Nofool wrote:

Yo', hoping for m4m é_è
It's all suggestion (and sorry for bad english)

[Audio]
I saw that peoples usually change the volum to 80%, but I don't know anything about this rule ;_;

[Oni]
00:09:985 (16,17,18) dKd instead of DKD ? these two finish are not really needed there I think /* d K d would be a bit uncomfy to play so I decided to make all these uniform.
00:15:365 - 00:15:855 maybe follow the piano on this part could’ve been a bit better? like k at 00:15:365 d at 00:15:539 and k at 00:15:855 , without 00:15:692 (5) /*Done something here, I don't want to put many notes here.
00:17:974 - 00:18:463 ^ /*^
00:24:007 (30,31,32,33,34,35) d k d k d k instead of k d d k d k ? fits better with the song to me /*Not really, I find xooxox more fitting there, did dkkdkd instead tho.
00:31:914 add d ? /*Added in 00:32:404, fits better imo.
00:33:137 k instead of d ? /*Done
00:37:050 add k ? it feels like something is missing there or at 00:36:887 /*Added a don instead.
00:38:518 (104,105,106,107) k d k instead of d d k d ? ‘cause it sounds like at 00:15:365 - 00:15:855 /*Given I changed the beginning completely, I'm keeping this for drums
00:44:876 (128) del ? /*The drums are strong enough there D:
Kiai part sounds good, I would’ve done something different but the way you mapped the whole kiai is alright (to me)
01:14:713 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) maybe all these finish are too much x_x /*I'd want to give this kind of a grand finale, so I put these.

[Muzukashii]
00:09:985 (16,17,18) d D d instead of D D D ? /* d D d would be a bit uncomfy to play so I decided to make all these uniform.
00:37:702 add d ? /*Why not.
00:43:735 - 00:44:387 try k k d d k ? I know you wanted a little break there but idk, k k d d k sounds good to me /*I'd prefer the break as it's more fitting in my style.
Kiai good again ;_;
01:14:713 – 01:16:670 as in the Oni ^ /*Same :p

[Futsuu]
00:19:605 add d ? ‘cause this part is a bit too easy/not enough mapped for a futsuu I think /*This part is quite calm so it's better to keep the map calm.
00:21:235 ^ /*^
00:21:724 ^ /*^
00:49:931 (4) remove ? sounds better without (to me), same at 00:52:539 (12) and 00:55:148 (20) and 01:00:365 (5) and 01:02:974 (12) and 01:05:583 (21) /*I have an alternative rhythm here, removing the note will make this part quite easy for the spread.
01:11:942 add d ? /*This would be nice but it'd make things a bit harder, I'll consider this.
01:14:713 - 01:16:670 as in the Oni /*Same :p

[Kantan]
Good diff ;_; nothing important to say
Just maybe I would’ve done something different on the parts like 00:19:931 - 00:21:235 like follow the voice with d d d at 00:19:931 and 00:20:420 and 00:20:909 but it doesn’t really fit with the way you mapped the whole diff /*Beginners tend to not read the spacing properly, so I better stick with simpler and uniform rhythm.
01:14:713 - 01:16:670 as usuall 8D /*Same :p

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

M4M Mod

[Kantan]
Nothing here

[Easy]
This is when I realized this was a Power Rangers song (or like one).

00:07:539 (2) - Add a whistle on the repeat so it stays consistent with the first slider. /*Done

00:11:942 (6) - Could replace with a spinner of the same length to throw in a spinner for newer players to get used to rather than a long, somewhat tedious slider. /*Well, the unstack is on purpose, I didn't like how it looked stacked. And this slider is in all diffs, so it's a nice detail

00:40:800 (1) - Could add a clap on the 1st repeat and the end in order to kind of "build up" to the chorus. /*Claps there sounds a bit bad as the backbeats are in 2nd and 4th beat (claps are commonly better to use there).

01:06:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure if you should go with a starish formation due to the difference in ticks between 1 & 2 and 3,4 and 5. It looks very uneven (not like the normal starish formations where it is purposefully uneven but slightly like a star) /*Well, this is kinda challenging for an Easy due the 3/2 rhythm, so I think this is the shape to make this part more intuitive.

