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01:03:047 - i think the whole part before this point lacks structure, maybe you should map that as slider art?
00:29:961 - starting form there fro example you can add a slider arts to emphasize the background voice line
00:40:933 - and here too
i mean all this stuff you mapped just doesnt fit to that music as the whole part
just like you did in this part 02:33:887 -
02:05:276 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think 02:05:618 (3,4) - shud have smaller ds in comparison to 1,2 because you got a kicksliders there
so stacking 02:05:618 (3) - with (6) sliderend would be nice
02:12:647 (3,1) - also this ds seems weird
the sliders shud be used to catch the cursor after the jumps, tho you are decreasing the ds for some reason,
maybe this wud work
http://puu.sh/sumO7/f5496dd9c7.jpg03:17:961 (1,2) - you can rotate sliderends to keep the flow more consistent
03:19:847 (4) - ^
03:50:018 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - this structure can be improved slightly. 03:50:704 (1) - can be moved to the right
03:57:390 (2,3) - better stack them
04:01:161 (6) - you can rotate it accordingly
http://puu.sh/sun9W/d9ed94f153.jpg04:03:733 (6,7) - stack them maybe
04:06:476 (6,1) - ^
04:14:704 (5,6) - ^
04:17:447 (5,1) - ^
04:40:418 - it has no soiund to emphasize
04:40:590 - to 04:40:847 - must be a reverse burai slider
05:24:476 (1,2) - they can be parallel
05:30:990 (1) - this shape can be improved
05:40:590 (2) - ^
http://puu.sh/sunFa/e3754d1678.jpg05:48:133 (2) - sliderend off the screen - unrankable
06:10:247 (3,4,5,6,7) - this star can be improved as well,
06:10:761 (6) - 48 56
06:10:590 (5) - 292 216
06:10:933 (7) - 136 336
06:11:104 (1) - tho this must be inbetween the 06:10:590 (5) - and 06:10:247 (3) - slider end
06:16:076 (7,1) - this must be wider like this
http://puu.sh/sunZR/349829406e.jpg06:20:704 (3,4,5) - this angle is very stressful to play
i wud suggest this
http://puu.sh/suo5Y/76effba398.jpg06:26:533 (4,5,6) - why u increasing the distance lol
06:27:904 (3,4,5,6) - ^
06:39:047 (6) - i wud suggest to stack it with s-end instead
07:14:704 - i wud suggest this
http://puu.sh/suok2/3bac2533e5.jpg well you can increase the distance in my case, but the way you put these jumps is weird in my opinion
07:27:561 (1,2,3,4) - this triangle is weird, maybe u shud stack 1 with 3
stay strong!