1. Easy (2,17 stars, 71 notes)
2. Gero's Normal (4,07 stars, 126 notes)
3. Hard (4,69 stars, 190 notes)

Hard By me
Normal By Gero
Easy By me

Grumd Andrea

1. PreviewTime is not same as all diff. must fix this.
   and I suggest to set in 00:54:469.
2. offset is not same as all diff. must fix this.
   and most offset is not right imo. but I tried to measure. however I could not found it. sorry....
   t/13795
   use this queue.
3. remove countdown. I feel this setting is not fit.
4. many note is not snapped. must check it.
5. folder have 3 osbs. must remove those.

1. I seemed most note did not follow distance snap. this will make to confusing beginner.
   you mustshould use it. this has problem for rank now.

-Bakari- wrote:

Try to reduce hitsounds volume and use distance snap :V Insane looks too random.

obv, don't kd

Taris wrote:

The gap between normal and hard is really big to be honest. The [Normal] seems more like an easy, So I suggest you rename [Normal] to [Easy] and make a little harder normal diff. If you want I could possibly make an Normal diff for you, the song is quite nice imo.

EDIT: Add Opening or Ending to tags. I don't know if its opening or ending ><

1. 00:13:523 at 01:32:670 why everthing are snap in blue tick ? Easy neve put in blue tick because is really harder just put White tick or red tick go resnapp all notes and sliders
   
2. 00:50:935 (2,3) - overlaps with 00:51:729 (1,2,1) when you mapping mapper do it skin by Default OSU! because you need test play and readable, the Overlaps can be ugly and hard read example this http://puu.sh/1Eu8V when test play http://puu.sh/1Eu9j this call Overlaps you need clean Overlaps example this http://puu.sh/1Eua9 this is good so fix overlaps only part 00:50:229 (1,2,3,1,2,1) when you fix this be carefully spacing
3. 00:58:788 (1) - Overlaps the slider end with 01:00:200 (1) start slider that is ugly and overlaps you need clean here
4. 01:05:847 (1,1) - again http://puu.sh/1Eucz you need clean overlaps here

Natsu wrote:

I got other questions i need to fix snap divisor 1/4, grid lvl, snapa divisor 1.0 to insane and hard too?

1. 00:13:523 at 01:32:670 why everthing are snap in blue tick ? Easy neve put in blue tick because is really harder just put White tick or red tick go resnapp all notes and sliders
   
   Done
   
2. 00:50:935 (2,3) - overlaps with 00:51:729 (1,2,1) when you mapping mapper do it skin by Default OSU! because you need test play and readable, the Overlaps can be ugly and hard read example this http://puu.sh/1Eu8V when test play http://puu.sh/1Eu9j this call Overlaps you need clean Overlaps example this http://puu.sh/1Eua9 this is good so fix overlaps only part 00:50:229 (1,2,3,1,2,1) when you fix this be carefully spacing
3. 00:58:788 (1) - Overlaps the slider end with 01:00:200 (1) start slider that is ugly and overlaps you need clean here
4. 01:05:847 (1,1) - again http://puu.sh/1Eucz you need clean overlaps here

jonathanlfj wrote:

Hi modding as requested
What a classic show and song~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Please use the mp3 file and offset from this map, it is of better quality. Remember to resnap all your objects and green timing sections (and preview time) afterwards (mod based on your current timing)
There are some inconsistencies in your beatmap properties for the diffs; they are shown in this picture below, please fix them:

SPOILER

delete the osb file if you are not planning to make a storyboard
also consider adding a normal diff to better the spread of the mapset

[Easy]
AR+1, and one of HP/OD+1
00:11:846 (1,1) - The space in between feels empty, maybe add some notes in there
00:28:787 (2) - fix spacing
00:30:552 (1) - end this at 00:32:669
00:50:316 (1) - spacing, you can curve 00:48:905 (1) - upward to fix this (please fix later occurrences as well, you can use AiMod to help you find bad spacings)
00:52:787 (2) - add whistle
01:22:787 (1) - blanket this better
01:28:787 (1) - silence the end of this spinner by putting a green timing section and setting the volume to 5%
There are alot of objects placed on blue lines in this diff, this is mainly due to an inaccurate offset causing some sounds to appear early/later than they are supposed to. Please use the suggested mp3/offset and resnap these objects to white/red lines

