This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 ноября 2012 г. at 2:50:50

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: u/n
Source: Shakugan no Shana III (Final)
Tags: insert song hichman Naryuga
BPM: 184
Filesize: 6445kb
Play Time: 03:40
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,85 stars, 343 notes)
2. hich's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 1173 notes)
3. Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii (4,75 stars, 916 notes)
4. Normal (2,81 stars, 186 notes)
5. re-map (5 stars, 297 notes)

Download: Kawada Mami - u/n
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All diffs by me except Taiko~
Thanks to hich-nya and Naryu-nya for the taiko diffs~ !


Insane will be re-mapped soon. I'll try to map better these days \==/

Haii
from #modreqs


[Insane]
00:31:274 (3,5,7) - make them more nice-looking 00:44:807 (1) - silence this spinner?
01:02:090 (1,2,3,4) - this could be a little tricky
01:56:546 (8,9,1) - NC on (8) instead, it looks better if the NC starts on the beginning of a stacking
02:19:698 (6,7,1) - as above
03:03:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - looks a bit harsh but ok
03:23:937 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
03:50:514 (10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - try this?
[Hard]
00:44:644 (1) - Silence this spinner?
00:39:753 (1,2,3) - ok this is confusing, unless you use AR 8
02:49:209 (3) - This is somewhat outside. This could be prevented if you moved the whole section a bit up
03:18:394 (4,1) - anti-jump but I guess this is fine

[Normal]
00:44:970 (1) - silence this spinner?
AR+1 (I think this fits better with the current BPM and SV)
00:49:535 (2,3,1) - 1,0x spacing is better here imo
02:45:948 (1,3) - overlap? D:
02:58:829 (4,5) - 1 grid up


Good luck :3

Saten wrote:

Haii Hi~~
from #modreqs


[Insane]
00:31:274 (3,5,7) - make them more nice-looking

SPOILER

00:44:807 (1) - silence this spinner?
01:02:090 (1,2,3,4) - this could be a little tricky
01:56:546 (8,9,1) - NC on (8) instead, it looks better if the NC starts on the beginning of a stacking
02:19:698 (6,7,1) - as above
03:03:720 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - looks a bit harsh but ok
03:23:937 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
03:50:514 (10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - try this?

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:44:644 (1) - Silence this spinner?
00:39:753 (1,2,3) - ok this is confusing, unless you use AR 8
02:49:209 (3) - This is somewhat outside. This could be prevented if you moved the whole section a bit up
03:18:394 (4,1) - anti-jump but I guess this is fine

[Normal]
00:44:970 (1) - silence this spinner?
AR+1 (I think this fits better with the current BPM and SV)
00:49:535 (2,3,1) - 1,0x spacing is better here imo AiMod says it's wrong ._. but fixed~
02:45:948 (1,3) - overlap? D:
02:58:829 (4,5) - 1 grid up


Good luck :3 thanks :3~

Fixed almost all~

hi~


Insane

1. 00:26:383 (3) - add circle here and move slider to next red line? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420197 fits music better imo, also can avoid the weird spacing
2. 00:35:106 - add note? feels better with a note here
3. 01:17:090 (1) - I think a slow slider fits better here :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420209 0.5x sv
4. 01:28:340 (9) - here o.o? for a smoother flow to (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420212
5. 01:28:992 (1) - out of the grids o.o
6. 01:36:166 (5,6,7) - put the middle part more outside like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420217 ww
7. 01:47:008 - add note www
8. 02:01:437 (8) - here :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420219
9. 02:13:340 (6) - blanket better >.>
10. 02:48:394 (5) - better flow to face up ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420227
11. 02:50:024 (1,2,3,4) - why no jump wwww
12. 03:34:046 (6,7,1) - don't think it fits to the curved slider so much o.o
13. 03:47:253 (4,5) - start at the same place o.o

Hard

1. 01:41:709 (2,3,4) - i think it's pretty hard to read o.o because it stacks wrong in play mode
2. 02:31:600 (1) - o.o why 3/4 i think it's just 1/1 here...
3. 02:49:209 (3) - out of window o.o you can move 02:48:557 (1) to a better place
4. 03:18:720 (1) - lol
5. why not end at the same point with insane o.o

