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Kinshara

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-06T18:28:57+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, July 06, 2014 at 1:14:06 PM

Artist: Primary
Title: Kokoro no Yakusoku
Tags: Rotate yuiko Kuron-Kun Kibbleru Garven yuikonnu Meis Clauson
BPM: 150
Filesize: 7087kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:

Garven's Normal (2.38 stars, 153 notes)
Hard (2.75 stars, 178 notes)
Kibbleru's Easy (1.2 stars, 69 notes)
Kokoro no Collab (3.81 stars, 212 notes)
Normal (1.61 stars, 108 notes)

Download: Primary - Kokoro no Yakusoku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
FIRST RANKED MAP! \(^.^)/ ENJOY!

THANK YOU MMzz AND ztrot!!

Kibbleru's Easy by Kibbleru
Normal by me
Garven's Normal by Garven
Hard by me
Collab by me, Kuron-Kun, and Kibbleru

Collab with the KKK (Kinshara, Kuron-Kun, and Kibbleru)!

Kokoro no Collab

00:14:924 - 00:35:524 - Kinshara (me)
00:35:724 - 01:02:924 - Kuron-Kun
01:05:324 - 01:34:924 - Kibbleru

A big thanks to Garven for the new mp3 & GD, Kibbleru for GD & collab, Ringating for the improved bg, Frostings for teaching me how to hitsound, and Kuron-Kun for hitsounding the map set previously & collab, and all the people who modded this map! You guys rock!

About this Song:

This is a short version of the complete song sung by yuiko/ yuikonnu (head of the Primary doujin circle).
Click here to listen to the complete song!
Click here to go to Primary's website!

Primary o sasaete kudasai! Arigatou gozaimasu!

Last edited by Kinshara 2014-07-17T18:45:26+00:00, edited 95 times in total.

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-06-07T03:57:12+00:00

from my bg modding queue:

I managed to find a high res version of your bg to work with, then I smoothed out compression artifacts on all but the hair (because on the hair would have lost its corduroy-like texture if I had used the same filter). On the hair I instead added a motion blur effect that runs parallel to the texture lines, thus preserving the texture and, imo, looking kinda cool (plus it makes sense since it looks like she is falling). Anyway, here is the new bg:

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Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-07T04:29:34+00:00

Oh wow!

Thank you so much! Words cannot describe my utter gratitude for your work!

Continue being awesome~

Last edited by Kinshara 2014-06-17T06:04:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Kihhou 2014-06-08T18:04:52+00:00

posts that improve your mapset (that is not a GD) should be given kudosu o: you should really kudosu ringating for the work he's done for your background~ It will also give your map +1 priority to help it get recognition. just click the "give kudosu" button under ringating's post~!

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-08T18:12:13+00:00

Oh okay, I didn't know it applied to background improvements too. o;

Thank you so much!

Last edited by Kinshara 2014-06-17T06:04:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-08T22:00:24+00:00

easy gd done

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Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-08T22:25:45+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:

easy gd done

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You're so hot~ Thanks a bunch, baby.

Last edited by Kinshara 2014-06-17T06:05:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-06-09T01:31:29+00:00

Kihhou wrote:
posts that improve your mapset (that is not a GD) should be given kudosu o: you should really kudosu ringating for the work he's done for your background~ It will also give your map +1 priority to help it get recognition. just click the "give kudosu" button under ringating's post~!

Kinshara wrote:
Oh okay, I didn't know it applied to background improvements too. o;

Thank you so much! ♥

but in all seriousness, I do appreciate the kudosu. Thanks Kihhou and Kinshara

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-06-11T22:07:06+00:00

Kibbleru's Easy

at 00:38:524 (2) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9pq56/2bbcd1879c.jpg
00:44:924 (2) - shorten to 1/2 slider, and move it away from the 3 circle or add something in between (p.s. you can also blanket with 00:43:724 (1) - )
at 00:51:324 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/9pqgh/f168fe502f.jpg
move 00:53:324 (1) - up a bit, (is it just me or is it off the screen?)

Normal

00:21:324 (1) - 2,3 could be blanketed better
for 00:42:124 (4) - try something like http://puu.sh/9pqvV/cec7f9ffe3.jpg
00:47:724 (2) - pretty low on the screen, move it up a bit
00:51:724 (4) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9pqFL/e48d6dd10e.jpg
move 00:53:124 (1) - up a tick ( the red one)
move 00:58:124 (3) - like this : (placement wise, not timing) http://puu.sh/9pqOW/2034a3d91e.jpg
01:23:724 (4) - move up (placement)
01:30:124 (7) - and 01:30:924 (8) - doesn't seem like 2 repeats are necessary try changing it, in my opinion i would do : http://puu.sh/9pr2T/febd6f91d0.jpg

Hard

lower the AR by 1 or 2
move 00:19:924 (5) - onto the 6 slider http://puu.sh/9pr8I/5fb0bcc0db.jpg
00:32:924 (5) - curve less
00:48:724 (6) - overlaps 00:48:924 (7) - in a weird way, move 6 up a bit
this is really specific but move the bottom of 01:01:324 (4) - like a tiny tiny bit to the right so it looks better and doesn/t overlap with 00:59:724 (1) -
01:03:724 (2) - 3,4,5 move them a tiny bit farther apart
add circle after 01:09:324 (1) -
01:10:924 (4) - ^
01:15:724 (1) - ^

overall really good beatmap, good luck ~

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-11T22:27:34+00:00

konoshin69 wrote:
Kibbleru's Easy

at 00:38:524 (2) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9pq56/2bbcd1879c.jpg then i'd be missing the clap
00:44:924 (2) - shorten to 1/2 slider, and move it away from the 3 circle or add something in between (p.s. you can also blanket with 00:43:724 (1) - ) ^
at 00:51:324 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/9pqgh/f168fe502f.jpg ^
move 00:53:324 (1) - up a bit, (is it just me or is it off the screen?) Do not check off screen objects in editor mode. Look in test play mode (f5)

overall really good beatmap, good luck ~ ty 4 mod

fixed an ncing issue and added hitsounding volumes

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Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-12T03:08:28+00:00

konoshin69 wrote:
Normal

00:21:324 (1) - 2,3 could be blanketed better - I don't think that's possible because 2 is a bent slider.
for 00:42:124 (4) - try something like http://puu.sh/9pqvV/cec7f9ffe3.jpg - I want to get the drum sound
00:47:724 (2) - pretty low on the screen, move it up a bit - fixed~
00:51:724 (4) - try something like this http://puu.sh/9pqFL/e48d6dd10e.jpg - I want to get the drum sound
move 00:53:124 (1) - up a tick ( the red one) - noooo
move 00:58:124 (3) - like this : (placement wise, not timing) http://puu.sh/9pqOW/2034a3d91e.jpg - noooooo
01:23:724 (4) - move up (placement) - fixed~
01:30:124 (7) - and 01:30:924 (8) - doesn't seem like 2 repeats are necessary try changing it, in my opinion i would do : http://puu.sh/9pr2T/febd6f91d0.jpg - well i want the drum sounds haha

Hard

lower the AR by 1 or 2 - I think 7 is perfect
move 00:19:924 (5) - onto the 6 slider http://puu.sh/9pr8I/5fb0bcc0db.jpg - I was intending to an anti-jump
00:32:924 (5) - curve less - it fits the curves of the other sliders
00:48:724 (6) - overlaps 00:48:924 (7) - in a weird way, move 6 up a bit - fixed~
this is really specific but move the bottom of 01:01:324 (4) - like a tiny tiny bit to the right so it looks better and doesn/t overlap with 00:59:724 (1) - wait what?
01:03:724 (2) - 3,4,5 move them a tiny bit farther apart - i want to emphasize the jumps in the next section
add circle after 01:09:324 (1) - don't hear anything
01:10:924 (4) - ^ will look into it
01:15:724 (1) - ^ don't hear anything

overall really good beatmap, good luck ~

Thank you for the mod!

