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Megurine Luka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月3日 at 17:52:25

Artist: Unknown Artist
Title: Onna no ko no Skirt ga Totsuzen Mekuretari Shinai Kana
Tags: Vocaloid acane_madder bilibili douga niconico sukato hentai
BPM: 130
Filesize: 11664kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.27 stars, 83 notes)
  2. Hard (3.09 stars, 157 notes)
  3. Normal (1.69 stars, 97 notes)
Download: Unknown Artist - Onna no ko no Skirt ga Totsuzen Mekuretari Shinai Kana
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@佐天涙子



SPOILER
我是正直的绅(hen)士(tai),要不要掀起女孩子的裙子呢(正直脸
女の子のスカートが突然めくれたりしないかなあ
嬉しいですねww
本家:http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm20136093
翻唱:http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av532134/
O~O The singer is unknown. Really.
ts8zs's diff here: http://puu.sh/3m38K.osu
check if you're interested in.

因为是懒人,所以用了一年多。什么?你说Luka产量低?谁说的,自己出来,我保证不打死你。
wonders
沙发
tutuhaha
我第二个咯
顺便求GD!GD!
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

tutuhaha wrote:

我第二个咯
顺便求GD!GD!
CSY the corrupt
大哥啊,吃點
Lena
From #modreqs
M4M

Easy
01:30:861 (1) - Slider End 01:31:784

Normal
00:04:092 (4) - NC
00:11:476 (4) - ^
00:33:630 (4) - ^
00:41:015 (4) - ^
01:25:323 (4) - ^
01:28:092 (3) - How about this?

01:30:861 (1) - Slider End 01:31:784

Hentai
00:04:092 (6) - NC
00:11:476 (6) - ^
00:29:938 (3) - ^
00:33:630 (7) - ^
00:36:630 (4) - ^
00:41:246 (7) - ^
00:44:707 (5) - How about this?

01:17:938 (6) - NC
01:20:707 (3) - ^
01:21:400 (6) - move x:452 y:240
01:25:323 (6) - NC
01:30:861 (1) - Spin End 01:31:784
Autumn
Hi Luka ^^
M4M here :)
[General]
结尾可以加上以下Timing point:
95276,738.497895280998,4,2,1,40,1,0
96753,807.504407628225,4,2,1,40,1,0
98368,769.004011637594,4,2,1,40,1,0
99137,1009.99899000101,4,2,1,40,1,0
100147,1009.99899000101,4,2,1,40,1,0
效果:

[Hentai]
SV变慢的地方可以考虑单独用一种颜色做NC 比如粉红

00:19:323 (1) - Ctrl+G? 考虑距离和前面一致但时间隔了1/1而不是1/2
00:06:400 (2,2) - Ctrl+G? 喜欢这种转圈的感觉
00:28:092 (1) - 太靠边了
--------------------------------
个人觉得可以用Whistle的地方:
SPOILER
00:05:476
00:12:861
00:35:015
00:42:400
01:19:323
都是一类 可以跟钢琴
00:43:784
01:26:707 (11)
--------------------------------
01:25:323 (6) - NC?

[Normal]
01:29:938 - 绿线用40%音量
01:03:169 - Whistle?
01:06:861 - ^
以下是觉得太靠边可以往中间放一放的
01:25:323 (4) -
01:28:092 (3) - NM里折返四次不如换成两个滑条妥当
01:30:861 (1) - 不如和Hentai一样换成转盘

[Easy]
01:29:938 - 绿线用40%音量

GL~^^
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Lena wrote:

From #modreqs
M4M

Easy
01:30:861 (1) - Slider End 01:31:784 nope, too short for new players and it does not fit.

Normal
00:04:092 (4) - NC
00:11:476 (4) - ^
00:33:630 (4) - ^
00:41:015 (4) - ^
01:25:323 (4) - ^
01:28:092 (3) - How about this?
hmmmm I think current fit vocal more, but anyway yes
01:30:861 (1) - Slider End 01:31:784

Hentai
00:04:092 (6) - NC
00:11:476 (6) - ^
00:29:938 (3) - ^
00:33:630 (7) - ^
00:36:630 (4) - ^
00:41:246 (7) - ^
00:44:707 (5) - How about this?

