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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 2, 2017 at 6:28:32 PM

Artist: (K)NoW_NAME
Title: Freesia
Source: サクラクエスト
Tags: Sakura Quest know name ed ending lmt tv size
BPM: 90
Filesize: 28312kb
Play Time: 01:28
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1st Ranked thank you all!





Image Easy - me
Image Normal - me
Image Hard - LMT
Image Insane - me

Hikan and Yamicchi hitsound everything. Kudos to them!
Thanks to Gottagof4st for the new mp3!

Modders
Yamicchi (x3000)
Mombei
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Hikan
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Blan_C
PolkaMocha
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Venix
MaridiuS
Neoskylove
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Last edited by LeKhanhHoa on , edited 73 times in total.
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Insane
00:05:876 (5) - So, all of this in the intro, removing them. You're following the guitar here, so there's no reason for you to follow others. It really ruined the guitar pattern tho. Besides those beat are fine without mapping them. Only the last strong beat is fine
00:14:710 - lowering the volume a bit? Mute is fine
00:35:543 (6) - NC?
00:37:543 (5,6) - This is a bit tricky tho, but more of that I feel uncomfortable playing it. You're forcing people to go down and up, so it should be going down on these, but instead you make us go up again? http://puu.sh/wjKYP/fe03319c65.jpg this might go well
00:45:543 (1,2) - Those shape are not the same, comparing to 00:42:876 (1,2) - also i think it flows better this way http://puu.sh/wjL4c/b804a8b38d.jpg since you're breaking flow for 00:44:210 (1) - 00:44:876 (1) -
00:47:376 (2) - stacking, and be careful if you stack something with other sliderend, it might be unstacked
00:58:710 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok seriously, why not a perfect star?

Easy
00:35:210 - from the beginning till here, why isn't even 1 blanket are made properly? They are all a bit off tho
00:50:876 - why are you skipping this vocal?

Normal
• CS is a bit too small tho
00:20:210 (1,2,3,4) - this might be a better choice. The way you're making them clickable and unclickable is somehow weird http://puu.sh/wjLma/ffd674dd0c.jpg
00:23:876 (3,4) - ctrl + g this, same reason

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Yamicchi wrote:
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gimme some kudos

Insane
00:05:876 (5) - So, all of this in the intro, removing them. You're following the guitar here, so there's no reason for you to follow others. It really ruined the guitar pattern tho. Besides those beat are fine without mapping them. Only the last strong beat is fine. But I kinda like how it sounds,
and how it plays out here, so ...

00:14:710 - lowering the volume a bit? Mute is fine Sure
00:35:543 (6) - NC? OK
00:37:543 (5,6) - This is a bit tricky tho, but more of that I feel uncomfortable playing it. You're forcing people to go down and up, so it should be going down on these, but instead you make us go up again? http://puu.sh/wjKYP/fe03319c65.jpg this might go well Will think about it later.
I mean, it feels kinda fine now, thou

00:45:543 (1,2) - Those shape are not the same, comparing to 00:42:876 (1,2) - also i think it flows better this way http://puu.sh/wjL4c/b804a8b38d.jpg since you're breaking flow for 00:44:210 (1) - 00:44:876 (1) - Changed
00:47:376 (2) - stacking, and be careful if you stack something with other sliderend, it might be unstacked Hai hai
00:58:710 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok seriously, why not a perfect star? Hai hai, you perfectionist!

Easy
00:35:210 - from the beginning till here, why isn't even 1 blanket are made properly? They are all a bit off tho Not intending to make one.
Also, some are for distance snap

00:50:876 - why are you skipping this vocal? Not now

Normal
• CS is a bit too small tho Changed to 3.5
00:20:210 (1,2,3,4) - this might be a better choice. The way you're making them clickable and unclickable is somehow weird http://puu.sh/wjLma/ffd674dd0c.jpg uhm
00:23:876 (3,4) - ctrl + g this, same reason Done

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General
  • This song is stated to be Sakura Quest's ED (ending), not OP (opening). Please change the tags accordingly.
  • The Insane difficulty doesn't have the Widescreen Support box checked under "Design" in the Song Setup, while all other difficulties do. Act accordingly.
  • I advise you decide on some combo colours to set, since you already got a video and everything; if you were to colorhax different colours for the calm part and the kiai, I believe you would bring this map's quality up a notch.


