I hope you read my PM, I'm really sorry again, here is the mod!
[Extra]
00:00:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The overmapping here is strong, and the sliders starts on a blue tick. Obviously you're trying to follow vocals here, so imo you should remove 2 and 6, it will fit the vocals much better and sound much better.
00:02:453 (2) - If you want to follow the vocals properly here (since this whole part is following the vocals), place it on a 1/3 tick (00:02:521)
00:03:480 (5) - NC here instead of 00:03:891 (5) -
00:03:583 (2) - Just like before, delete it.
00:04:199 (1) - NC
00:04:919 (3) - Can be placed on 1/3 tick, like before.
00:05:330 (1) - What about reducing the SV here and making the slider look more interesting?
00:08:309 - Add a note here, why would you skip rhythm on Extra?
00:08:720 - ^
There are a lot like those ^ Please listen to the song at 25% Playback Rate and place a note where needed.00:14:576 (4) - End it on the blue tick and place a note afterwards, it follows the beat and the vocals nicely.
00:16:220 (3,4,5) - If you listen precisely, this part is actually three 1/6 ticks, if you can hitsound this well, this will sound really great:
http://puu.sh/dgYOu/01ca2fc92d.jpg00:24:850 (5,6,1) - Overmapped and doesn't sound that right, there's a strong rhythm inside of the slider and the stream doesn't fit. Same for the next of the same pattern.
00:31:014 (5,6,7) - It doesn't look that well in my opinion.
00:33:686 (3) - You miss vocals and beat in this slider, you can make something more fun to play than that.
00:34:919 (6) - Change it to a circle.. The pattern is unreadable and the end of the slider hits on nor rhythm neither vocal.
00:35:330 (3) - Change it to a stream, you're missing vocals and the slider doesn't play that nice.
00:35:946 (5) - Either follow the vocals by extending the slider by 1/4, or follow the beat correctly.
00:38:412 (1,2,3) - You can either increase or decrease the SV after every slider, it is an Extra, spice things up!
00:40:877 (2) - Change it to a circle, or extend it until the start of the triple, because now it lands on nothing and it feels unnecessary..
00:56:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The flow here is not that nice between the patterns, also make the 2nd pattern look different, it is the same as the 1st and they don't achieve much one next to other.
01:00:193 (3,4,5,6,7) - Where is the flow? Where is the fun? Just random stacked streams, circles and sliders, make it look nicer!
01:03:069 (1,2,3) - Overmapped, it just sounds wrong.. The only fit here imo is 1/1 slider (or 2 circles)
01:27:521 (1) - You should just mute the end of the slider.
Please, just listen to the song on 25% Playback rate and try to follow it more precisely, in terms of vocals and rhythm.
[Insane]
01:03:686 (2,4) - Stack properly.
01:26:083 (1,4) - ^
The diff in terms of patterns and flow is great, but the rhythm following and timing is just like at the other diff, just listen to the song, it will sound much better if you follow it properly, especially on the harder diffs.
[Hard]
00:23:823 (2) - Shorten the slider and move it 1/4 forward, and insert a circle instead of the slider beginning, it will sound much nicer.
00:35:124 (1,3) - Stack properly.
01:09:645 (1,3) - ^
01:12:316 (3,1) - ^
01:14:576 (1,3) - ^
01:17:864 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:330 (3,3) - Blanket better.
The flow and structure is great, but I still have the same opinion
One which I really disliked
00:14:576 (3) - The repeat lands on nothing, either make it a 1/1 slider like at the other diffs, or follow the vocals properly.
I hope it is fine, I can give you a lot of examples for weird stuff that don't fit the rhythm/vocals, if you want them just PM me on the forums on in-game.
Good luck!