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KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, December 31, 2012 at 3:04:41 AM

Artist: BeForU
Title: BREAK DOWN!
Source: Dance Dance Revolution 7thMIX
Tags: DDR,Teru21,mebins
BPM: 190.1
Filesize: 2124kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Mebinsane! (5 stars, 359 notes)
  2. Teru's Normal (2.67 stars, 86 notes)
Download: BeForU - BREAK DOWN!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Added a Insane diff and added a bg!
BPM 190.10!

Changed to APPROVAL 11/17/11
Now changed to Pending Ranked ! 12/26/12!
100% Mebinsane!
100% Teru's normal!
Last edited by KingKrishna , edited 66 times in total.
laport
1,240 posts
Joined June 2010
laport
timing is off, try 190,10 bpm ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░ ░
oWingz
89 posts
Joined March 2010
oWingz
Just Suggestions
Change it!!!
Add this, anywhere reasonable

00:28:133 - Make your stream more close together (Spacing x0.5)
00:37:133 - Make only one repeat. Add 3 more Circles on 37:606, 37:764 and 37:922
00:40:054 - Move slider 1/4 -> and remove 1/4 note at the end bit
00:42:975 - !!!Change that slider, people tend to frown on hidden return sliders
00:54:501 to 00:55:211 - Break time
00:55:290 - New slider (1/2 note)
00:57:501 - Remove that r.Slider (only 3 beats, not 4)
00:57:659 - Make another 3 beat slider. you can copy from 57:501
00:59:869 - Add Circle
01:00:659 - Fix that up, very messy
01:01:290 - [Slider] Lose only 1/4 note at the end
01:01:448 - Add Circle
01:06:185 - [Circles 2 to 11] Try clean that up abit, maybe change the spacing just for that part
01:08:790 - [Slider] One more repeat note
01:11:711 - Add Circle
01:20:396 - Add Circle
01:20:711 - Add Circle
01:21:027 - Add Circle
01:21:343 - Add Circle
01:28:133 - [Slider] Remove them repeats and add cirles to replace
01:37:290 - [Stream] Clean that up abit, try change the spacing (Spacing x0.7?)


Great map and timming, try tidy it up a bit and good luck
Hika
1,553 posts
Joined February 2010
Hika
Hiiiiiii. c: Here goes your mod request~

Mebinsane!:
Suggestion: 00:28:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You should compress the stream, spaced streams are evil imo..
00:40:211 (5) - This slider sounds off, consider remapping it by changing the slider by making it shorter & adding a few notes after it.
Suggestion: 00:44:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks like an ugly cluster of notes, align them to make them look symmetrical or make a regular compressed stream.
Suggestion: 00:48:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should compress the stream.
01:09:659 (2) - New combo.
Suggestion: 01:14:396 (4) - ^
Suggestion: 01:15:659 (8) - ^
Suggestion: 01:17:238 (13) - ^
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Very very very messy, please fix this & a suggestion is to compress this as well.

Too insane for me, starred. Good luck. c:
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
Thank you :D
For The mods :D
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Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Incoming mod due to test play request in irc.

Folder:
resize your background to be 640 x 480. I believe the BG has to be 4/3 ratio.

General:
Set a timing preview point.

Note:
I could Nazi this but I'm gonna stick to the basics here. so its gonna be like a medium sized mod post here.

Mebinsane:
00:04:606 (1) - remove new combo here. it goes with the lyrics of the song if you do.
00:17:554 (7,8) - these are too close together considering the previous spacing.
00:18:817 (9) - center this at point (0,0)
00:28:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I still think this stream does not fit.
00:28:843 (10,1) - this 1/4th jump is a big fat no no. change this please.
00:29:396 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - considering the stream you just had, the stream and this 1/2 note spacing here looks the same and would confuse others for streams. change this up please?
00:34:448 (1,1) - remove the new combos on both of these.
00:35:396 (1,1) - remove the new combos on both of these too.
00:40:211 (5) - - this slider should not be like this


it should be more like this


00:44:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream starts on a 1/4th. also it does not fit. fix both of these please.
00:48:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream also does not fit.
00:52:685 (1) - this slider should be starting on the 1/2 (red tick), not the 1/4th tick (blue tick) on the timeline.
00:58:448 (6) - new combo here.
01:13:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this combo is a bit long, new combo it somewhere inbetween please.
01:23:554 (1,1) - I do not understand the spacing you used here. You should definitely try something else.
01:34:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - center via the y-axis please. it would look so much nicer.
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - No not another one. these overmapped streams do not fit mebinsss.

Right then. that post is a bit bigger than I thought.
Call me back for a recheck after 15 mods or so.
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

Zelos wrote:

Incoming mod due to test play request in irc.

Folder:
resize your background to be 640 x 480. I believe the BG has to be 4/3 ratio.

General:
Set a timing preview point.

Note:
I could Nazi this but I'm gonna stick to the basics here. so its gonna be like a medium sized mod post here.

Mebinsane:
00:04:606 (1) - remove new combo here. it goes with the lyrics of the song if you do.
00:17:554 (7,8) - these are too close together considering the previous spacing.
00:18:817 (9) - center this at point (0,0)
00:28:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I still think this stream does not fit.
00:28:843 (10,1) - this 1/4th jump is a big fat no no. change this please.
00:29:396 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - considering the stream you just had, the stream and this 1/2 note spacing here looks the same and would confuse others for streams. change this up please?
00:34:448 (1,1) - remove the new combos on both of these.
00:35:396 (1,1) - remove the new combos on both of these too.
00:40:211 (5) - - this slider should not be like this


it should be more like this


00:44:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream starts on a 1/4th. also it does not fit. fix both of these please.
00:48:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream also does not fit.
00:52:685 (1) - this slider should be starting on the 1/2 (red tick), not the 1/4th tick (blue tick) on the timeline.
00:58:448 (6) - new combo here.
01:13:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this combo is a bit long, new combo it somewhere inbetween please.
01:23:554 (1,1) - I do not understand the spacing you used here. You should definitely try something else.
01:34:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - center via the y-axis please. it would look so much nicer.
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - No not another one. these overmapped streams do not fit mebinsss.

Right then. that post is a bit bigger than I thought.
Call me back for a recheck after 15 mods or so.
Thank you for the mod :3 buttt im keeping the streams in
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Pfft.
You and your streams <.<

Your message is too short.Your message is too short.
ethox
osu! Alumni
357 posts
Joined August 2010
ethox
First serious effort on modding, so please don't bash me to the ground.

00:40:133 (5) - Slider ending seems odd to me, I'd make it look something like this:
SPOILER
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Ending the combo with this long break doesn't fit IMHO, since the vocalist is in the middle of a word (might be preference, but hey)
01:08:396 (1) - Is off, change it to 01:08:554

That's the best I can do, hope it helps.
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

ethox wrote:

First serious effort on modding, so please don't bash me to the ground.

00:40:133 (5) - Slider ending seems odd to me, I'd make it look something like this:
SPOILER
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Ending the combo with this long break doesn't fit IMHO, since the vocalist is in the middle of a word (might be preference, but hey)
01:08:396 (1) - Is off, change it to 01:08:554

That's the best I can do, hope it helps.
Thank you for your mod! and thanks for also trying hard^.^
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Already a re-check request.

Note to anyone looking at this besides mebins, mebins requested I nazi mod this for one reason or another.
I repeat, this was a nazi request.

