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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 4, 2017 at 3:47:45 PM

Artist: Aiu Rabu
Title: Kani*Do-Luck!
Source: あいうら
Tags: crabs steve jobs apple thighs aiurabu love think nani aiura opening
BPM: 210
Filesize: 3917kb
Play Time: 01:00
Difficulties Available:
  • Crabing (5.84 stars, 249 notes)
  • Easy (1.06 stars, 55 notes)
  • Extra (5.29 stars, 232 notes)
  • Hard (3.16 stars, 174 notes)
  • Insane (4.31 stars, 214 notes)
  • Normal (1.69 stars, 96 notes)

Download: Aiu Rabu - Kani*Do-Luck!
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Crabing - Collab between xChorse and doggo
I mapped evens and I mapped odds









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In General: 00:49:307 - Kiai ends here and begins here 00:56:164 - again




Crabing

I'd lower the AR to 9.3


00:26:878 (4) - Ctrl+G might fit a bit more here

00:29:164 (3) - actually same thing here but here It'd be too hard imo, maybe lower spacing

00:53:307 (1) - Pretty sure NC is not needed

00:57:164 (1,1,2,3) - idk what you did with the NC's here LOL


Extra

00:30:164 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - could higher the Spacing here

00:33:450 (3) - NC?

00:39:878 (5) - ctrl+g

00:51:592 (1) - Unnessecary NC



Insane

00:32:592 (3,4,5,6) - well, I'd suggest NCing each double pair since you did in the other 2 diffs too

00:44:592 (5,1) - Pretty sure this might be hard to read, maybe change~

00:49:307 (1,2) - Why did you do the spacing here so big? The sound doesnt change


Hard

tfw cant mod hards, sorry


Normal

00:20:735 (1) - Why did you not use the same slider like before? (00:17:164 (2) -)


00:33:307 (3) - Tbh Idk if it's ok but I'd make the slider longer to the blue tick 00:33:807 -


Easy

OD goes to 4 Please


00:18:450 (3,4) - I dont have a good feeling about this one. The end of 3 looks in a completly different direction and 4 starts somewhere else, I don't like that tbh

00:47:021 (1) - Unnessecary NC

00:48:021 (1) - ^

00:49:307 (3) - NC

00:50:450 (1) - no NC


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ye boii


In General: 00:49:307 - Kiai ends here and begins here 00:56:164 - again done




Crabing

I'd lower the AR to 9.3 9,5 is ok for this bpm and diff


00:26:878 (4) - Ctrl+G might fit a bit more here Want these sounds 00:26:735 (3,4) - 00:23:021 (1) - and etc to have similar flow so current is better imo

00:29:164 (3) - actually same thing here but here It'd be too hard imo, maybe lower spacing Changed it to be more like the previous one

00:53:307 (1) - Pretty sure NC is not needed On a stack and new vocal section so it should be there i think

00:57:164 (1,1,2,3) - idk what you did with the NC's here LOLoh shit


Extra

00:30:164 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - could higher the Spacing here stacked with notes under them ;_;

00:33:450 (3) - NC? ye

00:39:878 (5) - ctrl+g ye

00:51:592 (1) - Unnessecary NC hmm ok



Insane

00:32:592 (3,4,5,6) - well, I'd suggest NCing each double pair since you did in the other 2 diffs too ye

00:44:592 (5,1) - Pretty sure this might be hard to read, maybe change~ changed

00:49:307 (1,2) - Why did you do the spacing here so big? The sound doesnt change 1/1 space between them? idk


Hard

tfw cant mod hards, sorry my hards r just unmoddable xd


Normal

00:20:735 (1) - Why did you not use the same slider like before? (00:17:164 (2) -) Looks prettier owo


00:33:307 (3) - Tbh Idk if it's ok but I'd make the slider longer to the blue tick 00:33:807 - Pretty strong sound on 00:33:735 -


