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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 2 de noviembre de 2017 at 12:46:49 a. m.

Artist: Yokota Mahito
Title: Maigo
Source: スーパーマリオギャラクシー 2
Tags: smg2 Super Mario Galaxy 2 Bros Nintendo Ryo Nagamatsu Koji Kondo Orchesta Orchestal MoodyRPG
BPM: 107,81
Filesize: 982kb
Play Time: 00:34
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Download: Yokota Mahito - Maigo
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im gay


why lumas are so cute!?

Normal: Made by MoodyRPG! (thank you so much!)
The Lost Cute Little Luma: Made by me!

Download the diff made by my best friend - Squishi!

Dedicated to Renumi



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squirrelpascals (Help + Advice)
ezek (Timing fix + Mod + Better BG + Bubble)
Gabe (Mod + Star)
Aro (Mod)
Crimmi (Mod)
ShogunMoon (Mod)
victorfernando (Mod + First Favourite + Star)
rockstarrzz (Mod)
Stingy (Star)
x Arow (Mod)
Acnos (Mod + Star)
IamKwaN (Metadata Check)
wolf3211 (Mod)
Underforest (Mod)
Chewin (Mod)
Gero (Mod + Star Icon + Qualify)
Gordon123 (Mod)
ByBy (Mod + Patterns Ideas + Rechecks)
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hello! as requested by pm :)

General

  • Don't forget to add "MoodyRPG" in the tags since he is part of the mapset, afterall.
  • After doing some research, I found that the song is also called "Stray Child" or "The Lost Child". Ryo Nagamatsu (永松 亮) and Koji Kondo (近藤 浩治) are also composers of this song. These might also be added in the tags too! Also, maybe you could add "bros" into the tags as well to represent "Super Mario Bros" (which is pretty well known as a whole)
  • The song's title should be "まいご" which is translated into "The Lost Luma" in the United States (Reference // Track #3)
  • The artist's name should be "横田 真人" as seen here. (よこた まひと is also shown in parenthesis)
*These informations for the metadata can help you out a bit, it does not mean they are valid tho..*

Normal

  • 00:05:223 (3) - I recommend you to add a new combo to this object as there is a small break with the previous object. (Also because 00:07:450 (1,2,3,4) - is pretty similar)
I really have nothing to complain about this difficulty, for real. I went through everything (the combos, the hitsounds, the flows, the spacings, the stacked notes) everything.. All the work is made in a consistent way. Nice job!

Hard

  • 00:03:275 (2) - Maybe you can try to keep the spacing of this circle consistent on 1.84x like most of your patterns
  • 00:09:955 (2) - I suggest you to do the same thing here
I have nothing else to add in here! You emphasized every intonations with the circle emplacements as well as the hitsounds. Good job.

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Good luck! Here's a shiny star~
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hello! as requested by pm :)

General

  • Don't forget to add "MoodyRPG" in the tags since he is part of the mapset, afterall. I forgot to add it since i was distracted hehe, Fixed!
  • After doing some research, I found that the song is also called "Stray Child" or "The Lost Child". Ryo Nagamatsu (永松 亮) and Koji Kondo (近藤 浩治) are also composers of this song. These might also be added in the tags too! Also, maybe you could add "bros" into the tags as well to represent "Super Mario Bros" (which is pretty well known as a whole) Ok!
  • The song's title should be "まいご" which is translated into "The Lost Luma" in the United States (Reference // Track #3) I will add that too!
  • The artist's name should be "横田 真人" as seen here. (よこた まひと is also shown in parenthesis) I forgot to add the romaji name, thanks for doing the research! :)
*These informations for the metadata can help you out a bit, it does not mean they are valid tho..*

Hard

  • 00:03:275 (2) - Maybe you can try to keep the spacing of this circle consistent on 1.84x like most of your patterns :o :o :o i totally forgot the spacing there, ill fix it
  • 00:09:955 (2) - I suggest you to do the same thing here ill fix this too!
I have nothing else to add in here! You emphasized every intonations with the circle emplacements as well as the hitsounds. Good job.