General:
Had I know this was DDR before, I would've known your sourcing was wrong.
Source: Dance Dance Revolution 7thMIX
Title: Break Down! shoud be BREAK DOWN! click this if you want proof

This is the DDR authentic BG if you want it, may need some resizing though

Timing:
Your offset isnt wrong but its way the flip in the middle of no where. use 1448 as your offset.
(this must not have been an issue last time)

Please note any nazi I post is a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

Nazi time......
Mebinsane!:
00:08:238 (4,5) - considering your previous 1/2 spacing, these are too close. fix this.
00:09:027 (1,2,3) - same issue as above
00:10:764 (5,6) - this jump kinda makes no sense. nor does it really fit the moment.
00:11:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the half note spacing gets all kinds of inconsistent here. please make them consistent.
00:17:554 (7,8) - these are a 1/1 distance but you gave it the spacing of a 1/2 note. please make these farther apart.
00:20:711 (1) - remove new combo here.
00:21:659 (2) - place a new combo here.
00:23:238 (1) - remove new combo here too.
00:24:185 (2) - aaand place a new combo here.
00:24:817 (6,7) - this jump is huge and a bit un-necessary and un-fitting of the moment.
00:26:554 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the patterning is inconsistent here. please make consistent.
00:29:080 (6,1) - these notes are 1/1 distance but you gave it the spacing of a 1/2 note, please make further apart.
00:29:396 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - the random change in 1/2 note spacing is awkward and a bit unfitting.\
00:31:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make the square patterns parallel? you can do this by moving 1 2 3 4 up 1 grid point or 5 6 7 8 down 1 grid point .
00:34:764 (3,1) - another one of those un-fitting jumps. at least make them closer a little.
00:35:711 (3,1) - these are just way way to close together. please change this.
00:36:817 (5,1) - you gave this 1/1 objects the same spacing as your previous half notes, please make these 2 objects farther apart.
00:39:817 (4,5) - these are 1/1 apart yet you gave a distance spacing smaller than your half notes. please make these farther apart.
00:42:343 (1,2,3) - its hard to read that sliders 1 and 3 are in the exact same position when jumping. at least make them a little differently placed.
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream does not fit really. I suggest you change it.
00:47:711 (1,1) - please remove the 2 new combos here please. they serve no real purpose.
00:48:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream does not fit really. I suggest you change it.
00:54:027 (8,9) - another one of those un-fitting jumps here. it makes no sense as to why it was placed.
00:56:554 (4,5) - these notes are too close together givin there 1/1 timing distance.
01:00:975 (6,7) - another one of those un-fitting jumps here. it makes no sense as to why it was placed.
01:01:133 (7,8,9,10) - random half note spacing change. it does not make sense at all. please fix this.
01:05:238 (1,1) - another un-fitting jump. this one is huge. please make them a little close at least.
01:13:922 (3,1) - this jump is obnoxiously huge. please change this.
01:14:396 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3) - these random jumps do not fit at all what so ever. please do something else.
01:28:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - ^^^^
01:29:869 (4,1) - another one of those obnoxiously huge jumps.
01:34:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - center these via the y-axis please.
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - another un-fitting stream here. it does not fit the song.

Alrite my nazi-ing is over.
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
Crappy IRC(?) Mod
07:47 <Bobo> : hmm okies
07:48 <Bobo> : ok remove Dance Dance Revolution 7thMIX from the tags because it's in the source
07:49 <mebins> : okie
07:49 <Bobo> : bg's gotta be resized to 1024x768
07:49 <Bobo> : hmm what else
07:49 <Bobo> : in general
07:49 <Bobo> : hmm
07:49 <mebins> : the poot
07:50 <mebins> : i did that already >.>
07:50 <Bobo> : i gotta redownload then
07:50 <Bobo> : lol
07:50 <Bobo> : hmm
07:50 <Bobo> : this song doesnt sound right with the countdown, i'd turn the countdown off
07:51 <mebins> : oh right XD
07:51 <mebins> : okie what else :3
07:51 <Bobo> : AR 8 seems more fitting than AR 9
07:52 <Bobo> : overall difficulty 7?
07:52 <mebins> : noe keeping it on ar 9 
07:52 <mebins> : but ill poot it on od 7 XD
07:52 <Bobo> : lol
07:53 <Bobo> : the Timing Section isnt at the start of the song wtf ._.
07:53 <Bobo> : hmm
07:53 <mebins> : how can i fix that o.o
07:54 <Bobo> : i know
07:54 <Bobo> : go into timing
07:54 <Bobo> : timing panel set up
07:54 <mebins> : make the offset to 0?
07:54 <Bobo> : *timing set up panel
07:54 <Bobo> : nup
07:54 <Bobo> : change the offset to 3975
07:55 <mebins> : on the first section?
07:55 <Bobo> : there's only one timing section so yeah
07:56 <Bobo> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158496
07:56 <mebins> : ok fixed
07:56 <Bobo> : cool :D
07:56 <Bobo> : hmm
07:56 <Bobo> : you need a preview point
07:56 <Bobo> : wb :o
07:57 <mebins> : XD
07:57 <Bobo> : Alrighty
07:57 <Bobo> : go to 00:48:975
07:58 <Bobo> : 00:48:975 -
07:58 <Bobo> : click ^
07:58 <mebins> : lol
07:58 <mebins> : ok whats wrong with it
07:58 <Bobo> : this is where we're gonna set your preview point
07:58 <mebins> : *set
07:58 <Bobo> : go up to timing dropdown
07:58 <Bobo> : the one next to web
07:58 <mebins> : i set it already XD
07:59 <Bobo> : ah
07:59 <Bobo> : how about we set kiai time?
07:59 <mebins> : GASR
07:59 <Bobo> : oh?
07:59 <mebins> : lol o 
07:59 <mebins> : ok*
07:59 <mebins> : were at :P
08:00 <Bobo> : ok let's start kiai time at
08:00 <Bobo> : 00:49:448 -
08:00 <Bobo> : do you know how to do that?
08:00 <mebins> : yas "[
08:00 <Bobo> : and let's end it at
08:01 <Bobo> : 01:09:659
08:01 <Bobo> : 01:09:659 -
08:01 <mebins> : okie done
08:01 <Bobo> : cool
08:01 <Bobo> : NOW
08:01 <Bobo> : we can actually go through the map and look for errors \:D/
08:01 <mebins> : yay XD
08:02 <Bobo> : hmm
08:02 <Bobo> : your sliders are quite ugly in general, no offense ;x
08:02  *mebins crys
08:02 <Bobo> : D:
08:02 <Bobo> : sorrysorry ><
08:02 <mebins> : lol ok what should i fix
08:02 <mebins> : im joking XD
08:03 <Bobo> : 00:03:975 -
08:03 <Bobo> : using this one as an example
08:03 <mebins> : wats hould i make it
08:03 <Bobo> : hmm play arounf with the red slider point on the endpoint, turn it into this
08:04 <Bobo> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158498
08:04 <Bobo> : It's the same length and it looks better ;D
08:05 <mebins> : sec
08:05 <Bobo> : okies
08:06 <mebins> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158499
08:06 <Bobo> : ahh that's nice ;D
08:06 <mebins> : >;p
08:06 <mebins> : next?
08:07 <Bobo> : hmm set grid size to 4 because that can make distance snapping more accurate
08:07 <mebins> : ok
08:08 <Bobo> : hmm
08:08 <Bobo> : go into the timing panel again and lower the volume of the hitsounds to 80%
08:09 <mebins> : only on the first one ?
08:09 <Bobo> : all of them~
08:09 <mebins> : ok 
08:09 <mebins> : naow wat
08:10 <Bobo> : try and make a nice pattern with the clap and whistle hitsounds
08:10 <mebins> : ok
08:10 <Bobo> : you've only used the solid drum hitsound and it's quite an earsore
08:11 <Bobo> : 00:11:238 (1) - Stack with the start point of (2)
08:12 <Bobo> : 00:12:027 (4) - Not distance snapped.
08:12 <Bobo> : 00:14:869 (2) - ^
08:13 <mebins> : ok 
08:13 <mebins> : done
08:13 <Bobo> : mmm
08:15 <Bobo> : 00:23:238 (1) - Umm new combo
08:15 <mebins> : done
08:15 <Bobo> : and...
08:15 <Bobo> : copy dat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158502
08:16 <Bobo> : D:
08:16 <Bobo> : 00:24:975 (6) - New combo
08:17 <mebins> : how did u do that XD
08:17 <Bobo> : ok
08:18 <Bobo> : I moved the slider at 00:23:238 forward to the red tick
08:18 <Bobo> : then i removed the repeat
08:18 <Bobo> : made the slider end on the second white tick
08:18 <Bobo> : then added a note at 00:23:238
08:19 <Bobo> : and moved the combo around to make it look symmetrical
08:19 <Bobo> : im hard to follow i know ._.
08:19 <mebins> : one secd
08:19 <Bobo> : lol sure
08:20 <mebins> : what distance snap did u use o.o
08:20 <Bobo> : 1.3
08:22 <Bobo> : 00:26:396 (2) - move this a couple grids left so it's like in the middle of the little jump pattern 

