Lena wrote:

From #modreqs
M4M

Easy
01:30:861 (1) - Slider End 01:31:784 nope, too short for new players and it does not fit.

Normal
00:04:092 (4) - NC
00:11:476 (4) - ^
00:33:630 (4) - ^
00:41:015 (4) - ^
01:25:323 (4) - ^
01:28:092 (3) - How about this?
hmmmm I think current fit vocal more, but anyway yes
01:30:861 (1) - Slider End 01:31:784

Hentai
00:04:092 (6) - NC
00:11:476 (6) - ^
00:29:938 (3) - ^
00:33:630 (7) - ^
00:36:630 (4) - ^
00:41:246 (7) - ^
00:44:707 (5) - How about this?

01:17:938 (6) - NC
01:20:707 (3) - ^
01:21:400 (6) - move x:452 y:240 hmmmm.. why?
01:25:323 (6) - NC
01:30:861 (1) - Spin End 01:31:784

Autumn wrote:

Hi Luka ^^
M4M here
[General]
结尾可以加上以下Timing point:

95276,738.497895280998,4,2,1,40,1,0
96753,807.504407628225,4,2,1,40,1,0
98368,769.004011637594,4,2,1,40,1,0
99137,1009.99899000101,4,2,1,40,1,0
100147,1009.99899000101,4,2,1,40,1,0

效果:

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其实不太重要...因为后面Vocal都是双重叠起来的所以一开始也就没打算map了，不过感谢，如果BAT硬性要求要把后面红线插上的话会考虑的lol

[Hentai]
SV变慢的地方可以考虑单独用一种颜色做NC 比如粉红 好

00:19:323 (1) - Ctrl+G? 考虑距离和前面一致但时间隔了1/1而不是1/2 这个算是故意梗吧lol
00:06:400 (2,2) - Ctrl+G? 喜欢这种转圈的感觉 好
00:28:092 (1) - 太靠边了 fixed
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个人觉得可以用Whistle的地方: 音效方面就不多做考虑了0.0我想让这首歌显得安静一些

SPOILER

00:05:476
00:12:861
00:35:015
00:42:400
01:19:323
都是一类 可以跟钢琴
00:43:784
01:26:707 (11)

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01:25:323 (6) - NC? fixed

[Normal]
01:29:938 - 绿线用40%音量
01:03:169 - Whistle?
01:06:861 - ^
以下是觉得太靠边可以往中间放一放的
01:25:323 (4) -
01:28:092 (3) - NM里折返四次不如换成两个滑条妥当
01:30:861 (1) - 不如和Hentai一样换成转盘

[Easy]
01:29:938 - 绿线用40%音量

GL~^^

1. There are 2 "douga" in the text. Delete one of them.
2. iirc each users from NND have this numbered account (smXXXXXXXX ??) or account name, put the account name or the numbered one of this song's uploader as the artist.
3. I wonder what whistle is following... I thought it's following the piano sound. If it's indeed following the piano sound, try to add more whistles on the piano sounds. Like 00:02:707, 00:02:938, and 00:07:784 - 00:08:707
4. I think there's a timing change at 01:30:861 and 01:32:707. Check it. I'm not good at timing.
5. The song still play after 01:34:553, why don't you map it?

1. 00:35:476 (1) - rotate this for a bit anti-clockwisely, so the tail will facing (2), you might also want to move (3), so it won't be blocked by (1), like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:11:476 (5) - nazi. move this to 324,76 so 01:10:553 (3,4,5) will look like encircling (2)'s head
3. 01:30:861 (1) - I tried to move the end of the slider to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.

1. 00:05:938 (1,2,3,4) - Try to give a bit of curve on these slider. Maybe something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:784 (5,6) - Move this down, This slider is almost blocked by the health bar
3. 00:11:476 (4,5,6) - give these a bit curve
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:22:553 (3) - nazi. make this repeat twice and delete 00:24:400 (1).
5. 00:24:400 (1,2) - the distance is too short, confusing for beginners, maybe you would like to change it to something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:28:092 (1,1) - The space is too short for beginners. Maybe change the spinner into a normal objects, like
7. 00:39:861 (2) - move this a bit to right , it'll create a better flow imo
8. 00:41:707 (6) - same as 00:39:861 (2). move this to140,9
9. 00:44:707 (5) - move the head a bit to down. Again, it'll make a better flow
10. 01:10:553 (3,4) - Don't stack, confusing for beginners
11. 01:16:092 (1) - move the tail a bit to down, so it'll face (2). like this :
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:28:092 (3,4) - don't stack.
13. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.

