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Last Note. - Caramel Heaven

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Snepif
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Snepif
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 30 de junio de 2013 at 19:56:43

Artist: Last Note.
Title: Caramel Heaven
Tags: megpoid gumi vocaloid 3 kyarameru heavun hea vun vocarock collection Nyquill winber1
BPM: 194
Filesize: 6284kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3,12 stars, 247 notes)
  2. Hard (4,94 stars, 588 notes)
  3. Heaven (4,9 stars, 960 notes)
  4. Nyquill's Insane (5 stars, 737 notes)
  5. Winber1's Normal (4,51 stars, 431 notes)
Download: Last Note. - Caramel Heaven
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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KYARAMERU HEAVUNNNNN!!
Heaven: Hardest diff, by me.
Nyquill's Insane: by Nyquill
Hard: by me
W1's normal: by Winber1
Easy: by me
SB by me, simple but fun c:
Thanks for the guests guys o/
Last edited by Snepif , edited 42 times in total.
Distant years
465 posts
Joined April 2012
Distant years
this is amazingly fun + the song is amazing






loved it.
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Snepif
thanks a lot! glad you like it
RLC
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2011
RLC
after a lot more playing, offset 530 works much much better for me

don't kd this
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
Mapaso master!
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Snepif

RLC wrote:

after a lot more playing, offset 530 works much much better for me

don't kd this
Indeed! Fixed.

H1ko wrote:

Mapaso master!
Gracias!
Hatori-kun
84 posts
Joined December 2012
Hatori-kun
Loved Heaven diff :D

Starred!
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Snepif
Thanks a lot :3
mathi747
59 posts
Joined September 2010
mathi747
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maay
429 posts
Joined September 2009
maay
seal of approval
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
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Snepif

maay wrote:

seal of approval
i approve of your approval.

Waiting to finish my hard, nyq's insane, and ill have too see what i can do with easy and normal!
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Snepif
finished everything except for nyq's insane yay c:
I really wanna know if i can make my SB without screwing the 16:9 format... and if that is rankeable..
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill
Last note is actually so good.
http://puu.sh/2Vw6V.osu
Snepif
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Snepif

Nyquill wrote:

Last note is actually so good.
Best vocaloid composer imo :D thanks a lot!
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
M4M from your queue, take them as suggestions :DD

[General]
Bit rate of music is 320 kbps, this is over the limit of 192 ):
unicode title conflicts lol
There is a file missing in normal mode, white.jpg
The fille of the mapset is over 10 Mb without video :/

[Easy]
The star rating is slightly over 3, I think it's mostly ok, but I'm not sure :/
Good map overall, but I'm iffy about the 1/2 sliders, such as 01:39:499 (1) and 01:41:973 (1), maybe you should replace with circles?

[Winber1's Normal]
02:12:127 - end the spinner here? that's where the vocals end
01:41:045 (4) - distance error!

That's all I could find for now, good map, but it seems pretty hard o__o

[Heaven]
Turn on letterbox during breaks to keep consistent with the other diffs
there are several unsnapped object ends
00:44:756 (4,5,6,7) - adjust for smoother curve? or you can make them straight
00:58:005 (4,5) - move to the left so that (3) doesn't overlap (5)?
02:33:622 (4,5,6,7) - maybe adjust them so that they're in a line parallel to 02:33:313 (3)
03:33:004 (5,6,7,8,1) - uneven spacing in the stream ><

[Hard]
haha, almost nothing to say ;__;
02:52:653 (4,5) - adjust in a diagonal line?

[Nyquill's Insane]
01:04:100 (7) - not perfectly stacked with 01:03:018 (3)
03:03:327 (1) - maybe you should lower the volume of the finish so it doesn't sound so jarring in such a quite and soft section :/ [Actually this goes for all diffs, forgot to mention]
02:58:688 (1) - add finish for consistency with the other diffs
03:23:121 (7,8,9,10,11) - adjust stream so that it blankets (2)?
03:36:111 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow imo
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Broccoly
1,359 posts
Joined May 2012
Broccoly
hello~ trying for m4m
The map's so good! my mod will be just suggestions

[General]
Turn on Epilepsy warning?

