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Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 11월 2일 토요일 at 오전 8:41:41

Artist: Aoi Eir
Title: INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Source: Sword Art Online
Tags: SAO ALO OP Opening 2 2nd
BPM: 183
Filesize: 21665kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.17 - 7Key (4.24 stars, 722 notes)
  2. Lv.26 - 7Key (5 stars, 996 notes)
  3. Lv.8 - 7Key (2.17 stars, 364 notes)
Download: Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Download: Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd Rank, nice Aoi Eir's song.
Rumia-
[LV10]
00:01:310 (1310|6) - move here 00:01:392
00:02:703 (2703|6) - remove this for this diff it should be easier
too much long notes make it hard for beginners- suggest remap this diff
[LV 17]
intro again http://puu.sh/3V1k8.jpg
00:06:966 - add
00:09:261 (9261|2) - follow the tom sounds instead of vocals
00:14:507 (14507|1) - move here 00:14:343 at 5th
00:15:654 - add
00:16:310 - add
00:21:064 (21064|1,21146|2,21228|3,21310|4,21392|5,21720|2,21802|3,21884|4,21966|5,22048|6) - check the LV 24 - mod
00:25:490 (25490|2,25572|3,25654|4,25736|5) - ^
00:28:113 - add at 7th
00:28:441 - ^
00:32:785 (32785|5,32949|3,33113|3) - remove
00:46:146 (46146|4,46146|3,46146|2,46146|6,46146|5,46474|1,46474|4,46474|2,46474|3,46474|5) - reduce some note lol 5 notes is too dense
00:48:769 (48769|1,48769|5,48769|6,48769|3,48769|4,49097|5,49097|4,49097|0,49097|2,49097|3) - ^
01:21:064 (81064|2,81064|4,81392|4,81392|2,81720|4,81720|2,82048|4,82048|2) - move to 4th
01:22:211 (82211|3) - remove
[LV 24]
Intro offbeat
use 1/8
00:10:900 (10900|4,10982|5,11064|6,11146|5,11228|4,11310|5,11392|6) -
should be like this http://puu.sh/3V1k8.jpg
00:17:621 till 00:17:949 put the drum stream note can be fun
00:19:834 - add
00:21:310 (21310|4,21966|5) - remove
00:21:884 (21884|4) - ^
00:21:392 (21392|5) - move to 5th collumn at 00:21:310
00:22:048 (22048|6) - move at 00:21:884
00:21:802 (21802|3) - move at 5th collumn
00:25:572 (25572|3,25654|4,25736|5) - remove these
00:25:490 - add more
00:28:113 (28113|4,28113|3) - move at collumn 2 and 3"
00:28:441 - add at 7th
00:32:785 (32785|5) - remove
00:32:949 (32949|3) - move to 00:32:867
00:35:326 - add
00:37:621 (37621|5) - remove
00:37:621 (37621|5) - move at 00:38:277
00:38:113 (38113|6) - move at 6th
00:38:277 (38277|6,38277|0) - move at 00:38:441
00:38:605 (38605|0,38605|6) - move to pink lane (2nd and 6th)
00:48:769 (48769|3,48769|5) - remove
00:49:097 (49097|5) - move here 00:48:933
00:49:097 (49097|4) - move here 00:49:015
00:49:261 - add
00:49:343 - add
put double note like 00:49:916 (49916|4,49916|2) - at 00:50:080 , 00:50:572
00:50:244 (50244|3,50736|4) - add 1 more
00:51:064 (51064|4) - move to 3rd
00:51:228 (51228|2) - move to 2nd
00:51:228 (51228|4) - to 5th
should be 1/4 stream lol - suggested pattern - http://puu.sh/3V145.jpg
00:53:359 (53359|4,53523|4) - move to 4th
00:53:359 (53359|2,53523|2) - remove
01:04:711 (64711|1,64752|2,64793|3,64834|6,64875|5,64916|4,64957|3,64998|0,65039|1,65080|2,65121|3) - should be 1/4 drum stream
01:14:998 (74998|0,75039|1,75080|2,75121|3,75162|5,75203|6,75244|0,75285|1,75326|2,75367|4,75408|5,75449|6,75490|0,75531|1,75572|3,75613|4) - should be 1/4 drum stream
01:05:244 (65244|2) - move at 2nd collumn , at 01:05:326
01:05:408 (65408|2,65736|3,65900|3) - remove
01:15:818 (75818|3,75982|4,76146|6,76474|3,76638|5,76802|4) - make doubles on these note ( add 1 more)
01:17:785 - add
01:18:113 - add
01:21:228 (81228|5,81228|6,81228|3,81556|5,81556|6,81556|3,81884|5,81884|6,81884|3) - boring if this keep repeats , why dont you follow this pattern? 01:20:900 (80900|4,80900|2,80900|0) -

01:05:572 (65572|3) - move at 01:05:654
01:13:277 (73277|5,73277|1,73605|5,73605|1,73933|5,73933|1) - these note dont match music - suggest remove

