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Thank you for the mod :3 buttt im keeping the streams inZelos wrote:
Incoming mod due to test play request in irc.
Folder:
resize your background to be 640 x 480. I believe the BG has to be 4/3 ratio.
General:
Set a timing preview point.
Note:
I could Nazi this but I'm gonna stick to the basics here. so its gonna be like a medium sized mod post here.
Mebinsane:
00:04:606 (1) - remove new combo here. it goes with the lyrics of the song if you do.
00:17:554 (7,8) - these are too close together considering the previous spacing.
00:18:817 (9) - center this at point (0,0)
00:28:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I still think this stream does not fit.
00:28:843 (10,1) - this 1/4th jump is a big fat no no. change this please.
00:29:396 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - considering the stream you just had, the stream and this 1/2 note spacing here looks the same and would confuse others for streams. change this up please?
00:34:448 (1,1) - remove the new combos on both of these.
00:35:396 (1,1) - remove the new combos on both of these too.
00:40:211 (5) - - this slider should not be like this
it should be more like this
00:44:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream starts on a 1/4th. also it does not fit. fix both of these please.
00:48:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream also does not fit.
00:52:685 (1) - this slider should be starting on the 1/2 (red tick), not the 1/4th tick (blue tick) on the timeline.
00:58:448 (6) - new combo here.
01:13:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this combo is a bit long, new combo it somewhere inbetween please.
01:23:554 (1,1) - I do not understand the spacing you used here. You should definitely try something else.
01:34:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - center via the y-axis please. it would look so much nicer.
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - No not another one. these overmapped streams do not fit mebinsss.
Right then. that post is a bit bigger than I thought.
Call me back for a recheck after 15 mods or so.
Thank you for your mod! and thanks for also trying hard^.^ethox wrote:
First serious effort on modding, so please don't bash me to the ground.
00:40:133 (5) - Slider ending seems odd to me, I'd make it look something like this:00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Ending the combo with this long break doesn't fit IMHO, since the vocalist is in the middle of a word (might be preference, but hey)
01:08:396 (1) - Is off, change it to 01:08:554
That's the best I can do, hope it helps.
07:47 <Bobo> : hmm okies
07:48 <Bobo> : ok remove Dance Dance Revolution 7thMIX from the tags because it's in the source
07:49 <mebins> : okie
07:49 <Bobo> : bg's gotta be resized to 1024x768
07:49 <Bobo> : hmm what else
07:49 <Bobo> : in general
07:49 <Bobo> : hmm
07:49 <mebins> : the poot
07:50 <mebins> : i did that already >.>
07:50 <Bobo> : i gotta redownload then
07:50 <Bobo> : lol
07:50 <Bobo> : hmm
07:50 <Bobo> : this song doesnt sound right with the countdown, i'd turn the countdown off
07:51 <mebins> : oh right XD
07:51 <mebins> : okie what else :3
07:51 <Bobo> : AR 8 seems more fitting than AR 9
07:52 <Bobo> : overall difficulty 7?
07:52 <mebins> : noe keeping it on ar 9
07:52 <mebins> : but ill poot it on od 7 XD
07:52 <Bobo> : lol
07:53 <Bobo> : the Timing Section isnt at the start of the song wtf ._.
07:53 <Bobo> : hmm
07:53 <mebins> : how can i fix that o.o
07:54 <Bobo> : i know
07:54 <Bobo> : go into timing
07:54 <Bobo> : timing panel set up
07:54 <mebins> : make the offset to 0?
07:54 <Bobo> : *timing set up panel
07:54 <Bobo> : nup
07:54 <Bobo> : change the offset to 3975
07:55 <mebins> : on the first section?
07:55 <Bobo> : there's only one timing section so yeah
07:56 <Bobo> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158496
07:56 <mebins> : ok fixed
07:56 <Bobo> : cool :D
07:56 <Bobo> : hmm
07:56 <Bobo> : you need a preview point
07:56 <Bobo> : wb :o
07:57 <mebins> : XD
07:57 <Bobo> : Alrighty
07:57 <Bobo> : go to 00:48:975
07:58 <Bobo> : 00:48:975 -
07:58 <Bobo> : click ^
07:58 <mebins> : lol
07:58 <mebins> : ok whats wrong with it
07:58 <Bobo> : this is where we're gonna set your preview point
07:58 <mebins> : *set
07:58 <Bobo> : go up to timing dropdown
07:58 <Bobo> : the one next to web
07:58 <mebins> : i set it already XD
07:59 <Bobo> : ah
07:59 <Bobo> : how about we set kiai time?
