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AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO

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HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 1월 22일 목요일 at 오후 9:20:10

Artist: AKINO from bless4
Title: MIIRO
Source: 艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags: みいろ TV Size opening kantai collection kancolle Laurier
BPM: 195
Filesize: 18016kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.57 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (2.97 stars, 205 notes)
  3. Hyper (3.64 stars, 277 notes)
  4. Insane (4.7 stars, 344 notes)
  5. Laurier's Insane (4.87 stars, 346 notes)
  6. Normal (2.1 stars, 156 notes)
Download: AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO
Download: AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sup


2015.1.5 - Change Mp3 file
2015.1.6 - Change Video
2015.1.20 - Change Mp3 again
Last edited by HabiHolic , edited 50 times in total.
Enon
2,690 posts
Joined November 2012
Enon
[Normal]
00:11:725 (1) - x: 151, y: 135로 옮겨서 슬라이더랑 완벽하게 겹쳐주시는게 좋을 듯??
01:25:571 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:02:187 (2) - Ctrl + H 하는게 더 모양 이쁜것 같음..

[Insane]
00:26:648 (2) - 이걸 여기에 배치해보시는건 어떨까요?


맵이 좋아서 지적할게 없네요.. 지죤 짧은 모딩 ㅈㅅ
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

Enon wrote:

[Normal]
00:11:725 (1) - x: 151, y: 135로 옮겨서 슬라이더랑 완벽하게 겹쳐주시는게 좋을 듯?? / 수정!
01:25:571 (1) - ^/ 수정!

[Hard]
00:02:187 (2) - Ctrl + H 하는게 더 모양 이쁜것 같음.. / 끙... 이건 뭐랄까.. 이렇게 배치하는게 제 스타일이여서 ㅋㅋ 이건 그냥 둘게요!

[Insane]
00:26:648 (2) - 이걸 여기에 배치해보시는건 어떨까요? / 수정! 플로우가 더 괜찮은것 같아요!


맵이 좋아서 지적할게 없네요.. 지죤 짧은 모딩 ㅈㅅ
모딩감사합니다!
Lari
367 posts
Joined June 2013
Lari
[Hard]
00:10:341 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491813 처럼 살짝 휘게 해보는건 어때여
00:42:033 (7) - Ctrl + G 하시는게 다음노트 칠때 느낌이 더 좋은거같아여

[Insane]
00:35:264 (3) - 요거 00:34:418 (4) - 여기 자리에 두는건 어때요? 위로 커서 올리는거보다.. 오른쪽 왼쪽으로 움직이는게 더 편하기도 하고..!
00:51:725 (4) - x : 336 y : 248 에 두는건 어때여? 처음에 두셧던 자리는 조금 햇갈리는 부분이 있어서.. 옆으로 옴겨놓는게 치기 편할거같아요 모양은 조금 안나오지만..
00:53:110 (1) - x : 344 y : 212 로 둬서 뒤에 연타 자리랑 같은곳에 두게 해바여
00:53:264 (2) - x : 264 y : 40 위에꺼 적용 하시면 요렇게!
00:59:418 (7) - 이건 그냥 단순한 제안인뎅 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491957 이거 어때여 ?
01:01:341 - 슬슬 연타가 나오기시작하니 손풀겸 여기 노트 하나 추가 !
01:05:648 - 그리고 여기 중간에 노트 하나 빼서 단타로

[Laurier's Insane]
Add kia time

00:27:418 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498705 形を少し変えてみてはいかがですか？
00:45:725 (3) - Ctrl +G 歌音が下がっています。それに合わせて銅線も下に向けするのはいかがですか？
00:48:495 (1) - 00:48:802 (2) - Ctrl +G 今現在配置良いと思うが。ハイライト部分に向かって音が高まっているので下に向けてジャンプを作成するよりも、スライド2つを向けるのも良いと思います
00:52:187 (1) - もう少し左に ( x : 88 y : 208 )
00:56:956 (1) - Ctrl +G より難しくなって後ろに3回4回ノートの位置も同様に変更すると、動線も良く負けるです
00:57:571 (3) - x : 284 y : 360
00:57:725 (4) - x : 136 y : 180
01:09:264 (4) - x : 249 y : 353 DSが同じ短打より、ジャンプが入ると、より良いような気が提案します

음.. 양이 별로 없네요.. 죄송 ㅠㅠ
Last edited by Lari , edited 1 time in total.
Winnie
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Joined November 2013
Winnie
Laurier is still alive oh boi. I'll leave this here once his GD is done I'll mod this :)
Laurier
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Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/em7OJ/8e89b41232.osu
my diff
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
Hey from #modreqs
m4m request? I will link you the map when I done mod :3, do you do marathons tho?

WANNKAAAAAAAAA~

[General]
Hitsounds are a tad loud, they kinda overwhelm the music x.x
is this a short version, because it seems the audio is cut on the end?

[Easy]
00:00:495 (1,2,3) - The blankets don't fir together fully as shown in the picture below, you'll need to add sxc
Blankets
00:07:264 (2,3) - Curve slider 2 more to give off a nicer impression of flow to the player.
00:12:187 (2,3) - ^
00:17:725 (3,4,1) - Why not make the curve on slider 1 curve over both of the sliders for a cool symmetrical effect?
00:19:725 (2,3) - Blanket off by a touch on the left ( use the approach circle for a guide to blanketing )
00:21:110 (4,1) - ^ (to the right this time though)
00:55:879 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:58:802 (2) - Curve more for a nicer flow perhaps and nicer look for the next curve slider?
01:11:879 (1) - ^
01:14:341 (4,5) - Make the same slider for consistency to the music.

[Hard]
00:10:802 (6,7,1) - Another blanket issue :3 both on the right
00:54:033 (7) - idk but it looks better to me if the make it in this angle
Angle
01:08:110 (9) - Remove clap it sounds out of place here x.x

[Insane]
A lot of blanket issues here tbh, I would double check all the ones you've made
00:55:879 (1,2) - Why not have slider 2 in the center of the curve part in slider 1 for example:
Slider
01:28:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That diff spike tho x.x I would be careful here with the diff spike

[Laurier's Insane]
Why no kiai time? x.x
00:07:571 (5,1) - Put the note on the right of the slider, I think it looks better here and makes for a nicer triangle imo.
00:10:341 (1) - Clap on start of slider?

01:20:341 (1,2) - No blanket?

