1. a408746369's Oni (4.94 stars, 592 notes)
2. Another (5 stars, 364 notes)
3. Beginner (1.53 stars, 91 notes)
4. Hyper (4.93 stars, 331 notes)
5. Normal (4.15 stars, 144 notes)

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

kors k<3

Another:
00:35:725 (6,7) - Maybe don't stack these under the slider 00:35:222 (4) ? They're kinda hard to see >w<

banvi wrote:

hi~

red : you should fix
black : just suggestion

[Another]
HP +1 , OD +1
00:34:552 (2) reverse selection?
00:54:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid down (grid lv2)
00:49:468 (4) 1 grid down
01:11:256 (2) new combo?
01:21:815 (9) 1 grid left
01:40:921 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) lol nice...but hard to see... can you make more visible??? (I think you should adjust using grid lv3)
01:50:977 (1) remove new combo
01:52:317 (1) ^

overall nice map!

banvi wrote:

hi~

red : you should fix
black : just suggestion

[Normal]
00:09:748 (timing point) hitsound volume -2
00:14:775 (1) remove new combo
00:16:451 (3) new combo
00:56:004 (1) remove new combo
01:06:060 (5) new combo01:07:401 (1) remove new combo
01:44:273 (6) new combo? I think this combo is too long
01:52:653 (2,1) hmm , this jump don't fit & too suddenly for normal... remove new combo (1) & fix spacing
01:58:351 (1) add finish?

[Hyper]
HP +1
00:09:664 (1) move 00:09:747(white tick).
00:43:099 (6) 1 grid down(grid lv3)
00:43:267 (7) new combo
01:16:787 (1,1,1,1) finish really don't fit imo...
01:37:234 (1) remove new combo



overall nice map!

Tonoko wrote:

:oops: hi

[normal]
spacing比较大 作为easiest diff 可能被挑。不太确定。
01:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 中间加个new combo
01:54:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 最后这段好像节奏有些怪？不把3个空位填上么？
OTL真的不怎么会做新手难度 不过重新排了
[hyper]
一点问题在于一些交接位置有些生硬恩稍微修改了一些地方
00:38:910 (5) - 这个太诡异了。。。有吗？

star

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3 @ 320 kbps, try to compress it to 128~192 kbps.

[Hyper]
0:17:625 (2,3,4,1,2) - (2,3,4) left 1 grid, (2,1) remove finish
0:25:334 (4) - right 1 grid
0:51:479 (6) - up 1 grid
0:57:345 (3) - finish at beginning instead of ending

[Normal]
ok for me

star~

LunaticSHIKI wrote:

hyper
01:00:530 (8) - dont bpmx2..
01:15:781 (1) - Delete this spinner? im sure a slider or something would work better here, rather than a sudden short spinner.

01:11:423 - make the rhythm like that?[attachment=0:b9349]123.jpg[/attachment:b9349]

01:22:150,01:27:513,01:30:194,01:32:206,01:50:306 - i dont think those quick jumps make much sense.is there any way that you could close these a little bit up? of course this is only a suggestion.

easy
wtf slider tick rate 3....

plz restore it to the old version>_>