[Hard]
Please fix the same blue line issue in this diff
AR+1
00:25:258 (3,4) - make this one long slider, follows vocal better
00:28:611 (5) - place this note at 00:28:787
00:48:199 (3) - add finish
00:55:964 (1,2,3) - I suggest you remake this, the current rhythm is weird and the sliders should no longer end on blue lines with the correct offset
01:07:964 (2) - add whistle
01:29:493 (1) - same volume setup at Easy, and end it at 01:32:316

[Insane]
fix blue line issue~
Do AR8 and OD7
00:23:493 (3,4) - make one long slider
00:37:081 (1) - make this start at 00:37:258 and add note at 00:36:905
00:45:375 (5) - clap
00:56:846 (5) - move this to 00:57:022
01:02:140 (5,6) - make it just the slider
01:07:611 (6,7) - this can be more creative, i suggest break up 01:08:493 (7) to two sliders or a repeat slider
01:29:669 (1) - same as Easy

Pretty good map, still need some tweaks here and there but I can see improvements in rhythm/placement. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Guy wrote:

hi~ request from PM

　

General

　●　hmm, this song use 1/3 rhythm? I think that there are many places where I can't respond to in 1/4. Other guy told me 1/4

　[notice]

Insane

　●　Many place not good rhythm.. for example, 01:04:428 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - here. What sound does this place respond by? In red line, I can't feel a sound here. Such a place, you should put on the white lines.

When i change timing that fail but i fix now

Sorry.. i can't mod this map. because i can't feel rhythm.
You can ask me for a re-check if you can revise it.

wcx19911123 wrote:

timing request as you want, NO KD PLZ

I tried my best but sorry I can't find the best BPM/offset. I can only say the current one is a bit wrong, some parts the BPM is more than 170
don't know why this song has such an uncertain timing, maybe you need to find a higher quality mp3, or a timing pro(go to find Charles445)
anyway, good luck on this

btw, you need to remap lots of patterns.. this's a 1/3 song..

Ok i will do thanks

1. osb had SB. but it is not need to this map. so should remove osb file.
2. this timing is still having problem. ;_;

1. 00:08:840 (1) - move spinner end to 00:12:017.
2. 00:12:369 (1) - reverse is hidden by spinner hit burst. this is rankable. but this confuse beginner.
3. 00:13:428 - add note here
4. 00:13:781 - ^
5. 00:28:252 (1,1,2) - (nazi)
6. 00:42:370 (1) - move spinner start to 00:42:017 - . and move end to 00:43:781 - .
7. 00:44:487 - add note
8. 00:46:605 (2) - this is mistake? move slider end to 00:47:311 -
9. 00:52:252 (1) - remove NC
10. 00:53:664 (1) - ^
11. 01:10:605 (2) - suggestion of rhythm.
    
    01:10:605 (2) - 1/1 slider
    01:11:664 (3) - circle
12. 01:13:428 (2) - ^
13. 01:14:840 (1) - suggestion of rhythm
    
    01:14:840 (1) - 1/1 slider
    01:15:546 (2) - circle
14. 01:21:546 - add circle
    this place has vocal. so it is better.
15. 01:23:311 - add 1/1 reverce slider.