Great mapset, all of the diffs are really good, wouldn't be surprised for rank soon xD
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki

IRC mod

Discussing about HabiHolic's diff (Easy-Insane), Fixed some stack issue in normal, and offset (tho still considering by Habi)


Mod
2015-01-11 10:02 HabiHolic: Hello!
2015-01-11 10:02 Ichigaki: hi~
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: can you my map mod?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: wow
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: Kancolle
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: finished mapset?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: yea!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: all done!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 4 diff made me
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 1 diff GD
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: so fast owo)
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: total 5 diff!
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: teach me ><
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: haha...
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: dl-ing
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: i only can do irc now
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: can you?
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: okay then
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: lol dl speed so slow :<
2015-01-11 10:05 HabiHolic: lol..
2015-01-11 10:06 HabiHolic: indonesia is internet slow?
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: a bit slow
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: probably
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: my dl speed only 10-40 KBps
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: orz...
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: my dl speed is 3 mb..
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: `-`)
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 10:08 Ichigaki: what diff first?
2015-01-11 10:08 HabiHolic: haha
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Easy
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Insane]]
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Insane frist?
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: ok~
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: 00:04:956 (2,3) - should be ctrl + G, i mean slider first
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: hmm.. i think this flow bad..
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: so no Fixed..
2015-01-11 10:10 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:06:033 (1,2) - for vocal right?
2015-01-11 10:11 HabiHolic: yea this note flow vocal
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:08:341 (3,4) - slider first
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: for the rhythm
2015-01-11 10:12 Ichigaki: 00:14:956 (7) - how about remove?
2015-01-11 10:13 HabiHolic: \00:14:956 (7) -
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (2) - better note stacked
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: no... this remove very awkward..
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: so this sound base
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: um okay, 
2015-01-11 10:15 HabiHolic: 00:08:341 (3,4) - this  Fixed
2015-01-11 10:16 Ichigaki: 00:25:110 - better add a note here, than move the spinner on 00:25:187 - 
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: o.o? why..?
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: i think white tick batter..
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: ah okay, i can't explain :<
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: ;w;
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: 00:42:033 (5) - better not stacked
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: not stack?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: i mean not stacked with 00:42:341 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: move it along
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498709
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: this one?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: not like that
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: maybe on x:348 y:92
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: but it's up to you
2015-01-11 10:19 HabiHolic: wait~
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: 00:48:033 - this part shouldn't an end of slider, you need to make it at least the start of slider or just normal note
2015-01-11 10:20 Ichigaki: *normal circle
2015-01-11 10:21 Ichigaki: 00:51:879 (5,6) - confusing, and unsnapped. 
2015-01-11 10:22 HabiHolic: Fixed!
2015-01-11 10:23 Ichigaki: 00:53:110 (1) - move to x:248 y:192 or stack with 00:52:648 (8) - 
2015-01-11 10:24 Ichigaki: 01:07:418 (7) - ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: 01:07:418 (7) - this no
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: small jump this
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: huehue
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: 00:53:110 (1) - this Fixed
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: 01:06:802 (4,5,6) - i can't read this lol, but good anyway
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: lol...
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: 01:15:110 (9,10,11) - how about ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: more challenging
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: change is good! but flow is bad.. orz
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: no Fixed.. sorry
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: no problem
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: just my opinion
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: anyway the end of song
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: not good
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: where do you get this song?
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: tI'm this song is full ver cuting
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: haha..
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: lol
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: then add cut version on tags
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: anyway, about diff spread
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: gap from normal to hard is high
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: depending from your easy and normal
2015-01-11 10:29 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: okay now go to hard
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:31 Ichigaki: 00:15:110 (8) - stack this with 00:15:264 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: hmm... now is not bad..
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: and change is flow bad.. my think..
2015-01-11 10:32 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:33 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/577139&m=0#
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: this map spread normal hard is.. gap...?
2015-01-11 10:34 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5 at least
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: then it should be find
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: now let's check the Hard
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: Insane should be fine for me
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: Hello
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: sorry my osu crashed orz
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: 00:52:495 - http://puu.sh/emhYN/537960433e.png
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ㅐㄱㅋ..
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: what's that?
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: 00:54:033 (7) - kick drum started 00:54:341 - 00:54:495 - 
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: 00:54:264 - 00:54:110 - no drum sound in blue tick
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: consider it
2015-01-11 10:44 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:44 Ichigaki: 00:55:418 (1) - compared with your insane, this should be red 'i mean the combo colour'
2015-01-11 10:45 Ichigaki: 01:18:956 (4,1) - confusing, try to move 01:19:264 (1) - somewhere, 
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: 01:19:264 (1) - maybe add a note here, for the drum roll
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: hard already good lol
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: wow, this is catchy
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: normal ar is 4, and hard is 8
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: too high
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: change normal ar to 5 and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: hello?
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yea?
2015-01-11 10:54 Ichigaki: consider that
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:55 Ichigaki: already look at all mod?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: yes..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: about ar?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: my computer is suck..
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: orz..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: wwww
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: Normal AR ahnge 5?
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: change*
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: at least
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: now normal
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590595 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Normal]]
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: yea
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: i'm now is normal
2015-01-11 10:58 Ichigaki: 00:01:725 (1,2) - blanket?
2015-01-11 10:59 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (6,7) - don't stack, move the slider
2015-01-11 11:01 HabiHolic: all Fixed~
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:27:879 (4,5) - don't stack too
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:31:725 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:35:264 (4,5) - 
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:57:571 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:01:264 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:08:033 (3,1) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: 01:10:495 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: just avoid stack in middle of pattern, if like 00:58:648 (1,2) - , it's okay
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: for normal
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: all done..
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: now easy
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590593 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Easy]]
2015-01-11 11:11 Ichigaki: 00:23:571 - should add a note here
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: very hader patten
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: no..
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: no much issue
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: this song is soo cool
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: ><
2015-01-11 11:15 Ichigaki: i'll post this :)
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: ok!
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: update~
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: pls change the offset into 491
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: i think it's the better one
2015-01-11 11:21 Ichigaki: what do you think?
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: hmm
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: smaill Fast 491..
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: i used offset analyzer lol
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: but up to you
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: ok..
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: later Fixed offset..
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/emy7L/81e17cce3f.osu
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
[Laurier]
  1. 00:11:110 (4,1) - follow feel werid to play
  2. 00:52:956 (6) - cheak blanket pls
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 서클 슬라 리듬자체가 조금 어색한데 슬라>서클>슬라>서클 이런식으로 해주는게 좋을거 같네요 리듬이랑 별로 어울리지않네요 지금은
  2. 00:06:187 (2) - 피니쉬 지워주세요 딲히 여기서 이 힛사로 강조할 필요가 없네요.
  3. 00:08:802 (5) - 차라리 00:07:879 (1) - 이쪾 테일에 두는 방법이 좋아보임 힛사도 클렙써서 점프 넣어주는편이 낫다고 봐요 갑자기 확 줄어드는 느낌이 들어서 별로네요.
  4. 00:11:879 (2) - 블랭킷 확인해주세요
  5. 00:21:418 (1) - ^
  6. 00:21:110 (7) - 흠..ctrl+G 해주는것도 좋아보임
  7. 00:33:110 (3) - 이거 조금 왼쪾위로 두시는게 어떄요? 갑자기 확 떨어지는 느낌 줄여주는기도 하고 서클 방향이 왼쪾향하고있으니 추천
  8. 00:40:802 (3) - 마찬가지로 블랭크 확인
  9. 00:48:187 (6) - 개인적인 바램인데 여기서 점프 넣어주면 좋아보여요 여기파트 연속으로 클렙나와서 점프 넣어주면 재밋어보임
  10. 00:50:033 (1) - 꼬리쪾 테일 재확인
  11. 01:04:187 (6) - 이것도 블랭킷 확인
[Hyper]
  1. 00:06:187 (9) - 인센에서는 피니쉬 쓰시면서 여기는 휘슬? 인센이랑 맞춰주시던지 아니면 그냥 인센 처럼 지워주세요.

