1. Easy (0.97 stars, 87 notes)
2. Normal (2.69 stars, 134 notes)

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No_Gu
Zero__wind
Jekate
zorefire
-Asagi
yurunneram
wa_
RandomEffect
Avishay
Awaken
Wafu (thanks for mp3!)
Azmato
lZenxl
neonat
ayaka2000
CXu
Irreversible

No_Gu wrote:

M4M

[General]
offset + 10 maybe Hmm. I was contemplating either 530 or 540. Maybe ill change if someone else says

[Wish]
00:14:432 (3) - add whistle Sure
00:16:627 (5) - ^ in the head ^
00:32:725 (1) - remove this NC? I'll leave it as is
00:45:530 (2) - add whistle Sure
00:51:017 (1) - clap on head How did i forget? O_O
01:08:578 (3) - 2nd nod - 2 grid down.the last nod - 1 grid right Sure

[Hope]
00:18:090 (1,3) - add whistle on head Sure
00:41:505 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:48:456 (2,2) - try change the head to normal sampleset to follow the base drum,it sounds really nice I'll try it out
00:52:491 (4) - ^in the tail,you can hear the kiai time clearly to sound out base drums if you want to follow this ^
01:14:808 (2) - clap in the tail How did i forget?!

hmm..generally speaking,this map's arragement is neat,which is I liked.but you should add more whistle to follow the music,your whistles are too shin.about the playing time,I think 2min is enough...cuz the map isn't very hard and the song is so slow,many players may get bored if they play 3 mins

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, mod from popner's modding team

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

Gerneral
Change your diff names to Normal and Hard, it's hard to tell which would be the harder diff according to your current diff names
Cut your song to a suitable length. it won't be rankable if the last note of a map is before the 80% length point of the song. I agree with No_Gu that you don't need to map till the end of this original song, the current length is appropriate. if you need to, I could help you deal with the mp3 file Changing names is unrankable? O_O I usually see it with other maps... And fixed mp3.

Hope
00:06:383 (1) - why no whistle on head? I think it should be just the same as 00:00:530 - and 00:03:456 - . and you missed many other ones, like 00:09:310 - and 00:32:725 - , plz check them all by yourself
00:07:847 (4) - according to the piano, points like this are also suitable for a whistle sound
00:13:700 (3) - may CTRL+G for more natural flow? I currently feel a bit weird to move from 00:12:237 (1,2) - to 00:13:700 (3) - cause the direction of 1 is somehow making me wanna go downwards from 2, but your current 3 is higher above
00:37:847 - high-pitch piano notes are really calling for whitles
00:50:286 (2) - try to split this into a 1/2 slider and a circle to match with the drums better, it won't be too hard or anything. remember to add normal sound for the drum beat, just like 00:48:456 -
00:51:383 (3) - and this slider is quite unreasonable, I don't know what it follows, I think you should try a rhythm like the pic below to follow the drums correctly

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00:54:310 (2) - also missing normal-hitnormal sound, plz fix other points on your own, like 00:56:139 - and so
00:56:871 (6) - this is quite the same as 00:51:017 - , plz use a circle at 00:56:871 - and start a slider from 00:57:054 - to catch the drum
01:19:554 (4) - I'm afraid this slider runs out of the playfield, plz avoid this
01:29:798 (1) - better remove this NC for consistency, the NC usage here is too frequent comparing to other parts

overall fine, most problem is about hitsounding, you need a lot more whistles, and also normal sounds for the drums during kiai

I believe I got most of the hitsounding right and your suggestions.

Wish
OD2 or 3 for this diff plz, 1 is way too low for a Normal. and also you'd better use CS3 here considering it's the lowest diff
hitsound stuff is quite the same as that in Hope diff, plz decorate your map better with more whistles and propper normal sound during kiai
00:32:725 (1) - I think this NC is kinda unneccessary, according to your previous NC usage
01:39:310 (1) - ^
01:52:115 (1) - ^
01:58:700 (1) - ^
good arrangement for this diff

Fixed most hitsounds and NC things.

That's all
Good luck

1. what i found BPM: 82 Ofset: 540 or you can ask an expert on timing, don't forget to re-snap all the notes if you follow that
2. do you intend mapped the song untill the end? if not, maybe you can cut the song end at 02:00:640 - sorry i don't know how to cut an mp3
3. to give more variation on hitsound, you will need custom soft-hitfinish here: http://puu.sh/5WUAQ.zip
4. regarding to the new rule about naming a diff, you can read here: t/169960/start=0 I sugest you to change the diff name into [Easy] and [Normal] OR [Normal] and [Hard], my personal opinion is Normal and Hard that's the best based on your map now
5. raise all volume 10%
6. i sugest you to use Normal Sampleset on both of kiai time to give more impact, rather than use Soft Sample set on kiai time and add green inherited point here 01:37:125 - to add Soft Sampleset, for detail you can see this pict:
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1. AR+2 OD+2 HP+1 i hope that will raise the star rating, and change this diff into normal
2. since it was the easiest diff you should consistence follow Distance Spacing (currently 1.40) i sugest 1.50 or 1.60
3. 00:02:735 (3) - Add whistle on slider head
4. 00:12:247 (1,2) - 00:23:954 (1,2) - doesn't fit the song imo, maybe you can ctrl+G them or follow this rhythm instead
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5. 00:27:247 (4) - delete maybe? and add repeat on this slider instead 00:26:149 (3) - it fit the song
6. 00:36:759 - add a circle
7. 00:39:686 (4) - make it a 1/2 slider like this one
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   it fit the piano sound and add a circle at 00:40:783 -
8. 00:58:344 (2) - add finish on the slider tail
9. 00:58:344 (2) - add finish on the slider head
10. 01:40:418 (4) - delete maybe? and place a 1/2 slider at 01:41:149 -
11. 01:52:125 (3) - delete maybe? and place a 1/2 slider at 01:52:857 -

