1. EmingK's Easy (1.86 stars, 80 notes)
2. Insane (4.97 stars, 251 notes)
3. S.Boat's Normal (4.22 stars, 132 notes)
4. Yomi's Hard (4.81 stars, 222 notes)

Tsukuyomi wrote:

下完音效了
http://puu.sh/4S4N6.rar
有个地方要用特殊的clap
音效和改好的diff都在里面

Kin wrote:

Yomi's Hard :

hit sound

00:13:305 (1) - delete clap nope，there is clap in BGM
01:06:193 (3) - add clap ok
01:07:971 (2) - ^ ok
01:08:416 (1) - delete clap ok
01:17:305 (1) - delete finish no,there is finish in BGM

00:47:305 (2,3) - how about ctrl+g ? and make 00:47:527 (3,4) - same spacing as 1, 2 (something like this http://puu.sh/4UclV.jpg ) and ofc if you done this, don't forget to adjust spacing after this pattern nice,changed
01:20:860 (1,2,3,4) - use same spacing, it feel strange to play I think it is awesome to play now 0.0

Kin wrote:

Hi M4M here ~

emingK's Easy :
the flow is good but hit sound, sound really strange to me you should have not need to write so much stuffs, just say that 24clap is better is OK XD so fixed to Yuki: QAQ以后再也不作死了

hit sound (no change will be pointed out)

00:07:082 - delete clap
00:08:193 - ^
00:09:749 (1) - add finish
00:10:638 - delete clap
00:11:082 (2) - add clap
00:13:971 - delete clap
00:14:638 - add clap
00:15:971 - delete clap
00:16:416 - add clap
00:17:749 - delete clap
00:18:193 - add clap
00:21:082 - delete clap
00:21:749 - add clap
00:23:082 - delete clap
00:23:527 (1) - add clap
00:24:860 - delete clap
00:25:305 (3) - add clap
00:28:193 - delete clap
00:28:860 (4) - add clap
00:29:527 - delete clap
00:31:749 - ^
00:32:416 - add clap
00:35:305 - delete clap
00:35:971 - add clap
00:39:305 - delete clap
00:43:082 - add clap
00:44:193 - add drum as sampleset
00:44:860 - add clap + finish finish added to next note
00:46:638 - add clap
00:47:749 - add drum as sampleset
00:48:416 - add clap
00:50:193 - ^
00:51:305 - add drum as sampleset
00:51:971 - add clap
00:56:638 - delete clap
00:57:305 - add clap
00:58:416 - delete clap
00:59:082 (3) - add clap
01:01:971 - delete clap
01:02:638 - add clap + finish
01:03:749 - delete clap
01:04:416 - add clap
01:05:527 - delete clap
01:06:193 (3) - add clap
01:10:860 - delete clap
01:11:527 - add clap
01:12:638 - delete clap
01:13:305 - add clap
01:16:193 - delete clap
01:16:860 (3) - add clap
01:18:416 - delete clap
01:19:749 - ^
01:20:416 (3) - add clap
01:21:527 - delete clap + add finish
01:22:193 - add clap
01:23:305 - delete clap + add finish
01:23:971 - add clap
01:25:082 (1) - delete clap

00:12:416 (1) - I prefer to move it a lil more on the top, the flow will be better. If you done this don't forget to adjust spacing OK

Kin wrote:

Hi M4M here ~

Yuki :

00:16:193 - We can clearly hear a drum sound here, so a blank feel kinda strange, add something make (3) a slider already
00:29:971 (2) - how about ctrl + g ? flow is better for me ok
00:47:971 (6) - if you tried to blanket, try to make it better http://puu.sh/4UcTq.jpg fixed
01:04:416 (3,1) - it's just me but i'm not a big fan of this kind of pattern ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ
00:55:971 (1,2) - 00:57:749 (1,2) - 01:10:193 (1,2) - yeah kinda nazi but I'm pretty sure blanket can be better fixed, I try my best to blanket best-.-

good luck ~

sjoy wrote:

[E喵]
00:06:194 (1) - fin 好
00:39:749 (3) - 88 ,88 感觉更好如果移的话记得调整后面 好 我猜你一定开了gridXD

sjoy wrote:

[Yuki]
我跟你说自己的图用自己名字命名会被某些大BAT强烈指责的 好吧我改惹
开始唱的部分 WHIS可以参考HARD 我去看看
00:35:749 (5) - 做个BLANKET 好
01:03:082 (1) - fin 好
01:25:749 (5,6) - 好奇怪的摆法 yeah I like it