Easy

OD goes to 4 Please


00:18:450 (3,4) - I dont have a good feeling about this one. The end of 3 looks in a completly different direction and 4 starts somewhere else, I don't like that tbh rotated

00:47:021 (1) - Unnessecary NC Removed

00:48:021 (1) - ^ Change of rhythm

00:49:307 (3) - NC done

00:50:450 (1) - no NC done


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General

nice tags LUL

the spread between Normal and Hard is pretty significant though, normal has very few 1/2 patterns yet hard is almost full of 1/2, might want to add a diff in the middle


Easy

00:56:164 - inconsistent kiai with other diffs

00:18:450 (3) - guess there should be a NC since you seem to be NCing every 2 beats
00:33:878 (3) - this would sound better on 00:33:735 - to follow the vocals
00:47:021 (3) - this should be NC just like 00:42:450 (1) - is


Normal

00:02:450 - you could map this rhythm just like you did at 00:04:735 - which follows the instruments better
01:00:164 (4) - you could turn this into 2 1/2 sliders, it's pretty intense and you mapped less important sounds with 1/2 sliders


Hard

so about the ds shifting between 1/1 and 1/2s here, it makes some patterns like 00:15:592 (3,4,1) - dangerously close to each other and could be mistaken for 1/2 rhythms

00:18:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is this rhythm so different from 00:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - which has about the same intensity yet is much denser? i suggest you follow the second rhythm since it follows the music better
00:35:592 (1,2,3,4) - so this is the only time you have this type of pattern for those lyrics in the whole kiai time yet 00:40:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 00:44:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - are the exact same, you should at least either make all 3 the same thing or make another type of pattern for more diversity
00:40:450 (2,3) - that's a really large jump for a hard diff at this bpm tbh, you could try to place 3,4 closer to 1,2 so the spacing is bigger between 00:41:021 (4,1) - which would make more sense, though it should still be smaller than what you currently have imo
00:48:735 (5,6) - again those are painfully simple although this is supposedly the most important part of the song, what about this rhythm?
00:57:164 (1) - 00:58:878 (1) - i believe those should not be NCs? they feel really out of place compared to what you did in other diffs


Insane

00:09:878 (3,4) - these don't feel like they should be as spaced compared to 00:09:307 (1,2) - as they're only slightly more intense
00:15:307 (2,3) - you could turn these into a 1/2 slider since they sound the same as 00:15:021 (1) -
00:15:592 (4,5) - i don't really see why those are stacked on 2 and 3 since they're barely similar
00:50:450 (1,2,3,4) - this looks kinda messy :( you could make another square
00:58:164 (5) - you could unstack this since the pitch isn't the same as 00:57:878 (3,4) -


Extra

00:35:592 (1,3) - you could make those the smae distance as 00:35:736 (2,4,6,8) - to look like a hexgrid pattern? would be neater imo
00:37:307 (3,4) - these should be the same slider, as you usually do
00:51:592 (3,1) - probably swap those NCs since you NC'd 00:50:450 (1) -
01:00:021 (3,4,5,6,7) - you could move this to stack 6 on the sliderend


Crabing

00:06:307 (3,4) - these should be less spaced than 00:06:592 (5,6,7) - which are stronger sounds
00:10:450 (1) - i think this would make a much smoother movement if it was ctrl+g'd
00:31:021 (1,2,3) - how about making these different since you NC'd 1? or if you don't want to change it, how about removing the NC on 1?
00:53:307 (1) - this shouldn't be NC'd for consistency with your other diffs and because this isn't really significant as a sound
01:00:021 (3,4,5,6,7) - can you move this a bit so 7 doesn't overlap 2?

good luck!
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General

nice tags hehe xd

the spread between Normal and Hard is pretty significant though, normal has very few 1/2 patterns yet hard is almost full of 1/2, might want to add a diff in the middle Kinda high bpm song so idk if that would help since the gap between hard diff would still be big