[Normal]
00:11:942 (7) - Could replace with a spinner of the same length to throw in a spinner for more beginner players to get used to rather than a long, somewhat tedious slider. If your keeping it though, I recommend you stack it onto 3 for a more expected position. /*Ditto

00:40:800 (2,3) - Could add claps on the repeats once again for "building up" to the chorus. /*Done

[Futsuu]
00:10:637 (13,15) - Change into Katsu notes, as the 4 Dan (probably got that spelled wrong) notes don't sound as right after a pattern of first all Dan then all Katsu. A pattern of repeating Dan and Katsus will allow for the spinner to be built up to and provide a challenge to the player while still sounding good rather than "ok, so it just goes a full pattern of Dan then Katsu then Dan for the beginning, lel so easy er mer gerd wow i so pro better than rrtyui" /*As all notes here are big notes, alternating between d and k for hitting would be abit hard to handle in this level so I did all of the same color.

[Hard]
00:11:942 (7) - This is like the third copypasta I've made Could replace with a spinner of the same length to throw in a spinner since it would be more expected in a hard diff with a short spinner rather than a long slider. If your keeping it though, I recommend you stack it onto 3 for a more expected position. /*Ditto

00:51:235 (1) - Stack it where 6 is for a more expected position since 6 is still fading at the time. /*This really doesn't affect much as I'm not using stacks anywhere :p

[Harder]
00:11:942 (9) - Quadra Kill! Ok guys now rush bot to get an ace (LoL FTW) Could replace with a spinner of the same length to throw in a spinner since it would be more expected in a hard(er) diff with a short spinner rather than a long slider. If your keeping it though, I recommend you stack it onto 3 for a more expected position. /*Ditto

00:48:300 (2) - Stack onto the previous 2 so it looks nicer and is in a mor expected position, as the other 2 is still fading. /*I wouldn't mind to move it but 00:47:974 (1,2,1) -are forming a perfect triangle

rEdo wrote:

Mod for mod. Also trying to mod Taiko, since I play that from time to time too
[Easy]
I have a slight feeling that this might be a little bit too hard for an Easy, especially because you used a lot of 1/2s. Although, saying that would be way too subjective from me. Wait and see if other people think the same. /*I think it's okay to have a challenging Easy in some ocassions, I have ready other ways to do this if this is an issue :p
­
00:46:018 (3) - Maybe delete one of the reverses and add a 1/2 slider at 00:47:485 so it perfectly matches the vocals? /*I'd want to avoid 1/2 sliders in Easy, they're a pain for newbies.

[Normal]
So neat, so good. Couldn't find anything wrong here. /*yay

[Hard]
00:32:648 (1,2) - No big deal, but they aren't stacked. /*wow such nazi, done
00:38:192 (5,6) - This jump might be quite hard to read, especially because of such low Distance Snap that was used before. Either add a new combo on (6) or decrease the distance between these two notes a little. /*Done
01:16:344 (7) - New combo? /*I don't have it in lower diffs, so better keeping consistency

[Harder]
I guess it would sound much better if you just renamed this to Insane. /*Okay.
­
00:56:452 (1,2,3) - I guess this jump is quite innatural. Consider decreasing the distance between (1,2) and (3) or moving (2) a little bit. /*Moved (1,2) nearer.
01:01:670 (1) - Could be placed a little bit further from (7). /*Aw damn, I don't want to ruin my symmetric pattern, I'll consider it ;w;
01:06:887 (1,2,3) - Same case as before. /*Done that too.
01:16:344 (8) - New combo? /*As in Hard

[Kantan]
00:05:583 (3) - Place it 1/2 earlier perhaps? It shouldn't be too hard to read after all. Same obviously applies to other notes like these. /*Maybe I'm underestimating newbies but an uniform rhythm is more friendly to them, and this diff is aimed to true newbies so I'm keeping this.
00:08:192 (6) - Like above. /*Ditto
00:50:909 (5) - Sounds quite overkill, even though it follows the vocals. Consider deleting this note. /*Oh well, done
00:53:518 (10) - Like above. This applies to 01:01:344 (5)­ and 01:03:952 (10)­ as well. /*Done
00:56:452 (1) - End it 1/1 earlier, so it gives players enough time to read the incoming notes. /*OD is low here so spinners require less hits to clear, newbies likely rush in spinners so unless they tap like turtles they can clear it and have time to see the next notes.
01:06:887 (1) - Like above. /*^ /*Ditto
01:17:159 (1) - 01:19:768 seems like a way better place to end this spinner. Let the players tap some more, this is the last thing they're going to do in this difficulty anyway. /*Done

[Futsuu]
00:49:279 (3) - Delete this note for consistency with 00:59:713­. /*idk what happened there, but done.
00:56:452 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier, reason stated in Kantan. /*As in Kantan
01:09:822 (31) - Replace this d with k perhaps? /*Done
01:17:159 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:768 as well. /*Done

[Muzukashii]
00:33:952 (61) - Either delete this note or add one at 00:39:170 for consistency. /*Done
01:17:159 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:768 as well, too. /*Done

[Oni]
01:17:159 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:768 as well, too, like the others! /*Done


Really nice and smooth mapset you've got there. Good luck!

