1. Easy (1.2 stars, 138 notes)
2. Hard (2.91 stars, 422 notes)
3. Normal (1.95 stars, 233 notes)

Modders~

Knotts
pkmnyab
Kihhou
Shapy
Kibbleru
samplefish
pishifat
[ Joey ]
BerkZ
Don
GrayKeiser82
Haya
10crystalmask01
Krfawy
LucyS
Frostmourne
Number5
Shurelia
boseslm
AllStar12
Garven
neonat
<span style='color:#FF4000'>alacat</span>

Knotts wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:310 (4) - maybe you could try this Done
   
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2. 00:10:925 (3,4,1,2,3) - this could work better? Tried my best
   
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3. 01:00:310 (3) - blanket this to (1) better Okay
4. 01:22:233 (2) - maybe you could do this? Okay
   
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5. 01:31:233 (1) - maybe a finish instead of clap here? Okay
6. 01:39:771 (5) - remove finish Okay
7. 01:40:002 (1) - finish Okay
8. 01:46:463 (1) - end kiai time here? No change
9. 01:52:925 - 02:01:463 - you should try to keep your patterns the same using your hitsounds to guide you to make it easier to read. To point out an example where it was hard to read would be 01:58:233 (7) because it doesn't match what you previously did. Okay
10. 02:05:848 (2) - finish? Okay
11. 02:06:079 (3,4) - Make this into a curve? Okay
12. 02:09:540 (3) - finish? Okay
13. 02:13:233 (4) - Maybe lower the volume a little and put a finish? I think i can hear a finish in the BGM. your choice :3 Okay
14. 02:22:233 (4,2,3) - If you listen to this at 25% you can hear that there is something is wrong with the timing here. Okay
15. 02:23:617 (4) - ^ Okay
16. 02:28:002 (1) - finish? It doesn't sound better, so no change
17. 02:31:694 (3) - ^ Okay
18. 02:43:463 (2) - blanket better Okay
19. 02:45:079 (5) - finish Okay
20. 02:45:310 (6) - remove finish Okay
21. 02:45:310 (6) - make this a triple? Okay
22. 03:23:040 - unused green line? Okay
    
    I'm not sure if my hitsounding sounds good or not so I'm just gonna stop suggesting them. PM me ingame or on forums if you like it.

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• 
  I was told by one of my mapping friend's that DS has to be constant throughout a normal. If I'm wrong someone tell me pls.

1. Disable widescreen support - no storyboard
2. 00:15:540 (2) - maybe make into a 1/2 slider?
3. 00:18:540 (1) - DS?
4. 00:19:694 (3) - ^
5. 00:22:925 (2) - ^
6. 00:58:002 (4) - ^
7. 01:02:156 (2) - ^
8. 01:04:463 (3) - ^
9. 01:06:310 (6) - ^
10. 01:09:310 (1) - ^
11. 01:27:310 (5) - i think this slider shape is weird to use unless you're blanketing something It blanked the corner of the slider, but I change to something else
    Meh i'll just stop pointing these out, it's wasting this mod.
12. 02:28:694 (2) - blanket?
    
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13. 03:16:002 (1) - blanket better

[Easy]

1. Disable widescreen support
2. 00:02:617 (2) - Bring down the middle tick of the slider a little to blanket better
3. 00:46:925 (3) - Bring the first red tick of the slider a little up to blanket better
4. 00:58:002 (2) - curve this and make it a blanket?
   
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5. 01:26:156 (2) - curve this slider? Nope
6. 02:03:540 (2) - blanket?
   
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7. 02:48:310 (2) - blanket better

Good map and song. (>°_°)>
Thanks for the M4M~

pkmnyab wrote:

From M4M~

[Easy]

1. 00:59:848 (2) - consider moving this to the right a bit (around x 468 204) so that the border of 00:59:386 (1,2) - creates a nice curved line Meh.
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2. 01:46:925 (2) - maybe a less curved slider would look better here, sort of like 01:45:540 (1) - Okay
   
3. 01:47:386 - consider starting the break at 01:49:233 - instead for effect as this is where the vocal ends, and also because the current break ending doesn't 'snap' very well to the beat (I'm not sure how to explain it). Not sure about this, but I'll have to stay to what it was, since a new beat starts here.
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   This applies to all difficulties
   
   Good easy difficulty, lots of fun for sure~
   
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4. 00:02:848 (2) - maybe move the last point to the left a bit since the inner slider border seems to be digging back into 00:02:156 (1) - Okay
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5. 00:28:925 (3) - for some reason the bottom half of this slider bothers me a bit, try adding a point right before the last one and one right after the first one so that there are no straight parts in the slider, like this Okay
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6. 00:45:771 (2) - I feel that it would match the music/vocal better if you move it to the next white tick at 00:46:002 - Okay
   
7. 00:49:463 (2) - might flow better if you ctrl+g Okay
   
8. 00:51:771 (6) - might look/flow better if you take 00:51:079 (4) - and ctrl+g, h, j, something like this Okay
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9. 00:55:233 (2) - unless this is intentional, I think it plays out better if you ctrl+G Okay
   
10. 00:57:079 (3) - try something like this, it might flow better Okay
    
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11. 01:16:925 (3) - for better flow, try something like this Okay
    
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12. 01:28:694 (6) - see if moving the middle point down a little makes it look better, the edges in this slider are very subtle and almost looks like one straight slider Changed the pattern
    
13. 01:36:310 (1,2) - you can blanket this better Okay
14. 01:38:156 (4,5) - same here^, there's also other parts like 02:39:079 (1,2) - but maybe it was intentional Okay
    
15. 02:52:002 (2) - maybe you can make the end a little curved instead of just straight, it looks sort of awkward to me Okay
    
