) - spacing is not correct
3. 01:55:375 (3) - ^
4. 02:10:125 (1) - ^
5. 00:51:375 (3) - ^
6. 00:57:125 (5) - ^
7. 00:59:500 (5) - add note here?
8. 01:05:625 (8) - make this 1/4 then add reverse arrow
9. 02:07:625 - add 2 notes at 02:07:625 and 02:07:750 then 02:07:875 (3) slider
10. 03:00:125 (5) - spacing is not correct
11. and don't copy paste too much...

1. 02:08:375 (4) - it's not stacked properly
2. 02:09:125 (6,7) - don't use claps
3. 00:14:625 (3) - ^
4. 00:28:125 (1) - ^

1. can make sliders better.. also random speed changes are hard to handle
2. 00:04:375 (2) - ...
3. 00:06:375 (2) - stack it right?
4. 00:08:125 (1) - ^
5. 00:11:375 (4) - 1/2 +reverse?
6. 01:09:000 - add note?
7. 03:28:375 (1) - end on white tick, then next blue -> next spinner (for the hitsound)
8. 02:47:375 (1,2,3) - move to (456,96)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue

source should be Megpoid GUMI

Hard

1. i think it's just square patterns and random sliders 1/2 everywhere, you should make some variation to this...
2. 02:09:125 (5) - spacing is not correct No, i done this on purpose
3. 01:55:375 (3) - ^ No, i done this on purpose
4. 02:10:125 (1) - ^ No, i done this on purpose
5. 00:51:375 (3) - ^ No, i done this on purpose
6. 00:57:125 (5) - ^ No, i done this on purpose
7. 00:59:500 (5) - add note here? No
8. 01:05:625 (8) - make this 1/4 then add reverse arrow No
9. 02:07:625 - add 2 notes at 02:07:625 and 02:07:750 then 02:07:875 (3) slider No
10. 03:00:125 (5) - spacing is not correct No, i done this on purpose
11. and don't copy paste too much...

Normal

1. 02:08:375 (4) - it's not stacked properly Ok
2. 02:09:125 (6,7) - don't use claps Ok
3. 00:14:625 (3) - ^ Ok
4. 00:28:125 (1) - ^ Ok

Coward Haku

1. can make sliders better.. also random speed changes are hard to handle
2. 00:04:375 (2) - ...
3. 00:06:375 (2) - stack it right?
4. 00:08:125 (1) - ^
5. 00:11:375 (4) - 1/2 +reverse?
6. 01:09:000 - add note?
7. 03:28:375 (1) - end on white tick, then next blue -> next spinner (for the hitsound)
8. 02:47:375 (1,2,3) - move to (456,96)

that's all

Good luck~

1. The word 'morissi' will still appear when I used "No Video". Try to find a way around this so the "No Video" user won't go "WTF" when they see that pop out of nowhere? (It's only supposed to be in the video right?)

1. Uh... I don't know. This feels like a Normal- (easier Normal), what with the double circles (not sure what it's named), absurd-ended (hard-to-know-the-end) type of sliders, slider-circle-slider formation with only 1/2 beat-long of space, 1.2 SV... Okay, I whined a bit too much, but seriously.

1. There's a lot of slider velocity changes that seem to be... unnecessary and only serve to hinder players' progress. One example is 00:13:375 (4).
2. 00:04:375 (2) - Sliders that overlap its own slidertrack is an unrankable stuff, and is in the rules. Change please.
3. 00:08:875 (3) - ^
4. 03:57:500 (1) - I don't think we need this spinner. Remove?

wmfchris wrote:

owo

[General]
- Remove tag "Italian" (it'll be under genre) and "megapoid gumi" (because she's not the singer; refer to past ranked stuffs) Ok

[Haku]

SPOILER

00:04:375 (2) - this is pretty unrankable because the (2)-circle totally covered a section of the slider.
00:08:875 (3) - ^
00:11:375 (4) - not that easy to notice the SV change, NC here and remove the next NC may notify players
00:13:375 (4) - ^
00:15:375 (4) - ^ [same for the rest of the song]
00:17:375 (3,4) - unstack like notes before, or simply stack all stuffs?
00:33:375 (4) - this is covered by (2)
00:40:375 (5) - NC to notify SV change of (7)
01:12:125 (7) - ^
02:26:375 (7) - use whistle or finish
02:40:875 (1) - whistle?
02:40:875 (1) - [SB] - don't know what's that but it could appear in a place that is not covered by the notes
02:44:875 (1,2) - the duplet sound between (1,2) sounds bad, if you want to retain symmetricity seems like you can't shorten (1) but make the slider end softer would be good.
03:16:375 (7) - slider covered
03:18:875 (4) - ^

- The switching between 0.5x slider and 1x slider is too frequent and is very hard to identify since you use both to similar situations. That makes gameplay very misleading.
- Those Burai sliders and covered sliders are unrankable, at least under current rules.