07:59 <mebins> : GASR
07:59 <Bobo> : oh?
07:59 <mebins> : lol o
07:59 <mebins> : ok*
07:59 <mebins> : were at :P
08:00 <Bobo> : ok let's start kiai time at
08:00 <Bobo> : 00:49:448 -
08:00 <Bobo> : do you know how to do that?
08:00 <mebins> : yas "[
08:00 <Bobo> : and let's end it at
08:01 <Bobo> : 01:09:659
08:01 <Bobo> : 01:09:659 -
08:01 <mebins> : okie done
08:01 <Bobo> : cool
08:01 <Bobo> : NOW
08:01 <Bobo> : we can actually go through the map and look for errors \:D/
08:01 <mebins> : yay XD
08:02 <Bobo> : hmm
08:02 <Bobo> : your sliders are quite ugly in general, no offense ;x
08:02 *mebins crys
08:02 <Bobo> : D:
08:02 <Bobo> : sorrysorry ><
08:02 <mebins> : lol ok what should i fix
08:02 <mebins> : im joking XD
08:03 <Bobo> : 00:03:975 -
08:03 <Bobo> : using this one as an example
08:03 <mebins> : wats hould i make it
08:03 <Bobo> : hmm play arounf with the red slider point on the endpoint, turn it into this
08:04 <Bobo> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158498
08:04 <Bobo> : It's the same length and it looks better ;D
08:05 <mebins> : sec
08:05 <Bobo> : okies
08:06 <mebins> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158499
08:06 <Bobo> : ahh that's nice ;D
08:06 <mebins> : >;p
08:06 <mebins> : next?
08:07 <Bobo> : hmm set grid size to 4 because that can make distance snapping more accurate
08:07 <mebins> : ok
08:08 <Bobo> : hmm
08:08 <Bobo> : go into the timing panel again and lower the volume of the hitsounds to 80%
08:09 <mebins> : only on the first one ?
08:09 <Bobo> : all of them~
08:09 <mebins> : ok
08:09 <mebins> : naow wat
08:10 <Bobo> : try and make a nice pattern with the clap and whistle hitsounds
08:10 <mebins> : ok
08:10 <Bobo> : you've only used the solid drum hitsound and it's quite an earsore
08:11 <Bobo> : 00:11:238 (1) - Stack with the start point of (2)
08:12 <Bobo> : 00:12:027 (4) - Not distance snapped.
08:12 <Bobo> : 00:14:869 (2) - ^
08:13 <mebins> : ok
08:13 <mebins> : done
08:13 <Bobo> : mmm
08:15 <Bobo> : 00:23:238 (1) - Umm new combo
08:15 <mebins> : done
08:15 <Bobo> : and...
08:15 <Bobo> : copy dat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158502
08:16 <Bobo> : D:
08:16 <Bobo> : 00:24:975 (6) - New combo
08:17 <mebins> : how did u do that XD
08:17 <Bobo> : ok
08:18 <Bobo> : I moved the slider at 00:23:238 forward to the red tick
08:18 <Bobo> : then i removed the repeat
08:18 <Bobo> : made the slider end on the second white tick
08:18 <Bobo> : then added a note at 00:23:238
08:19 <Bobo> : and moved the combo around to make it look symmetrical
08:19 <Bobo> : im hard to follow i know ._.
08:19 <mebins> : one secd
08:19 <Bobo> : lol sure
08:20 <mebins> : what distance snap did u use o.o
08:20 <Bobo> : 1.3
08:22 <Bobo> : 00:26:396 (2) - move this a couple grids left so it's like in the middle of the little jump pattern
you've made
08:22 <mebins> : XD
08:22 <mebins> : ur gowing too fasttt
08:22 <Bobo> : sorry ><
08:23 <Bobo> : this ur first map btw?