    [Hard]
16. 00:48:310 (1) - try ctrl+g, 00:49:233 (4) - try ctrl+j. I think these changes will help it flow better Okay
    
17. 01:40:002 (1) - try ctrl+h, j. The reason for this is that it will flow better from 01:39:540 (4) - to 01:39:771 (5) - to 01:40:002 (1) - , then when you go to hit 01:40:463 (2) - , it's one fluid movement. Just try it out and see if it's better. Here is a flow diagram: Because of the big jump, I moved 01:40:463 (2) more closer.
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18. 01:47:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - different spacing from 01:51:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (more spacing between third and fourth notes) Should be consistent Okay
    
19. 02:25:463 (4,5) - hmm maybe you could arrange it like this for better flow: Okay
    
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20. 02:43:463 (2) - barely skims the HP bar, consider rearranging notes before it so that you can move this down a bit Okay
    
21. 02:49:925 (3) - try ctrl+g, I find that it flows better like this (you can testplay this to see what I mean) Okay

Beautiful song, I cry every time~~~

I hope you get this ranked one day, have fun mapping!

1. 01:22:925 (3,4,5) - the vocals conflict with the spacing. try this
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2. 02:04:925 (1,2) - blanket 2 under 1
3. 02:10:925 - add note! theres this space in the vocal section that doesnt feel right
4. 02:13:002 - ^
5. 02:29:848 (4,5) - move these 2 to 02:29:617
6. 02:49:002 (4) - add NC
7. 02:49:233 (1) - remove NC. these two arent so much a problem. it's just for consistency. all the previous pauses youve had have had a NC afterwards, aside from the ones with the pauses in the middle of the vocal section.
8. 03:08:617 (1,3) - space out a tiny bit more >< im picky picky

1. 00:04:463 (1,2,3,4) - make an equilateral triangle instead? since a filler for a long vocal, having jumps at this part in a hard map feels off
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2. 00:07:694 (1) - this is unsymmetrical just incase you wanted it to be
3. 00:23:848 (1,2) - setup like this for better flow?
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4. 00:28:925 (1) - finish at head
5. 00:53:617 (4) - shorten in half~ it doesnt end anywhere and its nice having it symmetrical to 00:54:540 (1,2,3)
6. 00:54:540 (1) - ctrl g? better flow following 00:53:617 (4)
7. 01:23:848 - add note
8. 01:36:079 (6) - move to (324,224) for flow
9. 01:40:463 (2,3) - should have a jump between these 2 .. things (whats the general term for hitcircles/sliders?) isntead of a jump from 1 to 2. could have 1 blanket 2
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10. 02:22:233 (4,1,2,3,4) - this is satan for hard mode players. its super hard to read without going into editor >.< i like the idea and rhythm but.. idk :X consider changing it maybe~
11. 02:31:693 (4) - NC vocals of the section start here
12. 02:31:925 (1) - remove NC b/c that ^
13. 03:03:771 (4) - replace with something like 03:00:079 (4,5,6) ?
14. 03:19:694 (1,2) - remove NC for 1. add NC for 2. this combos squished in the middle of 2 vocal sections
15. 03:20:617 (1) - remove NC ^

Kihhou wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:28:925 (1) - finish at head It doesn't fit in the music, so no changes.
2. 01:23:848 - add note No change
3. 01:36:079 (6) - move to (324,224) for flow No change
4. 01:40:463 (2,3) - should have a jump between these 2 .. things (whats the general term for hitcircles/sliders?) isntead of a jump from 1 to 2. could have 1 blanket 2 Changed another way
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5. 02:22:233 (4,1,2,3,4) - this is satan for hard mode players. its super hard to read without going into editor >.< i like the idea and rhythm but.. idk :X consider changing it maybe~ Replaced it into a spinner

1. 00:28:925 (3) - Sa rendrait mieux en réduisant ce slider je trouve
   
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2. 01:09:310 (1) - Essaye de replacer ce slider de manière a ce que ce soit cohérant

Exemple

1. 00:17:848 (3),(4),(5) - (3) ~ x:48 y:268 ~ (4) x:46 y:192 ~ (5) x:108 y:144 pour un meilleur arc de cercle
2. 01:23:842 - Ajouter un circle ici rendrait bien a toi de voir
3. 02:30:540 - Même chose pour ici

Shapy wrote:

Hey !
From M4M

[General]
Add des tags et une source ! Je ne sais pas quoi mettre...

[Normal]

1. 00:28:925 (3) - Sa rendrait mieux en réduisant ce slider je trouve Okay
   
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2. 01:09:310 (1) - Essaye de replacer ce slider de manière a ce que ce soit cohérant Je veux garder la distance constante, alors je ne l'ai pas modifier.

Exemple

[Hard]

1. 00:17:848 (3),(4),(5) - (3) ~ x:48 y:268 ~ (4) x:46 y:192 ~ (5) x:108 y:144 pour un meilleur arc de cercle Okay
2. 01:23:842 - Ajouter un circle ici rendrait bien a toi de voir Okay
3. 02:30:540 - Même chose pour ici Okay

C'est mon premier mod donc c'est pas énorme (voir même ridicule ) mais faut bien ce lancé un jour non j'espère que sa t'aura quand même était utile :3
Good Luck !

• 
  I suggest using grid snap, it helps alot when you try to stack stuff

1. 00:01:694 (3) - rotate this about 15 degree so the slider does not look like it is curving into (2)
   
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2. 00:05:386 (1,2) - ctrl g these 2 and use that rhythm instead (still rearrange placement though)
3. 00:06:078 (3,4) - this could be blanketed better
4. 00:06:310 (4,5) - blanket?
   