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hola ._./

Kantan
00:05:909 - Aqui se escucharia bien un Kat y segun el criterio de ranking se puede poner ciertas partes en 1/1, haci que no habria problema. /*Podría hacerlo, pero resultaría en un patron muy similar al que tengo en Futsuu, y quisiera conservar diferentes estas partes.
00:08:518 - Y aqui podrias poner un Don para que convine con ^ /*^
00:15:039 - Aqui un Kat por que estas partes estan muy aburridas, entiendo que es un Kantan pero esto no causaria dificultades. /*Esta parte es demasiado calmada, así que mejor mantener el mapa asi (si te das cuenta el Oni tambien esta muy ligero aqui), puede parecer aburrido, pero es un Kantan después de todo :p
00:17:648 - ^ /*^
00:16:996 - Y aqui por el mismo problema de que esta aburrida esa parte podrisa poner un Don /*^
00:38:844 (18) - Este conviertelo Kat para que continue con el ritmo de d k dk d k /*(17,18) tiene un tono muy distinto a (13,14), así que mejor mantenerlos diferentes :p
01:16:670 (11) - Este lo puedes convertir a don ya que el ritmo quedaria bien si esa parte estaria Dd /*Personalmente siento que los principiantes tienen algo de trabajo con patrones que alternan notas pequeñas con grandes, al igual que quiero hacer sentir mas intenso el final

- Yo lo veo rankeable, solo que tiene esos problemas que te digo de que puede aburrir a los jugadores

Futsuu
00:16:996 - Puedes agrerar un don como dije en lo del Kantan /*Igual que el Kantan
00:56:126 (24) - Elimina este, quedaria un buen ritmo /*Okay
01:03:789 (15) - MMM, creo que este esta de mas, recuerda que menos es mas /*Hay un beat para las percusiones ahi, y mantiene la consistencia con las demás partes
01:06:561 (24) - Lo mismo con este /*Okay

- Esta dificultad tambien la veo rankeable (Con los cambios que te dije)

Muzukashii
Puedes agregar lo diguiente, quedaria muy bien:
00:13:735 - d
00:13:898 - d
00:14:224 - k
00:15:365 - d
00:15:529 - k
00:16:018 (6) - Este muevelo hacia 00:16:181 -
00:16:996 - k
00:17:159 - d
00:18:952 - k
00:19:605 - k
/*^^Al igual que mencione desde el Kantan, quiero mantener esta parte relativamente calmada en comparacion con el resto de la cancion >.<
00:56:126 (146) - Este lo dejo a tu criterio, yo lo eliminaria /*Okay
01:06:561 (38) - ^ /*Okay

- Yo la veo unrankeable, le falta un poco mas de trabajo

Oni
Lo mismo que con el muzukashii solo que mas detallado:
00:13:572 - d
00:13:735 - k
00:13:898 - d
00:14:224 - d
00:15:365 - d
00:15:529 - k
00:17:974 - d
00:18:137 - d
/*^^Igual >.<
00:56:126 (196) - Este lo dejo a tu criterio
00:56:452 (1) - Este spinner es muy largo, yo diria que lo elimines y que pongas esto: /*No elimine este ya que me gusta el efecto que hace junto con las voces, pero aplique algo similar en el Muzu para la parte final, y reduje notas en la misma parte en el Oni
00:56:452 - D
00:57:105 - D
00:57:757 - d
00:58:246 - k
00:58:735 - d
01:17:159 (1) - Igual que el anterior, lo dejo a tu criterio pero yo te recomendaria eliminarlo. /*Este esta bien por las voces :p

-Tecnicamente este oni es unrankeable, e notado que tienes problemas con los muzu y los onis, por eso en mi mapa te pedi Kantan y Futsuu XD, pero bueno, con un poco mas de trabajo lo puedes rankear, yo te recomendaria que no exageres con los ddd. Ahora citare algo que dijo un bat hacerca de los onis:

In general you are allowed to do what ever you want as long as it is fair to the song, but also here: Less is more. Have some spacings to give players a little rest moment or to emphasize certain parts/patterns.