[Heaven]
00:53:416 (7,1) - it feels a bit far to hit in first play. I know you'll want to maintain the shape, so how about revolving 7 a bit counter-clockwise around 6, so that 7's tail will be closer to 1's head.
00:58:519 (6) - (nazi) you use several sliders shaped like this throughout the diff. How about adding one more control-point and make it look smoother?

01:48:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - so good
01:52:798 (7,1) - this one should be fine imo cuz there was a pattern like this before..

heavenly.

[Nyquill's insane]
00:47:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cursor movement from 1 and 2 feels unnatural (although it plays fine). How about something like this?

(and stack 5 on 6 like you did here: 01:48:172 (5,6) // it might feel weird at first but if you actually play it I think it's good)
00:57:141 (7,1) - try ctrl + g ing 1, and pulling up a bit, so that the curve one 1 can blanket 7. This is to place a jump on a big downbeat, like you did in other parts.


01:02:090 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - about the same concept. (jump on big downbeat)


(move 1 a bit further apart from 7, stack 2's head on 7, move 3 and 4 and 5 according to the distance snap.)

01:29:152 (7,8,1) - how about stacking 7 on 1's head, and 8 on 5? distance feels a little confusing on first play + makes it more fun imo
03:28:069 (1) - NC?
03:47:554 (1) - NC?

nice insane connecting extra and hard

[Hard]
01:48:158 (6,1) - might be a bit far to hit? cuz players expect a pause like here: 00:49:318
03:26:200 (2) - ctrl g? flows better i think..

[winber1's normal]
Isn't SV a bit fast for normal..? I mean Hard is 1.4..
00:18:932 (1) // 00:24:962 (1) // 00:53:571 (1) // 01:08:416 (1) // 01:38:881 (1,2) // 01:44:138 (1) // 01:52:953 (1) // 02:07:798 (1) // 03:12:127 (1) // 03:26:973 (1) // 03:31:921 (1) - is there a reason for these NCs?
good normal

[Easy]
03:31:148 (1,2) - (nazi) Better blanket? (2 around 1's head)
nice

Pro mapset.. have my star... (haven't been throwing stars for a while.. lack of good maps)
good luck! you guys prolly don't need it haha
hope my mod helped a bit :)
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Easy
omg look fine..

Winber1's Normal
00:18:158 - try or
00:20:169 - maybe delete this note at add note add 00:20:014 instead. sounds better for me
00:52:334 (1) - try this pattern maybe?
img
00:54:035 - u can add note
00:56:045 - try this

Hard
omg good diff

Nyquill's Insane
00:47:863 (2,4) - try this smoothly to play
img
01:28:842 (6) - NC this would be great because the spacing is changed. if change check NC on the gray bg also
01:31:162 (6,7) - more smooth
img
03:43:842 (3,5) - ^
img

Heaven
03:41:045 (2) - ctrl+g

nice map. good luck! :D
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
Nyquill

Zhengster wrote:

03:36:111 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow imo
There used to be an image here but I suck at being charles so.

While ctrl-G would also flow, it would require the player to bring back the cursor in a circle motion (then go to the right for that). The pattern I have now is a bit more effortless as its quite literally just a curve towards the next note since the slider doesn't have to be played all the way through to be hit.

Everything else was done though.

P A N wrote:

Nyquill's Insane
00:47:863 (2,4) - try this smoothly to play
img
01:31:162 (6,7) - more smooth
img
03:43:842 (3,5) - ^
img
For flow, see above explaination
For the reasons why I did this, the variations are basically to either a. fit the music or b. bring a bit of flavor into the map :P

Everything was done from Broccoly's mod, except for the pattern change for the anti jumps I did something a little different.

http://puu.sh/2WoYH.zip
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Snepif

Zhengster wrote:

M4M from your queue, take them as suggestions :DD

[General]
Bit rate of music is 320 kbps, this is over the limit of 192 ): wat
There is a file missing in normal mode, white.jpg fixed
The fille of the mapset is over 10 Mb without video :/ fixed

[Easy]
The star rating is slightly over 3, I think it's mostly ok, but I'm not sure :/
Good map overall, but I'm iffy about the 1/2 sliders, such as 01:39:499 (1) and 01:41:973 (1), maybe you should replace with circles? im gonna consider it