Just some extra guides ^^ hope it would be useful for your mapping development
cuz i see you are such a potential mapper
here are guides to make stream notes
1st : Drum stream
if the stream repeats the snare, it should always stream 2 collumn only but only in 1/2 measure like this
http://puu.sh/3V1Ap.jpg
- if the drum consists of tom and snare it can describe the pattern as like this
http://puu.sh/3V1CM.jpg or http://puu.sh/3V1Df.jpg
2nd piano streams
its actuallly free but to make them fun to play~
as the pitch go up~ it moves to the right ~ from 1~7
if the pitch go down it moves to the left ~ from 7 -1
and you should count the number of piano sound presents in every 1/4 measure

comments -
- all diff has many similar parts to lv 24 one , juz repattern it to make it look like it is freshly
- imitating same difficulties shows your laziness in mapping and break the originality ,but you are a great mapper
-I'm expecting more from you( you can do it better tho ~ )
have a good day , good luck on ranking this ^^,v
Topic Starter
17VA

- R u m i a - wrote:

[LV10]
00:01:310 (1310|6) - move here 00:01:392
00:02:703 (2703|6) - remove this for this diff it should be easier
too much long notes make it hard for beginners- suggest remap this diff
[LV 17]
intro again http://puu.sh/3V1k8.jpg
00:06:966 - add -X
00:09:261 (9261|2) - follow the tom sounds instead of vocals
00:14:507 (14507|1) - move here 00:14:343 at 5th
00:15:654 - add
00:16:310 - add
00:21:064 (21064|1,21146|2,21228|3,21310|4,21392|5,21720|2,21802|3,21884|4,21966|5,22048|6) - check the LV 24 - mod
00:25:490 (25490|2,25572|3,25654|4,25736|5) - ^
00:28:113 - add at 7th
00:28:441 - ^
00:32:785 (32785|5,32949|3,33113|3) - remove
00:46:146 (46146|4,46146|3,46146|2,46146|6,46146|5,46474|1,46474|4,46474|2,46474|3,46474|5) - reduce some note lol 5 notes is too dense
00:48:769 (48769|1,48769|5,48769|6,48769|3,48769|4,49097|5,49097|4,49097|0,49097|2,49097|3) - ^
01:21:064 (81064|2,81064|4,81392|4,81392|2,81720|4,81720|2,82048|4,82048|2) - move to 4th
01:22:211 (82211|3) - remove
[LV 24]
Intro offbeat
use 1/8
00:10:900 (10900|4,10982|5,11064|6,11146|5,11228|4,11310|5,11392|6) -
should be like this http://puu.sh/3V1k8.jpg
00:17:621 till 00:17:949 put the drum stream note can be fun
00:19:834 - add
00:21:310 (21310|4,21966|5) - remove
00:21:884 (21884|4) - ^
00:21:392 (21392|5) - move to 5th collumn at 00:21:310
00:22:048 (22048|6) - move at 00:21:884
00:21:802 (21802|3) - move at 5th collumn
00:25:572 (25572|3,25654|4,25736|5) - remove these
00:25:490 - add more
00:28:113 (28113|4,28113|3) - move at collumn 2 and 3"
00:28:441 - add at 7th
00:32:785 (32785|5) - remove
00:32:949 (32949|3) - move to 00:32:867
00:35:326 - add
00:37:621 (37621|5) - remove
00:37:621 (37621|5) - move at 00:38:277
00:38:113 (38113|6) - move at 6th
00:38:277 (38277|6,38277|0) - move at 00:38:441
00:38:605 (38605|0,38605|6) - move to pink lane (2nd and 6th)
00:48:769 (48769|3,48769|5) - remove
00:49:097 (49097|5) - move here 00:48:933
00:49:097 (49097|4) - move here 00:49:015
00:49:261 - add
00:49:343 - add
put double note like 00:49:916 (49916|4,49916|2) - at 00:50:080 , 00:50:572
00:50:244 (50244|3,50736|4) - add 1 more
00:51:064 (51064|4) - move to 3rd
00:51:228 (51228|2) - move to 2nd
00:51:228 (51228|4) - to 5th
should be 1/4 stream lol - suggested pattern - http://puu.sh/3V145.jpg
00:53:359 (53359|4,53523|4) - move to 4th
00:53:359 (53359|2,53523|2) - remove
01:04:711 (64711|1,64752|2,64793|3,64834|6,64875|5,64916|4,64957|3,64998|0,65039|1,65080|2,65121|3) - should be 1/4 drum stream
- X This way might be better :( If I changed to drum stream, it looks empty.
01:14:998 -(74998|0,75039|1,75080|2,75121|3,75162|5,75203|6,75244|0,75285|1,75326|2,75367|4,75408|5,75449|6,75490|0,75531|1,75572|3,75613|4) - should be 1/4 drum stream - X ^
01:05:244 (65244|2) - move at 2nd collumn , at 01:05:326
01:05:408 (65408|2,65736|3,65900|3) - remove
01:15:818 (75818|3,75982|4,76146|6,76474|3,76638|5,76802|4) - make doubles on these note ( add 1 more)
01:17:785 - add
01:18:113 - add
01:21:228 (81228|5,81228|6,81228|3,81556|5,81556|6,81556|3,81884|5,81884|6,81884|3) - boring if this keep repeats , why dont you follow this pattern? 01:20:900 (80900|4,80900|2,80900|0) -

01:05:572 (65572|3) - move at 01:05:654
01:13:277 (73277|5,73277|1,73605|5,73605|1,73933|5,73933|1) - these note dont match music - suggest remove

