1. Easy (1.35 stars, 149 notes)
2. Hard (2.85 stars, 286 notes)
3. Insane (3.39 stars, 388 notes)
4. Normal (1.84 stars, 204 notes)

pinataman wrote:

Hi. From mod request. Don't give kudosu until I mod the whole mapset. Sorry if sound like a jerk.

[Insane]

Right now, 01:00:258 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) – are all the same, which I feel contradicts this flow when they both have the same rhythm 01:03:720 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . I suggest doing Ctrl + H on 01:01:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so that it feels a little more distinct from the previous combo and then making it fit the map again (so that this and the next combo don't have the same clockwise flow), though you could change the latter pattern to match the former (in that it is one pattern repeating 4 times).

Right now 01:07:412 (1,2,1,2) – is a rest pattern because the background beat is very low. At 01:11:104 (1) - , the background beat rises in pitch, so this is a good place to stop the rest and go back into the normal flow. So 01:11:104 (1) – imo should be three circles and not a slider. If you agree, then I suggest changing the flow to something like http://puu.sh/i2JIk/f99222eca9.jpg


01:33:720 (2,3) – Consider making this a slider instead to match the vocals nicely like at 00:19:874 (2) -

01:38:335 (1) – Remove NC

The following places are where I suggest you change the direction of the circular flow from clockwise to CounterClockwise or vice-versa because the melody feels different, so a change in direction helps reflect that:

00:04:643 (1,2) – (so the suggestion is do CTRL + G on each and then make the pattern fit again)
00:07:412 (5) -
00:10:181 (1,2) -
00:19:412 (1,2,3,4,5) – (ctrl + J on this pattern)
00:26:797 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:36:027 (1,2,3) -
00:39:720 (1,2) – (something like http://puu.sh/i2IgZ/ac10dc0a6a.jpg)
00:41:566 (1) – Ctrl + H maybe?
00:44:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – (Ctrl + G)
01:14:797 (1,2,3,4,5) –
01:20:335 (1,2,3,4) – Break up the flow in the middle, maybe with a symmetrical pattern like this http://puu.sh/i2Kma/352e62e98b.jpg
01:33:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -(Ctrl + H, 45 degree clockwise rotation)
01:36:489 (5,6) – This one isn't as important, but if you want to emphasize this part, you can make something like http://puu.sh/i2KEh/1f74ca6a95.jpg. I do think though that 01:36:489 (5,6) – and 01:36:951 (1) – should not both have clockwise flow.

I'm really sorry to do this, but it's a lot easier for me to explain the flow suggestion if I send you the code instead of doing complicated flips and switches. This is assuming you haven't changed the previous part and the dist of the jumps might need to be adjusted:

244,186,98104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,186,98220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,185,98335,2,0,L|323:193,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,340,98797,6,0,L|285:333,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,178,99258,2,0,L|244:186,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,291,99720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,108,99951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,100066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,100181,2,0,P|329:72|291:66,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,193,100643,6,0,P|232:229|270:235,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,43,101104,2,0,P|174:64|154:99,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,290,101566,2,0,P|236:268|256:233,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,49,102027,1,8,1:0:0:0:
305,43,102258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,207,102489,5,2,0:0:0:0:
202,290,102720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,132,102951,1,8,1:0:0:0:
304,215,103182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,115,103412,1,2,0:0:0:0:
351,132,103643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,132,103758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,132,103874,1,8,1:0:0:0:

01:48:027 (1) – This pattern needs to feel more distinct from the previous one, so I think a rotation instead of a flow switch is good. Then the rest of the pattern might look something like http://puu.sh/i2MyU/b1c1d7f5a3.jpg ?

