Paper AirPlane wrote:

Hi~random mod~
This my 1th mod :3
and sry about my poor English =3=

[General]
1.Good enough,but the timing seems a little wrong..?
try this offset : 141 Changed, thanks

2.and the offset:82414--96129
the SB is so perfect,but the SB load over 5X It testmode its fine, no need to change
it may be make somebody who computer is not good enough and influence his gameplay D:
especially 96129,SB load is 9.55X!
try to reduce this number,if u can not do that,it does not matter,the map can be still ranked

[Insane]
02:17:486 (1) - not easy to read
02:10:629 (1) - ↑
00:59:271 (4) - well,I think this note should be remove,because their distance change so fast..just suggestion
00:55:843 (1) - ↑
01:02:486 (1) - ↑

[Hard]
seems ok

[Normal]
01:36:129 (1,2) - Not easy to read
01:39:557 (1,2) - ↑
01:42:986 (1,2) - ↑

[Easy]
Right


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Uh,I have no kudosu to shoot a star..sry but I like this music and your beatmap!
hope your map will rank one day! XD~
good luck!~

kelvinli wrote:

Hi.M4M from your queue
[General]
The green line at 00:13:849 is not snapped.Fix it in all diffs. Done
Also the SB load did really exceeds 5.00x.This is proved when you start testing it ~3 seconds earlier than 00:54:998 In testing it doesnt go over 5, so it is fine.
Check Display epilepsy warning? Done
Combo colour 1 and 3 looks too alike in gameplay. 3 could be a darker grey. Done
[Easy]
00:31:855 (3) - NC?It seems to be a new verse
00:38:712 (3) - ^
00:48:998 (4) - ^
00:52:426 (6) - ^ Done
00:53:283 (7,8,9) - well,IMO a symmetrical shape looks better. Done
01:37:855 (2) - could be placed to the right by some grids so it combines with the slider to have a nice flow Done
01:49:855 (1,2,3) - a spacing inconsistent because of the grids Done
[Normal]
00:06:998 (1) - I'd like to know why it ends on the red tick.It feels weird to me. End at 00:07:855?
00:10:426 (1) - ^ I always try making it different and this slider end fits
00:12:569 (2,1) - overlapping, so it makes the pattern a bit harder to read.IMO (1) (2) can point to the Bottom-left Done
01:20:712 (1) - this slider repeating 2 times is quite confusing.Try breaking it up? Its not hard to see and its playable enough to not change it
02:15:569 (1) - this slider isn't that beautiful, especially for a song like this. Done
[Hard]
00:01:855 (3,1) - they are not perfectly done.Could adjust the red point. No again
00:20:926 (1) - well,it is quite hard to read, especially with hidden.Try moving it out? Done
00:39:569 (4,1) - they are not perfectly done. No
[Insane]
01:22:855 (4,8,4,8) - well,I think you could use some curves.This part feels too linear Thats the way i wanted it :3
01:27:998 (4,5,8) - could be symmetrical? No
02:33:998 (1,2) - they are spaced like the precious notes.I think it is not easy to read They are readable enough

I tried my best.But the map is too perfect that I can't even spot any errors or mistakes
Good Luck

440,96,3355,6,2,B|468:136|448:180|428:196|428:196|432:228,1,140

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:03:569 (1,2) - I think you've forgot Whistle here. If this was your intention, then I suggest to putting in.
00:49:855 (2) - Make the curve rounder,,
01:30:998 (2) - Whistle
02:09:998 (4) - (300,40) will be better~
02:15:998 (3) - (380,56)
02:24:140 (1) - Have you forgot Whistle at the head?
02:36:141 (2) - Whistle

Fixed all of your suggestions

Normal:

00:05:283 (3,4) - Whistles~~
00:41:283 (1) - 1 Grid down will make a better line
00:44:498 (5) - (411,298)?
00:56:712 (1) - Whistle
01:00:140 (1) - ^
00:57:998 (2) - Clap at the head
01:01:426 (2) - ^
01:03:569 (1,2) - ^
01:56:498 (2) - (85,303)
02:03:355 (2) - (92,327)
02:06:998 (1,2) - Imo, Adding Whistle at the start will be better
02:10:426 (1,2,1) - 1 Grid right to make a better line between 02:09:998 (2,3,1)
02:18:783 (3) - (364,144)

Fixed all of your suggestions

Hard:

00:01:855 (3,1) - Make a better blanket.

