1. Lv.17 - 7Key (4.24 stars, 722 notes)
2. Lv.26 - 7Key (5 stars, 996 notes)
3. Lv.8 - 7Key (2.17 stars, 364 notes)

- R u m i a - wrote:

[LV10]
00:01:310 (1310|6) - move here 00:01:392
00:02:703 (2703|6) - remove this for this diff it should be easier
too much long notes make it hard for beginners- suggest remap this diff
[LV 17]
intro again http://puu.sh/3V1k8.jpg
00:06:966 - add -X
00:09:261 (9261|2) - follow the tom sounds instead of vocals
00:14:507 (14507|1) - move here 00:14:343 at 5th
00:15:654 - add
00:16:310 - add
00:21:064 (21064|1,21146|2,21228|3,21310|4,21392|5,21720|2,21802|3,21884|4,21966|5,22048|6) - check the LV 24 - mod
00:25:490 (25490|2,25572|3,25654|4,25736|5) - ^
00:28:113 - add at 7th
00:28:441 - ^
00:32:785 (32785|5,32949|3,33113|3) - remove
00:46:146 (46146|4,46146|3,46146|2,46146|6,46146|5,46474|1,46474|4,46474|2,46474|3,46474|5) - reduce some note lol 5 notes is too dense
00:48:769 (48769|1,48769|5,48769|6,48769|3,48769|4,49097|5,49097|4,49097|0,49097|2,49097|3) - ^
01:21:064 (81064|2,81064|4,81392|4,81392|2,81720|4,81720|2,82048|4,82048|2) - move to 4th
01:22:211 (82211|3) - remove
[LV 24]
Intro offbeat
use 1/8
00:10:900 (10900|4,10982|5,11064|6,11146|5,11228|4,11310|5,11392|6) -
should be like this http://puu.sh/3V1k8.jpg
00:17:621 till 00:17:949 put the drum stream note can be fun
00:19:834 - add
00:21:310 (21310|4,21966|5) - remove
00:21:884 (21884|4) - ^
00:21:392 (21392|5) - move to 5th collumn at 00:21:310
00:22:048 (22048|6) - move at 00:21:884
00:21:802 (21802|3) - move at 5th collumn
00:25:572 (25572|3,25654|4,25736|5) - remove these
00:25:490 - add more
00:28:113 (28113|4,28113|3) - move at collumn 2 and 3"
00:28:441 - add at 7th
00:32:785 (32785|5) - remove
00:32:949 (32949|3) - move to 00:32:867
00:35:326 - add
00:37:621 (37621|5) - remove
00:37:621 (37621|5) - move at 00:38:277
00:38:113 (38113|6) - move at 6th
00:38:277 (38277|6,38277|0) - move at 00:38:441
00:38:605 (38605|0,38605|6) - move to pink lane (2nd and 6th)
00:48:769 (48769|3,48769|5) - remove
00:49:097 (49097|5) - move here 00:48:933
00:49:097 (49097|4) - move here 00:49:015
00:49:261 - add
00:49:343 - add
put double note like 00:49:916 (49916|4,49916|2) - at 00:50:080 , 00:50:572
00:50:244 (50244|3,50736|4) - add 1 more
00:51:064 (51064|4) - move to 3rd
00:51:228 (51228|2) - move to 2nd
00:51:228 (51228|4) - to 5th
should be 1/4 stream lol - suggested pattern - http://puu.sh/3V145.jpg
00:53:359 (53359|4,53523|4) - move to 4th
00:53:359 (53359|2,53523|2) - remove
01:04:711 (64711|1,64752|2,64793|3,64834|6,64875|5,64916|4,64957|3,64998|0,65039|1,65080|2,65121|3) - should be 1/4 drum stream
- X This way might be better If I changed to drum stream, it looks empty.
01:14:998 -(74998|0,75039|1,75080|2,75121|3,75162|5,75203|6,75244|0,75285|1,75326|2,75367|4,75408|5,75449|6,75490|0,75531|1,75572|3,75613|4) - should be 1/4 drum stream - X ^
01:05:244 (65244|2) - move at 2nd collumn , at 01:05:326
01:05:408 (65408|2,65736|3,65900|3) - remove
01:15:818 (75818|3,75982|4,76146|6,76474|3,76638|5,76802|4) - make doubles on these note ( add 1 more)
01:17:785 - add
01:18:113 - add
01:21:228 (81228|5,81228|6,81228|3,81556|5,81556|6,81556|3,81884|5,81884|6,81884|3) - boring if this keep repeats , why dont you follow this pattern? 01:20:900 (80900|4,80900|2,80900|0) -