01:17:938 (6) - NC
01:20:707 (3) - ^
01:21:400 (6) - move x:452 y:240 hmmmm.. why?
01:25:323 (6) - NC
01:30:861 (1) - Spin End 01:31:784
Thanks

Autumn wrote:

Hi Luka ^^
M4M here :)
[General]
结尾可以加上以下Timing point:
95276,738.497895280998,4,2,1,40,1,0
96753,807.504407628225,4,2,1,40,1,0
98368,769.004011637594,4,2,1,40,1,0
99137,1009.99899000101,4,2,1,40,1,0
100147,1009.99899000101,4,2,1,40,1,0
效果:
其实不太重要...因为后面Vocal都是双重叠起来的所以一开始也就没打算map了,不过感谢,如果BAT硬性要求要把后面红线插上的话会考虑的lol

[Hentai]
SV变慢的地方可以考虑单独用一种颜色做NC 比如粉红

00:19:323 (1) - Ctrl+G? 考虑距离和前面一致但时间隔了1/1而不是1/2 这个算是故意梗吧lol
00:06:400 (2,2) - Ctrl+G? 喜欢这种转圈的感觉
00:28:092 (1) - 太靠边了 fixed
--------------------------------
个人觉得可以用Whistle的地方: 音效方面就不多做考虑了0.0我想让这首歌显得安静一些
SPOILER
00:05:476
00:12:861
00:35:015
00:42:400
01:19:323
都是一类 可以跟钢琴
00:43:784
01:26:707 (11)
--------------------------------
01:25:323 (6) - NC? fixed

[Normal]
01:29:938 - 绿线用40%音量
01:03:169 - Whistle?
01:06:861 - ^
以下是觉得太靠边可以往中间放一放的
01:25:323 (4) -
01:28:092 (3) - NM里折返四次不如换成两个滑条妥当
01:30:861 (1) - 不如和Hentai一样换成转盘

[Easy]
01:29:938 - 绿线用40%音量

GL~^^
EZ NM我就不一一回复了0.0谢谢~很好的mod~
nanda2009
Hi. M4M. Here's my little mod.

[General]
  1. There are 2 "douga" in the text. Delete one of them.
  2. iirc each users from NND have this numbered account (smXXXXXXXX ??) or account name, put the account name or the numbered one of this song's uploader as the artist.
  3. I wonder what whistle is following... I thought it's following the piano sound. If it's indeed following the piano sound, try to add more whistles on the piano sounds. Like 00:02:707, 00:02:938, and 00:07:784 - 00:08:707
  4. I think there's a timing change at 01:30:861 and 01:32:707. Check it. I'm not good at timing.
  5. The song still play after 01:34:553, why don't you map it?
[Easy]

  1. 00:35:476 (1) - rotate this for a bit anti-clockwisely, so the tail will facing (2), you might also want to move (3), so it won't be blocked by (1), like this :
  2. 01:11:476 (5) - nazi. move this to 324,76 so 01:10:553 (3,4,5) will look like encircling (2)'s head
  3. 01:30:861 (1) - I tried to move the end of the slider to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:938 (1,2,3,4) - Try to give a bit of curve on these slider. Maybe something like this :
  2. 00:07:784 (5,6) - Move this down, This slider is almost blocked by the health bar
  3. 00:11:476 (4,5,6) - give these a bit curve
  4. 00:22:553 (3) - nazi. make this repeat twice and delete 00:24:400 (1).
  5. 00:24:400 (1,2) - the distance is too short, confusing for beginners, maybe you would like to change it to something like this :
  6. 00:28:092 (1,1) - The space is too short for beginners. Maybe change the spinner into a normal objects, like
  7. 00:39:861 (2) - move this a bit to right , it'll create a better flow imo
  8. 00:41:707 (6) - same as 00:39:861 (2). move this to140,9
  9. 00:44:707 (5) - move the head a bit to down. Again, it'll make a better flow
  10. 01:10:553 (3,4) - Don't stack, confusing for beginners
  11. 01:16:092 (1) - move the tail a bit to down, so it'll face (2). like this :
  12. 01:28:092 (3,4) - don't stack.
  13. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.
[Hentai]

  1. 00:06:861 (1) - disable NC, it's useless
  2. 00:09:169 (5) - delete whistle
  3. 00:10:553 (4) - on gameplay, it is visible that this slider is blocked by (3). Move this a bit, so it won't be blocked by (3), for example 408,272
  4. 00:10:553 (4,5,6) - each spacing are not same, (4,5)'s distance are 1.7x while (5,6)'s distance reached 2.0x, change it so they're spacings are same
  5. 00:14:246 (1) - delete NC
  6. 01:03:169 (1) - too close to (4), move it somewhere else.
  7. 01:06:861 (1) - ^
  8. 01:05:361 (2) - delete. I don't think it's needed
  9. 01:09:053 (2) - ^
  10. 01:21:400 (6) - rather than stacking this to (7)'s tail. It'll be better to stack this to (4), stacking it to slider tail can cause confusion, especially if the slider is repeated
  11. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy] and [Normal], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.
GL
Flower
Hi~大哥啊