Easy


Normal
  • 00:06:210 (3) - You could arrange this to be a perfect triangle (coordinates 240;88). If you want to manually do thatin the future, take any two circles that overlap with the first 2 edges of the triangle, like this; then rotate the two circles by 60* and overlap again; 4 will be a placeholder for an object you can place there and obtain a perfect triangle with. In this case, you can just delete 3 and move 4 in the timeline.
  • 00:11:876 (5) - This one is just slightly off (123;121)
  • 00:14:876 (1) - Like the Easy, this hitsound has slightly too much delay and sounds off.
  • 00:35:543 (1,1) - Like the Easy, only keep 1 NC; of course it should be the second one here also.
  • 00:36:210 (1) - Remove Hitfinish
  • 00:36:876 (2,3,4) - You should arrange these as a triangle for eye candy with the method I explained above ; instead of deleting the second circle you can overlap it with 4, so that 4 will be in the position for a perfect triangle.
  • 00:46:210 (1,1) - ^
  • 00:51:543 (5) - Add Hitfinish
  • 01:06:210 (2,3,4,5) - Could be a square, or 2 triangles. Anyhow, as of now it looks unpolished, so please do look into it.
  • Of course, double check any triangle you eyeballed with the method above to improve technical quality.

    I'm really liking this mapset so far, definitely want to see it ranked ^^


LMT's Hard
  • 00:11:543 (5,1) - Things like 00:08:876 (5,1) actually look somewhat good, but with 1's body overlapping 5, this just looks messy. Either overlap or move 5 in front of 1.
  • 00:14:876 (1) - Need I even say this anymore?
  • 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - I'd check that triangle, looks eyeballed
  • 00:21:210 (1,2,3) - You could flip 3 vertically and tilt 1 and 2 so they don't overlap with 3 to make a triangle instead of that weird 90* thing
  • 00:22:876 (1,2,3) - ^
  • 00:24:543 (3) - You should probably move this slightly so it doesn't overlap with 2. If you do, however, want to keep the same spacing, just flip 3 horizontally to blanket 2. Looks good, plays fine. Neat.
  • As with the normal, do check all triangles you handmade and make them properly to improve overall quality.

    Great GD! It feels like it was made from the original creator himself. You managed to capture the map's essence outstandingly, well done ^^


Insane
  • 00:04:543 (3,4,1,2) - 00:09:876 (3,4,1,2) - 00:12:543 (3,4,1,2) - You might want to rethink these overlaps, they don't look nearly as good and polished as 00:07:210 (3,4,1,2) (which you should keep exactly like this tbh). You should probably remake these so they flow better into each other rather than being all wiggly. The concept it good, but the execution was poor for the most part (with 00:07:210 (3,4,1,2) - being the exception)
  • 00:14:876 (1) - Of course, hitsounds.
  • 00:17:543 (1,2,3) - You should space 1 and 2 close together and make a triangluar pattern with 3, and later with 4, like this ( 2 )
  • 01:21:543 (1,2,3,4) - This looks a bit off

    I don't really have much to say about the rest of the map, it's alright. Could be more aesthetically pleasing, but pointing all of that out would be pointless; it need an aesthetic overhaul that you just have to do yourself, since it most likely implies remapping (although only as far as object placement is concerned, and even then, most of the emphasis is fine already, so you'd just have to do simple pattern rearrangement). In general, look to make geometrial shapes, neat overlaps, and all that stuff.



This mapset definitely has potential. If I were a BN, I'd rank this map spot-on (After my changes are applied, that is ;) )

Thank you for using my queue! :)
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LMT's Hard
  • 00:11:543 (5,1) - Things like 00:08:876 (5,1) actually look somewhat good, but with 1's body overlapping 5, this just looks messy. Either overlap or move 5 in front of 1. sure
  • 00:14:876 (1) - Need I even say this anymore? I don't get it :c
  • 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - I'd check that triangle, looks eyeballed looks alright for me :c
  • 00:21:210 (1,2,3) - You could flip 3 vertically and tilt 1 and 2 so they don't overlap with 3 to make a triangle instead of that weird 90* thing I want some variations too, there's a triangle with the sliderends tho so it's not that thematically unfit
  • 00:22:876 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  • 00:24:543 (3) - You should probably move this slightly so it doesn't overlap with 2. If you do, however, want to keep the same spacing, just flip 3 horizontally to blanket 2. Looks good, plays fine. Neat. it flows more interesting this way, also to make spacing between sliderborders equal I would need to move (3) too far.
  • As with the normal, do check all triangles you handmade and make them properly to improve overall quality. I did have a look through.