[Hard]

SPOILER

you may want to raise the difficulty a bit like OD 6/AR7 Ok
00:31:625 (2) - make it symmetrical, up 1 grid Ok
01:14:375 (1) - artificially NC this one (bug) Ok
01:56:375 (6,2) - stack them Ok
02:02:875 (2,3,4) - spacing Ok
02:09:125 (5) - ^ Ok
02:10:125 (1) - imo use 1x slider sounds more suitable Ok
02:11:875 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/283974 make slider like this? Ok
02:15:875 (1) - ^ Ok
02:22:625 (2) - Spacing, recommend to unstack (2~5) Ok
02:54:375 (3) - spacing Ok

- make some variation on sounding other than constant clapping, make sure the logic is consistant for the whole diff
- Avoid some silly spacing problem
- Try to avoid notes flows stacking together too much because that wastes half of the playing screen and makes stuffs hard to read.
- You may want to fix some sliders position to make the diff more neatly, like 00:14:875 (3,4) - , (3)'s top is at y:67 while (4)'s top at y:64 which slightly differs but is a visible difference. You may want to artificially fix them.
- Lastly, you may need more notes variation and don't make stuffs like notes around the edge of the screen, etc.

[Normal]
00:39:375 (1) - refer to last combo I don't know why you NC here, remove it
00:40:375 (1) - ^
00:40:375 (1) - I prefer NC for every 2 triplets because two of them forms 1 group (the hitsound repeats every combo)

- similar problem with [Hard]
- Try not to stack like 3 1/2 notes together and make some placement variations like triangle, overstacking may be a difficulty to weaker players
- Similarly, try not to make sliders with many reverse tick because players may not know when slider ends, and you can make 1/2 variations instead of the slider.

[Easy]
- Make sure the spacing here is really consistant for new players, like 00:16:875 (2,3,4) - that would be very misleading to newbies.
- Try to avoid consevutive 1/2 notes.
- Similar stuffs mentioned above.

I think you'll need some remapping to reach the standard, but the map's not bad :3 Thanks

LunaticMara wrote:

yo

[Storyboard] Thanks
- Are you going to use credits.png?
- Because I am fast and I rock, here's some storyboard help for you. Open your .osb, wipe everything out and put this code inside it. Then press Ctrl + S.

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"morissi.png",320,240
F,0,161875,,0.2,0
F,0,161875,162375,0,1
M,0,162375,,227,277
R,0,162375,,0
F,0,162375,169500,1,0.982
F,0,169500,170000,0.982,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

- morissi.png may blend better, if it's little bit more grayer.

[Easy]
00:28:875 (4) - Totally nazi, but you could make the slider better by doing this; http://puu.sh/odzK Ok
01:22:375 (1,2) - The spacing in here seems different than in other patterns - fix? Ok
03:41:875 (1,1,1,1) - Are these necessary? You could like, map the first three spinners and leave the fourth one. No, them fit with the voice

[Normal]
00:04:125 (1) - More nazi; http://puu.sh/odCM Ok
00:22:375 (1) - I don't think this fits. That part works perfectly as a break. Ok
01:16:625 (3) - Needs some fixing, but because I suck, I don't have any suggestions for this. Ok
02:34:375 - A note with a finish hitsound could be nice in here Ok
03:28:375 (1) - This is too hard for Normal. Ok
01:06:625 (1,1) - This could work as a break. o.o?
02:34:375 (1) - End this at 02:41:875... maybe. o.o?
02:54:375 (3) - Is this unsnapped? o.o?

[Coward Haku]
00:06:125 (1) - That stacking doesn't look that great...
00:08:125 (1) - Same as above.
02:46:625 (3) - Same as above above.
03:57:500 (1) - Not necessary.

Good luck - Italian Power!

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there.

I don't know whether I should do this or not, but whatever. I'll just mod this.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.


