1. Easy (1,89 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (4,63 stars, 168 notes)
3. Normal (3,43 stars, 102 notes)

Akashi_S wrote:

Love this song God. Toradora, I watched that several times..
Minori is in the BG, but not in part of the song T____T sad.

First of all, thank you for the M4M..
I'm a newbie modder/mapper, so please bear with me.


[General]
How about adding 'xmas' or 'christmas' to the tags? The song is related to Christmas so.. -okay
I think it's still good to map easy/normal for the beginning part...

BG image / music file - clear.

[Easy]
Nothing to say about it.

[Normal]
01:18:516 (2) - center align for this matching with 01:17:425 (4)? if possible. If applied, move (1) appropriately with correct distance. -nazi but ok
01:21:516 (4) - just an opinion: instead of the slider, a circle at 01:21:788?
01:35:425 (1) - End the spinner at 01:37:061 ? I think it's okay here imo. because at 01:37:606, there's a music that made me think there should be a 'note' not 'end of a spinner' (same in EASY too)

[Hard]
00:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try using polygon circle function.. I think you can make a great pentagon shape with that. okay
00:52:607 (2,3,4) - I think this is too big of a jump here. Prev/Next 2.0x ~ 2.2x would be great for hard imo. but this part has some aesthetic value, so if you don't feel like changing it, you can ignore this.
00:56:152 (1) - Starting from here, the distance became about halved. So I would like the sliders to be little bit slow down here, and start back to normal SV from 01:02:697 as it reaches the climax of the song. -didn't fixed, you maybe don't understand why it is like it is

Good luck mapping
and ranked by Christmas eve!!
Star~

Shoily wrote:

Yo~ noob mod from my modding queue

[General]
Cute SB!
About the title, there is a new ranking rule that you can not use Short ver., Cut ver., etc in a title ( Read here: p/1644655 )
You might have to change it :<
All the files seems ok~

[Easy]

Nice diff
00:23:425 - Maybe replace this spinner with 2 sliders like this:
Instead start the spinner at 00:27:788 and end at 00:29:979
01:13:062 - Maybe add a hitcircle here

[Normal]
It's pretty good....not many problems

00:23:425 - Same as Easy
01:13:109 - Maybe add a hitcircle here to go with the flow of the song?

[Hard]
I can't really fault this diff...its fine.


sorry for the lame mod....I bet this will get ranked really really soon! Good luck!

1. You have one obvious "tick" sound in the background which you don't emphasize. I guess that are bells sounds, whistles at them can fit very well.
   You can see what am I talking about if you check these timelinks:
   00:16:879 - 00:19:061 - 00:21:243 - 00:23:425 - 00:25:606 -
   These are only examples. If you want to place whistles or something else fitting at such sounds, recheck the whole map and try to find such similar stuff.

1. 00:06:243 (4) - This slider lands better if you place it 1/2 later. Then it will emphasize "tick" sounds really good.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:09:243 (6) - Try to place it's end closer to the next slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:50:152 (2) - This one is not aligned perfectly with 2 previous sliders. Ctrl+R it, move to 216;184. Ctrl+R back.
4. 01:02:152 (6,1,2) - This stuff looks kinda ugly, I don't like how cluttered is this pattern. Slider shapes do not fit the little triplet, it looks like a broken line. Try this: (rearrange 01:02:698 (3,4,5,1) - if you fix move (3) ofc)
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:13:879 - 01:14:697 - I can hear a little 1/4 stream here... It's clearly noticeable in music, so probably try to place it here? I really doubt if it will not become too streamy, but just letting you know.
6. Also from 01:15:243 to 01:15:788 - ^ same, and some more similar notes later. Though I think it is all fine as it is, no real need to make it full of 1/4
7. 01:26:425 (1,2,3) - Place them at the same 1.2x distance as everything else. I don't see a reason for 1.5x tiny "jump"