Last edited by Kinshara 2014-06-17T06:05:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-12T19:50:30+00:00

yooo update my map pls D:

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-06-12T21:28:30+00:00

Hey~ Modding queue.

[Easy]

- 01:03:124 (1) - start it on 01:03:724, the end is fine. Give the beginners some breathing space

Not much to say, pretty good.

[Normal]

- No hitsounds yet?
- 00:26:924 (4) - improve blanket
- 00:29:324 (3) - ^
- 00:32:924 (3) - ^
- 01:03:724 (2) - ^
- 01:13:324 (3) - ^
- 01:30:124 (7,8) - Maybe a bit too confusing, consider remapping it.

I'm cold, good as well.

[Hard]

- 00:30:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider mapping it similar to this: http://puu.sh/9qO5W/0eb792f944.jpg

Get this ranked already. Here, have a star. N-Not that I want to give it, though :\

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-12T23:20:07+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
Hey~ Modding queue.

[Easy]

- 01:03:124 (1) - start it on 01:03:724, the end is fine. Give the beginners some breathing space i think this is fine tbh, you're holding it down anyway o-o, however, if i get any more comments about this i will drag both spinners to the next white tick

Not much to say, pretty good.

Get this ranked already. Here, have a star. N-Not that I want to give it, though :\ moe~

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-13T15:52:10+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
Hey~ Modding queue.

[Normal]

- No hitsounds yet? lol added
- 00:26:924 (4) - improve blanket done~
- 00:29:324 (3) - ^ done~
- 00:32:924 (3) - ^ done~
- 01:03:724 (2) - ^ done~
- 01:13:324 (3) - ^ done~
- 01:30:124 (7,8) - Maybe a bit too confusing, consider remapping it. didn't remap necessarily, just changed the orientation of the sliders o;

I'm cold, good as well.

[Hard]

- 00:30:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider mapping it similar to this: http://puu.sh/9qO5W/0eb792f944.jpg - I tried the antijump, but it's awkward without a strong beat :c

Get this ranked already. Here, have a star. N-Not that I want to give it, though :\ So cute, thank you so much~

Thank you for the mod!

Last edited by Kinshara 2014-06-17T06:06:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kibbleru

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5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-14T20:32:51+00:00

do you even jumps?

collab

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Ajitama

9 posts

Joined September 2013

Ajitama 2014-06-14T23:39:10+00:00

Kinshara great job on all these maps! I love all of them

something i would change though
01:30:124 (1) - the jumps here seem a bit awkward to me...maybe it's just because I don't really see jumps like this
maybe like this

It's up to you if you want to change it. I think the map would get ranked either way lol
Again awesome job on these maps!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-17T03:17:30+00:00

Ajitama wrote:
Kinshara great job on all these maps! I love all of them

something i would change though
01:30:124 (1) - the jumps here seem a bit awkward to me...maybe it's just because I don't really see jumps like this
maybe like this

It's up to you if you want to change it. I think the map would get ranked either way lol
Again awesome job on these maps!

yeah, these jumps arent used that often, but i think it works for the buildup

Frostings

913 posts

Joined May 2013

Frostings 2014-06-17T21:37:06+00:00

[General]
add Kibbleru and Kuron-Kun(?) to tags

[Kibbleru's Easy]
use SC:1 for timing points? sliderslide mehhhhh

00:25:324 - mmm this sound is so big
00:34:124 (1) - ~~one grid right for blanket~~ actually make it curve like this 00:32:124 (2) -
00:37:324 (1,2) - nazi -- fix this blanket better like previous
00:46:524 (3) - sounds kinda weird maybe try drum sample with no additions
00:52:924 (3) - ^
00:56:524 (1,2) - nazi blanket
00:59:324 (3) -
01:07:724 (3,1) - blanket better
01:12:524 (1) - normal on tail

[Normal]
00:26:924 (4) - clap here sounds nice
00:39:724 (4) - also here maybe clap on head and remove clap on tail
00:40:524 (1) - remove whistle on the slider body (unless this is intentional...?)
00:46:124 (5) - clap on head instead of tail
00:46:924 (1) - remove whistle on body
00:52:524 (5) - same thing as before, also you're missing drum clap
00:58:924 (4) - ^
01:05:324 (6,7) - these claps don't sound very good.. try a lower volume normal sample
01:18:124 (4,5) - maybe put clap on (4) head, and remove from tail and (5)
01:24:524 (5) - clap on head
01:26:524 (2) - maybe remove this clap on tail.. doesn't fit well
01:30:124 (7,8) - don't you think these claps are loud? maybe remove some

[Hard]
01:30:124 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is a huuuuuge spike in difficulty...

I ran out of time at the end ...
flow-wise Hard is good except for 00:35:724 (5,6,7) - which plays a little weird
also there's a little (probably unintentional) jump in difficulty at:
00:39:724 (4,5,6,7) -
00:45:324 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
00:58:924 (6,7,8,9,1) -
but nothing too bad, except for the jump at the end mentioned before

[Kokoro no Collab]
01:25:324 (1) - snap 1/2 .. plays really strangely and doesn't sound very good
kiai is 2hard4me please make less jumps ;w; some of the jumps don't suit the song which is not what you want to do

finish hitsounds ~~

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-18T01:48:20+00:00

Frostings wrote:
[General]
add Kibbleru and Kuron-Kun(?) to tags fixed

[Normal]
00:26:924 (4) - clap here sounds nice
00:39:724 (4) - also here maybe clap on head and remove clap on tail
00:40:524 (1) - remove whistle on the slider body (unless this is intentional...?)
00:46:124 (5) - clap on head instead of tail
00:46:924 (1) - remove whistle on body
00:52:524 (5) - same thing as before, also you're missing drum clap
00:58:924 (4) - ^
01:05:324 (6,7) - these claps don't sound very good.. try a lower volume normal sample
01:18:124 (4,5) - maybe put clap on (4) head, and remove from tail and (5)
01:24:524 (5) - clap on head
01:26:524 (2) - maybe remove this clap on tail.. doesn't fit well
01:30:124 (7,8) - don't you think these claps are loud? maybe remove some

all of the above fixed

[Hard]
01:30:124 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is a huuuuuge spike in difficulty... for emphasis

I ran out of time at the end ...
flow-wise Hard is good except for 00:35:724 (5,6,7) - which plays a little weird fixed
also there's a little (probably unintentional) jump in difficulty at:
00:39:724 (4,5,6,7) - for emphasis
00:45:324 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - changed the pattern, but jumps still there for emphasis
00:58:924 (6,7,8,9,1) - for emphasis
but nothing too bad, except for the jump at the end mentioned before

finish hitsounds ~~Will do!

Thank you for mod!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-18T02:08:07+00:00

Frostings wrote:
[General]
add Kibbleru and Kuron-Kun(?) to tags

[Kibbleru's Easy]
use SC:1 for timing points? sliderslide mehhhhh

00:25:324 - mmm this sound is so big ~~so is my wang when i look at porn whats ur point?~~
00:34:124 (1) - ~~one grid right for blanket~~ actually make it curve like this 00:32:124 (2) - ... U'd better be happy im not No Dap
00:37:324 (1,2) - nazi -- fix this blanket better like previous
00:46:524 (3) - sounds kinda weird maybe try drum sample with no additions fixed all hitsounds
00:52:924 (3) - ^
00:56:524 (1,2) - nazi blanket
00:59:324 (3) -
01:07:724 (3,1) - blanket better
01:12:524 (1) - normal on tail

[Kokoro no Collab]
01:25:324 (1) - snap 1/2 .. plays really strangely and doesn't sound very good why?
kiai is 2hard4me please make less jumps ;w; some of the jumps don't suit the song which is not what you want to do don't make fun of my jumpy style ;w;

finish hitsounds ~~

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Btw made my last jump a bit easier on collab diff

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_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

777 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2014-06-18T08:59:16+00:00

M4M req,

and my English is poor, if I make mistakes or something you cannot understand, you can pm me

Kibbleru's Easy

I can't find any problems - - It's really good! So, I give some suggestions

00:50:124 - this slider's shape it's not match with next slider, change it into curve?
01:31:324 - cancel the slider, use circle?