SPOILER

440,96,3355,6,2,B|468:136|448:180|428:196|428:196|432:228,1,140

00:38:283 (2) - Delete Clap at the head
00:57:140 (2,4) - Clap
01:00:569 (2,4) - ^
01:03:998 (2,4) - ^
02:03:569 (1) - Add Finish at the head?

Fixed all of your suggestions

Insane:

00:44:069 - Add a note? No because there is no real sound to it
01:18:140 (3,4) - Adding a whistle at the end of (3), and deleting whistle at (4) will be better. I put a whistle at end of 3 but didnt delete the 4
02:20:498 (4) - Imo, Finish doesn't fit well
02:23:926 (4) - ^
02:27:355 (4) - ^

Natsu wrote:

Hi o3o

Insane:

00:00:141 remove finish or add it in the other diffs too (imo is better adding it) Added
01:49:640 this is wrong better use this rhythm if you follow my suggestion add finish here 01:49:855

00:28:426 finish
00:07:855 remove nc
00:58:640 (1,2,3) - you stack they but here 00:59:283 (1,2,3,4) - you do another thing choose one be consistent
01:58:426 (1,2,3,4) - im being annoying qith same thing but stacking they gonna look better

No to others because it breaks my pattern and hitsounding

Hard:

01:37:855 remove clap and add whistle all the other diff have whistles.. Breaks my hitsounds
00:28:426 finish
00:32:712 (1,2,1,2) - distance is not the same here Its exactly the same
01:15:569 (1,2) - a little distance error here There isnt?
02:02:712 (5,6,7,8) - ugly pattern stack they better just my opinion

Normal:

01:39:569 01:39:783 overmapped no sound there What ._.
01:41:283 whistle
01:42:998 clap
01:46:426 no music here move better to 01:46:641
00:11:283 add circle
00:12:140 (1,2,3) - this part is so confuse for a normal imo
00:17:283 finish
02:00:140 (1,2) - distance error There are no errors
01:22:426 finish

No to others again due to hitsounds pattern breaking

Easy:

00:14:712 so little time to recover after spinner maybe delete it and add a circle here 00:15:141 There are 2 white ticks space
00:16:855 missing finish
00:21:569 whistle
00:23:712 missing finish add it you do in the others diffs
00:54:998 remove whistle and add finish fit alot better
01:37:855 whistle consistency with other diffs Added
01:39:569 rhythm is wrong nothing in music there you should put it here 01:39:998 or 01:39:783
01:46:426 same has normal

-Bakari- wrote:

In general, this map is cute. But I didn't really like big CS on harder diffs. Changed it on Insane yep c(:

[General]

1. Can't you add tag Trance it sounds like trance to me.

Added techno also to it, since its relating to it

[Easy]

1. 00:16:855 (3) - it's quite hard to hear hitsound here. If beginners won't hear the hitsound, they probably will be stressed!
   Note: 00:21:569 (2) - 00:23:712 (2) - same as above. Just try to make them a bit louder. made it 50 now, should be fine
2. 01:34:426 (2) - (2)'s tail is too close to (1). Beginners might mistakenly click it. This kind of flow istoo hard for beginners, in my opinion.
   Note: 01:38:712 (3,1) - No to that, its pretty fine to play
3. 01:46:426 (2) - clap hitsound here feels too loud and sounds a bit off. try to remove it, I guess whistle here is enough.

No to this as well, clap and music fit very well together, the clap is the same as on other parts

[Normal]

1. Try to use AR5 (and OD/HP +1 to keep settings balanced). It will fit with slider velocity and your patterns better. What's more, it makes diff spread more balanced! Made it a little higher yes
2. 01:15:569 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I'd say that you're overusing 1/2 notes here. It may be too much for normal-players. Try not to use so many 1/2 notes in this pattern, please! Hm, i tried to make it actually simple
3. 01:20:712 (1) - 2nd reverse arppears the way too fast and players have NO time to notice it. What's more, players don't even expect to see such sliders here, becvause they're very uncommon! I guess you can replace them with something like 02:18:140 (2,3)
   Note:01:36:140 (1) - 01:39:569 (1) - 01:42:998 (1) - 01:46:426 (1) - 01:48:998 (2) - same here :< Changed
4. 01:51:569 (1) - almost the same as above. This slider might be okay because it's a little longer than other sliders. I understood the above one, but this one i think is ok, since it is longer
5. 02:41:283 (1,2) - this combo feels too short towards ther combos here. It looks a bit awkward, can't you fix it somehow? Changed

[Hard]

1. Try OD and HP Drain +1. It feels too low, atm. It makes diff a bit boring for players, i think. Changed it a little
2. 00:17:712 - I'd place here a circle because it feels like something is missing here. Circle will fit with music and improve rhythm here a bit Would destroy my pattern i wanted
3. 01:20:712 (1,2,3) - why 1/4 pattern here? It feels too hard here, tbh. You don't use them a lot and this one feels unexpceted and confusing. Pretty fine to play and goes to the rythm
4. 02:02:712 (5,6,7,8) - nazi - try to unstack them, to make pattern easier to read. I already had it unstacked like that ->example but people always said i should stack it
   
   I din't really liked these 2x reversed sliders, but it's just my opinion.