1. 00:06:861 (1) - disable NC, it's useless
2. 00:09:169 (5) - delete whistle
3. 00:10:553 (4) - on gameplay, it is visible that this slider is blocked by (3). Move this a bit, so it won't be blocked by (3), for example 408,272
4. 00:10:553 (4,5,6) - each spacing are not same, (4,5)'s distance are 1.7x while (5,6)'s distance reached 2.0x, change it so they're spacings are same
5. 00:14:246 (1) - delete NC
6. 01:03:169 (1) - too close to (4), move it somewhere else.
7. 01:06:861 (1) - ^
8. 01:05:361 (2) - delete. I don't think it's needed
9. 01:09:053 (2) - ^
10. 01:21:400 (6) - rather than stacking this to (7)'s tail. It'll be better to stack this to (4), stacking it to slider tail can cause confusion, especially if the slider is repeated
11. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy] and [Normal], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.

1. 最后转盘的音量调到最小感觉会好好多的样子

1. 01:34:553 - 这个时间点之后会不会有些空呢QvQ 后面可能有些不好做（其实还可以啦 就是提一下

1. 01:28:092 (4,5) -这个形状可以更好看一些QvQ

1. 00:42:861 (1) - 这里的两个滑条不完全平行哦~~

1. 01:16:553 (3) - 这个感觉有些太弯了呢 不太美

1. 00:04:092 (4,5,6) - 这里4和5对称然后6盖到下一个滑条上怎么样QvQ

1. 00:41:476 (5,6,7) - 这个地方感觉像是没有对准的样子

1. 00:42:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个可以把第一个抬高一些 这样最后的滑条就不会贴到底部惹~

1. 01:28:092 (3) - 这个也是要出去了的感觉呢 可以往上延伸试试看QvQ

1. 01:27:169 (1) - 这个滑条的末尾稍微往上抬高一点点 因为滑条整体感觉稍微末尾弯了一点点 就不是很美了

Megurine Luka wrote:

其实做的挺好的但是真的抱歉我这图不需要more diffs 了;w;

谢谢;w;

nanda2009 wrote:

Hi. M4M. Here's my little mod.

[General]

1. There are 2 "douga" in the text. Delete one of them. k
2. iirc each users from NND have this numbered account (smXXXXXXXX ??) or account name, put the account name or the numbered one of this song's uploader as the artist. no need I think?
3. I wonder what whistle is following... I thought it's following the piano sound. If it's indeed following the piano sound, try to add more whistles on the piano sounds. Like 00:02:707, 00:02:938, and 00:07:784 - 00:08:707 I want the song to be more silent ;w;
4. I think there's a timing change at 01:30:861 and 01:32:707. Check it. I'm not good at timing. k
5. The song still play after 01:34:553, why don't you map it? mapped

[Easy]

1. 00:35:476 (1) - rotate this for a bit anti-clockwisely, so the tail will facing (2), you might also want to move (3), so it won't be blocked by (1), like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   k
2. 01:11:476 (5) - nazi. move this to 324,76 so 01:10:553 (3,4,5) will look like encircling (2)'s head k
3. 01:30:861 (1) - I tried to move the end of the slider to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part. k

[Normal]

1. 00:05:938 (1,2,3,4) - Try to give a bit of curve on these slider. Maybe something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   I want it differentiate with the last slider so ;w;
2. 00:07:784 (5,6) - Move this down, This slider is almost blocked by the health bar k
3. 00:11:476 (4,5,6) - give these a bit curve I think straight is better ;w;
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:22:553 (3) - nazi. make this repeat twice and delete 00:24:400 (1). k
5. 00:24:400 (1,2) - the distance is too short, confusing for beginners, maybe you would like to change it to something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   nope
6. 00:28:092 (1,1) - The space is too short for beginners. Maybe change the spinner into a normal objects, like It's normal so I think it's fine
7. 00:39:861 (2) - move this a bit to right , it'll create a better flow imo k
8. 00:41:707 (6) - same as 00:39:861 (2). move this to140,9
9. 00:44:707 (5) - move the head a bit to down. Again, it'll make a better flow
10. 01:10:553 (3,4) - Don't stack, confusing for beginners normal is fine 0.0
11. 01:16:092 (1) - move the tail a bit to down, so it'll face (2). like this : current is fine?
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:28:092 (3,4) - don't stack.
13. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.