    하이퍼는 갠적으로 너무 마음에들음 ㅋㅋㅋ
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:033 (4) - 블랭킷 확인
[Easy]
  1. 이지에있는 브레이크타임 노트 그냥 추가해주세요. 티비사이즈맵이서 이런식으로 브레이크 넣는거 진짜 별로같음
어쨰 난이도가 내려갈수록 모딩할꼐 않보임 >_> ㅈㅅ

/me run
HabiHolic
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Topic Starter
HabiHolic

eINess wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 서클 슬라 리듬자체가 조금 어색한데 슬라>서클>슬라>서클 이런식으로 해주는게 좋을거 같네요 리듬이랑 별로 어울리지않네요 지금은 / 딱히 고칠 이유가 없어보이는게 리듬에는 맞는것같아요..저는
  2. 00:06:187 (2) - 피니쉬 지워주세요 딲히 여기서 이 힛사로 강조할 필요가 없네요. / 보컬이 있어서 이걸로 강조한건데.. 일단 유지해보겠습니다.
  3. 00:08:802 (5) - 차라리 00:07:879 (1) - 이쪾 테일에 두는 방법이 좋아보임 힛사도 클렙써서 점프 넣어주는편이 낫다고 봐요 갑자기 확 줄어드는 느낌이 들어서 별로네요. / 저는 흐름이 별로 안좋아진다고 생각해서 이것도 거절할게요~
  4. 00:11:879 (2) - 블랭킷 확인해주세요 / Fixed
  5. 00:21:418 (1) - ^ / Fixed
  6. 00:21:110 (7) - 흠..ctrl+G 해주는것도 좋아보임 / Fixed. 흐름이 훨씬 좋아졌네요
  7. 00:33:110 (3) - 이거 조금 왼쪾위로 두시는게 어떄요? 갑자기 확 떨어지는 느낌 줄여주는기도 하고 서클 방향이 왼쪾향하고있으니 추천 / 제 스타일
  8. 00:40:802 (3) - 마찬가지로 블랭크 확인/ Fixed
  9. 00:48:187 (6) - 개인적인 바램인데 여기서 점프 넣어주면 좋아보여요 여기파트 연속으로 클렙나와서 점프 넣어주면 재밋어보임 / 기각.
  10. 00:50:033 (1) - 꼬리쪾 테일 재확인 / Fixed
  11. 01:04:187 (6) - 이것도 블랭킷 확인 / Fixed
[Hyper]
  1. 00:06:187 (9) - 인센에서는 피니쉬 쓰시면서 여기는 휘슬? 인센이랑 맞춰주시던지 아니면 그냥 인센 처럼 지워주세요. / Fixed

    하이퍼는 갠적으로 너무 마음에들음 ㅋㅋㅋ
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:033 (4) - 블랭킷 확인 / Fixed
[Easy]
  1. 이지에있는 브레이크타임 노트 그냥 추가해주세요. 티비사이즈맵이서 이런식으로 브레이크 넣는거 진짜 별로같음 / Fixed. 패턴 매핑했습니다.
어쨰 난이도가 내려갈수록 모딩할꼐 않보임 >_> ㅈㅅ

/me run
Thanks for mod!
HabiHolic
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Topic Starter
HabiHolic

[ Karen ] wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:341 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491813 처럼 살짝 휘게 해보는건 어때여
00:42:033 (7) - Ctrl + G 하시는게 다음노트 칠때 느낌이 더 좋은거같아여

[Insane]
00:35:264 (3) - 요거 00:34:418 (4) - 여기 자리에 두는건 어때요? 위로 커서 올리는거보다.. 오른쪽 왼쪽으로 움직이는게 더 편하기도 하고..!
00:51:725 (4) - x : 336 y : 248 에 두는건 어때여? 처음에 두셧던 자리는 조금 햇갈리는 부분이 있어서.. 옆으로 옴겨놓는게 치기 편할거같아요 모양은 조금 안나오지만..
00:53:110 (1) - x : 344 y : 212 로 둬서 뒤에 연타 자리랑 같은곳에 두게 해바여
00:53:264 (2) - x : 264 y : 40 위에꺼 적용 하시면 요렇게!
00:59:418 (7) - 이건 그냥 단순한 제안인뎅 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2491957 이거 어때여 ?
01:01:341 - 슬슬 연타가 나오기시작하니 손풀겸 여기 노트 하나 추가 !
01:05:648 - 그리고 여기 중간에 노트 하나 빼서 단타로

[Laurier's Insane]
Add kia time

00:27:418 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498705 形を少し変えてみてはいかがですか？
00:45:725 (3) - Ctrl +G 歌音が下がっています。それに合わせて銅線も下に向けするのはいかがですか？
00:48:495 (1) - 00:48:802 (2) - Ctrl +G 今現在配置良いと思うが。ハイライト部分に向かって音が高まっているので下に向けてジャンプを作成するよりも、スライド2つを向けるのも良いと思います
00:52:187 (1) - もう少し左に ( x : 88 y : 208 )
00:56:956 (1) - Ctrl +G より難しくなって後ろに3回4回ノートの位置も同様に変更すると、動線も良く負けるです
00:57:571 (3) - x : 284 y : 360
00:57:725 (4) - x : 136 y : 180
01:09:264 (4) - x : 249 y : 353 DSが同じ短打より、ジャンプが入ると、より良いような気が提案します

음.. 양이 별로 없네요.. 죄송 ㅠㅠ

[ Space ] wrote:

Hey from #modreqs
m4m request? I will link you the map when I done mod :3, do you do marathons tho?

WANNKAAAAAAAAA~

[General]
Hitsounds are a tad loud, they kinda overwhelm the music x.x
is this a short version, because it seems the audio is cut on the end?