Just some extra guides ^^ hope it would be useful for your mapping development
cuz i see you are such a potential mapper
here are guides to make stream notes
1st : Drum stream
if the stream repeats the snare, it should always stream 2 collumn only but only in 1/2 measure like this
http://puu.sh/3V1Ap.jpg
- if the drum consists of tom and snare it can describe the pattern as like this
http://puu.sh/3V1CM.jpg or http://puu.sh/3V1Df.jpg
2nd piano streams
its actuallly free but to make them fun to play~
as the pitch go up~ it moves to the right ~ from 1~7
if the pitch go down it moves to the left ~ from 7 -1
and you should count the number of piano sound presents in every 1/4 measure

comments -
- all diff has many similar parts to lv 24 one , juz repattern it to make it look like it is freshly
- imitating same difficulties shows your laziness in mapping and break the originality ,but you are a great mapper
-I'm expecting more from you( you can do it better tho ~ )
have a good day , good luck on ranking this ^^,v
Okay, everything is fixed else X xD
Very thanks for your help.
I gonna remap or adjust easy diffs soon ^^
MAAAAAAAAAAAAAS
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Topic Starter
17VA

__M A S__ wrote:

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richardfeder
Just passing by
And I love this song XD
SPOILER
Just a little suggestion~
0|1|2|3|4|5|6
Lv 8
nothing here, but I think it is some what unfriendly to beginner, for example from 00:19:261 - to 00:20:572 - is just too hard for them, also things like 00:33:031 (33031|1,33687|2,33687|3,33687|0) - and 00:46:146 (46146|6,46146|5,46146|4,46146|2,46474|1,46474|3,46474|5,46474|4) - I never consider them as wrong since they are all reasonable, but instead maybe you can make something like Lv.5 that suits beginner better XD Also highly recommend delete all speed change in the easiest diff

Lv.17
00:02:048 (2048|3,2048|5) - only human voice, not piano...maybe single note is enough? I am not sure about this cause I not fully understand those two note XD

00:07:457 (7457|1,7457|0) - at least move one of them to right hand to make it handy. Pressing three on your left while having noting to do on the right are annoying

00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5,23318|6) - confusing... I only hear one concentrated sound so maybe stair is not proper

00:38:277 (38277|6,38277|5,38277|1,38277|0) - disperse those notes. Move them to 0246 and add drums 00:38:441 (38441|5,38441|1) -

00:43:605 (43605|5) - delete no sound here and make 00:43:523 (43523|6) - double notes(just resemble 00:43:031 (43031|0,43031|2,43195|6,43195|4,43359|0,43359|2) - ) so that here won't be so strange

00:52:048 (52048|0,52048|6) - start at 00:51:884 -

00:59:752 (59752|0) - delete. Nothing there

01:01:064 (61064|2,61064|5) - ^

01:02:375 (62375|1,62375|4) - ^

01:02:703 (62703|0) - add a note or two

01:10:244 (70244|4) - delete

start from 01:05:162 (65162|3) -
seems here drums are not continuously hitting...maybe too many places are just notes serving for a feeling of "filling in"? Recommend recheck every note if it is corresponding to a sound that could be heard

01:15:080 (75080|1) - delete and make 01:14:998 (74998|0) - double notes

01:20:080 (80080|5) - add

01:20:408 (80408|5) - ^

01:24:343 (84343|5,84343|3) - ^

Lv.24
00:10:900 (10900|3) - those are overmap?

00:17:703 (17703|5,17785|1,17867|5) - ^

00:33:113 (33113|2) - delete

00:36:064 (36064|3,36146|4,36228|5) - overmap

00:21:966 (21966|6) - prolong to red line

00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5,23318|6) - same as Lv 17

seems some overmap in the climax of the song...and I cannot manage there :o
Good luck!
Topic Starter
17VA

richardfeder wrote:

Just passing by
And I love this song XD
SPOILER
Just a little suggestion~
0|1|2|3|4|5|6
Lv 8 - O
nothing here, but I think it is some what unfriendly to beginner, for example from 00:19:261 - to 00:20:572 - is just too hard for them, also things like 00:33:031 (33031|1,33687|2,33687|3,33687|0) - and 00:46:146 (46146|6,46146|5,46146|4,46146|2,46474|1,46474|3,46474|5,46474|4) - I never consider them as wrong since they are all reasonable, but instead maybe you can make something like Lv.5 that suits beginner better XD Also highly recommend delete all speed change in the easiest diff

Lv.17
00:02:048 (2048|3,2048|5) - only human voice, not piano...maybe single note is enough? I am not sure about this cause I not fully understand those two note XD - fixed - O

00:07:457 (7457|1,7457|0) - at least move one of them to right hand to make it handy. Pressing three on your left while having noting to do on the right are annoying - O

00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5,23318|6) - confusing... I only hear one concentrated sound so maybe stair is not proper - O

00:38:277 (38277|6,38277|5,38277|1,38277|0) - disperse those notes. Move them to 0246 and add drums 00:38:441 (38441|5,38441|1) - -X

imo original case is better.