1. AR+1 OD+1 CS+1
2. 00:16:637 (4) - add whistle on head
3. 00:20:296 (4) - add whistle on tail
4. 00:44:442 (1) - add whistle on head
5. 01:51:759 (1) - add whistle on tail
6. 00:41:515 (1,2,3,4,1) - i love this part

Jekate wrote:

hello M4M~

[General]

1. what i found BPM: 82 Ofset: 540 or you can ask an expert on timing, don't forget to re-snap all the notes if you follow that
2. do you intend mapped the song untill the end? if not, maybe you can cut the song end at 02:00:640 - sorry i don't know how to cut an mp3
3. to give more variation on hitsound, you will need custom soft-hitfinish here: http://puu.sh/5WUAQ.zip
4. regarding to the new rule about naming a diff, you can read here: t/169960/start=0 I sugest you to change the diff name into [Easy] and [Normal] OR [Normal] and [Hard], my personal opinion is Normal and Hard that's the best based on your map now
5. raise all volume 10%
6. i sugest you to use Normal Sampleset on both of kiai time to give more impact, rather than use Soft Sample set on kiai time and add green inherited point here 01:37:125 - to add Soft Sampleset, for detail you can see this pict:
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[Wish]

1. AR+2 OD+2 HP+1 i hope that will raise the star rating, and change this diff into normal
2. since it was the easiest diff you should consistence follow Distance Spacing (currently 1.40) i sugest 1.50 or 1.60
3. 00:02:735 (3) - Add whistle on slider head
4. 00:12:247 (1,2) - 00:23:954 (1,2) - doesn't fit the song imo, maybe you can ctrl+G them or follow this rhythm instead
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5. 00:27:247 (4) - delete maybe? and add repeat on this slider instead 00:26:149 (3) - it fit the song
6. 00:36:759 - add a circle
7. 00:39:686 (4) - make it a 1/2 slider like this one
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   it fit the piano sound and add a circle at 00:40:783 -
8. 00:58:344 (2) - add finish on the slider tail
9. 00:58:344 (2) - add finish on the slider head
10. 01:40:418 (4) - delete maybe? and place a 1/2 slider at 01:41:149 -
11. 01:52:125 (3) - delete maybe? and place a 1/2 slider at 01:52:857 -

[Hope]

1. AR+1 OD+1 CS+1
2. 00:16:637 (4) - add whistle on head
3. 00:20:296 (4) - add whistle on tail
4. 00:44:442 (1) - add whistle on head
5. 01:51:759 (1) - add whistle on tail
6. 00:41:515 (1,2,3,4,1) - i love this part

i'm sure this diff is a Hard diff since there are some jumps and be more consistent on hitsound since the song repeated

that's all, good song actually and i love it
good luck, if you need help you can talk with me

honestly i want make a guest diff of this map, another Hard diff maybe but it's up to you~

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Easy]

Dang that's perfect no further mods in my opinion.
[Normal]
00:02:835 (4,1) - Try to make a blanket out of that if that was intended to be a blanket then spruce it up. Well, i made the big slider blanket the small slider a little better, so im hoping thats what you meant.
Well that's it really further mods in aren't necessary if I say so myself. Gluck ranking Thanks

-Asagi wrote:

Hello :3
From My Queue

[Normal]

• 
  Ill recommend you to use grid level 4, so the spacing is more precise, then try to check all the spacing, some of them are not consistent because of the grid level Ill try it

1. 00:00:640 (1,2) - blanket this better Sure.
2. 00:03:932 (1) - remove NC then NC here 00:02:835 (4) - Ill remove NC but not add one for more consistency to my easy diff.
3. 00:02:835 (4,1) - blanket MAde it better.
4. 00:06:493 (1,2) - blanket ^
5. 00:07:225 (2,3,4) - make this a perfect triangle ^
6. 00:39:054 (4) - NC I chose not to for my consistency with my easy diff
7. 00:50:030 (1) - remove NC then NC here 00:50:396 (2) - Ok
8. 01:28:444 (1,2) - blanket
9. 01:29:908 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:37:225 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:46:737 (2,4) - ^

Made the blankets a little better.