[Easy]
00:00:495 (1,2,3) - The blankets don't fir together fully as shown in the picture below, you'll need to add sxc
Blankets
00:07:264 (2,3) - Curve slider 2 more to give off a nicer impression of flow to the player.
00:12:187 (2,3) - ^
00:17:725 (3,4,1) - Why not make the curve on slider 1 curve over both of the sliders for a cool symmetrical effect?
00:19:725 (2,3) - Blanket off by a touch on the left ( use the approach circle for a guide to blanketing )
00:21:110 (4,1) - ^ (to the right this time though)
00:55:879 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:58:802 (2) - Curve more for a nicer flow perhaps and nicer look for the next curve slider?
01:11:879 (1) - ^
01:14:341 (4,5) - Make the same slider for consistency to the music.

[Hard]
00:10:802 (6,7,1) - Another blanket issue :3 both on the right
00:54:033 (7) - idk but it looks better to me if the make it in this angle
Angle
01:08:110 (9) - Remove clap it sounds out of place here x.x

[Insane]
A lot of blanket issues here tbh, I would double check all the ones you've made
00:55:879 (1,2) - Why not have slider 2 in the center of the curve part in slider 1 for example:
Slider
01:28:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That diff spike tho x.x I would be careful here with the diff spike

[Laurier's Insane]
Why no kiai time? x.x
00:07:571 (5,1) - Put the note on the right of the slider, I think it looks better here and makes for a nicer triangle imo.
00:10:341 (1) - Clap on start of slider?

01:20:341 (1,2) - No blanket?

Great mapset, all of the diffs are really good, wouldn't be surprised for rank soon xD

Ichigaki wrote:

IRC mod

Discussing about HabiHolic's diff (Easy-Insane), Fixed some stack issue in normal, and offset (tho still considering by Habi)


Mod
2015-01-11 10:02 HabiHolic: Hello!
2015-01-11 10:02 Ichigaki: hi~
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: can you my map mod?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: wow
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: Kancolle
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: finished mapset?
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: yea!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: all done!
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 4 diff made me
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: 1 diff GD
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: so fast owo)
2015-01-11 10:03 HabiHolic: total 5 diff!
2015-01-11 10:03 Ichigaki: teach me ><
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: haha...
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: dl-ing
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: i only can do irc now
2015-01-11 10:04 Ichigaki: can you?
2015-01-11 10:04 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: okay then
2015-01-11 10:05 Ichigaki: lol dl speed so slow :<
2015-01-11 10:05 HabiHolic: lol..
2015-01-11 10:06 HabiHolic: indonesia is internet slow?
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: a bit slow
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: probably
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: my dl speed only 10-40 KBps
2015-01-11 10:06 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: orz...
2015-01-11 10:07 HabiHolic: my dl speed is 3 mb..
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: `-`)
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro]
2015-01-11 10:07 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 10:08 Ichigaki: what diff first?
2015-01-11 10:08 HabiHolic: haha
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Easy
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589693 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Insane]]
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: Insane frist?
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:09 HabiHolic: ok~
2015-01-11 10:09 Ichigaki: 00:04:956 (2,3) - should be ctrl + G, i mean slider first
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: hmm.. i think this flow bad..
2015-01-11 10:10 HabiHolic: so no Fixed..
2015-01-11 10:10 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:06:033 (1,2) - for vocal right?
2015-01-11 10:11 HabiHolic: yea this note flow vocal
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: 00:08:341 (3,4) - slider first
2015-01-11 10:11 Ichigaki: for the rhythm
2015-01-11 10:12 Ichigaki: 00:14:956 (7) - how about remove?
2015-01-11 10:13 HabiHolic: \00:14:956 (7) -
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (2) - better note stacked
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: no... this remove very awkward..
2015-01-11 10:14 HabiHolic: so this sound base
2015-01-11 10:14 Ichigaki: um okay, 
2015-01-11 10:15 HabiHolic: 00:08:341 (3,4) - this  Fixed
2015-01-11 10:16 Ichigaki: 00:25:110 - better add a note here, than move the spinner on 00:25:187 - 
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: o.o? why..?
2015-01-11 10:16 HabiHolic: i think white tick batter..
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: ah okay, i can't explain :<
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: ;w;
2015-01-11 10:17 Ichigaki: 00:42:033 (5) - better not stacked
2015-01-11 10:17 HabiHolic: not stack?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: i mean not stacked with 00:42:341 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: move it along
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2498709
2015-01-11 10:18 HabiHolic: this one?
2015-01-11 10:18 Ichigaki: not like that
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: maybe on x:348 y:92
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: but it's up to you
2015-01-11 10:19 HabiHolic: wait~
2015-01-11 10:19 Ichigaki: 00:48:033 - this part shouldn't an end of slider, you need to make it at least the start of slider or just normal note
2015-01-11 10:20 Ichigaki: *normal circle
2015-01-11 10:21 Ichigaki: 00:51:879 (5,6) - confusing, and unsnapped. 
2015-01-11 10:22 HabiHolic: Fixed!
2015-01-11 10:23 Ichigaki: 00:53:110 (1) - move to x:248 y:192 or stack with 00:52:648 (8) - 
2015-01-11 10:24 Ichigaki: 01:07:418 (7) - ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: 01:07:418 (7) - this no
2015-01-11 10:24 HabiHolic: small jump this
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: huehue
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: 00:53:110 (1) - this Fixed
2015-01-11 10:25 Ichigaki: 01:06:802 (4,5,6) - i can't read this lol, but good anyway
2015-01-11 10:25 HabiHolic: lol...
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: 01:15:110 (9,10,11) - how about ctrl + G?
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: more challenging
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: change is good! but flow is bad.. orz
2015-01-11 10:26 HabiHolic: no Fixed.. sorry
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: no problem
2015-01-11 10:26 Ichigaki: just my opinion
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: anyway the end of song
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: not good
2015-01-11 10:27 Ichigaki: where do you get this song?
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: tI'm this song is full ver cuting
2015-01-11 10:28 HabiHolic: haha..
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: lol
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: then add cut version on tags
2015-01-11 10:28 Ichigaki: anyway, about diff spread
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: gap from normal to hard is high
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: depending from your easy and normal
2015-01-11 10:29 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: okay now go to hard
2015-01-11 10:29 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:31 Ichigaki: 00:15:110 (8) - stack this with 00:15:264 (1) - 
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: hmm... now is not bad..
2015-01-11 10:32 HabiHolic: and change is flow bad.. my think..
2015-01-11 10:32 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:33 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: hmm..
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/577139&m=0#
2015-01-11 10:34 HabiHolic: this map spread normal hard is.. gap...?
2015-01-11 10:34 Ichigaki: ah okay
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: the gap from normal and hard isn't higher than 1.5 at least
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: then it should be find
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: now let's check the Hard
2015-01-11 10:35 Ichigaki: Insane should be fine for me
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: Hello
2015-01-11 10:39 Ichigaki: sorry my osu crashed orz
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: 00:52:495 - http://puu.sh/emhYN/537960433e.png
2015-01-11 10:40 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ㅐㄱㅋ..
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:41 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: what's that?
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: :<
2015-01-11 10:41 Ichigaki: 00:54:033 (7) - kick drum started 00:54:341 - 00:54:495 - 
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: 00:54:264 - 00:54:110 - no drum sound in blue tick
2015-01-11 10:42 Ichigaki: consider it
2015-01-11 10:44 HabiHolic: Fixed
2015-01-11 10:44 Ichigaki: 00:55:418 (1) - compared with your insane, this should be red 'i mean the combo colour'
2015-01-11 10:45 Ichigaki: 01:18:956 (4,1) - confusing, try to move 01:19:264 (1) - somewhere, 
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: 01:19:264 (1) - maybe add a note here, for the drum roll
2015-01-11 10:47 Ichigaki: hard already good lol
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: wow, this is catchy
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: normal ar is 4, and hard is 8
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: too high
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: change normal ar to 5 and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:53 Ichigaki: hello?
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yea?
2015-01-11 10:54 Ichigaki: consider that
2015-01-11 10:54 HabiHolic: yes
2015-01-11 10:55 Ichigaki: already look at all mod?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: yes..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: about ar?
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: my computer is suck..
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: orz..
2015-01-11 10:56 Ichigaki: wwww
2015-01-11 10:56 HabiHolic: Normal AR ahnge 5?
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: change*
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: yes
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: and hard to 7
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: at least
2015-01-11 10:57 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: now normal
2015-01-11 10:57 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590595 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Normal]]
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: yea
2015-01-11 10:58 HabiHolic: i'm now is normal
2015-01-11 10:58 Ichigaki: 00:01:725 (1,2) - blanket?
2015-01-11 10:59 Ichigaki: 00:24:187 (6,7) - don't stack, move the slider
2015-01-11 11:01 HabiHolic: all Fixed~
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:27:879 (4,5) - don't stack too
2015-01-11 11:03 Ichigaki: 00:31:725 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:35:264 (4,5) - 
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 00:57:571 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:01:264 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:04 Ichigaki: 01:08:033 (3,1) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: 01:10:495 (2,3) - ^
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: just avoid stack in middle of pattern, if like 00:58:648 (1,2) - , it's okay
2015-01-11 11:05 Ichigaki: for normal
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: ok
2015-01-11 11:10 HabiHolic: all done..
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: now easy
2015-01-11 11:10 Ichigaki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590593 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Easy]]
2015-01-11 11:11 Ichigaki: 00:23:571 - should add a note here
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: very hader patten
2015-01-11 11:13 HabiHolic: no..
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: no much issue
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: done
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: this song is soo cool
2015-01-11 11:13 Ichigaki: ><
2015-01-11 11:15 Ichigaki: i'll post this :)
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: ok!
2015-01-11 11:18 HabiHolic: update~
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: pls change the offset into 491
2015-01-11 11:19 Ichigaki: i think it's the better one
2015-01-11 11:21 Ichigaki: what do you think?
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: hmm
2015-01-11 11:21 HabiHolic: smaill Fast 491..
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: i used offset analyzer lol
2015-01-11 11:22 Ichigaki: but up to you
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: ok..
2015-01-11 11:23 HabiHolic: later Fixed offset..
thanks for mod! almost Fixed!
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
good luck !!