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5. actually, please go through your maps and check your blankets lol, use the approach circle to help
6. 00:19:233 (2,2) - try stacking? you have to move (1) too
   
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7. 00:02:848 (2,1) - ^ similar stuff
8. 00:51:540 (3) - stack this with the head of 00:50:156 (1) - neater and slightly better flow
9. 00:50:156 (1) - you have such a strong sound on a slider reverse arrow... i suggest this rhythm. if you do this you can also nc at the new slider
   
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10. 01:03:771 (1) - better flow if curved the other way
    
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11. 01:25:001 (3,2) - things like this, you can easily stack to make it neater
12. 01:30:771 (1) - add note
13. 01:31:694 (3,4,5,6,7) - for a hard difficulty, i would use 1/4 sliders with reverse instead of streams
14. 01:38:386 (1,5) - things you can easily stackk ._.
15. 01:50:156 (5,6) - copy one of the sliders and ctrl hj
16. 02:22:002 (3,1) - um try this since spinners really don't emphasize too much on the spinner head
    
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    i think this is appropriate for hard+
17. 03:06:771 (1) - try curving the first half the other way
    This map actualy gets better after the first kiai o-o idunno why. to make the first part better, fix your blankets, stack whatever you can, and polish your patterns a bit.
    00:56:386 - gets better about here

1. 00:01:233 (2) - uhh makes more sense if you moved it to 00:01:002 -
2. 00:12:079 (2) - curve the other way, looks better
   
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3. 00:18:540 (1) - expose the tail a bit more
   
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4. 00:21:079 (1) - curve other way
5. 00:22:002 (2) - actually this makes more sense to me imo
   
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6. 00:25:002 (2,4) - not parallel
7. 01:30:771 (2,3) - make them parallel, looks nice
   
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8. 01:32:617 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion
   
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9. 02:06:310 (1,2) - curve other way looks better

1. 00:16:463 (2,3) - blanket?
2. 01:14:156 (1) - reversing a long slider more than once is hard to read for beginner players
3. 01:27:079 (3,1,2) - doesn't flow too well here
4. 02:16:925 (1) - u know already

Kibbleru wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:30:771 (1) - add note Where?

[Normal]

1. 02:06:310 (1,2) - curve other way looks better Curve what?

Great mapset! all you have to do is fix up first part of hard diff and perfect all your blankets and i'd say it's ready for rank! Thanks!~

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167,181,45079,2,0,P|255:55|344:181,1,360,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

[Hard]
00:13:233 (1,3) - Nazi mod (sorry!) Try to fix he blanket here please.
00:26:617 (2,1) - ^
00:50:156 (1,2) - ^ (The head and tail's circumference still appears inside the approachable, whereas the slider's body itself is the only thing that's aligned with 00:50:848 (2) - 's approachable).

01:36:771 (2,3) - Swap the objects timing points. That way, with the slider staring at 01:37:002 it will follow smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "ru" in komiageru.

01:41:386 - 01:42:540 Similar issue as above, try going with this rhythm instead?

I feel that the long slider starting at 01:41:617 will sound better, because it will follow the vocals long hold on the "ni".

02:25:002 - 02:26:156 Rearrange objects in this rhythm to this:

A long slider at 02:25:002 fits better, so it runs smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "rai" in Kurai. And a hit circle on the starting rhythm (which is the large tick mark at 02:26:156) is more formal.

02:45:656 - Since this is the highest diff in your mapset, adding a note here to for ma stream is okay, so as long as it follows the drum rolls heard in the background music.

03:00:771 (7,1) - Consider re-mapping to this rhythm:

Like 03:00:079 (4,5,6) - you'll want to follow the drum rolls here as well.

[Normal]
00:44:617 Consider adding a note here with a whistle, it creates a more proper into to the playtime (since it lands on the main downbeat here).

00:45:771 (2,4) - Move just a bit more apart.

01:01:233 - There should only be a note here. Like on the previous and next rhythm, you've used only a hit circle on 00:59:386 (1) -, so here should also only have a note too, for consistency. Consider mapping this part to this:


01:06:771 (1) - Add finish on the head for the cymbal crash heard here.

01:28:694 (6) - NC instead of 01:29:848 (1) -

02:16:925 (1,2) - I see an ugly overlap here:


Please fix.

03:08:617 (1) - Interesting. Try adding a drum whistle on the head here.

[Easy]
00:18:771 (4) - NC
00:26:156 (5) - ^ instead of 00:27:540 (1) -

02:04:925 (3,1) - This notes are placed too close together, judging by the DS. Either fix the DS, or add a note at 02:06:310 to avoid having to fix many objects after 02:04:925 (3,1) - .

02:52:002 (3) - Move tail to 352:100 for a perfect blanket.

03:08:617 (1) - Interesting. Try adding a drum whistle on the head here.

Good luck!

Easy

1. 00:29:386 (4) - Maybe a whistle hitsound at the end? Just a pure hestitation. XD
2. 00:55:233 (3) - But I think a whistle might fit to the vocals.
3. 01:04:002 (2) - *A really stupid thing from me* Could you move the red point in this slider to X=264 Y=124? I guess this will look a little nicer.
4. 01:06:771 (1) - I guess the finish hitsound would be cool at the beginning of the slider.
5. 01:14:156 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could use some whistles to the "INA-INA-INA-INA-INA" or whatever she sings? XD Because I've seen you've used some claps in the other difficulties and I think you could use whistles instead of them but to the same rhytm.
6. 01:38:156 (2) - Maybe a whistle instead of a finish would be better at the very end of the slider?
7. 01:45:540 (1) - Just a suggestion - maybe a finish would be at the beginning of the slider? And a clap would be at the end of the slider?
8. 01:46:925 (2) - Maybe this slider would have two whistles: at the beginning and at the end? xD
9. 02:10:463 (1) - A missing clap in the middle of the slider. XD
10. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,1) - How about using whistles again to the rhytm before the chours? :3
11. 03:21:540 (1) - Maybe this slider could have a whistle at the end like in Normal difficulty? :3 I think it fits here!