01:05:572 (65572|3) - move at 01:05:654
01:13:277 (73277|5,73277|1,73605|5,73605|1,73933|5,73933|1) - these note dont match music - suggest remove

Just some extra guides ^^ hope it would be useful for your mapping development

cuz i see you are such a potential mapper
here are guides to make stream notes
1st : Drum stream
if the stream repeats the snare, it should always stream 2 collumn only but only in 1/2 measure like this
http://puu.sh/3V1Ap.jpg
- if the drum consists of tom and snare it can describe the pattern as like this
http://puu.sh/3V1CM.jpg or http://puu.sh/3V1Df.jpg
2nd piano streams
its actuallly free but to make them fun to play~
as the pitch go up~ it moves to the right ~ from 1~7
if the pitch go down it moves to the left ~ from 7 -1
and you should count the number of piano sound presents in every 1/4 measure

comments -
- all diff has many similar parts to lv 24 one , juz repattern it to make it look like it is freshly
- imitating same difficulties shows your laziness in mapping and break the originality ,but you are a great mapper
-I'm expecting more from you( you can do it better tho ~ )
have a good day , good luck on ranking this ^^,v

__M A S__ wrote:

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richardfeder wrote:

Just passing by
And I love this song XD

SPOILER

Just a little suggestion~
0|1|2|3|4|5|6
Lv 8 - O
nothing here, but I think it is some what unfriendly to beginner, for example from 00:19:261 - to 00:20:572 - is just too hard for them, also things like 00:33:031 (33031|1,33687|2,33687|3,33687|0) - and 00:46:146 (46146|6,46146|5,46146|4,46146|2,46474|1,46474|3,46474|5,46474|4) - I never consider them as wrong since they are all reasonable, but instead maybe you can make something like Lv.5 that suits beginner better XD Also highly recommend delete all speed change in the easiest diff

Lv.17
00:02:048 (2048|3,2048|5) - only human voice, not piano...maybe single note is enough? I am not sure about this cause I not fully understand those two note XD - fixed - O

00:07:457 (7457|1,7457|0) - at least move one of them to right hand to make it handy. Pressing three on your left while having noting to do on the right are annoying - O

00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5,23318|6) - confusing... I only hear one concentrated sound so maybe stair is not proper - O

00:38:277 (38277|6,38277|5,38277|1,38277|0) - disperse those notes. Move them to 0246 and add drums 00:38:441 (38441|5,38441|1) - -X

imo original case is better.

00:43:605 (43605|5) - delete no sound here and make 00:43:523 (43523|6) - double notes(just resemble 00:43:031 (43031|0,43031|2,43195|6,43195|4,43359|0,43359|2) - ) so that here won't be so strange - O

00:52:048 (52048|0,52048|6) - start at 00:51:884 - -X because this LN is not a vocal

00:59:752 (59752|0) - delete. Nothing there - X there's sound exists and balance...

01:01:064 (61064|2,61064|5) - ^ - ^

01:02:375 (62375|1,62375|4) - ^ - ^

01:02:703 (62703|0) - add a note or two - X because of balance

01:10:244 (70244|4) - delete - ^

start from 01:05:162 (65162|3) - I add it little sense. If I delete little, there are looks so empty and bored, so I little overnote them. but it's a correct beat.
seems here drums are not continuously hitting...maybe too many places are just notes serving for a feeling of "filling in"? Recommend recheck every note if it is corresponding to a sound that could be heard

01:15:080 (75080|1) - delete and make 01:14:998 (74998|0) - double notes - O

01:20:080 (80080|5) - add - not a piano, it's drum beat. it's not a Insane diff xD

01:20:408 (80408|5) - ^ - ^

01:24:343 (84343|5,84343|3) - ^ -^

Lv.24
00:10:900 (10900|3) - those are overmap? - Pianos.

00:17:703 (17703|5,17785|1,17867|5) - ^ - those are drum stream. little overnote?