Normal

1. 00:26:709 (1) - blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420247
2. 00:36:492 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420248 (fix the next too www)
3. 01:28:340 (4) - here :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420250
4. 01:34:535 (1,2) - don't confuse beginners, make 1reverse + 1circle :3
5. 01:56:057 (5) - hidden repeat >.>
6. 02:52:470 (2) - where is clap

nice map \:D/

Good luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~


Insane

1. 00:26:383 (3) - add circle here and move slider to next red line? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420197 fits music better imo, also can avoid the weird spacing
2. 00:35:106 - add note? feels better with a note here
3. 01:17:090 (1) - I think a slow slider fits better here :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420209 0.5x sv
4. 01:28:340 (9) - here o.o? for a smoother flow to (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420212
5. 01:28:992 (1) - out of the grids o.o
6. 01:36:166 (5,6,7) - put the middle part more outside like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420217 ww
7. 01:47:008 - add note www
8. 02:01:437 (8) - here :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420219
9. 02:13:340 (6) - blanket better >.>
10. 02:48:394 (5) - better flow to face up ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420227
11. 02:50:024 (1,2,3,4) - why no jump wwww
12. 03:34:046 (6,7,1) - don't think it fits to the curved slider so much o.o
13. 03:47:253 (4,5) - start at the same place o.o

Hard

1. 01:41:709 (2,3,4) - i think it's pretty hard to read o.o because it stacks wrong in play mode
2. 02:31:600 (1) - o.o why 3/4 i think it's just 1/1 here...
3. 02:49:209 (3) - out of window o.o you can move 02:48:557 (1) to a better place
4. 03:18:720 (1) - lol
5. why not end at the same point with insane o.o

Normal

1. 00:26:709 (1) - blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420247
2. 00:36:492 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420248 (fix the next too www)
3. 01:28:340 (4) - here :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420250
4. 01:34:535 (1,2) - don't confuse beginners, make 1reverse + 1circle :3
5. 01:56:057 (5) - hidden repeat >.> i dont think so o.o in autoplay it's ok..>< if someone says about it, i'll fix :3
6. 02:52:470 (2) - where is clap

nice map \:D/ thanks \:D/

Good luck~

Thank you~ fixed almost all :3

Halloww ~


[General]
- Add insert song to the tags?
- Slider blankets can be better ~


[Normal]
- Approach Rate -1
00:31:927 (1) - Last point at x:156 y:232
00:55:405 (1) - 3rd point at x:32 y:184, 4th point at x:48 y:236, 5th point at x:116 y:264
02:44:644 (3) - Make this better ~
02:45:948 (1) - Move up and left one grid.
03:25:731 (2) - Make a better blanket around the previous note, 3rd point at x:232 y:128 and 4th point at x:272 y:172


[Hard]
00:50:514 - Add a circle.
01:06:899 (4) - Remove this note.
01:07:144 (1) - Move this 2 ticks forward and add a note.
01:21:492 (3) - Reverse.
01:37:633 - Add a circle?
01:45:785 - Add a circle? If you take this suggestion, place the note where (2) was.


[Insane]
- Use slider tick rate 2 like the other diffs.
- HP Drain Rate +1


Well mapped ~
Good luck!

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~ Hi~ >w<//


[General]
- Add insert song to the tags? ok~
- Slider blankets can be better ~ sorry ><..


[Normal]
- Approach Rate -1 ok =.=
00:31:927 (1) - Last point at x:156 y:232 changed a bit
00:55:405 (1) - 3rd point at x:32 y:184, 4th point at x:48 y:236, 5th point at x:116 y:264
02:44:644 (3) - Make this better ~ ~
02:45:948 (1) - Move up and left one grid.
03:25:731 (2) - Make a better blanket around the previous note, 3rd point at x:232 y:128 and 4th point at x:272 y:172 ok ></


[Hard]
00:50:514 - Add a circle.
01:06:899 (4) - Remove this note.
01:07:144 (1) - Move this 2 ticks forward and add a note.
01:21:492 (3) - Reverse.
01:37:633 - Add a circle? ok
01:45:785 - Add a circle? If you take this suggestion, place the note where (2) was. jumps..hm..ok


[Insane]
- Use slider tick rate 2 like the other diffs. ok ww
- HP Drain Rate +1


Well mapped ~ thanks >w</
Good luck!