Normal

1. 01:14:156 (1,2) - There's no hitsounds at (1) when at (2) are claps. But IMO whistles would fit better here. Just my opinion.
2. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe you could use some whistles like you used claps in the previous "INA-INA-INA-INA" (orz) moment? I don't know what she's singing but you know, that moment before the chours. XD
3. 02:38:848 (5) - Just maybe delete this circle? I think players would be surprised by such a big amount of objects in just one combo. D: So please, make it easier by deleting this object. XD

Hard

1. 00:20:617 (1,2) - Isn't the spacing a little weird here? And 00:22:002 (3,4) - it's a weird spacing too! D: Could you fix it by using a default spacing at those objects?
2. 01:14:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of claps, maybe use whistle hitsounds? I think this will sound better.
3. 01:23:848 (5) - Missing clap, I guess.
4. 01:28:233 (4) - Maybe a whistle at the beginning of the slider?
5. 01:36:771 (2,3) - Um, please - remove the clap in (3) and mat clap at (2). I guess you've forgotten where is the right line what happens to me many times. XD
6. 01:41:386 (4,5) - OK, I'm thinking now it's not a misunderstanding, but it doesn't really sound cool IMO. D: Could you swap it as I said just before? ;3
7. 01:42:310 (1) - Missing clap at the beginning of the slider.
8. 02:05:386 (2) - Is it a missing clap at the beginning or are you aware of no clap at this moment?
9. 02:12:310 (3) - As above, but at the end of the slider.
10. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - And again - I think whistles instead of claps sound better here. But it's just my opinion. XD

Krfawy wrote:

Hello! It's Krfawy from the 'Bleeding Queue'! :3 I tried to do my best and find anything what could make your map a little more rankable or something (even if it's not a good idea to call Krfawy for help! XD).

Easy

1. 00:29:386 (4) - Maybe a whistle hitsound at the end? Just a pure hestitation. XD It sounds better. Added.
2. 00:55:233 (3) - But I think a whistle might fit to the vocals. Yeah. The end of the syllable is higher.
3. 01:04:002 (2) - *A really stupid thing from me* Could you move the red point in this slider to X=264 Y=124? I guess this will look a little nicer. Okay. It makes the point in the center.
4. 01:06:771 (1) - I guess the finish hitsound would be cool at the beginning of the slider. Added.
5. 01:14:156 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could use some whistles to the "INA-INA-INA-INA-INA" or whatever she sings? XD Because I've seen you've used some claps in the other difficulties and I think you could use whistles instead of them but to the same rhytm. Added a consistency in this part.
6. 01:38:156 (2) - Maybe a whistle instead of a finish would be better at the very end of the slider? Finish hitsound sounds better here, so no change.
7. 01:45:540 (1) - Just a suggestion - maybe a finish would be at the beginning of the slider? And a clap would be at the end of the slider? Added. It sounds better.
8. 01:46:925 (2) - Maybe this slider would have two whistles: at the beginning and at the end? xD Added.
9. 02:10:463 (1) - A missing clap in the middle of the slider. XD Added to make the consistency.
10. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,1) - How about using whistles again to the rhytm before the chours? :3 Added. To make the same hitsound pattern around the difficulties.
11. 03:21:540 (1) - Maybe this slider could have a whistle at the end like in Normal difficulty? :3 I think it fits here! Added.

Normal

1. 01:14:156 (1,2) - There's no hitsounds at (1) when at (2) are claps. But IMO whistles would fit better here. Just my opinion. I want the "nai" syllable to have a hitsound, so there is no hitsounds in the first. But, replaced the claps by whistles.
2. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe you could use some whistles like you used claps in the previous "INA-INA-INA-INA" (orz) moment? I don't know what she's singing but you know, that moment before the chours. XD Fixed
3. 02:38:848 (5) - Just maybe delete this circle? I think players would be surprised by such a big amount of objects in just one combo. D: So please, make it easier by deleting this object. XDFixed

Hard

1. 00:20:617 (1,2) - Isn't the spacing a little weird here? And 00:22:002 (3,4) - it's a weird spacing too! D: Could you fix it by using a default spacing at those objects? Used a constant distance
2. 01:14:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of claps, maybe use whistle hitsounds? I think this will sound better.
3. 01:23:848 (5) - Missing clap, I guess.
4. 01:28:233 (4) - Maybe a whistle at the beginning of the slider? It doesn't right. So I let it what it was.
5. 01:36:771 (2,3) - Um, please - remove the clap in (3) and mat clap at (2). I guess you've forgotten where is the right line what happens to me many times. XD There were mods that I have to switch the notes, so I forgot to edit the hitsounds.
6. 01:41:386 (4,5) - OK, I'm thinking now it's not a misunderstanding, but it doesn't really sound cool IMO. D: Could you swap it as I said just before? ;3 Again, I forgot to swap the hitsounds.
7. 01:42:310 (1) - Missing clap at the beginning of the slider. Added the clap
8. 02:05:386 (2) - Is it a missing clap at the beginning or are you aware of no clap at this moment? Actually, there's no clap. It follows the vocals. And, there's no drum sound here.
9. 02:12:310 (3) - As above, but at the end of the slider. Same reason as before.
10. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - And again - I think whistles instead of claps sound better here. But it's just my opinion. XD Fixed.

That's all I can advice in this mapset. Let me know if you find anything what could help you from my mod. This mod is full of hitsound suggestions, which helped me.