[TimingPoints]
12394.5714285714,352.422907488987,4,2,0,75,1,0
15213,348.33091436865,4,2,0,75,1,0
17999,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
20822,355.029585798817,4,2,0,75,1,0
25082,346.820809248555,4,2,0,75,1,0
26469,350.877192982456,4,2,0,75,1,0
27870,350.36496350365,4,2,0,75,1,0
29271,353.460972017673,4,2,0,75,1,0
34926,351.906158357771,4,2,0,75,1,0
37741,350.877192982456,4,2,0,75,1,0
39144,355.029585798817,4,2,0,75,1,0
40564,350.36496350365,4,2,0,75,1,0
41965,349.854227405248,4,2,0,75,1,0
43364,347.826086956522,4,2,0,75,1,0
44755,351.906158357771,4,2,0,75,1,0
47570,358.208955223881,4,2,0,75,1,0
49002,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
51825,356.612184249629,4,2,0,75,1,0
60383,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
68853,352.422907488987,4,2,0,75,1,0
71672,349.854227405248,4,2,0,75,1,0
74470,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
77293,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
80116,351.906158357771,4,2,0,75,1,0
85746,350.877192982456,4,2,0,75,1,0
88553,356.083086053412,4,2,0,75,1,0
89977,349.854227405248,4,2,0,75,1,0

Picture of Timing

Charles445 wrote:

Timing by request.
It's not perfect but it should at least help you map it.

[TimingPoints]
12394.5714285714,352.422907488987,4,2,0,75,1,0
15213,348.33091436865,4,2,0,75,1,0
17999,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
20822,355.029585798817,4,2,0,75,1,0
25082,346.820809248555,4,2,0,75,1,0
26469,350.877192982456,4,2,0,75,1,0
27870,350.36496350365,4,2,0,75,1,0
29271,353.460972017673,4,2,0,75,1,0
34926,351.906158357771,4,2,0,75,1,0
37741,350.877192982456,4,2,0,75,1,0
39144,355.029585798817,4,2,0,75,1,0
40564,350.36496350365,4,2,0,75,1,0
41965,349.854227405248,4,2,0,75,1,0
43364,347.826086956522,4,2,0,75,1,0
44755,351.906158357771,4,2,0,75,1,0
47570,358.208955223881,4,2,0,75,1,0
49002,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
51825,356.612184249629,4,2,0,75,1,0
60383,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
68853,352.422907488987,4,2,0,75,1,0
71672,349.854227405248,4,2,0,75,1,0
74470,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
77293,352.941176470588,4,2,0,75,1,0
80116,351.906158357771,4,2,0,75,1,0
85746,350.877192982456,4,2,0,75,1,0
88553,356.083086053412,4,2,0,75,1,0
89977,349.854227405248,4,2,0,75,1,0

Picture of Timing

Also, add 'freckles' to tags. That's the english translation of the title.

HanzeR wrote:

Hi, for m4m

[General]

Kiai should start here on all diffs 00:56:104 and end at 01:13:071
00:27:870 - this volume change really doesnt make sense and is way too loud ><

[Insane]

Needs a few changes to rhythm

Reduce od to 7, 9 is evil
Reduce drain to 6

00:12:400 - offset here is 12401 i think is closer
00:13:803 (1) - delete reverse, copy this slider like this
00:22:242 (1,2) - extend both of these 1 tick h
00:32:098 (1) - try to avoid using right angles, i think this looks better
00:37:741 (1,2) - - extend both 1 tick like before
00:40:564 (1) - make this slider end 1 tick earlier
00:41:264 (2) - rhytym like this
00:49:354 (2) - x256 y40
00:53:964 (2) - make this 1 tick shorter
00:56:817 (2,3,4,5) - why stream ? make rhytym like this imo
00:59:670 (2) - shorten 1 tick
01:00:618 (2) - shorten 1 tick
01:01:794 (1,2,3,4,5) - dont overmap like this ><
01:30:676 (3) - move to 01:30:676 (3) -

[Hard]

Drain -1
Od -1

00:13:803 (1,2,3) - like this
00:27:870 (1,2) -
00:33:512 (1) -
00:37:741 (1) - make this symmetrical across the center
00:40:564 (1,2,1,2) -
00:50:413 (1,2,1) -
00:56:460 (2,3) -
00:58:957 (1) - make a prettier slider
01:04:618 (1) - shorten 1 tick
01:11:672 (1) - extend 1 tick

[Normal]

AR +3
Drain+1
OD + 2

This diff looks alot better

00:49:002 (1,2,3,4) -
00:53:251 (1) - start spinner here
01:24:338 (1) - extend 1 tick

Looks really good !

