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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5. listopadu 2017 at 0:12:31

Artist: SexuaLobster
Title: Calloused Hands
Tags: SEXUALOBSTERS'S AMAZING ALBUM OF SIN
BPM: 72,5
Filesize: 11342kb
Play Time: 01:05
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Cracked and dry, peppy please hear my cry.

Thanks to all modders and especially pishi for helping me push this to ranked
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Hi!,
replying to your question, yes we did play in a tourney, ty for carry.

Interesting song choice : ^)

EASY
00:42:054 (1,2,3) - 10/10 note placement : ^)
ADVANCED
00:27:157 (11) - 10/10 slider. Deserves it's own combo.
HARD
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think the changes in spacing for the singles are necessary.

Nothing more to say, really simple beat, not many mistakes possible.Also this song is tilting me.
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-Fluffy wrote:
Hi!,
replying to your question, yes we did play in a tourney, ty for carry.

Interesting song choice : ^)

EASY
00:42:054 (1,2,3) - 10/10 note placement : ^)
ADVANCED
00:27:157 (11) - 10/10 slider. Deserves it's own combo. fixed
HARD
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think the changes in spacing for the singles are necessary. Easy and advanced have a break/long slider to transition to slow part, I think decreasing spacing in singles is a neat way to do that here. fixed the repeat slider right after to follow this

Nothing more to say, really simple beat, not many mistakes possible.Also this song is tilting me.


Thanks for the mod, i really hope the penis sliders are rankable
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Easy: The kaia time's part has very big jumps for an easy. it is only an easy so I think making it closer would help make it consistent. The reverse sliders in the part right after are hard to read for an easy, so try changing them to just one hit circle.
Advanced: Kaia is very jumpy had has very far spacing, I think it is a difficulty spike and I think you should fix it.
Hard: Kaia is a bit of a difficulty spike, and has unnecessary triples.

Also I don't know what 'dong' sliders there are, is it those sliders that are shaped like a curved 'L'?
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Easy: The kaia time's part has very big jumps for an easy. it is only an easy so I think making it closer would help make it consistent. The reverse sliders in the part right after are hard to read for an easy, so try changing them to just one hit circle. done

Advanced: Kaia is very jumpy had has very far spacing, I think it is a difficulty spike and I think you should fix it. The song gets twice as fast in the kiai, ofc there'll be a spike. I tried nerfing the spacing a little but it only change star rating by 0.02* so I left it as it is

Hard: Kaia is a bit of a difficulty spike, and has unnecessary triples. the difficulty spike in this diff is pretty small and triples are necessary

Also I don't know what 'dong' sliders there are, is it those sliders that are shaped like a curved 'L'? 00:42:054 (1,2,3) - in easy, 00:27:157 (1) - in advanced and "rub it extra" slider 00:54:468 (2) - in hard


Thanks for the mod
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M4M LOL

HARD

00:17:226 (7) - NC ?
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see what you want to make but , here it s weird , dont make it OR make it more marked
00:43:709 (1) - make only a single reverse and put a circle here 00:44:536 -
00:54:468 (2) - ugly and cancer , if you want your map to be ranked dont do that
00:54:468 (2) - NC

ADVANCED

00:16:399 (1) - hard to read
00:27:157 (1) - is that a dick ? you can make better dicks than that xD
00:33:364 (4,1) - overlap
00:33:778 (1,2,3) - hard to read , for this level
01:01:088 (6,7,8) - overlap


i hope this mod will help you
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pacsu wrote:
M4M LOL

HARD

00:17:226 (7) - NC ? done
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - i see what you want to make but , here it s weird , dont make it OR make it more marked removed it since 2 people didn't like it already
00:43:709 (1) - make only a single reverse and put a circle here 00:44:536 -
00:54:468 (2) - ugly and cancer , if you want your map to be ranked dont do that true, piston slider will have to do.
00:54:468 (2) - NC