Thank you for mod~ :3

привет

Insane

00:41:063(6,1) - если используешь такую комбинацию, то лучше стакнуть слайдеры, а вообще первый лучше повернуть как-нибудь чтобы его хоть немного видно было.
00:43:346(3,4) - стакни лучше
00:44:161(1,2,3,4) - сделай 2 двоечки или анстакни, а т ов одной точке как-то скучновато
01:02:666(1,4) - стак опять, и в этом месте лучше со слайдера убрать нк и оставить только тройку, так хотя бы сливаться не будет, и будет понятно что там нота стоит
01:22:802 - подними немного репит закрыт наполовину
02:00:384 - удали эту нотку, не вписывается сюда
03:19:215 - такой оверлап ужасный http://puu.sh/11lg0 придумай что-нить с этим, потому-что вторую ноту да на такой скорости не видно почти

04:01:606 - странно, что ты не закончила мапу здесь, кажется что она не доделана~ тем более тут было бы логическое завершение

Hard

00:50:520 - может сюда нотку добавить? звучит не плохо
00:56:389(4,5) - стак
01:06:905 - http://puu.sh/11lmu
01:27:041 - либо нотку сюда, либо слайдер двойным сделай

Normal

01:17:911 - закончи спиннер тут и поставь ноты
02:11:389 - ^
03:19:215 - ^

Удачи

Katty Pie wrote:

привет приветь :3

Insane

00:41:063(6,1) - если используешь такую комбинацию, то лучше стакнуть слайдеры, а вообще первый лучше повернуть как-нибудь чтобы его хоть немного видно было. hm...
00:43:346(3,4) - стакни лучше ok
00:44:161(1,2,3,4) - сделай 2 двоечки или анстакни, а т ов одной точке как-то скучновато ok
01:02:666(1,4) - стак опять, и в этом месте лучше со слайдера убрать нк и оставить только тройку, так хотя бы сливаться не будет, и будет понятно что там нота стоит NC done
01:22:802 - подними немного репит закрыт наполовину
02:00:384 - удали эту нотку, не вписывается сюда on that note i put a clap, so no ><
03:19:215 - такой оверлап ужасный http://puu.sh/11lg0 придумай что-нить с этим, потому-что вторую ноту да на такой скорости не видно почти o.o changed a bit
04:01:606 - странно, что ты не закончила мапу здесь, кажется что она не доделана~ тем более тут было бы логическое завершение мне было лень :<

Hard

00:50:520 - может сюда нотку добавить? звучит не плохо
00:56:389(4,5) - стак ok
01:06:905 - http://puu.sh/11lmu no!
01:27:041 - либо нотку сюда, либо слайдер двойным сделай

Normal

01:17:911 - закончи спиннер тут и поставь ноты why? i think this is better...
02:11:389 - ^
03:19:215 - ^

Удачи uguu~

Спасяп няш :3

hello~ from my queue :3 Read all the mods , plz no skip TwT

Normal font - Suggestions for better gameplay , hitsounds , etc..
Bold font- Highly recommended to fix
Red + Bold font - Unrankable

[General]

since 1024 x 768 is the most recommended size of BG, how about replacing current BG to this? http://puu.sh/11UH9

[Normal]