you've made
08:22 <mebins> : XD
08:22 <mebins> : ur gowing too fasttt
08:22 <Bobo> : sorry ><
08:23 <Bobo> : this ur first map btw?
08:24 <mebins> :  noe >.>
08:24 <mebins> : 3rd
08:24 <mebins> : best one *
08:24 <Bobo> : ah nice ;D
08:24 <Bobo> : better than my 3rd map :3
08:24 <mebins> : first one trying really hard to rank tho
08:24 <Bobo> : ah
08:24 <mebins> : and would be first to rank
08:24 <Bobo> : link me after
08:25 <Bobo> : 00:29:396 (1) - Antijump
08:25 <Bobo> : 00:36:185 (1) - ^
08:25 <mebins> : i dont know what to change it to
08:25 <mebins> : >.<
08:26 <Bobo> : just distance snap it :D
08:26 <mebins> : it loooks bad
08:26 <Bobo> : hmm
08:26 <Bobo> : stack it with the endpoint of (3) then :D
08:27 <mebins> : ok 
08:28 <Bobo> : 00:37:132 (1) - Delete the new combo and move it somewhere else
08:28 <Bobo> : 00:40:132 (5) - not distance snapped
08:29 <mebins> : ok fixed
08:29 <Bobo> : 00:44:080 (1) - Delete new combo and give this another slider repeat
08:30 <Bobo> : 00:47:711 (1,1) - Delete new combo
08:30 <mebins> : or i can give 6 a repate >:
08:31 <Bobo> : yeah lol
08:31 <Bobo> : 00:55:290 - Add a 1/2 slider
08:32 <Bobo> : 00:57:027 (5) - Not distance snapped
08:33 <Bobo> : 01:00:185 (1) - Delete this note and give a new combo to (2)
08:34 <mebins> :  ok
08:34 <Bobo> : 01:05:711 (1) - Delete new combo
08:34 <Bobo> : 01:14:080 (3) - Not distance snapped
08:35 <mebins> : doen
08:35 <mebins> : next ?
08:35 <Bobo> : 01:18:817 (1) - Delete new combo
08:36 <Bobo> : 01:21:659 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make this all one comb
08:36 <Bobo> :  :$
08:37 <Bobo> : aaand that's about it :3
08:37 <Bobo> : nice map :D
08:37 <mebins> : woot
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
thx for the mod :#
Haya
580 posts
Joined August 2010
Haya
Done! Try it out :)

Download: Be For U - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [TheHaya's Hard!].osu
Haya
580 posts
Joined August 2010
Haya
Fixed :)

Download: Be For U - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [TheHaya's Hard!].osu
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
Thank you :D
Ijah_old
Ijah_old
Mod
--Mebinsane--
00:04:606 (2) - End this on red tick
00:08:869 (6) - Hard to find after the previous sliders, make more visible
00:10:448 (3) - ^
00:35:080 (1,2) - Make these straight, they look ugly
00:57:659 - Fill this section
01:19:764 (5) - Add note
01:39:817 (1) - Add finish hitsound

--TheHaya's Hard!--
00:20:396 (5,6,7) - these are too hidden making them unrankable
00:45:185 (7,8,9,10) - Unreadable for most hard level players, simplify it.
00:55:290 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:39:817 (5) - This ending is harder than Insane's ending and it contains a uniqe stream that will surprise most hard-level players.
Haya
580 posts
Joined August 2010
Haya
Should be okay now ~.~

Download: Be For U - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [TheHaya's Hard!].osu
deohome123
111 posts
Joined February 2011
deohome123
Long time. No see :)

A little Modding

(mebinsane)

00:03:975 ( 1 , 2 ) Delete it and make circle instead :)

00:12:185 ( 5 , 7 ) These Silder are hard to see

00:26:554 ( 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13 ) Very Dizzy note. Move these note to have a another pattern

01:39:343 ( 5 ) Hard to see :o


Only Little Moding :)

And...Please look at this diff. I'm dilgently make it :)
I'm want to be your guest diff. :D

Download: Be For U - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [Deeow's Break!].osu
deohome123
111 posts
Joined February 2011
deohome123
I"m Love This song so don't get it in grave
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

deohome123 wrote:

I"m Love This song so don't get it in grave
I CANT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT ;_: IM IN INDIA AND NO OSU SO I CANT UPDATE ;-;!
deohome123
111 posts
Joined February 2011
deohome123

mebins wrote:

deohome123 wrote:

I"m Love This song so don't get it in grave
I CANT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT ;_: IM IN INDIA AND NO OSU SO I CANT UPDATE ;-;!
Can't you download OSU!! ?. :(
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
I cant download osu on my dads computer :( its kinda lame :P but ill ungrave it after it goes to the graveyard XD i wont quit so dont worry :P
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
Hi~
sorry my poor English

[General]
Don`t Break Time?
it`s too hard :(


[TheHaya's Hard!]
00:14:080 (9) - Add NC
00:17:869 (5) - Put in x:392 y:88
00:20:553 (6,7,8) - looks little ugly
01:09:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put in the center
01:17:238 (9) - Add NC
01:35:869 (2,3) - Touch the HP bar

[Mebinsane!]
umm...approved map right?
if not,it`s too hard :(

00:13:448 (3) - Put in x:160 y:112
00:15:817 (1) - looks little ugly
00:36:501 (3) - Put in x:44 y:196
00:39:343 (1) - Put in x:120 y:136
00:39:501 (2) - Put in x:192 y:232
00:39:659 (3) - Put in x:312 y:232
00:39:817 (4) - Put in x:384 y:136
00:47:080 (3) - Put in x:412 y:172
00:53:396 (4) - Put in x:60 y:280
01:21:659 (1) - Put in x:72 y:328
01:22:290 (2) - Put in x:162 y:232
01:22:922 (3) - Put in x:256 y:336
01:23:554 (4) - Put in x:348 y:236
01:24:185 (5) - Put in x:432 y:336

Good luck~
Haya
580 posts
Joined August 2010
Haya

amnb9280 wrote:

[TheHaya's Hard!]
00:14:080 (9) - Add NC Done
00:17:869 (5) - Put in x:392 y:88 Fixed version is different
00:20:553 (6,7,8) - looks little ugly ?
01:09:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put in the center Done
01:17:238 (9) - Add NC Done
01:35:869 (2,3) - Touch the HP bar Done
- Fixed the Distance Snap due to request

Download: Be For U - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [TheHaya's Hard!].osu
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
ill update after i get back ;-;
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

Ijah wrote:

Mod
--Mebinsane--
00:04:606 (2) - End this on red tick nope :i
00:08:869 (6) - Hard to find after the previous sliders, make more visible okay
00:10:448 (3) - ^okay
00:35:080 (1,2) - Make these straight, they look uglyk;-;
00:57:659 - Fill this sectionk
01:19:764 (5) - Add note k
01:39:817 (1) - Add finish hitsound ok

--TheHaya's Hard!--
00:20:396 (5,6,7) - these are too hidden making them unrankable
00:45:185 (7,8,9,10) - Unreadable for most hard level players, simplify it.
00:55:290 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:39:817 (5) - This ending is harder than Insane's ending and it contains a uniqe stream that will surprise most hard-level players.
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

deohome123 wrote:

Long time. No see :)

A little Modding

(mebinsane)

00:03:975 ( 1 , 2 ) Delete it and make circle instead :) makes it look bad :i

00:12:185 ( 5 , 7 ) These Silder are hard to seenope >..<

00:26:554 ( 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13 ) Very Dizzy note. Move these note to have a another pattern i think that looks nice :i

01:39:343 ( 5 ) Hard to see :o your right :) thanks !