Now let me say good luck, because this mapset is really relaxing and cool! X3 I am happy I opened my queue just because I can see so many awesome mappers! I haven't known about! It's a really nice mapset! :3 I hope it will be ranked someday and I'll be able to play it! ^ - ^

LVU Bluddy! O3O

Frostmourne wrote:

Hello~

I'm going to check this soon. Just a reminder for myself ~

1. 00:11:386 (1) - Move this to x372, y336, to flow better,
2. 00:16:463 (2,3) - Improve this blanket, looks a bit wrong
3. 00:22:002 (4) - try move this to x64, y136, for unstack 00:20:156 (2) then 00:22:463 (1) - to x36 y228 ...
4. 00:46:925 (3) - Try to keep the same distance between them like this: http://puu.sh/8OMMM.jpg
5. 01:16:002 (3) - I don't like this slider xD
6. 01:36:771 (1,2) - this blanket is right? looks weird for me.

1. 00:09:310 - Add a circle?
2. 00:21:079 (1) - Try move the second point x212 y156 and the last for x172 y152
3. 00:22:463 - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/8PF0p.jpg
4. 00:49:002 - ^ http://puu.sh/8PF8w.jpg
5. 00:52:694 - ^ http://puu.sh/8PFfb.jpg
6. 01:06:310 (6) - Move the second point to x68 y220 and move 01:06:771 (1) - to x24 y128
7. 01:15:771 (2) - this rhythm confused me in the first time, i prefer this in the white tick.

1. 00:08:386 (2) - http://puu.sh/8PG2S.jpg
2. 00:15:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/8PGmr.jpg
3. 00:20:156 (4) - Move this to x294 y52 for overlap the tail 00:18:540 (1)
4. 01:36:310 (1) - Move the second point to x306 y110

LucyS wrote:

Hello Sheela
Returning ~

[Eazy]

1. 00:11:386 (1) - Move this to x372, y336, to flow better, Fixed
2. 00:16:463 (2,3) - Improve this blanket, looks a bit wrong. Fixed
3. 00:22:002 (4) - try move this to x64, y136, for unstack 00:20:156 (2) then 00:22:463 (1) - to x36 y228 ... Moved them with new values.
4. 00:46:925 (3) - Try to keep the same distance between them like this: http://puu.sh/8OMMM.jpg Fixed
5. 01:16:002 (3) - I don't like this slider xD Change the slider pattern.
6. 01:36:771 (1,2) - this blanket is right? looks weird for me. Fixed the blanket (I don't know if you meant by that).

[Normal]

1. 00:09:310 - Add a circle? I don't want to overdo the difficulty, so no fix.
2. 00:21:079 (1) - Try move the second point x212 y156 and the last for x172 y152 I want to to make it rotate to 00:22:002 (2) . And, it make a little flow.
3. 00:22:463 - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/8PF0p.jpg Changed the rhythm
4. 00:49:002 - ^ http://puu.sh/8PF8w.jpg Changed the rhythm
5. 00:52:694 - ^ http://puu.sh/8PFfb.jpg Personally, it doesn't fit. So, no changes here.
6. 01:06:310 (6) - Move the second point to x68 y220 and move 01:06:771 (1) - to x24 y128 Fixed with custom values.
7. 01:15:771 (2) - this rhythm confused me in the first time, i prefer this in the white tick. Moved the slider to the white tick, and changed the pattern.

[Hard]

1. 00:08:386 (2) - http://puu.sh/8PG2S.jpg You only show me a screenshot with no indications. Do I have to improve the blanket? If so, I fixed it.
2. 00:15:079 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/8PGmr.jpg Fixed.
3. 00:20:156 (4) - Move this to x294 y52 for overlap the tail 00:18:540 (1) Fixed the stack.
4. 01:36:310 (1) - Move the second point to x306 y110 Fixed the blanket with new values.

That's all, Good Luck!

Tip: If you mod blankets, use osu! default skin. This way, you can post a more precise values. You can go to the Options, under the Editor section, and select Use default skin. This will only use the skin in the editor. You don't have to return to a skin you use to play.

Frostmourne wrote:

General
- Tick rate 2 for every diff? I think it can fit and full fill the sound on some gaps from using consecutive long sliders in Easy and Normal as well. Fixed
- Offset is slightly off. 302(-8) is much more accurate. (please change it after you are done everything else in this mod in order to avoid timeline conflicts.Fixed
- I highly recommend you use [url=puu.sh/8WME5/39d1da44a0.rar]this[/url] hitsound and place into your folder for S:C1 Fixed
I will suggest you about the sections in the map that you are to use whether S or S:C1 according to drum usage in the music and here is the list
00:00:310 => S
00:29:848 => S:C1
00:44:617 => S
00:58:925 => S:C1
01:14:156 => S
01:16:925 => S:C1
01:47:386 => S
02:01:694 => S:C1
02:16:925 => S
02:22:463 => S:C1
You also need to listen to the music and compare with the drum hitsound (soft-hitclap) that I gave you above in order to make them correct.
You will get suggestion about clap from other mods anyway so it's your job to fit it with the music.

Easy
01:46:925 (2) - clap on the start of this as you can hear similar drum on 01:45:540 (1) - as well (where you added) Fixed
02:24:310 (1) - this note could be too soon after the spinner. I suggest you map this way. Just replace these sliders with spinner because the vocal in the music is kind of sloppy and hard to follow them with sliders. Following with spinners like this is better imo. Fixed

SPOILER

Normal
00:02:156 (1,2) - you could make it a little smoother like this. Don't worry about spacing much though because it looks relatively the same as 1.2x Tried my best, but fixed.