没了GOOD LUCK

Hollow Wings wrote:

from q

Insane

这太简单了，HP+1 呵呵后，好

1. 00:23:528 (9) - 改成向左凸？尾指向右下感觉顺手点 觉得没差多少
2. 00:28:416 (7) - ctrl+g （个人觉得顺手 不好
3. 00:29:971 (2) - ctrl+g （个人觉得这里的跳这样处理更好些，等于是1大跳分成2大跳 前面那个要求ctrl+g，这个又要变回来，好我先变回来吧看看后面人怎么书
4. 00:41:749 (6) - nc？ 好
5. 01:07:305 (4) - 虽然我打起来没问题不过如果把折返放在头的左上更顺手些 打insane看到这种折返基本都不动光标的所以不改了
6. 01:16:193 (2) - 其实改成向下凸更好，改的话如果尾巴依旧stack那么头的位置可能要拖到242,117的位置，而且跟你这个diff其他两个类似的梗也很像。改的话后面的3与之后的三连的flow稍微调整一下 那不改了
7. 01:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这一整片跳其实都很卡手，当然我打着是没问题，不改也无大碍。只是考虑顺手的问题的话我推荐：4反向，56换一下位置 这个不错

挺好的

Hollow Wings wrote:

EmingK's Easy

为什么kiai和别的diff不一样噗

Fycho wrote:

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[EmingK's Easy]
只是一个GD的EASY而已这么另类干嘛？KIAI和其他diff统一，虽然是GD QAQ老司机开始没带我，统一了
这DIFF spread喷到爆，normal中圈，ez炒鸡大圈。。。CS3

QQ Qun wrote:

( ´ ω ` Yuki | mtb<*******> 14:02:02
ez控制在2stars及以下吧，nm3~4就好

然后我就哭了
00:38:193 –这里可以插绿线调整音量啥的，不然主歌一路音效到底没有高低顿挫 好好好

• 
  00:07:971 –重音在这aho，http://puu.sh/4UvXR.jpg, EZ就老实的基于鼓点下节奏别多轨互串了
  00:11:527 (3) –重音在这00:12:193 -，延长滑条，去掉后面的note
  00:13:305 (3) –Nc改到这
  00:27:527 (3) –鼓点在这00:28:416 -，别串人声里去
  00:28:860 (4) –又串钢琴去了。。
  00:38:193 (2,3) –这样http://puu.sh/4Uw54.jpg
  00:48:860 (1,2,3) –第三句别和前两句一样的节奏，很别扭，一般日系歌曲第二段主歌都是这样..换下00:50:638 (3) –增加节奏密度，作为KIAI过渡
  00:52:416 (1) –finish奇吵，要么把转盘停这00:54:193 –
  01:06:638 (1) –节奏太无聊，这样http://puu.sh/4Uwb6.jpg
  01:10:193 (1,2) –我倒觉得平铺段的节奏应该跟鼓点下正常的，而不是3/2滑条跟人声，这里00:55:971 (1,2,3) –也是，不过不是大问题
  01:15:527 (2) –缩短，跟鼓点，后面加note或者变折返
  01:17:971 (1,2) –人声跟的极其别扭,建议和开始那几个一样的
  01:25:971 (2) -^

Fycho wrote:

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

• all diffs check this please:
  
  Title: 届かない恋 ’13，注意日文标题的标点符号应该是全角而罗马标题是半角 fixed，你再看看对不对？
  Romanised Artist: Uehara Rena,日文歌手一般是姓前名后，极少数是反过来的，建议还是改正了 fixed
  没有更好的背景吗？1024x600而且有字真不怎么好 BG可以再挑
  Combo颜色貌似是defalut的？选个更好的颜色吧 四暗刻
  所有音效组滑条静音 好

[Insane]

• 
  00:12:194 (4,5,6,7) –这个节奏? http://puu.sh/4UtTM.jpg，可以突出00:12:193 –的那个锣声，而且最好加上finish，三连这里别扭 好
  00:13:306 (1) –首whistle太弱，换finish 好
  00:19:972 (6,1) –这个3/4接1/1用的不好，3/4换成1/2或者把后面两个1/1缩短 好
  00:31:749 (2) –白线上有音，用切分节奏不好，改1/2合适 好
  00:41:082 (5) –这样？http://puu.sh/4Uu60.jpg，00:40:860 –这里也能加个note有乐器音 好
  00:52:416 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) –good pattern，感觉00:54:193 (5) –还能往上摆远点，音更强 移上去了
  00:55:082 (1,2,3,4) –之前的空拍突然来这个会措手不及的，其实可以试试先1/4的节奏再1/8的节奏有个过渡 前面四个是钢琴有1/8后面4个是鼓没1/8，先不改
  00:55:971 (1) –KIAI段音效严重太弱太轻，跟主歌比起来。强烈建议换音效 音效没找到特别合适的不过往上调了点音量先
  00:56:638 (2) –间距这么小干嘛？为了blanket不值得而且flow也不好 ctrl+g了
  00:58:416 (2) –这个finish略吵，和前后听起来也不和谐 fixed
  01:03:082 (1,2) -01:04:416 (3,1,2) –长滑条看起来乱,排工整？ 重新摆了下不太好整呢
  01:07:305 (4) –这里听音明显是重音长拍的节奏啊http://puu.sh/4Uuoh.jpg fixed
  01:07:305 –finish 好
  01:09:082 (3) –首漏finish 好
  01:07:305 -01:09:082 –这两个还能想更好的排列梗，这样略平淡 我再想
  01:15:527 (1,2) –flow猎奇 猎奇点就猎奇点了-.-
  01:21:527 (4) –首漏finish，其实这里也是长音 好
  01:23:305 (3) –finish啊亲 好
  01:26:193 (1,2,3,4) –最后这节奏也不好也许换成单点会好 看看人家怎么书的