01:50:335 (3,4) – Ctrl + J
01:55:412 (1,2,3,4,5) – Ctrl + J , rotate ~45 degress clockwise, move to 304, 284

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]

1. 
   Combo 3 colour is not really match with the background, suggest to use a pink colour which suits more
   

   R:255 G:128 B:255

   I actually kinda like my colours :c
2. Audio bitrate is higher than oh wow, thank you SO MUCH for this!
   Use this mp3 file with 192kbps instead

[Easy]

1. 00:27:720 (3,4) - May consider switching in timeline since 00:28:643 is a downbeat, which is not good to place a slider end here, instead a note or slider head can emphasis more hmm.. downbeat doesn't really feel like it has any special emphasize :c
2. 01:05:566 (3) - Rotate it anti-clockwisely a bit to avoid a sharp turn between 01:05:566 (3,4) which is decease playability in easier diffs done
3. 01:39:720 (5) - I would suggest you to curve this up instead to avoid sharp turn as well turn doesn't feel super sharp, and a LITTLE sharp-ness actually feels appropriate because the vocals have a peak here. Guess I'll be changing this up if a BN feels bad about these
4. Nice diff

[Normal]

1. 01:04:643 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - In my opinion this pattern is difficult as players have to keep hitting 3 single notes in 1/4, it is not suitable to map in a Normal diff, you may change some notes into sliders which is a lot more easier to play replaced two if these with repeat slider for a less dense pattern. Also looks neater I think c:

[Hard & Insane]

1. No problem

A mapset with high quality.
Good luck on ranking!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Peach!!! How are you? I'm here because of you. ^^/ So, let's get this ranked asap. ahhhh! You found a really nice song. It's kind of addictive. xD Alsoit has an incredible but awesome background. It's so coloful. What about making a storyboard of this map? Maybe you can start by putting the lyrics into a box. The preview point was put in the most proper place. D: Good job! Anything wrong with this map. Congratulations! Oh, remember I'm not a good modder so, if you don't agree it's fine. I'm constantly learning. how do storyboards work? lmoa I suck ;w;

Easy

This is a decent diff. Everything is so blanket and the map's flow is awesome. You've done a great job in this Diff. So, what I'm going to suggest are more like suggestions that might help.

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  Rhythm of the hit objects

  1. 1. 01:18:489 (1,2,3,4) What about replacing those 4 consecutive sliders in two sliders? I suggest you this because is so weird to find like a circle consistency in Easy diffs. I get your idea. There are 3 very distinct sounds on 3 of these white ticks though, which I wanted to map. The last one just kinda...felt into place because of this. Will consider changing this if need be, though I think a pattern that is a little more dense doesn't hurt with a bpm this low
        
        or in two circles and one slider?
        
     2. 02:04:643 (3,4,5,6) ^
     3. 00:12:027 (1) In this part of the song seems to be a different flow, and maybe a slider doesn't fit as well, because the sounds feels to be loud and faster, so I'd suggest you to replace it by a spinner. 2/1 room after this spinner wouldnt be enough room :c
     4. 00:32:335 (3) Here, I think would fit better a slider than a circle. current rythm seems fine
  
  
  Blanket's stuffs

  1. 02:08:335 (3,4) Fix this blanket. Maybe this circle looks better in the middle of these two sliders. 02:08:335 (3,4,1) this wasn't supposed to blanket C:
  
  
  Hitsounds

  1. 00:23:104 (1) Remote the Whistle sound of the head of the slider and replace it by a finish.
  2. 00:37:874 (1) ^
  3. 01:36:951 (1) ^
  4. 01:51:720 (1) ^
     
     there is no finish in the song for either of these :c

Normal

Another decent Diff of peachtrees. o.o/ It's kind of simple but fun to play. n.n Although, it's kind of boring if you use the same pattern for the whole song. (slider shape)

Rhythm of the hit objects

1. 00:25:874 (6,7,8) This is so intuitive. What about replacing them by a 1/2 slider and one repetition. will give this some thought, though I kinda think that this'd make the whole thing a little to 1/2 heavy, and seeing as though the current rythm works well, I'd like to wait for further omdding until changing this
2. 01:19:643 Add a note here. Seems to be a beat here because of the vocals.
3. 01:21:027 ^
4. 01:31:181 ^ If you listen to 50% seem to be a beat here because of the song.
5. 01:33:027 ^
   
   There's stuff on nearly every red tick that could be mapped out, doing that though would end up making the patterns waaay too 1/2 heavy.
   
