mebins wrote:

EASY
00:36:773(2) This sliders kinda random, ( what part of the song is it following ?) timing points
00:45:106(1,2) these sliders are not that good looking fixed
00:53:608 (2) this slider seems out of place instead of reversing it just extend it? fixed
01:10:703(2) again seems out of place fixed
01:11:672(1) move it here? fixed
01:21:523(1) move note here, make it reverse once fixed
01:22:579(2) move note here and make it reverse twice fixed
01:23:986(?) add note here fixed

NORMAL
I couldnt find any problems ^.^"
But i feel like the notes are placed kinda blocky in some areas like 00:29:844
00:39:106 i think about it

HARD
00:13:803(1,2) these sliders are to short fixed
00:27:888(1) this slider looks kinda bad fixed

00:33:512(1) extend till its 00:34:572 and then delete note (2) fixed
00:40:774(1) not matching the music fixed
00:51:825(1) this note does not fit at all fixed
01:11:584(1) extend this slider or something? fixed
01:17:705(1) fix this slider by making it more curvey please... fixed
01:19:183(1) ^

INSANE
00:16:606(3) make this slider look better >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/542510 i will think about it
00:56:817(2,3,4,5) this stream is not really needed. fixed


I love the guitar in this song good luck and listen to your notes at 75% to see if your actually hitting them on the right time. Best of luck!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello Natsu~ Hi
Modding as you requested.
Lets see...

[General]

Please change the default skin to "User's Preference." There is no point in forcing players to use the default skin when playing your map. Done

Your hitsounding is much too quiet. I can't hear it at all. I suggest raising volumes in most places. I feel sound quiet is better for music

If you listen to the song, there is a very strong clap on each offbeat. Because of this, you should have a clap on each offbeat note in your maps. As of now you haven't used any claps. Done

You use too many finishes. They can get noisy, especially when there is not finish in the music, or the finish is used somewhere other than a strong downbeat or accented beat. Done

[Easy]

00:08:869 (1) - You need to remove or shorten this spinner because the 00:12:393 (1) appears 3 beats before the spinner is done. This is very confusing for beginner players. In general you should have at least two beats of break time after a spinner to give time for the beginning player to recover. Done

00:13:803 to 00:22:242 - I don't understand your choice of rhythm here. It's not following the song very well. It's following the off rhythm and feels strange. The gap at 00:14:860 makes no sense. It should be more like this:'

Done
The new combos are on the downbeats (sliders) instead of the offbeats (single circles) and it feels much nicer with the music. Just move 00:13:803 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) left one beat and fix newcombos.

Done

00:19:410 (1) - Remove finish from head. Done
00:22:242 (1) - ^ Done

00:34:219 (1) - Remove NC Done

00:42:664 (1) - This spinner is far too short for an easy difficulty. I suggest removing it and adding circles or sliders instead. Done

00:46:162 (1,2,1,2) - These rhythms feel quite weird. The slider should be on the downbeat and not the offbeat. The rhythm feels disconnected. Done

00:49:354 (2,1) - Large spacing increase here? Done

00:53:608 (2) - This slider isn't following anything and is confusing because the repeat falls on a red tick. I suggest a rhythm like this:

00:52:181 (2) to 00:56:104 (3)

Done

00:57:530 (2,1) - Why this massive jump? This is impossible to read for a beginner. Please stick with 1.0 spacing throughout the map. Done

01:02:500 - This pause is very awkward. Nothing in the music suggests a pause here. Done

01:13:421 (2) - Unsnapped slider end. Done

01:27:149 (1,1) - I advise against ending the easy difficulty with two spinners. New players tend to hate spinners. Im thinking about remove first and plant some slider

There's a lot to work on here. You rhythms are very disjointed from the song. That is, most of the time you have your strong sliders falling of the offbeats and it feels terrible.