Normal

00:30:924 (1) - overlap this slider's beginning to 00:29:324 (3) - this slider's ending?
01:11:724 (5) - odd shape

Hard

00:19:524 (4,5) - the overlap is't very nice
00:22:924 (5) - kind of confusing
00:46:924 (1) - up the snap
00:59:724 (1) - ^
01:31:124 (8) - change the color? It's a new part

Kokoro no Collab

00:42:124 (5) - overlap it with 00:40:324 (6) -
00:47:524 (2,3) - overlap?
00:52:424 (1) - don't slider, use 2 circles?
00:56:124 (8,1) - overlap?
00:58:524 (5,1) - ^ So I think maybe this is your thorough arrangement
01:09:124 (6) - this position is not nice
01:25:324 (1,2) - ?? I don't know

I really think this is a nice map, I really can‘t find anywhere that is't good.
There are my personal views, so I don't know can my thought helps you?

NICE SONG!

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-06-18T16:08:35+00:00

_Stan wrote:
M4M req,

and my English is poor, if I make mistakes or something you cannot understand, you can pm me

Kibbleru's Easy

I can't find any problems - - It's really good! So, I give some suggestions ty

00:50:124 - this slider's shape it's not match with next slider, change it into curve? i think it fits o-o
01:31:324 - cancel the slider, use circle? mm no i want the symmetry

Kokoro no Collab

01:09:124 (6) - this position is not nice why?
01:25:324 (1,2) - ?? I don't know lol?

I really think this is a nice map, I really can‘t find anywhere that is't good.
There are my personal views, so I don't know can my thought helps you?

NICE SONG!

@Kinshara PLEASE UPDATE MY STUFF ALRDY D:

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-18T19:18:31+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
@Kinshara PLEASE UPDATE MY STUFF ALRDY D:

ok ok

but really calm dafuq down fggt <3

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-06-18T19:38:21+00:00

_Stan wrote:
M4M req,

and my English is poor, if I make mistakes or something you cannot understand, you can pm me

Normal

00:30:924 (1) - overlap this slider's beginning to 00:29:324 (3) - this slider's ending? done
01:11:724 (5) - odd shape i like it .3.

Hard

00:19:524 (4,5) - the overlap is't very nice - it's called an antijump
00:22:924 (5) - kind of confusing - fixed
00:46:924 (1) - up the snap - ??
00:59:724 (1) - ^ - ??
01:31:124 (8) - change the color? It's a new part - well New combos are made based upon the music; 8 is in the middle of a measure, so a NC wouldn't make sense! ):

I really think this is a nice map, I really can‘t find anywhere that is't good.
There are my personal views, so I don't know can my thought helps you?

NICE SONG!

Thank you for the mod!

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2014-06-18T19:54:54+00:00

_Stan wrote:
M4M req,

Kokoro no Collab

00:42:124 (5) - overlap it with 00:40:324 (6) - Ok
00:47:524 (2,3) - overlap? No, it's part of my mapping style
00:52:424 (1) - don't slider, use 2 circles? I prefer the slider
00:56:124 (8,1) - overlap? Same as above
00:58:524 (5,1) - ^ So I think maybe this is your thorough arrangement Yeah

I really think this is a nice map, I really can‘t find anywhere that is't good.
There are my personal views, so I don't know can my thought helps you?

NICE SONG!

Thank you!

http://puu.sh/9zqTz/397f4f8ddf.osu owo

Lapis-

407 posts

Joined June 2011

Lapis- 2014-06-21T20:30:12+00:00

M4M deal

Easy

00:26:324 (2) - Perhaps move this a tick forward and remove the repeat? Sounds better in my opinion.
00:28:924 - Circle here? I think this vocal is pretty major and shouldn't be left out here.
00:49:724 - ^
00:01:924 - ^

Normal

Don't really have any suggestions to improve this one, fine how it is imo.

Hard

00:19:524 (4,5) - Not a fan of the offbeat stack here. A slider might be more effective and a bit more intuitive to play.
00:20:124 (6) - I think this slider isn't very well designed. I'd look at experimenting a bit more with it as its just visually unappealing to me.
00:21:324 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this pattern. The stack feels unintutive to me. Not quite sure what you could do here instead with how this section is designed, but just take it into consideration. I think something better could be done for this section. Maybe some more spacing + repeat silder + circle might work out as better to play.
01:30:124 (3.4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern causes a pretty unfair difficulty spike at the very end of the map. You should look at maybe making the patterns more simple + including a slider or two. It doesn't add up with the rest of the maps difficulty.

Kokoro no Collab

AR 8.5? interesting choice xd

00:46:024 - 01:06:124 - Why is this part on 5% vol? Doesn't make much sense to do because the rest is 100% and this part of the song doesn't feature any quieter sounds that are mapped to. Would strongly recommend changing this.

00:47:524 (1,2) - You should just stack this circle directly on top of the slider. No real point having it so spaced closely I don't think?
00:52:424 (1) - Convert this silder into a double? Think it'd be funner to play with the spacing following it.
00:56:124 (8,1) Same point as the 1st, stack this circle on the slider
01:30:124 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8) - This pattern is quite unintutive. For a jumpy maps end you could look into using the whole screen rather than just the bottom half in that back and forth. You don't have to increase the spacing but a pattern that uses more of the screen for this jumpy map is a more fitting end to me, imo

Seems like a good set, good luck with this.

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Kibbleru 2014-06-21T20:53:04+00:00

PortalLife wrote:
M4M deal

Easy

00:26:324 (2) - Perhaps move this a tick forward and remove the repeat? Sounds better in my opinion. 3/2 gaps are hard to click to.
00:28:924 - Circle here? I think this vocal is pretty major and shouldn't be left out here. im not trying to follow vocals. and i don't have a good placement for them
00:49:724 - ^ ^
00:01:924 - ^ lol.

Kokoro no Collab

AR 8.5? interesting choice xd

00:46:024 - 01:06:124 - Why is this part on 5% vol? Doesn't make much sense to do because the rest is 100% and this part of the song doesn't feature any quieter sounds that are mapped to. Would strongly recommend changing this.

00:47:524 (1,2) - You should just stack this circle directly on top of the slider. No real point having it so spaced closely I don't think?
00:52:424 (1) - Convert this silder into a double? Think it'd be funner to play with the spacing following it.
00:56:124 (8,1) Same point as the 1st, stack this circle on the slider
01:30:124 (1,2,3,4,6,7,8) - This pattern is quite unintutive. For a jumpy maps end you could look into using the whole screen rather than just the bottom half in that back and forth. You don't have to increase the spacing but a pattern that uses more of the screen for this jumpy map is a more fitting end to me, imo seems fine for me.

Seems like a good set, good luck with this.

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-21T21:07:11+00:00

PortalLife wrote:
M4M deal

Normal

Don't really have any suggestions to improve this one, fine how it is imo. yay

Hard

00:19:524 (4,5) - Not a fan of the offbeat stack here. A slider might be more effective and a bit more intuitive to play. I like it. It's called an antijump.
00:20:124 (6) - I think this slider isn't very well designed. I'd look at experimenting a bit more with it as its just visually unappealing to me. Changed to a wavy slider .3.
00:21:324 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this pattern. The stack feels unintutive to me. Not quite sure what you could do here instead with how this section is designed, but just take it into consideration. I think something better could be done for this section. Maybe some more spacing + repeat silder + circle might work out as better to play. I like it D:
01:30:124 (3.4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern causes a pretty unfair difficulty spike at the very end of the map. You should look at maybe making the patterns more simple + including a slider or two. It doesn't add up with the rest of the maps difficulty. I want to emphasize the strong beats... :/

Seems like a good set, good luck with this.