Suerte ._./

Setsurei wrote:

M4M
[General]
hitsounds are too loud, reduce it to 50~60%?
change video resolution? I saw the resolution is not proper 4:3 (640 x 480) or 16:9 (854 x 480) [I can help you to convert if you want] /*I'd be looking for a better source of the video I think, as upscaling/cropping/messing with the resolution would make weird things ;~;
[Easy]
00:17:322 (3) - remove whistle at end of slider or if you want to preserve the whistle, change to soft? /*The whistle helps to emphasizes better this beat imo
01:16:670 (6) - change to 1/1 slider sounds better /*I think a pause fits better there.
[Normal]
00:10:637 (3,4,5,6) - rotate 10 degree clockwise, then adjust them to make (3) stacked with 00:11:942 (7) - (if you follow this suggestion, 00:09:985 (2) - shift the tail to 483 254, to make the DS consistent) /*Not intended to be a stack
00:17:322 (5) - same case as Easy /*As in Easy
00:23:192 (3) - change to 1/1 slider to follow the elec guitar sound /*Used a 3/2 slider to cover the vocals better, as I focused my mapping on them
01:16:670 (7) - change to 1/1 slider /*As in Easy
[Hard]
00:10:637 (3,4,5,6) - better stack? /*As in Normal

SPOILER

00:23:192 (3) - change to 1/1 slider /*As in Normal
01:16:670 (8) - ^ /*As in Easy
[Harder]
00:10:637 (5,6,7,8,9) - stack the (5) and (9) /*As in Normal
01:16:670 (9) - change to 1/1 slider /*I think a pause fits better there.

I think that's all, sorry I can't find much[/color]

smallboat wrote:

Hello,DakeDekaane ! M4M。

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Audio-Leadin are not consistent in every taiko diff,I suggest set " 1500" is proper. /*The Audio Lead-In is different because standard difficulties need it for the video, while the Taiko diffs don't
2.Combo color are not consistent in every taiko diff ,I suggest keep consistent. /*Combo colors don't matter in Taiko
3.Disable the Widescreen Support in "harder" diff since it's not needed. /*Whoops
4.Missed video offset in every taiko diff. [/color]

[Easy]

00:04:931 (2) - Seems the DS have a bit error (~0.10x),fix it? /*The difference is too small imo and the symmetry helps a bit here.
00:27:105 (4) - If the slider end add a finish this here will make good effect (downbeat). /*Added a whistle instead, the finish is too loud, even the soft.

And,the last spinner"s green line 01:19:931 feel no need ,delete it? [color=#0000FF]/*It's needed to end the kiai :p[/color]

[Normal]

00:11:942 (7) - Why not stack 00:10:637 (3) here? Beacust this overlap pattern seems not good pattern. /*Not intended to be a stack
00:14:713 (1) - I feel the downbeat not at the slider end, try to add a finish the head? It is sounds good. /*The beat in the slider end is stronger so adding another finish would sound weird
00:27:594 (6) - Try to add a finish ? It is sounds good. /*It sounds a bit loud for me >.<
00:35:583 (1) - Change it into 1/2 slider will fit the music. /*Okay
01:17:159 (1) - Add a green line 20% volume because the song wiil end here. [/color]

Same reason,you can delete last spinner green line,too.

[Hard]

00:10:637 (3,4,5,6) - All select it,and make (3) stack 00:11:942 (7) head? I think overlap doesn't fit here. Consider fix it? /*As in Normal
00:15:365 (2,3) - You can try this pattern， it looks good : /*The spacing will be broken if I do this o3o[/color]

SPOILER

01:11:615 (1,2,3) - /*Done something here.
01:16:670 (8) - Move here make good pattern? /*I'd want to keep it stacked :p

SPOILER

01:17:159 (1) - Same as the nm diff. /*Same as there

[Harder] Notice:The diff name should be changed "Insane",because this is rank rules. /*I'm sure I changed the name to Insane ages ago, well, anyway, done.
(Btw,Hp -1 ? Seems the HP Drain have a bit high,suggest reduce it.) /*Well, the map has consistent spacing so it's quite easy, the challenge is in other side :p I may change it if more people complains tho.