    Great GD! It feels like it was made from the original creator himself. You managed to capture the map's essence outstandingly, well done ^^



This mapset definitely has potential. If I were a BN, I'd rank this map spot-on (After my changes are applied, that is ;) )

Thank you for using my queue! :)


Thanks for the mod!

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Code:
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Title:Freesia
TitleUnicode:Freesia
Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:LeKhanhHoa
Version:LMT's Hard
Source:サクラクエスト
Tags:Sakura Quest know name anime op opening lmt
BeatmapID:1320857
BeatmapSetID:626728

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My turn.

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From my modding queue :)

You queued for a full mapset NM


General
  • This song is stated to be Sakura Quest's ED (ending), not OP (opening). Please change the tags accordingly. Wrong song lol
  • The Insane difficulty doesn't have the Widescreen Support box checked under "Design" in the Song Setup, while all other difficulties do. Act accordingly. Sure
  • I advise you decide on some combo colours to set, since you already got a video and everything; if you were to colorhax different colours for the calm part and the kiai, I believe you would bring this map's quality up a notch. Colorhaxing, huh? Will see what I can do

    Any line that relates to hitsound will be replied later, as I'm not the hitsounder


Easy
  • 00:14:876 (1) - This hitsound has slightly too much delay on it, and this beat sounds off. Either cut the hitsound to have less delay or use another one
  • 00:17:543 - 00:20:210 - 00:22:876 - 00:25:543 - 00:28:210 - 00:30:876 - 00:33:543 - 00:36:210 - 00:37:876 - etc. ^
  • 00:35:543 (1,1) - You shouldn't spam NC; I advise you keep the second one, since it's more emphasized It's not kinda spamming. I think it is suitable here since the music change it pace. On other diff, it would look less like spamming and more like actual newcomboing. I keep it on this diff for consistency.
  • 00:36:210 (1) - You should remove the Hitfinish from here, since there's no whistling sound in the song here.
  • 00:46:210 (1,1) - ^
  • 00:51:543 (3) - You should add an Hitfinish here, since there's a whistling sound in the song here. Hitclap alone doesn't provide any feedback, since it blends in so much.

    This map is very neat ^^ Definitely like


Normal
  • 00:06:210 (3) - You could arrange this to be a perfect triangle (coordinates 240;88). If you want to manually do that in the future, take any two circles that overlap with the first 2 edges of the triangle, like this; then rotate the two circles by 60* and overlap again; 4 will be a placeholder for an object you can place there and obtain a perfect triangle with. In this case, you can just delete 3 and move 4 in the timeline. I originally meant blanket here, but your pattern is cool too, so I could try.
  • 00:11:876 (5) - This one is just slightly off (123;121) Idk what you mean here thou.
  • 00:14:876 (1) - Like the Easy, this hitsound has slightly too much delay and sounds off.
  • 00:35:543 (1,1) - Like the Easy, only keep 1 NC; of course it should be the second one here also. Explained
  • 00:36:210 (1) - Remove Hitfinish
  • 00:36:876 (2,3,4) - You should arrange these as a triangle for eye candy with the method I explained above ; instead of deleting the second circle you can overlap it with 4, so that 4 will be in the position for a perfect triangle. Here I meant not a triangle thou, but blanket even for 00:38:876 (1) - so sr.
  • 00:46:210 (1,1) - ^ I just don't feel like I should here. Like I want to keep the flow it currently is, so...
  • 00:51:543 (5) - Add Hitfinish
  • 01:06:210 (2,3,4,5) - Could be a square, or 2 triangles. Anyhow, as of now it looks unpolished, so please do look into it. Should looked nicer now
  • Of course, double check any triangle you eyeballed with the method above to improve technical quality. Most of the other stuff are just distance snapping, so...