Thanks for the mod!

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2014-06-21T21:41:35+00:00

PortalLife wrote:
M4M deal

Kokoro no Collab

AR 8.5? interesting choice xd

00:46:024 - 01:06:124 - Why is this part on 5% vol? Doesn't make much sense to do because the rest is 100% and this part of the song doesn't feature any quieter sounds that are mapped to. Would strongly recommend changing this. Because there is no sound there ? (?) Ending a slider on a big white tick is not that 'exciting' I want to put a 3/4 slider with a 5% volume on the end and a note right after the slider to emphasize the beat.

00:47:524 (1,2) - You should just stack this circle directly on top of the slider. No real point having it so spaced closely I don't think? Yeah, seems better!
00:52:424 (1) - Convert this silder into a double? Think it'd be funner to play with the spacing following it. I like this slider :c
00:56:124 (8,1) Same point as the 1st, stack this circle on the slider Did different.

Seems like a good set, good luck with this.

Thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/9EdGO.osu

chaee

chaee 2014-06-24T02:32:51+00:00

From:
chaee's queue [NM 2/2] [M4M 2/3] Status: OPEN

I swear i modded this a while ago.

[Easy]
00:30:916 (1,2) - So snuggly >u<

[Normal]

00:22:916 (3,4) - This looks off to me
00:28:516 (2,3) - 3 could make a better blanket with 2 i think. Move up a bit
00:35:716 (3) - Curve maybe?
00:49:316 (4) - Distance snap so the end point makes a blanket with 00:50:116 (1) - imo it would look better

SPOILER

01:01:316 (3,1) - You can stack these better

Ok that's it. Your hard and insane looks fine to me .-.

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-24T02:53:09+00:00

chaee wrote:
From:
chaee's queue [NM 2/2] [M4M 2/3] Status: OPEN

I swear i modded this a while ago.

[Easy]
00:30:916 (1,2) - So snuggly >u<

[Normal]

00:22:916 (3,4) - This looks off to me fixed
00:28:516 (2,3) - 3 could make a better blanket with 2 i think. Move up a bit. fixed
00:35:716 (3) - Curve maybe? I think it'll go off screen... I tried curving before :/
00:49:316 (4) - Distance snap so the end point makes a blanket with 00:50:116 (1) - imo it would look better If i did ds i would have to change everything afterwards; it's just a really tiny distance issue
SPOILER
01:01:316 (3,1) - You can stack these better fixed

Ok that's it. Your hard and insane looks fine to me .-.

Thanks for the mod!

emilia

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emilia 2014-06-24T15:58:34+00:00

Ok GO!

Kibbleru

00:20:516 (3) - You can put this below the slider instead
01:26:116 (2) - You can curve this note a bit more

Nice Easy you have there~ I love your style~

Normal

00:25:316 (2) - You can curve this note more
00:28:516 (2,3) - You can make these 2 notes the same
00:31:716 (2,3) - You can curve them more
00:35:716 (3) - Same^
00:51:516 (3,4) - You can make this go in a more circular formation
01:13:316 (3) - You can curve this more
01:14:916 (5) - You can shift this higher
01:15:716 (1) - Make this blanket the note before
01:19:716 (2) - Ctrl+G this
01:30:116 (7,8) - You don't have to reverse it twice. Once would do. Also, do make them parallel to the slider before

You seem a bit reserved with your style. I like the slider art you have going on~ But the straight sliders can get boring. Not bad!

Hard

00:15:316 (2) - Ctrl+g this
00:24:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance snapping looks kinda confusing
00:29:316 (5) - Use this to lead straight into the next slider instead.
00:48:316 (4,5,6,7) - Make 4 5 6 more triangular
00:53:316 (1) - You can make this blanket the notes before
01:03:716 (2,3,4,5) - You can space them out with the same distance, but its fine like that too
01:30:116 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern at the end can seem a little awkward.

Nice slider techniques you have there! I love the way you blanket your sliders together. Nice style~

Insane

00:20:116 (6) - This should feel better with Ctrl+G
00:34:116 (1) - Please bring back the blankets~ http://puu.sh/9I9CK/5352a57358.jpg
00:39:116 (2) - You can make this parallel to the note before
00:44:516 (3) - Shift this more to the right to blanket the slider before
01:02:916 (1,1) - I find that killing the break here will make the map better

Nice Insane! I love it when slow maps have a 'jumpy' feature to it. Nice~

Pleasant map to mod I must say~ Great work!

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Kibbleru 2014-06-24T19:02:40+00:00

Estellia- wrote:
Ok GO!

Kibbleru
00:20:516 (3) - You can put this below the slider instead i wanted to stack with 00:18:116 (1) - and it would screw up my ds and everything ahh
01:26:116 (2) - You can curve this note a bit more why? owo looks fine to me tbh

Nice Easy you have there~ I love your style~thank you :3

Nice Insane! I love it when slow maps have a 'jumpy' feature to it. Nice~ lmao i think my part is the only jumpy part (kiai)

Pleasant map to mod I must say~ Great work!

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-24T20:21:50+00:00

Estellia- wrote:
Ok GO!

Normal
00:25:316 (2) - You can curve this note more I want to make it look like an extension of the previous slider
00:28:516 (2,3) - You can make these 2 notes the same Done!
00:31:716 (2,3) - You can curve them more ok very slightly though
00:35:716 (3) - Same^ Done!
00:51:516 (3,4) - You can make this go in a more circular formation Not sure what you mean?
01:13:316 (3) - You can curve this more I am trying to blanket it :c
01:14:916 (5) - You can shift this higher I don't understand why?
01:15:716 (1) - Make this blanket the note before i am trying but it looks okay...i can't really blanket precisely because of it being a reverse slider and the slider ball's area doesn't increase at the end...
01:19:716 (2) - Ctrl+G this Love this!
01:30:116 (7,8) - You don't have to reverse it twice. Once would do. Also, do make them parallel to the slider before Well it would be boring if it was just one slider...

You seem a bit reserved with your style. I like the slider art you have going on~ But the straight sliders can get boring. Not bad! I know, it's hard for me to be creative in normal >.< Thank you though!

Hard
00:15:316 (2) - Ctrl+g this I want the DS for this part
00:24:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance snapping looks kinda confusing Not sure what you mean...?
00:29:316 (5) - Use this to lead straight into the next slider instead. I like the overlap though! :<
00:48:316 (4,5,6,7) - Make 4 5 6 more triangular Great idea!
00:53:316 (1) - You can make this blanket the notes before Done!
01:03:716 (2,3,4,5) - You can space them out with the same distance, but its fine like that too I wanted to space them out more as the song got louder
01:30:116 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern at the end can seem a little awkward. I will probably have to change it...any ideas?

Nice slider techniques you have there! I love the way you blanket your sliders together. Nice style~ Thanks!

Insane
00:20:116 (6) - This should feel better with Ctrl+G Done!
00:34:116 (1) - Please bring back the blankets~ http://puu.sh/9I9CK/5352a57358.jpg I didn't have any intention of blanketing :c

Pleasant map to mod I must say~ Great work! Thanks

Thank you so much for the mod! I loved it. :3

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Kibbleru 2014-06-24T22:35:27+00:00

lmao. imo you should be able to have more slider art in normal since you should have longer sliders and such but w/e.

slider art is good but if you have too much it just ruins the flow (hard diff e_e)

/me runs

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-24T22:38:45+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:

lmao. imo you should be able to have more slider art in normal since you should have longer sliders and such but w/e.

slider art is good but if you have too much it just ruins the flow (hard diff e_e)

/me runs

What? Shorter sliders in Normal because of smaller SV...