这个diff很多地方节奏密度还没hard大，而且跳也不多，甚至感觉上没hard难

我是比较担心diff spread的，主难度的音效花点功夫吧;w;hard不错

azuretwinight wrote:

Yomi's Hard
很有段落感，很有特点的节奏，不过有一点是音效的使用的问题。。
00:43:082 (4,5,6) - 这里似乎overmap
00:43:749 (2) - 这里缺乏打击感，建议可以与1用一样的音效，本身想法很好可惜总是有一种很闷的感觉。。
00:49:527 (3) - 感觉这个滑条用这种音效不大好，还是用soft好些？ 这里烤肉叫我帮他吧clap去掉了
00:51:082 (2) - 滑条2音效想法比较不错可是我觉得不够规整会有一种比较闷的感觉
01:09:749 (5) - 声音减小的有点多了
后面还有几个类似的地方声音减小的比较大了。。

烤肉说其他nochange.

Insane
嗯，风格和节奏好评，我想有几个值得争议的地方你自己应该也比较清楚，不过个人感觉有些梗有点突兀
00:42:193 (1,2) - 缺乏打击感，音量可以适当加大
00:47:749 (5) - ^
00:49:527 (2,3) - ^ 这里其实vocal高而音乐低，我都想降音乐来着
00:55:082 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方用串连打而不是这种短滑条组好些？前面一直走的是比较简单的beat这里突然用滑条加大了读图和节奏的复杂度。比较突然 前面四个是钢琴后面四个是鼓所以先1/8滑条再1/4连打，并且这也是insane里面可以说唯一比较难的地方了，我个人还是想要保留的，除非bat说不行;W;
01:04:416 (3,1) - 这里不是很美观额。。 还好吧

个人意见，仅供参考。。

azuretwinight wrote:

这里是我的建议（只是建议而已） 这里是我觉得需要修改的地方

General

= =好歌好图，零星需注意

EmingK's Easy
00:11:527 (3) - 觉得这里的finish不是很合适。。不过也无妨如果你觉得这里加了比较好 因为是前奏结束正式进入音乐0.0
嗯。。音效clap在第四白线上会不会比较乱呢。。= =可能我还是见识的不是很多。。 24拍clap属于基础音效啊，很常见的

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from this
[General]
I guess you can add (TV Size) better since it is more common. I will ask a BAT about the title.
It's not recommended to put notes before timing point. so offset should be 4416. Star Stream's map http://osu.ppy.sh/b/223397 also has notes before timing point. It doesn't matter.

[Insane]
Placement
00:18:193(4) I suppose down-curve will be much than up-curve for flow. Uh. Then the flow breaks.

SPOILER

00:22:193(5,6,7,8) this overmap of notes looks a bit odd, so here is example. you can change this part in your own. changed a little.

SPOILER

00:27:193(1,4) swap NC better for music. NC starts at the finish, it looks much better. fixed~
00:37:305(2) player will confuse since the spacing suddenly changed to narrow. I haven't found where it is...
00:41:719(1) useless NC, you shouldn't spam NC. fixed
Rhythm
00:55:082(1,2,3,4) I highly suggest you shouldn't make 1/8 stream here, this song sounds calmly and player won't ecpect this suddun stream even if challeng player. Also I want to keep that...
Hit Sonud
00:44:638(6) add finish at end? nope, sounds strange
00:48:860(7) add finish?
01:03:082(1) add finish at head.
01:26:193(1)^
others added

Overall fine, I hope this Insane will be more improved. Good luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

[Hard]
Placement
00:30:193(3) This note may be overlapped with previous slider, so it looks invisible I suppose. i will consider about it
00:34:638(1) The tail of slider is a bit off screen np
00:50:638(1,2) I suppose down slider looks more nice flow than current one. e.g.)

SPOILER

01:01:305(1) CTRL+G looks more nice flow imo.
01:16:860(5) I expect down-curve flow, so move this note a bit down?

SPOILER

01:18:860(4,1) again flow suggestion, the stack may stop the flow.