08:24 <mebins> : noe >.>
08:24 <mebins> : 3rd
08:24 <mebins> : best one *
08:24 <Bobo> : ah nice ;D
08:24 <Bobo> : better than my 3rd map :3
08:24 <mebins> : first one trying really hard to rank tho
08:24 <Bobo> : ah
08:24 <mebins> : and would be first to rank
08:24 <Bobo> : link me after
08:25 <Bobo> : 00:29:396 (1) - Antijump
08:25 <Bobo> : 00:36:185 (1) - ^
08:25 <mebins> : i dont know what to change it to
08:25 <mebins> : >.<
08:26 <Bobo> : just distance snap it :D
08:26 <mebins> : it loooks bad
08:26 <Bobo> : hmm
08:26 <Bobo> : stack it with the endpoint of (3) then :D
08:27 <mebins> : ok
08:28 <Bobo> : 00:37:132 (1) - Delete the new combo and move it somewhere else
08:28 <Bobo> : 00:40:132 (5) - not distance snapped
08:29 <mebins> : ok fixed
08:29 <Bobo> : 00:44:080 (1) - Delete new combo and give this another slider repeat
08:30 <Bobo> : 00:47:711 (1,1) - Delete new combo
08:30 <mebins> : or i can give 6 a repate >:
08:31 <Bobo> : yeah lol
08:31 <Bobo> : 00:55:290 - Add a 1/2 slider
08:32 <Bobo> : 00:57:027 (5) - Not distance snapped
08:33 <Bobo> : 01:00:185 (1) - Delete this note and give a new combo to (2)
08:34 <mebins> : ok
08:34 <Bobo> : 01:05:711 (1) - Delete new combo
08:34 <Bobo> : 01:14:080 (3) - Not distance snapped
08:35 <mebins> : doen
08:35 <mebins> : next ?
08:35 <Bobo> : 01:18:817 (1) - Delete new combo
08:36 <Bobo> : 01:21:659 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make this all one comb
08:36 <Bobo> : :$
08:37 <Bobo> : aaand that's about it :3
08:37 <Bobo> : nice map :D
08:37 <mebins> : woot
--Mebinsane--
00:04:606 (2) - End this on red tick
00:08:869 (6) - Hard to find after the previous sliders, make more visible
00:10:448 (3) - ^
00:35:080 (1,2) - Make these straight, they look ugly
00:57:659 - Fill this section
01:19:764 (5) - Add note
01:39:817 (1) - Add finish hitsound
--TheHaya's Hard!--
00:20:396 (5,6,7) - these are too hidden making them unrankable
00:45:185 (7,8,9,10) - Unreadable for most hard level players, simplify it.
00:55:290 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:39:817 (5) - This ending is harder than Insane's ending and it contains a uniqe stream that will surprise most hard-level players.
I CANT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT ;_: IM IN INDIA AND NO OSU SO I CANT UPDATE ;-;!deohome123 wrote:
I"m Love This song so don't get it in grave
Can't you download OSU!! ?.mebins wrote:
I CANT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT ;_: IM IN INDIA AND NO OSU SO I CANT UPDATE ;-;!deohome123 wrote:
I"m Love This song so don't get it in grave
- Fixed the Distance Snap due to requestamnb9280 wrote:
[TheHaya's Hard!]
00:14:080 (9) - Add NC Done
00:17:869 (5) - Put in x:392 y:88 Fixed version is different
00:20:553 (6,7,8) - looks little ugly ?
01:09:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put in the center Done
01:17:238 (9) - Add NC Done
01:35:869 (2,3) - Touch the HP bar Done
Ijah wrote:
Mod--Mebinsane--
00:04:606 (2) - End this on red tick nope :i
00:08:869 (6) - Hard to find after the previous sliders, make more visible okay
00:10:448 (3) - ^okay
00:35:080 (1,2) - Make these straight, they look uglyk;-;
00:57:659 - Fill this sectionk
01:19:764 (5) - Add note k
01:39:817 (1) - Add finish hitsound ok
--TheHaya's Hard!--
00:20:396 (5,6,7) - these are too hidden making them unrankable
00:45:185 (7,8,9,10) - Unreadable for most hard level players, simplify it.
00:55:290 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:39:817 (5) - This ending is harder than Insane's ending and it contains a uniqe stream that will surprise most hard-level players.
deohome123 wrote:
Long time. No see
A little Modding
(mebinsane)
00:03:975 ( 1 , 2 ) Delete it and make circle instead makes it look bad :i
00:12:185 ( 5 , 7 ) These Silder are hard to seenope >..<
00:26:554 ( 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13 ) Very Dizzy note. Move these note to have a another pattern i think that looks nice :i
01:39:343 ( 5 ) Hard to see your right thanks !