00:43:605 (43605|5) - delete no sound here and make 00:43:523 (43523|6) - double notes(just resemble 00:43:031 (43031|0,43031|2,43195|6,43195|4,43359|0,43359|2) - ) so that here won't be so strange - O

00:52:048 (52048|0,52048|6) - start at 00:51:884 - -X because this LN is not a vocal

00:59:752 (59752|0) - delete. Nothing there - X there's sound exists and balance...

01:01:064 (61064|2,61064|5) - ^ - ^

01:02:375 (62375|1,62375|4) - ^ - ^

01:02:703 (62703|0) - add a note or two - X because of balance

01:10:244 (70244|4) - delete - ^

start from 01:05:162 (65162|3) - I add it little sense. If I delete little, there are looks so empty and bored, so I little overnote them. but it's a correct beat.
seems here drums are not continuously hitting...maybe too many places are just notes serving for a feeling of "filling in"? Recommend recheck every note if it is corresponding to a sound that could be heard

01:15:080 (75080|1) - delete and make 01:14:998 (74998|0) - double notes - O

01:20:080 (80080|5) - add - not a piano, it's drum beat. it's not a Insane diff xD

01:20:408 (80408|5) - ^ - ^

01:24:343 (84343|5,84343|3) - ^ -^

Lv.24
00:10:900 (10900|3) - those are overmap? - Pianos.

00:17:703 (17703|5,17785|1,17867|5) - ^ - those are drum stream. little overnote?

00:33:113 (33113|2) - delete - Insane, little overnote

00:36:064 (36064|3,36146|4,36228|5) - overmap - I heard there are little sounds exists.

00:21:966 (21966|6) - prolong to red line - O

00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5,23318|6) - same as Lv 17 - Piano http://puu.sh/4vGyo.png

seems some overmap in the climax of the song...and I cannot manage there :o
Good luck!
Thanks!
imariL
제가 오투잼을 안해서 오투잼 스타일 패턴은 잘 모르니 양해부탁드립니다 :D

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히트사운드 0이 아닌 40정도 해주세요
AiMod: Letterbox is not allowed in mania mode, Countdown is not allowed in mania mode 이 두가지 고쳐주세요

Lv.8

00:44:179 (44179|1) - 7번으로 옮겨주세요

Lv.17

01:20:900 (80900|4,80900|2,81064|3,81228|2,81228|4,81392|3,81556|2,81556|4,81720|3,81884|4,81884|2,82048|3) - 음정도 바뀌는 부분이라 조금 더 재밌게 짜실 수 있는 부분일거같은데 너무 단조롭네요. 개인적인 의견입니다. 나머지는 크게 지적할 부분은 못찾겠네요.

Lv.24

00:10:900 (10900|3,10941|4,10982|5,11023|6,11064|3,11105|4,11146|5,11187|6,11228|3,11269|4,11310|5,11351|6) - 오버맵핑이 됬지 않나 싶습니다. 다른 분도 지적하셨던데 이부분의 피아노 긁기부분은 1/8이 아닌 1/4박자입니다. 수정부탁드립니다.

00:23:318 (23318|6) - 이노트 빼주세요. 반복해서 들어봐도 피아노가 음을 빠르게 3개까진 치는데 노트는 4개 들어갔네요.
00:47:621 (47621|0,47621|1,47621|3,47621|6,47785|1,47785|0,47785|5,47949|0,47949|1,47949|3,47949|6,48113|1,48113|0,48113|4,48277|0,48277|1,48277|6,48277|3,48441|0,48441|1,48441|5,48441|6,48605|2,48769|6,48769|0,48769|1,48769|4) - Ctrl+H?

01:09:261 (69261|5,69425|3) - 이렇게 해주시는건 어떨까요? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1022600

01:14:998 (74998|0,75039|1,75080|2) - 01:15:162 - 드럼 빠르게 치기 시작하는 부분은 여기서부터입니다. 이쪽부분 패턴 수정 부탁드릴게요.

01:20:900 - Lv.17 난이도와 같은 지적, 개인적인 의견입니다.


Good Luck!
Topic Starter
17VA
히트사운드 0이 아닌 40정도 해주세요 - 힛사가 없는 맵은 5로 해놓거나 아얘 무음으로 해놔도 괜찮습니다.
AiMod: Letterbox is not allowed in mania mode, Countdown is not allowed in mania mode 이 두가지 고쳐주세요 -

Lv.8

00:44:179 (44179|1) - 7번으로 옮겨주세요 - 낮은 음이어서 2 컬럼 낮게 옮겼습니다.

Lv.17

01:20:900 (80900|4,80900|2,81064|3,81228|2,81228|4,81392|3,81556|2,81556|4,81720|3,81884|4,81884|2,82048|3) - 음정도 바뀌는 부분이라 조금 더 재밌게 짜실 수 있는 부분일거같은데 너무 단조롭네요. 개인적인 의견입니다. 나머지는 크게 지적할 부분은 못찾겠네요. - 오케이

Lv.24

00:10:900 (10900|3,10941|4,10982|5,11023|6,11064|3,11105|4,11146|5,11187|6,11228|3,11269|4,11310|5,11351|6) - 오버맵핑이 됬지 않나 싶습니다. 다른 분도 지적하셨던데 이부분의 피아노 긁기부분은 1/8이 아닌 1/4박자입니다. 수정부탁드립니다. - 4분에 1박자였군요.