Easy

00:56:164 - inconsistent kiai with other diffs o ye forgot to update this

00:18:450 (3) - guess there should be a NC since you seem to be NCing every 2 beats yeah
00:33:878 (3) - this would sound better on 00:33:735 - to follow the vocals want to avoid 1/2s on easy so gonna keep current one for playability/readability
00:47:021 (3) - this should be NC just like 00:42:450 (1) - is yup


Normal

00:02:450 - you could map this rhythm just like you did at 00:04:735 - which follows the instruments better hmm i guess
01:00:164 (4) - you could turn this into 2 1/2 sliders, it's pretty intense and you mapped less important sounds with 1/2 sliders put a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle instead


Hard

so about the ds shifting between 1/1 and 1/2s here, it makes some patterns like 00:15:592 (3,4,1) - dangerously close to each other and could be mistaken for 1/2 rhythms it's consistent throughout the whole difficulty so I'm not sure that's a huge problem

00:18:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is this rhythm so different from 00:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - which has about the same intensity yet is much denser? i suggest you follow the second rhythm since it follows the music better the 1/2s aren't as distinct inbetween these 00:19:592 (3,4,5,6) - but they're stronger in the following pattern which is why I mapped it that way
00:35:592 (1,2,3,4) - so this is the only time you have this type of pattern for those lyrics in the whole kiai time yet 00:40:164 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 00:44:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - are the exact same, you should at least either make all 3 the same thing or make another type of pattern for more diversity
00:40:450 (2,3) - that's a really large jump for a hard diff at this bpm tbh, you could try to place 3,4 closer to 1,2 so the spacing is bigger between 00:41:021 (4,1) - which would make more sense, though it should still be smaller than what you currently have imo Changed along with the one above
00:48:735 (5,6) - again those are painfully simple although this is supposedly the most important part of the song, what about this rhythm? want to have this part way less dense with notes because the entire kiai was really dense
00:57:164 (1) - 00:58:878 (1) - i believe those should not be NCs? they feel really out of place compared to what you did in other diffs changed


Insane

00:09:878 (3,4) - these don't feel like they should be as spaced compared to 00:09:307 (1,2) - as they're only slightly more intense They flow really well so I don't think it's an issue even though they're only a bit more intense.
00:15:307 (2,3) - you could turn these into a 1/2 slider since they sound the same as 00:15:021 (1) - Changed
00:15:592 (4,5) - i don't really see why those are stacked on 2 and 3 since they're barely similar changed with the one above
00:50:450 (1,2,3,4) - this looks kinda messy :( you could make another square Sure
00:58:164 (5) - you could unstack this since the pitch isn't the same as 00:57:878 (3,4) - Fits well in the pattern though, don't really want to change that :x


Extra

00:35:592 (1,3) - you could make those the smae distance as 00:35:736 (2,4,6,8) - to look like a hexgrid pattern? would be neater imo they're in 2 hexagrids that are used to stack/blanket notes in the next section so I can't change it sadly :/
00:37:307 (3,4) - these should be the same slider, as you usually do yup
00:51:592 (3,1) - probably swap those NCs since you NC'd 00:50:450 (1) - uh okay but I'm keeping 00:52:021 (1) - NCed because of SV changes
01:00:021 (3,4,5,6,7) - you could move this to stack 6 on the sliderend looks better right now imo


Crabing

00:06:307 (3,4) - these should be less spaced than 00:06:592 (5,6,7) - which are stronger sounds okay
00:10:450 (1) - i think this would make a much smoother movement if it was ctrl+g'd intentional
00:31:021 (1,2,3) - how about making these different since you NC'd 1? or if you don't want to change it, how about removing the NC on 1? removed NC
00:53:307 (1) - this shouldn't be NC'd for consistency with your other diffs and because this isn't really significant as a sound changed to hitcircles and kept the NC to keep it somewhat consistent with extra
01:00:021 (3,4,5,6,7) - can you move this a bit so 7 doesn't overlap 2? i scaled it because i want more pp

good luck!


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Easy
00:56:164 (1,1) - I think 3/2 sliders would fit better in this section to fit the music.