And hard diff i just might have to remap sigh

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pkk 2014-06-24T23:44:33+00:00

omg i am modding this pls dont change stuff qq

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Kibbleru 2014-06-24T23:54:37+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:

lmao. imo you should be able to have more slider art in normal since you should have longer sliders and such but w/e.

slider art is good but if you have too much it just ruins the flow (hard diff e_e)

/me runs
What? Shorter sliders in Normal because of smaller SV...

And hard diff i just might have to remap sigh

okay i guess it depends on the map haha and hard blah.

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-25T00:01:16+00:00

pkmnyab wrote:
omg i am modding this pls dont change stuff qq

Thanks! I am not making any changes right now lol.

pkk

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pkk 2014-06-25T00:37:22+00:00

CONGRATULATIONS YOU JUST WON $1000000!11!!!1ONE1!1!!!!!
You can pick it up at your local bank, just barge right in and ask them to hand you the money or else~

Nice song. 'soft-hitfinish69' gg

Kibbleru's Easy

00:33:316 (3) - I'd curve this a bit more (move middle point up), maybe it'll look better:
SPOILER
00:29:316 (2) - consider blanketing with 00:27:716 (1) -
SPOILER

Normal

00:16:116 (3,4) - somehow I feel that this would play/look better if you stacked them
00:17:316 (5) - I think this flow is fine, but consider the following to see if the flow can improve:
SPOILER

I think the flow from 00:16:316 (4,5) - definitely feels better this way.
00:27:716 (1) - , 00:30:916 (1) - consider ending both of these 1/2 earlier so that the tail is on a white tick. It sounds like you're mapping the piano or something but it sounds weird to me, considering how your previous 3/4 patterns (00:18:116 (1) - , 00:21:316 (1) -, 00:24:516 (1) - ) all have the slider end somewhere on the vocal. This makes your 3/4 sliders at 00:27:716 (1) - , 00:30:916 (1) - feel kind of forced/something like that.
00:34:916 (2) - just a suggestion, try curving it so the pattern is more fun to play:
SPOILER
00:48:516 (3,4) - not that big of an issue, but the space between the slider bodies is very small, even during game play. It will look nicer if you spread them out a bit (you can just move 00:49:316 (4) - right a little)
SPOILER

Also consider doing the same for 01:00:516 (2,3) - .
00:53:316 (1) - minor issue here (actually, just my personal preference), I think it'd look better if you move the red point up a bit:
SPOILER
01:11:716 (5) - I believe this sounds a lot better if you end it on white tick at 01:12:116 - . The rhythm is really nice this way, and it matches the rhythm at 01:09:316 (1,2,3) - .
01:30:116 (7,8) - hm I don't like how this looks/plays out, try turning 01:30:916 (8) - into a 1/1 slider

This way it matches the vocal and you can hopefully make it look nice somehow.

Hard

00:15:716 (3,5) - you can blanket this better, try moving the second last point around a bit and move the last point on 00:15:716 (3) - towards (5) a bit:
SPOILER
00:18:116 (1,2,3) - try to improve flow here by positioning the objects like this:
SPOILER
00:19:516 (4,5) - gg anti jump op, I got rekt 10/10 would get rekt again
00:46:116 (7,8,9,10,1) - try to make them the same distance apart so it's easier to read
SPOILER
Same with 00:58:916 (6,7,8,9,1) -
00:48:316 (4,5,6,7) - this feels very weird to play, try turning 00:48:516 (5,6) - into one slider and arranging it something like below:
SPOILER
I think it flows better and rhythm is also better.
00:52:916 (10,11) - this plays out a bit weird since you have a triplet, then unstacked note, then two stacked. Try turning 00:52:916 (10,11) - into a slider. I think the flow is much better this way and it's not that hard to play/read.
SPOILER
01:00:516 (3,4) - try to space these objects apart more so that they're no longer barely touching.
01:03:716 (2,3,4,5) - I think there's a better way to arrange these objects. Try moving 01:03:716 (2,3,4,5) - apart from 01:02:916 (1) - and semi-stack it with 01:05:316 (6) -
SPOILER
SPOILER
01:30:116 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this might be a little hard in comparison to the rest of the difficulty. Some players might get a full combo up until this point, break combo, then ragequit and rate your map 1 qq :'( Not sure what you could do to change this though, maybe some other pattern or something, idk.

Kokoro no Collab

00:25:116 (2,3,4) - this is pretty hard to read, I would recommend unstacking 00:25:316 (3,4) - unless you can find another way to clear this up
00:38:516 (1,2,3) - since the distance between each object looks almost the same but the time between them is not, I'd suggest moving 00:38:516 (1,2) - closer together a little so that it's not too hard to read.

Anyways Insane was pretty fun to play, but I got a little lazy. If you want, I can IRC mod insane with you sometime later. Just message me or something zzz

Have fun mapping! (^・ω・^ )

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-06-25T10:41:08+00:00

From my queue ~ :3
[Kibbleru's Easy]

00:14:916 (1,2) - You know, these two sliders could be a little bit curve, I think its better?
00:24:516 (1) - This slider doesn't follow the beat, so remove the repeat and make the slider end at the white tick for better flow?

[Normal]

00:14:916 (1) - I think you should add finish instead of whistle since the finish starts here, and also, this is the first note ~
00:47:716 (2) - Move this to x:140 y:348 because its offscreen
01:28:516 (4) - Add NC here since you added NC in notes like this
01:30:116 (7,8) - This is kinda of hard for normal players, I suggest that you remap this part ~

[Hard]

00:14:916 (1) - I don't think its important to add whistle here, I suggest that you remove it
00:21:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dunno, but these notes are kinda of bothering me, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752014
[img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752016
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1752019[/img]
Added 3 screenshots incase if you couldn't see the whole note ~

Nice mapset overall, nothing to say about insane ~ ^^

Good luck ~ c:

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2014-06-25T20:22:23+00:00

let's rank it

Estellia-'s Mod

Estellia- wrote:
Ok GO!

Insane

00:39:116 (2) - You can make this parallel to the note before Uhm... I think it's fine.
00:44:516 (3) - Shift this more to the right to blanket the slider before Oh yeah, ok.
01:02:916 (1,1) - I find that killing the break here will make the map better I agree

pkmnyab's Mod

pkmnyab wrote:
CONGRATULATIONS YOU JUST WON $1000000!11!!!1ONE1!1!!!!!
You can pick it up at your local bank, just barge right in and ask them to hand you the money or else~

Nice song. 'soft-hitfinish69' gg Thanks ♥

Kokoro no Collab
00:38:516 (1,2,3) - since the distance between each object looks almost the same but the time between them is not, I'd suggest moving 00:38:516 (1,2) - closer together a little so that it's not too hard to read. Ok!

Anyways Insane was pretty fun to play, but I got a little lazy. If you want, I can IRC mod insane with you sometime later. Just message me or something zzz
Have fun mapping! (^・ω・^ )

I did a double box idk how

thanks for modding

the changes: http://puu.sh/9JVnH.osu

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-25T20:56:32+00:00

Kuron-Kun wrote:
let's rank it YES, OKAY THIS NEEDS TO GET RANKED ALREADY

I did a double box idk how boss~

thanks for modding

the changes: http://puu.sh/9JVnH.osu

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Kibbleru 2014-06-26T04:54:19+00:00