00:33:113 (33113|2) - delete - Insane, little overnote

00:36:064 (36064|3,36146|4,36228|5) - overmap - I heard there are little sounds exists.

00:21:966 (21966|6) - prolong to red line - O

00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5,23318|6) - same as Lv 17 - Piano http://puu.sh/4vGyo.png

seems some overmap in the climax of the song...and I cannot manage there

Good luck!

Reikosaka wrote:

[General]
its not good idea if you set volume to 0%

[Lv.8]
00:00:982 (982|1) - end hold note to this -> 00:01:392 - -hmm.. I am following Roxas's mod
00:20:080 (20080|1) - move to 2
00:20:408 (20408|5) - move to 4 - following Roxas's mod..
00:22:539 (22539|0,22703|6) - delete -no changes
00:34:998 (34998|3,35490|4,35982|5,36310|1,36310|6,36310|3) - i notice you following piano , nice
00:38:277 (38277|4) - delete - other way (strong beat)
00:54:015 (54015|6,54179|0) - delete -no changes.
01:02:539 - maybe you like this pattern http://puu.sh/4M4w8.jpg -sorry, easy diff and same drums.

[Lv.17]
00:22:539 (22539|0,22703|6) - delete - other way
00:27:949 (27949|0) - delete this and place a note 00:27:949 - 00:28:113 - 00:28:277 - place all to 1st column <- do this for all difficult -no changes
00:45:490 - follow the drums note , like above. do this to all difficult (Example : http://puu.sh/4M5bm.png) -no changes (hard to hit)
00:48:933 - need a stream 1/4 note - it's a hard diff, no changes.

[Lv.24]
00:27:949 (27949|4,27949|3,28113|1,28113|2,28277|4,28277|3,28441|1,28441|2) - Applying this to lv.17 will be perfect and also can use to following drum. -other way
00:44:998 (44998|0,44998|1,45162|1,45162|0,45326|0,45326|1) - delete -no changes
00:47:621 (47621|1,47621|0) - ^ -no changes

i know this not helping full. but this all can i do

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hello 17VA
here's my mod, you can accept or ignore my mods as you wish.

Lv.8
* 00:38:113(38113|6) - move to 4th column or 6th column -hmm.. piano? no fixed
* 00:49:425(49425|0,49425|1) - move to 2nd column and 3rd column - okay.
* 01:24:507(84507|3) - move to 3rd column - hum.. make it symmetry... no fixed

Lv.17
* 00:32:048(32048|2) - move to 3rd column -okay
* 00:33:031(33031|3) - move to 4th column -X
* 00:38:277(38277|1,38277|5) - move to 3rd and 5th column -make it symmetry... no fixed
* 00:47:457(47457|4) - move to 6th column - okay
* 00:47:457(47457|2) - add circle - okay
* 00:47:621(47621|6) - delete circle -okay
* 00:49:588(49588|3,49588|5) - move to 5th column and 7th column -X
* 00:58:113(58113|1) - move to 3rd column - okay
* 01:16:638(76638|3) - move to 5th column - okay
* 01:16:802(76802|4) - move to 6th column - okay

Lv.24
* 00:54:670(54670|6) - add circle -okay
* 01:14:015(74015|4) - move to 7th column -okay

Nice map and good luck !
sorry for a late mod

Limit Removal wrote:

I've been waiting for an Aoi Eir song to have a mania map since forever . It's not much, but here's my mod:

[General]
Hitsounds should not be at 0%. The players will have a hard time listening to how late or early their presses are

- its okay because this mapset wasn't hitsounded.

[Lv.8]
00:15:654 - (15654|2,3) is better off as (15654|3,4) - nope.. http://puu.sh/55z2X.png compare with 00:15:982 (15982|5,16310|2,16310|3) - this notes.
00:16:310 - Consequently, (16310|3,4) should be changed to (16310|2,3) ^
00:49:425 - The pattern will look better with (49425|2,5) instead of (49425|1,5) strong beats so I place it 1st column.

[Lv.17]
00:49:425 ~ 00:52:048 Stick with mapping the piano as notes, no need to switch to sliders.

Vocal notes. not fixed.

[Lv.24]
I'm not well-versed in hard 7K maps, so I don't think I can mod this properly.