[Insane]

1. Try HP Drain + 1, it will make diff a bit more challenging.It feels better and makes map more interesting.
2. 00:58:640 (1,2,3,4) - try to unstack it like you did it with 00:59:283 (1,2,3,4) - or try something else here? It just looks a bit inconsistent now. :<
   
   Changed both
   
   Awesome diff! I'd use lower CS here, to make it even more enjoyable, just saying.

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Good luck!

Andrea wrote:

~Extra~

1. Increase CS by 1 tick, it feels way too high right now to me.

Big circles are qwesome.

1. 00:03:141 (1) - I don't really like this anti-jump, move this note somewhere else perhaps? Would be better. Fixed
2. 00:11:069 (3) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody, it sounds too loud to me. Whops, my bad
3. 00:21:355 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can please. Fixed that
4. 00:47:712 (6) - Same as above, mostly the fault it's because of the really big circle size you're using.
5. 00:53:712 (2) - And here as well, for the same reason.
6. 01:19:426 (3) - The whistle on the begin of this slider doesn't really make sense and feels out of place, remove it. idk why i put that....
7. 01:36:141 (1) - The volume on this section is way too low and can't be heard, increase it by 15% at least please. Yup, put 25%
8. 01:56:712 (1,2,3,4) - Nothing wrong with this pattern, it just reminds me of jericho's mapping style. It is intended to be a little jericho section
9. 02:01:426 (7) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can please. Fixed
10. 02:27:141 (7) - Add a clap at the begin of this slider, it feels like you're missing it. Whops
11. 02:34:426 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change. Yep
12. 02:37:855 (5) - Same as above for the same reason.

Good luck o3o

Maddy wrote:

vipto asked me for a mod on his difficulty.

[General]

1. Combo 2 and combo 4 are too similar in colours, please change them a bit.

[Extra]

1. 00:13:855 - This part has unhearable hitsounds, and I'm running on low music volume, so imagine that. The custom hitsounds are based too much on the bass, and with such volume they are veryyy low. The general rules state that all hitsounds should be hearable.
2. 01:01:855 - Same thing. I can hear it, so it's fine.
3. 01:17:498 - I don't like how you're missing a hat here. (Drum part) Map the red ticks, I had a really hard time following the map here, since it doesn't match the music imo. http://puu.sh/2wiTN Something like this sounds a lot better: try to follow this kind of rhythm til 01:21:998 (7) - . Remapped that part
4. 01:25:855 (8) - Forgot a NC? Yep
5. 01:28:641 - Add a note here stacked with the following pattern. k
6. 01:29:498 (2) - ^
7. 01:30:141 (1) - Remove combo for consistency. Applied the combo madness
8. 01:30:998 (5) - Add combo for consistency.
9. 01:31:748 (1) - Remove combo.
10. 01:32:712 (6) - Add combo.
11. 01:33:569 (1) - Remove combo.
12. 01:34:426 (8) - Add combo.
13. 01:34:855 (1) - Remove combo.
14. 01:35:283 - Add a note, since it sounds wrong and off. Ye
15. 01:36:141 - Again low volume. fix'd
16. 01:36:141 (1,2) - Does not follow music, try: http://puu.sh/2wjeo . k
17. 01:41:283 (1) - Remove combo for consistency.
18. 01:45:141 (1) - ^ Yeye
19. 01:46:212 (10) - Add combo.
20. 01:47:926 (1,2,3) - This pattern doesn not emphasizes the white tick piano, try: http://puu.sh/2wjiy , much better. Mhm k
21. 01:53:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of this undermapping, at all. Try to make it better, so people don't fall asleep. no u
22. 02:03:141 (1) - Unnecessary new combo. Whops
23. 02:26:283 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow. Interesting idea. Creates a flat zig-zag. I actually like that
24. 02:39:569 (1) - 2 repeat sliders on an extra are boring, try to make 2 different sliders with the same lenght? no u

Please next time learn to combo <3