Checked all mods for my diff. no change sadly

Box Box

00:30 *Kinshara is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417242 Yuuki Aoi - Mata Ashita]
00:30 Kinshara: this is so close to rank
00:30 Kinshara: o.o
00:30 Kibbleru: no it snot
00:30 Kibbleru: its not*
00:30 Kinshara: isn't kshr gonna rank?
00:30 Kibbleru: cuz ike cant rank after timing change
00:30 Kibbleru: oh
00:31 Kibbleru: no i just said i would ask him
00:31 Kibbleru: cuz he did say ask me after a week
00:31 Kinshara: o
00:31 Kibbleru: or something
00:31 Kinshara: well hopefully he'll rank lol
00:31 Kinshara: it's been in pending for too long
00:31 Kibbleru: yep
00:32 Kinshara: and no dap god
00:32 Kinshara: he gets his ranked in like a week
00:32 Kibbleru: lol
00:32 Kibbleru: shinkai shoujo was ranked in like
00:33 Kibbleru: 20 some days
00:33 Kinshara: yeaa
00:33 Kinshara: what happened??
00:33 Kinshara: 20 days -> 2 months
00:33 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/446017 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu [Kibbleru's Extra]]
00:33 Kibbleru: wot do u mean lol
00:33 Kibbleru: whats wrong with 20 days -> 2 months
00:33 Kinshara: yuuki aoi has been in like pending for 2 months
00:33 Kinshara: i mean mata ashita
00:33 Kinshara: lol
00:34 Kinshara: omg i am tired
00:34 Kibbleru: yeah it has
00:34 Kibbleru: wot about it owo?
00:34 Kinshara: well you got ss ranked in 20 days, and then mata ashita is taking longer o:
00:35 Kinshara: idk
00:35 Kinshara: nothing really
00:35 Kibbleru: well
00:35 Kibbleru: i mean
00:35 Kibbleru: sometimes u just get better luck with bats
00:35 Kinshara: ah i see what you mean
00:35 Kibbleru: unless its with ur first ranked map
00:35 Kibbleru: cuz then
00:36 Kibbleru: u have a long way to go
00:36 Kibbleru: with the modding process
00:36 Kinshara: yea
00:36 Kinshara: finally decided to remap hard q.q
00:36 Kibbleru: UNLESS
00:36 Kibbleru: ur no dap
00:36 Kibbleru: which
00:36 Kinshara: LOL
00:36 Kibbleru: idk if u know this but
00:36 Kibbleru: his first ranked map
00:36 Kibbleru: was ranked in 10 days
00:36 Kinshara: WOW
00:36 Kinshara: mapping prodigy pls
00:36 Kibbleru: no not rly
00:37 Kibbleru: white mapped his insane
00:37 Kibbleru: thats why
00:37 Kinshara: oh
00:37 Kinshara: i see
00:37 Kibbleru: his other diffs were quite mediocre
00:37 Kibbleru: but then theres the white insane
00:37 Kibbleru: which was like
00:37 Kibbleru: amg
00:37 Kibbleru: fap fap
00:37 Kinshara: oh lawd
00:38 Kinshara: isn't white like one of your fav mappers?
00:38 Kibbleru: hes on my list yeah
00:38 Kibbleru: but my love for his maps arent as nearly as much as my love for fycho's
00:39 Kinshara: LOL
00:39 Kinshara: you are such a fangirl for fycho
00:40 Kibbleru: fanboy*
00:40 Kibbleru: how rewd

00:40 Kinshara: oh sowee
00:40 Kinshara: btw has fycho made your gd yet?
00:40 Kinshara: i don't see it lol
00:40 Kibbleru: nop
00:40 Kibbleru: lol
00:40 Kinshara: maybe he decided not to
00:40 Kibbleru: prolly gunna take a whil
00:40 Kibbleru: e
00:40 Kinshara: after seeing your hanzerous map
00:40 Kibbleru: no he will eventually
00:41 Kinshara: okayyyy
00:41 Kinshara: time to remap this hard
00:41 Kinshara: give me strenght pls
00:45 Kinshara: btw mods for
00:45 *Kinshara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437093 Primary - Kokoro no Yakusoku (Short Version) [Hard]]
00:45 Kinshara: whenever you want to
00:45 Kibbleru: did u remap alrdy?
00:46 Kinshara: nope
00:46 Kinshara: remapping now
00:47 Kibbleru: no change
00:47 Kibbleru:

00:47 Kibbleru: btw for ur normal diff
00:48 Kibbleru: pls stap with those normal whistles
00:48 Kibbleru: e_e
00:48 Kinshara: yea?
00:48 Kinshara: yea i'll change that lol
00:48 Kinshara: i hate how my hitsound copier isn't working
00:48 Kibbleru: 00:35:716 (3) - u may want to fix this bezier slider
00:49 Kinshara: is this for normal?
00:49 Kibbleru: yeah
00:49 Kibbleru: also
00:49 Kibbleru: let me give my rant about how bad these kind of sliders look 00:35:716 (3) -
00:49 Kinshara: wait
00:49 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/9KwvR/aca2bb60e2.jpg do this pls
00:49 Kinshara: okay
00:50 Kinshara: are you sure you're pointing to the right slider?
00:50 Kibbleru: 00:16:316 (4) -
00:50 Kibbleru: oops
00:50 Kibbleru: oh yeah
00:50 Kinshara: and okay lol
00:50 Kibbleru: 00:35:716 (3) - fix this one too its a bezier curve atm
00:51 Kibbleru: 00:46:916 (1) - this too
00:51 Kinshara: 00:35:716 (3) - this one ?
00:51 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/9KwCb/cd526e0f53.jpg
00:51 Kinshara: you sure?
00:51 Kibbleru: for that one
00:51 Kibbleru: just remake the curve
00:51 Kibbleru: right now its a bezier
00:52 Kibbleru: 00:46:916 (1) - fix this wave slider
00:52 Kibbleru: 00:48:516 (3,4) - space this out a bit
00:52 Kibbleru: 00:59:716 (1) - fix this bezier curve
00:52 Kibbleru: 01:00:516 (2,3) - space out

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-26T06:21:17+00:00

@pk
@Lapis

I will look at your mods after I am done remapping Hard and Normal (yes, I am remapping them! o;)

Sorry for the delay! I hope you understand.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-26T19:39:53+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
@pk
@Lapis

I will look at your mods after I am done remapping Hard and Normal (yes, I am remapping them! o;)

Sorry for the delay! I hope you understand.

wait why would you look at their mods AFTER you completely remap ur diffs lol

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-26T19:43:03+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Kinshara wrote:
@pk
@Lapis

I will look at your mods after I am done remapping Hard and Normal (yes, I am remapping them! o;)

Sorry for the delay! I hope you understand.
wait why would you look at their mods AFTER you completely remap ur diffs lol

Because.....;-;

RandF

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RandF 2014-06-28T11:12:36+00:00

From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]

title: 心ノ約束

[Kokoro no Collab]
Kinshara

00:31:716 (3) - suggetion

Kuron-Kun

00:39:716 (3,4) - too large DS?
00:57:316 (3) - I prefer symmetric curved slider as 00:57:916 (4) -

Kibbleru

01:09:716 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:12:916 (3,4) - exchange their positions
01:16:516 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:29:316 (3) - ^

[Kibbleru's Easy]

01:10:516 (2) - x:344 y:160

if you need to mod normal and hard, feel fee to send PM

~Good Luck~

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2014-06-28T23:17:59+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~ hi
thanks for M4M

Kuron-Kun
00:39:716 (3,4) - too large DS? nope, it's not that large, fits well imo
00:57:316 (3) - I prefer symmetric curved slider as 00:57:916 (4) - I like variation of sliders, but thanks
[/list]

if you need to mod normal and hard, feel fee to send PM
~Good Luck~

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-30T03:43:29+00:00

sorry no changes for mine

on the easy, i think hidden circles are a bit hard for easy diff

on collab those were like that for emphasis on the 1/1 beat

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-01T19:44:04+00:00

pkmnyab wrote:
Kokoro no Collab
00:25:116 (2,3,4) - this is pretty hard to read, I would recommend unstacking 00:25:316 (3,4) - unless you can find another way to clear this up fixed!
Have fun mapping! (^・ω・^ )

Thanks for the mod!

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-01T19:54:13+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
title: 心ノ約束
fixed
[Kokoro no Collab]
Kinshara[list]
[*]00:31:716 (3) - suggetion hmm, interesting idea, i'll try it :p

if you need to mod normal and hard, feel fee to send PM
~Good Luck~

Thanks for the mod!