ADVANCED

00:16:399 (1) - hard to read fixed
00:27:157 (1) - is that a dick ? you can make better dicks than that xD copied skystar's ball technique, looks better now. Inb4 unclear slider path :-(
00:33:364 (4,1) - overlap
00:33:778 (1,2,3) - hard to read , for this level fixed
01:01:088 (6,7,8) - overlap fixed


i hope this mod will help you


Thanks a lot for the mod. Helped a ton
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yo, from my Modding Queue without a self esteem

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General
Combo Colours: Use custom combo colours that fit your BG colors




easy
  • 00:10:606 (4) - reverse arrow mistake, it should've been on the white tick, not on the blue one, this will require adjustments on the pattern but it's necessary
  • 00:26:330 (1) - this spinner is not fitting the way you wanted, it starts before the transition and ends in the different section feel....00:26:330 (1) - you need a note here at least, it sounding weird and hollow
  • 00:42:054 (1,2,3) - critical DS mistake, need a fix
  • 00:50:330 (5) - NC
  • 01:00:261 (11) - NC


Advanced
  • the actual main issue here is the high inconsistency of your DS, it still a 2 star diff, so it gets inconsistent when you have stuff like 00:03:157 (4,5,6) - for a 1/4 interval but right after it you have 00:03:571 (6,7) - for the same interval, which is highly inconsistent. And the difference between the DS from 1/2 to 1/4 is way too huge, for example 00:03:985 (7,8) - is way too big compared to the 1/4 you was using. also, you have many issues with the 1/2, because again you changed it, here for example 00:42:881 (10,11,12,1) - .
  • You also might want to get a better flow/structure, because you have many weird and unecessary overlaps, for example 00:38:743 (7,2) - which gives a huge look of inexperience on flow...and 00:40:192 (2,3) - have inconsitent DS, and also plays way too weird for a 2* diff. I highly suggest you remake rythms and flow to something more simple and less forced/complicated


Hard
  • 00:00:675 (1,1,2) - fix DS
  • 00:02:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - the rythm is really weird, because the vocals simply have all the intensity, but the notes don't sound right with the vocals, in other moments this might have worked, but here it sounds wrong. It really looks like you're trying to follow vocals because of 00:03:157 (6,1,2,3) - .
  • 00:10:606 (10,1) - This pause don't feel right, you should have more success if you change 10 for a single+slider and adjust next rythms
  • 00:13:916 (8,9) - Unecessary overlap and they have a really random shape for the entire pattern, can you think of a different shape?
  • 00:15:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - this straight pattern simply feels ''off''. Your entire map felt curved, maybe adjust and make it flow better?
  • 00:20:123 (3) - place at x380|y140
  • 00:20:537 (5,6) - again, try a different shape ?
  • 00:25:295 (10) - reallly bad slider with a realllly weird blanket...I highly consider you make a better one
  • 00:27:157 (5) - NC
  • 00:47:019 (1,2,3,4) - rythm changed because of the 1/3 (which is also snapped wrong, check and fix it), I suggest you unstack those notes
  • 00:50:330 (1) - same 1/3 issue
  • 00:58:606 (3) - if that was supposed to be a dick, well, it didn't quite work, it looks more ugly than it looks like a cock xD
  • consider removing all stacks from the last section

Structure of the map have a big room for improvements, I consider you try to make a cleaner flow with a more polished patterns and flows...map isn't bad, but also have a lot to improve, specially on flow >.<

peace :roll:
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yo, from my Modding Queue without a self esteem

mod

General
Combo Colours: Use custom combo colours that fit your BG colors




easy
  • 00:10:606 (4) - reverse arrow mistake, it should've been on the white tick, not on the blue one, this will require adjustments on the pattern but it's necessary was intentionaly mapped to the vocals, but yeah it's better to follow the music
  • 00:26:330 (1) - this spinner is not fitting the way you wanted, it starts before the transition and ends in the different section feel....00:26:330 (1) - you need a note here at least, it sounding weird and hollow the spinner originally started here, then I moved it for a stupid reason without thinking it through
  • 00:42:054 (1,2,3) - critical DS mistake, need a fix would be bland without a dick
  • 00:50:330 (5) - NC fixed
  • 01:00:261 (11) - NC fixed