00:22:476 (1) - since this part is quite quiet, how about reducing volume little bit? (except 00:23:780 - )
according to your previous NC patterns, better add NC here and DNC 00:35:193 (1) - .
00:44:487 (3,4) - i really think that these kinds of 2 notes after a slider on this diff are too harsh since it's sudden and spacing is quite big. i highly suggest that replace these kinds of pattern to 1 slider and 1 short (1/4) slider.
00:44:976 (1) - when i played this i can't hear any sounds of spinning, and it was little bit weird. how about increasing volume to 30% (don't worry about high volume. it's quite quiet too :3)
00:48:237 (1) - how about remove 3rd dot and make the slider like this? i think current slider's shape is not that good :3 http://puu.sh/130Sx
00:49:541 (2) - ^ (ctrl + h)
00:51:824 (2) - how about curve this slider to right little bit for better flow? (maybe 2~3 grid is better)
01:17:259 (1) - i think this spinner on the vocal is weird and so sudden. how about start at 01:17:259 - ?
01:39:433 - decrease the voulme more? i think spinner-bonus is too loud though the song is suddenly volume-downed here.
01:56:715 (1) - how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/1314d
01:58:346 (2,3) - ^ for better appearance? http://puu.sh/1314U
02:09:433 (1) - same suggestion as 01:17:259 (1) -
02:18:889 (1) - this slider's shape is not that good imo , but change or no change is your choice :3
02:27:041 (3) - 1 grid up the 3rd dot for better blanket to 02:25:411 (2) - .
02:32:585 (4) - stacked note is not recommended on Easy ~ Normal diff, how about move this to x:144 y:236 so that it can be much more visible and symmtric style to 02:29:324 (4) - ?
02:36:824 - this is too long , so if you want to use this, i suggest you to enlarge the spinner to 02:37:476 - . also i think it's quite more fit to the song. (also remove finish and add clap is better to listen)
02:56:715 (1,2) - i think following the vocal is better here since this long slider doesn't follow anything. i suggest you to make the rhythm like this -
03:04:215 - 03:09:433 - i don't understand why you didn't map here TwT as you mapped 02:53:780 - ~ 02:58:998 - , mapping this part is make sense.
03:14:976 (1) - ~ it's blinded by spinner-osu so , newbies can't see it well and will miss this. how about arranging those like this? http://puu.sh/131u5
if you want a code, here you go.
03:23:780 (5) - how about arranging this slider like this so that this can be much more enjoyable and better appearance? (blanket to 03:25:411 (1) - ) http://puu.sh/131wT
if you want a code, here you go.
03:27:041 (4,1) - i prefer those to be curved like this , but since 03:28:020 (1) - is quite near to the bottom, it depends on you :3 http://puu.sh/131zr
03:29:324 (3) - move 2nd dot 2 grids left and 3rd dot 4 grids up and 1 grid left so that it's not too much near to 03:30:628 (2) - ? like this - http://puu.sh/131AF also 03:30:302 (1) - should be move to appropriate place in order to make the spacing regular.
03:32:911 (1) - move this to x:412 y:132 for the regular spacing?
03:38:291 (5) - i highly suggest to remove this. it's too harsh
03:38:454 (1,2,3,4) - i think following vocal is better here. so how about make the rhythm like this and set the green line right? and also if you want a example , here it is. http://puu.sh/131HF (4 is stacked to 2's place.)

[Hard]

00:22:476 (1) - same suggestion as Normal diff.
00:32:748 (5) - i think it's too difficult to spin after this. how about replace this to just 1 note?
00:56:389 (4,5,6,7) - i think this rhythm is fit to the song much more :3 http://puu.sh/131SB
01:03:400 (1) - add a finish here?
01:06:905 (4,5) - here too. on the player's point of view, this kind of short stream after slider and even it has the spinner after this, players usually get 100s here. so i suggest you to remove 01:06:905 (4) - and no stack for the 01:06:987 (5) - .
01:17:585 (1) - i really think it's weird since it starts on weird beat orz. this should be started on 01:17:259 - .
01:21:498 (3) - 1 more return? i think it will be fit to the vocal more.
01:33:563 (3) - make this slider like this in order to not being so boring? http://puu.sh/131Z5
01:36:824 (3) - NC?
01:38:780 (1) - same suggestion as Normal diff.
01:41:063 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm will be much more fun to play, just make '1' to be returned and remove 2.
01:43:672 (6) - NC here and DNC 01:43:998 (1) - ?
01:46:280 (6) - ^
01:58:672 (4,5,6) - how about make this notes to 1 return slider?
02:11:063 (1) - same suggestion as 01:17:585 (1) -.
02:19:215 (4) - arranging like this for better appearance? http://puu.sh/1325o
02:22:476 (1,2) - i think these sliders' shape is too old-fashioned and not that good ;( how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/13265 (same suggestion for 2)
02:28:346 (3) - according to your previous finish patterns , add a finish on 02:28:998 - ?
02:32:585 (5) - remove finish since it's not fit
02:32:911 (1) - same suggestion as Normal diff
02:43:020 (1) - move this to x:184 y:92?
02:43:020 (1) - ~ 02:51:009 (4) - i know you tried to make this part as blanket style, but it's too close to each other x_x how about increase 0.1~0.2 spacing and replace?