Only Little Moding :)

And...Please look at this diff. I'm dilgently make it :)
I'm want to be your guest diff. :D
Zapy
148 posts
Joined February 2010
Zapy
Okay, request from my queue

Well I might start off by being a nazi so... 01:19:942 and 01:24:683 timing points aren't snapped. Might want to snap them though that's not something critical

Mebinsane

00:03:896 (1) - Move it to start at the big white tick and make it one tick longer as well
00:04:606 (2) - One tick longer
00:08:554 (5) - This looks ugly under the (3), consider moving it.
00:08:869 (6) - Might want to move this somewhere else too
00:09:027 (1,2) - More distance between these two
00:09:817 (3) - Move this so that it starts from the end of 00:09:027 (1) -
00:11:238 (1,2) - Move so that the end of the slider goes under the 00:10:922 (6) - ? Like this http://puu.sh/eAKk
00:12:185 (5) - Ctrl+r? The flow seems better like that
00:12:659 (7) - ^
00:15:817 (1) - Remove new combo
00:16:606 (2) - New combo
00:17:238 (5) - New combo
00:17:869 (8) - New combo
00:24:817 (5) - New combo?
00:24:817 (5,6) - This jump is pretty surprising unless you're paying hell of a much of attention while you play
00:26:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps rotate horizontally? Gives more distance to the slider before
00:30:975 (4) - Use reverse arrow for this slider
00:32:711 (1) - Ctrl+r this and move the upcoming notes to more distance?
00:35:080 (4) - Remove new combo.. It seems a bit confusing
00:36:817 (5) - Use now combo for this?
00:40:133 (1) - Move to further distance or just ctrl+r it
00:44:238 (1) - Move this to the upcoming white tick and remove one reverse arrow. After you've done that, remove 00:44:869 (2) - and put a note on the center at 00:44:238 (7) - It plays much better
00:45:659 (9) - Move this next to the stream and put new combo
00:45:975 - Add a note?
00:48:896 (7,8) - Remove these two notes - they don't fit to music
00:49:448 (2) - Move it in the middle of the sliders http://puu.sh/eAQT
00:49:606 (3) - New combo perhaps
00:55:606 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:554 (5) - Add a reverse arrow perhaps?
00:57:027 (6) - New combo
00:59:711 (5) - ^
01:00:975 (5) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - This slider seems a bit awkward.. You could move it next to the 01:01:922 (9) to avoid that gap of nothingness - Put something like reverse slider here after 01:04:606
01:07:133 (9) - New combo?
01:16:290 (2) - Move this to the same place as 01:15:343 (4) - Or you could remap that part to be completely symmetrical. That would look better too
01:24:185 (5) - New combo
01:24:501 put a slider here that ends at 01:24:817
01:33:975 (5,1) - I'd make this slowdown to start at 01:34:922 (3) -->.
Put a note here 01:39:817 and make the spinner start at 01:39:896 - (blue tick) Correct the spinner's end tick after that.

That's it. It might be a little hard to read because of the wall of text.

Hope I was of help. The map has potential and the song is nice.
Good luck!
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
THANK YOU :D!

Zapy wrote:

Okay, request from my queue

Well I might start off by being a nazi so... 01:19:942 and 01:24:683 timing points aren't snapped. Might want to snap them though that's not something critical

Mebinsane

00:03:896 (1) - Move it to start at the big white tick and make it one tick longer as well
00:04:606 (2) - One tick longer
00:08:554 (5) - This looks ugly under the (3), consider moving it.
00:08:869 (6) - Might want to move this somewhere else too
00:09:027 (1,2) - More distance between these two
00:09:817 (3) - Move this so that it starts from the end of 00:09:027 (1) -
00:11:238 (1,2) - Move so that the end of the slider goes under the 00:10:922 (6) - ? Like this http://puu.sh/eAKk
00:12:185 (5) - Ctrl+r? The flow seems better like that
00:12:659 (7) - ^
00:15:817 (1) - Remove new combo
00:16:606 (2) - New combo
00:17:238 (5) - New combo
00:17:869 (8) - New combo
00:24:817 (5) - New combo?
00:24:817 (5,6) - This jump is pretty surprising unless you're paying hell of a much of attention while you play
00:26:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps rotate horizontally? Gives more distance to the slider before
00:30:975 (4) - Use reverse arrow for this slider
00:32:711 (1) - Ctrl+r this and move the upcoming notes to more distance?
00:35:080 (4) - Remove new combo.. It seems a bit confusing
00:36:817 (5) - Use now combo for this?
00:40:133 (1) - Move to further distance or just ctrl+r it
00:44:238 (1) - Move this to the upcoming white tick and remove one reverse arrow. After you've done that, remove 00:44:869 (2) - and put a note on the center at 00:44:238 (7) - It plays much better
00:45:659 (9) - Move this next to the stream and put new combo
00:45:975 - Add a note?
00:48:896 (7,8) - Remove these two notes - they don't fit to music
00:49:448 (2) - Move it in the middle of the sliders http://puu.sh/eAQT
00:49:606 (3) - New combo perhaps
00:55:606 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:554 (5) - Add a reverse arrow perhaps?
00:57:027 (6) - New combo
00:59:711 (5) - ^
01:00:975 (5) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - This slider seems a bit awkward.. You could move it next to the 01:01:922 (9) to avoid that gap of nothingness - Put something like reverse slider here after 01:04:606
01:07:133 (9) - New combo?
01:16:290 (2) - Move this to the same place as 01:15:343 (4) - Or you could remap that part to be completely symmetrical. That would look better too
01:24:185 (5) - New combo
01:24:501 put a slider here that ends at 01:24:817
01:33:975 (5,1) - I'd make this slowdown to start at 01:34:922 (3) -->.
Put a note here 01:39:817 and make the spinner start at 01:39:896 - (blue tick) Correct the spinner's end tick after that.

That's it. It might be a little hard to read because of the wall of text.

Hope I was of help. The map has potential and the song is nice.
Good luck!
Lucy-Kaede
435 posts
Joined April 2011
Lucy-Kaede
Hey! Doing m4m as per viewtopic.php?f=60&t=74406

General

mebins wrote:

Changed to pending 11/17/11
Is this suppose to be on pending, is this for ranking or approval?
For approval, fine.
For ranking, you need 2 difficulties in order to move the beatmap to pending ;)
If you've more than 2 difficulties, only one is showing up on the website, and only one gets downloaded try doing a full reupload ^^

Mebinsane
00:30:185 (1) - RNC (Remove new combo)
00:31:764 (1) - NC (New combo)
00:32:711 (1) - RNC
00:38:238 (1) - Extend the end or the spinner to end at 00:39:185.
00:51:343 (3) - End repeats at 00:51:659 (3).
00:51:817 (4) - Make a long slider starting here, and ending here 00:52:290.
OR; if you prefer, end it here 00:52:606. But using the first time, you still get the break effect you had before.

00:54:501 (10) - Start a slider, ending 00:54:817. Similar to the one above.