[Heaven]
Turn on letterbox during breaks to keep consistent with the other diffs its already off like the others
there are several unsnapped object ends fixed
00:44:756 (4,5,6,7) - adjust for smoother curve? or you can make them straight fixed
00:58:005 (4,5) - move to the left so that (3) doesn't overlap (5)? i think its okay like this
02:33:622 (4,5,6,7) - maybe adjust them so that they're in a line parallel to 02:33:313 (3) i like this way
03:33:004 (5,6,7,8,1) - uneven spacing in the stream >< fixd

[Hard]
haha, almost nothing to say ;__;
02:52:653 (4,5) - adjust in a diagonal line? no D:
Thanks a lot

Broccoly wrote:

hello~ trying for m4m
The map's so good! my mod will be just suggestions

[General]
Turn on Epilepsy warning? not sure about this one o.O ill ask other ppl

[Heaven]
00:53:416 (7,1) - it feels a bit far to hit in first play. I know you'll want to maintain the shape, so how about revolving 7 a bit counter-clockwise around 6, so that 7's tail will be closer to 1's head. uh i see your point but i dont think it's really that necessary
00:58:519 (6) - (nazi) you use several sliders shaped like this throughout the diff. How about adding one more control-point and make it look smoother?
yes
01:48:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - so good lol ty :)
01:52:798 (7,1) - this one should be fine imo cuz there was a pattern like this before..

heavenly.

[Hard]
01:48:158 (6,1) - might be a bit far to hit? cuz players expect a pause like here: 00:49:318 nah but i dont wanna leave an empty space
03:26:200 (2) - ctrl g? flows better i think.. done

[Easy]
03:31:148 (1,2) - (nazi) Better blanket? (2 around 1's head) k
nice

Pro mapset.. have my star... (haven't been throwing stars for a while.. lack of good maps)
good luck! you guys prolly don't need it haha
hope my mod helped a bit :)
thanks a lot :D everyone needs some luck

P A N wrote:

Easy
omg look fine..

Hard
omg good diff

Heaven
03:41:045 (2) - ctrl+g yes

nice map. good luck! :D

thanks~

will give you my mods asap
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi Snepif (:3 」_)=3

From your m4m queue :)


[General]

Mp3 file kpbs 320kbps
change 192kbps please
Nyquill's Insane offet 944 this diff change offet 930


[Easy]

01:12:282 (1,1) In my opinion, this spin can be confusing and difficult for beginners.
Because beginners spin leads to one that can not be mistaken.
02:58:674 (1) I think this slider (3) black 1/2 slider end blacket is better so slider shape change please
SPOILER
03:10:890 (1) I suggested in the shape of the pattern,
change the shape of the slider, you can create a clean look.
SPOILER
03:48:158 (1) hmm.. why this spin end 03:52:411 the sound ends at the white line so this spin move 03:52:488 here
03:28:519 (1) Leave space behind the spin for beginners and a certain delay is required.

[Winber's Normal]

00:16:767 (3,4) hmm.. i suggest this two slider blanket is better
SPOILER
01:38:261 (1,2,3) The flow pattern is not very good, This is pattern change the flow of a more natural hope.
SPOILER
01:50:865 (3,4) I think the slider and the slider (2) to (4) blanket anything better.


[Hard]

00:13:519 (3) In my opinion this is slider remove 1/1 repeat slider is better
00:14:911 add note In this part, you hear the sound of drums.
00:18:469 (1,2) I suggested this beat is recommend
SPOILER
00:26:045 (3) This 1/2 slider awkward beat.. I think that beat this part to put the three notes
00:32:926 (1) hmm.. This is slider repeat remove and slider end add two note?
It is recommended to fit the lyrics to the beat.
01:03:004 (4) This is slider awkward beat. i think 1/1 repeat slider is beat better


[Nyquill's Insane]

00:27:127 (8) This is slider hidden by (6) slider screen i think this slider read really difficult
01:44:911 (2) Your intention? it's bad spacing. i think this note move x:164 y:352 is better
01:53:571 (6,7,8) It is recommended that this pattern is symmetric.
SPOILER
03:09:653 (5) I think this slider (6) slider symmetrical is better shape
03:36:097 (2) This slider is for the natural flow, Ctrl + G is recommended.


[Heaven]

lol nice map i don't this map problem.. orz sorry ;w;





Good luck :D
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