00:23:318 (23318|6) - 이노트 빼주세요. 반복해서 들어봐도 피아노가 음을 빠르게 3개까진 치는데 노트는 4개 들어갔네요.
00:47:621 (47621|0,47621|1,47621|3,47621|6,47785|1,47785|0,47785|5,47949|0,47949|1,47949|3,47949|6,48113|1,48113|0,48113|4,48277|0,48277|1,48277|6,48277|3,48441|0,48441|1,48441|5,48441|6,48605|2,48769|6,48769|0,48769|1,48769|4) - Ctrl+H? - 낮은 베이스 음이니 낮은 콜룸에 뒀습니다.

01:09:261 (69261|5,69425|3) - 이렇게 해주시는건 어떨까요? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1022600 - 흠 일부로 보컬때문에 이렇게 해놨습니다. 흘리는듯한? 그런 보컬의 느낌.

01:14:998 (74998|0,75039|1,75080|2) - 01:15:162 - 드럼 빠르게 치기 시작하는 부분은 여기서부터입니다. 이쪽부분 패턴 수정 부탁드릴게요. - 오케이

01:20:900 - Lv.17 난이도와 같은 지적, 개인적인 의견입니다. - 흠 강하게 치는 드럼 비트 위주다 보니.... 어쩔수 없네요.



베리 떙스!
Roxas
irc mod

SPOILER
17:36 Roxas: hey man \o\
17:37 17VA: hai
17:37 Roxas: are u online?
17:37 Roxas: hey xD
17:37 Roxas: I can IRC mod
17:37 Roxas: if u want
17:37 17VA: yes
17:37 17VA: ok
17:37 Roxas: yay
17:37 Roxas: sorry for delay
17:37 Roxas: busy irl
17:37 17VA: w
17:38 *Roxas is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278048 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [Lv.8]]
17:38 Roxas: let's start here
17:38 17VA: yes
17:38 Roxas: hmm negative offset
17:38 Roxas: are you sure it's okay? xD
17:38 17VA: it's from
17:39 17VA: CXu's beatmap
17:39 Roxas: so it's okay
17:39 Roxas: xD
17:39 17VA: yes
17:39 17VA: :)
17:39 Roxas: image size is incorrect
17:40 Roxas: that should be 1366x768
17:40 17VA: hm
17:40 Roxas: but it's 1365 xD
17:40 17VA: 1366 x 768
17:40 17VA: lol
17:40 Roxas: huh
17:40 Roxas: I redlded now
17:40 Roxas: but it's still 1365
17:40 Roxas: dunno XD
17:41 17VA: fixed
17:41 Roxas: remove countdown and letterbox in lvl 17 and 24
17:41 17VA: k
17:41 Roxas: k let's start mod thet idff
17:42 17VA: fin
17:42 17VA: xD
17:42 Roxas: 00:00:982 (982|1) - end this hold in 00:01:392 -
17:42 17VA: ok
17:45 Roxas: 00:19:916 -
17:45 Roxas: make a pattern like this
17:46 Roxas: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1026200
17:47 17VA: ok
17:47 Roxas: omg it's a nice map
17:47 17VA: xD
17:48 Roxas: 00:29:261 (29261|1) - remove
17:48 17VA: I am very poor at easy/normal diffs
17:48 Roxas: (for make it easier)
17:48 17VA: k
17:48 Roxas: but I like it \o\
17:48 17VA: and this 00:39:752 (39752|1) -
17:48 Roxas: yup
17:48 17VA: ok
17:51 Roxas: omg nice
17:51 Roxas: reverse pitch
17:51 Roxas: gj gj gj
17:51 17VA: reverse?
17:52 Roxas: 00:48:769 (48769|4,48769|6,48769|3,49097|3,49097|5,49097|2,49425|1,49425|4,49425|0) - here the notes goes higher
17:52 17VA: K
17:52 Roxas: and you (on purpose or not) you made a pitch releavance in reverse
17:52 Roxas: :P
17:52 17VA: hmm
17:52 Roxas: 01:04:015 (64015|6,64179|5,64343|4,64507|3) - maybe a bit hard for beginners
17:52 17VA: my way is better imo xp
17:53 17VA: hmm
17:53 Roxas: kk
17:53 17VA: those LNs
17:53 17VA: like http://puu.sh/4KRmp.png?
17:54 Roxas: oh no no no it's harder xD
17:54 Roxas: keep it like that
17:54 Roxas: keep the LNs like that
17:54 17VA: oo
17:54 17VA: k
17:55 Roxas: 01:23:851 (83851|3) - remove
17:55 17VA: ok
17:55 Roxas: next diff
17:56 17VA: k
17:56 Roxas: okok here the snapping is correct
17:56 Roxas: 00:01:351 (1351|3,1392|4,1433|5) -
17:56 Roxas: but this hold is out of tempo 00:01:474 (1474|6) -
17:56 Roxas: the hold should start here
17:57 17VA: hmm
17:57 Roxas: 00:01:474 (1474|6) -
17:57 Roxas: * 00:01:433 -
17:57 17VA: 1/8
17:58 Roxas: do like this: move 00:01:474 (1474|6) - in 00:01:433 -
17:58 Roxas: delete 00:01:433 (1433|5) -
17:58 Roxas: 00:01:351 (1351|3,1392|4) - move right
17:58 17VA: you're right
17:58 Roxas: 00:00:982 (982|1) - end this LN in 00:01:351 -
17:59 17VA: hm
17:59 17VA: 00:02:048 (2048|5) - this one
17:59 Roxas: ? that note is ok xD
17:59 17VA: o
17:59 17VA: edit link error..
17:59 Roxas: huh xD
18:00 17VA: wait
18:00 Roxas: yep
18:00 17VA: o I see
18:00 17VA: fin
18:02 Roxas: change diff
18:03 Roxas: make the same thing for intro in lvl25
18:03 Roxas: *24
18:03 17VA: ok
18:03 17VA: same thing
18:03 17VA: ?
18:03 17VA: a
18:03 Roxas: 00:01:474 (1474|6) - move this 1/8 before
18:04 Roxas: then delete 00:01:433 (1433|5) -
18:04 17VA: k
18:04 Roxas: move 00:01:351 (1351|3,1392|4) - those right
18:04 Roxas: 00:00:982 (982|1) - end this LN 1/8 later
18:04 17VA: fin
18:05 Roxas: 00:23:195 (23195|3,23236|4,23277|5) - move 1/4 later
18:05 Roxas: *before
18:05 Roxas: so, move in 00:23:113 -
18:05 17VA: k
18:06 17VA: hmm
18:06 17VA: might be 00:23:154 - is correct
18:07 Roxas: hmm for me is correct 00:23:113 -
18:07 Roxas: well ask to bad
18:07 17VA: hmm
18:07 Roxas: *bat
18:07 Roxas: when
18:07 Roxas: you will call one
18:07 Roxas: xD
18:07 17VA: hm yeah
18:08 17VA: so week beat
18:08 Roxas: 00:35:982 - do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1026237
18:08 17VA: can't recognize when playing x1 speed
18:08 Roxas: uh
18:08 17VA: ok
18:09 Roxas: here I hear 1/4 drums 01:15:162 -
18:09 Roxas: you put 1/8
18:09 Roxas: it's not bad, only for noticing you
18:10 17VA: hmm
18:10 17VA: overmapping yeah xD
18:10 Roxas: yea yea woo woo
18:10 Roxas: dat ending
18:10 Roxas: remember me a map
18:10 Roxas: *coff
18:10 Roxas: akasha *coff
18:11 17VA: akasha
18:11 17VA: lol
18:11 17VA: dat ending
18:11 17VA: http://puu.sh/4KS2O.png hmm...
18:12 17VA: is it okay lv 17 use dat ending?
18:14 Roxas: yes
18:14 17VA: k
18:15 Roxas: savelog and posting in forum
Nanatsu
01:18:933 - 4 > 5