[General]
莫名偶尔冒出一个whistle感觉不是事啊 建议试着在原来的whistle地方间或改成drum finish 然后24白线whistle
感觉整首曲子根本没有high的地方 考虑一下要不要去掉kiai
最后两个音感觉没对上 建议加个红线

[Shinshi]
x0.5感觉有点过了 x0.75看看
00:05:938 (1,2,1,2) - 减小一些弧度以把00:05:707 (9) - 包的更好
00:21:169 (3) - 建议延长1/4以提供拖音的效果
00:35:476 (1) - 减小一些弧度,这个像马桶盖
00:40:092 (5) - ^
01:29:015 (6,7,8) - 拉成正三角

[Normal]
01:01:323 (1,2,1,2) - 这啥苟史

[Easy]
00:22:553 (3) - 包的更好些
00:23:938 (4) - 移到x:82 y:722或者x:123 y:241来获得更好的flow然后把00:24:400 (1) - 往下放放(实际上我觉得这里flow很奇怪主要是因为3的马桶盖外形)
01:06:861 (3) - 包的更好些

感觉看不出什么槽点 但是感觉是随机作图器做的感觉啊 要不你用随机作图器做个
ryuu
hi, luka-san :3
m4m :о

[Easy]

please press ctrl+1 and move objects.
because different distances. like here
00:13:323 (1) - mb make it like this?
for the variety
00:28:092 (1) - please lift end higher
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

[Normal]

00:06:400 (2,3,4) - how about that?
00:18:400 - beat?
00:18:861 (4) - may make it more diverse?
00:20:707 (1) - ^
00:34:092 (6) - lift end higher?
00:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - lift this construction and move higher up 00:44:707 (5)
01:01:323 (1,2,1,2) - okay D:
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

[Hentai]

00:21:169 (3) - m?
00:36:169 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool jumps o.o
00:40:092 (5) - as on 00:21:169 (3)
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

thats all.
if i was helpful, tell me ;_;
and i'll give you my map.

good luck :3/
cmn_891127
实在是懒得不行了,关键是看了两遍挑不出问题呀~
于是就只有星星了……
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
=3=没事儿谢谢星星啦

@ryuu: Thanks for your star and mod =3= I will check your mod and map tmr
Selisi
谢谢大大的mod ~很不好意思其实应该咱先来mod一下 可是咱考试耽误惹> <
先表示支持 star!~~
下面只是咱的一点建议而已 渣mod 希望能帮到您> <
好有趣的曲子 很喜欢QvQ
[General]
其实咱希望加两个clap的音效 http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid=2111037026&uk=3006046950
加上去感觉挺有味道的.... 第一个clap用在开头的一段 后面变慢用第二个> <
  1. 最后转盘的音量调到最小感觉会好好多的样子
  1. 01:34:553 - 这个时间点之后会不会有些空呢QvQ 后面可能有些不好做(其实还可以啦 就是提一下
[Hentai]
做的好好> < 跳的很舒服
  1. 01:28:092 (4,5) -这个形状可以更好看一些QvQ
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/825289
  1. 00:42:861 (1) - 这里的两个滑条不完全平行哦~~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/825301
  1. 01:16:553 (3) - 这个感觉有些太弯了呢 不太美
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:092 (4,5,6) - 这里4和5对称然后6盖到下一个滑条上怎么样QvQ
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/825318
  1. 00:41:476 (5,6,7) - 这个地方感觉像是没有对准的样子
  1. 00:42:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个可以把第一个抬高一些 这样最后的滑条就不会贴到底部惹~
  1. 01:28:092 (3) - 这个也是要出去了的感觉呢 可以往上延伸试试看QvQ
[Easy]
  1. 01:27:169 (1) - 这个滑条的末尾稍微往上抬高一点点 因为滑条整体感觉稍微末尾弯了一点点 就不是很美了
就这么多了 好喜欢这张图> < 一定要rank哦~
ts8zs
http://puu.sh/3m38K.osu
噗噗噗 Ts8zs is GENTLEMAN!
话说aimod什么问题没明白……
9:58小改
mod
EZ
哨子重新放吧……听听歌……完全没搭上例如:
00:02:246 (1) - 尾
00:03:169 (2) - 尾
00:04:092 (3) - 头不应该有
总之就是这样
例子END
01:17:938 (3,4) - 没包好
NM
同上
00:31:323 (1) - Remove
HT
……
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
其实做的挺好的但是真的抱歉我这图不需要more diffs 了;w;