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-07-05T00:07:32+00:00

IRC mod as requested

SPOILER

19:34 Kinshara: okay
19:34 Kinshara: this was back when i had terrible style
19:34 Kinshara: so ignore the style lol
19:35 Kinshara: actually i still have terrible style e.e
19:35 No Dap: I don't understand your whistle pattern
19:35 Kinshara: what's wrong with it? o.o
19:36 No Dap: they sound random
19:36 Kinshara: following the piano 
19:36 Kinshara: really?
19:37 No Dap: for an instance
19:37 No Dap: 00:35:637 - 00:36:437 -  piano
19:37 No Dap: yet 00:36:037 -  this is where you have whistle
19:37 Kinshara: hmm
19:38 Kinshara: ok
19:38 Kinshara: i'll have to look into that
19:38 No Dap: 01:01:037 - way too close
19:38 Kinshara: i'll fix those later
19:38 Kinshara: why is that a problem?
19:38 No Dap: too close
19:38 No Dap: they look ugly
19:39 Kinshara: i think it looks good q.q
19:39 No Dap: what
19:39 No Dap: http://puu.sh/9Xa1g/887b1fefe5.png
19:39 No Dap: http://puu.sh/9Xa1N/8c218b1aaa.png
19:39 No Dap: what looks better
19:39 Kinshara: ... fine lol
19:39 Kinshara: you win
19:40 No Dap: 01:14:037 - 01:14:837 -  should be switched
19:40 No Dap: interms of rhythm
19:41 Kinshara: ok sorry
19:42 Kinshara: hmmm
19:42 Kinshara: 01:15:637 (1) - this one is following the soft drums
19:42 Kinshara: so i don't want to switch
19:42 No Dap: 01:28:437 - you should cut combo here
19:42 Kinshara: done
19:42 No Dap: 01:14:037 - this one sould be 
19:42 No Dap: 1/2 reverse
19:42 No Dap: according to your whole rhythm pattern and the music
19:43 No Dap: z01:07:637 - 01:10:837 - 01:17:237 -  01:20:437 - 01:23:637 - 
19:44 No Dap: why do you have no finish...
19:45 No Dap: you might need major rework with hitsound
19:45 Kinshara: yea 
19:45 Kinshara: i'll re hitsound
19:45 No Dap: actually nvm its
19:45 No Dap: only this part I think
19:45 No Dap: 01:12:437 -  finish here
19:45 No Dap: not the bass
19:45 No Dap: ?
19:46 Kinshara: yea okay
19:46 No Dap: 01:18:837 - here too
19:46 Kinshara: actually
19:46 Kinshara: don't mod hitsounds
19:46 Kinshara: i'll actually re hitsound
19:46 No Dap: 01:30:037 - also this its kinda hard to read
19:46 Kinshara: fixed
19:46 No Dap: I perseonally never ever put more than 1 revese on long sliders
19:47 No Dap: cuz for 1/2 sliders they are too short to read
19:47 No Dap: and longer sliders are just boring to play
19:47 Kinshara: yea
19:47 No Dap: maybe add a circle 01:31:637 -  and start the spinner from 01:31:837 - ?
19:47 No Dap: emphasizing the end is important for me
19:48 Kinshara: okay
19:48 Kinshara: i thought about it
19:48 Kinshara: but never really did it lol
19:48 No Dap: I would do it
19:48 Kinshara: moving on to hard?
19:48 Kinshara: yeap
19:48 Kinshara: i'll do it
19:48 Kinshara: since i did it for hard too
19:48 Kinshara: i might just remap normal
19:49 Kinshara: on to hard?
19:49 No Dap: HP5 seems too low for hard diff
19:49 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/437093 Primary - Kokoro no Yakusoku [Hard]]
19:49 Kinshara: it was because the end is a little difficult
19:49 Kinshara: but okay
19:49 Kinshara: i'll change it to 6
19:50 No Dap: 00:37:737 - this part blanket
19:50 No Dap: sticks out too much
19:50 No Dap: too close compared to other blankets
19:51 Kinshara: oh
19:51 Kinshara: okay
19:51 Kinshara: i'll try to fix that
19:52 No Dap: `01:12:437 - same as normal
19:52 No Dap: finish
19:52 No Dap: 01:18:837 (1) -  here too
19:52 Kinshara: i thought i added a finish lol
19:53 No Dap: 01:25:237 - 
19:53 No Dap: no
19:53 Kinshara: done
19:53 No Dap: real finish
19:53 No Dap: not the bass sound
19:53 No Dap: which you named it soft finish
19:53 Kinshara: soft finish?
19:53 Kinshara: i'll actually not use custom hitsounds e.e
19:53 Kinshara: they're too confusing
19:54 Kinshara: i'll just stick with the soft sampleset
19:55 Kinshara: anything else?
19:55 Kinshara: besides hitsounds lol
19:55 Kinshara: since i'll be re-hitsounding
19:55 No Dap: other than that
19:55 No Dap: everything plays fine
19:55 No Dap: except the last double pentagon
19:55 No Dap: I don't really recommend :3
19:56 Kinshara: what do you recommend? q.q
19:56 No Dap: not double pentagons
19:56 Kinshara: i had star pattern before
19:56 Kinshara: but people said it was too hard
19:56 Kinshara: difficulty spike
19:56 No Dap: why don't you just stick with sliders
19:56 No Dap: actually
19:56 No Dap: just leave it
19:57 Kinshara: lol ok
19:57 No Dap: k collab
19:57 No Dap: which part is yours?
19:57 Kinshara: btw
19:57 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/436277 Primary - Kokoro no Yakusoku [Kokoro no Collab]]
19:57 Kinshara: quick question
19:57 No Dap: sure
19:57 Kinshara: on hard
19:57 Kinshara: the stack leniency is 0.2
19:57 Kinshara: will that be a problem?
19:57 Kinshara: the max i have is a double stack
19:58 No Dap: I don't even know why you used .2
19:58 Kinshara: it's 0.2 because otherwise it would ruin blankets
19:58 No Dap: put it back to .7 ?
19:58 Kinshara: ehh
19:58 No Dap: thats why you have manual stacks
19:58 Kinshara: okay
19:58 Kinshara: wth 0.7?
19:58 No Dap: .7 is the default
19:58 No Dap: but if that is the reason
19:59 No Dap: try using .4
19:59 No Dap: oh 
19:59 Kinshara: okay thanks ;P
19:59 No Dap: i mean 4
19:59 Kinshara: yea
19:59 Kinshara: okay
19:59 Kinshara: collab now
19:59 No Dap: which is your part
19:59 Kinshara: my part 
19:59 Kinshara: is from the beginning
19:59 Kinshara: to
20:00 Kinshara: 00:35:437 - 
20:00 No Dap: 00:23:137 - 
20:00 No Dap: way too close
20:00 Kinshara: and i know i break flow a lot q.q
20:00 Kinshara: okay
20:01 No Dap: its also the slider shape
20:01 No Dap: http://puu.sh/9Xbso/b650de27b7.png
20:01 No Dap: looks like you put no work into it (no offense)
20:01 No Dap: "looks like"
20:01 Kinshara: into my part?
20:02 Kinshara: o.o
20:02 Kinshara: i guess so 
20:02 No Dap: do you know
20:02 No Dap: the bad flows
20:02 No Dap: do you want me to point them out?
20:02 Kinshara: yea point them out
20:02 Kinshara: just so i know for sure
20:03 No Dap: 00:25:537 - 
20:03 No Dap: 00:27:537 - 
20:03 No Dap: 00:28:337 - 
20:03 No Dap: 00:30:737 - 
20:03 No Dap: 00:34:737 - 
20:03 No Dap: its mostly the slider shape
20:03 No Dap: that is making bad flow
20:04 Kinshara: okay
20:04 Kinshara: i'll actually remap then
20:04 No Dap: other than those bad flows
20:04 No Dap: and the spacing i pointed out
20:04 Kinshara: btw
20:04 No Dap: seems fine
20:04 No Dap: yeah
20:04 Kinshara: okay
20:04 Kinshara: is hitsound alright in 
20:05 Kinshara: collab?
20:05 No Dap: I would
20:05 No Dap: use whistle differently and more frequently :3
20:05 No Dap: but that's how I would do it
20:05 Kinshara: okay :p
20:05 Kinshara: well no
20:05 Kinshara: actually
20:05 Kinshara: someone else hitsounded this
20:05 No Dap: lol
20:05 Kinshara: and i just copied it onto my other diffs lel