IRC modding
18:56 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
18:56 HabiHolic: can you my map mod caren?
18:59 caren_sk: !!
18:59 HabiHolic: !!
18:59 caren_sk: im extra mapper,,,cant mod but proposal isane~
18:59 HabiHolic: haha..
18:59 HabiHolic: ok..
19:01 caren_sk: p/3701205
19:01 caren_sk: miss !!
19:01 caren_sk: 00:35:418 (4) -
19:01 caren_sk: hard jump...
19:02 HabiHolic: hmm..
19:02 caren_sk: why 3→4　
19:02 caren_sk: Direction of travel？
19:03 HabiHolic: hmm
19:03 HabiHolic: this is flow batter..
19:03 caren_sk: ok,np
19:04 caren_sk: 01:05:571 (5,6,7) - proposala
19:04 caren_sk: down it
19:04 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508013
19:05 HabiHolic: nice!
19:05 HabiHolic: Fixed!
19:05 caren_sk: not find other proposal!
19:06 caren_sk: 00:30:802 (5) -
19:06 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508021
19:07 caren_sk: hmm...never mind ,i think not better w!!
19:12 HabiHolic: 00:30:802 (5) - i don't like this overlap
19:13 HabiHolic: sorry..
19:15 caren_sk: ok nevermind!
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic

caren_sk wrote:

good luck !!

IRC modding
18:56 *HabiHolic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/589711 AKINO from bless4 - Miiro [Hard]]
18:56 HabiHolic: can you my map mod caren?
18:59 caren_sk: !!
18:59 HabiHolic: !!
18:59 caren_sk: im extra mapper,,,cant mod but proposal isane~
18:59 HabiHolic: haha..
18:59 HabiHolic: ok..
19:01 caren_sk: p/3701205
19:01 caren_sk: miss !!
19:01 caren_sk: 00:35:418 (4) -
19:01 caren_sk: hard jump...
19:02 HabiHolic: hmm..
19:02 caren_sk: why 3→4　
19:02 caren_sk: Direction of travel？
19:03 HabiHolic: hmm
19:03 HabiHolic: this is flow batter..
19:03 caren_sk: ok,np
19:04 caren_sk: 01:05:571 (5,6,7) - proposala
19:04 caren_sk: down it
19:04 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508013
19:05 HabiHolic: nice!
19:05 HabiHolic: Fixed!
19:05 caren_sk: not find other proposal!
19:06 caren_sk: 00:30:802 (5) -
19:06 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2508021
19:07 caren_sk: hmm...never mind ,i think not better w!!
19:12 HabiHolic: 00:30:802 (5) - i don't like this overlap
19:13 HabiHolic: sorry..
19:15 caren_sk: ok nevermind!
Thanks CRN!
Pretty Rhythm
654 posts
Joined February 2012
Pretty Rhythm
포스트 안하면 까먹을거같애서 일단 포스팅만 해둡니다..