SPOILER

all k

Hit Sonud
00:06:194(1) add clap at end nope,only here bgm desn't have clap
00:48:860(1) add finish k
01:22:416 why turn down volume? I can hear these drum sounds clearly. turn to 30%

_AI wrote:

chged to m4m kkk from the queue thingy
will edit this post tmr for the mod, juz to make sure i won't forget :p

[Insane]
00:08:194 (2,3) - flowww breakerr CTRL G(3)
00:09:082 (4) - CTRL G
00:09:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern

00:12:193 (4,5) - CTRL G
00:13:750 (2,5) - Overlap like this is kinda ulgy imo
00:15:528 (2,3) - The flow aren't nice here
00:16:417 (4) - The jump is too big for this one
00:32:860 (1,2,3,4) - This is kinda awkward lol = /// = I think it not bad
01:15:527 (1) - This repeat directly killed the flow ouchhh yeah it kills the flow but I have already let 3 players play the diff then they didn't feel strange, so it is ok~

_AI wrote:

[EmingK's Easy]
00:22:193 (3) - Suggest not curve
00:38:193 (2,4) - C&P one of it will be better
01:19:082 (3) - Curve down a little like this may help the flow

kajiyatta wrote:

[Easy]
Placement
00:48:860(1,3) stack these note? it looks consistence.
Hit Sonud
00:13:305(1) at head, finish better than whistle to follow the music.
01:10:193(1) add finish at head.
01:26:193(2) add finish

1. Insane - change some hitsounds, find a rthyme problem and change one slider's shape
2. Hard - mention hitsound problem
3. Normal - advise CS-1 and AR+1, a few hitsound
4. Easy - seems fine to me, just a nazi suggestion

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Now Insane is being remaped.

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Finish Remapping!

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:05:528 (1) - 尾部的clap和后面比太大声了吧或者干脆说后面太小声？ 去不去掉这里都这样
00:11:082 (6) - Ctrl+G
00:38:193 (1) - ^
00:45:082 (7) - 不好看……顺着下来就好._.
00:57:749 (1) - 尾部是不是少个clap._.?
00:56:860 (3) - ^
00:59:527 (1) - move to 248,8 00:59:971 (3) - 这里flow就会好些
01:00:860 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056666
01:12:416 (2) - Ctrl+G 不好
01:27:971 (1) - End at 01:30:416 -

ts8zs wrote:

[Easy]
End at 01:30:416 - 好

ts8zs wrote:

[Hard]
00:08:193 (1,2) - copy ._.
00:40:193 (2,3) - swap
01:27:971 (1) - End at 01:30:416 -

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

EASY

00:11:527 (3) - if you follow the vocal, this should end on the white tick at 00:12:416 0.0 actually both the start and the end follows the electric guitar ._.

00:47:082 (3) - The turn back point at 00:47:749 should have a whistle instead of a clap keep consistency with 00:44:193 - , and will see if both should be changed..

01:01:305 (2) - Suggesting you add a finish at the start of slider nope, the music and beat goes flat here, adding finish is a bit noisy.

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from your queue


[Insane]
00:19:305 (4) - 172||266 ∑( ° △ °|||) waht?
00:23:082 (3,4) - try tis shape ok

00:41:082 (5) - NC fixed
00:44:638 (7) - change into 3circles oh that's not a good idea imo :<
01:01:305 (1) - ctrl + g and change into slider-circle good~


I like this song and map >< >< thanks~

Good luck!

[ Sana ] wrote:

[Hard]
00:29:305 (1,3) - it can be hard to read this hidden note intention
00:49:527 (3) - make more perfectly ok
01:14:638 (4) -

k
01:20:860 (1,2,3,4) - distance check I think it is ok
I surprised at your diff. A huge improve o.O
thanks xD

1. instead of orange, maybe go with a yellow instead for combo colours?
   just have a feeling it fits better with blue cause it's not that hard of a contrast, but still visible.
   and it matches the hair of the girl on the left more.. imo..! xD

1. 00:12:860 (4,1,2) - you could create a really nice triangle pattern here
   screen

   
   I love triangle patterns, sorry. x:
2. 00:16:860 (2) - use a flipped version of 00:15:082 (2) maybe? to create a more consistent feeling.
3. 00:25:305 (3) - move last anchor a bit up to get the same curve as 00:23:971 (2)? for the same reason as above.. x:
4. 01:11:082 (2,3,4) - you could create a niver curve by moving 3 a few grids to the right and adjust 4.
   looks more interesting imo

   
5. 01:15:527 (2) - if bend in the other direction it has nicer feeling
6. 01:27:082 (4) - go for a mirrowed movement of 01:24:860 (1) and rotate by 9° (Selection C.)?