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Good luck! Here's a shiny star~


Man, thank you SO much for the mod and the star! i really appreciate your help!
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Hello~



General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)


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  • Your BG is 1100 x 618, I suggest finding a similar BG with at least 1024 x 768 or you can resize it if you wish.
  • The gap between the difficulties "Moody's Normal" & "Cute Little Luma" is a tad big with them being 1.61 & 3.09 SR respectively, maybe you can buff the Normal up a bit and probably add an Easy to boot to balance things out or you can slightly nerf the Hard.


Moody's Normal



  • Clear~


Cute Little Luma



  • This difficulty is fine but I wished you had put some thought into putting patterns in the diff as it looked like you just placed the circles in different directions :cry: 00:00:770 (1,2,3,4,1) is a good example you did here so why didn't improvise on it further? xD
  • 00:28:049 (3) - Align this with (2).


That's all I got for now, good luck on your set.

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heyo!

request by pm w

    General
  • I just wanted to suggest something lol, change the name of your background put just "bg" it's better imo


    Cute Little Luma
  • lol the circle size
  • tbh i tthink you should add some slider because when the melody change rhythm it's should difficult and confusing to follow it for example here 00:08:564 (4,5,6,1) - 6 should be very difficult to click. Here too about the rhythm 00:17:472 (4,5,6)
  • 00:26:378 (4,5,6,1) - like i said ^

gl!~
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Crimmi wrote:

Hello~

Hii!

General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)


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  • Your BG is 1100 x 618, I suggest finding a similar BG with at least 1024 x 768 or you can resize it if you wish. Ok!
  • The gap between the difficulties "Moody's Normal" & "Cute Little Luma" is a tad big with them being 1.61 & 3.09 SR respectively, maybe you can buff the Normal up a bit and probably add an Easy to boot to balance things out or you can slightly nerf the Hard.
i nerfed the hard a bit

Cute Little Luma



  • This difficulty is fine but I wished you had put some thought into putting patterns in the diff as it looked like you just placed the circles in different directions :cry: 00:00:770 (1,2,3,4,1) is a good example you did here so why didn't improvise on it further? xD
    color=#0000FFThe song doesnt really offers enough sounds or instrumental stuff to make more patterns, and the directions are like that because i didnt wanted the circles to be in the same spot over and over again ;W; sorry. If more people says the same, ill try to use more patterns (if it is possible of course)

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  • 00:28:049 (3) - Align this with (2). Done!


Thank you so much for the mod man!
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ShogunMoon wrote:
heyo! Hi there! :3

request by pm w

    General
  • I just wanted to suggest something lol, change the name of your background put just "bg" it's better imo Ok :o

    Cute Little Luma
  • lol the circle size I talked about it with Moody, and we decided to make it a bit more bigger.
  • tbh i think you should add some slider because when the melody change rhythm it's should difficult and confusing to follow it for example here 00:08:564 (4,5,6,1) - 6 should be very difficult to click. Here too about the rhythm 00:17:472 (4,5,6)
  • 00:26:378 (4,5,6,1) - like i said ^ Ill consider it :3

gl!~ Thankies!
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hi good map <3 So Lets Go

Cute little luma

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hi good map <3 So Lets Go Hi!