>General

1. The word 'morissi' will still appear when I used "No Video". Try to find a way around this so the "No Video" user won't go "WTF" when they see that pop out of nowhere? (It's only supposed to be in the video right?)

Maybe replace the video with a complete sb

>Easy

1. Uh... I don't know. This feels like a Normal- (easier Normal), what with the double circles (not sure what it's named), absurd-ended (hard-to-know-the-end) type of sliders, slider-circle-slider formation with only 1/2 beat-long of space, 1.2 SV... Okay, I whined a bit too much, but seriously.

o.o? Is a 1.7 Star Difficult

>Coward Haku

1. There's a lot of slider velocity changes that seem to be... unnecessary and only serve to hinder players' progress. One example is 00:13:375 (4).
2. 00:04:375 (2) - Sliders that overlap its own slidertrack is an unrankable stuff, and is in the rules. Change please.
3. 00:08:875 (3) - ^
4. 03:57:500 (1) - I don't think we need this spinner. Remove?

Ha. A good mapset. Just fix some unrankable stuff and I suppose you're ready to go.

Good luck on the way

Oh, and star.

1. The false burai are (now "is" is more correct) a challenge to the idiot who made some rules. They're (now it's) playable and have a visibly obvious path.
2. Hit/Slider-under-Slider are rankable now, by some time.
3. Stacking is done for pattern or pattern fixing
4. I didn't end the hitsounds
5. Slider Velocities have senses if you hear better, and are pretty readable ( DAT TICK ). NCing to make them readable is Nosense: Add a Nosense NC, while stopping the distance ticks is nosense

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

The false burai are (now "is" is more correct) a challenge to the idiot who made some rules.

Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^^

Hard

00:03:375 - remove new combo No
00:04:375(1) - put on 1grid to right http://puu.sh/pvX2
00:05:375 - remove new combo No
00:07:375 - ^ No
00:07:375 - put this note on middle slider http://puu.sh/pvXM Ok
00:10:125(4,1) - spacing (check that it everywhere was identical, in some places it fluctuates till 0.84) Ok
00:25:875 - this slider not beautiful maybe make this http://puu.sh/pvZk I Like it.
00:30:375 - this looks better http://puu.sh/pvZu Ok
00:35:875(3) - 1 grid to the right Ok
00:42:375 - add note Ok
00:50:875(2,3) - spacing Ok
00:56:625(4,5) - ^ Is on purpouse
01:22:375(1,2) - http://puu.sh/pw22 <-- this looks better Ok
01:46:375 - add note Ok
01:54:875(2,3) - spacing >< Is on purpouse
02:10:875 - add note with clap No
02:11:375 - add note No
02:11:875 - add clap No
02:13:875 - ^ No
02:15:375 - add note with finish No
02:15:875 - add clap No
02:17:875 - ^ No
02:19:375 - add note with finish No
02:20:375 - add clap No
02:21:375 - ^ No
02:22:375 - ^ No
02:22:875(3 and 5 notes) - ^ No
02:24:375 ^ No
02:25:375 - ^ No
02:26:375 - add finish No
02:59:625(4,5) - spacing >< Is on purpouse
03:09:125 - add note No
03:09:875 - again spacing Is on purpouse
03:23:625(4,1) - ^ Is on purpouse

Coward Haku

00:06:125(1,2) - begin from one point
00:08:125(1) - put this note on end slider
00:44:375(5) - make this slider shorter and add note on 00:45:125 this sound better
01:00:375 - this better http://puu.sh/pw8J

336,128,60375,2,0,B|388:76|344:-16|264:2|240:48,1,220,2|8

01:12:125 - slider *6* very hides slider *7* you should put slider *7* in other place
01:30:125(4,5,1) - put begin from one point or make spacing between notes it is more
02:06:375(4) - http://puu.sh/pwaJ

96,284,126375,2,0,B|184:216|164:80,1,220

02:17:125(5) -

64,92,137126,2,0,B|104:64|164:93|180:152|156:188,1,164.1

02:26:375 - maybe remove this note and put spinner end on 02:27:875 and make loudness is more silent
02:46:000(2) - make this slider shorter and start on red section
02:48:875 - make this slider double
03:18:875 - put slider *4* in other place