at least this - 02:45:139 (3) - this is so close to 02:44:487 (1) - , so 1 grid right? ( also move 4 too.)


gonna mod in a few hours since i need to logout >_> please wait !!

Hey~ Request from my queue

[General]

1. Add "Blazing Eyes" to your tags?

[Normal]

1. 00:42:367 (1) - This's so ugly =A= Try to copy 00:37:802 (1) - then put like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:672 (2) - Ctrl+H (1)
3. 00:52:802 (1) - Put like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:54:106 (2) - ^ (ctrl+J)
5. 01:28:346 (4) - (end) why N:C1 here? should be S:C1 and clap lol
6. 01:38:780 - put a note here (clap) and move spinner to 01:39:106 - end at same time
7. 01:56:715 (1) - not very good shape imo ._.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:18:889 (1) - What's this lol change it Please
9. 03:04:215 - why don't map here D:
10. 03:16:933 (5) - put at x:440, y:40?

[Hard]

1. 00:33:074 (1) - It's not the place you should add spinner T^T try this?
2. 00:59:161 (1) - ^
3. 01:07:150 (1) - ^
4. 01:56:715 (1,2) -
5. 02:26:389 (1) - Remove finish (begin)
6. 02:45:139 (3) - move to x:284, y:140
7. 02:45:628 (4) - ^ (or somewhere orz)

That's all~ good luck!

Flask wrote:

Hey~ Request from my queue

[General]

1. Add "Blazing Eyes" to your tags?

[Normal]

1. 00:42:367 (1) - This's so ugly =A= Try to copy 00:37:802 (1) - then put like this Changed a bit =w=
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:672 (2) - Ctrl+H (1) oki
3. 00:52:802 (1) - Put like this? done
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:54:106 (2) - ^ (ctrl+J) oki
5. 01:28:346 (4) - (end) why N:C1 here? should be S:C1 and clap lol idk o.o
6. 01:38:780 - put a note here (clap) and move spinner to 01:39:106 - end at same time
7. 01:56:715 (1) - not very good shape imo ._. this was done before update ><
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:18:889 (1) - What's this lol change it Please changed
9. 03:04:215 - why don't map here D: because i'm too lazy D:
10. 03:16:933 (5) - put at x:440, y:40?

[Hard]

1. 00:33:074 (1) - It's not the place you should add spinner T^T try this?
2. 00:59:161 (1) - ^
3. 01:07:150 (1) - ^
4. 01:56:715 (1,2) -
5. 02:26:389 (1) - Remove finish (begin)
6. 02:45:139 (3) - move to x:284, y:140
7. 02:45:628 (4) - ^ (or somewhere orz)

That's all~ good luck!

Thanks for mod~

yo~ >w<

[General]



[Hard]
01:18:074 (2) - remove NC(?)
01:52:150 (3,4) - not completely stack each other
02:11:552 (1) - remove NC(?)
03:12:041 - drag this break time

[Insane]

00:42:204 (3) - consider to remove this note.
Coming some note in 1/4 beat after used finish hitsound note, a little look like strange some people.
if you do this work, consider to replaced 00:42:367 (3) . because it become anti-jump.
but i think okay in ar9.....
00:43:346 (3,4) - (nazi) not completed stack each other (slider's end : x175 y355)
01:27:530 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - random jump ~_~
01:28:509 (1) - (nazi) x432 y260 or 256 plz ~
01:33:563 (5,6) - (nazi) not completed stack (slider's end x327 y334)
01:36:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wow..... triple very hard >.<'
01:54:596 (2) - x256 y164
01:57:041 (4) - x292 y272
01:58:346 (7,8) - (nazi) not completed stack (slider's end x324 y304)
02:00:302 (3,4,5) - um..... i listen a little strange sound here.
how about you? (becosz, my headphone is bad..)
00:54:270 (6,7,1,2) - imo, imappropriate jump here.
02:42:530 (6,1) - (nazi) not completed stack (slider's end x103 y192)
03:15:791 (4,5) - ^
03:28:998 (3,4) - ^
03:38:128 (1,2) - ^
03:37:313 (4) - ctrl+R is better for me :3

tyan~

nyaaan, thanks :3 some fixed >w</

From my Queue~


[General]