Cute little luma

    00:01:883 Cancel nc and move this note to X:416 Y:192 To make a star The coordinates makes it look less like a star, but moved the circle at 00:01:326 so it can look more like a star :( and the new combo... i like it that way, but if more people says the same, ill change it
    00:02:718 nc here and make a triangle Didnt made the NC, cause personal preferences (maybe gonna change it if more people says the same) but did move the circle at 00:03:275 (2) to make 00:02:718 (2,1,2) look more like a isosceles triangle :)
    00:02:996 move to X:76 Y:288 I prefer to keep it like it is... Sorry :(
    00:03:275 move to X:208 Y:200 Ok!
    00:05:780 move to X:352 Y:192 That wouldnt really emphasize the high note of the orchestal music, so no :(
    00:06:615 move to X:352 Y:192 too , to make a overlap to emphasize on music Here i will say no too...
    00:08:842 make a ''S'' slider or one red point ''S'' sure! made kind of a S shaped slider.
    00:14:687 make another triangle put on X:300 Y:60 not feeling a triangle there. i talked with a friend (also mapper) about that part, and he said it looks good like it is right now. Doing a triangle wouldnt make it look nice
    00:21:368 another triangle ? Uhm... Not really, ill keep it like that
    00:23:038 make the on horizontal angle Ok :)
    00:26:657 V slider or ''S'' slider Done!
    00:29:997 continue mapping , remove this slider , just down the volume. Sorry, but i will not do that. it wouldnt feel nice, so the spinner is ok there


Thank you so much for the mod, very appreciated!
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Hi, from modreqs

Moody's Normal
AR and OD are a tad too high for 1.65* imo, consider changing to AR4 OD3, and possibly CS3
Hitsounds throughout are way too loud, I'd have them between 25-50% throughout, also try to find some nice custom ones
00:01:883 (3) - Don't overlap with 1, it will be too hard to read for a beginner
00:10:234 (2) - move this down a bit so 1 flows into it nicely, just for aesthetics
00:18:028 (3,4) - stack to repeat the pattern you've been using throughout
00:21:925 (3) - put parallel at end of slider
00:24:152 (3,4) - make 2 flow into these a little better, could also move this whole combo in a bit, not really needed to be in the very top left, it may also cover the HP bar? not sure
00:25:265 (1,2,3,4) - arrange these so they create a curve https://i.gyazo.com/d04fefd42a47a6e3ce7 ... 8e8e57.png
00:28:327 (2) - don't stack on 5, confusing to read for beginner


Cute Little Luma
AR7 is plenty for this difficulty
again, hitsounds are far too loud
00:01:883 (1) - remove nc
00:02:996 (1) - remove nc and add it on 00:02:718 (2) ?
00:06:615 (5) - could place in center
00:09:677 (1) - move closer to 5, distance too far imo
00:10:512 (4) - keep distance snap on jumps, this is less than 3* remember
00:28:327 (4) - ^
00:29:719 (1) - place in center
I think this map could use some more sliders, its quite jump heavy
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Hi, from modreqs Hi there :)

Cute Little Luma
AR7 is plenty for this difficulty AR7 its pretty common in hard diffs :)
again, hitsounds are far too loud Reduced the volume a bit more, hopefully its now ok.
00:01:883 (1) - remove nc Ok, ill change it.
00:02:996 (1) - remove nc and add it on 00:02:718 (2) ? Added a new combo at 00:02:718 (1), but 00:02:996 (1) will be the same
00:06:615 (5) - could place in center I will keep it like that for now, im not feeling that circle to be in the center
00:09:677 (1) - move closer to 5, distance too far imo why tho :o ? theres enough time to hit 5 without any problem :S
00:10:512 (4) - keep distance snap on jumps, this is less than 3* remember as i previously said, theres enough time for the player to hit 00:10:512 (4,5) without any problem
00:28:327 (4) - ^ same reason as the previous problem :S
00:29:719 (1) - place in center sure!
I think this map could use some more sliders, its quite jump heavy The song doesnt really offers a good placement for sliders, i already have 3 on the map, and i wanted to make a circle-based map :P


Thank you very much for the mod! i appreciate your help :)
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Your map looks very polished and clean :) Don't have much to say.

Moody's Normal
00:18:584 (1) - Slider starts on nothing and ends on strong sound soo...
00:19:141 (2) - what about deleting this circle and moving 00:18:584 (1) - this slider to next red tick.
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Quick message saying that i will not be able to update the map for around 2-3 more days, because my right foot got infected by some kind of bug and I need medical treatment.

When I feel better, I will ask for mods again :)

Edit: Maybe this will take 2 weeks :( sorry

Edit 2: I feel good now, my thumb got the worst part, but some creams and pills will help, ready to ask for mods again :D
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