Only Little Moding
And...Please look at this diff. I'm dilgently make it
I'm want to be your guest diff.
Zapy wrote:
Okay, request from my queue
Well I might start off by being a nazi so... 01:19:942 and 01:24:683 timing points aren't snapped. Might want to snap them though that's not something critical
Mebinsane
00:03:896 (1) - Move it to start at the big white tick and make it one tick longer as well
00:04:606 (2) - One tick longer
00:08:554 (5) - This looks ugly under the (3), consider moving it.
00:08:869 (6) - Might want to move this somewhere else too
00:09:027 (1,2) - More distance between these two
00:09:817 (3) - Move this so that it starts from the end of 00:09:027 (1) -
00:11:238 (1,2) - Move so that the end of the slider goes under the 00:10:922 (6) - ? Like this http://puu.sh/eAKk
00:12:185 (5) - Ctrl+r? The flow seems better like that
00:12:659 (7) - ^
00:15:817 (1) - Remove new combo
00:16:606 (2) - New combo
00:17:238 (5) - New combo
00:17:869 (8) - New combo
00:24:817 (5) - New combo?
00:24:817 (5,6) - This jump is pretty surprising unless you're paying hell of a much of attention while you play
00:26:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps rotate horizontally? Gives more distance to the slider before
00:30:975 (4) - Use reverse arrow for this slider
00:32:711 (1) - Ctrl+r this and move the upcoming notes to more distance?
00:35:080 (4) - Remove new combo.. It seems a bit confusing
00:36:817 (5) - Use now combo for this?
00:40:133 (1) - Move to further distance or just ctrl+r it
00:44:238 (1) - Move this to the upcoming white tick and remove one reverse arrow. After you've done that, remove 00:44:869 (2) - and put a note on the center at 00:44:238 (7) - It plays much better
00:45:659 (9) - Move this next to the stream and put new combo
00:45:975 - Add a note?
00:48:896 (7,8) - Remove these two notes - they don't fit to music
00:49:448 (2) - Move it in the middle of the sliders http://puu.sh/eAQT
00:49:606 (3) - New combo perhaps
00:55:606 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:554 (5) - Add a reverse arrow perhaps?
00:57:027 (6) - New combo
00:59:711 (5) - ^
01:00:975 (5) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - This slider seems a bit awkward.. You could move it next to the 01:01:922 (9) to avoid that gap of nothingness - Put something like reverse slider here after 01:04:606
01:07:133 (9) - New combo?
01:16:290 (2) - Move this to the same place as 01:15:343 (4) - Or you could remap that part to be completely symmetrical. That would look better too
01:24:185 (5) - New combo
01:24:501 put a slider here that ends at 01:24:817
01:33:975 (5,1) - I'd make this slowdown to start at 01:34:922 (3) -->.
Put a note here 01:39:817 and make the spinner start at 01:39:896 - (blue tick) Correct the spinner's end tick after that.
That's it. It might be a little hard to read because of the wall of text.
Hope I was of help. The map has potential and the song is nice.
Good luck!
Is this suppose to be on pending, is this for ranking or approval?mebins wrote:
Changed to pending 11/17/11
400,264,52764,6,0,B|384:312|336:320,1,89.9999952316285
316,232,53080,1,0
256,164,53238,1,0
196,232,53396,1,0
116,272,53554,1,0
120,184,53711,2,0,B|104:136,2,44.9999976158143
116,272,54027,1,0
165,335,54185,2,0,B|207:373|259:341|259:341|304:373|367:328,2,179.999990463257
220,260,54975,2,0,B|208:276|208:276|176:252|136:264,1,89.9999952316285
Thank you! and please dont kill me ;-; IM MODDING ONE OF YOUR MAPS RIGHT NOWBCI wrote:
heey ^_^ m4m per your queue
sorry if something is the same as the mod Lucy-Kaede :3
also sorry for my bad english
GeneralMebinsane!