Normal

00:08:125(5) - end this slider on 00:08:875 and add note on 00:09:375 No
00:31:125 - add note Ok
00:37:875 - ^ No
00:42:375 - ^ Ok
00:54:875 - ^ No
01:00:875 - ^ No
01:03:125 - put this note on white section No
01:16:625(3) - http://puu.sh/pwkd this looks better Ok

152,120,76625,2,0,B|112:84|48:120|60:180,1,140

01:20:125 - end this slider on 01:20:875 and put note on 01:21:375 No
01:24:125 - ^ No
01:46:375 - add note Ok
02:10:875 - ^ No
02:11:375 - ^ No
02:13:875 - ^ No
02:17:875 - ^ No
03:09:125(8,1) - stack this notes and сheck all spacing No
03:25:375 - remove this slider make this http://puu.sh/pwmY No

Easy

you should remap from 00:02:375 to 00:15:625. I advise put notes and sliders on white section, this sounds better.
00:28:125 - put this not on white section
00:28:875 - make this slider double
00:32:125 - make this http://puu.sh/pwoY
00:42:375 - add note
00:56:125 - remove note
00:59:125 - ^
01:16:125 - put this note on white section
01:17:875 - add note
01:23:125 - remove note
01:24:125 - put this note on white section
01:27:875 - add note
01:32:875 - make this slider double
01:37:875 - add note
01:41:875 - ^
01:45:875 - remove note and put slider (end on big white section)
01:55:125 - remove note
02:00:125 - ^
02:08:125 - ^
02:26:375 - you should put notes and sliders to this time bcz break iv very long
03:41:875 - REMOVE THIS SPINNERS ALL! they here aren't necessary

Good luck ^^

Bobo wrote:

Uhhhh.... Not too impressed by the map itself, I'll just do a [General] mod.

Change the title to Coward Montblanc (Italian Version) No, the title given by the author is with the tilde[b]

MEGPOID GUMI is not a valid source, set the source to the original composer of the piece - "[b]DECO*27" Ok



Add "megpoid gumi" to the tags. Ok
Remove "thymeka" from the tags as it's the artist. Ok

Disable letterbox as you have a video. Not disabled, because the video will soon be replaced

Remove the countdown from every diff.Ok

Now, to fix the taiko bg.. Ok

read

Take the .osb, copy the code from the .osb and paste it into the .osu for the STANDARD DIFFS ONLY.
Like so:
Then delete the .osb and full submit.

eh.

2nnt wrote:

Hi~

Easy
00:17:875 (4) - Move the turn on a tick, like this? eh? o.o
00:26:375 (1) - Add finish? Ok
00:27:375 (1) - Remove finish and new combo? Ok
00:28:375 (3) - Add new combo? Ok
00:55:125 (1) - Move the slider end on grid up by one square? (Grid Level 4) Ok
00:56:875 (4) - Move the reverse arrow down by one square? (Grid Level 4) Ok
02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - 30 seconds break, all I can ask here is to add something. Maybe
02:58:125 (1) - Same as at 00:55:125 Ok
02:59:875 (4) - Same as at 00:56:875 Ok

Normal
The break at around 2 and half minutes is way better than the 30 seconds break in Easy. Maybe you should add break like in this difficulty in the Easy instead of that long break?

Hard
00:42:375 (3) - Add finish? Ok
01:04:875 (5) - Add new combo? Ok
01:06:125 (1) - Remove new combo and add finish to slider end? No
01:22:375 (1) - Add finish? Ok
01:29:875 (2) - ^ Ok

If you go on vocals here:

01:56:875 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:57:125 (2) - Add new combo?
01:58:875 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:59:125 (2) - Add new combo?
Same with part at 02:04:875 and the last chorus.
This is just my opinion and might sound weird though.

If you go on beat here:

01:56:375 (6) - Add new combo?
01:56:875 (1) - Remove new combo? Ok
01:58:375 (5) - Add new combo? Ok
01:58:875 (1) - Remove new combo? Ok
Same with part at 02:04:875 and the last chorus.
This is just my opinion and might sound weird though.

02:23:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add claps to some of these (or all if you like of course)? Ok
02:26:375 (6) - Add finish? Ok


Coward Haku
This seems to be fine~
Bye~

Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read.