01:03:501 (1) - NC
01:05:711 (1) - NC
01:08:554 (1) - Change this slider to be a symmetrical U-like shape. similar to at 00:59:396 (4), but have it facing up like it already is :)
similar to this
01:24:501 (2) - Try for symmetry on this one too. It will look alot nicer.
01:36:185 (1) - NC

Combos need some work, and it would be nicer for some of the sliders to show symmetry (I pointed out the main two)

A note about the staring system:
Your map is 18+ stars :) (Good ^_^)
Except, I look and see, only two people think your map is "star worth". I would refrain from giving this map anymore stars yourself.
It's fine to give yourself stars, but when 80% of the stars come from the owner, people dont like it xD

I also dislike sliders such as 00:55:922 (3), and 00:11:711 (3) for example, but this is personal preference and should not put you off. I just think they look awkward ._.

However, I do really like the difficulty name, it fits, and is witty meshing in with your name :D
I also liked the large circles made up of hit circles such as at: 00:21:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11).
And the well placed stream ;) 00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).

Overall, it's pretty good, just some parts that need improvement ^^
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
heey ^_^ m4m per your queue
sorry if something is the same as the mod Lucy-Kaede :3
also sorry for my bad english

General
  1. why u dont add combocolours? :( standard isnt pretty for here
    try this way or something similar?
    [Colours]
    Combo1: 16,82,170
    Combo2: 145,238,132
    Combo3: 93,159,199
    add this in notepad (file => open .osu in notepad) under [TimingPoints]
  2. also, if is going for ranked (not for approval), pm me and i can help you with easy diff ;)
Mebinsane!
00:14:080 (1) - awww these repeats >< change this on two sliders
00:17:238 (4) - add NC here adn remove this on the next one
00:17:869 (1) - these repeats ><
00:20:396 (9) - NC here
00:20:711 (11) - repeats ><
00:22:922 (9) - NC here
00:25:448 (3) - repeats ><
00:26:238 (1) - RNC
00:26:711 (4) - NC here
00:40:132 (1) - RNC and NC on the next one
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - *nazi* maybe this more pretty?
spacing - 0,7
00:52:764 ~ 00:54:501 - sorry but i dont like this part >< my suggestion
spacing - 1,0






400,264,52764,6,0,B|384:312|336:320,1,89.9999952316285
316,232,53080,1,0
256,164,53238,1,0
196,232,53396,1,0
116,272,53554,1,0
120,184,53711,2,0,B|104:136,2,44.9999976158143
116,272,54027,1,0
165,335,54185,2,0,B|207:373|259:341|259:341|304:373|367:328,2,179.999990463257
220,260,54975,2,0,B|208:276|208:276|176:252|136:264,1,89.9999952316285
01:04:448 (13,14) - so ugly slider >< (13) maybe this?


01:21:652 (1) - RNC and NC to the next one
01:24:185 (1) - RNC
01:24:975 (3) - NC
01:38:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *nazi* maybe like this?
spacing - 1,1

first, i dont like more than 1 repeat on slider, and pointed out to you for only a few (not all) issues :3
second, im so nazi and dont like your antisymmetry :o
but, im very like your style at mapping and this song >w<
GL :)
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
:lol:

BCI wrote:

heey ^_^ m4m per your queue
sorry if something is the same as the mod Lucy-Kaede :3
also sorry for my bad english

General
  1. why u dont add combocolours? :( standard isnt pretty for here
    try this way or something similar?
    [Colours]
    Combo1: 16,82,170
    Combo2: 145,238,132
    Combo3: 93,159,199
    add this in notepad (file => open .osu in notepad) under [TimingPoints]
  2. also, if is going for ranked (not for approval), pm me and i can help you with easy diff ;)
Mebinsane!
00:14:080 (1) - awww these repeats >< change this on two sliders
00:17:238 (4) - add NC here adn remove this on the next one
00:17:869 (1) - these repeats ><
00:20:396 (9) - NC here
00:20:711 (11) - repeats ><
00:22:922 (9) - NC here
00:25:448 (3) - repeats ><
00:26:238 (1) - RNC
00:26:711 (4) - NC here
00:40:132 (1) - RNC and NC on the next one
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - *nazi* maybe this more pretty?
spacing - 0,7
00:52:764 ~ 00:54:501 - sorry but i dont like this part >< my suggestion
spacing - 1,0






400,264,52764,6,0,B|384:312|336:320,1,89.9999952316285
316,232,53080,1,0
256,164,53238,1,0
196,232,53396,1,0
116,272,53554,1,0
120,184,53711,2,0,B|104:136,2,44.9999976158143
116,272,54027,1,0
165,335,54185,2,0,B|207:373|259:341|259:341|304:373|367:328,2,179.999990463257
220,260,54975,2,0,B|208:276|208:276|176:252|136:264,1,89.9999952316285
01:04:448 (13,14) - so ugly slider >< (13) maybe this?


01:21:652 (1) - RNC and NC to the next one
01:24:185 (1) - RNC
01:24:975 (3) - NC
01:38:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *nazi* maybe like this?
spacing - 1,1

first, i dont like more than 1 repeat on slider, and pointed out to you for only a few (not all) issues :3
second, im so nazi and dont like your antisymmetry :o
but, im very like your style at mapping and this song >w<
GL :)
Thank you! and please dont kill me ;-; IM MODDING ONE OF YOUR MAPS RIGHT NOW
Ruisu-kun_old
341 posts
Joined June 2010
Ruisu-kun_old
Hi hi! DDR Map <3!!!

Have you thought about putting another difficulty? And I don't see why this goes for approval ._.

First, there are very weird sliders. Second, there are weird non-symmetric patterns.

00:17:869 (1) - This don't go with the music, the first slider should go in 00:18:027 and add a repeat.
00:18:343 (1) - If you did ^, delete this slider and put a hit circle 00:18:871.
00:29:238 - You must put a hitcircle here with finish sound.
00:38:238 (1) - Weird spinner, this should'nt be here.
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Unnecessary and non-symmetric stream.
00:48:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream.
00:51:975 - And this space? Put a slider from here to 00:52:290.
00:52:606 - Add a hitcircle (New combo).
00:54:501 - And this space? Put a slider from here to 00:54:817.
01:18:501 - Here should be a stream till 01:19:764.
01:39:817 (6) - Slider should start here.

Well this my poor mod, luck with you map and sorry, my english is bad :c
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
General:

00:06:501 NC
00:10:132 Remove NC
00:10:290 NC
00:11:238 Remove NC
00:11:711 NC
00:12:975 NC
00:14:080 NC
00:14:238 Remove NC
00:14:553 ^
00:14:869 Remove NC
00:15:343 NC
00:15:817 I think this should finish in 00:16:450
00:18:180 snap to 00:17:869
00:22:922 NC
00:24:975 Remove NC
00:25:448 NC
00:26:238 Remove NC
00:26:711 NC
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove 2,4,6,8
00:48:580 remove
00:48:738 remove
01:09:659 remove it and add a spiner just suggestion
01:18:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - same here never place on blue ticks
01:39:738 spinner should finish here 01:41:237 never finish sliders or spinners on blue tick


Approach rate to 8

think you need change combo colours ¨combo 2¨ and ¨combo 3¨ are the same

check this:

SPOILER

SPOILER
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna
[quote="Natsu"]General:

00:06:501 NC Changed
00:10:132 Remove NC Changed
00:10:290 NC Changed
00:11:238 Remove NC Changed
00:11:711 NC Changed
00:12:975 NC Changed
00:14:080 NC Changed
00:14:238 Remove NC Changed
00:14:553 ^ Changed
00:14:869 Remove NC Changed
00:15:343 NC Changed
00:15:817 I think this should finish in 00:16:450
00:18:180 snap to 00:17:869
00:22:922 NC Changed
00:24:975 Remove NC Changed
00:25:448 NC Changed
00:26:238 Remove NC Changed
00:26:711 NC Changed
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove 2,4,6,8 I wanted the stream to be like this :P
00:48:580 remove Changed
00:48:738 remove Changed
01:09:659 remove it and add a spiner just suggestion Kept it there
01:18:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - same here never place on blue ticks Changed
01:39:738 spinner should finish here 01:41:237 never finish sliders or spinners on blue tick Changed


Approach rate to 8 Keeping it 9 :P

think you need change combo colours ¨combo 2¨ and ¨combo 3¨ are the same Changed

Thank you!
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

Ruisu-kun wrote:

Hi hi! DDR Map <3!!!