1. This map has the same hitsounds suggestion as Hard too. Though, if you find out that you get too many whistles when adding them at bell sounds, try to remove some of whistles you have set on vocals. I really think that whistles fit tick sounds better.
2. 00:06:243 (3) - Move this one 1/2 later for the same reason as in Hard. You might also want to add a note at 00:06:243 - afterwards.
3. 00:15:788 - Try to place a note here for the sake of making this map more rhythmic. This note will land on the downbeat, it will be a nice base for the upcoming red ticker slider. It also has a tiny tick sound there.
4. 00:18:789 (1) - Again, it would be nice to emphasize this by placing a note 1/2 earlier. Bells are really loud there. Solution: move this slider 1/2 earlier, Ctrl+R it and add a repeat.
5. 00:48:516 (6) - Wellp... If you listen to the vocals, you'll see that it's better to move this one 1/2 later, or just remove it and place a single note at 00:48:788. You can also try something like this, but anyway, you just need a note at 00:48:788
6. 00:56:152 (1) - Move it 1 grid up and left :v It will encircle everything a bit better
7. 01:21:516 (4,1) - You start a new chorus from the slider (1)'s end. It leaves it unstressed and stuff. Change this all in that way to emphasize vocals more:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:26:697 (2) - To fit vocals, better move it 1/2 later and place a note here, at 01:26:697
9. 01:28:879 (2) - Saame.

1. Same hitsounds stuff. But here you'll totally have to remove some of your whistles if you like my hitsound suggestion. For example, if you place whistle at 00:09:243 - , you'll have to remove it from slider head, because two whistles sounds overmuch :c
2. 00:17:425 (2,1) - I wish they could form a straight pattern too. Solution: 00:16:334 (1) - Move it to 452;136 to make it centered perfectly. Then move 00:17:425 (2) - to y:192 too (horizontal line), then move 00:18:516 (1,2) - closer, at 1.0x. Done.
3. 00:19:062 (2,1) - These are not symmetrical over the horizontal line. Select it and press Ctrl+J to see it.
4. Hm, I have noticed that you use 1/1 sliders A LOT. Check this: 00:15:243 (2,1,2) - 00:41:971 (2,3,4,1,2) - everything is just a constant 1/1 slider spam. Replace some sliders by two circles, choose any of them which you want to replace with circles more. This will bring more variety to your patterns. But please check not only that two timelink I provided, check the whole map for this.

grumd wrote:

— Overall
Delete the extra .osb file and full submit.
Also, your thread title is not the same as song title, maybe change it?

Hard

— Overall
OD+1 please. It is too easy to get SS now, but it's the hardest diff here...

— Hitsounds pattern

1. You have one obvious "tick" sound in the background which you don't emphasize. I guess that are bells sounds, whistles at them can fit very well.
   You can see what am I talking about if you check these timelinks:
   00:16:879 - 00:19:061 - 00:21:243 - 00:23:425 - 00:25:606 -
   These are only examples. If you want to place whistles or something else fitting at such sounds, recheck the whole map and try to find such similar stuff.

— Mapping

1. 00:06:243 (4) - This slider lands better if you place it 1/2 later. Then it will emphasize "tick" sounds really good. -mostly fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:09:243 (6) - Try to place it's end closer to the next slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:50:152 (2) - This one is not aligned perfectly with 2 previous sliders. Ctrl+R it, move to 216;184. Ctrl+R back.
4. 01:02:152 (6,1,2) - This stuff looks kinda ugly, I don't like how cluttered is this pattern. Slider shapes do not fit the little triplet, it looks like a broken line. Try this: (rearrange 01:02:698 (3,4,5,1) - if you fix move (3) ofc)
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:13:879 - 01:14:697 - I can hear a little 1/4 stream here... It's clearly noticeable in music, so probably try to place it here? I really doubt if it will not become too streamy, but just letting you know. -sorry the guitar is not meant to be mapped on this beatmap
6. Also from 01:15:243 to 01:15:788 - ^ same, and some more similar notes later. Though I think it is all fine as it is, no real need to make it full of 1/4 -sorry ^
7. 01:26:425 (1,2,3) - Place them at the same 1.2x distance as everything else. I don't see a reason for 1.5x tiny "jump"