Advanced
  • the actual main issue here is the high inconsistency of your DS, it still a 2 star diff, so it gets inconsistent when you have stuff like 00:03:157 (4,5,6) - for a 1/4 interval but right after it you have 00:03:571 (6,7) - for the same interval, which is highly inconsistent. And the difference between the DS from 1/2 to 1/4 is way too huge, for example 00:03:985 (7,8) - is way too big compared to the 1/4 you was using. also, you have many issues with the 1/2, because again you changed it, here for example 00:42:881 (10,11,12,1) - . It's not inconsisntent though. Where there are multiple 1/4 circles mapped to drums I use low DS to make it like a slow stream while everything else is 1,1x distance snapped. Fixed the end of kiai though, no reason for DS decrease
  • You also might want to get a better flow/structure, because you have many weird and unecessary overlaps, for example 00:38:743 (7,2) - which gives a huge look of inexperience on flow...and 00:40:192 (2,3) - have inconsitent DS, and also plays way too weird for a 2* diff. I highly suggest you remake rythms and flow to something more simple and less forced/complicated I don't see any flow issue there. The overlap was very brief so I increased AR to 7 which fits better anyway. The repeat slider doesn't have inconsistent DS but I angled it so it looks better and less confusing. The difficulty is supposed to be advanced which is harder than normal, that's why I chose to include the 1/4 rhythms with repeat sliders. I should probably make a normal


Hard
  • 00:00:675 (1,1,2) - fix DS no need to DS here but the jump 1,2 jump was huge for no reason, changed
  • 00:02:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - the rythm is really weird, because the vocals simply have all the intensity, but the notes don't sound right with the vocals, in other moments this might have worked, but here it sounds wrong. It really looks like you're trying to follow vocals because of 00:03:157 (6,1,2,3) - . It follows both the guitar and vocals, same as 00:03:157 (6,1,2,3) - and the guitar actually is on time. A 1/2 slider seems like a worse options than this since it ignores way too much.
  • 00:10:606 (10,1) - This pause don't feel right, you should have more success if you change 10 for a single+slider and adjust next rythms It's a bit hard to play but I really want to follow the vocals here. I do it here 00:23:847 (7,8) - too. I need to think about it more before I change it
  • 00:13:916 (8,9) - Unecessary overlap and they have a really random shape for the entire pattern, can you think of a different shape? fixed
  • 00:15:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - this straight pattern simply feels ''off''. Your entire map felt curved, maybe adjust and make it flow better? All of these patterns except the first and last are rigid/sharp/whatever word you wanna use. Also, 00:16:399 (5,6) - feels fitting for the drums and if I used anything but a perfect square it would look ugly going into those sliders. But I switched 2 with 4 for easier flow
  • 00:20:123 (3) - place at x380|y140 You didn't like the previous square but want me to make one here? The pattern is fine.
  • 00:20:537 (5,6) - again, try a different shape ? done
  • 00:25:295 (10) - reallly bad slider with a realllly weird blanket...I highly consider you make a better one I won't change it yet since I have to figure out if the rhythm even stays here.
  • 00:27:157 (5) - NC distinctly remember having NC here. how did it get removed :?:
  • 00:47:019 (1,2,3,4) - rythm changed because of the 1/3 (which is also snapped wrong, check and fix it), I suggest you unstack those notes
  • 00:50:330 (1) - same 1/3 issue
  • 00:58:606 (3) - if that was supposed to be a dick, well, it didn't quite work, it looks more ugly than it looks like a cock xD It's an upside-down piston
  • consider removing all stacks from the last section didn't want much movement since it's so calm. Stacks are fine

Structure of the map have a big room for improvements, I consider you try to make a cleaner flow with a more polished patterns and flows...map isn't bad, but also have a lot to improve, specially on flow >.<

peace :roll:


Thanks for the mod :D
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hohol454 wrote:

*00:42:054 (1,2,3) - critical DS mistake, need a fix would be bland without a dick


Then make a slider dick with a decent DS, when I say it's ''critical'' I don't mean ''in my opinion''. I mean in the ranking criteria, if you want to possibly rank this mapset, it's a critical unrankable error that must be fixed.