Ringating

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Ringating 2014-07-05T18:01:19+00:00

from my queue:

you're a bit fickle, lol. anyway, the original image for your bg is so high quality that it deserved to be saved losslessly as a png. The only real difference with the image I made from the image you currently have as the bg is that mine is slightly higher quality (due to png magic) and has a larger file size (again, png magic

). Also it is one column of pixels wider, since your image was 1365x768 instead of 1366x768

Here is the new image:

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no kudosu

Kinshara

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Topic Starter

Kinshara 2014-07-05T18:21:30+00:00

Ringating wrote:
from my queue:

you're a bit fickle, lol. anyway, the original image for your bg is so high quality that it deserved to be saved losslessly as a png. The only real difference with the image I made from the image you currently have as the bg is that mine is slightly higher quality (due to png magic) and has a larger file size (again, png magic ). Also it is one column of pixels wider, since your image was 1365x768 instead of 1366x768 Here is the new image:
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no kudosu

Thank you! (and sorry q.q)

Garven

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Garven 2014-07-05T20:47:41+00:00

SPOILER

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8,296,62837,5,4,0:2:0:0:
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112,112,65237,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,64,65437,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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328,24,65837,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,24,66037,5,4,1:0:0:0:
464,80,66237,2,0,P|496:184|464:256,1,189.750003619194,0|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,192,67437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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136,32,70437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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312,72,71037,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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336,288,88437,1,2,3:2:0:0:
256,192,88637,8,4,91637,0:0:0:0:

Edit: Throw these hitsounds in please.

http://puu.sh/9Yf8w/56873405b0.rar

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-05T21:42:10+00:00

Thanks a lot Garven!

MMzz

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MMzz 2014-07-06T06:04:04+00:00

[General]
Add Garven to tags.

[Hard]
01:05:237 (6) - You could add a NC here. Fits with the change in pace of the song and looks nice aesthetically. (Feel free to ignore this)

[Garven's Normal]
01:28:637 (1) - Spinner NC.

Sorry for shitmod. QQ This map is really good, I have no complaints.
Call me back when you fixed the tags/spinner and we're ready to bubble.

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Garven 2014-07-06T06:48:59+00:00

MMzz wrote:
[Garven's Normal]
01:28:637 (1) - Spinner NC. It's part of the same combo. No need for a NC.

The custom soft-finish is missing. Re-add it please. Everything sounds horrendous.

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-06T07:09:06+00:00

Garven wrote:
MMzz wrote:
[Garven's Normal]
01:28:637 (1) - Spinner NC. It's part of the same combo. No need for a NC.
The custom soft-finish is missing. Re-add it please. Everything sounds horrendous.

~~No, not missing a hitsound. I am just bad at hitdounding q.q. I will look into it asap although I really thought it sounded nice because the finishes weren't really random lol.~~

OK I'll add that lol.

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Garven 2014-07-06T07:11:43+00:00

Nah, it affected my map as well during the kiai. I redownloaded twice and had someone else download it fresh just to be sure. That custom soft finish is the deep bass drum hit and it's heavily relied on for most of the maps.

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-06T17:38:42+00:00

MMzz wrote:
[General]
Add Garven to tags. fixed!

[Hard]
01:05:237 (6) - You could add a NC here. Fits with the change in pace of the song and looks nice aesthetically. (Feel free to ignore this) fixed

Sorry for shitmod. QQ This map is really good, I have no complaints.
Call me back when you fixed the tags/spinner and we're ready to bubble.

MMzz

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MMzz 2014-07-06T18:21:35+00:00

Bubbled!

scary storyboard

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-07-06T19:05:43+00:00

WOOT! GRATZ! 1 month for first ranked map ;w; so fast

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-06T19:09:40+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
WOOT! GRATZ! 1 month for first ranked map ;w; so fast

power of remapping, yeah!

thanks :p

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-07-06T20:05:54+00:00

wow grats

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-06T20:52:24+00:00

No Dap wrote:
wow grats

thanks lol

pls throw stars at this map .3..

ztrot

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ztrot 2014-07-06T22:23:56+00:00

ran it through the AI no issues found ranked!

pkk

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pkk 2014-07-06T22:24:48+00:00

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST RANKED MAP KINSHARA! NOW YOU CAN FINALLY MARRY ME

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Kibbleru 2014-07-06T22:25:55+00:00

YAY MORE RANKED GDS FOR KIBBLERU!

i mean g-gratz

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-06T22:26:33+00:00

WOW. One of the happiest moments of my life q.q

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-06T22:30:52+00:00

ztrot wrote:
ran it through the AI no issues found ranked!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

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Frostings 2014-07-06T22:33:54+00:00

gratsgratsgratsgratsgrats !!!!!!

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Kibbleru 2014-07-07T01:33:08+00:00

WAW i tried to teach u how to hitsound too

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Exw 2014-07-07T01:45:55+00:00

grats! nice song and mapset!

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-07T01:52:14+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:

WAW i tried to teach u how to hitsound too

No, you suck at teaching lol.

Subaru Takamaru wrote:
grats! nice song and mapset!

Thank you!

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Frostings 2014-07-07T02:20:53+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:

WAW i tried to teach u how to hitsound too
No, you suck at teaching lol.

omg wrecked

but it was Kibbleru who taught me how to hitsound

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-07T02:28:12+00:00

Frostings wrote:
Kinshara wrote:
No, you suck at teaching lol.

omg wrecked

but it was Kibbleru who taught me how to hitsound

Touche, but you taught me. lol.

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-07-07T02:44:18+00:00

Senpai please notice this poor noob dap...

I mean gratz

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-07T02:55:45+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Senpai please notice this poor noob dap...

I mean gratz

stahp pls omg lol

Mismagius

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Mismagius 2014-07-07T15:38:11+00:00

urgh for unnecessary AR8.5 ;_; 8 fits much better

but still, nice map

litoluna

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litoluna 2014-07-07T16:37:06+00:00

gratz~
yuiko<3

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2014-07-07T16:52:09+00:00

~~thanks for deleting the fucking hitsounds without letting me know -_-~~

all solved

Last edited by Kuron-kun 2014-07-07T19:07:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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Kibbleru 2014-07-07T18:19:56+00:00

Kuron-Kun wrote:
thanks for deleting the fucking hitsounds without letting me know -_-

rekttt

dw urs were still better
/me runs

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-07T19:09:34+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
rekttt

dw urs were still better
/me runs

rude af

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-07T21:52:44+00:00

litoluna wrote:
gratz~
yuiko<3

yuikonnu is the best :3

Blue Dragon wrote:
urgh for unnecessary AR8.5 ;_; 8 fits much better

but still, nice map

haha, everyone uses decimals these days, so wanted to try it out

thank you for playing!

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-07-13T23:04:33+00:00

Yey, finally out of qualified and officially ranked!

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-07-14T14:25:18+00:00

triple post? stop spamming on your own map thread.....

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-07-14T14:48:21+00:00

No Dap wrote:
triple post? stop spamming on your own map thread.....

Sometimes I do that lolol, u mad ~ : )

Anyways gratz on first rank ~ ^^

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Kinshara 2014-07-14T17:41:35+00:00

No Dap wrote:
triple post? stop spamming on your own map thread.....

So rude omg lol

I actually didn't even notice o.o

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Garven 2014-07-14T19:58:56+00:00

Thays what they all say

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Xiaolin 2014-07-14T20:20:35+00:00

LOL

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