Normal

— Mapping

1. This map has the same hitsounds suggestion as Hard too. Though, if you find out that you get too many whistles when adding them at bell sounds, try to remove some of whistles you have set on vocals. I really think that whistles fit tick sounds better.
2. 00:06:243 (3) - Move this one 1/2 later for the same reason as in Hard. You might also want to add a note at 00:06:243 - afterwards.
3. 00:15:788 - Try to place a note here for the sake of making this map more rhythmic. This note will land on the downbeat, it will be a nice base for the upcoming red ticker slider. It also has a tiny tick sound there.
4. 00:18:789 (1) - Again, it would be nice to emphasize this by placing a note 1/2 earlier. Bells are really loud there. Solution: move this slider 1/2 earlier, Ctrl+R it and add a repeat.
5. 00:48:516 (6) - Wellp... If you listen to the vocals, you'll see that it's better to move this one 1/2 later, or just remove it and place a single note at 00:48:788. You can also try something like this, but anyway, you just need a note at 00:48:788
6. 00:56:152 (1) - Move it 1 grid up and left :v It will encircle everything a bit better
7. 01:21:516 (4,1) - You start a new chorus from the slider (1)'s end. It leaves it unstressed and stuff. Change this all in that way to emphasize vocals more:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:26:697 (2) - To fit vocals, better move it 1/2 later and place a note here, at 01:26:697 -sorry I don't want have the next slider so close to this
9. 01:28:879 (2) - Saame. -sorry, something like ^

Easy

— Mapping

1. Same hitsounds stuff. But here you'll totally have to remove some of your whistles if you like my hitsound suggestion. For example, if you place whistle at 00:09:243 - , you'll have to remove it from slider head, because two whistles sounds overmuch :c
2. 00:17:425 (2,1) - I wish they could form a straight pattern too. Solution: 00:16:334 (1) - Move it to 452;136 to make it centered perfectly. Then move 00:17:425 (2) - to y:192 too (horizontal line), then move 00:18:516 (1,2) - closer, at 1.0x. Done.
3. 00:19:062 (2,1) - These are not symmetrical over the horizontal line. Select it and press Ctrl+J to see it.
4. Hm, I have noticed that you use 1/1 sliders A LOT. Check this: 00:15:243 (2,1,2) - 00:41:971 (2,3,4,1,2) - everything is just a constant 1/1 slider spam. Replace some sliders by two circles, choose any of them which you want to replace with circles more. This will bring more variety to your patterns. But please check not only that two timelink I provided, check the whole map for this.