01:18:933 - 7 추가

01:19:916 - 1 추가

01:19:916 - 4를롱놋 > 01:20:244- 까지

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 진짜 개쪼금만 할게요 리얼ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 노재능이라서ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Sorarei
[General]
its not good idea if you set volume to 0%

[Lv.8]
00:00:982 (982|1) - end hold note to this -> 00:01:392 -
00:20:080 (20080|1) - move to 2
00:20:408 (20408|5) - move to 4
00:22:539 (22539|0,22703|6) - delete
00:34:998 (34998|3,35490|4,35982|5,36310|1,36310|6,36310|3) - i notice you following piano , nice
00:38:277 (38277|4) - delete
00:54:015 (54015|6,54179|0) - delete
01:02:539 - maybe you like this pattern http://puu.sh/4M4w8.jpg

[Lv.17]
00:22:539 (22539|0,22703|6) - delete
00:27:949 (27949|0) - delete this and place a note 00:27:949 - 00:28:113 - 00:28:277 - place all to 1st column <- do this for all difficult
00:45:490 - follow the drums note , like above. do this to all difficult (Example : http://puu.sh/4M5bm.png)
00:48:933 - need a stream 1/4 note

[Lv.24]
00:27:949 (27949|4,27949|3,28113|1,28113|2,28277|4,28277|3,28441|1,28441|2) - Applying this to lv.17 will be perfect and also can use to following drum.
00:44:998 (44998|0,44998|1,45162|1,45162|0,45326|0,45326|1) - delete
00:47:621 (47621|1,47621|0) - ^

i know this not helping full. but this all can i do
Topic Starter
17VA

Reikosaka wrote:

[General]
its not good idea if you set volume to 0%

[Lv.8]
00:00:982 (982|1) - end hold note to this -> 00:01:392 - -hmm.. I am following Roxas's mod
00:20:080 (20080|1) - move to 2
00:20:408 (20408|5) - move to 4 - following Roxas's mod..
00:22:539 (22539|0,22703|6) - delete -no changes
00:34:998 (34998|3,35490|4,35982|5,36310|1,36310|6,36310|3) - i notice you following piano , nice
00:38:277 (38277|4) - delete - other way (strong beat)
00:54:015 (54015|6,54179|0) - delete -no changes.
01:02:539 - maybe you like this pattern http://puu.sh/4M4w8.jpg -sorry, easy diff and same drums.