* Mp 3 should be cut for saving memory~
* You don't use a Storyboard, so delete the osb file in your folder and full submit~


[Normal]

00:36:498 (3,1) - This nearly overlap is a bit annoying. Space them out would be better~
01:20:193 (4,1) - This overlap looks ugly http://puu.sh/15kYO . Make it like this is better imo~ http://puu.sh/15l1c
01:35:846 (3) - The second repeat is unexpected, you should replace one repeat by another note
01:54:106 (2,5) - Stack 2's end perfectly with 5~
02:18:563 - Not only that this downbeat shouldn't be ignored, it also breaks the flow~ Add a note please.
02:30:302 (1,3) - Again annyoing overlap~ My suggestion is http://puu.sh/15l7L
02:47:259 (3) - Move this a little bit for a perfect stack with 1
03:29:324 (3,2) - Touching each other http://puu.sh/15lfo
03:38:291 (5,1) - Plays a bit to confusing for Normal diff, because they all seem so close. http://puu.sh/15lh4 Would play better


[Hard]

* Slider Velocity seems too high for me! The jump from 1. 00 to 1. 60 and then 2. 00 is not good imo. 1. 40 for Hard would be totally fine for me
00:59:161 (1) - replace this spinner by notes. It's just not fitting imo because it actually should end at 00:59:976 and would be too short then
01:18:074 (1) - don't see a reason to NC here
01:21:824 - here should be a note, the beat is to strong to ignore
01:23:128 - add note, otherwise this flows pretty bad
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - this jump is to big for a hard
02:11:552 (1) - Same as before~
02:15:302 - Note, beat here and flow goes lost


[Insane]

* SV 1. 70/80 is totally fine for me
00:33:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Reduce the spacing for this stream o.o it's too hard to play like this
02:15:954 (1) - Add a sliderpoint for making this slider look much better
02:16:606 (3) - ^
02:21:172 (1,2,3) - This doesnt play fine, rearrange please
02:53:454 (4,5,6,7,8) - reduce spacing for them please~


I actually think this needs some more mods and work before going to an MAT

But nicely done~ Good luck!~

I'm too lazy to reply, thanks for the mod~ some fixed

from my mod queue

[General]
it's ok
[easy]
01:18:570 ~ 01:19:215 - spinner end a little early and no empty is butter.music is not empty
02:12:041 ~ 02:13:020 - ^
03:19:867 ~ 03:20:846 - ^
[hard]
00:25:574 - +1
00:43:998 - +1 need something
02:20:846 - in middle is bad idea
[insane]
great~
01:42:693 (1),01:44:324(1) - same is butter

that's all

good luck

Hi, Lizellota.
I mod this beatmap by your request.

[Normal]
03:16:280 (3,4,5) - I think this slider would look better if you apply flip horizontally.

[Hard]
00:50:030 (7) - How about change to like this?
02:43:346 (1) - Remove New Combo

Sorry, i can't found other suggestion or problem T^T (Don't give kudosu to me)
Shoot a star =☆ <- Really sorry, this is my little sincerity

Good luck :3

Underflow wrote:

Hi, Lizellota. Hi~~
I mod this beatmap by your request.