SPOILER

09:48 dragonxcz: HI~~ So I fixed almost everything you wrote in your mod. But I must ask you first about "bell hitsounds". Do
09:48 dragonxcz: you think that I can use custom whistle for them and it will solve problem with consistent hitsounding style
09:48 dragonxcz: and it will not sound weird if there will be 2 diffirent whistles in a row?
09:48 grumd: it will not sound weird imo
09:48 grumd: i though about adding custom hitsound there
09:48 grumd: it could fit if you find a good one
09:49 dragonxcz: Okay. So I'll try to find some awesome bells and use them. Thank you
09:49 grumd: good luck :3
09:53 grumd: btw you havent updated reply to my mod :v
09:55 dragonxcz: Okay, I'll only write what I didn't fixed, becasuse I don't want to write everywhere "done, done done.." okay?
09:55 dragonxcz:
09:56 grumd: yea-yea
10:05 dragonxcz: Okay, I edited it
10:19 grumd: are you here?
10:19 dragonxcz: yeah i'm
10:19 grumd: 01:31:062 (1) - forgot about it
10:19 grumd: please make it similar shaped to 01:32:152 (4) -
10:20 dragonxcz: Oh.. yep
10:20 grumd: 00:40:334 (6,7,1) - also: i don't really like 1.2x here, it kinda doesnt fit..
10:20 grumd: cuz you mostly placed 1.2 at kiai, you know
10:20 grumd: 00:39:789 (5) - also this jump, im not sure it's needed here
10:21 grumd: 00:43:061 (5,6) - and this 1.2x too
10:21 grumd: it would be better to keep constant 1.0 at this part imo
10:22 grumd: 00:50:152 (2) - uh, 1 grid up pls... it's still a bit off
10:22 grumd: 01:02:562 (2) - 1 grid left
10:22 grumd: 01:02:425 (1) - and 1 grid up if you like it
10:22 dragonxcz: Upss... 1,2 was meant only for kiai and I used it in normal part lol
10:22 grumd: yep
10:23 grumd: i was a bit lazy and havent mentioned it xD
10:23 grumd: 01:14:152 (2) - a bit of phylosophy about this one
10:24 grumd: it is at 1.2 from prev and next object but
10:24 grumd: it look closer to previous
10:24 grumd: why?
10:24 grumd: because most of it's body is closer to it
10:24 grumd: wellp, i mean that you'd better move it a bit to the right or something like that, to place it closer to the center
10:24 grumd: between prev and next
10:24 grumd: let me screenshot
10:25 grumd: http://puu.sh/19YGX changed shape a bit also
10:25 dragonxcz: I'll answer you everything, just bit can't catch it all
10:25 grumd: yea, you still have this log so just move on
10:26 grumd: i'm going to eat anyway, see you in some minutes
10:26 dragonxcz: yea
10:33 grumd: 01:21:789 (1) - here again
10:33 grumd: visually (1) is closer to (6)
10:33 grumd: far closer
10:34 grumd: http://puu.sh/19YMq something like that looks better
10:35 dragonxcz: fixed
10:35 grumd: fine!
10:38 grumd: 00:19:061 (2) - in rasy
10:38 grumd: easy
10:38 grumd: its still not symmetrical
10:41 dragonxcz: 00:19:061 (2) - Do you think nonsymmetrical shape?
10:41 grumd: yea, press ctrl+j and see how slider points move
10:41 grumd: solution
10:41 grumd: first point (slider start) 1 grid up
10:41 grumd: second point 1 grid left
10:41 grumd: oh wait sorry
10:42 grumd: second point 1 grid _right_
10:42 grumd: and first 1 grid up, yea
10:42 dragonxcz: Uhm... when I was making this slider I wasn't skilled at making perfectly symmetrical sliders so it's not perfect
10:42 dragonxcz: Fixing it already.
10:43 grumd: to make a perfectly symmetrical slider, make it's handle point to be symmetrical, that's all
10:43 grumd: 00:21:243 (1) - ofc dont forget to copypaste
10:43 dragonxcz: ofc
10:44 grumd: 00:45:243 - try to replace this one with circles too
10:44 grumd: [easy] still
10:45 grumd: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446991
10:45 dragonxcz: yay
10:46 grumd: im also interested
10:46 grumd: wtf is with your combo colors?
10:46 grumd: it looks like you placed them manually
10:46 grumd: all the kiai is grey-blue, and only one red combo in the end
10:47 grumd: lol yea
10:47 dragonxcz: Yeah, and it makes sense. I'll explain how it makes sense.
10:47 grumd: and start of the song is colorful
10:47 grumd: huh i like it somewhy
10:47 grumd: ok explain
10:51 dragonxcz: Song starts with light gray color, because it starts calm. Normal stuff is colored like - blue, red, light brown,
10:51 dragonxcz: 00:53:970 - since this it gets calm again so I'm using light gray, gray and light brown (because of singing
10:51 dragonxcz: character). And light gray color on and because it gets calmly and ends.
10:51 grumd: true1
10:51 grumd: yep i like it
10:52 dragonxcz: I'm glad
10:52 grumd: post the log if you want btw