- why u dont add combocolours? standard isnt pretty for here
try this way or something similar?
add this in notepad (file => open .osu in notepad) under [TimingPoints]- also, if is going for ranked (not for approval), pm me and i can help you with easy diff
00:14:080 (1) - awww these repeats >< change this on two sliders
00:17:238 (4) - add NC here adn remove this on the next one
00:17:869 (1) - these repeats ><
00:20:396 (9) - NC here
00:20:711 (11) - repeats ><
00:22:922 (9) - NC here
00:25:448 (3) - repeats ><
00:26:238 (1) - RNC
00:26:711 (4) - NC here
00:40:132 (1) - RNC and NC on the next one
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - *nazi* maybe this more pretty?
00:52:764 ~ 00:54:501 - sorry but i dont like this part >< my suggestionspacing - 1,001:04:448 (13,14) - so ugly slider >< (13) maybe this?400,264,52764,6,0,B|384:312|336:320,1,89.9999952316285
316,232,53080,1,0
256,164,53238,1,0
196,232,53396,1,0
116,272,53554,1,0
120,184,53711,2,0,B|104:136,2,44.9999976158143
116,272,54027,1,0
165,335,54185,2,0,B|207:373|259:341|259:341|304:373|367:328,2,179.999990463257
220,260,54975,2,0,B|208:276|208:276|176:252|136:264,1,89.9999952316285
01:21:652 (1) - RNC and NC to the next one
01:24:185 (1) - RNC
01:24:975 (3) - NC
01:38:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *nazi* maybe like this?
first, i dont like more than 1 repeat on slider, and pointed out to you for only a few (not all) issues :3
second, im so nazi and dont like your antisymmetry
but, im very like your style at mapping and this song >w<
GL
Thank you !Ruisu-kun wrote:
Hi hi! DDR Map <3!!!
Have you thought about putting another difficulty? And I don't see why this goes for approval ._.
First, there are very weird sliders. Second, there are weird non-symmetric patterns.
00:17:869 (1) - This don't go with the music, the first slider should go in 00:18:027 and add a repeat.
00:18:343 (1) - If you did ^, delete this slider and put a hit circle 00:18:871.
00:29:238 - You must put a hitcircle here with finish sound.
00:38:238 (1) - Weird spinner, this should'nt be here.
00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Unnecessary and non-symmetric stream.
00:48:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream.
00:51:975 - And this space? Put a slider from here to 00:52:290.
00:52:606 - Add a hitcircle (New combo).
00:54:501 - And this space? Put a slider from here to 00:54:817.
01:18:501 - Here should be a stream till 01:19:764.
01:39:817 (6) - Slider should start here.
Well this my poor mod, luck with you map and sorry, my english is bad :c
Thank you very much !SeeU wrote:
m4m
Mebinsane
First you always don't have to use the distance snap at insane
00:16:599 (1,2,3) , 00:17:231 (1,2,3) These circles are unsymmetrical .. please make more symmetrical
00:19:282 (2) , 00:19:756 (5) ^
00:20:229 (8) move to x - 396 y -136
00:20:703 (3) finish to 00:21:334
00:22:123 (4) the cicle's "y" coordinate equal as 00:22:044 (3)
00:22:281 (5) ^ as 00:21:807 (2)
00:24:648 (4) ^ as 00:24:174 (1)
00:26:068 add circle or 00:25:437 (1) finish at
00:30:645 (7,8) These cicles' location need to change Unless it seems to be stream. for instance http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/544022
00:31:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) These cicles need to balanced position
00:36:168 (1,2,3,4) ^
00:38:377 (2) move to x - 208 y - 52
00:38:772 (4) ^ to x - 268 y - 296
00:44:374 (1) finish to 00:44:690
01:06:152 (7) New combo and next
01:06:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) more more balanced
01:09:624 (2) remove this slider and add cicle at same position for natural play
01:22:249 (1) move to x - 256 y - 208
01:24:143 (1) replace that close to 01:24:458 (2)
01:20:140 ~ I like this part
I can't english very well
Symmetrical and balanced position is soooo important
If you fix these points , your beatmap will be more fantastic
Good Luck and shoted a star
Thank you !!Teru21 wrote:
Well Hi XD M$M with yaa XD
>>>>>>>>^>>>>>>>>> LOL i did it intentionaly X3
[General]
- Delete "BeForU - BREAK DOWN! (mebins) [Mebinsane!2]" in your song folder Cause u didn't map it XD so delete it X3