谢谢;w;
ts8zs

Megurine Luka wrote:

其实做的挺好的但是真的抱歉我这图不需要more diffs 了;w;

谢谢;w;
有kd就ok~
GIDZ
My 5th mod :D

Easy:
~01:30:861 - End this slider on a 1/1 beat instead of a 1/2.It sounds off beat.
~Nothing more :)

Normal:
~01:16:092 - Try to flip the notes to the right to reverse what you've copied and to make play more exciting. ^^
~Why is it soo perfect??? ><''

Hentai:
~00:02:476 - Don't need the 1/2 beat in the beginning,it makes it hard to read.
~00:29:938 -NC for the jump.
~00:32:707 - NC here.
~00:41:476 - NC here.
~00:46:553 -Don't need NC here as we need to see the jump trail.
~You could make the 1/2 beat jumps' circles a bit further away to increase diff.
~(FINALLY THERE IS SOME REAL MODDING DONE HERE :p )

That's all from me,good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

nanda2009 wrote:

Hi. M4M. Here's my little mod.

[General]
  1. There are 2 "douga" in the text. Delete one of them. k
  2. iirc each users from NND have this numbered account (smXXXXXXXX ??) or account name, put the account name or the numbered one of this song's uploader as the artist. no need I think?
  3. I wonder what whistle is following... I thought it's following the piano sound. If it's indeed following the piano sound, try to add more whistles on the piano sounds. Like 00:02:707, 00:02:938, and 00:07:784 - 00:08:707 I want the song to be more silent ;w;
  4. I think there's a timing change at 01:30:861 and 01:32:707. Check it. I'm not good at timing. k
  5. The song still play after 01:34:553, why don't you map it? mapped
[Easy]

  1. 00:35:476 (1) - rotate this for a bit anti-clockwisely, so the tail will facing (2), you might also want to move (3), so it won't be blocked by (1), like this :
    k
  2. 01:11:476 (5) - nazi. move this to 324,76 so 01:10:553 (3,4,5) will look like encircling (2)'s head k
  3. 01:30:861 (1) - I tried to move the end of the slider to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part. k
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:938 (1,2,3,4) - Try to give a bit of curve on these slider. Maybe something like this :
    I want it differentiate with the last slider so ;w;
  2. 00:07:784 (5,6) - Move this down, This slider is almost blocked by the health bar k
  3. 00:11:476 (4,5,6) - give these a bit curve I think straight is better ;w;
  4. 00:22:553 (3) - nazi. make this repeat twice and delete 00:24:400 (1). k
  5. 00:24:400 (1,2) - the distance is too short, confusing for beginners, maybe you would like to change it to something like this :
    nope
  6. 00:28:092 (1,1) - The space is too short for beginners. Maybe change the spinner into a normal objects, like It's normal so I think it's fine
  7. 00:39:861 (2) - move this a bit to right , it'll create a better flow imo k
  8. 00:41:707 (6) - same as 00:39:861 (2). move this to140,9
  9. 00:44:707 (5) - move the head a bit to down. Again, it'll make a better flow
  10. 01:10:553 (3,4) - Don't stack, confusing for beginners normal is fine 0.0
  11. 01:16:092 (1) - move the tail a bit to down, so it'll face (2). like this : current is fine?
  12. 01:28:092 (3,4) - don't stack.
  13. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.
[Hentai]

  1. 00:06:861 (1) - disable NC, it's useless k
  2. 00:09:169 (5) - delete whistle no ;w;
  3. 00:10:553 (4) - on gameplay, it is visible that this slider is blocked by (3). Move this a bit, so it won't be blocked by (3), for example 408,272 no 0.0
  4. 00:10:553 (4,5,6) - each spacing are not same, (4,5)'s distance are 1.7x while (5,6)'s distance reached 2.0x, change it so they're spacings are same
  5. 00:14:246 (1) - delete NC k
  6. 01:03:169 (1) - too close to (4), move it somewhere else.
  7. 01:06:861 (1) - ^
  8. 01:05:361 (2) - delete. I don't think it's needed
  9. 01:09:053 (2) - ^
  10. 01:21:400 (6) - rather than stacking this to (7)'s tail. It'll be better to stack this to (4), stacking it to slider tail can cause confusion, especially if the slider is repeated It's fun ;w;
  11. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy] and [Normal], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.
GL