[Normal]

Too many new combos here. It's alright to let your combos get into higher numbers here.
00:13:803 (1) - No reason for NC here. Done
00:16:606 (1) - ^ Done
etc etc...
00:19:057 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:19:057 (1) - I'm confused as to what this long slider that starts on the offbeat is mapped to... Done
00:22:242 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:25:082 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:33:512 (1) - Remove NC Done
You get the point.

00:37:741 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This kind of placement is quite boring. Can't you make something more original and fun? Done

00:45:106 (1) - This slider is very awkward and is not following the rhythm very well imo. Done

00:56:104 (1,2,1) - Spacing inconsistent. Done

01:12:721 (1) - No reason for NC here I don't think. Done

The rhythms through the kiai time are quite good though.

[Hard]

Again here, too many new combos. You shouldn't new combo in the middle of a vocal verse, like at 00:19:410 (1). Adding a new combo there is just confusing. Think about that all over the maps.

00:13:803 (1,2) - Unsnapped slider ends... Done

00:33:512 (1) - There are so many repeats on this slider... Please do not do this. The spinner should start at 00:34:926 like the insane diff. Done

[Insane]

Again think about new combos. There's just too many.

00:50:413 (1) - Remove NC Done

01:00:618 (2) - Slider is unsnapped. Please snap it to 01:00:559 and have it stack with the 01:00:383 (1). It will play much better. Done
01:08:030 (3) - ^ Unsnapped. Done

01:24:338 (1) - Unsnapped slider end Done


Anyways, I hope it's helpful. I don't like this song.

TMAstraf wrote:

Thats a good map! =)
I have nothing to complain about.

Only one: Maybe the Slider on Insane Time: 01:01:794 a little bit shorter ;D

lkx_shore wrote:

[General]
why not use of more arc slider?
Kiai time start on 00:56:104
Kiai time over on 01:32:775

[Easy]
You'd better use 0.40 SV...1.00 SV is too fast....
00:43:364 (5) - add whistle?
00:53:608 (2) - Change into → http://puu.sh/1FTV0
01:13:071 (1) - Change into → http://puu.sh/1FU0k
01:14:822 (1) - check this

[Normal]
00:19:057 (3) - Change into http://puu.sh/1FU3r
00:26:469 (1) - too distortion......
00:37:741 (1) - ^
00:38:442 (2) - ^
00:43:711 (2) - 1.24x....why not 1.0x

[Hard]
AR+1

[Insane]
00:40:564 (1) - too distortion
01:01:794 (4) - Change into http://puu.sh/1FUa3
01:30:676 (3) - Change into http://puu.sh/1FUaX


Goodluck to you.

jonathanlfj wrote:

Rechecking as promised

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
volume i feel is too low, perhaps use 40% for all diffs?

[Easy]
The NC patterns look very spammed...i suggest take every other NC off so its not 2 notes for every NC (or just NC every 2 verses)
00:25:082 (1) - center this
00:37:741 (1) - finish on slider head
00:53:608 (2) - the repeat in the middle is not following anything, i suggest this rhythm:
01:11:672 (1) - stack this perfectly under 01:10:262 (1)
01:13:421 (2) - same as 00:53:608 (2)
01:29:977 (1) - keep this spinner's end at a lower volume if you apply my volume suggestions, and end it at 01:32:775 (1). This applies to every diff

[Normal]
00:08:869 (1) - end this at 00:11:865
00:27:870 (1) - take off NC
00:30:684 (1) - ^
00:37:741 (1) - finish on slider head
00:45:106 (1) - you start doing NC every verse again, if you apply my NC suggestion on Easy then its good that you do it here as well
01:07:441 (1) - finish on slider head
01:15:881 (1) - finish
01:21:523 (1) - finish on head
Try to keep your finish patterns consistent like on other diffs, if you are not sure you can always refer to your other diffs as to where to put what hitsound