[Easy]

AR 4
00:13:803 (1) - Distance snap ><
00:36:802 (2) - You cant have the slider extend like this over two timing changes, it doesnt end where it should
00:46:514 (2) - extend 1 tick
00:53:608 (2) - make 1 tick shorter
01:03:559 (2,2) - extend 1 tick
01:10:262 (1,2,3) -
01:21:523 (1,2) - snap to 01:21:523

Its a cool map and fun song, and your normal diff is very good. Just make sure you listen to the rhythym very closely when mapping, but i know that was very hard with the timing changes in this song. Good luck !!

mebins wrote:

EASY
00:36:773(2) This sliders kinda random, ( what part of the song is it following ?) timing points
00:45:106(1,2) these sliders are not that good looking fixed
00:53:608 (2) this slider seems out of place instead of reversing it just extend it? fixed
01:10:703(2) again seems out of place fixed
01:11:672(1) move it here? fixed
01:21:523(1) move note here, make it reverse once fixed
01:22:579(2) move note here and make it reverse twice fixed
01:23:986(?) add note here fixed

NORMAL
I couldnt find any problems ^.^"
But i feel like the notes are placed kinda blocky in some areas like 00:29:844
00:39:106 i think about it

HARD
00:13:803(1,2) these sliders are to short fixed
00:27:888(1) this slider looks kinda bad fixed

00:33:512(1) extend till its 00:34:572 and then delete note (2) fixed
00:40:774(1) not matching the music fixed
00:51:825(1) this note does not fit at all fixed
01:11:584(1) extend this slider or something? fixed
01:17:705(1) fix this slider by making it more curvey please... fixed
01:19:183(1) ^

INSANE
00:16:606(3) make this slider look better >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/542510 i will think about it
00:56:817(2,3,4,5) this stream is not really needed. fixed


I love the guitar in this song good luck and listen to your notes at 75% to see if your actually hitting them on the right time. Best of luck!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello Natsu~ Hi
Modding as you requested.
Lets see...

[General]

Please change the default skin to "User's Preference." There is no point in forcing players to use the default skin when playing your map. Done

Your hitsounding is much too quiet. I can't hear it at all. I suggest raising volumes in most places. I feel sound quiet is better for music

If you listen to the song, there is a very strong clap on each offbeat. Because of this, you should have a clap on each offbeat note in your maps. As of now you haven't used any claps. Done

You use too many finishes. They can get noisy, especially when there is not finish in the music, or the finish is used somewhere other than a strong downbeat or accented beat. Done

[Easy]

00:08:869 (1) - You need to remove or shorten this spinner because the 00:12:393 (1) appears 3 beats before the spinner is done. This is very confusing for beginner players. In general you should have at least two beats of break time after a spinner to give time for the beginning player to recover. Done

00:13:803 to 00:22:242 - I don't understand your choice of rhythm here. It's not following the song very well. It's following the off rhythm and feels strange. The gap at 00:14:860 makes no sense. It should be more like this:'

Done
The new combos are on the downbeats (sliders) instead of the offbeats (single circles) and it feels much nicer with the music. Just move 00:13:803 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) left one beat and fix newcombos.