That's the lowest diff, you're suppose to ignore many of the stuff you ''want'' just to make something playable for the newer players
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Changed Easy to Normal because it had a lot of 1/2 rhythms and increased DS and star rating slightly to make it fit that
Also removed stuff that would potentionally cause trouble :-/
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General

  • The normal and advanced diff don't have custom colours
  • "sexualobster's amazing album of sin rock" should be the source


Normal

  • AR 3 feels more appriopiate
  • 00:26:330 - A circle here would play well rhythmically
  • 00:27:157 (1) - If this is going to be the lowest diff in the set then there isn't enough recovery time between 00:30:468 (1) and the end of the spinner
  • 00:43:709 (1) - I strongly advise against changing SV this much in the lowest diff


Advanced

  • 00:06:468 (1,2,3,4) - I know this pattern is the concept of the map but I strongly suggest applying the same DS here as the rest of the map because it breaks down flow with the reduced cursor movement and in all honesty, it comes off as less fun to play. It also doesn't really fit the music imo since the sounds at 00:06:468 (1,2) are different to 00:06:881 (3,4) -
  • 00:11:433 (5,6,7) - You can increase spacing here a tiny bit to improve the blanket, it would still be readable. 7 is closer to 6 than 5.
  • 00:49:502 (4) - http://puu.sh/vjNFo/ceb3a2058b.jpg imo this rhythm is more fitting and flows a lot better rhythmically

GL!
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Kisses wrote:

General

  • The normal and advanced diff don't have custom colours fixed, didn't know that disabling map skin removes combo colour since I play with transparent hitcircles and only use default for mapping
  • "sexualobster's amazing album of sin rock" should be the source source is for videogame/anime music, album is always in the tags


Normal

  • AR 3 feels more appriopiate ok
  • 00:26:330 - A circle here would play well rhythmically why not
  • 00:27:157 (1) - If this is going to be the lowest diff in the set then there isn't enough recovery time between 00:30:468 (1) and the end of the spinner removed spinner
  • 00:43:709 (1) - I strongly advise against changing SV this much in the lowest diff increased it


Advanced

  • 00:06:468 (1,2,3,4) - I know this pattern is the concept of the map but I strongly suggest applying the same DS here as the rest of the map because it breaks down flow with the reduced cursor movement and in all honesty, it comes off as less fun to play. It also doesn't really fit the music imo since the sounds at 00:06:468 (1,2) are different to 00:06:881 (3,4) - I think that depends on your playstyle. I play maps under 4* mouse only and prefer the lower spacing. The sounds are still drums
  • 00:11:433 (5,6,7) - You can increase spacing here a tiny bit to improve the blanket, it would still be readable. 7 is closer to 6 than 5. fixed, had to do it manually because distance snap didn't work for some reason
  • 00:49:502 (4) - http://puu.sh/vjNFo/ceb3a2058b.jpg imo this rhythm is more fitting and flows a lot better rhythmically did something similar

GL!


Thanks for the mod!
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hi from my q o/
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I can't mod ez maps sorry ^^
gl :)
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hi from my q o/
Hard
  • 00:58:606 (3) - this penis slider can be better played with it a bit
  • 00:12:054 (8) - if you mapped the vocals it ends here 00:13:088 - and if you mapped the guitar it starts here 00:12:261 - it's mapped to the vocals, they don't really end on any specific beat so putting the sliderend on empty red tick makes the most sense
  • 00:15:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unconfortable flow for a 1/4 thing and for a hard diff it's fine, with spacing like this you can go in a circle and hit it no problem
  • 00:20:537 (5,6) - space this a bit more, it's the same ds for the previous 1/4 things ok
  • 00:36:675 (4,5) - bad spacing, if you wanted to emphasise a sound whit ds change this one is better 00:37:088 (1) - fixed

I can't mod ez maps sorry ^^
gl :)


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