Flower wrote:

Hi~大哥啊

[General]
莫名偶尔冒出一个whistle感觉不是事啊 建议试着在原来的whistle地方间或改成drum finish 然后24白线whistle 我觉得whistle很有规律啊
感觉整首曲子根本没有high的地方 考虑一下要不要去掉kiai 还是要一下
最后两个音感觉没对上 建议加个红线 加了

[Shinshi]
x0.5感觉有点过了 x0.75看看 0.5挺好,坑人目的达到
00:05:938 (1,2,1,2) - 减小一些弧度以把00:05:707 (9) - 包的更好 好像还行
00:21:169 (3) - 建议延长1/4以提供拖音的效果 不太合适
00:35:476 (1) - 减小一些弧度,这个像马桶盖 k
00:40:092 (5) - ^ no
01:29:015 (6,7,8) - 拉成正三角 I like 等腰三角

[Normal]
01:01:323 (1,2,1,2) - 这啥苟史 没梗啊

[Easy]
00:22:553 (3) - 包的更好些
00:23:938 (4) - 移到x:82 y:722或者x:123 y:241来获得更好的flow然后把00:24:400 (1) - 往下放放(实际上我觉得这里flow很奇怪主要是因为3的马桶盖外形)
01:06:861 (3) - 包的更好些

感觉看不出什么槽点 但是感觉是随机作图器做的感觉啊 要不你用随机作图器做个 正有此意

ryuu wrote:

hi, luka-san :3
m4m :о

[Easy]

please press ctrl+1 and move objects.
because different distances. like here
00:13:323 (1) - mb make it like this? good
for the variety
00:28:092 (1) - please lift end higher ?? sorry I don't understand ;w;
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick? fixed

[Normal] ALMOST ALL FIXED

00:06:400 (2,3,4) - how about that?
00:18:400 - beat?
00:18:861 (4) - may make it more diverse?
00:20:707 (1) - ^
00:34:092 (6) - lift end higher?
00:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - lift this construction and move higher up 00:44:707 (5)
01:01:323 (1,2,1,2) - okay D:
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

[Hentai] Fixed all

00:21:169 (3) - m?
00:36:169 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool jumps o.o
00:40:092 (5) - as on 00:21:169 (3)
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

thats all.
if i was helpful, tell me ;_;
and i'll give you my map.

good luck :3/
Thanks all TAT other two all fixed so I didn't quote
sjoy
Easy:
01:06:861 (3) -
01:10:553 (3,4,5) - 这2处感觉长滑条比较顺吧._.
01:13:323 改成这样如何?
01:30:861 (1) - 把音效减弱试试吧
Hard:
00:03:169 (4) - 删掉一个NOTE试试看如何?
Frostmourne
Hi Megurine Luka ~ , from my Modding Queue
sry for my lateness.

General
- The artist for actual vocaloid version is unknown? but this version is a guy singing. I'm not sure if a guy singing here has specific name or whatever that you can change from Anonymous. But still, I think it's not a problem at all if you really don't know. Just wondering :(
- combohax in Hentai diff is really great. Maybe you can try to do that in Easy and Normal too? I believe it must be awesome too!
- Offset is kind of early. I think the every offset should get around (+10) (Not definitely sure at all since there are many parts that timings are messed)

Easy
01:30:866 (1) - I think this slider should end at 01:31:847 (1/8). It's not a problem even 1/8 for the easiest diff at all because it's just a slider end and is followed by the spinner. The current ending at blue tick is still sounding off if you ask me.
01:32:712 (1) - 1/8 next? at 01:34:039 if you actually listen to it with 25% playback.
I'm still not sure about them though. Timing is needed to be checked carefully imo.

Normal
AR6 might be unrankable imo. I still don't know the exact answer but seeing from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal made me aware if AR6 can be used. Also it's just a normal diff, AR6 is too much fast for beginners.
01:02:712 (2) - is this spacing intentional? quite unbalance as it is inclined to the left side.
01:28:097 (3) - off-screen for 4:3 ratio , I think it should be fixed.
01:30:866 (1) - same as Easy

