Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [OsuMania] · forum

17VA

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17VA 2013-10-11T15:20:46+00:00

Remillion Cross wrote:
Hello 17VA
here's my mod, you can accept or ignore my mods as you wish.

Lv.8
* 00:38:113(38113|6) - move to 4th column or 6th column -hmm.. piano? no fixed
* 00:49:425(49425|0,49425|1) - move to 2nd column and 3rd column - okay.
* 01:24:507(84507|3) - move to 3rd column - hum.. make it symmetry... no fixed

Lv.17
* 00:32:048(32048|2) - move to 3rd column -okay
* 00:33:031(33031|3) - move to 4th column -X
* 00:38:277(38277|1,38277|5) - move to 3rd and 5th column -make it symmetry... no fixed
* 00:47:457(47457|4) - move to 6th column - okay
* 00:47:457(47457|2) - add circle - okay
* 00:47:621(47621|6) - delete circle -okay
* 00:49:588(49588|3,49588|5) - move to 5th column and 7th column -X
* 00:58:113(58113|1) - move to 3rd column - okay
* 01:16:638(76638|3) - move to 5th column - okay
* 01:16:802(76802|4) - move to 6th column - okay

Lv.24
* 00:54:670(54670|6) - add circle -okay
* 01:14:015(74015|4) - move to 7th column -okay

Nice map and good luck !
sorry for a late mod

thanks!

17VA

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17VA 2013-10-12T11:19:18+00:00

pung

Davteezy

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Davteezy 2013-10-13T06:19:05+00:00

Bad in-game mod

SPOILER

01:27 Davteezy: still new to this
01:28 17VA: >?
01:31 Davteezy: at 00:43:523 on lv.9
01:31 Davteezy: the sound on that note is very soft
01:32 17VA: hm
01:32 Davteezy: you can only hear it if the music is loud
01:32 17VA: drum sound xD
01:32 Davteezy: wasnt it the bells?
01:33 17VA: 00:43:523 (43523|5) -
01:33 17VA: hm
01:33 17VA: it's Lv,8
01:33 17VA: redownload it?
01:33 Davteezy: right now?
01:33 *Davteezy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278049 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size)]
01:34 17VA: yes
01:34 *17VA is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278048 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [Lv.8]]
01:34 Davteezy: ohh
01:34 Davteezy: let me see again
01:37 Davteezy: 00:59:425
01:37 Davteezy: is that strings?
01:37 17VA: k
01:38 17VA: http://puu.sh/4ONt1.jpg
01:40 Davteezy: what the note on [2] 01:04:670
01:41 17VA: hmm
01:41 17VA: lol
01:41 17VA: move to 7?
01:42 17VA: or 1...
01:43 17VA: ok 1.
01:43 Davteezy: oh that the drum
01:44 Davteezy: timpani
01:44 Davteezy: i would remove it
01:44 Davteezy: main focus is on the vocals
01:45 17VA: timpani?
01:45 17VA: o
01:46 17VA: hmm
01:46 17VA: make it focus the vocal?
01:46 17VA: ok
01:46 Davteezy: yea
01:46 17VA: okay
01:46 17VA: http://puu.sh/4ONE3.jpg much better
01:49 Davteezy: at 01:17:621
01:49 Davteezy: something like this?
01:49 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034854
01:49 Davteezy: or make the single at 01:18:277 at [5]
01:49 17VA: okay
01:50 Davteezy: is suppose to be norm diff?
01:51 17VA: yes
01:51 Davteezy: i think its fine
01:52 Davteezy: okay on lv 17
01:53 Davteezy: 00:00:736
01:53 Davteezy: i think it happens on 00:00:791
01:53 17VA: hmm
01:54 17VA: 791?
01:54 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034868
01:55 17VA: hmm
01:55 17VA: little slow
01:56 Davteezy: its optional
01:57 17VA: lol this http://puu.sh/4ONTD.png
01:57 Davteezy: 3 notes for a vocal?
01:57 Davteezy: 00:38:113
01:57 Davteezy: original sheet?
01:58 17VA: vocal = piano
01:58 17VA: yes
01:58 17VA: a
01:58 17VA: vocal + piano
01:58 Davteezy: aaaa
01:58 Davteezy: oh i heard it
01:58 Davteezy: okay
01:58 Davteezy: piano so soft
02:00 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034876 @01:06:966?
02:01 17VA: oka
02:01 17VA: y
02:01 Davteezy: that it
02:01 17VA: o
02:01 17VA: hmm
02:01 17VA: 01:07:293 (67293|4,67457|4) -
02:01 17VA: here
02:02 17VA: vocal is a same tone..
02:02 Davteezy: not really
02:02 17VA: yes
02:02 17VA: little
02:02 Davteezy: at 01:06:966 and 01:07:457 are the same vocals
02:02 Davteezy: ?!!?
02:02 Davteezy: that just me being picky
02:03 17VA: lol
02:03 Davteezy: make hp drain easier?
02:04 17VA: http://puu.sh/4OO2a.png
02:04 Davteezy: like lv.8 = hp6 lv.17= 7 and lv24. 8
02:04 17VA: hmm
02:04 17VA: I wanna keep 8
02:04 17VA: and 24 9
02:04 Davteezy: okay
02:04 17VA: like o2jam hard lv drain
02:04 Davteezy: hp 10
02:04 Davteezy: www
02:04 17VA: wwwwww
02:04 17VA: no drain
02:06 Davteezy: okay the last lv24
02:06 Davteezy: 00:44:998
02:07 Davteezy: add more emphasis near the end?
02:07 17VA: k
02:07 17VA: hmm
02:08 17VA: difficult..
02:08 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034885
02:08 Davteezy: hahahaha
02:08 Davteezy: orz
02:08 17VA: looks asdhaklsdj;
02:09 Davteezy: 1 more time at 00:47:621
02:09 Davteezy: h4h4hh4
02:09 17VA: sdjlfa
02:09 17VA: looks awkward
02:09 Davteezy: fhiuwehfuwie
02:10 Davteezy: lv 40 pattern
02:10 Davteezy: w
02:10 Davteezy: 01:09:097
02:10 Davteezy: connect ln?
02:10 17VA: ?
02:10 17VA: lol
02:11 17VA: because of vocals
02:11 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034889
02:11 17VA: my case is much better imo
02:12 17VA: vocal o.o
02:12 Davteezy: hm..
02:12 Davteezy: actualy it sounds more like this
02:12 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034892
02:13 17VA: hmm
02:13 17VA: 01:09:261 (69261|5) - high tone
02:13 17VA: 01:09:425 (69425|3) - low tone
02:13 17VA: 01:09:588 (69588|4) - middle tone
02:14 17VA: no changed
02:14 Davteezy: okay
02:14 Davteezy: i think that all of it
02:15 17VA: post it
02:15 Davteezy: maybe bump the level up?
02:15 17VA: xD
02:15 Davteezy: lv25?
02:15 17VA: I think 24
02:15 17VA: so easy
02:15 Davteezy: kk
02:15 17VA: just memorize some parts
02:15 Davteezy: lolol
02:15 Davteezy: harder than v3
02:15 *Davteezy run
02:16 17VA: xD
02:16 Davteezy: okay that all
02:17 Davteezy: ill post now