[Hentai]

1. 00:06:861 (1) - disable NC, it's useless k
2. 00:09:169 (5) - delete whistle no ;w;
3. 00:10:553 (4) - on gameplay, it is visible that this slider is blocked by (3). Move this a bit, so it won't be blocked by (3), for example 408,272 no 0.0
4. 00:10:553 (4,5,6) - each spacing are not same, (4,5)'s distance are 1.7x while (5,6)'s distance reached 2.0x, change it so they're spacings are same
5. 00:14:246 (1) - delete NC k
6. 01:03:169 (1) - too close to (4), move it somewhere else.
7. 01:06:861 (1) - ^
8. 01:05:361 (2) - delete. I don't think it's needed
9. 01:09:053 (2) - ^
10. 01:21:400 (6) - rather than stacking this to (7)'s tail. It'll be better to stack this to (4), stacking it to slider tail can cause confusion, especially if the slider is repeated It's fun ;w;
11. 01:30:861 (1) - Again. Same as [Easy] and [Normal], I tried to move the end of the spinner to 01:31:784 and imo it's better. Try it. If you trying to follow the vocal. I don't think it's really hearable at that part.

GL

Flower wrote:

Hi~大哥啊

[General]
莫名偶尔冒出一个whistle感觉不是事啊 建议试着在原来的whistle地方间或改成drum finish 然后24白线whistle 我觉得whistle很有规律啊
感觉整首曲子根本没有high的地方 考虑一下要不要去掉kiai 还是要一下
最后两个音感觉没对上 建议加个红线 加了

[Shinshi]
x0.5感觉有点过了 x0.75看看 0.5挺好，坑人目的达到
00:05:938 (1,2,1,2) - 减小一些弧度以把00:05:707 (9) - 包的更好 好像还行
00:21:169 (3) - 建议延长1/4以提供拖音的效果 不太合适
00:35:476 (1) - 减小一些弧度，这个像马桶盖 k
00:40:092 (5) - ^ no
01:29:015 (6,7,8) - 拉成正三角 I like 等腰三角

[Normal]
01:01:323 (1,2,1,2) - 这啥苟史 没梗啊

[Easy]
00:22:553 (3) - 包的更好些
00:23:938 (4) - 移到x:82 y:722或者x:123 y:241来获得更好的flow然后把00:24:400 (1) - 往下放放（实际上我觉得这里flow很奇怪主要是因为3的马桶盖外形）
01:06:861 (3) - 包的更好些

感觉看不出什么槽点 但是感觉是随机作图器做的感觉啊 要不你用随机作图器做个 正有此意

ryuu wrote:

hi, luka-san :3
m4m :о

[Easy]

please press ctrl+1 and move objects.
because different distances. like here

SPOILER

00:13:323 (1) - mb make it like this? good

SPOILER

for the variety
00:28:092 (1) - please lift end higher ?? sorry I don't understand ;w;
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick? fixed

[Normal] ALMOST ALL FIXED

00:06:400 (2,3,4) - how about that?

SPOILER

00:18:400 - beat?
00:18:861 (4) - may make it more diverse?

SPOILER

00:20:707 (1) - ^

SPOILER

00:34:092 (6) - lift end higher?
00:42:861 (1,2,3,4) - lift this construction and move higher up 00:44:707 (5)
01:01:323 (1,2,1,2) - okay D:
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

[Hentai] Fixed all

00:21:169 (3) - m?

SPOILER

00:36:169 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool jumps o.o
00:40:092 (5) - as on 00:21:169 (3)
01:30:861 (1) - end on previous blue tick?

thats all.
if i was helpful, tell me ;_;
and i'll give you my map.

good luck :3/

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi Megurine Luka ~ , from my Modding Queue
sry for my lateness.

General
- The artist for actual vocaloid version is unknown? but this version is a guy singing. I'm not sure if a guy singing here has specific name or whatever that you can change from Anonymous. But still, I think it's not a problem at all if you really don't know. Just wondering
Yep the original vocaloid singer is also unknown as the link in creator's word shows. What the composer told us is only the song is composed by Vocaloid so ..
- combohax in Hentai diff is really great. Maybe you can try to do that in Easy and Normal too? I believe it must be awesome too! It's used for indicating the slider velocity change so I think it's fine to not have it in E or N
- Offset is kind of early. I think the every offset should get around (+10) (Not definitely sure at all since there are many parts that timings are messed) Fixed and checked the last part with LKs

Easy
01:30:866 (1) - I think this slider should end at 01:31:847 (1/8). It's not a problem even 1/8 for the easiest diff at all because it's just a slider end and is followed by the spinner. The current ending at blue tick is still sounding off if you ask me. Yep it is and I fixed it with the new timing line so I think it's ok now.
01:32:712 (1) - 1/8 next? at 01:34:039 if you actually listen to it with 25% playback. fixed already
I'm still not sure about them though. Timing is needed to be checked carefully imo.