Done

00:19:410 (1) - Remove finish from head. Done
00:22:242 (1) - ^ Done

00:34:219 (1) - Remove NC Done

00:42:664 (1) - This spinner is far too short for an easy difficulty. I suggest removing it and adding circles or sliders instead. Done

00:46:162 (1,2,1,2) - These rhythms feel quite weird. The slider should be on the downbeat and not the offbeat. The rhythm feels disconnected. Done

00:49:354 (2,1) - Large spacing increase here? Done

00:53:608 (2) - This slider isn't following anything and is confusing because the repeat falls on a red tick. I suggest a rhythm like this:

00:52:181 (2) to 00:56:104 (3)

Done

00:57:530 (2,1) - Why this massive jump? This is impossible to read for a beginner. Please stick with 1.0 spacing throughout the map. Done

01:02:500 - This pause is very awkward. Nothing in the music suggests a pause here. Done

01:13:421 (2) - Unsnapped slider end. Done

01:27:149 (1,1) - I advise against ending the easy difficulty with two spinners. New players tend to hate spinners. Im thinking about remove first and plant some slider

There's a lot to work on here. You rhythms are very disjointed from the song. That is, most of the time you have your strong sliders falling of the offbeats and it feels terrible.

[Normal]

Too many new combos here. It's alright to let your combos get into higher numbers here.
00:13:803 (1) - No reason for NC here. Done
00:16:606 (1) - ^ Done
etc etc...
00:19:057 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:19:057 (1) - I'm confused as to what this long slider that starts on the offbeat is mapped to... Done
00:22:242 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:25:082 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:33:512 (1) - Remove NC Done
You get the point.

00:37:741 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This kind of placement is quite boring. Can't you make something more original and fun? Done

00:45:106 (1) - This slider is very awkward and is not following the rhythm very well imo. Done

00:56:104 (1,2,1) - Spacing inconsistent. Done

01:12:721 (1) - No reason for NC here I don't think. Done

The rhythms through the kiai time are quite good though.

[Hard]

Again here, too many new combos. You shouldn't new combo in the middle of a vocal verse, like at 00:19:410 (1). Adding a new combo there is just confusing. Think about that all over the maps.

00:13:803 (1,2) - Unsnapped slider ends... Done

00:33:512 (1) - There are so many repeats on this slider... Please do not do this. The spinner should start at 00:34:926 like the insane diff. Done

[Insane]

Again think about new combos. There's just too many.

00:50:413 (1) - Remove NC Done

01:00:618 (2) - Slider is unsnapped. Please snap it to 01:00:559 and have it stack with the 01:00:383 (1). It will play much better. Done
01:08:030 (3) - ^ Unsnapped. Done

01:24:338 (1) - Unsnapped slider end Done


Anyways, I hope it's helpful. I don't like this song.

TMAstraf wrote:

Thats a good map! =)
I have nothing to complain about.

Only one: Maybe the Slider on Insane Time: 01:01:794 a little bit shorter ;D

lkx_shore wrote:

[General]
why not use of more arc slider?
Kiai time start on 00:56:104
Kiai time over on 01:32:775

[Easy]
You'd better use 0.40 SV...1.00 SV is too fast....
00:43:364 (5) - add whistle?
00:53:608 (2) - Change into → http://puu.sh/1FTV0
01:13:071 (1) - Change into → http://puu.sh/1FU0k
01:14:822 (1) - check this

[Normal]
00:19:057 (3) - Change into http://puu.sh/1FU3r
00:26:469 (1) - too distortion......
00:37:741 (1) - ^
00:38:442 (2) - ^
00:43:711 (2) - 1.24x....why not 1.0x

[Hard]
AR+1

[Insane]
00:40:564 (1) - too distortion
01:01:794 (4) - Change into http://puu.sh/1FUa3
01:30:676 (3) - Change into http://puu.sh/1FUaX


Goodluck to you.

jonathanlfj wrote:

Rechecking as promised

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
volume i feel is too low, perhaps use 40% for all diffs?