1. that hitsound.. it's not really disturbing, but a bit too dominant for my taste.. you could decrease the volume of that specific file a bit?
   as long as no one else uses it, I didn't check.. x: ~ mentioned in Insane.
2. 00:08:638 (4) - match perfectly with 00:09:749 (1) and rotate by -10° (Selection)?
3. 00:09:749 (1) - you could rotate this a bit as well (around ~45° (Selection)), cause it looks abrupt with the next object being the exact same.
4. 00:13:749 (2) - move to 36|172 to create better symmetry with 00:12:416 (1).
5. 00:43:527 (2) - move to 376|156 to match with 00:42:193 (1)

1. 00:10:193 (3) - has a nicer flow from the previous object if reversed
2. 00:31:082 (1) - doesn't match with the other sliders so far, cause of the different shape. maybe you can find a shape more fitting?
3. 00:44:193 (5,6) - increase the curves by a minimum, they are barely noticeable
4. 01:25:860 (6) - use a curved slider that points towards the lower left corner instead? has a nicer feeling imo ><

Squirrel wrote:

[EmingK's Easy]
I like this diff, just some suggestions cause of personal taste.. .o. :

1. 00:12:860 (4,1,2) - you could create a really nice triangle pattern here
   screen

   
   I love triangle patterns, sorry. x:
2. 00:16:860 (2) - use a flipped version of 00:15:082 (2) maybe? to create a more consistent feeling.
3. 00:25:305 (3) - move last anchor a bit up to get the same curve as 00:23:971 (2)? for the same reason as above.. x:
4. 01:11:082 (2,3,4) - you could create a niver curve by moving 3 a few grids to the right and adjust 4.
   looks more interesting imo

   
5. 01:15:527 (2) - if bend in the other direction it has nicer feeling
6. 01:27:082 (4) - go for a mirrowed movement of 01:24:860 (1) and rotate by 9° (Selection C.)?

Squirrel wrote:

Hellow. mod from queue ~ c:

[General]

1. instead of orange, maybe go with a yellow instead for combo colours?
   just have a feeling it fits better with blue cause it's not that hard of a contrast, but still visible.
   and it matches the hair of the girl on the left more.. imo..! xD ok~

[Insane]
So here's the same hitsound as in Normal.. I think it's a bit too dominant, maybe if you decrease the volume of the file by a bit it sounds better? 50% is not high -.- I think it's fine~
everything else.. well, .. basically it's the same as Hard. x: just some things cause of personal taste:

1. 00:10:193 (3) - has a nicer flow from the previous object if reversed ok
2. 00:31:082 (1) - doesn't match with the other sliders so far, cause of the different shape. maybe you can find a shape more fitting? ok
3. 00:44:193 (5,6) - increase the curves by a minimum, they are barely noticeable ok
4. 01:25:860 (6) - use a curved slider that points towards the lower left corner instead? has a nicer feeling imo >< 9 feel good about it now ><

Guess I wasn't too helpful, but oh well. .o.
Good luck with this! ^__^/

1. 00:44:193 (5) - 这里我觉得1/2拍用得有点多, 听着有点蛋疼 这样放节奏怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1060618
2. 00:59:527 (1,2) - 4-1和2-3的距离也太小了.. 放到1.2x左右?
3. 01:08:193 (3,4,1) - 这个梗往左边放一点, 然后把01:08:416 (1) - 滑条的尾巴往下转一点
4. 01:19:749 (3) - 试试这个形状? http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... b724cbf961
5. 01:24:305 (9,1) - 9-1的间距不科学

1. 00:29:305 (1) - 这样摆怎么样.. http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... 19de867af4

1. 00:06:194 (1) - 去掉头尾的clap o.o
2. 01:07:971 (2) - 这个的弯曲度小一些点比较好o.o
3. 感觉clap的声音大了点, 可以单独调一下clap的音量

1. 还好吧

Nymph wrote:

這番好不好看啊 想追又懶 愁人

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

我来送一分

这歌的音量怎么忽大忽小的 who knows that

Insane

1. 00:44:193 (5) - 这里我觉得1/2拍用得有点多, 听着有点蛋疼 这样放节奏怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1060618 好
2. 00:59:527 (1,2) - 4-1和2-3的距离也太小了.. 放到1.2x左右? 我直接把1,2ctrl+g了
3. 01:08:193 (3,4,1) - 这个梗往左边放一点, 然后把01:08:416 (1) - 滑条的尾巴往下转一点 前面的123是正三角形所以不改了
4. 01:19:749 (3) - 试试这个形状? http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... b724cbf961 好
5. 01:24:305 (9,1) - 9-1的间距不科学 2了因为这是后面改的

然后成为了脱宅神图 233

popner wrote:

00:08:638 (3,4,1,2) - 所有这种跳都感觉很奇怪啊，跳的后一个note应该是跟一个比较明显的音或是转折 把3,4,5改了
00:18:638 (1,2,3,4) - 建议挨到一起，具体你自己调整 好

SPOILER

00:19:971 (6,1) - 新起vocal通过改方向跟 fixed

SPOILER

00:21:749 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这几个跳的位置感觉不对，两个钢琴音比较明显，所以跳跟钢琴 fixed
00:23:082 (3,4,1) - 这一段有强烈到从屏幕左上直接到右下么。。。改了