Normal
AR6 might be unrankable imo. I still don't know the exact answer but seeing from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal made me aware if AR6 can be used. Also it's just a normal diff, AR6 is too much fast for beginners. Yep changed to AR5
01:02:712 (2) - is this spacing intentional? quite unbalance as it is inclined to the left side. nah It's just a mistake and fixed.
01:28:097 (3) - off-screen for 4:3 ratio , I think it should be fixed. fixed
01:30:866 (1) - same as Easy

Hard
fine

Only problem I got was your timing. I hope it should be fine but you better find expert timer to check things here.
Good luck!

MMzz wrote:

[Hentai] All fixed
00:18:866 (5) - Start the new combo here? It follows the new vocal line and the song's downbeat. Similar to 00:22:558 (1) - and 00:26:251 (1) -
00:29:943 (3) - ^
01:29:020 (6) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:020 (2) - Start the new combo here instead of 00:16:558 (1) - ? Keeps the combo pattern you have used and is more clear for the newer players. k
00:22:558 (3) - The repeat on this slider makes the next notes really confusing because of the change in placement, but no change in the song's rhythm. I would remove the repeat then add notes similar to before. This is an example, you can see the placement after 3: http://puu.sh/3F3FR.jpg You can design it any way, you should just use this placement. Or, you can do the placement you did here: 01:08:712 (1) - both work.fixed
00:31:328 (1) - This note is too close to the end of the spinner, I suggest you remove it then add a NC on 00:31:789 (2) - . del
01:14:712 (1) - ^ del
01:17:943 (1) - Remove this combo? It would only make sense to remove this, unless you would add a combo on 01:21:635 (4) - , 01:25:328 (4) - , etc. del

[Easy]
All that worries me is that this part(s) of the song 00:17:020 (1) -, 01:01:328 (1) - is harder in the easy than in the normal because it is more dense. Kinda weird. I think it's fine 0.0

You should get the timing at the end checked out by a timing pro like Charles445 or lolcubes.

94822,588.235294117647,4,2,1,40,1,0
95276,740.740740740741,4,2,1,40,1,0
96633,740.740740740741,4,2,1,40,1,0
98258,769.230769230769,4,2,1,40,1,0

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Zero__wind wrote:

感觉这版本翻唱得不带劲OAQ

CDFA wrote:

OVERALL:
PREVIEW POINT ISN'T SNAPPED (dammit fycho) fixed

H-H-Hentai??:
Like I think you're gonna need a reason for this diff name.fixed
00:07:799 (5,6) - Would prefer this to be flipped for flow's sake. it would be fine I think
00:19:338 (2) - Not. . . really sure why this is slowed down. because "da me yo" sounds more gentle and basically the BGM of this part is kindly slow
00:22:568 (1) - ^
00:26:261 (1) - ^
00:39:530 (2,3) - Stack is kind of off fixed
01:03:184 (1) - Why this reduced spacing?? same as before.
01:21:415 (6) - Fix this stack owo (Don't worry, it's off in-game too :3) fixed

Other two diffs are fine.

I'll see what I can do about the artist. Woudln't acane_madder technically be the closest thing to an artist, though?

Twice wrote:

难道只有我一个人觉得mp3音量很小吗？

CDFA wrote:

Internal discussion by BAT/QAT, we feel it'd be better if you put the artist as "Unknown Artist" rather than "Anonymous". This is just for consistency among maps where the artist is unknown.

hmu when you fix it. I'll be fine ranking it from my phone even, since the map itself is fine.

Megurine Luka wrote:

Acane_madder is the composer of the original song. And the singer of this version named it as "Anonymous", I think it would be fine if we keep it. Diff name is basically due to the title. But I would change it.

CDFA wrote:

hahahah wow look at that, everyone who didn't touch this map for 2 months decided to come out and finally get mad about it once it got ranked

hahahah man wouldn't that have been cool the 2 months this sat bubbled with no posts

Zero__wind wrote:

I don't think you guys need to be so concerned