[Easy]
The NC patterns look very spammed...i suggest take every other NC off so its not 2 notes for every NC (or just NC every 2 verses)
00:25:082 (1) - center this
00:37:741 (1) - finish on slider head
00:53:608 (2) - the repeat in the middle is not following anything, i suggest this rhythm:
01:11:672 (1) - stack this perfectly under 01:10:262 (1)
01:13:421 (2) - same as 00:53:608 (2)
01:29:977 (1) - keep this spinner's end at a lower volume if you apply my volume suggestions, and end it at 01:32:775 (1). This applies to every diff

[Normal]
00:08:869 (1) - end this at 00:11:865
00:27:870 (1) - take off NC
00:30:684 (1) - ^
00:37:741 (1) - finish on slider head
00:45:106 (1) - you start doing NC every verse again, if you apply my NC suggestion on Easy then its good that you do it here as well
01:07:441 (1) - finish on slider head
01:15:881 (1) - finish
01:21:523 (1) - finish on head
Try to keep your finish patterns consistent like on other diffs, if you are not sure you can always refer to your other diffs as to where to put what hitsound

[Hard]
00:08:869 (1) - same as Normal
00:37:741 (1) - finish on slider head
00:41:615 (2) - stack perfectly under 00:40:209 (3)
00:50:060 (2) - ^ under 00:50:060 (2)
00:51:825 (1,2) - adjust spacing
00:58:957 (3) - NC
01:05:324 (2) - finish kinda sounds random, take it off?
01:28:553 (1,2,3,4) - this can look better~ (raise 01:29:621 (4) to be parallel with 01:28:909 (2))

[Insane]
00:08:869 (1) - same as Normal
00:33:512 (1,2,3,4) - center this on y axis
00:40:564 (5) - clap on slider end
00:45:810 (3) - clap
00:55:391 (3,4) - why not put a stream here? it makes it more insane and challenging~

SPOILER

01:01:794 (4) - this slider should end at 01:02:147
01:07:088 (4,1) - stream it

SPOILER

01:21:523 (1) - finish on head?
01:30:676 (3) - end at 01:31:026
the clap pattern in this diff is quite clever, you should do it to other diffs as well, especially Normal

Thats about it, I can see great improvements in the mapset, so have a star and good luck ^_^

[Ranger] wrote:

From m4m

[Easy]
00:37:741 (1) - How about make symmetry?
Exemple

00:57:530 (4) - Change the circle slider up to 00:58:599(And delete 00:57:887 (1)),I think it's better

[Normal]
01:22:931 (1) - Add Finish here?

[Hardl]
01:27:149 (1) - From "Hard rock"mode,This silder touch the Hp bar,move to the top

[Insanel]
00:17:999 (4) - Finish here?
00:29:271 (1) - ^
00:55:628 (3,4,5,6) - How about add whistle instead finish?
01:07:441 (2,3,4,6) - I think this part do not belong to the beat

well...that`s all to me
Good luck

Ty im modding your map too be pacient im doing the best i can

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ Mod Request via my Mod Queue~

[overall]
- why you use so many red line o_O? maybe ur timing is wrong.. cuz is in 1/3

I think your correct timing is BPM 170 offset 8094 was in 170 but a mat told me the song got a variable bpm and charles help me to timing it

and...cuz you timing not right,i can't help you with a nazi mod ;3
just give you some suggestion~

- your colors setting can use more fit with the BG' color ^_^
(like whrite,boy's hair color,girl's dress color..etc) Thanks about colours i will do

Hard diff's setting:HP+1/+2 will more like hard i will fix it
Normal diff's setting:3~5 will more like normal~ i will fix it
and your Insane Slider Velocity use 1.20 i think it's too low I think about it
:/ maybe 1.40up wull more like insane~

fix them your map will better ww okay

good luck 'w'/

Thanks good luck too

K i A i wrote:

Ok, for recheck

[easy]
00:14:860 (3) - move this object for certain distance~ (ex - x:356 y:60)
00:24:372 (2,3) - easy diff is not allowed for 'Anti Jump'.. move this object 00:24:372 (2) - (ex - x:260 y:100)
00:46:514 (3) - I think this object is not necessarily many control points.. this object is suitable for only 3 control points. how about decrease some control points? (just my opinion )
00:50:413 (3) - correct this object for certain distance

[normal]
00:33:159 (2) - set down 2grid for distance

[hard]
00:37:741 (1) - this slider's end part must be on here 00:38:442

[insane]
00:56:817 (8) - NC
00:57:530 (1) - remove NC
01:07:441 (4) - NC
01:07:559 (5,6) - delete this object
01:07:794 - how about add the circle note here? (x:84 y:88) (just my opinion )



wow.. your beatmap is better nice than before!
star~

Good luck!