모딩은 차후 이포스트 수정하거나 새로 다시쓸게요
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
Modding~

Hard
00:08:341 (2) - 디스턴스를 이구간만 1.1 정도로 하셨는데, 1.3 이상 으로 하는게 좋을 것 같아요
00:23:725 - 이 구간에 노트가 없는데, 뒤에 00:23:879 (1) 를 더 길게 끌거나 노트를 추가해서 약간 바꾸는게 좋을 것 같아요
00:57:725 (7,8) - 곡선의 곡률을 조금 더 크게 하는게 좋을 것 같아요

Hyper
01:05:571 (9,10) - 느낌상 스택하기보다는 낮은 간격으로 다다닥 배치하는게 좋을 것 같아요

Insane
00:21:110 (7) - 컨트롤 + G 순간적으로 간격 넓히지 않고 그냥 쭉 흘러가는게 좋은 것 같아요
01:05:571 (5,6) - Hyper와 같은 이유

00:39:802 (5) - remove this note and set distance
01:12:341 (3) - stack 01:11:879 (1)'s head or http://puu.sh/epBYb/45fc7b848b.jpg
01:30:341 - add finish sound

제가 모딩을 못하기도 하고 이 맵이 잘만들었기도 해서 뭐라 할게 없네요... :D
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia
Hi, here's the modding as your request!

  • General
  1. Check-out the Widescreen like your Insane diff
  2. I recommend the AudioLeadIn - 1600
  3. Consider of adding the 'TV Size' and 'opening' in TAGs plz

  • Easy
  1. 00:02:956 (3) - 머리에 휘슬 넣어주는것도 괜찮아 보이네요
  2. 00:07:264 (1) - 이지난이도는 스핀후에 4비트를 비워줘야한다는 바보같은 룰때문에 이건 지워야할꺼같네요 ㅋㅋ
  3. 00:08:956 - 이쪽에 강한 피니시가 있기때문에 00:10:341 (1) - 여기보다는 00:09:418 (3) - 여기에 뉴콤을 넣는게 나을꺼같아요 (뒤의 01:22:802 (1) - 여기처럼..)
  4. 00:11:879 (2) - 위와 같습니다
  5. 00:12:802 (1) - 슬라가 길기때문에 앞의 슬라처럼 좀 꾸며주는게 덜 지루하고 보기에도 괜찮을꺼같아요 (그리고 담요도 같이 고쳐주세요)
  6. 00:16:495 (1) - 이것도 룰때문에 걸리는 부분인데 스핀을 지우고 좀 찍어넣어주시는게 나아보이네요
  7. 00:18:341 (3) - 피아노 소리에 맞춰서 휘슬 머리로 옮겨주시고 00:18:956 (4,5) - 얘들 머리에도 휘슬 넣어주세요
  8. 00:26:341 (1,2,3,4) - 여기 시간이 너무 길어서 00:30:033 (1,2) - 이부분이 상대적으로 너무 짦게 느껴지는 부분인데 (3)에 뉴콤을 넣고 00:30:033 (1) - 이걸 지우는게 좀 더 나을꺼같아요
  9. 00:34:802 (4) - 여기 콤보가 좀 긴거같은데 이쪽에서 끊어주세요
  10. 00:35:110 - 여기에 휘슬 틱소리 넣어주시고 00:35:418 - 이 꼬리부분의 휘슬은 피니시고 바꿔주세요
  11. 00:35:879 (5) - 클랩을 넣기엔 배경음악에 비해 너무 튀는거같은데 휘슬로 바꿔주는건 어떤가요?
  12. 00:36:187 - 이 파트 볼륨이 좀 큰거같은데 50%정도로 줄여주세요
  13. 00:37:418 (1,2) - 음..얘들 꼬리에 휘슬을 넣어주셨는데 들어보면 머리쪽의 보컬이 더 강하기도 하고 00:39:879 (3,4) - 얘들이랑 휘슬 박자가 좀 안맞게 느껴지기도 하는 부분이에요. 꼬리보다는 머리쪽에 넣어주는게 더 듣기 좋을꺼같네요 (이건 뒤의 00:41:110 (1) - 여기부터의 파트에도 같이 바꿔주세요)
  14. 00:41:110 (1) - 개인적으로 동선이 약간 애매하게 느껴지는 부분인데 이런식으로 만드는게 더 확실한 느낌을 주지 않을까요?
    SPOILER
  15. 00:46:033 (1) - 피니시로 바꿔주세요
  16. 00:46:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 리듬이 단순해서 이렇게 계속 같은방향으로 돌리면 좀 지루한 느낌도 살짝은 있을꺼같네요..뒤에 스피너도 있어서 고치기도 좀 쉬울꺼같은데 변화를 주시는것도 괜찮을꺼같아요
  17. 00:53:110 - 앞에 전부 클랩을 넣어서 그런지 보컬이 지속되는데 여기서 끊어버리니 좀 어색한 감도 없잖아있네요 노트 하나 넣어주는것도 괜찮을듯..
  18. 01:00:495 - 비워두기엔 보컬이 너무 강하게 들리네요..(01:10:341 - 여기도 같습니다)
  19. 01:02:033 (2) - 꼬리쪽에엔 휘슬보다 드럼피니시에 더 가까운거같아요
  20. 01:12:956 (3) - 리듬의 차이가 있긴 하지만 01:03:110 (1) - 여기처럼 뉴콤 넣어주세요
  21. 01:17:418 - 틱 휘슬
  22. 01:18:033 (5) - 노래를 잘 들어보면 머리부분에 휘슬이 아니라 클랩소리가 들릴껍니다!
  23. 01:18:033 (5,1) - 이렇게 찍는게 좀 더 부드러울꺼같네요
    SPOILER
  24. 모든 난이도에 해당하는건데 난이도 끝부분에 소리 줄이는게 나을꺼같아요. 노래가 점점 작아지는데 끝에 소리가 너무 커서..

  • Nmrmal
  1. 하드랑 하이퍼로 나눠놨지만 그래도 비피엠이 높기때문에 노말을 AR5로 올리고 하드를 AR7.5로올리는게 좋아보이네요
  2. 00:06:495 (1) - 노말에는 스핀뒤에 2비트를 비워야해서 언랭요소가 될꺼같네요 ㅋㅋ
  3. 00:08:187 - 틱클랩 넣어주세요
  4. 00:08:648 (4) - DS체크해주세요
  5. 00:08:956 (1) - 꼬리에 휘슬
  6. 00:18:956 (1) - 이것도 DS체크 부탁드려요
  7. 00:22:495 (3,4) - 이렇게 찍는게 더 자연스러운거같네요
    SPOILER
  8. 00:25:110 (1) - 머리에도 휘슬 넣어주시는건..?
  9. 00:27:418 (3) - 1/2 박자들보면 이것처럼 거의 1.3x인것도 있고 00:29:264 (2) - 이것처럼 같은 파트인데 1.0x, 1.1x인것들도 있는데 파트별로 통일시켜주는게 좋을꺼같아요. 개인적으론 1.2가 나을꺼같은데..
  10. 00:28:033 (5,1) - 이렇게 보컬을 따라가는게 더 어울리는거같네요
    SPOILER
  11. 00:36:187 - 이지와 같습니다 (이 파트 조용한 파트인데 뉴콤이 너무 짧은거같아요. 하나씩 지워서 두개를 묶어주는것도 괜찮을꺼같은데,,)
  12. 00:46:033 (1) - 이지와 같습니다
  13. 00:47:879 (1) - 뉴콤 00:48:495 (3) - 이쪽으로 옮겨주세요 (00:50:341 (6,7,1) - 여기처럼..)
  14. 00:50:341 (6) - 꼬리부분 클랩으로 바꿔주세요 (00:47:879 (1) - 여기처럼..)
  15. 01:02:648 (5) - 이지랑 같습니다 (머리부분)
  16. 01:05:110 (4) - 이건 1/1보단 1/2리버스가 더 어울릴듯한 부분이네요
  17. 01:08:033 (3) - 힛사하나 넣어주는게 나을꺼같네요
  18. 01:14:341 (4) - 방향 반대로 해주세요
    SPOILER
  19. 01:20:802 (1) - 이것도 스핀룰때문에 걸리지않을까싶네요
  20. 01:22:033 - 틱클랩 넣어주세요
  21. 01:22:802 (1) - 꼬리에 휘슬