SPOILER

00:12:540 (3) - move this slider 1 grid right and the spacing will not be overlapped as similar as between this pair 00:11:848 (1,2) -
an overlap like http://puu.sh/8WNJH/1db2fb9f7b.jpg is not good when you compare with http://puu.sh/8WNLW/a5f11455db.jpg Fixed
00:15:540 (2) - down and left 1 grid to avoid a little overlap Fixed
I highly suggest you fix overlapping things like the ideas I gave you above and about placing objects, generally, you don't need to map and rely on grid snap all the time as it sometime breaks your spacing wise and causes some overlap between notes which is unintentional.

Hard
00:17:617 (2,3,4,5) - try to space these notes' spacings equally based on your default spacing (1.2x I guess?) Fixed
so it should look like this after it's fixed.

SPOILER

01:06:771 (1) - to 01:12:540 (1) - I suggest you remove all finish use in this section because it can be too noisy and loudly than it should be. The music isn't as intense as it should be filled with these finishes. A little use like 02:11:386 (1) - is fine. Using the finishes on the long section like that is not.
I also personally think that 1.1x default spacing is better than 1.2x but whatever.. If you are going to change to 1.1x, it will require you a lot of work on rearranging objects to 1.1x the whole map so it's fine to keep it 1.2x but please check spacing carefully when you map. (Grid Snap no need to be enabled at all!)

Find more mods until you think your hitsounding and beat placement are up to par for ranking (5mods+ is required) and you can call me for a recheck after that.

Good luck on finding mods!

Number5 wrote:

Easy
03:21:532 (1) - Don't change slider velocity in easy. True. Fixed.

Normal
01:08:609 (3,1,2,3) - Too hard for normal players. It feels okay, so no changes.
02:25:917 (4,5,6) - Too hard for normal players. It feels okay, so no changes.
03:21:532 (3) - Don't change slider velocity in normal. Fixed.

Hard
Tick rate 1 is best. I want to keep the same tick rate to all the difficulties.
00:48:763 (2,3,4) - Too hard for hard players. Fixed.
02:55:686 (1,1) - Don't make the note that too closed to spinner's end. Removed the note.

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
すごくいいの歌だ！
from my queue and m4m
[Easy]

1. 02:16:917 (1) - Reduce the Hit Sound volume at this time section to : 5% , sounds better (Actually much better) Fixed
2. 03:21:532 (1) - i Prefer this slider changed into a spinner, since the slider tick's sound is quite disturbing for this outro. I prefer the slider in the end.
3. 01:14:148 (1) - Reduce the hit sound volume to 5% too at this timing section. Fixed
4. 01:46:917 (2) - Add "Finish" at the tail. It doesn't fit with the beat in the music. There's no cymbal sound here.

[Normal]

1. 00:06:532 (4) - Move this a bit to x:272 , y:240 to keep the distance consistently. Fixed
2. 00:22:686 (2) - This circle is a bit too far away from the previous object~ Fixed
3. 00:56:609 (2) - ^^^ Fixed
4. 01:14:148 (1) - Reduce the hit sound volume to 5% at this timing section. Fixed
5. 01:46:455 (4) - Add finish on the tail. It doesn't fit with the beat in the music. There's no cymbal sound here.
6. 02:16:917 (1) - same like 01:14:148 (1)~ Fixed
7. 03:21:532 (3) - the sound that comes from the slider tick didn't fit the vocal in my opinion. Consider to change this into a spinner~ I prefer the slider in the end.

[Hard]

1. 00:48:302 (1) - I suggest to move this to x:164 , y:332 to avoid Anti jump. Fixed before
2. 00:53:148 (3) - ^^^ to x:308 , y:264 to avoid Anti Jump too. Fixed
3. 01:03:763 (1) -Consider too checking this slider , since jump in this part is not good for me. I think it's fine. I might investigate it.
4. 01:05:609 (1) - Anti jump too, i suggest to move all the other 2 too. Fixed
5. 01:14:148 (1) - Hit sound :5% at this timing section Fixed
6. 01:18:302 (2) - Move this to x : 388 , y: 308 Fixed
7. 01:27:071 (1) - I suggest to move this to x:444 , y: 184 to keep the distance (and to look prettier w) Fixed
8. 01:33:071 (2) - x:28 , y:176 to avoid anti jump too~ Fixed
9. 01:33:994 (1,2,3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8YJGf.PNG Fixed. It makes the flow better.
10. 01:39:302 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/8YJHj.PNG ? It's better flipped. Fixed the distance though.
11. 01:44:609 (2) - I suggest to move this to x : 152 , y: 176. following with 01:45:763 (3,5) - to x:104 , y:252~ Made another pattern
12. 02:06:532 (1) - x : 368 , y:164 to looks better. Fixed
13. 02:16:917 (1) - 5% Hitsound at this timing section. Fixed
14. 02:27:071 (2) - Change this slider into 2 circles, and i suggest to make it like this : http://puu.sh/8YJIi.PNG Made another pattern
15. 02:42:071 (6) - Should be placed at x : 144 , y:284. Fixed
16. 02:48:994 (4) - ^^^ x:40 , y:168 Fixed
17. 03:13:917 (1) - ^^^ x:344 , y: 168 Fixed

Hope this help, hope this got ranked soon~!

Shurelia wrote:

Lol,
Thanks for the Shurelia . XD

TheForgotten5 wrote:

Hi there from modding queue!

There are no suggestions that I could think of, so I gave you a star instead!

Good luck!

boseslm wrote:

Easy

00:56:148 (1) - move to white line and add a note on 00:57:532 I like better mine.
01:35:378 (4) - the curve should follow the beat This is something that we call a "flow". Fixed.
02:54:302 (1) - should start on white line The vocals starts here. So no change have been done.