[Normal]
03:16:280 (3,4,5) - I think this slider would look better if you apply flip horizontally. Oh, yes ><

[Hard]
00:50:030 (7) - How about change to like this? Sure :3

Suggestion

02:43:346 (1) - Remove New Combo Ok

Sorry, i can't found other suggestion or problem T^T (Don't give kudosu to me)
Shoot a star =☆ <- Really sorry, this is my little sincerity

Good luck :3

thank you~

wantuole wrote:

from my mod queue

[General]
it's ok
[easy]
01:18:570 ~ 01:19:215 - spinner end a little early and no empty is butter.music is not empty
02:12:041 ~ 02:13:020 - ^
03:19:867 ~ 03:20:846 - ^
[hard]
00:25:574 - +1
00:43:998 - +1 need something
02:20:846 - in middle is bad idea
[insane]
great~
01:42:693 (1),01:44:324(1) - same is butter

that's all

good luck

Thank you for the mod~ no change, sorry ><

Hi ~
M4M here

Normal :

00:31:929 (1,4) - I still see 1 when 4 appear, then overlap : http://puu.sh/17wBm
01:59:320 (1) - try something like this ? I think it's look better : http://puu.sh/17xFF
02:14:646 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/17wNH

344,144,134646,6,0,B|376:96|432:92|492:112|500:176,1,200,4|0

02:46:929 (2,3) - try this ? http://puu.sh/17wQf

112,152,167255,2,0,B|144:104|112:56,2,100,0|0|8

03:15:624 (2) - nazi, but make it more symetric
03:25:733 (2) - try this ? http://puu.sh/17wXb

360,40,205733,2,0,B|288:48|240:116|280:192,1,200

Hard :

00:56:385 (4,5) - try this ? http://puu.sh/17xb2

448,148,56385,2,0,B|436:108|392:84|344:92|316:128,1,160,0|8
319,125,57037,1,0

Insane :

01:01:439 (3,4) - move it a bit right
01:55:570 (4) - try this ? I think it's look better http://puu.sh/17xw7

276,152,115570,2,0,B|200:136|140:208|164:272,1,200

good luck for ranking ~

*w*
Thanks for the mod :3

hi. #modreqs

note: random mod in russian because it's your native language
note 2: didn't like song but decided to mod because i'm bored (so yeah, short mod and i skip some not-really-important-mistakes)

ok go

[General]
Киаи на харде анснапнуты + вообще киаи различаются, что не очень-то хорошо.
тик рэйт 2 звучит невмеру активно. сбрось до 1 для всех сложностей
источник: Shakugan no Shana Final
тэги: Square the Circle
^ кажется это - название альбома

[Insane]
овермап на овермапе. Я не думаю, что интересная карта - стримы и джампы. Я бы сказал, что "интересная карта - карта, которая идет в ритм" перепроверь пожалуйста все стримы, мне кажется многие из них овермапнуты.
01:07:635 (1) - лол, лишнее нк. не по вокалу + не по музыке. удали спокойно, +13 в стриме это ранкбл.

[Hard]
вообще, мне очень не нравится ломанный ритм, которому ты пытаешься следовать. Какие-то красные биты - замаплены, а какие-то откровенно пропущены, выглядит нелогичным и трудным для понимания. Я очень советую следовать чему-то одному, изредка миксуя вокалы и музыку.
Если ты делаешь джампы, то пожалуйста делай их хотя бы по вокалу/музыке. Чтоб их можно было почувствовать, а не просто протащить за счет бездумного ускорения курсора.
00:40:244 (2,3) - неиграбельно с хидденом. Это конечно Хард и все такое, но все же иногда нужно задумываться и об игроках, которые играют.
00:50:516 - по ритму явно впишется 1/2 cлайдер. + он идет и по вокалам, так что да, советую поставить тут слайдер
03:28:668 (1,2,3) - по сути тут таже самая фигня, что и в 00:40:244 (2,3) . разве то ноты по другому стоят.

[Normal]