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~


[General]
- You dont need a music track lead-in because you start mapping at 00:05:425.
- Make the topic name and map's title match? -okay


[Normal]
- Overall Difficulty +1 ? -sorry nope
00:15:788 (1) - Remove this note? -nope


[Hard]
01:10:061 - Add a circle? -okay
01:11:152 - ^ -okay
01:17:288 - ^ -nope
01:23:212 - ^ -nope



Well mapped ~
Good luck and star! >w<

1. Is this really an official (Short ver.)?
2. You should ask a BAT to change the title appearance to 00:27:788 - (27788). it's a really easy task for them so they shouldn't be able to refuse it.
   The only problem is that you have a long spinner on [Hard] at 00:27:925 (1)
3. The offset should be either -574ms or 1606ms. This wont affect timing, but the time signature will be more correct.
4. Add Christmas & Xmas to the tags
5. Nice SB btw

Saten wrote:

taiga

[General]

1. Is this really an official (Short ver.)?
2. You should ask a BAT to change the title appearance to 00:27:788 - (27788). it's a really easy task for them so they shouldn't be able to refuse it.
   The only problem is that you have a long spinner on [Hard] at 00:27:925 (1)
3. The offset should be either -574ms or 1606ms. This wont affect timing, but the time signature will be more correct.
4. Add Christmas & Xmas to the tags
5. Nice SB btw

[Hard]
Make the lead-in-time a plain 1 sec instead
00:01:062 (1) - whistle on end
00:02:698 (3) - whistle
00:03:652 (1) - ^
00:05:425 (1) - remove whistle? I don't hear anything in the background that resembles a whistle hitsound
00:36:243 (1) - finish on repeat
00:53:698 (7) - whistle

[Normal]
00:05:425 (1) - Remove whistle from head?
00:23:425 (1) - Finish
00:36:516 (2) - finish on head
01:09:243 (1) - whistle
01:22:334 (3) - finish on head, just like on Hard

[Easy]
00:05:425 (1) - remove whistle from head
00:23:425 (1) - finish
00:36:516 (1) - finish on head
01:09:243 (1) - whistle


Why are your [Hard]'s go good D:

Good luck :3

1. this is not a shor ver but a cut ver, is it?
   then, the length of original version is 3:01, and yours is about 1:43.
   so according to the guidelines, you shouldn't add anything in the title.
2. the leadin of Easy and Hard aren't necessary. you should set them to 0.

• I don't know about SB well, but a few letters were wrong so I'd like to tell you.
  red means different from yours.
  03 - さあ　クリスマス　いっぱいの願い
  10 - チカチカ　瞬いて　みんなが夢をみて
  13 - same as 03

• 00:03:652 (1) - this spinner should be started from 00:03:789 imo.
  but in the case if you feel it too short, I recommend you to replace with a slider. anyway, current timing seems strange to me.
  00:06:516 (5) - hmm..this whistle is too loud for me. try 30%. and same as other whistle(I mention about SC:2).
  00:08:152 (3) - I really want some hit sound of the head of this slider. consider to add whistle.
  00:12:516, 00:13:062, 00:13:607 - how about soft-hitwhistle2 here? in the song, these three are really emphasized. and same as in Easy and Normal.
  00:26:151 (2) - snap this.
  00:27:242 (4) - ^
  00:52:607 (2,3,4) - hmm..this large jump seems unnatural and break the flow of difficulty.
  also, after this jump, there are streams or 00:53:425 (5,6,7). it's really difficult imo.
  how about shorten the distance of jump?
  00:56:971 (4,5) - it's unnatural to divide the notes between (4) and (5). I think the rhythm like this follows the lyrics better. but just nazi
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:31:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - hm..why the distances are so large? in the song, there isn't so swelled, so this jumps aren't fit with the melody imo.

• excepting some connection between two notes like 00:10:062 (1,2) should be improved, it seems fine.

• 00:46:334 (3) - blanket (2)?