6. 01:37:874 (3) I think here would fit more a 1/2 slider which repeats once. feels a little too fast :c
7. 00:12:027 (1,2,3) Same as in the Easy diff, I think a spinner whould fit better here. Did somethin that'll make this look a lot nicer c:

Blanket's stuffs

1. 00:11:104 (6) What about changing the shape of this slider for this? did something nice to this c:
   
2. 00:59:104 (6) At least a slider shape different form the other ones. XD Make it more curve. mkay

Hard

The best hard I could have played with DT in my life. n.n7 thank you!

Blanket's stuffs

1. 01:24:951 (3) The shape of this slider is kind of simple. what about making it like this current slider-shape flows very well I think ;w;
   
2. 01:49:874 (1,2,3) Organize the blanket here. tried making this a bit better ;w;

New Combos

1. 01:48:027 (6) NC oops

Insane

Rhythm of the hit objects

1. 00:07:181 (4) Move it closer to the Three 00:06:951 (3) to make a symmetric jump here. isn't this already symmetric?
2. 00:12:027 (1,2,1) As I have pointed at in the rest of the difficulties, in this part you can do a challenging part. As this is an "insane" that look more like a hardish diff, a tiny stream would fit awesomely here because of the song provide a drum section here. You can try to put a spinner and streams or only streams. I don't think there is any 1/4 in the music though? additionally, the song kinda slows down a little, so a stream would be overdone I think
   
3. 00:22:874 Missing note? nop, gap is intentional
4. 00:59:104 (6) The shape of this slider doesn't look good. :/ Here I leave some example of the slider I think would fit here. Or, you just can put a tiny stream here which doesn't hurt anybody. n.n hmm..this is a though one...I kinda like the shape but...aaah I can't make any of these shapes
   
   Of course this one should look more symmetric.
   

Euny wrote:

m4m as your request!♥ via irc.

• General

1. for metadata : add tags (from ranked map) + Kiriko Takemura Caroline Charonplop Full Control Tokyo dun c:
   
2. i cant found information for ' (Short Ver.) ' you need to ask other BN or QAT about this correctly title. will wait for a BN to check this to see what's the deal with this
3. offset bit early. i recommend to audio lead in + 1000ms how?;w; + is it really THAT early?

• Easy

1. looks really nice to me.

• Normal

1. 00:17:566 (4,5) - i think its bit awkward to rhythm hope you try this timeline. I've used the same rythm for the next vocals too, I think they do a better job of emphasizing the song :c
   

• Hard

1. 00:13:874 (3) - add nc cause your insane do that. also, hard is not low diff. so i think its correct to similar with insane. nice catch
2. 01:07:412 (1,2) - make these like 01:04:643 (4,5,6) - or, 01:05:566 (1,2) - its more fit for music imo. hmm I'm not sure about these. I think they do a decent job of switching from background music to vocals without being to confusing or anything, + I did the same thing in the Insane. Will wait for a BN to check this
3. 01:42:489 (4) - this is nc spot follow your insane dun c:

• Insane

1. 00:23:104 (1) - finish more fit for this head imo. ( if you apply this, change for all diffs. ) feels a little to weak for a finish
2. 00:37:643 - maybe you can hear tempo. well, add note for here. done!
3. 00:59:104 (6) - nc for here cause new melody start. sure c:
4. 01:51:258 (5) - i think, drum sample set maybe more fit for this did something very nice to this (across all diffs)
5. 01:57:258 (1,5) - make perfect stack done!

that's it
hope this is helpful...