woc2006

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woc2006 2013-10-18T14:28:09+00:00

Artist Unicode: 藍井エイル

Generally avoid too many simultaneously press (more than 2 note) in a row in Lv.8, the rest parts are good.

17VA

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17VA 2013-10-18T18:10:34+00:00

all fixed

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2013-10-18T18:16:45+00:00

crossing field!

Oh wait wrong op.

17VA

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17VA 2013-10-19T00:37:43+00:00

lol you can check it my the other beatmap.

woc2006

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woc2006 2013-10-26T03:25:13+00:00

bubble fixed

17VA

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17VA 2013-10-26T03:39:48+00:00

Thanks ;w;

ljqandylee

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ljqandylee 2013-10-27T15:28:39+00:00

[Lv.26]
00:25:490 (25490|5,25490|2) - Remain one of them is enough
00:36:064 (36064|6,36228|6) - Delete, they are improper here
00:38:113 (38113|5) - Reduce the key amount here, or increase the key amount of 00:38:277
01:04:670 ~ 01:05:162 - No 1/8 sound here, overmapped
01:08:933 (68933|6) - End at 01:09:179 or 01:09:261
01:09:261 (69261|5) - End at 01:09:425
01:09:425 (69425|3) - End at 01:09:588
01:15:162 ~ 01:15:654 - No 1/8 sound here, overmapped

[Lv.17]
I think it's better to make this diff a bit easier, by reducing some multi-keys or by other ways. Now this diff is much nearer to LV.26 and has a big gap with LV.8, or you can make a diff between them XD
00:25:490 (25490|5,25490|2) - Remain one of them is enough

[LV.8]
01:04:507 - Add a note
01:04:507 (64507|1) - Begin from 01:04:834

17VA

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17VA 2013-10-27T16:00:34+00:00

applied.

Limit Removal

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Limit Removal 2013-10-31T18:55:28+00:00

I've been waiting for an Aoi Eir song to have a mania map since forever

. It's not much, but here's my mod:

[General]
Hitsounds should not be at 0%. The players will have a hard time listening to how late or early their presses are

[Lv.8]
00:15:654 - (15654|2,3) is better off as (15654|3,4)
00:16:310 - Consequently, (16310|3,4) should be changed to (16310|2,3)
00:49:425 - The pattern will look better with (49425|2,5) instead of (49425|1,5)

[Lv.17]
00:49:425 ~ 00:52:048 Stick with mapping the piano as notes, no need to switch to sliders.

[Lv.24]
I'm not well-versed in hard 7K maps, so I don't think I can mod this properly.

17VA

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17VA 2013-11-01T13:06:31+00:00

Limit Removal wrote:
I've been waiting for an Aoi Eir song to have a mania map since forever . It's not much, but here's my mod:

[General]
Hitsounds should not be at 0%. The players will have a hard time listening to how late or early their presses are

- its okay because this mapset wasn't hitsounded.

[Lv.8]
00:15:654 - (15654|2,3) is better off as (15654|3,4) - nope.. http://puu.sh/55z2X.png compare with 00:15:982 (15982|5,16310|2,16310|3) - this notes.
00:16:310 - Consequently, (16310|3,4) should be changed to (16310|2,3) ^
00:49:425 - The pattern will look better with (49425|2,5) instead of (49425|1,5) strong beats so I place it 1st column.

[Lv.17]
00:49:425 ~ 00:52:048 Stick with mapping the piano as notes, no need to switch to sliders.

Vocal notes. not fixed.

[Lv.24]
I'm not well-versed in hard 7K maps, so I don't think I can mod this properly.

no changes. thanks

Charles445

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Charles445 2013-11-01T22:26:24+00:00

[Lv.8]
00:00:736 (736|2,982|1,1392|6) - I think removing these three would make the intro a lot easier to read / play. These holds are on a weird beat.

17VA

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17VA 2013-11-01T23:42:15+00:00

ok, fixed

Charles445

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Charles445 2013-11-01T23:55:18+00:00

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