Chihara Minori - Kyoukai no Kanata · forum

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-18T14:19:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月17日 at 21:32:35

Artist: Chihara Minori
Title: Kyoukai no Kanata
Source: Kyoukai no Kanata
Tags: Opening beyond the boundary
BPM: 184
Filesize: 8480kb
Play Time: 04:46
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.95 stars, 761 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 1068 notes)
Normal (3.05 stars, 338 notes)

Download: Chihara Minori - Kyoukai no Kanata
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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non break
but I hope to you enjoy it.
Insane done by me
Hard done by me
Normal done by me
Easy don't need this map

Last edited by Laurier 2013-12-17T12:33:01+00:00, edited 16 times in total.

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-11-28T14:54:19+00:00

1st!!
nice map and good luck with it

smallboat

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smallboat 2013-11-28T17:38:12+00:00

Hi,Laurier. M4M mod req.(Poor English,I just can talk brief English.)

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

Because it is WIP,so I skipped this diff mod. 0.0

[Hard]

01:12:698 (1) - I think this note can be place farther. 01:12:535 (4) click to 01:12:698 (1) is not flow. Move to (236|108)?
01:25:415 (4) - Slider end move a bit ,become a pattern, try this?

SPOILER

01:51:176 (2) - Slider head +finish? (Because this part is music turn up.)
01:51:828 (3) - Slider head stack 01:49:872 (4) ?
01:55:415 (3) - I recommended move to (304|28) is better flow.
02:13:024 (2) - Slider head stack 02:11:231 (4) ?
02:15:307 (1,2) - Slider head +whistle?
02:17:263 (2) - ^
03:56:394 (3) - Ctrl+g,better flow?
04:14:328 (2) - (368|268),make a appropriate DS ?

[Insane] HP-1 ?

00:50:850 (2) - Ctrl+g?
01:20:850 (2) - Move a bit,(328|180)?
01:27:698 (3) - Slider end stack crooked off.
02:54:111 (4) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:111 (2) - Recommended ctrl+g,better flow.

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope my mod is useful to you.
3.Modding content is a bit short,sorry.

[ infL ]

65 posts

Joined March 2013

[ infL ] 2013-11-28T23:51:03+00:00

Hi this for m4m
Still beginner at modding so just a few things
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/125304

[General]
No kiai time? Some suggestions for times
Should be from
00:53:133 - 01:15:144
01:53:133 - 02:14:002
03:45:307 - 04:12:698
04:21:828 - 04:27:046

[Hard]

00:21:828 (1) - I think flip vertically looks better
04:10:578 (4) - I think you can add a note here
04:12:698 (1) - Blanket (3)
04:29:654 (1) - Blanket

[Insane]

00:10:741 (2) - You could blanket (1)
00:50:524 (1) - ctrl + g
01:08:785 (1) - Here blanket looks nicer and will flow better
03:18:812 (6,7) - Not a huge deal but you could move these 2 down slightly
03:20:524 (1) - I think this should just be a normal 1/2 slider, not 1/4
04:37:481 (1) - Blanket

TheRebellion

22 posts

Joined March 2013

TheRebellion 2013-11-29T02:37:35+00:00

change the source to Kyoukai no Kanata. it will help you

sorry for bad english

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-29T03:06:30+00:00

TheRebellion wrote:
change the source to Kyoukai no Kanata. it will help you

sorry for bad english

Woop thanks

Scarlet Sisters

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Scarlet Sisters 2013-11-29T15:44:18+00:00

休憩入れてくださいお願いします

Quilt

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Quilt 2013-11-29T15:45:04+00:00

i think this map needs break time. kds plz

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-29T16:50:59+00:00

反省会

rawr208

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rawr208 2013-11-29T17:37:32+00:00

love this beatmap and the anime

Last edited by rawr208 2013-12-15T22:09:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-29T17:55:28+00:00

rawr208 wrote:
love this map

thanks \^^/

terametis

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terametis 2013-11-30T03:49:48+00:00

Quilt wrote:
i think this map needs break time. kds plz

Raiku

238 posts

Joined April 2012

Raiku 2013-11-30T05:10:17+00:00

Raiku here! Just started out modding but I have a couple of suggestions!

I'm modding the insane as I feel suggestions coming from someone with experience of playing these maps at a high level using mods such as hidden I feel like i can give some insight onto how i feel certain changes could improve overall playability! Here goes:

[General]

- Insert Kiai time on each of the choruses for each of the diffs! \;D/~kiai~kiai~kiai~

[Insane]

- 00:16:122 (10) - I feel as though the straight slider should be changed to a curve as pictured (http://puu.sh/5xoeZ.jpg) to help with the flow into the stream where I then 00:14:654 - angled the 2 repeating sliders to make for a better progressive effect into the stream! SS: http://puu.sh/5xolA.jpg

- 00:15:307 - On to the stream itself I decided upon making the stack start off very neatly (http://puu.sh/5xoNh.jpg) into a slight progressive curve to coincide with your note placement at the end of the combo (http://puu.sh/5xoOG.jpg) I feel this will improve playability when it comes to hidden and will make for an even but challenging short stream when paired with hardrock \;D/.