SPOILER

00:51:971 (3) - 同00:19:971 (6,1) 改方向好一些 这里整段重新弄了下
00:53:305 (1,2) - ctrl+g一下，这样整体是随机跳的感觉，不然00:52:860 (3,4,1,2)这一串前后都有条，只有4到1没跳 好
00:55:082 (1) - 这一串：fixed

SPOILER

00:56:860 (3,1) - 为何不弄对称哦 =/=嘛，不弄了啦
00:59:082 (3,4,1,2) - 看不出这个梗是对应歌里的什么，一个梗分在两个combo里感觉违和 好，改了
00:59:527 (1,3) - spacing偏小了，blanket很明显 改了
01:01:305 (1,2,3) - 左下到右上，不合曲 fixed
01:06:638 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里前面的连续跳会消耗玩家注意力，后面又是3/4需要注意力的，并且这个用法的3/4只出现过一次，建议改1/1 好
01:26:193 (1) - fixed

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Amamiya Yuko wrote:

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popner wrote:

上次忘了说一个非常重要的问题，就是直线滑条的作用。直线滑条可以起到骨架的作用，它本身很单调，但是大部分图里都是不可缺少的。每隔一段用一些直线滑条可以让图变得很整齐。你可以研究一下0108的图，他的滑条形状乱七八糟的，但有非常多的直滑条/或是部分是直线的滑条。学到了，谢谢泡泡><
00:27:971 (2,3,5,6) - 跳，前面改了这里没改 改了
00:33:749 (5,6) - 用3/4的话就所有类似地方都用，否则就不用 改了
00:34:638 (1,2,4,5) - 跳，前面改了这里没改 这里我想保留一下;w;不知道可以么
00:36:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里flow不好吧 这里找人试过，人家没觉得卡手我自己打也没觉得有啥问题0.0
00:59:082 (3,4) - 应该是3这里跳，或者3 4都跳，然后之后的00:59:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 反而可以不跳，用两个相同梗带过 嗯 好
01:02:638 (4,5,6,1) - 这种起新vocal的地反反而没什么表示啊 好我表示一下
01:07:305 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这里flow.. 谢谢泡泡 改了
01:10:193 (1,2,3,4) - 不要一会跳一会不跳啊，到底是跳还是不跳 2改了
01:23:749 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 滑条和stream不在同一个圆弧上 改了
01:24:416 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里flow也很奇怪 顺便一起改了

Mako Sakata wrote:

[EmingK's Easy]
00:39:971 (4,2) - that kind of overlaping not look so good, how about try this one

SPOILER

00:43:527 (3) - Ctrl+J and move to x:104 y:106, like this

SPOILER

00:45:305 (1) - Move to x:152 y:236
00:45:749 (2) - Move to x:232 y:192

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Yomi's Hard]
01:08:860 (3,4) - Why not stacked together? like this one 01:07:305 (4,1) -
This diff ok~
the 4 is the starting of vocal so i don't want to stack

Mako Sakata wrote:

[boat's Normal]
00:13:971 (3) - It would be good if it have a same shape like this one 00:13:305 (2) - ok

SPOILER

00:29:971 (6) - I would rather to put a circle here rather then a slider ok
00:39:971 (4) - Delete clap on tail of slider? ok
00:41:749 (7) - Delete clap? ok
I'm not sugest to have a diffrent slider velocity in normal diff like this one 00:41:860, because new player might be confuse but It's up to you I consider it
00:59:082 (6) - Move to x:244 y:44 ok
01:23:305 (5) - Add clap on tail of slider? ok

Nice song actually I like it XD
Good luck then~ Thanks

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi M4M

[General]
Nothing.

[Insane]
A suggestion, maybe you can make a star or polygonal jump here 00:32:638 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - (/・ω・＼)
00:55:082 (1) - Change with circle stream? well, no idea how to make it beautiful so use this...
01:25:749 (6,7) - Why not stacked together? I like that~

Nice song actually I like it XD
Good luck then~

Zero__wind wrote:

Hard
00:26:860 (3) - 确定这里要双whistle么 先加着看看
00:37:305 (2) - 感觉不怎么适合原地空拍 猴
01:21:527 (4) - 这个不比前面的3的位置考上一些打起来不幸福 和前面的circle跳不衔接 http://puu.sh/56pmx.jpg 猴
01:27:082 (3) - finish略显突兀吧 那里本来就有

Zero__wind wrote:

看都看了 随便写两条儿
Insane
00:09:749 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/56p5v.jpg 一直往一个方向转有点抑郁 hao 这里稍微动了下
00:17:971 (3,4) - 为了叠起来弄得移动很别扭 虽然说是小间距并不怎么影响吧 随便参考一下http://puu.sh/56pa5.jpg 嗯还是保持吧
00:36:416 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/56pfm.jpg 波浪随便画的 想改的话你自己就画好些=。= =v= 好