Normal
It looks good but i think there is too much overlapping.


Hard
idk looks good i guess.


Insane
00:59:735 (7) - NC to be consistent


Extra
00:05:735 (1,4) - From what i see from the beginning, there is a pattern of "putting objects close to a stack but not quite", so why are these stacked?
00:43:592 (1,2,1,2,3) - a bit hard to read


Crabing
00:43:592 (1,2,1,2,3) - thing i said in extra


Source: あいうら

Nice mapset, gl! :D Sorry I wasn't able to give out that big of a mod
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Easy
00:56:164 (1,1) - I think 3/2 sliders would fit better in this section to fit the music. This pattern was already used earlier so I want to use it again to not surprise the player at the end since it's an easy


Normal
It looks good but i think there is too much overlapping. yeah but it's unavoidable because if i increase spacing it's just gonna be a hard diff


Hard
idk looks good i guess.


Insane
00:59:735 (7) - NC to be consistent done


Extra
00:05:735 (1,4) - From what i see from the beginning, there is a pattern of "putting objects close to a stack but not quite", so why are these stacked? changed
00:43:592 (1,2,1,2,3) - a bit hard to read intended


Crabing
00:43:592 (1,2,1,2,3) - thing i said in extra intended


Source: あいうら o k

Nice mapset, gl! :D Sorry I wasn't able to give out that big of a mod


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That's all I could really find, lower diffs looks very clean to me.

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That's all I could really find, lower diffs looks very clean to me.

Good Luck!


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hi shitty mod man here,,

Insane
00:49:307 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - wouldn't a lower slider velocity feel good here

Extra

00:26:450 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks awkward to me, maybe it'd look better if 3 was moved like this? http://i.imgur.com/oFX2s8Q.jpg
00:36:735 (1) - the placement of this felt weird to me too, probably because of the move from large spacing to a small one, i'd move it probably something like this http://i.imgur.com/ijdk1vL.jpg

Crabing

00:08:450 (2,3) - this is the only time a stack like this appears in the song
00:30:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm maybe it would be neat if spacing increased between these here
00:33:450 (1) - moving this note like this http://i.imgur.com/6IHBzZx.jpg could give a more builduppish feel
00:33:592 (2,3) - maybe a rhythm like this would be better? http://i.imgur.com/SBfXx1n.png
00:43:592 (1,2,1,2,3) - i think spacing could be longer here since this is the last diff
00:53:307 (1,2) - maybe ctrl+g would be neat here

hopefully i didnt fuck anything up xd

good luck! :)
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hi shitty mod man here,,

Insane
00:49:307 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - wouldn't a lower slider velocity feel good here Don't wanna have any sv changes in a 4* diff because the bpm is already high

Extra

00:26:450 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks awkward to me, maybe it'd look better if 3 was moved like this? http://i.imgur.com/oFX2s8Q.jpg hmm the placement of the notes are really nice imo so keeping it for now
00:36:735 (1) - the placement of this felt weird to me too, probably because of the move from large spacing to a small one, i'd move it probably something like this http://i.imgur.com/ijdk1vL.jpg every repeat has smaller spacing and is mapped with sliders to reset the more intense cursor movement from the jumps but I can see where you're coming from

Crabing

00:08:450 (2,3) - this is the only time a stack like this appears in the song changed
00:30:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm maybe it would be neat if spacing increased between these here doesn't really intensify imo so keeping it as it is
00:33:450 (1) - moving this note like this http://i.imgur.com/6IHBzZx.jpg could give a more builduppish feel hmm why not
00:33:592 (2,3) - maybe a rhythm like this would be better? http://i.imgur.com/SBfXx1n.png I want to keep it as 1/2 sliders in all diffs
00:43:592 (1,2,1,2,3) - i think spacing could be longer here since this is the last diff changed
00:53:307 (1,2) - maybe ctrl+g would be neat here why not

hopefully i didnt fuck anything up xd

good luck! :)



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