[Hard]
00:08:869 (1) - same as Normal
00:37:741 (1) - finish on slider head
00:41:615 (2) - stack perfectly under 00:40:209 (3)
00:50:060 (2) - ^ under 00:50:060 (2)
00:51:825 (1,2) - adjust spacing
00:58:957 (3) - NC
01:05:324 (2) - finish kinda sounds random, take it off?
01:28:553 (1,2,3,4) - this can look better~ (raise 01:29:621 (4) to be parallel with 01:28:909 (2))

[Insane]
00:08:869 (1) - same as Normal
00:33:512 (1,2,3,4) - center this on y axis
00:40:564 (5) - clap on slider end
00:45:810 (3) - clap
00:55:391 (3,4) - why not put a stream here? it makes it more insane and challenging~

SPOILER

01:01:794 (4) - this slider should end at 01:02:147
01:07:088 (4,1) - stream it

SPOILER

01:21:523 (1) - finish on head?
01:30:676 (3) - end at 01:31:026
the clap pattern in this diff is quite clever, you should do it to other diffs as well, especially Normal

Thats about it, I can see great improvements in the mapset, so have a star and good luck ^_^

[Ranger] wrote:

From m4m

[Easy]
00:37:741 (1) - How about make symmetry?
Exemple

00:57:530 (4) - Change the circle slider up to 00:58:599(And delete 00:57:887 (1)),I think it's better

[Normal]
01:22:931 (1) - Add Finish here?

[Hardl]
01:27:149 (1) - From "Hard rock"mode,This silder touch the Hp bar,move to the top

[Insanel]
00:17:999 (4) - Finish here?
00:29:271 (1) - ^
00:55:628 (3,4,5,6) - How about add whistle instead finish?
01:07:441 (2,3,4,6) - I think this part do not belong to the beat

well...that`s all to me
Good luck

Ty im modding your map too be pacient im doing the best i can

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ Mod Request via my Mod Queue~

[overall]
- why you use so many red line o_O? maybe ur timing is wrong.. cuz is in 1/3

I think your correct timing is BPM 170 offset 8094 was in 170 but a mat told me the song got a variable bpm and charles help me to timing it

and...cuz you timing not right,i can't help you with a nazi mod ;3
just give you some suggestion~

- your colors setting can use more fit with the BG' color ^_^
(like whrite,boy's hair color,girl's dress color..etc) Thanks about colours i will do

Hard diff's setting:HP+1/+2 will more like hard i will fix it
Normal diff's setting:3~5 will more like normal~ i will fix it
and your Insane Slider Velocity use 1.20 i think it's too low I think about it
:/ maybe 1.40up wull more like insane~

fix them your map will better ww okay

good luck 'w'/

Thanks good luck too

K i A i wrote:

Ok, for recheck

[easy]
00:14:860 (3) - move this object for certain distance~ (ex - x:356 y:60)
00:24:372 (2,3) - easy diff is not allowed for 'Anti Jump'.. move this object 00:24:372 (2) - (ex - x:260 y:100)
00:46:514 (3) - I think this object is not necessarily many control points.. this object is suitable for only 3 control points. how about decrease some control points? (just my opinion )
00:50:413 (3) - correct this object for certain distance

[normal]
00:33:159 (2) - set down 2grid for distance

[hard]
00:37:741 (1) - this slider's end part must be on here 00:38:442

[insane]
00:56:817 (8) - NC
00:57:530 (1) - remove NC
01:07:441 (4) - NC
01:07:559 (5,6) - delete this object
01:07:794 - how about add the circle note here? (x:84 y:88) (just my opinion )



wow.. your beatmap is better nice than before!
star~

Good luck!