1. 00:02:125 (1) - Remove the clap from slider's end here and replace with finish? Fits more for the song's opening imo
2. 00:02:875 (3) - Starting from here, imo it will be much wiser to put the whistle every 2/1 starting from 00:02:875 - I know your current whistle is consistent already, but the fact that it's placed 1/1 before the downbeat (on the red tick) sounds quite awkward (if you listen carefully, the vocals goes high on 2/1 before the downbeat, thus allowing the whistle to fit more)
3. 00:02:875 (3,4) - I think, it will be much more intuitive if you put both slider's start following the previous distance snap, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:08:875 (3) - This slowdown looks like they're actually 1/2, really - I know players won't slider break that easily here, but 0.75x will definitely be more intuitive here instead of 0.5x ~
5. 00:12:375 (2) - Not perfectly fit with 00:11:375 (4) when CTRL+H'ed, but it's barely noticeable xD
6. 00:16:375 (1) - Don't put the whistle 1/2 after your previous one here - it's best to place no hitsound here (due to the vocals itself isn't going too strong here) imo
7. 00:19:625 (3,4,5) - (optional) Use repeating slider here? It will emphasize the diamond pattern here instead of stacks imo
8. 00:24:125 (8,1) - Err... I don't like how these two flows personally, maybe you can let the encircle magic works here: (if you do this, (1) will also encircle (3))
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:28:375 (2) - Same here about the slowdown. Using 0.75x to get intuitivity won't hurt, I guess xD
10. 00:32:125 (1) - Hmm? Do you really need the 1/4 short slider here? There's almost nothing to follow on 00:32:530 - I prefer a single circle here, however if you decided not to change this, (optional) I'd rather curve it to the different direction (downward) because the flow is better like this imo~
11. 00:38:875 (2) - The whistle on slider's end sounds really out of place, really - it should be on slider's start instead
12. 00:46:625 (2) - (optional) Judging from your patterns around here, I prefer to stack this above (3) instead, but this is purely optional
13. 00:50:125 (5,1,2,3,4) - The jump from (4) to (5) is quite sudden imo, I think if you want to create a jump here you should continue the jump after to let the flow continue:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:56:375 (4,1) - Here also, stack (4) above (1)? This will make (2,3,4) plays more naturally imo
15. 01:05:875 (8) - Is it intentional to put this note so far from (6)'s start? Moving this around two grids left so (6,7,8) will form a solid triangle isn't that hard, though...
16. 01:10:125 (2) - The whistle should be here instead of (3) - this is because previously on 01:07:125 (2), you put the whistle here (on the red tick) instead of (4)
17. 01:24:625 (3) - Missing clap here? xD
18. 01:26:625 (2,3,4) - Again about the stacking here, I really recommend to use a repeating slider instead because stacking like this will somewhat ruin your hexagon formation in play mode
19. 01:33:125 (6) - Stopping the whistles here isn't a good idea, really - definitely sounds like something's missing without the whistles' existence
20. 01:43:875 (4) - The 0.38x slowdown here looks very forced, pretty much because it's unintuitive - even with multipliers around 0.5x or so, you'll get much more intuitivity:
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:53:375 (4,2) - Is it's intentional to stack these two unperfectly like this? imo, manual stacking isn't really required here because they're apart by 3/2 and your AR is fast enough
22. 02:03:125 (3) - Again, stopping the whistles isn't a good idea - I think you should put the whistle again starting from this slider's start
23. 02:13:125 (3,4) - Switch these two's position and CTRL+R (4)? To follow the vocals, the 1/1 slider should go first - and this is the easiest solution possible without changing the arrangement
24. 02:18:375 (1) - (optional) Add new combo here to split the combo? Compared to your previous combo streaks, 11 in this point is the most, and there's a cymbal sound from the song here (which tells that here comes a new part)
25. 02:26:125 (6) - Stack this to (4) and arrange (7) to form a solid triangle like this? imo, this jump will look less forced (especially compared to your previous jump pattern from (5) to (6)) :
    
    SPOILER

    
26. 02:44:875 (1) - Because basically the vocal goes stronger on (2)'s start, dim this slider's end by using 60% inherit section to get a damper effect?
27. 02:53:375 (1) - Why all of the hitsounds (except finish) vanish here? I think it's best to put the hitsounds as you did on the previous choruses, unless this part is intentionally not hitsounded yet
28. 03:11:125 (5) - (optional) Stack this above (6) instead to let this flow more naturally along with (4)?
29. 03:18:875 (4) - Placing this under (3)'s track is very hard to read (although not impossible lol) - I prefer arrangement like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
30. 03:22:125 (1) - I like your heart formation here, but it's kinda ruined because of the stacking here - to avoid this, I think it's better to stack this above (5) instead
31. 03:25:375 (x) - I can still hear a cymbal sound coming from the song here, so... start the spinner 1/4 after and add a circle here (with finish)? (you can just easily arrange (2,3,4) in a straight diagonal line, though)
32. 03:28:375 (1,1) - Extend the first spinner by 1/4, and start the second spinner 1/4 after (I think this is obvious enough, the vocals are going this way)
33. 03:55:875 (5,7) - They aren't perfectly placed in the center (especially if you observe the slidertick), but this is barely noticeable