I'll mod other diffs tomorrow! orz
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
HabiHolic
thanks for modding almost Fixed!
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Hey Habi :3


General:
  1. you should remove the widescreen support on all diffs, since you didn't really use it on your map o.o
  2. I really think you forgot to add a soft-sliderslide on your map, i really suggest you to add it
  3. I think the title should be like this "MIIRO" since it the official site has that o.o
  4. How about adding "みいろ" to the tags, this also says "Miiro" , and yeah it's from the official site as well..so yeah o3o/


Easy:
  1. 00:12:495 (2,3) - I think you should fix the blanket between those slider+note, it's kinda off right but i think you should fix it easily :3
  2. 00:18:033 (2) - I think you should remove this note, since i kinda don't hear anything and i don't think it fits here. and it'll make the diff a bit easier imo
  3. 00:21:110 - I think a note here would fit much better, since it'll follow the lyrics in the music
  4. 00:37:418 (1) - I highly suggest you here to remove this nc, since it don't really follows anything in music
  5. 01:16:187 (2,3) - how about switching those notes into 1 1/1 slider instead, i think it might fit better with your style here on this diff o.o


Normal:
  1. 00:01:725 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, i think it'll follow with music pretty nice imo :3
  2. 00:02:956 (2) - ^
  3. 00:04:187 (1) - I don't really think whistle on this spinner really fit, so i highly suggest you to remove it
  4. 00:19:418 (2) - this slider kinda sounds off to me for some reasons, how about doing something like this instead? o.o (this would follow the vocal much better imo)
  5. 00:22:495 (3) - ^
  6. 00:32:495 (4) - how about adding nc here, to follow the vocal change in the music o.o
  7. 00:34:341 (2) - how about moving the last slider's point to x:260 y:220, to give the it better flow for the next slider :3
  8. 00:46:033 (1) - how about adding a finish with that whistle on slider's start, it'll follow the song better. Since there is a finish sound in the music so i think it'll fit o.o
  9. 00:48:495 (1) - ^
  10. 01:08:187 (1) - ^


Hard:
  1. 00:03:418 (2) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, i think it'll follow the piano sound nicely imo :3
  2. 00:04:187 (1) - I really suggest you to remove this whistle from the spinner, since i don't really think it follows any sound in the music.></
  3. 00:15:571 (5) - how about making this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give this slider some fun flow and i really think it'll play even much better imo
  4. 00:23:571 (6,1) - I really suggest you to move those few grids down, since they're a bit too high right now, and they're too close to score line so yeah ></
  5. 00:35:418 (3) - I can hear a clear finish in music on slider's start, how about adding a finish there, I think it might fit o.o
  6. 00:37:418 (3,4,5) - how about adding a whistle to these slider's repeat, it'll follow the piano sound perfectly and it'll sound much better imo
  7. 00:42:341 (3,4) - ^ with same reason above
  8. 00:52:956 (7) - I think you should add a finish to slider's tail, since i can hear it clearly in the music..so yeah i think it might fit here
  9. 00:58:341 (1) - ^ but on slider's start for this one o.o
  10. 01:08:187 (3) - ^
  11. 01:19:571 (2) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, to give some fun flow for this part. I think it might fit
  12. 01:27:571 (5) - finish on slider's tail might follow great here, since i can hear it in the music


Hyper:
  1. 00:05:418 (5) - how about adding a nc here, i think it'll follow the music perfectly o3o
  2. 00:16:033 (4) - I think this note sounds great with clap, how about replacing it with a finish instead. finish would sound much stronger then clap here, that's why o.o
  3. 00:21:418 (1) - I don't think the repeat gives nice flow for this part imo, how about removing the repeat and adding 1 1/2 slider or 2 notes instead. it'll follow much better then
  4. 00:28:802 (9,1) - I really think you should switch the nc here, since the new vocal started at (9) not at (1) imo
  5. 00:34:802 (1) - I really think finish on slider's start would sound great, since i can hear it there ><
  6. 00:37:418 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle to both slider's repeat, i think it'll sound much better with music imo
  7. 00:42:033 (7) - how about making this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give it some flow for the next slider, and i really think it'll be much fun too
  8. 00:48:495 (1) - how about giving the slider's start a finish, since it'll follow great with music here, and it'll fit as well o.o
  9. 00:53:418 (5) - ^
  10. 00:56:648 (3) - I think this slider would flow much better if you give it a ctrl+g, since the flow here is kinda weird right now, so yeah ><
  11. 01:29:110 (1) - I really think you should reduce this by one repeat till it end here 01:29:571 - , it'll follow better with music imo (and don't forget you should add a finish to slider's end if you did that o.o)
  12. 01:29:725 (2) - I think this slider follows anything in the music, how about removing it and add a spinner instead. It'll fit much better imo

Insane:
  1. 00:10:341 (6) - how about adding a nc here, since i think it fits for the jumps you did here o.o
  2. 00:16:033 (4) - same as i said about this on Hyper diff, finish would fit much better here
  3. 00:16:495 - why you did hitsound this part, it sound kinda weird, since you did it on the other diffs, so you should get that check ><
  4. 00:37:418 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle to both slider's repeat, it'll follow great with the music imo
  5. 00:42:341 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:46:033 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, since i can hear it in the music so i think it'll fit imo
  7. 00:46:648 (3) - how about adding a nc here, cus it'll make weird jump without it imo, so i think it'll fit
  8. 00:48:495 (1) - I think finish on slider's start would sound great imo, since i can hear it clearly in the music o.o
  9. 00:52:187 (6) - how about adding a nc here for the jump you did on this part o.o
  10. 00:54:495 (7) - how about replacing this clap with finish instead, clap don't really sound as strong as finish here..so yeah ></
  11. 00:57:110 (5) - how about adding a nc here, it'll fit for the jump you did on this part
  12. 01:04:495 (7,1) - I really think you should switch the nc here, since the new vocal started at (7) not at (1) imo
  13. 01:05:571 (7,1) - ^
  14. 01:07:110 (8) - how about adding a nc here, it'll follow great with music imo, and it'll make a better jump
  15. 01:11:879 (6) - ^ to follow the new vocal in the music and to fix the jump on this part
  16. 01:14:341 (6) - ^
  17. 01:16:802 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, it'll sound much better with the music imo
  18. 01:29:725 (4) - ^ to follow the finish in the music