• hi
  m4m from Wantuole's mod queue~
  
  [Easy]

1. 00:11:971(3)try this
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:153(1)^
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:21:244(1)remove nc
4. 00:58:335(1)rhythm like this will be more appropriate
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:30:516(4)^
   SPOILER

   
   
   [Normal]
6. 00:40:062(4)
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:56:153-01:02:153 This rhythm sounds a little strange
   just some suggestions
   start from 00:56:153
   SPOILER

   
   and 00:59:426
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:08:153(3)this may look better
   SPOILER

   
   
   [Hard]
9. OD-1
10. 00:03:244(5)remove whistle
11. 00:40:607(7)remove note
12. 00:58:062(6)remove note
13. there are also some suggestions about rhythm
    00:13:607(6)
    SPOILER

    
    00:43:607(7)
    SPOILER

    
    00:45:244(1)
    SPOILER

    
    01:05:971(3)
    SPOILER

    

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Hi for the M4M

[Hard]
00:15:789 add note with whistle
00:18:216 remove NC
thats all i could find

oh by the way try using this skin to add more to atmosphere http://www.mediafire.com/?z7eehz1k52561#myfiles you may have to download one file at a time sorry.

General

Hard

kurohana wrote:

General

1. Silencing hitsounds is unrankable, fix that. -explain...
2. You have to change AutoLeadIn in Hard to 1500 like the other diffs too. -OK
3. You got 2 .osb-files in your songfolder, delete one of them. You only need one.-OK

Hard

1. 01:33:243 (1,2) - Looks strange, move them like this? -sorry but "looks strange" is not good explain to know, why to fix it and I like it how I already made it
2. 00:26:151 (2) - Unsnapped circle -you think distance snap? Sad think that you don't know that it's rankable.
3. 00:27:242 (4) - ^

-^

Allright, you have to fix the bold red things.

Good luck ^^

those wrote:

Yo where's the title and artist LOL

Heatherfield wrote:

[Easy]
I think putting whistle on the first and the third white lines would fit more at the beginning part.

[Normal]
00:15:788 (1) - whistle?
00:19:334 (2) - mid of the slider add whistle? lower volume would be best
00:21:516 (4) - end of slider ^
^this part is kinda lack of hitsound so i made these recommends, Hard feels different.

[Hard]
01:04:334 (1) - maybe move nc to 01:04:880? i know what you mean but this makes more sense to me
I think you should try more jumps in this map, it seems a little boring atm.
01:32:698 (5) - try convert this into 2 notes' jump, seems good -only this fixed


all of the above are just suggestions, actually this map has nothing much to mod, good luck

Static Noise Bird wrote:

M4M from mod queue~

[Easy]
00:57:243 (2) - Add clap (slider end) -unnecessary
01:29:970 (3) - Add whistle -^

[Normal]
01:08:153 (3) - Add clap (slider end) -oh.. it was missing thanks

And everything else seems fine.

Good luck, I'd like to see this ranked near Christmas~

1. 00:05:971 - This time needs to be a stanza multiple of 4 , so either set a new red line here, or just bring the offset to 5971 (much easier to hitsound now since we can change the sampleset without using green lines, so the position of the first timing point isn't as important).
2. 00:27:789 - Red line here.
3. 01:13:607 - Red line here.
4. I also noticed at least one unnecessary inherited timing point. Please go through your three diffs to check for green lines that can be deleted.

1. If I'm downloading this correctly it shows you have unused .osb files because of artist/title name mishaps. Delete them.
2. It also shows that you should move all elements 1ms forward to be in sync with offset.
3. ami.png and taiga.png should only consist of the character without the text box. This way you can keep both.png on the screen while just placing the characters over this image instead of a new image. Additionally, if you pay attention, you can actually notice the fading away of the text box, which is a bit of a problem on the aesthetic level.
4. The lyrics are not vertically centered; perhaps you'd wanna move them so that they are?
5. logo.png might be better if centered and moved up from 1062 to 2698, while keeping the fade the same. Something about the stopping and fading at the same time is a little displeasing. Try this code.
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"storyboard\logo.png",320,240
   _F,0,1062,1607,0,1
   _MY,0,1062,3789,150,120
   _F,0,3789,4880,1
   _F,0,4880,5426,1,0

those wrote:

Alright, here I go...