1. 0,75x flow faster than what I want, 0.5x flowed better...
2. I'll change some hitsound... yay for "I had ended and remembered I posted the last version and it wasn't ... " but yeah, i'm reading the suggestion trying them and deciding. (Yeah, hitsound aren't complete)
3. I may have corrected things in different ways
4. The under-track slider shall be fair game, totally... and anyway who can play with Hidden can really see it
5. the various formation are not really ruined by stacking, especially in the heart as the sliders are stacked under one notes, they do start from the same point
6. 03:28:375 (1,1) - It's correct as it's now. Thymeka say"... la verità~~" and the spinners are the 2 "~". I'm firstly following vocals and after drums, not the other way.

Crok425 wrote:

Sorry, man. Your map is good, I can't see anything but a few things.

[Coward Haku]
02:46:000 I don't like how that slider's placed.

[Hard]
03:25:125 Instead of there, put it 03:25:375.

Philippines wrote:

• Coward Haku

1. 00:04:375 (2) - This slider is unrankable.
   Why? is this not readable or anything?
   
2. 00:06:125 (1,2) - Stack these two notes.
   It's mirrored from a stack after
   
   
3. Oh and delete the two unused Timing Points on this diff.
   No unused timing points. (timing points are red lines). They're called uninherited

Philippines wrote:

• Normal

1. 01:16:125 (1) - Remove new combo. No
   
   
2. 01:20:125 (1) - ^. No
   
   
3. 01:28:375 (1)- Please move this closer to the next note. Ok
   
   
4. 02:27:375 (1,2,3,1,2,3).. - I suggest (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6..) Ok
   
   
5. Overall Difficulty -1Ok

• Hard

1. 01:06:125 (1) - Remove new combo. No
   
   
2. 01:01:875 (4,5) - I don't know if this is rankable, but whether or not, I advice you to change it. Why this should not be rankabile?
   
   
3. 01:38:875 (3,3) - ^. ^
   
   
4. 02:23:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why not move this to the center? Ok
   
   
5. 03:04:875 (4,5) - Like what I said. Why this should not be rankabile?

[/list]

1. Remove audio in your video to save some space
2. Seems [Coward Haku] suppose to be harder than [Hard] but it's only 4.82 star and [Hard] is 4.83...

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
2. 00:58:375 (1) - ^
3. 00:50:375 (x) - You can raise you volume since here until kiai end
4. 01:14:375 (1) - Finish instead
5. 01:22:375 (1) - ^
6. 01:30:375 (1) - ^
7. 01:46:375 (x) - Drag break to here
8. 01:54:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end
9. 02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - This break is way too long, try map 02:10:375 - 02:26:375 part
10. 02:47:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are not in a line, well maybe you put them like this on purpose
11. 02:49:500 (x) - Insert break here
12. 02:53:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end
13. 03:01:375 (1) - Yup, finish
14. 03:25:375 (1) - End with finish
15. 03:46:375 (1) - ^
16. 03:41:875 (1,1,1,1) - These 4 spinners are boring :/, why not try put some notes or slider instead?

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of clap sounds better
2. 01:14:375 (2) - ^
3. 01:22:375 (2) - ^
4. 02:27:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh, no, this kind of jumps in normal is not a good idea, it could only appear in the hard of insane diff. :<
5. 03:09:375 (1) - ^
6. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish

1. 00:33:375 (4) - No slow donw here to fit your partten?
2. 00:36:375 (6) - New combo to distinguish slow down slider? Slow down thought was nice and could be fun, but I strongly recommended you do a new combo for all your slow down sliders, or it would be hard to tell when they slow down
3. 00:59:875 (4) - It's not perfectly stack with the slider end of 00:59:125 (3), on purpose?
4. 02:41:875 (5) - This jump seems too far, try exchange 12 and 34?
5. 02:46:000 (2) - This one sounds odd, maybe start from 02:46:125 red tick and ends 02:46:375?
6. 02:48:875 (3) - I feel this speed up is meanless
7. 03:18:875 (4) - 1/3 part of slider path is hidden by previous slider, not so good
8. 03:28:375 (1,1) - Use one spinner instead seems better, the short 03:28:375 (1) one looked awkward