Hard
fine

Only problem I got was your timing. I hope it should be fine but you better find expert timer to check things here.
Good luck!
MMzz
[Hentai]
00:18:866 (5) - Start the new combo here? It follows the new vocal line and the song's downbeat. Similar to 00:22:558 (1) - and 00:26:251 (1) -
00:29:943 (3) - ^
01:29:020 (6) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:020 (2) - Start the new combo here instead of 00:16:558 (1) - ? Keeps the combo pattern you have used and is more clear for the newer players.
00:22:558 (3) - The repeat on this slider makes the next notes really confusing because of the change in placement, but no change in the song's rhythm. I would remove the repeat then add notes similar to before. This is an example, you can see the placement after 3: http://puu.sh/3F3FR.jpg You can design it any way, you should just use this placement. Or, you can do the placement you did here: 01:08:712 (1) - both work.
00:31:328 (1) - This note is too close to the end of the spinner, I suggest you remove it then add a NC on 00:31:789 (2) - .
01:14:712 (1) - ^
01:17:943 (1) - Remove this combo? It would only make sense to remove this, unless you would add a combo on 01:21:635 (4) - , 01:25:328 (4) - , etc.

[Easy]
All that worries me is that this part(s) of the song 00:17:020 (1) -, 01:01:328 (1) - is harder in the easy than in the normal because it is more dense. Kinda weird.

You should get the timing at the end checked out by a timing pro like Charles445 or lolcubes.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi Megurine Luka ~ , from my Modding Queue
sry for my lateness.

General
- The artist for actual vocaloid version is unknown? but this version is a guy singing. I'm not sure if a guy singing here has specific name or whatever that you can change from Anonymous. But still, I think it's not a problem at all if you really don't know. Just wondering :(
Yep the original vocaloid singer is also unknown as the link in creator's word shows. What the composer told us is only the song is composed by Vocaloid so ..
- combohax in Hentai diff is really great. Maybe you can try to do that in Easy and Normal too? I believe it must be awesome too! It's used for indicating the slider velocity change so I think it's fine to not have it in E or N
- Offset is kind of early. I think the every offset should get around (+10) (Not definitely sure at all since there are many parts that timings are messed) Fixed and checked the last part with LKs

Easy
01:30:866 (1) - I think this slider should end at 01:31:847 (1/8). It's not a problem even 1/8 for the easiest diff at all because it's just a slider end and is followed by the spinner. The current ending at blue tick is still sounding off if you ask me. Yep it is and I fixed it with the new timing line so I think it's ok now.
01:32:712 (1) - 1/8 next? at 01:34:039 if you actually listen to it with 25% playback. fixed already
I'm still not sure about them though. Timing is needed to be checked carefully imo.

Normal
AR6 might be unrankable imo. I still don't know the exact answer but seeing from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal made me aware if AR6 can be used. Also it's just a normal diff, AR6 is too much fast for beginners. Yep changed to AR5
01:02:712 (2) - is this spacing intentional? quite unbalance as it is inclined to the left side. nah It's just a mistake and fixed.
01:28:097 (3) - off-screen for 4:3 ratio , I think it should be fixed. fixed
01:30:866 (1) - same as Easy

Hard
fine

Only problem I got was your timing. I hope it should be fine but you better find expert timer to check things here.
Good luck!
Thank you Frost.

MMzz wrote:

[Hentai] All fixed
00:18:866 (5) - Start the new combo here? It follows the new vocal line and the song's downbeat. Similar to 00:22:558 (1) - and 00:26:251 (1) -
00:29:943 (3) - ^
01:29:020 (6) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:020 (2) - Start the new combo here instead of 00:16:558 (1) - ? Keeps the combo pattern you have used and is more clear for the newer players. k
00:22:558 (3) - The repeat on this slider makes the next notes really confusing because of the change in placement, but no change in the song's rhythm. I would remove the repeat then add notes similar to before. This is an example, you can see the placement after 3: http://puu.sh/3F3FR.jpg You can design it any way, you should just use this placement. Or, you can do the placement you did here: 01:08:712 (1) - both work.fixed
00:31:328 (1) - This note is too close to the end of the spinner, I suggest you remove it then add a NC on 00:31:789 (2) - . del
01:14:712 (1) - ^ del
01:17:943 (1) - Remove this combo? It would only make sense to remove this, unless you would add a combo on 01:21:635 (4) - , 01:25:328 (4) - , etc. del

[Easy]
All that worries me is that this part(s) of the song 00:17:020 (1) -, 01:01:328 (1) - is harder in the easy than in the normal because it is more dense. Kinda weird. I think it's fine 0.0

You should get the timing at the end checked out by a timing pro like Charles445 or lolcubes.
Yes get LKs checked XD
Kiiwa
我喜欢吃猕猴桃
popner
[Timing]
I suggest to base your timing on vocal instead of piano, since the patterns are following vocal mainly:
The red line at 94822 should be better if it's placed at 94755. The vocal here is diplex and 94755 would be a good compromise;
Add a redline at 96633 with BPM 81;
The red line at 98368 should be better if it's placed at 98258.