-Tochi wrote:

M4M

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  General

1. Please fix these:
   fixed during a previous mod
2. You can use this site to compress the audio to 192kbps

^

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  Insane

1. 00:23:104 (1) - Blanket better: done c:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:874 - Add a circle here? And move 00:22:412 (4,5,6) - it to x:237 y:232, and stack the new circle with 00:23:104 (1) 's head for better flow like: did something nice here
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:57:720 (3,4) - Move 3 Tiny grids to the left or right for better reading like: I'd like to keep this stacked to be more consistent with my mapping in this Diff :c + does this really improve the reading by a lot?
   
   SPOILER

   

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  Hard

1. 00:04:643 (1,3) - Improve the 2nd slider like: done c:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:412 (1) - It points out to the above, but the next object is below, so maybe reshape it for better flow like: I think this is fine due to slider leniency
   
   SPOILER

   

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  Feedback

  
  Nice map! Idk why, but i love the song so much xD
  I couldn't mod the easier diffs because i think they are fine :3 Take my star ^^
  //shoots star Thank you o3o

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue !
[This mod has been done with both hitsounds and music volume set to 100%]
 
 

       General

1. Mostly hitsound modding, your placement and combo colours are mostly fine!
   
2. You know what you could do to make this map much more enjoyable? Add taiko hitsounds to cover those drums in the background in the middle section of the song. dunno if I'm doing something wrong, but this just feel so silent, almost inaudible? I like the drum finishes :c
   I uploaded it for you, and those are the points in which you want to add them in the song:
   
   01:03:720
   01:05:566
   01:06:951 This and the next one are a little softer, so I suggest lowering the volume a little
   01:07:412
   01:11:104
   01:13:412
   01:18:489
   01:20:335
   01:21:720
   
   Try this out and see how the new hitsounds do togheter!
   
   
   

   Easy

   
   
3. 00:41:566 (1) - Add a soft-whistle to this whole slider? Sounds good along with the vocals. (Even normal whistle is alright, but a little unfitting) eeh having these for only a few slider feels rather odd
4. 01:11:104 (1) - This clap doesn't sound to good, I suggest removing it added some green lines to tune down the volume a little to make the clap feels less noisy c:
5. 01:25:412 (3) - ^ ^
   
   
   

   Normal

   
   
6. 00:10:181 (4) - Add a new combo here, since you repeated the same pattern but how does repeating a pattern affect the combo?
7. 00:11:104 (6) - Nazi suggestion here, but is there any need to have such a shape when no other slider in the map has it? Not that it really matters, but it breaks the consistency a little hmm I see what you're saying, though I think the beginning of the song is kinda unique so I guess this kinda warrants for a unique slider? I mean it's not like this is outstandingly weird or anything
8. 00:30:027 (5) - Remove clap, add whistle. It fits better with the noise you hear in the background whistle doesn't feel like it catches the sharpness of the song :c
9. 01:00:951 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This pattern is repeating 4 times in a row, I suggest finding a new one to change it up a little, it's quite noticeable when playng ye did something nice to this part
10. 01:43:874 (5) - Remove clap, add whistle. Same reasoning as 00:30:027 (5) commented above
    
    
    

    Hard

    
    
11. This diff looks good to me, the only thing I have something to say about is 02:15:835 (1) this last spinner, there's really no need for it to be there since the song soes not change and thus having a unique one fits better. will keep this one for the sole reason that it is easy to fix inc ase it needs any adjustment.
    
    
    

    Insane

    
    
12. 01:06:950 (4) - There's no need for a clap here why not?:c
13. 01:12:951 (1) - I'm worried about this spacing beeing a little counter-intuitive, thus I suggest a different pattern feels very intuitive imo, not sure how changing this would end up improving anything
14. 01:43:874 (8) - Remove clap, add whistle again, I don't feel like this catches the sharpness of the song. a custom hitsound would probably be the way to go, how 2 find smthing fitting though ;w;

Good luck!