    I'm really liking this mapset so far, definitely want to see it ranked ^^



Insane
  • 00:04:543 (3,4,1,2) - 00:09:876 (3,4,1,2) - 00:12:543 (3,4,1,2) - You might want to rethink these overlaps, they don't look nearly as good and polished as 00:07:210 (3,4,1,2) (which you should keep exactly like this tbh). You should probably remake these so they flow better into each other rather than being all wiggly. The concept it good, but the execution was poor for the most part (with 00:07:210 (3,4,1,2) - being the exception) How's it now?
  • 00:14:876 (1) - Of course, hitsounds.
  • 00:17:543 (1,2,3) - You should space 1 and 2 close together and make a triangluar pattern with 3, and later with 4, like this ( 2 ) Make some adjustments
  • 01:21:543 (1,2,3,4) - This looks a bit off Fixed

    I don't really have much to say about the rest of the map, it's alright. Could be more aesthetically pleasing, but pointing all of that out would be pointless; it need an aesthetic overhaul that you just have to do yourself, since it most likely implies remapping (although only as far as object placement is concerned, and even then, most of the emphasis is fine already, so you'd just have to do simple pattern rearrangement). In general, look to make geometrial shapes, neat overlaps, and all that stuff. IDK. It looks fine to me. Probably because I'm not really great at perfecting pattern thou. Will try to see if there is any problems with it thou.



This mapset definitely has potential. If I were a BN, I'd rank this map spot-on (After my changes are applied, that is ;) ) :D :D

Thank you for using my queue! :)


Thank you for your mod. It was very helpful!

P/S: I will colorhaxing later
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Mombei wrote:
From my modding queue :)

You queued for a full mapset NM


Easy
  • 00:36:210 (1) - You should remove the Hitfinish from here, since there's no whistling sound in the song here. additional hitsound to distinguish it from the other parts
  • 00:46:210 (1,1) - ^
  • 00:51:543 (3) - You should add an Hitfinish here, since there's a whistling sound in the song here. Hitclap alone doesn't provide any feedback, since it blends in so much. ok worth


Normal



Insane

Thank you for using my queue! :)


00:51:543 - thêm finish
01:17:460 - xóa green line ở đây (xóa thôi không cần add thêm gì nữa)

Thanks.
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Applied everything and add colorhaxing.
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Easy
00:22:876 (1,2) - hmm, fix blanket? also 00:22:876 (1,2,3) - these seems doesn't look like a perfect triangle.
00:47:543 (2,3,4) - somehow this feels rather weird in aesthetic, idk how to explain it, but something like this probaly better
00:49:543 (1,2) - Hmm, the circular flow is different from the other part, be consistent please?
00:54:210 (4,1) - this blanket can be done better imo
01:10:210 (3) - imo, change this to a parallel of 01:08:876 (2) - will be better


Normal
00:14:876 (1,2) - circular flow is a bit off
00:24:876 (5) - move it left for circular flow with 00:24:210 (4) -
00:26:543 (3,4,5) - idk if a straight is good for this situation, as 00:26:543 (3) - is trying to curve and 00:27:043 (4,5) - is forcing to do straight, well, its up to you anyway
00:43:876 (1,2) - is seems to be the same with 00:41:876 (2) - , but why they aren't the same?

I have no idea about Hard and Insane since its in a low BPM, sorry.
anyway good luck~
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Easy
00:22:876 (1,2) - hmm, fix blanket? also 00:22:876 (1,2,3) - these seems doesn't look like a perfect triangle. Adjusted
00:47:543 (2,3,4) - somehow this feels rather weird in aesthetic, idk how to explain it, but something like this probaly better Changed
00:49:543 (1,2) - Hmm, the circular flow is different from the other part, be consistent please? OK
00:54:210 (4,1) - this blanket can be done better imo I not that nicpicky, but I move it a little bit
01:10:210 (3) - imo, change this to a parallel of 01:08:876 (2) - will be better Sorry, I like how it is, (copying the 01:10:210 (3) - and reversed it)


Normal
00:14:876 (1,2) - circular flow is a bit off Move it a bit
00:24:876 (5) - move it left for circular flow with 00:24:210 (4) - Sure
00:26:543 (3,4,5) - idk if a straight is good for this situation, as 00:26:543 (3) - is trying to curve and 00:27:043 (4,5) - is forcing to do straight, well, its up to you anyway I'll probably leave it as it is now
00:43:876 (1,2) - is seems to be the same with 00:41:876 (2) - , but why they aren't the same? Consistent with 00:54:543 (1,2) - And I don't want the downbeat to be on sliderend

I have no idea about Hard and Insane since its in a low BPM, sorry.
anyway good luck~

Thanks a lot for your mod
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NM from my queue. Sorry for being late :c


Normal
-00:45:876 (5,1) - Blanket?
-01:17:376 (5) - What's with the super loud clap?