BL's Insane:
  1. 00:02:956 - I think 20% volume is a bit too low, so i think you should rise it up a bit to 40 or to 35, both would fit better imo
  2. 00:08:648 (5) - I think this slider giving this part a weird flow imo, so how about doing something like this instead o.o
  3. 00:10:341 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start, since it'll follow the music great imo
  4. 00:16:187 (5) - I don't really think this note really follows anything in the music, so i think you should just remove it (if you did that don't forget to add finish to this note 00:16:033 (4) - since i can hear it in the music imo)
  5. 00:16:495 (1) - I think replacing the finish on slider's start with a whistle would sound much better imo, since the finish sounds too strong for this slow relaxing part o.o
  6. 00:18:956 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, to follow the piano in the music o.o
  7. 00:21:418 (1) - ^
  8. 00:31:264 (1) - I think finish on slider's start would sounds good, since i can hear it clearly here
  9. 00:33:725 (1) - ^
  10. 00:37:418 - how about adding green line here with soft default hitsounds, then you should add some whistles for this part o.o (since this part sounds kinda empty right now, and i don't think it fits imo)
  11. 00:37:879 (5) - ^ add whistle to slider's start here
  12. 00:38:648 (1) - ^
  13. 00:39:264 (3) - ^
  14. 00:40:341 (2) - ^
  15. 00:41:418 (2) - ^
  16. 00:41:110 (1) - ^ but at slider's tail this time
  17. 00:41:725 (3) - ^ but for this at slider's start
  18. 00:42:802 (2) - ^
  19. 00:44:187 (3,4) - ^
  20. 00:48:802 (2) - how about making ctrl+g for this slider, to give it a better flow and fun play for it o.o
  21. 00:50:956 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, i can hear in the music, so yeah o3o
  22. 00:54:495 (6) - ^
  23. 01:22:802 (1) - ^
  24. 01:24:956 (5) - I think this slider would flow much better with the music, if you did a ctrl+g for it, since the flow here kinda weird so yeah =3=/
  25. 01:29:418 (1) - how about adding a finish here 01:29:571 - , i can hear it clearly in the music o.o


That's all i can find on this map, good map as always Habi and baka Laurier =w=/ <3

Good luck getting this map ranked :3
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
모딩 늦어서 미안행!!

Easy
  1. 00:02:956 (3) - 저렇게 하는게 더 흐름이 좋아보여.
  2. 00:21:418 (1) - 슬라이더 끝에 휘슬추가. 00:22:341 (2) - 휘슬제거. ( 그 이유는 이전 슬라 두개정도에서 비슷한 리듬이있으니까 일관성을 위해 저렇게 하는게 더 좋아보여서.. )
  3. 00:29:725 (4) - 서클추가 + 클렙추가. ( 00:29:110 (2) - 될수있다면 여기도 추가해주는게 좋다고 봐. )
  4. 00:32:187 (2) - 서클+클렙추가.
  5. 00:33:418 (4) - 위와같음 ( 근데 이거랑 위에꺼는 노말난이도랑 비교해도 괜찮을꺼같아.
  6. 00:42:033 (2) - 위와같음
  7. 01:00:495 (6) - ^
  8. 01:01:725 (2) - ^
  9. 01:04:802 (3) - ^
  10. 01:06:648 (2) - ^ x128 y308
  11. 01:10:341 (8) - ^
  12. 제안이긴 한데 .. 01:19:879 (2) - 여기에 서클하나 추가해주면 어떨까?
난이도 스프레드때문에 서클넣기 좀 그렇다면 안심해도될듯..1.56 > 1.61 ( 노말과의 차이 0.49이상나니까 .. ) 개인적으로 서클추가해주는게 좋을꺼같아.
너무 어색해 지금으로는 ..

Normal
  1. 00:08:187 (4) - 여기 틱레 2로 해서 클렙소리 넣어주는게 더 좋을꺼같아.
  2. 00:11:264 (5) - ^
  3. 00:19:879 (3) - 틱레 3으로 해서 휘슬소리 넣어주면 좋을꺼같아.
  4. 00:22:956 (4) - ^
  5. 00:32:802 (5) - 간격이 좀 큰거같은데 .. 1.32
  6. 00:47:879 (4) - 시작에 00:48:187 (5) - 끝에 휘슬대신 클렙추가. ( 더 좋아보여! )
  7. 00:50:341 (4,5) - ^ 위와 같이 올 클렙

Hard
  1. 01:27:571 (5) - 이걸 지우고 서클하나로 변경.( 하드는 잡을게없어서 ..제안! )
  2. 01:27:725 (1) - 여기서부터 스피너. 01:30:341 (1) - 끝.

Hyper
  1. 00:50:495 (8,9) - 여기 중간에만 클렙들어가있는데 전부 클렙 ㄱㄱ
  2. 01:08:110 (9) - 클렙제거.( 파란선에 클렙이라 좀 .. )

Insane
  1. 00:04:956 (2) - 가리는데다가 다음으로 이어지는 흐름도 안좋은거같아 .. 보이면서 흐름도 좋게 만들어주면 좋을듯!
  2. 00:48:341 (7) - 휘슬 클렙 스왑해줘.
  3. 00:50:495 (2,3) - 여기도 하이퍼처럼 2번 시작에 휘슬대신 클렙넣어주고 3번 서클에도 클렙넣어줘. 그게더 보기좋아. ( 하이퍼에서 이해가 안된다면 이거참고 . )
개인적으로 저렇게 완벽하게 가리면 .. 너무 치기 힘들꺼같아 .. 노트 외워야되는거같고 .. ㅠ_ㅠ.. 바꿔주면 좋을꺼같아.
몇몇 많은 ... 가리는 서클들..

Laurier's Insane
  1. Hi~ Laurier
  2. 00:15:879 (3,4) - Add Clap!!
  3. 00:50:495 (7,8,9) - Some!
  4. 00:51:571 (3) - Slider head ( Whishle > Clap ) Swap
  5. 00:52:187 (1) - Whishle > Clap ( Swap )
  6. 00:52:802 (5) - Some!
  7. 00:52:802 (5) - Some!
  8. 00:53:725 (2) - Slider head ( Whishle > Clap ) Swap
  9. 00:54:341 (4) - Whishle > Clap ( Swap )

Good map!! Star~ :3
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