[Lv.17]
00:22:539 (22539|0,22703|6) - delete - other way
00:27:949 (27949|0) - delete this and place a note 00:27:949 - 00:28:113 - 00:28:277 - place all to 1st column <- do this for all difficult -no changes
00:45:490 - follow the drums note , like above. do this to all difficult (Example : http://puu.sh/4M5bm.png) -no changes (hard to hit)
00:48:933 - need a stream 1/4 note - it's a hard diff, no changes.

[Lv.24]
00:27:949 (27949|4,27949|3,28113|1,28113|2,28277|4,28277|3,28441|1,28441|2) - Applying this to lv.17 will be perfect and also can use to following drum. -other way
00:44:998 (44998|0,44998|1,45162|1,45162|0,45326|0,45326|1) - delete -no changes
00:47:621 (47621|1,47621|0) - ^ -no changes

i know this not helping full. but this all can i do
thanks
Bruce
Mod by request, column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Lv.8
00:11:392 - Remove 1 note
00:11:720 - Remove 1 note
00:13:687 - Remove 1 note
00:14:998 - Remove 1 note
00:22:539 - Remove 1 or 2 notes
00:22:703 - Remove 1 or 2 notes
00:25:818 - Remove 1 note
00:27:621 - Remove 1 note
00:33:687 - Remove 1 note
00:45:490 (45490|0) - Move to 4
00:45:818 (45818|0) - Move to 4
00:48:113 (48113|1) - Move to 6
00:48:441 (48441|1) - Move to 6
00:54:015 - Remove 1 or 2 notes
00:54:179 - Remove 1 or 2 notes

I think it is a little hard,likes Lv.10-Lv.12

Lv.17
00:54:015 - Remove 1 note
00:54:179 - Remove 1 note
00:55:654 - Add 1 note
00:56:966 - Add 1 note
00:58:277 - Add 1 note
01:06:146 - Add 1 note
01:06:802 - Add 1 note
01:08:769 - Add 1 note
01:10:736 - Add 1 note

Lv.24
too hard.. beyond my ability

Nice map, fighting :oops:

Star beam :P
Topic Starter
17VA
thanks.

Lv.8 - apply almost

Lv17 - apply all
Remillion Cross
Hello 17VA
here's my mod, you can accept or ignore my mods as you wish.

Lv.8
* 00:38:113(38113|6) - move to 4th column or 6th column
* 00:49:425(49425|0,49425|1) - move to 2nd column and 3rd column
* 01:24:507(84507|3) - move to 3rd column

Lv.17
* 00:32:048(32048|2) - move to 3rd column
* 00:33:031(33031|3) - move to 4th column
* 00:38:277(38277|1,38277|5) - move to 3rd and 5th column
* 00:47:457(47457|4) - move to 6th column
* 00:47:457(47457|2) - add circle
* 00:47:621(47621|6) - delete circle
* 00:49:588(49588|3,49588|5) - move to 5th column and 7th column
* 00:58:113(58113|1) - move to 3rd column
* 01:16:638(76638|3) - move to 5th column
* 01:16:802(76802|4) - move to 6th column

Lv.24
* 00:54:670(54670|6) - add circle
* 01:14:015(74015|4) - move to 7th column

Nice map :D and good luck !
sorry for a late mod :o
Topic Starter
17VA

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hello 17VA
here's my mod, you can accept or ignore my mods as you wish.

Lv.8
* 00:38:113(38113|6) - move to 4th column or 6th column -hmm.. piano? no fixed
* 00:49:425(49425|0,49425|1) - move to 2nd column and 3rd column - okay.
* 01:24:507(84507|3) - move to 3rd column - hum.. make it symmetry... no fixed

Lv.17
* 00:32:048(32048|2) - move to 3rd column -okay
* 00:33:031(33031|3) - move to 4th column -X
* 00:38:277(38277|1,38277|5) - move to 3rd and 5th column -make it symmetry... no fixed
* 00:47:457(47457|4) - move to 6th column - okay
* 00:47:457(47457|2) - add circle - okay
* 00:47:621(47621|6) - delete circle -okay
* 00:49:588(49588|3,49588|5) - move to 5th column and 7th column -X
* 00:58:113(58113|1) - move to 3rd column - okay
* 01:16:638(76638|3) - move to 5th column - okay
* 01:16:802(76802|4) - move to 6th column - okay

Lv.24
* 00:54:670(54670|6) - add circle -okay
* 01:14:015(74015|4) - move to 7th column -okay