Have you thought about putting another difficulty? And I don't see why this goes for approval ._.

First, there are very weird sliders. Second, there are weird non-symmetric patterns.

00:17:869 (1) - This don't go with the music, the first slider should go in 00:18:027 and add a repeat.
00:18:343 (1) - If you did ^, delete this slider and put a hit circle 00:18:871.
00:29:238 - You must put a hitcircle here with finish sound.
00:38:238 (1) - Weird spinner, this should'nt be here.
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Unnecessary and non-symmetric stream.
00:48:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream.
00:51:975 - And this space? Put a slider from here to 00:52:290.
00:52:606 - Add a hitcircle (New combo).
00:54:501 - And this space? Put a slider from here to 00:54:817.
01:18:501 - Here should be a stream till 01:19:764.
01:39:817 (6) - Slider should start here.

Well this my poor mod, luck with you map and sorry, my english is bad :c
Thank you :D!
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
Well Hi XD M$M with yaa XD
>>>>>>>>^>>>>>>>>> LOL i did it intentionaly X3

[General]
- Delete "BeForU - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [Mebinsane!2]" in your song folder :D Cause u didn't map it XD so delete it X3
- There are Unsnap timing point :o Kiai times 00:49:424 untill 01:09:624 and others :D resnap them X3

[Insane]
00:05:237 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't this looks better? OAO http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/542642
if you do change ^ , then re- place this 00:06:499 (1,2,3,4) . Try not to place them looks stacked with ^. because it'll looks untidy ;A;
00:07:446 (1) - dont curve it too much. Make it looks symetrical with 2 http://puu.sh/1FrR7
00:08:078 (3) - http://puu.sh/1FrTM like this? OAO
00:09:024 (1) - second slider point , 2 grid up 3 grid to the right
00:09:340 (2,3) - copy paste from ^ to make it looks symetrical
00:10:445 (2) - x:104 y:216 00:10:760 (4) - x:280 y:48 <----------- so will looks Half Hexagon
00:10:918 (5) - I prefer this to be ctrl+> ctrl+G and re replace
00:11:707 (1) - should look like this http://puu.sh/1Fs0f . better i think O.O
00:12:181 (3,1) - ^
01:01:102 (2,4,5) - ^
00:14:548 (3,4) - too much jump OAO
00:14:864 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I believe you can shape this more beautiful ;A;
00:17:862 (1,2) - Jumps? i think no.. its not fit ;-; just make it all circles
00:18:809 (3,1) - could be anti-jump or stack it XD
00:19:913 (6,7,8) - polygonal shape ? OwO http://puu.sh/1Fsbx or 00:20:229 (8,1) - make this into slider
00:20:703 (3) - change this into 1 long slider OAO
00:24:806 (5,6) - this one also.. don't make this as jumps too ;A;
00:26:226 (2) - x:232 y:216
00:26:542 (4) - x:392 y:148 (stacked under (1))
00:28:120 (10,1) - too far ;A; so, 00:28:277 (1,2) - swap these position
00:30:171 (6,7,8,9) - i like this o3o do more pattern like this please X3
00:32:696 (1) - turn into http://puu.sh/1Fshw ?
00:35:063 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1Fsl1 like this?
00:37:115 (6) - try not to make slider too much reverse like this.. try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1Fsne XD
00:37:115 (6) - just make this linear ;A;
00:39:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:40:113 (1) place this in the middle
00:40:113 (1,2) - dont jump this please ;A;
00:40:587 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make another pattern o.o like http://puu.sh/1Fsu8 ~ http://puu.sh/1Fsuq
00:42:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - like this? http://puu.sh/1Fsxe
00:45:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - constant spacing please o3o
00:46:584 (5) - just stack this under (2)
00:46:741 (1) - delete this.. too much 1/2 beat ;A;
00:46:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks not tidy enough ;A; don't stack things like that ;A; just place them into patterns.. like circles , flowers or stars ;A;
00:49:109 - add note here and stack it with (4) . so there will be a jump between (5,1)
00:50:923 - add circle here, or change them into 1/4 slider reverse
00:52:580 (1) - delete this.. too much 1/2 beat
00:56:999 (1) - turn this into 1 long slider
00:58:420 (1,2,3) - delete this and 00:58:577 - add circle ; 00:58:893 - add circle ; 00:59:209 - add circle
01:00:155 (4,1) - don't jump this.. ;A; its awkward ;-;
01:04:416 - add note here and move the slider 01:04:574 - and i think this looks good http://puu.sh/1FsMm
01:07:099 (14,1,2) - turn this into 1 slider
01:07:730 (16) - end it 01:08:204
01:08:519 (1) - turn this into 2 sliders or 4 circles
01:09:624 (2) - turn this into 2 circles ;A;
01:16:568 (2,3,4,5) - spacing between this is fine but, 01:17:199 (4,5,6,7) - why there is a gap between 4,5,6,7 ?
01:19:014 (4) - move to 01:18:935 -
01:19:724 - add circle and add finish
01:20:434 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - move the rhythm(in timeline) one time to left O_O
01:20:355 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2) - how bout deleting this.. i mean.. add here a break ;A;
01:39:687 (1) - delete this
01:39:766 - add circle here and add spinner 01:39:924 end it 01:40:871
01:41:029 - add 1/4 slider with 1 reverse

OKAY DONE!! XDDDD
If you want codes, please tell me o_o

EDIT 1 : Here are My diff XD normal diff X3
http://puu.sh/1Fyui

Good Luck!! XD
U better get this ranked because you shoot so many star at it o3o it will be a waste if its not ranked XD
SeeU_old
138 posts
Joined May 2011
SeeU_old
m4m

Mebinsane

First you always don't have to use the distance snap at insane :D

00:16:599 (1,2,3) , 00:17:231 (1,2,3) These circles are unsymmetrical .. please make more symmetrical
00:19:282 (2) , 00:19:756 (5) ^
00:20:229 (8) move to x - 396 y -136
00:20:703 (3) finish to 00:21:334
00:22:123 (4) the cicle's "y" coordinate equal as 00:22:044 (3)
00:22:281 (5) ^ as 00:21:807 (2)
00:24:648 (4) ^ as 00:24:174 (1)
00:26:068 add circle or 00:25:437 (1) finish at
00:30:645 (7,8) These cicles' location need to change Unless it seems to be stream. for instance http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544022
00:31:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) These cicles need to balanced position
00:36:168 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:38:377 (2) move to x - 208 y - 52
00:38:772 (4) ^ to x - 268 y - 296
00:44:374 (1) finish to 00:44:690
01:06:152 (7) New combo and next
01:06:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) more more balanced
01:09:624 (2) remove this slider and add cicle at same position for natural play
01:22:249 (1) move to x - 256 y - 208
01:24:143 (1) replace that close to 01:24:458 (2)
01:20:140 ~ I like this part :)

I can't english very well :o
Symmetrical and balanced position is soooo important
If you fix these points , your beatmap will be more fantastic

Good Luck and shoted a star :)
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