1. 00:57:125 (5) - Spacing
2. 01:06:125 (1) - Why slow donw here?
3. 01:06:625 (1) - I don't get why here a spinner, and ends 01:10:125...and why there's no break after it?
4. 02:15:875 (1) - This slider sounds weird, end at 02:16:875 then add a note at 02:17:125 would be better
5. 03:00:125 (5) - Spacing
6. 03:17:125 (x) - Add a note here, feel lack of a sound
7. 03:16:625 (1) - Meanless new combo
8. 03:25:125 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:25:375, end at 03:27:125 is fine, so you need to add another note at 03:25:125
9. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish
   The finish sound you used in this diff is nice, but full of 1/2 beat notes and slider is just boring, try more other rhythm would be nice

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Remove audio in your video to save some space
2. Seems [Coward Haku] suppose to be harder than [Hard] but it's only 4.82 star and [Hard] is 4.83...

[Easy]

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better Ok
2. 00:58:375 (1) - ^ Ok
3. 00:50:375 (x) - You can raise you volume since here until kiai end Ok
4. 01:14:375 (1) - Finish instead Ok
5. 01:22:375 (1) - ^ Ok
6. 01:30:375 (1) - ^ Ok
7. 01:46:375 (x) - Drag break to here Ok
8. 01:54:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end Ok
9. 02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - This break is way too long, try map 02:10:375 - 02:26:375 part Done with to nice sliders and some beat ^^
10. 02:47:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are not in a line, well maybe you put them like this on purpose No, its a error, thanks
11. 02:49:500 (x) - Insert break here Ok
12. 02:53:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end Ok
13. 03:01:375 (1) - Yup, finish Ok
14. 03:25:375 (1) - End with finish Ok
15. 03:46:375 (1) - ^ Ok
16. 03:41:875 (1,1,1,1) - These 4 spinners are boring :/, why not try put some notes or slider instead?Deleted

[Normal]

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of clap sounds better Ok
2. 01:14:375 (2) - ^ Ok
3. 01:22:375 (2) - ^ Ok
4. 02:27:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh, no, this kind of jumps in normal is not a good idea, it could only appear in the hard of insane diff. :< Fixed
5. 03:09:375 (1) - ^ Fixed
6. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:57:125 (5) - Spacing Ok
2. 01:06:125 (1) - Why slow donw here? Removed
3. 01:06:625 (1) - I don't get why here a spinner, and ends 01:10:125...and why there's no break after it? Removed
4. 02:15:875 (1) - This slider sounds weird, end at 02:16:875 then add a note at 02:17:125 would be better Ok
5. 03:00:125 (5) - Spacing Ok
6. 03:17:125 (x) - Add a note here, feel lack of a sound Ok
7. 03:16:625 (1) - Meanless new combo Ok
8. 03:25:125 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:25:375, end at 03:27:125 is fine, so you need to add another note at 03:25:125 Ok
9. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish Ok
   The finish sound you used in this diff is nice, but full of 1/2 beat notes and slider is just boring, try more other rhythm would be nice

Easy and normal need more efforts on hitsound, they sounds irregular to me, hitsound in [Coward Haku] is the most nice one, so try add hitsound like that, there is a simple method to add hitsound like add clap on the 2nd and 4th white tick in a bar and add finish at long white tick, try it on

Breeze wrote:

[Coward Haku]

1. 00:36:375 (6) - New combo to distinguish slow down slider? Slow down thought was nice and could be fun, but I strongly recommended you do a new combo for all your slow down sliders, or it would be hard to tell when they slow down Should be fair game ? no, that's not a decent reason by itself. I don't want to use NC differently in some parts
2. 02:41:875 (5) - This jump seems too far, try exchange 12 and 34? but it do follow the pitch, changed with 3 slider u,u
3. 03:28:375 (1,1) - Use one spinner instead seems better, the short 03:28:375 (1) one looked awkward
   The spinners like this do follow voice on the map ( an Ah-ahhh)