94822,588.235294117647,4,2,1,40,1,0
95276,740.740740740741,4,2,1,40,1,0
96633,740.740740740741,4,2,1,40,1,0
98258,769.230769230769,4,2,1,40,1,0

[Easy]
00:24:415 (1,3) - try to curve these two sliders in the similar shape as 00:22:568 (3) - ? The consistency in patterns will be better.
The diff (and normal) are not very neat in pattern, though the playing feel is acceptable.

[Normal]
00:25:338 (3) - the blanket can be better here:
00:35:953 (2,3,4) - I don't really suggest using 1/2 stacking here, since all previous stackings are in 1/1, like 00:04:568 (5,6) - and 00:34:107 (5,6) - . For pattern suggestion, here an example is provided. You can decide it based on your own since the pattern change is kind of big.

[Hentai]
00:39:184 (1,2,3) - not stacking very well
01:16:568 (3) - comparing with 01:16:107 (1) - , this slider is too much bended, causing a feeling of inharmonious on the whole pattern. I would rather copy one from 01:16:107 (1) - .
01:16:568 (3,5) - slider ends are not stacking properly

Call me back later.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
All fixed.

Discussed with popner and we both think del the last part is a good idea since it is not only difficult to timing but also inconsistent with previous part.

;)
popner
Bubbled!
Zero__wind
感觉这版本翻唱得不带劲OAQ
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Zero__wind wrote:

感觉这版本翻唱得不带劲OAQ
我喜欢软萌的,不喜欢刻意卖萌搞怪的-v-

以及,都进来了也不顺别点个rank -皿-
Shohei Ohtani
OVERALL:
PREVIEW POINT ISN'T SNAPPED (dammit fycho)

H-H-Hentai??:
Like I think you're gonna need a reason for this diff name.
00:07:799 (5,6) - Would prefer this to be flipped for flow's sake.
00:19:338 (2) - Not. . . really sure why this is slowed down.
00:22:568 (1) - ^
00:26:261 (1) - ^
00:39:530 (2,3) - Stack is kind of off
01:03:184 (1) - Why this reduced spacing??
01:21:415 (6) - Fix this stack owo (Don't worry, it's off in-game too :3)

Other two diffs are fine.

I'll see what I can do about the artist. Woudln't acane_madder technically be the closest thing to an artist, though?
Twice_old
难道只有我一个人觉得mp3音量很小吗?
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

CDFA wrote:

OVERALL:
PREVIEW POINT ISN'T SNAPPED (dammit fycho) fixed

H-H-Hentai??:
Like I think you're gonna need a reason for this diff name.fixed
00:07:799 (5,6) - Would prefer this to be flipped for flow's sake. it would be fine I think
00:19:338 (2) - Not. . . really sure why this is slowed down. because "da me yo" sounds more gentle and basically the BGM of this part is kindly slow
00:22:568 (1) - ^
00:26:261 (1) - ^
00:39:530 (2,3) - Stack is kind of off fixed
01:03:184 (1) - Why this reduced spacing?? same as before.
01:21:415 (6) - Fix this stack owo (Don't worry, it's off in-game too :3) fixed

Other two diffs are fine.

I'll see what I can do about the artist. Woudln't acane_madder technically be the closest thing to an artist, though?
Acane_madder is the composer of the original song. And the singer of this version named it as "Anonymous", I think it would be fine if we keep it.
Diff name is basically due to the title. But I would change it.

Downloading OSU to see if there is anything need to be changed. fixed.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Twice wrote:

难道只有我一个人觉得mp3音量很小吗?
耳机党表示还好吧-。-我是直接下的5sing
Shohei Ohtani
Internal discussion by BAT/QAT, we feel it'd be better if you put the artist as "Unknown Artist" rather than "Anonymous". This is just for consistency among maps where the artist is unknown.

hmu when you fix it. I'll be fine ranking it from my phone even, since the map itself is fine.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

CDFA wrote:

Internal discussion by BAT/QAT, we feel it'd be better if you put the artist as "Unknown Artist" rather than "Anonymous". This is just for consistency among maps where the artist is unknown.

hmu when you fix it. I'll be fine ranking it from my phone even, since the map itself is fine.
Fixed~~
Shohei Ohtani
Grate!!!!!! Bbhwusjs
Lach
From the description on Nicovideo, it says "作詞作曲(Lyric writer) acane_madder", but it appears he doesn't know who made the melody itself. I assume he took the song and wrote the lyrics and put the synthesizer over the top of it. The user on bilibili then made a cover of the vocaloid version. Wouldn't that make "arcande_madder" the artist, technically? Or perhaps the user who uploaded it to bilibili(小法克) who I assume did the cover, unless it's a reprint.