SeeU wrote:

m4m

Mebinsane

First you always don't have to use the distance snap at insane :D

00:16:599 (1,2,3) , 00:17:231 (1,2,3) These circles are unsymmetrical .. please make more symmetrical
00:19:282 (2) , 00:19:756 (5) ^
00:20:229 (8) move to x - 396 y -136
00:20:703 (3) finish to 00:21:334
00:22:123 (4) the cicle's "y" coordinate equal as 00:22:044 (3)
00:22:281 (5) ^ as 00:21:807 (2)
00:24:648 (4) ^ as 00:24:174 (1)
00:26:068 add circle or 00:25:437 (1) finish at
00:30:645 (7,8) These cicles' location need to change Unless it seems to be stream. for instance http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544022
00:31:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) These cicles need to balanced position
00:36:168 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:38:377 (2) move to x - 208 y - 52
00:38:772 (4) ^ to x - 268 y - 296
00:44:374 (1) finish to 00:44:690
01:06:152 (7) New combo and next
01:06:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) more more balanced
01:09:624 (2) remove this slider and add cicle at same position for natural play
01:22:249 (1) move to x - 256 y - 208
01:24:143 (1) replace that close to 01:24:458 (2)
01:20:140 ~ I like this part :)

I can't english very well :o
Symmetrical and balanced position is soooo important
If you fix these points , your beatmap will be more fantastic

Good Luck and shoted a star :)
Thank you very much :D!
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

Teru21 wrote:

Well Hi XD M$M with yaa XD
>>>>>>>>^>>>>>>>>> LOL i did it intentionaly X3

[General]
- Delete "BeForU - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [Mebinsane!2]" in your song folder :D Cause u didn't map it XD so delete it X3
- There are Unsnap timing point :o Kiai times 00:49:424 untill 01:09:624 and others :D resnap them X3

[Insane]
00:05:237 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't this looks better? OAO http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/542642
if you do change ^ , then re- place this 00:06:499 (1,2,3,4) . Try not to place them looks stacked with ^. because it'll looks untidy ;A;
00:07:446 (1) - dont curve it too much. Make it looks symetrical with 2 http://puu.sh/1FrR7
00:08:078 (3) - http://puu.sh/1FrTM like this? OAO
00:09:024 (1) - second slider point , 2 grid up 3 grid to the right
00:09:340 (2,3) - copy paste from ^ to make it looks symetrical
00:10:445 (2) - x:104 y:216 00:10:760 (4) - x:280 y:48 <----------- so will looks Half Hexagon
00:10:918 (5) - I prefer this to be ctrl+> ctrl+G and re replace
00:11:707 (1) - should look like this http://puu.sh/1Fs0f . better i think O.O
00:12:181 (3,1) - ^
01:01:102 (2,4,5) - ^
00:14:548 (3,4) - too much jump OAO
00:14:864 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I believe you can shape this more beautiful ;A;
00:17:862 (1,2) - Jumps? i think no.. its not fit ;-; just make it all circles
00:18:809 (3,1) - could be anti-jump or stack it XD
00:19:913 (6,7,8) - polygonal shape ? OwO http://puu.sh/1Fsbx or 00:20:229 (8,1) - make this into slider
00:20:703 (3) - change this into 1 long slider OAO
00:24:806 (5,6) - this one also.. don't make this as jumps too ;A;
00:26:226 (2) - x:232 y:216
00:26:542 (4) - x:392 y:148 (stacked under (1))
00:28:120 (10,1) - too far ;A; so, 00:28:277 (1,2) - swap these position
00:30:171 (6,7,8,9) - i like this o3o do more pattern like this please X3
00:32:696 (1) - turn into http://puu.sh/1Fshw ?
00:35:063 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1Fsl1 like this?
00:37:115 (6) - try not to make slider too much reverse like this.. try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1Fsne XD
00:37:115 (6) - just make this linear ;A;
00:39:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:40:113 (1) place this in the middle
00:40:113 (1,2) - dont jump this please ;A;
00:40:587 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make another pattern o.o like http://puu.sh/1Fsu8 ~ http://puu.sh/1Fsuq
00:42:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - like this? http://puu.sh/1Fsxe
00:45:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - constant spacing please o3o
00:46:584 (5) - just stack this under (2)
00:46:741 (1) - delete this.. too much 1/2 beat ;A;
00:46:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks not tidy enough ;A; don't stack things like that ;A; just place them into patterns.. like circles , flowers or stars ;A;
00:49:109 - add note here and stack it with (4) . so there will be a jump between (5,1)
00:50:923 - add circle here, or change them into 1/4 slider reverse
00:52:580 (1) - delete this.. too much 1/2 beat
00:56:999 (1) - turn this into 1 long slider
00:58:420 (1,2,3) - delete this and 00:58:577 - add circle ; 00:58:893 - add circle ; 00:59:209 - add circle
01:00:155 (4,1) - don't jump this.. ;A; its awkward ;-;
01:04:416 - add note here and move the slider 01:04:574 - and i think this looks good http://puu.sh/1FsMm
01:07:099 (14,1,2) - turn this into 1 slider
01:07:730 (16) - end it 01:08:204
01:08:519 (1) - turn this into 2 sliders or 4 circles
01:09:624 (2) - turn this into 2 circles ;A;
01:16:568 (2,3,4,5) - spacing between this is fine but, 01:17:199 (4,5,6,7) - why there is a gap between 4,5,6,7 ?
01:19:014 (4) - move to 01:18:935 -
01:19:724 - add circle and add finish
01:20:434 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - move the rhythm(in timeline) one time to left O_O
01:20:355 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2) - how bout deleting this.. i mean.. add here a break ;A;
01:39:687 (1) - delete this
01:39:766 - add circle here and add spinner 01:39:924 end it 01:40:871
01:41:029 - add 1/4 slider with 1 reverse

OKAY DONE!! XDDDD
If you want codes, please tell me o_o

EDIT 1 : Here are My diff XD normal diff X3
http://puu.sh/1Fyui

Good Luck!! XD
U better get this ranked because you shoot so many star at it o3o it will be a waste if its not ranked XD
Thank you !!
TMAstraf
100 posts
Joined February 2010
TMAstraf
Well... I have nothing to complain about. =)
CrestRising
163 posts
Joined October 2012
CrestRising
Hello, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[General:]

  • * You need a consistent stream of difficutlies (EX: Easy-Normal-Hard instead of Easy-Hard) so you'll need a Hard difficulty.
[Teru's Normal:]

  • 00:55:737 (1) Imo, it would be better if you made this look like 00:54:474 (3) in terms of the rhythm
    01:33:612 (1,2) You could delete 2 and add two repeats on 1 to match up with 01:29:824 (1,2,3)
    00:59:840 (1) I think just a circle on the endpoint would do fine.
[Mebinsane!:]

  • * 00:19:913 (6,7,8) Imo, it'll look better if you continue the pattern from 00:19:124 (1,2,3,4,5)
    00:36:799 (5) This is not correctly distance spaced.
    01:07:099 This feels missing without a circle imo.
    01:37:083 (2) This is not correctly distance spaced.
Good luck with mapping. :)
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
m4m here~
DDR :)

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Planning to throw a Hard in there? cause i think Normal-Insane mapsets are unrankable from reading the ranking criteria...if you really dont want to make a hard then change "Mebinsane!" into some sort of "Hard" title to do it the cheap way (assuming Mebinsane is not extremely insane)
add audio leadin of 500 on Mebinsane! and close letter box

[Teru's Normal]
00:06:499 - drag the break to start here
00:43:743 (3) - if ur following vocals, then place this at 00:43:585 instead
00:44:374 (1) - add finish on slider head to be consistent with 00:39:324 (1)
00:53:212 (1) - center this?
01:09:624 (1) - center?
01:29:193 (3,4) - shift these 1 grid down and 2 grids right for better square