[Pisces] wrote:

[General]

so bad quality Background...
what about this?[

SPOILER

Thanks for bg

[Easy]

00:08:869 (1) - Replace Whistle to Finish I will do
00:12:393 (1) - add clap on here (00:13:098) I will do
00:27:170 (4) - Whistle I will do
00:32:098 (3) - whistle on 00:32:805 I will do
00:39:144 (2) - Remove Finish start slide I will do
00:56:817 (3) - Replace Finish to Whistle I will do
01:12:021 (4) - more smoothly!
01:13:421 (2) - Remove Whistle I will do
01:26:447 (4) - clap I will do

[Normal]
+1 HP Drain Rate,+1 AR I like it easy for new players

00:27:870 (4) - So longi follow vocals thats why
00:33:159 (2) - clap I will do
00:50:766 (2) - clap end slider I will do
00:57:173 (4) - whistle I will do
01:01:794 (5) - whistle start slider I will do

[Hard]
Change Beat snap divisor 1/3 to 1/4 Mat told me is 1/3 music

00:38:793 (2) - smoothly
01:03:912 (5) - whistle I will do

[Insane]
Change Beat snap divisor 1/3 to 1/4 Mat told me is 1/3 music

00:16:606 (3) - ugly slide... I fix it i make nice
00:37:391 - Add Circle note

Natsu wrote:

Pero es que me gusta como se ve xD voy a pensar si lo cambio

Harez wrote:

hi~ from my queue, i think your map is good enough, so i just make hitsound suggestion

[General]
D: so much Timing Points Charles445 found the timing so i think is good

[Easy]
00:12:394 (1) - remove clap in start, add clap in repeat
00:13:451 - add a note in 360,292 with a clap
00:15:213 (1) - remove clap
00:15:561 (2) - add clap in start and end
00:17:999 (1) - remove clap
00:18:351 (2) - add clap in start and end
00:19:410 (3) - remove clap
00:28:220 (2) - add clap in start and end
00:29:624 (4) - ^
00:49:354 (2) - ^
00:50:413 (3,4) - add clap in end
00:52:181 (2,4) - add clap in start and end
01:00:735 (2) - add clap in end
01:02:853 (4) - add clap in start
01:03:559 (5,2,4,2,4,2,4,3) - add clap in start and end
01:16:234 (2) - remove clap in repeat, add clap in start and end
01:20:467 (1,3) - add clap
01:22:579 (5) - add clap in start
01:23:283 (6) - add clap in start and end
01:24:338 (1) - remove clap in start, add clap in end
01:25:042 (2) - remove clap in start and end, add clap in repeat
01:26:096 (3,5) - add clap

[Normal]
00:17:302 (5) - add whistle in repeat
00:18:351 (1) - add clap
00:19:057 (3) - add whistle in start and end
00:23:307 (9) - add clap
00:25:082 (4) - add whistle in end
00:26:469 (1) - ^
00:33:159 (2,4) - add clap
00:50:766 (2) - add clap in start and end

[Hard]
do like Easy / Normal diff..
Try this

[Insane]
00:16:606 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/551614
01:07:559 (5,6,7) - delete

My suggest, change some pattern in all diff, i feel boring if you just using straight jump, straight slider

nattap wrote:

I'm here for M4M but I'm quite new if you think it's useless feel free to PM me I'll try again

[General]

I recommended kiai at 00:56:104 I think about it i think is ok now

[Easy]

00:14:860 (3) - I think This note is a little bit too close to last one please consider moving 00:13:803 (2)
01:03:559 (5) - How about http://puu.sh/1IpHl that see better
01:29:977 (1) - I think It's too loud I think 15% is better

[Normal]

01:29:977 (1) - It's not the same as other diff maybe made all of them like this or change it like others wut is not the same?