It makes more sense than having "Unknown Artist" does.
Stefan
So "acane_madder" has been mentioned as composer of the lyrics and the music:


that actually makes it acceptable enough as Artist.

Megurine Luka wrote:

Acane_madder is the composer of the original song. And the singer of this version named it as "Anonymous", I think it would be fine if we keep it. Diff name is basically due to the title. But I would change it.
We had a similar case on p/2571141
Mao
Also is Unknown Artist really appropriate if you can at least find something that relates to the current version?
For "Alle meine Entchen" it was the case that there was literally nothing know about neither the composer nor the vocalist of that version.
Sey
At least an artist is given here from the original song. In "Alle meine Entchen" we had an utterly exception which normally should be avoided whenever it's possible. There was not even any evidence for the artist of the original song, but it's definitely given in this song.
Shohei Ohtani
hahahah wow look at that, everyone who didn't touch this map for 2 months decided to come out and finally get mad about it once it got ranked

hahahah man wouldn't that have been cool the 2 months this sat bubbled with no posts
Sey

CDFA wrote:

hahahah wow look at that, everyone who didn't touch this map for 2 months decided to come out and finally get mad about it once it got ranked

hahahah man wouldn't that have been cool the 2 months this sat bubbled with no posts
We're a team. Instead of blaming others you better should see that as some constructive feedback to improve the mapset and doing it better next time. Be that as it may, let us just wait for some BATm's or QAT's response and see what they are thinking instead of starting any pointless quarrel here.
Shohei Ohtani
I'm. . . I'm not blaming anyone for anything?

I'm saying that this map sat in pending for 2 months without any input, and once it was ranked, input started coming in, so now what's probably going to happen is that this map will get unranked and there will be a lot of pointless arguing over the rule and stuff which could have been done beforehand with a lot less drama.

I know that the BAT is a team, so I consulted QATs about this issue and they said it was fine, but to use "Unknown Artist".

Instead of viewing my post as an attack, you "better should see" that as a reminder to put in some initiative to actually get issues like this done DURING the ranking process if you see any sort of oddity rather than doing it afterward.
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Dear all, unknown artist does not have any problem in this case. Due to the singer himself choose to hide his name, I would be appreciate if you guys follow his idea.
The person who post this video said "代投 本家:sm20136093。原作者匿名" which means "Post this video for the singer. Original song: smxxxxxxx. The singer is anonymity."
Therefore I don't really think unknown artist is a problem.

Thanks CDFA, for all these things.
Stefan
CDFA: I think you're getting the initiative wrong. There is no fault by anyone but to clarify if that even looks legit as option should be done. Qualified section in a nutshell.


Can we just consult some chinese/japanese speaking BAT/QAT member(s)?
wcx19911123
I'm here to explain sth

the song is not the original version, it's sang by an anonymous singer. the song was released the first time in here, a website like niconico.jp

for cover songs, actually we should write the name of the singer as artist, not the original composer or anything else. in this special case, I think it's better for us to keep the anonymous artist, it's the only homage we can do for the singer
Zero__wind
So here comes a chinese speaking member
I'm fine with "Unknown Artist" in this case as long as it's better than "Anonymous"
and CDFA claimed that this is already decided after discussion with QAT members
while the video(song) uploader on bilibili stated clearly "原作者匿名" which means the original artist is anonymous
I don't think you guys need to be so concerned
Sey

Zero__wind wrote:

I don't think you guys need to be so concerned
I was going to ask a BATm about this but nvm then. Anyways, being concerned is absolutely okay here and it's good seeing people willed to clarify things up before it's too late for that. Doesn't really matter if they can be proven wrong or not. And EVEN IF CDFA clarified it with QATs they also can do mistakes, so good that we talked about it.
Stefan
Well, thinking that the creator can also work as artist but I guess we stay in wcx and Zero__Wind's posts. Hopefully this doesn't become to a trend.



Congrats
Rakuen
:) Grats :)
Irie Miyuki
congratz啊大哥

【献腿
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Thanks all.

长喜欧尼酱&零风阿里嘎多=3=
Shohei Ohtani
i now know why people become alcoholics
tutuhaha
哎呦总算
恭喜啊大哥!
Selisi
大哥 congraz~ 虽然晚了...
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