Normal

00:15:532 (2) - the clap should on the start of the slider Fixed.
00:29:840 - KIAI TIME? There's already a kiai time here.
01:15:994 (2) - the end of the slider should on the white line ( 01:16:455 I like the way it was. No change was done.
02:11:148 (3) - ^ ( 02:11:378 It sounds better. Fixed.

Hard

00:00:302 (1) - add a clap at the end of the silder Added the clap.
01:16:917 (7,8,9) - change to 1/6 and change it, like the picture (I don't think it is a good advice ) Seems really hard for a hard difficulty. In fact, hard difficulties don't use 1/6 notes.
http://puu.sh/98HvF/119eb356c8.jpg
01:36:071 (5) - nc Fixed.

good map, good music

AllStar12 wrote:

Sorry for being late! Orz

• Hard Difficulty

1. 00:22:917 (2) - Distance snap from circle note 2 to slider 3 is 1.28x. Re-position the circle note to x: 416 y: 95 to keep it consistently 1.20x Thanks. I'm not really good with distance snap in Hard
2. 00:23:840 (1,2,3) - The path felt a bit weird for me in this part. How about try something like this while keeping the slider 3 tail being blanketed? Fixed
   
   Example

   
3. 00:54:302 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap between these seems quite low, not sure if intentional but if you're planning on using 1.20x as a default, I would suggest fixing parts such as this. Fixed
4. 01:00:071 (2) - Re-position it to x: 348 y: 44 to change the distance snap from 1.26x to 1.20x Fixed
5. 01:11:378 (3) - bit too far from slider 2 re-position it closer to make it 1.20x instead of 1.37x. Fixed
6. 01:34:686 (3) - Re-position it to x: 28 y: 176 if you planned to completely overlap that previous spot.
7. Starting from 01:47:378 to 02:03:071 the distance snap seems to stagger from about 1.10x to 1.40x in most of the parts. Not sure if it's intentional but if it wasn't, fix the parts to being 1.20x.
8. 02:22:455 (1) - Could extend the spinner from 02:22:340 to 02:23:840 since the drums start at that time.
9. 02:31:917 (2,3,4,5,1) - Did some re-positioning and tweaking to some of the notes, see if you like this also with the code:
   
   Sample and Code

   
   

   193,22,151917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,86,152148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   274,173,152378,2,0,B|301:199|340:206|340:206|365:175|369:138,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   296,88,153071,2,0,P|329:57|373:48,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   274,173,153763,6,0,L|242:333,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   The mini jumps are fine but just watch out for those distance snap in certain parts of the map if you're planning on using 1.20x as the common distance snap. Also, this if my own opinion but I believe you're using the NC bit too much for it being hard. Try out having a new combo every one or two big white ticks.

• Normal Difficulty

1. 00:12:071 (2,3) - Just a suggestion, have it like this shown to you as for better flow? Fixed
   
   Picture and Code

   
   

   289,163,12071,2,0,P|340:115|349:94,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   420,141,12532,2,0,P|434:209|448:227,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:15:994 (3,4) - Re-position slider 3 to x: 386 y: 111 for bit better flow from slider 2 and re-position slider 4 x: 384 y: 288 to fix up the distance snap after. Fixed
3. 02:22:455 (1) - Could extend the spinner from 02:22:340 to 02:23:840 since the drums start at that time. Fixed
4. 03:21:532 (1) - Tweaked it so that it's symmetrical, here's the picture and code: Fixed
   
   Picture and Code

   
   

   445,98,201532,6,0,B|367:79|334:34|334:34|256:53|178:34|178:34|145:79|67:98,1,420,0|2,0:0|2:2,0:0:0:0:

   
   Good difficulty, just in case, check carefully on the NC.

• Easy Difficulty

1. 01:15:994 (3) - Fixed the stack for the slider's tail, here's the code: Fixed
   

   335,188,75994,2,0,B|239:191|196:145|196:145|182:88|156:67,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 02:39:994 (2) - Have this slider curve so it'll flow bit better to 3? Fixed
   
   Example

   
   Nothing much to say, pretty good here.

If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck

Easy
02:29:840 (3) - finish at the end of this (02:31:686)

Normal
fine

Hard
01:11:840 (4) - clap at the start
01:17:263 (8,9) - something like a little closer spacing seems to fit the pace of this map more than the current. Your choice to fix it or not though

SPOILER

01:40:455 (2) - move it down 1 grid may be more fitting to the main spacing you have done here
03:00:186 (5) - clap here
03:00:763 (7) - change this to stream feels much more giving the feel to the song more.
Just add claps on these 03:00:763 (7,8,9) - and the end of this slider 03:00:302 (6) -

SPOILER

03:01:225 (1) - finish head

Sorry for late... I will be bubbling once these things are applied.
no kd

Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck with this~~

Garven wrote:

Man, your circle:slider ratio is very lopsided haha.

[General]
I'd refrain from using claps until 00:15:071 - Fixed
01:45:763 - Not sure why you're spamming finishes at the end of the chorus here. It sticks out and sounds poor against the melody line. Fixed

[Normal]
01:14:148 (1,2) - I'm not really sure what you're following here. Considering that she's just saying "nothing nothing nothing nothing" maybe even having a blank area with nothing mapped would work well. You'd have to do that at 02:16:917 (1) - too if you did though. Made another pattern

[Hard]
01:16:917 (7,8,9) - This part kind of sticks out in a couple ways: it breaks your strong 1/2 rhythm usage, and it's also not snapped correctly. The drummer is using a triplet rhythm here, and using a duplet just doesn't mesh well. The problem is that if we do follow it exactly, the rhythm itself sticks out against the rest of your mapping. I think a compromise of leaving these as three 1/2 rhythms as all circles would work since it would emphasize the drumming still with circles which you rarely use. Give it a try and see what you think. Okay, I can get that. Fixed.
02:53:840 (1) - End this at 02:55:455 - so it at least follows something in the music Fixed
03:03:878 (5) - I'm not understanding why this 1/4 is here There this little drum beat here. But, I deleted it. I can't listen to that beat.