- 00:20:850 - On to the next entry to the stream again i angled them to go with the flow (http://puu.sh/5xp7m.jpg). 00:21:176 - In order to add a little variety and a little more movement to this section, I had the stacked stream changed to a very slight angular stream for the first 4 notes then into a stack for the last 4 (http://puu.sh/5xpew.jpg). I feel that the angle of the stream flows very nicely into the similarly angled slider that follows.

- 00:37:154 - Very similar to the last change; I had the first 4 notes of the stream neatly flow into a stack for the last 4 (http://puu.sh/5xpvO.jpg). Again I feel the stationary stack interrupted the flow slightly and I feel the section could benefit from the slight additional movement.

- 00:55:008 - Where note 3, the single note that started on top of the following slider, I changed to fit right in the middle to make a little hoppy note to stream through the two sliders! (http://puu.sh/5xpIU.jpg)

- 00:59:818 (2) - I centered this note in a slight curve to join the flow into the straight slider where before I feel it was placed too close to the first note and interrupted the flow created by the wonderful spacing you had with the pattern that preceded it \;D/ (http://puu.sh/5xpRN.jpg)

- 01:03:975 - I enjoyed toying around with the idea that you could have the stream that precedes this slider to flow out into 2 more notes instead of jumping to a small removed double stack like you had before. I feel like the 2 notes (http://puu.sh/5xq5a.jpg), however you place them, flow brilliantly into the next set of jumps!

- 01:24:029 - Similar to the change at 55 secs, I centered the note between the 2 sliders and curved the last slider to form a bow pointing towards the next slider (http://puu.sh/5xqiq.jpg), I'm happy with the flowiness it creates compared to stacking it!

- 01:25:415 (5) - I moved the slider down a touch to fit the entry into the stack (http://puu.sh/5xqpW.jpg), I really like this stream, very appropriate stacking, it goes in like an earthquake fitting with that part of the song

- 01:25:415 (5) - Timings about 5-10 milliseconds too fast.

[Comments]

That's all I got to report! I'd just like to say I love the map, I hope it gets ranked asap and make sure I'm the first to play it!

Good luck and I hope I helped! \;D/

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2013-11-30T07:35:00+00:00

request in-game

[Normal]
00:21:176 (4) - 若干左にずらすときれいに見えるかもです。
04:04:872 (2) - このスライダーが04:06:176 (1) - このスライダーに重なっているのが気になりました。
02:06:176 - ここの音をとってもいいかもです。

[Hard]
00:26:394 (5) - スライダーのおしりをもう少し右に傾けて、00:27:046 (1) - のスライダーの終点をきれいに包むようにしてみるといいかもです。
03:03:568 (1) - 03:04:546 (3) - ここのスライダーを包むようにしてもいいかもです。

~~ブランケットの提案ばかりで申し訳ない・・・。~~

[Insane]
good.

あまり提案できなくてすいません・・・。
がんばってください、応援してます。

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-30T08:44:17+00:00

CakiP wrote:
~~ブランケットの提案ばかりで申し訳ない・・・。~~

mapを綺麗に見せる提案は大歓迎

thanks for mod guys

HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-11-30T09:30:28+00:00

Hi~ from in-game reqs~

Tag add "beyond the boundary opening kuriyama mirai kanbara akihito nase mitsuki nase hiroomi risa taneda kenn tatsuhisa suzuki" please (all diff)

[Normal]

00:25:089 (2) - What about the idea of keeping a round slider?
01:03:241 - clap?
01:11:394 (1) - NC is not required
02:09:763 - Finish add

[Insane]

00:45:796 - add note here

good map

sorry.. very short..... T.T

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-11-30T09:39:46+00:00

owo/

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-30T10:57:00+00:00

thanks for mod ^^

Sekai-nyan wrote:
owo/

owo/

P A N

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P A N 2013-11-30T11:58:38+00:00

hi :3

[Insane]

00:02:589 (1) - I think this NC is not necessary. maybe remove?
00:14:654 - maybe make the volume louder every white tick like 20-30-40% because the song is louder.
00:25:741 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make this shape more symmetry?

SPOILER

00:32:263 (5) - what about finish on tail?
00:48:894 (5) - ctrl+g is better flow imo. next (1) is not a strong beat too so its no need a jump imo.
01:00:959 (1) - 474|196 for perfect blanket.
01:01:774 - what about add note here, i hear a beat there and more playable.
01:04:383 (5) - 310|273 for perfect stack
01:12:209 (4) - 406|157 for ^
01:38:459 (4) - I think ctrl+g here is more fit the song. and next (1)'s beat is no need to jump imo.
01:52:481 (1,2,3,4) - I think 1.0x SV is more playable and easier to hit them like you do it with the previous one.
02:01:448 (2) - 212|309 for perfect stack.
02:05:850 (4) - 463|347 ^
02:14:981 - try this rhythm? I think its more fit for vocal.