低难度不看了 这么高sp了低难度再有问题我也不想说什么了 其实就是饿了想吃饭去了

[ Yuki ] wrote:

[EmingK's Easy]
00:13:305 (1) - tune 90' and x:300,y:140 <<00:15:082 (2) - Orientation?? (4,1,2) divides 360° and it's hard to do blanket if do so
00:19:971 (1) - x:316,y:192 <<Distance ok
00:31:082 (1) - x:148,y:132 <<Distance ok
00:45:749 (2) - x:232,y:192 <<Distance updated inb4

1. You have unused custom hitsound named "soft-slidertick2.wav", delete it & full submit
2. Since there are other other active player named boat i would recommend you to rename your guest diff to smallboat's Normal.

1. 00:09:749 (1,2,3) - This jump feels a bit unnatural here due to your previous patterns. I would recommend reduse spacing here to x1.60 to make it plays better and rotate (3) a bit. Something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   code:
   

   136,64,9749,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   105,188,9971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,140,10193,2,0,P|262:131|295:108,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:10:638 (4,5,6) - Hmm.. If you will apply my previous suggestion try to change placement here too. Current flow feels a bit weird while playing (just jumps feels too huge). Try something like this, imo it will works better.
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   372,56,10638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   344,148,10860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   432,200,11082,2,0,P|444:236|436:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:11:527 (1,2,3) - I would recommend avoid big jumps on such calm songs like its and keeping smaller DS if possible (it will plays better, especially with DT). Try something like this here:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:193 (4) - NC due to spacing change would be nice here
5. 00:19:527 (5) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here. Also, add NC due to spacing change
6. 00:21:082 (2) - whistle to the beginning of slider
7. 00:23:971 (1) - Change form a bit maybe for better flow?
   
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:27:527 (1) - You forgot finish at the beginning of slider
9. 00:31:749 (2) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider
10. 00:34:638 (1) - add finish to emphazire vocals?
11. 00:39:971 (1,2,3,4) - Uh those jumps feels a bit too much. Try to reduse DS here to x2.75-2.50 - should plays better imo
12. 00:42:193 - 00:48:860 - Slowdown sections usually screw distance snap, so x1.00 spacing will looks too clamped. Raise DS here to 1.20 please :3
13. 00:42:638 (2) - Soft-sampleset instead of drum sounds better for me
14. 00:43:527 (4) - Try to curve it in other way - for better flow:
    
    SPOILER

    [img]
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1076663[/img]
15. 00:45:082 (7) - Finish to the end of slider
16. 00:52:416 (1,2,3,4) - I strongly recommend you reduse spacing at least between (2) and (3), it really feels too much here. I can give some examples for better jump, feel free to ask me in game for it (just because it will be too much to wrote here)
17. 00:53:749 (3,4,5) - Same ^
18. 00:55:082 (1) - Change to 1/8 instead follow piano here?
19. 01:07:082 (3,4) - Hm, i got your idea about stacking with slider's endpoint, but sudden spacing decrease feels uncomfortable here while playing. Try to keep same spacing between 01:06:638 (1,2,3,4) - (just change DS between previous notes to 1.90 if you want to keep your stack)
20. 01:11:082 (3) - Avoid having strong beats at the ends of sliders, it may feels weird while playing. Remove repeat & add note instead - somehow like this:
    
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:12:860 (3,4,1) - Feels a bit too linear for me, but up to you to change it
22. 01:14:860 (4,5) - Reduse DS to avois too cruel jump?
23. 01:24:860 (2,3,4,5) - Just as suggestion:
    
    
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24. 01:25:860 (7) - I strongly recommend you remove reverse-slider here and replace it with notes
25. 01:27:971 (1) - Begin it 1 tick earlier

1. 00:11:527 (1) - add whistle follow guitar?
2. 00:12:193 (2) - Hitfinish please
3. 00:16:860 (1) - Whistle to the head of sliders follow vocals?
4. 00:20:416 (1) - Finish to the beginning of sliders to emphazire vocals?
5. 00:23:971 (1) - Whistle to the head of sliders follow vocals?
6. 00:31:082 (1) - ^
7. 00:34:638 (1) - Finish to the beginning of sliders to emphazire vocals?
8. 00:38:193 (1) - Whistle to the head of sliders follow vocals?
9. 00:45:749 (2,3) - Forgot drum-additions here?
10. 00:47:082 (1,2,3) - Thought it plays well, i prersonally prefer keeping calm parts of song without sudden spacing changes. Just as suggestion, try to keep those notes with smaller spacing here
11. 00:48:860 (1,2) - Swap NC follow vocals?
12. 01:01:971 (2) - Remove whistle from tail & add to head - follow vocals
13. 01:02:638 (3) - forgot finish?
14. 01:27:305 (1,2,3) - Reduse spacing a bit please?