00:11:942 (9) - Same reason,don"t overlap here? /*Same
00:34:115 (7) - Because the vocal is on here,so I think can set NC here. /*It's still the same phrase so it's okay here.
00:38:192 (9) - This combo have bit long,forgot add NC here? (The vocal is on here) /*Kinda same reason as above
00:42:105 (9) - ^ /*^
00:46:996 (1,2,1,2) - Feel this pattern so crowded,try this pattern? I think it is good : /*Nice one, done.

SPOILER

00:47:974 (1,2) - You can try this pattern， it looks good : /*I'll skip this one, 00:47:974 (1,2,1) are forming a nice triangle.

SPOILER

00:57:431 (5) - Stack it will be make good pattern. /*Did something else here.
00:59:387 (2) - Sound the vocal ,can place a bit far,move to (256|360)? /*It's forming a triangle with 00:59:061 (1,2,3) so I'm not to open to change this spacing.
01:01:996 (2) - ^ /*^
01:16:670 (9) - You can try this pattern， it looks good : /*That'd break my spacing :p

SPOILER

[Other]

Overall are nice!
Good Luck.

Gero wrote:

Yo M4M!

General

1. Tienes unas inconsistencia con el Audio-Leading en las dificultades Taiko. /*El Lead-in es diferente en las dificultades standard por el video.

Easy

1. 00:07:539 (2,2) - Voy a hacer un poco nazi pero que tal copiar este mismo slider y pegarlo en 00:10:148 - para un perfecto apilamiento, eres libre de ignorar esto ya que no afecta al gameplay, solo que tenia la necesidad de mencionarlo. /*Okay, hice algo por aquí.
2. 00:11:942 (6) - Un NC aqui seria ideal por el cambio de ritmo en el fondo de la música, otra cosa nazi pero este slider no luce muy estético, que opinas de hacer algo como esto: /*Es una sola parte todo esto, asi que un NC no es tan necesario, al igual que el slider, siento que queda mejor con las insignias de la serie :p
   
   Que las curvas de cada extremo del slider sean mas suaves en mi mas sincera opinión siento que se ve mucho mejor a como se encuentran actualmente, si requieres del código aquí lo tienes:
   
   

   [HitObjects]
   128,180,11942,2,2,B|116:200|136:248|192:248|224:216|224:216|256:240|256:240|288:216|288:216|320:248|376:248|396:200|384:180,1,360,2|4,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:48:626 (1,2) - No soy muy fan de los stacks en dificultades fáciles ya que con el modo hidden puede causar confusión al jugador no experimentado así que te sugiero remover el stack de ambos circles, esta misma sugerencia a los siguientes patrones que tienen stack. /*Se supone que el modo Hidden es para aumentar la dificultad no? :p

Normal

1. 00:10:637 (3,7) - Nazi* que opinas de apilar ambos entre si? también otra cosa es que hagas lo que mencione en la anterior dificultad acerca de ese slider. /*No tengo la intención de hacer un stack aquí >.<
2. 00:22:376 (2,3) - esto se siente un poco vació realmente y es un poco molesto al jugar la diff, que te parece si para solucionar este problema consideras la adicción de un slider desde 00:22:376 - hasta 00:23:192 - eso encaja muy bien. /*Añadí un slider en otro lado aquí

Hard

1. 00:11:942 (7) - Lo mismo acerca de este slider anteriormente mencionado. /*Igual
2. 00:13:735 (2,3) - estuve pensando un rato sobre este patron y llegue a la conclusión que no fluye del todo bien ya que esta hacia el lado contrario del final del anterior slider, en mi opinión podrías intentar un ritmo parecido a este: /*Okay
   
3. 00:47:974 - esta parte se sienta vacía sin nada que clickear aquí ya que la música todavía sigue en esta parte y simplemente lo ignoraste, te recomiendo agregar un slider 1/1 aqui./*No un slider, pero mas círculos

Harder

Este custom name puede causar mucha confusión ya que es demasiado similar a Hard, es mas conveniente usar otro tipo de nombre para esta dificultad. /*Okay
Remueve el Widescreen Support ya que es innecesario. /*Okay

1. 00:11:942 (9) - ^ lo mismo acerca de este slider. /*Igual
2. 00:16:670 (4) - Spacing. /*Arreglado
3. 00:56:779 (3,5) - Nazi* que tal el apilar estos dos sliders entre si? y realmente se ven muy bien, algo como esto: /*Ya hice algo más ahi.
   