[Pisces] wrote:

[General]

so bad quality Background...
what about this?[

SPOILER

Thanks for bg

[Easy]

00:08:869 (1) - Replace Whistle to Finish I will do
00:12:393 (1) - add clap on here (00:13:098) I will do
00:27:170 (4) - Whistle I will do
00:32:098 (3) - whistle on 00:32:805 I will do
00:39:144 (2) - Remove Finish start slide I will do
00:56:817 (3) - Replace Finish to Whistle I will do
01:12:021 (4) - more smoothly!
01:13:421 (2) - Remove Whistle I will do
01:26:447 (4) - clap I will do

[Normal]
+1 HP Drain Rate,+1 AR I like it easy for new players

00:27:870 (4) - So longi follow vocals thats why
00:33:159 (2) - clap I will do
00:50:766 (2) - clap end slider I will do
00:57:173 (4) - whistle I will do
01:01:794 (5) - whistle start slider I will do

[Hard]
Change Beat snap divisor 1/3 to 1/4 Mat told me is 1/3 music

00:38:793 (2) - smoothly
01:03:912 (5) - whistle I will do

[Insane]
Change Beat snap divisor 1/3 to 1/4 Mat told me is 1/3 music

00:16:606 (3) - ugly slide... I fix it i make nice
00:37:391 - Add Circle note

Natsu wrote:

Pero es que me gusta como se ve xD voy a pensar si lo cambio

Harez wrote:

hi~ from my queue, i think your map is good enough, so i just make hitsound suggestion

[General]
D: so much Timing Points Charles445 found the timing so i think is good

[Easy]
00:12:394 (1) - remove clap in start, add clap in repeat
00:13:451 - add a note in 360,292 with a clap
00:15:213 (1) - remove clap
00:15:561 (2) - add clap in start and end
00:17:999 (1) - remove clap
00:18:351 (2) - add clap in start and end
00:19:410 (3) - remove clap
00:28:220 (2) - add clap in start and end
00:29:624 (4) - ^
00:49:354 (2) - ^
00:50:413 (3,4) - add clap in end
00:52:181 (2,4) - add clap in start and end
01:00:735 (2) - add clap in end
01:02:853 (4) - add clap in start
01:03:559 (5,2,4,2,4,2,4,3) - add clap in start and end
01:16:234 (2) - remove clap in repeat, add clap in start and end
01:20:467 (1,3) - add clap
01:22:579 (5) - add clap in start
01:23:283 (6) - add clap in start and end
01:24:338 (1) - remove clap in start, add clap in end
01:25:042 (2) - remove clap in start and end, add clap in repeat
01:26:096 (3,5) - add clap

[Normal]
00:17:302 (5) - add whistle in repeat
00:18:351 (1) - add clap
00:19:057 (3) - add whistle in start and end
00:23:307 (9) - add clap
00:25:082 (4) - add whistle in end
00:26:469 (1) - ^
00:33:159 (2,4) - add clap
00:50:766 (2) - add clap in start and end

[Hard]
do like Easy / Normal diff..
Try this

[Insane]
00:16:606 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/551614
01:07:559 (5,6,7) - delete

My suggest, change some pattern in all diff, i feel boring if you just using straight jump, straight slider

nattap wrote:

I'm here for M4M but I'm quite new if you think it's useless feel free to PM me I'll try again

[General]

I recommended kiai at 00:56:104 I think about it i think is ok now

[Easy]

00:14:860 (3) - I think This note is a little bit too close to last one please consider moving 00:13:803 (2)
01:03:559 (5) - How about http://puu.sh/1IpHl that see better
01:29:977 (1) - I think It's too loud I think 15% is better

[Normal]

01:29:977 (1) - It's not the same as other diff maybe made all of them like this or change it like others wut is not the same?

[Hard]

01:29:977 (1) - like other diff what?

[Insane]

00:13:803 (5,6,7) - Too far I think (but no suggestion sry) well is insane i get SS with HD so is posible
00:32:098 (1,2) - may be like http://puu.sh/1IpUH thats look great i will change it
01:07:559 (5) - remove finish
01:07:794 (7) - add clap
01:31:376 (1) - like other diff

Natsu wrote:

[Normal]

01:29:977 (1) - It's not the same as other diff maybe made all of them like this or change it like others wut is not the same?
It is not hitfinish sound while other diff are hitfinish

[Hard]

01:29:977 (1) - like other diff what?
I mean easy (lower the volume) sorry to make you confuse insane as well