Nice map :D and good luck !
sorry for a late mod :o
thanks!
Topic Starter
17VA
pung
Davteezy
Bad in-game mod
SPOILER
01:27 Davteezy: still new to this
01:28 17VA: >?
01:31 Davteezy: at 00:43:523 on lv.9
01:31 Davteezy: the sound on that note is very soft
01:32 17VA: hm
01:32 Davteezy: you can only hear it if the music is loud
01:32 17VA: drum sound xD
01:32 Davteezy: wasnt it the bells?
01:33 17VA: 00:43:523 (43523|5) -
01:33 17VA: hm
01:33 17VA: it's Lv,8
01:33 17VA: redownload it?
01:33 Davteezy: right now?
01:33 *Davteezy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278049 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size)]
01:34 17VA: yes
01:34 *17VA is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/278048 Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [Lv.8]]
01:34 Davteezy: ohh
01:34 Davteezy: let me see again
01:37 Davteezy: 00:59:425
01:37 Davteezy: is that strings?
01:37 17VA: k
01:38 17VA: http://puu.sh/4ONt1.jpg
01:40 Davteezy: what the note on [2] 01:04:670
01:41 17VA: hmm
01:41 17VA: lol
01:41 17VA: move to 7?
01:42 17VA: or 1...
01:43 17VA: ok 1.
01:43 Davteezy: oh that the drum
01:44 Davteezy: timpani
01:44 Davteezy: i would remove it
01:44 Davteezy: main focus is on the vocals
01:45 17VA: timpani?
01:45 17VA: o
01:46 17VA: hmm
01:46 17VA: make it focus the vocal?
01:46 17VA: ok
01:46 Davteezy: yea
01:46 17VA: okay
01:46 17VA: http://puu.sh/4ONE3.jpg much better
01:49 Davteezy: at 01:17:621
01:49 Davteezy: something like this?
01:49 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034854
01:49 Davteezy: or make the single at 01:18:277 at [5]
01:49 17VA: okay
01:50 Davteezy: is suppose to be norm diff?
01:51 17VA: yes
01:51 Davteezy: i think its fine
01:52 Davteezy: okay on lv 17
01:53 Davteezy: 00:00:736
01:53 Davteezy: i think it happens on 00:00:791
01:53 17VA: hmm
01:54 17VA: 791?
01:54 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034868
01:55 17VA: hmm
01:55 17VA: little slow
01:56 Davteezy: its optional
01:57 17VA: lol this http://puu.sh/4ONTD.png
01:57 Davteezy: 3 notes for a vocal?
01:57 Davteezy: 00:38:113
01:57 Davteezy: original sheet?
01:58 17VA: vocal = piano
01:58 17VA: yes
01:58 17VA: a
01:58 17VA: vocal + piano
01:58 Davteezy: aaaa
01:58 Davteezy: oh i heard it
01:58 Davteezy: okay
01:58 Davteezy: piano so soft
02:00 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034876 @01:06:966?
02:01 17VA: oka
02:01 17VA: y
02:01 Davteezy: that it
02:01 17VA: o
02:01 17VA: hmm
02:01 17VA: 01:07:293 (67293|4,67457|4) -
02:01 17VA: here
02:02 17VA: vocal is a same tone..
02:02 Davteezy: not really
02:02 17VA: yes
02:02 17VA: little
02:02 Davteezy: at 01:06:966 and 01:07:457 are the same vocals
02:02 Davteezy: ?!!?
02:02 Davteezy: that just me being picky
02:03 17VA: lol
02:03 Davteezy: make hp drain easier?
02:04 17VA: http://puu.sh/4OO2a.png
02:04 Davteezy: like lv.8 = hp6 lv.17= 7 and lv24. 8
02:04 17VA: hmm
02:04 17VA: I wanna keep 8
02:04 17VA: and 24 9
02:04 Davteezy: okay
02:04 17VA: like o2jam hard lv drain
02:04 Davteezy: hp 10
02:04 Davteezy: www
02:04 17VA: wwwwww
02:04 17VA: no drain
02:06 Davteezy: okay the last lv24
02:06 Davteezy: 00:44:998
02:07 Davteezy: add more emphasis near the end?
02:07 17VA: k
02:07 17VA: hmm
02:08 17VA: difficult..
02:08 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034885
02:08 Davteezy: hahahaha
02:08 Davteezy: orz
02:08 17VA: looks asdhaklsdj;
02:09 Davteezy: 1 more time at 00:47:621
02:09 Davteezy: h4h4hh4
02:09 17VA: sdjlfa
02:09 17VA: looks awkward
02:09 Davteezy: fhiuwehfuwie
02:10 Davteezy: lv 40 pattern
02:10 Davteezy: w
02:10 Davteezy: 01:09:097
02:10 Davteezy: connect ln?
02:10 17VA: ?
02:10 17VA: lol
02:11 17VA: because of vocals
02:11 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034889
02:11 17VA: my case is much better imo
02:12 17VA: vocal o.o
02:12 Davteezy: hm..
02:12 Davteezy: actualy it sounds more like this
02:12 Davteezy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1034892
02:13 17VA: hmm
02:13 17VA: 01:09:261 (69261|5) - high tone
02:13 17VA: 01:09:425 (69425|3) - low tone
02:13 17VA: 01:09:588 (69588|4) - middle tone
02:14 17VA: no changed
02:14 Davteezy: okay
02:14 Davteezy: i think that all of it
02:15 17VA: post it
02:15 Davteezy: maybe bump the level up?
02:15 17VA: xD
02:15 Davteezy: lv25?
02:15 17VA: I think 24
02:15 17VA: so easy
02:15 Davteezy: kk
02:15 17VA: just memorize some parts
02:15 Davteezy: lolol
02:15 Davteezy: harder than v3
02:15 *Davteezy run
02:16 17VA: xD
02:16 Davteezy: okay that all
02:17 Davteezy: ill post now
woc2006
Artist Unicode: 藍井エイル

Generally avoid too many simultaneously press (more than 2 note) in a row in Lv.8, the rest parts are good.
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