4. 01:04:931 (3,5) - ^ /*Estos si estan apilados o3o
5. 01:00:692 (7) - mueve este slider a X:176 Y:316 inténtalo y veras que esto mismo te ayudara a crear un patrón mucho mas estético y ordenado, no olvides re-acomodar las notas siguientes. /*Mi spacing :C
6. 01:02:811 (6,7) - ^ /*^

Esto es todo de mi parte, buena suerte.

[Yue] wrote:

Hola Dake o3o
M4M /o/

Easy:

1. 00:04:931 (2) - Siento que fluye algo feito :c para mí sería mejor algo así: /*Pero si fluye bien suave y bonito :c
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:539 (2) - ^ /*^
3. 00:25:800 (1,2,3,4) - Siento que esto será un poco difícil para un novato, tal vez mover a (4) un poquito más hacia arriba para que no sea tan confuso. /*Bueno, parece que lo tendré que hacer
4. 00:48:626 (1,2) - Personalmente nunca estoy de acuerdo a hacer esto en una Easy :c tal vez deberías reconsiderar cambiar esto (o algunos por lo menos) y no poner uno encima de otro u.u (va lo mismo para los demás lol) /*Siento que está bien para acentuar las voces, ya que siento que si los desapilo se pierde esa sensacio >.<
5. 00:57:757 (3,4,5) - Repentinamente del ritmo de 1/1 usas el 1/2 y pues, hasta yo creo que fallaría en algo así ;__; mejor hacer estas 3 notas en un slider para que se juegue mejor y no tan difícil ;__; (sobre todo porque luego viene esto 00:59:061 (1,2) - y hace que sea más complicado aún xd) /*Veré que opina la demas gente ahi, intente un slider y no se juega de la manera que quisiera ahi para acentuar las voces ;_;
6. 01:08:192 (3,4,5) - ^ */^
7. 01:15:365 (3,4,5) - Desde pequeño me enseñaron que esto es easy es asdfg ya sabes, creo que hasta tú mismo alguna vez me has hablado sobre esto :c /*hu3hu3hu3h3uhu3hu3 okay, hice algo :c

Normal:

1. 00:09:496 (1,2) - Para no repetir lo mismo de 00:04:279 (1,2) - tal vez deberías moverlo hacia otro lugar (al medio tal vez para que tenga una simetría hermosa <3) /*Nah, siento que la repeticion esta bien ahi
2. 00:10:637 (3) - *Nazi* en caso no hagas lo anterior, podrías colocar a (3) y 00:11:942 (7) - en la misma posición para que se vea más cute (?. /*¿Por qué a nadie le gusta este que no es stack ;_;?
3. 00:23:192 (3) - Nc? /*Misma frase en las voces, no NC
4. 00:57:757 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Aún sigo sintiendo que es un poco difícil D: btw, en el tesplay casi fallé aquí :c tal vez yo sea el noob u.u /*El spacing es consistente asi que eso debe ser suficiente :I

Hard:

1. 01:11:615 (1,2,3,4) - Sólo puedo decir esto que es nazi, siento que es muy recto, tal vez un poco en diagonal sería bueno. /*Hice algo ahi

Insane:

1. 00:34:115 (7) - Nc D:
2. 00:38:192 (9) - y 00:42:105 (9) - ^ /*Estoy basando mis combos en las voces asi que no hay NC >.<
3. 01:16:996 - y 01:17:159 - Siento que aquí podrías colocar un circle y mover el spiner hacia 01:17:322 - , pero algo me dice que no harás esto D: /*Púes ese algo te dice lo correcto, casi no me gusta usar esa tecnica :c

Bueno eso es todo para mí, disculpa por no ser de mucha ayuda ;_;
Buena suerte con el mapa y estrella!

Xinely wrote:

Hi Dake ~

• 
  General

1. 01:19:768 - kiai time end at this time? imo the sensation more comfortable to feel because the cymbal /*Well, the end is quite unnoticeable as there's the spinner, so I'll keep there because I'm lazy and it doesn't hurt :3[_____]