[General]

1. 00:05:971 - This time needs to be a stanza multiple of 4 , so either set a new red line here, or just bring the offset to 5971 (much easier to hitsound now since we can change the sampleset without using green lines, so the position of the first timing point isn't as important).
2. 00:27:789 - Red line here.
3. 01:13:607 - Red line here.
4. I also noticed at least one unnecessary inherited timing point. Please go through your three diffs to check for green lines that can be deleted.

[SB]

1. If I'm downloading this correctly it shows you have unused .osb files because of artist/title name mishaps. Delete them.
2. It also shows that you should move all elements 1ms forward to be in sync with offset.
3. ami.png and taiga.png should only consist of the character without the text box. This way you can keep both.png on the screen while just placing the characters over this image instead of a new image. Additionally, if you pay attention, you can actually notice the fading away of the text box, which is a bit of a problem on the aesthetic level.
4. The lyrics are not vertically centered; perhaps you'd wanna move them so that they are?
5. logo.png might be better if centered and moved up from 1062 to 2698, while keeping the fade the same. Something about the stopping and fading at the same time is a little displeasing. Try this code.
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"storyboard\logo.png",320,240
   _F,0,1062,1607,0,1
   _MY,0,1062,3789,150,120
   _F,0,3789,4880,1
   _F,0,4880,5426,1,0

Lizellota wrote:

Sorry for that ><.. but i didnt found anything, really nice map and song~ stared :<

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ dragonxcz ~

Mod time for bliss's xmas Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. You can't silence both slider ticks and slider slides together,it's unrankable.

[Hard]

1. I guess AR7 is fitting with this song.
2. 00:23:425 (1,2) - Make a perfect symmetry.
3. 00:25:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above,here is code.
   

   180,192,25606,53,2,0:0:0
   332,192,26151,1,2,0:0:0
   208,284,26697,1,0,0:0:0
   258,135,27244,1,2,0:0:0
   304,284,27788,1,4,0:0:0

4. 01:04:880 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:04:334 (1).
5. 01:13:607 - Remove whistle,sound better to me.
6. 01:22:334 - ^
7. 01:22:334 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:22:334 (2).

[Normal]

1. 00:37:062 (3) - Change curved slider,same as 00:36:516 (2).
2. 00:49:061 - Add a circle and clap,sound much better.
3. 01:13:607 - Same as Hard.
4. 01:22:334 - ^

[Easy]

1. HP-1 is better.
2. 01:13:607 - Same as Hard.
3. 01:22:334 - ^

OK ~ I hope you can getting rank on xmas ~

Good luck and fight ~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Time for me to finally start on the Christmas queue

I am really wondering what the red lines those suggested actually do. I will confirm with him later.

Easy:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
00:06:516 (2) - make the curves more defined because the slider currently looks like a malformed straight line imo
00:12:516 (4) - ^ (I'll just stop mentioning them from here on out)
00:19:061 (2) - align the ends (if you look at the grid, one end crosses the next line while the other end does not
00:21:243 (1) - ^

Combo mod:
00:38:698 (1) - remove new combo because most of the following combos are 2 tall white ticks long
00:56:152 (1) - ^

Normal:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
00:17:425 (4,2) - I don't like the overlap between the 300 from the 4 and 2
01:33:243 (1) - don't like how this touches the hp bar

Combo mod:
00:38:425 (1) - Same as Easy. If you want to make all the combos in this section 1 white tick long, that is fine by me as well (I'll leave it up to you to fis the rest of the section before the kiai section
01:17:425 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to be consistent with 00:10:062 (1)