Nice maps, but they feel way too reliant on sliders overall. Is it because of the weird shapes slider?

Garven wrote:

Nah, was mainly referring to this:





It's no biggie, but it felt a bit too much for my own enjoyment. Since sliders require next to zero accuracy to hit, there's very little challenge here.

Anyway, rebubbled!

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

all diff.. looks good..
not really need more mod..
anyway already bubbled.. :3

i skip this..
take my star
although not really need anymore.. :3

go go ranked.. :3

Cloudchaser wrote:

This song is beautiful ;-; I'd like to rank this now

Kibbleru wrote:

this is much better than when i first modded it! gj!

neonat wrote:

You could bring out more effect with sounds

Hard

00:21:302 (2,3) - instead of the whistle you used at 00:21:532 and 00:21:994 (3) I believe using the drum whistle puts greater effect there
00:23:148 (3) - somehow that angle just makes it look less appealing with it being lopsided next to 00:22:455 (1) I don't understand this one.
01:00:302 (3) - drum whistle on start of slider
01:02:148 (6) - drum whistle instead
01:03:763 (2) - ^ on the repeat
01:05:840 (7,8) - drum whistles instead
01:13:455 (3) - remove the finish on the slider, unless you intend to repeat that slider, and then put a finish on the end as it's more suited for music like at 01:13:917
01:16:917 (7) - finish
01:19:455 (5) - drum whistle on start of slider
01:20:378 (7) - drum whistle on end of slider
01:23:148 (4) - drum whistle on start of slider
01:24:071 (6) - drum whistle on end of slider
01:26:609 (3) - ^
01:28:225 (7) - drum whistle on start of slider
01:33:994 (4) - drum whistle on end of slider
01:35:148 (7) - ^
01:37:686 (5) - drum whistle on repeat end
01:41:609 (5) - drum whistle on start of slider
01:42:994 (8) - drum whistle
01:46:455 (1) - drum whistle on end of slider
01:59:840 (5) - make it like 01:59:378 (3,4) but at a different angle? To go together to make a form of phrase Something like that?
02:03:763 (3) - clap on start of slider as well, it's the same as 02:07:225 (5,1,2,3)
02:25:686 (4) - drum whistle on end of slider
02:27:302 (3) - drum whistle
02:29:378 (3) - drum whistle on end of slider
02:33:071 (5) - drum whistle on repeat end
02:34:686 (8) - drum whistle
02:37:455 (5) - ^
02:40:455 (3) - drum whistle on end of slider
02:42:071 (6) - drum whistle
02:44:148 (3) - drum whistle on end of slider
02:47:840 (3) - ^
02:49:225 (5) - ^
02:50:378 (1) - finish on end of slider
02:51:071 (3) - ^
03:06:763 (1,3) - could blanket even more perfectly
03:08:609 (1) - whistle on start of slider
03:15:994 (1) - ^

Hitsounds could be used for all difficulties

Good Luck

neonat wrote:

The first one you don't understand: the spacing between the 2 ends of 00:22:455 (1) and the other slider is not equal, making it less neat.
2nd one: making that slider into 2 circles instead would fit better in phrasing.

Hope this explains what I was saying

Garven wrote:

答えが返ってきても もう遅いよ

GAMEINSTALLER wrote:

Easy
Disable widescreen support They are already turn off.
00:02:617 (2) - Bring down the middle tick of the slider a little to blanket better
00:46:925 (3) - Bring the first red tick of the slider a little up to blanket better
00:58:002 (2) - curve this and make it a blanket?

1. Previewtime isn't snapped. So you must put here 01:17:840 -
2. 00:00:302 - ~ 00:15:071 - no hit sounds ? o.o Please use something to this part ... for example whistle sound.

1. HPDrain Rate -1. It's a bit high for this difficulty.
2. 01:14:148 - Please turn up the volume about 20%. I feel this sudden decrement of volume would confuse players at this part.
3. 02:02:148 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
4. 03:08:609 (1) - ^ Same

1. HPDrain Rate -1.
2. 01:14:148 - Same as easy diff about volume.
3. 01:35:840 (6) - missing a clap
4. 02:11:378 (3,1,2) - Please check spacing here.
5. 02:16:917 - Same.

1. AR +1 ? It's a slow for this BPM.
2. 01:14:148 - Same as easy diff about volume.
3. 02:16:917 - ^

alacat wrote:

[General]

1. Previewtime isn't snapped. So you must put here 01:17:840 -
2. 00:00:302 - ~ 00:15:071 - no hit sounds ? o.o Please use something to this part ... for example whistle sound.

[Easy]

1. HPDrain Rate -1. It's a bit high for this difficulty.
2. 01:14:148 - Please turn up the volume about 20%. I feel this sudden decrement of volume would confuse players at this part.
3. 02:02:148 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
4. 03:08:609 (1) - ^ Same

[Normal]

1. HPDrain Rate -1.
2. 01:14:148 - Same as easy diff about volume.
3. 01:35:840 (6) - missing a clap
4. 02:11:378 (3,1,2) - Please check spacing here.
5. 02:16:917 - Same.

[Hard]

1. AR +1 ? It's a slow for this BPM. Fixed
2. 01:14:148 - Same as easy diff about volume. Added 20%
3. 02:16:917 - ^ Added 20%

Sorry I kept you waiting for a long time .3. Call me back ~