03:15:307 (1) - 222|224 for perfect stack.
03:20:198 (3) - tail on 40|240 is already perfect blanket.
03:44:654 (1-4) - 1.0 SV as I suggest. easier and more playable.
04:23:948 (2,3,4) - try to move it like this? maybe more flow.

[Hard]

00:39:437 (4) - move to 359|248 for perfect stack.
00:51:176 (2) - 94|196 for ^
00:52:970 - I think add note here is more playable.
01:17:589 (4) - move tail to 425|186 for better blanket.
01:22:807 (4) - 294|184.
03:18:894 (5) - 254|296.
03:42:372 (4) - 86|231.
03:47:915 (1) - 197|365.
03:57:698 (3) - 260|190.

[Normal]

00:02:589 (2) - 328|164 for perfect blanket.
00:24:111 - add note here would be great ;w; the rhythm still going but instant stop here.

good luck for rank :3 sry for poor mod, your map is so nice

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-11-30T13:07:14+00:00

thanks! fixed!!

RandF

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RandF 2013-12-01T10:40:35+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Tags suggetion (何もないのも寂しいので）
"Opening"
"beyond the boundary"
すぐ始まるmapなのでAudio-Leadinを入れた方が良いと思います
Kiai-Timeは...？

[Normal]

さすがに4分越えのmapでbreak-timeなしはきついような・・・　normalだけでも入れた方が良いかと
01:42:698 (1) - end at 01:43:187
01:43:676 (2) - ちょっと難しいような気がします。01:43:676にnoteだけでもいいかなと
03:35:198 (1,2) - rhythmが取りにくいと思いました。vocalに合わせたこっちが良いと思います
03:49:220-　このfinishは意図的？

[Hard]

02:17:915 (1,2) - ここはstackしない方が良いと思います。このくらいのARだと曲を知らなければ1/1rhythmでたたいてしまう気がします
02:18:568 (3,3) - stack correctly
02:54:437 (1,2,3,4) - 方向を変えた方が好みです。1,3をCtrl+Gとか
03:57:698 (3,2) - stack correctly
04:23:948 (2,3) - ここも04:22:481 (3,5) - ときちんとstackできると思いますが、時間が少し離れているので気にしなくても良いかも

[Insane]

00:25:741 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - こんなpatternどうですか？

SPOILER

217,82,25741,5,2,0:0:0:0:
323,233,25904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,126,26068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,188,26231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,171,26394,5,8,0:0:0:0:
235,295,26557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,126,26720,2,0,L|311:219,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:15:633 (2,3) - stack correctly
01:25:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1,1) - XD
01:28:024 (4) - 離れてますけど01:29:328 (5) - とstack correctly
03:16:285 (6) - ^ on 03:17:589 (6) -
03:20:524 (1) - ^ on 03:18:812 (6,7) -
04:09:274 (2) - x:396 y:172 (stack correctly)
04:17:426 (2) - ^ on 04:18:404 (2) -

stackの提案は細かいところなので無視してOKです
blanketきれいですね～　勉強になりました

~Good Luck~

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-12-01T11:01:30+00:00

ありがとうございます！多分全部直せましたっ

Meg

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Meg 2013-12-02T14:09:28+00:00

I respect your map

And I like this map!!

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-12-02T14:43:29+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
I respect your map
And I like this map!!

thanks >w<

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-12-12T13:55:44+00:00

Hello.

[General]

I'm concerned about the timing because the TV Size version had a very complicated timing. It's seems mostly fine, but I know for sure 04:40:741 (2) is very early. Maybe you can try this timing for the end:
```
280790,404.040404040404,4,2,2,40,1,0
281598,571.428571428571,4,2,2,40,1,0
```

[Insane]

00:14:651 - Unsnapped timing section. Snap to 00:14:654 please.
00:20:524 (1,2) - I think switch NC here is better because transition starts on 2. It is more fitting for NC.
Example
01:42:046 (3,4,5) - The music here is actually 1/3. I think you should try to follow it like this:
Example

Just example:

[Hard]

00:26:394 (5) - Remove clap from repeat and add to head is more fitting imo.
00:52:807 (6) - I think it is more easy to understand if you replace this with 1/2 slider to follow with music and make jump to 1:
Example
01:41:720 (2,3,4) - Because music is 1/3, maybe you can try this rhythm:
Example
02:05:524 (2) - Try Ctrl+J here, see if you like:
Example

[Normal]

00:51:828 (3) - Replace with 1/1 slider maybe is more nice to play and follows music:
Example
01:43:676 (2,1) - I think it's unnatural to hit the 1 on the red tick here. Maybe you can try extending 2 and adding repeat, I think it will be more nice to play:
Example
04:04:872 (2,1) - The overlap is not so great imo. Maybe you can rearrange like this:
Example
04:28:024 (1) - I think remove NC is best, this NC seems not needed because it makes 04:27:046 (1) combo too short.
04:36:176 (1) - Remove NC is best imo to make similar combo length with 04:32:589 (1,2,3,4).