• 
  Easy

1. 00:04:931 (2) - i heard the music on head is similar with tail so add drum whistle too at head? if you want variation, use finish then ~ /*They're a bit different, but the head is not loud enough to deserve a finish, so I'll keep this.
2. 00:07:539 (2) - same as above /*Ditto.
3. 00:11:942 (6) - because the cymbal you need to add finish on head imo. and try NC because the music >< /*Finish applied but not NC, it still belongs there.
4. 00:16:018 (1,2) - try swap the whistle since the piano sound appear at 00:16:018 - ? /*I liked, done.
5. 00:18:626 (1,2) - if you agree with above, do for this one too /*Ditto
6. 00:22:539 (1) - add whistle because the melody of string sound here? /*It's a bit bassy there, so whistle doesn't fit too much there imo
7. 00:29:713 (4) - try curve the slider a little bit upward to make the flow more natural here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1622442 /*Done.
8. 00:32:974 (1) - i guess no hard/strong music at slider's tail so i would rather say remove finish here. if you follow pitch of vocal i would say i prefer to remove too since the next vocal stonger /*Well, I'd want to emphasize that beat for vocals, so I'll keep.
9. 00:36:235 (2) - clap sounds weird here imo. try addition drum at head and keep the clap :3 /*Agreed, but put a drum whistle instead, put a drum clap somewhere here tho
10. 00:46:018 (3,4) - personally i don't like slider repeats on Easy because sometimes can make confuse to newbie so try separate it into 2 sliders and try arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1622451 /*Okay.
11. 00:57:757 (3,4,5) - i highly suggest to change this into slider. a space like this usually make confuse for newbie. also for newbie who want try to use HD too /*But it fits with the song and spacing should be good enough to mark a rhythm change, a slider doesn't play the same, let me keep it please ;_;
12. 01:04:279 (1,2,3) - fix the blanket. i guess this is a mistake. slider 193,58 /*Not a mistake, I put there so this stack doesn't overlap 01:04:931 (3) while playing :p
13. 01:08:192 (3,4,5) - same as 00:57:757 (3,4,5) - /*Ditto
14. 01:12:105 (1) - add finish because the cymbal? /*Not loud enough to have a finish imo.
15. 01:17:159 (1) - personally i prefer to start spinner at 01:17:322 - because the cymbal sound /*Okay

• 
  Normal

1. 00:05:746 (4,5) - personally since your is really Easy, i would say to change it easier too with 1/2 slider /*Not too Easy as it has lots of stacks in 1/1 and 1/2, spread is a bit closed, but it works.
2. 00:08:355 (4,5) - if you agree with above, do for this too /*Ditto
3. 00:11:942 (7) - same as Easy /*Ditto
4. 00:23:681 - imo the finish is too loud here. try 40% or 45% /*Used 55% from previous section.
5. 00:32:811 (2) - on slider tail, same as Easy on 00:32:974 (1) - /*Ditto
6. 00:36:235 (2) - same as Easy too /*Ditto
7. 00:46:018 (1,2,3,4) - how about use 1,0x spacing at all? it would be better to keep consistency of spacing here :3 /*Okay.
8. 00:54:985 (4,5,6) - hmm actually flow a little bit weird to going up and up here. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1622499 instead? if yes don't forget to fix spacing after these notes /*Did something here.
9. 01:04:931 (3,5) - if you to do more variation of flow, you can make curve sliders here like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1622508 /*I'd like to keep a straight flow here :p
10. 01:12:105 (2) - 29,157 for natural flow. i guess no need reason here :3 /*It is being blanketed by the wave slider and it forms a parallel pattern
11. 01:12:105 (2) - same as Easy /*Ditto
12. 01:17:159 (1) - same as Easy too /*Ditto

• 
  Hard

1. 00:53:844 (1,3) - avoid the overlap(most) here please for neater pattern /*Oops, done
2. 01:03:300 (7) - ctrl+G for better flow.. i feel it at my mouse >< /*I really wonder what happened there, fixed.
   [*[01:17:159 (1) - Same as Easy /*Ditto
3. Reply all hitsounds that you've fix at Easy and Normal to Hard diff /*The same as there.
4. Just will say nice design that you have here /*Thanks :3

• 
  Insane

1. 00:34:115 (7) - you need to NC this imo since the music changed and combo feel too long. consistency better ww /*Okay here
2. 00:38:192 (9) - ^ /*Same phrase in vocals, I rather keep it in a single combo.
3. 00:42:105 (9) - ^ /*Ditto
4. 01:08:355 (6) - ^ /*Ditto
5. 01:17:159 (1) - same as Easy /*Ditto
6. Reply all hitsounds that you've fix at Easy and Normal to Hard diff /*The same as there.

I guess this map is well made with the unique of Dake's mapping style ~ /* >w<

Good Luck