Hard:
Normal/Aesthetics mod:
00:01:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why did you use such a small spacing with normal slider speed? It is awkward to play with such a high slider speed in comparison to ds
00:19:334 (2,3) - make these sliders symmetrical across the x-axis
00:56:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - same as 00:01:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6). If you want to do a technique like this, try changing the BPM with an inherited timing section

Combo mod:
00:43:061 (5) - New combo. In general, due to the note density, I highly advise you make the combos in this section 1 white tick long
00:47:698 (5) - ^
After the kiai, why did you want to change the way you added combos here?
01:14:698 (3) - new combo? (consistent with 00:07:334 (1))
01:21:788 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with 00:14:425 (1)

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Not a fan of the weak wave slider, but besides that, the map is not bad. After I talk with those about the red lines, I'll decide what to do with the map next.

Star Stream wrote:

All the red lines are on downbeat, they don't make any change of metronome..

those wrote:

Red lines are needed to fix Nightcore mod. If you've removed them, put them back.

dragonxcz wrote:

00:06:516 (2) - make the curves more defined because the slider currently looks like a malformed straight line imo Personally, I think this slider shape is ugly and just wanted you to change it
00:12:516 (4) - ^ (I'll just stop mentioning them from here on out)
00:19:061 (2) - align the ends (if you look at the grid, one end crosses the next line while the other end does not If you look at the start and end of the slider, they don't form a striaght line and up and down, so I want you to move the end point such that the the start and end have the same horizontal position.
00:21:243 (1) - ^

Red lines was suggested, because big white tick changes, simply for make better metronome.

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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Note: No need for kds.

First off, let me answer your questions.

dragonxcz wrote:

00:06:516 (2) - make the curves more defined because the slider currently looks like a malformed straight line imo Personally, I think this slider shape is ugly and just wanted you to change it
00:12:516 (4) - ^ (I'll just stop mentioning them from here on out)
00:19:061 (2) - align the ends (if you look at the grid, one end crosses the next line while the other end does not If you look at the start and end of the slider, they don't form a striaght line and up and down, so I want you to move the end point such that the the start and end have the same horizontal position.
00:21:243 (1) - ^

Red lines was suggested, because big white tick changes, simply for make better metronome.

I am not sure if that made things more clear or not, but I hope it helped.

Normal:
00:56:152 (1) - if you want to be consistent with your pattern of 2 long white ticks for every combo, remove this combo
01:04:062 (1) - ^
01:31:062 (1,1) - I think this is a more elegant way to fix your problem. (look at where 01:31:062 (1) is in respect to 4)

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That is really all I need to suggest for now. Call me back when you are finished, and I might be able to bubble.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sorry for the very long wait, but I am finally here again

I had some problems with the offset, so I am going to try to confirm with others.

Easy:
01:04:879 (3,1) - this slider overlap is slightly annoying when playing, so I would advise you rearrange it. -fixed

Hard:
00:06:243 (4,5) - Was talking to Gabe, and he mentioned that it makes mroe sense for the slider to follow the lyrics rather than the bells. If you want to change that, go right ahead, but I personally don't care either way xD. -nope, sorry ._.

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Basically respond on what you want to do about easy and let me handle the offset scenario. Afterward, I'll be more than happy to bubble the map.

1. Storyboard: logo.png sort of blends with the colourful BG, that's why I would suggest to try this. Look at the difference
   
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1. 00:05:971 - Here's my suggestion to what's being discussed.
2. 00:18:516 (5) - You need to increase the spacing between this and the last object, otherwise it is a little confusing due to the constant spacing used in the previous patterns. Here's a suggestion.

1. 01:28:879 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't seem to fit the music well. Try to use a slider for (1) & (2) and that should be enough. i.e

Stefan wrote:

Kinda NSFW-like the BG.

Saten wrote:

Edit: lol Stefan wat. Are you drunk?

Gabe wrote:

Stefanmoechan

Saten wrote:

it was a rhetorical question but w/e

either way, I love dragonxcz maps