[Hard]

01:29:977 (1) - like other diff what?

[Insane]

00:13:803 (5,6,7) - Too far I think (but no suggestion sry) well is insane i get SS with HD so is posible
00:32:098 (1,2) - may be like http://puu.sh/1IpUH thats look great i will change it
01:07:559 (5) - remove finish
01:07:794 (7) - add clap
01:31:376 (1) - like other diff

Natsu wrote:

[Normal]

01:29:977 (1) - It's not the same as other diff maybe made all of them like this or change it like others wut is not the same?
It is not hitfinish sound while other diff are hitfinish

[Hard]

01:29:977 (1) - like other diff what?
I mean easy (lower the volume) sorry to make you confuse insane as well

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Natsu

All

Need more pratice good luxk Yeah i know i keep working on make this better

Easy

00:17:999 (1) - distance

00:24:017 (2) - ^

00:40:209 (4) - ^

00:43:014 (2) - http://puu.sh/1Kgh5 Thanks really better

00:51:119 (4) - http://puu.sh/1Kghs -> http://puu.sh/1KghD Like this thansk im changi it tomorrow
Not stacked note plz

01:04:618 (1) - distance

01:06:383 (4) - Not stacked note plz

Normal

00:29:624 (1) - distance

00:29:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Flows are bad try fixing it

Hard

01:12:371 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not stacked note plz

01:22:931 (3) - If this jump isn't purposed plz keep DS Is on purposed

Insane

Circle Size -1

Looks easy for insane diff

Dark Fang wrote:

[General]

unify combo colours pls
about Tags, have two spacing between Opening and freckles in your Hard diff
why don't you start preview point start at 00:55:391 ?

[Easy]

Circle Size 2 is not good.
AR +2 , OD +1
00:12:394 (1) - consider respacing, this note covered by spinner's hitburster
00:19:763 (4) - move down 1 grid
00:21:532 (5) - stack with (3) circle? (6) follow (5)
00:37:741 (1,2,3,4) - overused Finish hitsound
01:00:383 (1) - adjust distance
01:06:383 (4) - don't stack with (2), that looks bad

[Normal]

about difficulty. all +2 except circle size
00:20:822 (1) - NC
01:06:383 (1) - keep distance pls
01:08:500 (2) - ^
01:12:721 (8) - ^

[Hard]

00:37:741 (1) - remove Finish at end of slider
01:27:149 (1) - add Finish at start of slider

[Insane]

players hate 5 Circle Size. reduce Circle Size pls
00:40:564 (8) - NC and 00:41:264 (1) - RNC
00:43:711 (1) - NC and 00:44:755 (1) - RNC
00:53:251 (5) - I think Ctrl + H was good flow. if you want to use Ctrl + H adjust next notes
01:07:441 (4) - use Finish only this note. remove others Finish

Thanks big help im fixing it in a few hours to late here :s thanks alot

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello! Here you mod request via my Tail Mods! Mod Request!

[Easy]

I want to start by saying that I find it has a somewhat accelerated pace for an easy level ..
The Sliders are somewhat ugly. : c Look, Take it to the map longer ..
00:27:870 (1,3) Do not put notes on others as the novice player will not notice ..

lol i think is very easy i can do it with fl hr dt and hd

[Normal]

00:46:162 Find which is the best place for a Spinner?

mmm i think spinner is well in this position

[Hard]

No need to make 2 normal ._.

Hard is more diff to normal one

[Insane]

This is the same difficult with smaller Notes :c

im remaking it

It seems like 4 levels are normal, the normal Easy Notes is a Giants, The Normal is well done, the difficult one smaller notes normal and just insane .. : c
Fix this man ..