Okay, request from my queue
Well I might start off by being a nazi so... 01:19:942 and 01:24:683 timing points aren't snapped. Might want to snap them though that's not something critical
Mebinsane
00:03:896 (1) - Move it to start at the big white tick and make it one tick longer as well
00:04:606 (2) - One tick longer
00:08:554 (5) - This looks ugly under the (3), consider moving it.
00:08:869 (6) - Might want to move this somewhere else too
00:09:027 (1,2) - More distance between these two
00:09:817 (3) - Move this so that it starts from the end of 00:09:027 (1) -
00:11:238 (1,2) - Move so that the end of the slider goes under the 00:10:922 (6) - ? Like this http://puu.sh/eAKk
00:12:185 (5) - Ctrl+r? The flow seems better like that
00:12:659 (7) - ^
00:15:817 (1) - Remove new combo
00:16:606 (2) - New combo
00:17:238 (5) - New combo
00:17:869 (8) - New combo
00:24:817 (5) - New combo?
00:24:817 (5,6) - This jump is pretty surprising unless you're paying hell of a much of attention while you play
00:26:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps rotate horizontally? Gives more distance to the slider before
00:30:975 (4) - Use reverse arrow for this slider
00:32:711 (1) - Ctrl+r this and move the upcoming notes to more distance?
00:35:080 (4) - Remove new combo.. It seems a bit confusing
00:36:817 (5) - Use now combo for this?
00:40:133 (1) - Move to further distance or just ctrl+r it
00:44:238 (1) - Move this to the upcoming white tick and remove one reverse arrow. After you've done that, remove 00:44:869 (2) - and put a note on the center at 00:44:238 (7) - It plays much better
00:45:659 (9) - Move this next to the stream and put new combo
00:45:975 - Add a note?
00:48:896 (7,8) - Remove these two notes - they don't fit to music
00:49:448 (2) - Move it in the middle of the sliders http://puu.sh/eAQT
00:49:606 (3) - New combo perhaps
00:55:606 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:554 (5) - Add a reverse arrow perhaps?
00:57:027 (6) - New combo
00:59:711 (5) - ^
01:00:975 (5) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - This slider seems a bit awkward.. You could move it next to the 01:01:922 (9) to avoid that gap of nothingness - Put something like reverse slider here after 01:04:606
01:07:133 (9) - New combo?
01:16:290 (2) - Move this to the same place as 01:15:343 (4) - Or you could remap that part to be completely symmetrical. That would look better too
01:24:185 (5) - New combo
01:24:501 put a slider here that ends at 01:24:817
01:33:975 (5,1) - I'd make this slowdown to start at 01:34:922 (3) -->.
Put a note here 01:39:817 and make the spinner start at 01:39:896 - (blue tick) Correct the spinner's end tick after that.
That's it. It might be a little hard to read because of the wall of text.
Hope I was of help. The map has potential and the song is nice.
Good luck!
Well I might start off by being a nazi so... 01:19:942 and 01:24:683 timing points aren't snapped. Might want to snap them though that's not something critical
Mebinsane
00:03:896 (1) - Move it to start at the big white tick and make it one tick longer as well
00:04:606 (2) - One tick longer
00:08:554 (5) - This looks ugly under the (3), consider moving it.
00:08:869 (6) - Might want to move this somewhere else too
00:09:027 (1,2) - More distance between these two
00:09:817 (3) - Move this so that it starts from the end of 00:09:027 (1) -
00:11:238 (1,2) - Move so that the end of the slider goes under the 00:10:922 (6) - ? Like this http://puu.sh/eAKk
00:12:185 (5) - Ctrl+r? The flow seems better like that
00:12:659 (7) - ^
00:15:817 (1) - Remove new combo
00:16:606 (2) - New combo
00:17:238 (5) - New combo
00:17:869 (8) - New combo
00:24:817 (5) - New combo?
00:24:817 (5,6) - This jump is pretty surprising unless you're paying hell of a much of attention while you play
00:26:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps rotate horizontally? Gives more distance to the slider before
00:30:975 (4) - Use reverse arrow for this slider
00:32:711 (1) - Ctrl+r this and move the upcoming notes to more distance?
00:35:080 (4) - Remove new combo.. It seems a bit confusing
00:36:817 (5) - Use now combo for this?
00:40:133 (1) - Move to further distance or just ctrl+r it
00:44:238 (1) - Move this to the upcoming white tick and remove one reverse arrow. After you've done that, remove 00:44:869 (2) - and put a note on the center at 00:44:238 (7) - It plays much better
00:45:659 (9) - Move this next to the stream and put new combo
00:45:975 - Add a note?
00:48:896 (7,8) - Remove these two notes - they don't fit to music
00:49:448 (2) - Move it in the middle of the sliders http://puu.sh/eAQT
00:49:606 (3) - New combo perhaps
00:55:606 (1) - Remove new combo
00:56:554 (5) - Add a reverse arrow perhaps?
00:57:027 (6) - New combo
00:59:711 (5) - ^
01:00:975 (5) - ^
01:02:553 (1) - This slider seems a bit awkward.. You could move it next to the 01:01:922 (9) to avoid that gap of nothingness - Put something like reverse slider here after 01:04:606
01:07:133 (9) - New combo?
01:16:290 (2) - Move this to the same place as 01:15:343 (4) - Or you could remap that part to be completely symmetrical. That would look better too
01:24:185 (5) - New combo
01:24:501 put a slider here that ends at 01:24:817
01:33:975 (5,1) - I'd make this slowdown to start at 01:34:922 (3) -->.
Put a note here 01:39:817 and make the spinner start at 01:39:896 - (blue tick) Correct the spinner's end tick after that.
That's it. It might be a little hard to read because of the wall of text.
Hope I was of help. The map has potential and the song is nice.
Good luck!