[Mebinsane!]
looks like ur gonna need a Hard to fill the difficulty gap... i can barely pass this given my gameplay skills orz
00:11:392 (7) - finish on slider tail
00:16:915 (3) - move this more down so the whole 00:16:599 (1,2,3) are equal distance away
00:19:598 (4,5) - reverse selection seems more intuitive
00:21:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this is like...hell for mouse players lol. i would recommend you to remake this section so the player doesnt have to move around the whole screen to hit, but its up to you
00:26:226 (2) - bad overlap, move to somewhere else
SPOILER
00:32:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this, looks better
SPOILER
00:36:799 (5) - i would stack this under 00:36:168 (1)
00:45:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is really random...i would remove it and put the usual jump notes, but again its up to you
00:56:999 (6) - NC, and the slider end should snap at 00:57:473
01:07:257 (1) - move this to 01:07:099 and adjust spacing accordingly
01:09:624 (2) - finish?
01:19:014 (4) - snap to 01:18:935
01:21:618 (1) - 1 grid left to perfectly overlap 01:20:671 (2)
01:19:724 - add a note and use soft finish to emphasis the vocals
01:21:618 (1) - take NC off
01:33:769 (4) - put this whistle on the end of 01:33:454 (3) or 01:33:927 (5) sounds better
01:34:243 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the setup should look like this, right now the spacing on the left side is kinda messy:
SPOILER

Pretty good mapset, but i would say a Hard is necessary to complete the diff spread and insane needs some tweaking so its more passable ><
Good luck ^_^
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Zejky
well well well
I think the map is having problems about bpm
if is me, i will
[Gerenal]
Put BPM is : 190 ( or 190.02 )
1448 is offset i will put ( it still is your laport offset
BG i will put is 800x600
AR of difculty Mebinsane! is 9, you should put is 8, ( AR very fast )

mebins wrote:

100% Teru's normal!
who he is, why you no write name he in TAG
normal very hard hard :D i can't play, it very hard
-----------------------------------------------------------------
that all current
if you do it, please fixed all note or do itgain o.O
I think you should find 1 MAT help
i can make hard diff if you fix bpm, i will don't make it if you no fix, because i doubt its accuracy
Last edited by Zejky , edited 1 time in total.
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

CrestRising wrote:

Hello, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[Teru's Normal:]

  • 00:55:737 (1) Imo, it would be better if you made this look like 00:54:474 (3) in terms of the rhythm okay XD
    01:33:612 (1,2) You could delete 2 and add two repeats on 1 to match up with 01:29:824 (1,2,3) Nope Dx its a pattern
    00:59:840 (1) I think just a circle on the endpoint would do fine. Nope o_o too blank ;A;
Thanks


jonathanlfj wrote:

m4m here~
DDR :)
[Teru's Normal]
00:06:499 - drag the break to start here lol okay XD
00:43:743 (3) - if ur following vocals, then place this at 00:43:585 instead I'm afraid its too hard for beginner, lemme just add reverse kay? XD
00:44:374 (1) - add finish on slider head to be consistent with 00:39:324 (1) woops XD fix :D
00:53:212 (1) - center this? nope D:
01:09:624 (1) - center? center? its already in the center o.o
01:29:193 (3,4) - shift these 1 grid down and 2 grids right for better square lol XD fix :)
Thanks XD nice mod

http://puu.sh/1GiPS
Ushiro T
240 posts
Joined October 2010
Ushiro T
General

i think distance snap x1.40 is too far spacing in the NORMAL :D

how about add notes 00:06:499 (1) - ~ 00:16:599 (1) - ? and insert spin 00:14:074 (1) - ~ 00:16:284 (1) - this is just my opinion.. if you dont like it , ignore this

Teru's Normal

00:22:912 (3) - how about replace same slider 00:20:387 (3) -

00:34:906 (2,3,4) - ^ with 00:34:274 (1) - that will be looking batter.

01:39:766 (1) - start at 01:39:845 (1) -



Mebinsane

00:08:867 (6) - delete and replace 00:08:551 (5) - reverse. it looks batter

00:11:392 (7) - it must be showed its finish point.

00:15:337 (1) - equate same spacing with prev.

00:15:810 (4) - reduce one reverse and add circle.

00:17:862 (1) - ^

00:20:703 (3) - ^ but two reverse and two circles

00:24:963 (1) - NC and remove NC at 00:25:437 (3) -

00:25:437 (3) - same with 00:20:703 (3) -

00:32:696 (1) - ^

00:37:115 (6) - ^

00:45:084 (2,4,6) - delete

00:56:841 (6) - add circle

00:57:630 (8) - NC

01:00:945 (1) - remove NC

01:02:207 (10) - NC

01:19:408 (7) - delete and follow this rythem

01:23:827 (4) - add circle

01:28:719 (8) - NC

01:31:087 (9) - ^


Done!
good song :D
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
KingKrishna

enlxodutls wrote:

General

i think distance snap x1.40 is too far spacing in the NORMAL :D

how about add notes 00:06:499 (1) - ~ 00:16:599 (1) - ? and insert spin 00:14:074 (1) - ~ 00:16:284 (1) - this is just my opinion.. if you dont like it , ignore this

Teru's Normal

00:22:912 (3) - how about replace same slider 00:20:387 (3) -

00:34:906 (2,3,4) - ^ with 00:34:274 (1) - that will be looking batter.

01:39:766 (1) - start at 01:39:845 (1) -



Mebinsane

00:08:867 (6) - delete and replace 00:08:551 (5) - reverse. it looks batter

00:11:392 (7) - it must be showed its finish point.

00:15:337 (1) - equate same spacing with prev.

00:15:810 (4) - reduce one reverse and add circle.

00:17:862 (1) - ^

00:20:703 (3) - ^ but two reverse and two circles

00:24:963 (1) - NC and remove NC at 00:25:437 (3) -

00:25:437 (3) - same with 00:20:703 (3) -

00:32:696 (1) - ^

00:37:115 (6) - ^

00:45:084 (2,4,6) - delete

00:56:841 (6) - add circle

00:57:630 (8) - NC

01:00:945 (1) - remove NC

01:02:207 (10) - NC

01:19:408 (7) - delete and follow this rythem

01:23:827 (4) - add circle

01:28:719 (8) - NC

01:31:087 (9) - ^


Done!
good song :D
Thank you!!!
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21

enlxodutls wrote:

General

i think distance snap x1.40 is too far spacing in the NORMAL :D Oh well.. Yes I think so too.. but.. Its too late fix it now ;A;

how about add notes 00:06:499 (1) - ~ 00:16:599 (1) - ? and insert spin 00:14:074 (1) - ~ 00:16:284 (1) - this is just my opinion.. if you dont like it , ignore this err... no? somehow I feel mine is good already :D

Teru's Normal

00:22:912 (3) - how about replace same slider 00:20:387 (3) - nope ;A; I'm following the next slider curve :D

00:34:906 (2,3,4) - ^ with 00:34:274 (1) - that will be looking batter. sorry.. no, its a pattern

01:39:766 (1) - start at 01:39:845 (1) - lol sorry XD but i think 01:39:766 (1) is better :D so nope :3


well, thanks for taking a look already XD


Done!
good song :D
Loooctav
1,070 posts
Joined January 2012
Loooctav
Hi. Mod From Mod request!

[Teru's Normal]
00:03:975 (1,2,1) Do not put notes on the other: c
00:48:477 (3,4) Do not put notes on the other: c
00:06:184 unnecessary spare time, No rests on a level so slow :3

[Mebinsane]
Not Problem :3

The levels are good, the problem is that you need a Easy And A Hard At least if I want I can make the easy or hard, just let me know: 3
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi o/
I found this timing while mapping Hard (I'll have it ready in next 2-3 days) /o/
The final part really sounds off, change to 190 BPM, the offset is the same you have now (3975)
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