- There are Unsnap timing point Kiai times 00:49:424 untill 01:09:624 and others resnap them X3
[Insane]
00:05:237 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't this looks better? OAO http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/542642
if you do change ^ , then re- place this 00:06:499 (1,2,3,4) . Try not to place them looks stacked with ^. because it'll looks untidy ;A;
00:07:446 (1) - dont curve it too much. Make it looks symetrical with 2 http://puu.sh/1FrR7
00:08:078 (3) - http://puu.sh/1FrTM like this? OAO
00:09:024 (1) - second slider point , 2 grid up 3 grid to the right
00:09:340 (2,3) - copy paste from ^ to make it looks symetrical
00:10:445 (2) - x:104 y:216 00:10:760 (4) - x:280 y:48 <----------- so will looks Half Hexagon
00:10:918 (5) - I prefer this to be ctrl+> ctrl+G and re replace
00:11:707 (1) - should look like this http://puu.sh/1Fs0f . better i think O.O
00:12:181 (3,1) - ^
01:01:102 (2,4,5) - ^
00:14:548 (3,4) - too much jump OAO
00:14:864 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I believe you can shape this more beautiful ;A;
00:17:862 (1,2) - Jumps? i think no.. its not fit ;-; just make it all circles
00:18:809 (3,1) - could be anti-jump or stack it XD
00:19:913 (6,7,8) - polygonal shape ? OwO http://puu.sh/1Fsbx or 00:20:229 (8,1) - make this into slider
00:20:703 (3) - change this into 1 long slider OAO
00:24:806 (5,6) - this one also.. don't make this as jumps too ;A;
00:26:226 (2) - x:232 y:216
00:26:542 (4) - x:392 y:148 (stacked under (1))
00:28:120 (10,1) - too far ;A; so, 00:28:277 (1,2) - swap these position
00:30:171 (6,7,8,9) - i like this o3o do more pattern like this please X3
00:32:696 (1) - turn into http://puu.sh/1Fshw ?
00:35:063 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1Fsl1 like this?
00:37:115 (6) - try not to make slider too much reverse like this.. try this rhythm http://puu.sh/1Fsne XD
00:37:115 (6) - just make this linear ;A;
00:39:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:40:113 (1) place this in the middle
00:40:113 (1,2) - dont jump this please ;A;
00:40:587 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make another pattern o.o like http://puu.sh/1Fsu8 ~ http://puu.sh/1Fsuq
00:42:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - like this? http://puu.sh/1Fsxe
00:45:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - constant spacing please o3o
00:46:584 (5) - just stack this under (2)
00:46:741 (1) - delete this.. too much 1/2 beat ;A;
00:46:899 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - looks not tidy enough ;A; don't stack things like that ;A; just place them into patterns.. like circles , flowers or stars ;A;
00:49:109 - add note here and stack it with (4) . so there will be a jump between (5,1)
00:50:923 - add circle here, or change them into 1/4 slider reverse
00:52:580 (1) - delete this.. too much 1/2 beat
00:56:999 (1) - turn this into 1 long slider
00:58:420 (1,2,3) - delete this and 00:58:577 - add circle ; 00:58:893 - add circle ; 00:59:209 - add circle
01:00:155 (4,1) - don't jump this.. ;A; its awkward ;-;
01:04:416 - add note here and move the slider 01:04:574 - and i think this looks good http://puu.sh/1FsMm
01:07:099 (14,1,2) - turn this into 1 slider
01:07:730 (16) - end it 01:08:204
01:08:519 (1) - turn this into 2 sliders or 4 circles
01:09:624 (2) - turn this into 2 circles ;A;
01:16:568 (2,3,4,5) - spacing between this is fine but, 01:17:199 (4,5,6,7) - why there is a gap between 4,5,6,7 ?
01:19:014 (4) - move to 01:18:935 -
01:19:724 - add circle and add finish
01:20:434 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - move the rhythm(in timeline) one time to left O_O
01:20:355 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2) - how bout deleting this.. i mean.. add here a break ;A;
01:39:687 (1) - delete this
01:39:766 - add circle here and add spinner 01:39:924 end it 01:40:871
01:41:029 - add 1/4 slider with 1 reverse
OKAY DONE!! XDDDD
If you want codes, please tell me o_o
EDIT 1 : Here are My diff XD normal diff X3
http://puu.sh/1Fyui
Good Luck!! XD
U better get this ranked because you shoot so many star at it o3o it will be a waste if its not ranked XD