LMT's Hard
-00:04:210 (1,2) - Please make sliders lead into circles perfectly in this case. Looks much better. This happens a lot throughout the map, I won't point out each instance since there are too many. (Example where this is done right is 01:24:210 (1,2) )
-00:12:210 (1) - Second slider anchor is slightly to the left, giving it an angle (Same with 00:13:210 (3) )
-01:17:376 (3) - Same very loud clap for no reason.


Insane
-00:51:043 (7,8,9) - No reason to have differences in spacing between each other since the strong sound ends at the end of 00:50:543 (6). So there's no point in emphasizing #7
-00:59:543 (9) - NC, and remove the NC from 01:00:043 (1) ?

Honestly, don't give me a kudosu for this, please. I couldn't really find anything else wrong, bcs of lacking time to play it more than twice.
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LimePixel wrote:

LMT's Hard
-00:04:210 (1,2) - Please make sliders lead into circles perfectly in this case. Looks much better. This happens a lot throughout the map, I won't point out each instance since there are too many. (Example where this is done right is 01:24:210 (1,2) ) stylistic choice, also just lead straight into is boring tbh
-00:12:210 (1) - Second slider anchor is slightly to the left, giving it an angle (Same with 00:13:210 (3) ) fixed
-01:17:376 (3) - Same very loud clap for no reason. red tick rhythm which is quite odd compared to the rest

Thanks for the mod!

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LimePixel wrote:
NM from my queue. Sorry for being late :c


Normal
-00:45:876 (5,1) - Blanket? OK
-01:17:376 (5) - What's with the super loud clap? I think it's fitting there


Insane
-00:51:043 (7,8,9) - No reason to have differences in spacing between each other since the strong sound ends at the end of 00:50:543 (6). So there's no point in emphasizing #7 There's a big clap at 00:51:210 (8) - thou, hence the spacing
-00:59:543 (9) - NC, and remove the NC from 01:00:043 (1) ? Nah, consistent vocal NC

Honestly, don't give me a kudosu for this, please. I couldn't really find anything else wrong, bcs of lacking time to play it more than twice. I think you deserved it. Even if I don't fix anything, you still give me suggestion, which is valuable. But I do fix some spot, so I will just give you one
Good luck


Thanks for the mod!
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Earned 1 kudosu.
cool song

Insane
  • 00:05:709 (4,5) - move the slider on 5 up so it breaks the flow as it is a different sound and it would match the way you mapped the rest of these in the beginning.
  • 00:18:543 (1,2,3,4) - you need to focus an instrument, here you focus vocals but 00:21:210 (1,2,3,4) - here you focus the guitars and percussion.
  • 00:21:043 (4) - theres no note here
  • 00:23:710 (4) - theres no note here
  • 00:35:210 - up until here you need to look back on rhythm because you switch focus too much and it isnt intuitive to play.
  • 01:12:210 (5) - space this out from 01:11:543 (3) - this one so it matches the rest of the spacing around objects that you do
  • 01:18:876 (1,2,3,4) - the angle you have here is too wide and doesnt match the rest of these

Easy
  • 00:17:543 (1) - remove nc here, i suggest lowering frequency of ncs during calm parts in easy as it would match the feel of the music. also goes for 00:22:876 (1) - 00:28:210 (1) - 00:33:543 (1) - .
  • 00:35:543 (1) - dont add ncs like this, it will possibly confuse new players and having ncs like this well screw with the hp drain. also remove 00:46:210 (1) - this one.
  • 00:56:210 (1) - one remove nc, two i think it would be better to have this be a slider then hit circle to increase build up to the kiai.
  • 01:17:210 (3) - is the whistle on the end of this a mistake?
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