[Easy]

1. Nicely done, no problem here compare to Normal

Tys

Good luck on this map :3

yurunneram wrote:

Wow an easy-normal map. Haven't seen this in a long time

STORYBOARD

Whoah I'd love to be that guy. Getting my head buried in some girl's chest for two whole minutes desu @@ LOL. I would too.

Regarding all those shooting stars I actually found them awkward >.> Since they were moving so fast and the song was so slow. Maybe rain would've been more appropriate desu. (ofc ya must've spent so much time on them ><") Honestly i thought shooting stars were pretty fast, so thats why.

EASY

Up circle size since it's ur easiest diff desu This was intentional since i only have 2 diffs AND they're pretty slow.

00:34:298 (2) - Move to x88 y240 better flow desu Yesh.

Nothing much

NORMAL

00:01:737 (2,3) - Bad for flow This i might change if someone takes note of it also, but I like how its placed. Pretty much thought about it during the beginning

Uh....

I'm not really gonna call this a mod desu >.> Um................. I wouldn't want to get kudos for this actually so I'll give ya a star instead :3 there. Have a nice day desu ^^)/ Don't worry, i gotchu. Kudos to you anyway. Thanks! :3

wa_ wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue~

[Easy]
00:45:274 (1,2) - Maybe replace it with 1/2 slider with reverse? Should be easier. I'll leave it, players will easily understand this.
01:10:883 (1) - Try to reverse this slider to make better flow. (remember to keep spacing) Ehhh, I'll leave it. It looks awkward for me
01:29:908 (1) - New combo is not needed at this note. New tone of the music, leaving it.
01:57:713 (4,1) - I think pattern like this would be better: Nice idea, I'll try it.

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[Normal]
00:00:640 (1,2) - Try to make better blanket (just move a bit slider's last point) Looks good already O_O, I don't think i can blanket it any more.
00:02:835 (4,5,6) - What about pattern like this, should better flow and easier spacing (between (5) and (6). Also, add at (4) NC? I kind of like mine better, but I'll think about it.

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01:14:908 (2) - Change shape to basic wave, You did it good in Easy diff. Wasn't supposed to be a wave.
01:21:859 (5) - I suggest You to move this circle to ~(168,64) for better transition. The long slider was supposed to blanket this circle, but I changed it to someplace else.
01:40:518 (1) - Make better blanket with previous slider's tail. Done.

Short mod, but map is pretty good Thanks ^^
(・ω・)彡☆

1. Airtist: 忍
2. tags suggetion:
   CROSSNET
   FAVORITE
   soundtrack
3. why do you add BG in SB? due to this, start of playing is so confusing (displayed "skip")
   if you intend to adjust starting time, you should add AudioLead-in (1000~2000)

1. 01:06:127- remove normalhitsound and add it at 01:06:493

1. 00:03:566- remove whistle?
2. 00:20:396 (4,1,2,3,4) - a little awkward. how about this?
   
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   320,312,20396,2,0,P|288:312|248:304,2,65,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   410,348,21493,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   473,273,21859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   421,191,22225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   326,214,22591,1,2,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:21:127- whistile
4. 00:44:542- ^
5. 01:29:542 (2) - remove normalhitsond and add it at 01:29:908
6. 01:48:200- remove whistle and add it at 01:47:469

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. Airtist: 忍 Yes
2. tags suggetion:
   CROSSNET
   FAVORITE
   soundtrack Using soundtrack.
3. why do you add BG in SB? due to this, start of playing is so confusing (displayed "skip") Pretty much for my SB, didn't know what to name it.
   if you intend to adjust starting time, you should add AudioLead-in (1000~2000)

Don't really know how ;w;
[Easy]

1. 01:06:127- remove normalhitsound and add it at 01:06:493

Basically i added the hitsound there because of the drumlike sound in the background, leaving it.
[Normal]

1. 00:03:566- remove whistle? Same as above, the melody is higher here.
2. 00:20:396 (4,1,2,3,4) - a little awkward. how about this?
   
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   320,312,20396,2,0,P|288:312|248:304,2,65,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   410,348,21493,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   473,273,21859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   421,191,22225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   326,214,22591,1,2,0:0:0:0:

   I hope i added it? xD...? I think i did.
3. 00:21:127- whistile Added.
4. 00:44:542- ^ ^
5. 01:29:542 (2) - remove normalhitsond and add it at 01:29:908 i added the hitsound there because of the drumlike sound in the background
6. 01:48:200- remove whistle and add it at 01:47:469

Same as above, but with melody

beautifur SB~ Thanks
~Good Luck~

• 
  [General]

1. Hello. o3o

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:24:054 (1,2) - blanket well.
2. 00:43:079 (3) - I advise u to use two 1/1 sliders, there are some piano sound and u will ignore them if you use this.
3. 00:53:322 (1) - move to (189,154)? The triangle looks better.
4. 01:19:664 (3,4) - blanket well.
5. 01:55:884 (2) - too far from (3).

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  [Normal]

1. 00:52:957 (5,1) - Actually symmetry is better.
2. 01:58:810 (2) - ctrl+g and move to (408,259)?