1. 00:12:416 (1) - Follow your previous hitsounds patter here should be finish too - at the beginning of slider
2. 00:25:082 (1,2,3,4) - I would not recommend to use stacks as you did at (3) and (4) since all those are 1/4 and such sudden spacing change may confuse beginners a lot. Try to unstack them here.
3. 01:27:971 (1) - Silence end of spinner

Kodora wrote:

;_; sorry for delay, was too busy

[General]

1. You have unused custom hitsound named "soft-slidertick2.wav", delete it & full submit deleted
2. Since there are other other active player named boat i would recommend you to rename your guest diff to smallboat's Normal. well, @smallboat

[Insane]

1. 00:09:749 (1,2,3) - This jump feels a bit unnatural here due to your previous patterns. I would recommend reduse spacing here to x1.60 to make it plays better and rotate (3) a bit. Something like this: fixed~
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   code:
   

   136,64,9749,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   105,188,9971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   224,140,10193,2,0,P|262:131|295:108,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:10:638 (4,5,6) - Hmm.. If you will apply my previous suggestion try to change placement here too. Current flow feels a bit weird while playing (just jumps feels too huge). Try something like this, imo it will works better. fixed~ make another style
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   372,56,10638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   344,148,10860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   432,200,11082,2,0,P|444:236|436:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:11:527 (1,2,3) - I would recommend avoid big jumps on such calm songs like its and keeping smaller DS if possible (it will plays better, especially with DT). Try something like this here: nope~this ds is good imo :3
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:193 (4) - NC due to spacing change would be nice here fixed~
5. 00:19:527 (5) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here. Also, add NC due to spacing change fixed~but nc is not necessary here
6. 00:21:082 (2) - whistle to the beginning of slider fixed~
7. 00:23:971 (1) - Change form a bit maybe for better flow? fixed~
   
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:27:527 (1) - You forgot finish at the beginning of slider Q.Q
9. 00:31:749 (2) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider fixed~
10. 00:34:638 (1) - add finish to emphazire vocals? fixed~
11. 00:39:971 (1,2,3,4) - Uh those jumps feels a bit too much. Try to reduse DS here to x2.75-2.50 - should plays better imo 2,3 I have ctrl+g ed~
12. 00:42:193 - 00:48:860 - Slowdown sections usually screw distance snap, so x1.00 spacing will looks too clamped. Raise DS here to 1.20 please :3 :3
13. 00:42:638 (2) - Soft-sampleset instead of drum sounds better for me ok
14. 00:43:527 (4) - Try to curve it in other way - for better flow: due to 1.2ds, change to another curve
    
    SPOILER

    [img]
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1076663[/img]
15. 00:45:082 (7) - Finish to the end of slider fixed~
16. 00:52:416 (1,2,3,4) - I strongly recommend you reduse spacing at least between (2) and (3), it really feels too much here. I can give some examples for better jump, feel free to ask me in game for it (just because it will be too much to wrote here) popner suggested me to use like this and I think it's good in insane :3 so no change
17. 00:53:749 (3,4,5) - Same ^ ^
18. 00:55:082 (1) - Change to 1/8 instead follow piano here? really it was, but most modders think that it may highly cause miss here, and I ask some players to play, really it's easy to miss (both none and dt), so it's here now……
19. 01:07:082 (3,4) - Hm, i got your idea about stacking with slider's endpoint, but sudden spacing decrease feels uncomfortable here while playing. Try to keep same spacing between 01:06:638 (1,2,3,4) - (just change DS between previous notes to 1.90 if you want to keep your stack) that's good imo.
20. 01:11:082 (3) - Avoid having strong beats at the ends of sliders, it may feels weird while playing. Remove repeat & add note instead - somehow like this: fixed~
    
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:12:860 (3,4,1) - Feels a bit too linear for me, but up to you to change it :D
22. 01:14:860 (4,5) - Reduse DS to avois too cruel jump? it's not cruel due to 135bpm, but changed the place
23. 01:24:860 (2,3,4,5) - Just as suggestion: I like it now
    
    
    SPOILER

    
24. 01:25:860 (7) - I strongly recommend you remove reverse-slider here and replace it with notes ok :,
25. 01:27:971 (1) - Begin it 1 tick earlier yeah

That's all. Guest diffs are pretty nice, thought Insane needs some more mods imo. Good luck with rank!

Kodora wrote:

[Easy]

*AR2 looks kinda slow here. Try to raise it by 1 tick

[boat's Normal]

1. 00:12:416 (1) - Follow your previous hitsounds patter here should be finish too - at the beginning of slider
2. 00:25:082 (1,2,3,4) - I would not recommend to use stacks as you did at (3) and (4) since all those are 1/4 and such sudden spacing change may confuse beginners a lot. Try to unstack them here.
3. 01:27:971 (1) - Silence end of spinner

lkx_Shore wrote:

恭喜rank