note: i treat normal as Easiest diff in mapset.. keep it in mind

00:24:755 (1) - зачем пропускать основной бит? даже если кажется, что паттерн станет красивее, то это только кажется. Играется без серкла тут - не очень.
00:34:537 (6) - лол,очень рандомно смотрится. Я очень советую поменять этот паттерн. если что, то я советую вот такой ритм
00:37:798 (1) - пропуски основных биттов определенно не на пользу карте. Это играется странно [2]
00:43:668 (2,3) - раз уж это самая легкая сложность в мапсете, то лучше просто поставить ноту на 00:44:646 и убрать 1/2 слайдер. т.к. это самая легкая сложность + бпм высоковат, то лучше сделать Изи или сделать нормал легче.
00:48:233 (1) - прикрыт трехсоткой, не самая светлая идея для самой легкой сложности в мапсете.
00:48:233 (1,2) - рандомный спэйсинг ради симметрии - не вариант. Такой "анти-джмп" сконфузит новичков и будет выывать массу ярости с дт+хидден
00:54:429 - вокал начинается тут, а слайдер 00:54:102 - тут, что играется/звучит рандомно + очень сложно для новичков.
00:56:385 - ты уже понимаешь, что я попрошу поставить тут серкл т.к. это играется не очень из-за пропущенного бита.
00:56:711 (2,3) - по сути то же самое, что и на 00:43:668 (2,3)
00:59:320 (2,3) - аналогично с вышесказанным. я не буду писать ВСЕ подобные ноты, захочешь исправить - сделаешь.
01:35:842 (3) - он такой внезапный + с хидденом вообще становится неиграбельным. С таким количеством сайдеров, у которых 1 реверс, тебе просто нельзя ставить такой слайдер. Он очень внезапен и неудобочитаемый для Нормала (нормал - самая легкая сложность).
01:37:146 (4) - очевидно выбивается из ритма и вокала, советую что-то вроде вот такого примера (примечание:нк там не очень-то и нужно, можешь убрать - если применишь)
01:56:059 (5) - для слоупоков новичков лучше побольше открыть этот реверс. я его не сразу заметил, а новички вообще могут пропустить его т.к. он слегка прикрыт 300кой
01:56:711 (1) - вроде старается следовать вокалу и музыке, но выбивается. Мой совет: пример
02:15:950 (3,4,1) - я бы не стал так делать, т.к. новички (а нормал - самая легкая сложность, которую они будут играть) могут сначала кликнуть (1), а потом (4). Такие паттерны вообще крайне нежелательны в сложностях подобного рода, да еще и при высоком бпм, когда нет времени сориентироваться.
02:18:885 (3) - такой поток невольно путает игроков. реверс появляется рядом с (2) и на него легче всего кликнуть, да и по ритму надо кликать на 02:18:559 , а у тебя не только нет кружка на 02:18:559, но и слайдер начинается не в самом удобном месте.
02:20:842 (5) - опять выбился из ритма. начало вокалов + явно слышимый бит, который нельзя просто заменить слайдертиком почуму-то оказался на каком-то слайдере (02:21:168 - )
02:30:298 (1,2,3) - такой оверлап нечитабелен для новичков, кстати. Ну и смотрится неаккуратно, офк.
02:56:874 (2) - а мне кажется, что вокал и бит звучат на 02:57:689, где и должен заканчиваться этот слайдер.
03:15:298 (1) - прикрыт трехсоткой и все дела, уже очевидно-понятно, что такой паттерн нечитабелен для новичков.
03:20:842 (1) - запоздал для первой строчки, но рановат для второй. Начало слайдера ощущается лучше на 03:21:168 - естессна его еще и укоротить надо будет
03:23:776 (5) - интуитивно отпустил слайдер т.к. реверс не чувствуется вообще. Вместо реверса хватило бы ноты на 03:25:081 - сильном бите.
03:30:624 (2,3,4) - тоже самое, что и было оверлап (кривой стак) который не только нечитабельный, но и смотрится не самым лучшим образом.
03:40:733 (4) - если карта началась по музыке, то и заканчиваться она должна по музыке. домапай пожадуйста конец. (same for all diffs)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yes. it's not even complete mod. i just told about overmap/rhythm issues.

oh, and i want deal. so.. m4m? \:D/



edit: and i expect reasons for not accepting my suggestions. it will help me to improve my modding

-Bakari- wrote:

:o hi. #modreqs

note: random mod in russian because it's your native language
note 2: didn't like song but decided to mod because i'm bored (so yeah, short mod and i skip some not-really-important-mistakes)

ok go

[General]
Киаи на харде анснапнуты + вообще киаи различаются, что не очень-то хорошо. В каком месте они анснапнуты? показать трудно? я перепроверила ничего подобного не нашла.
тик рэйт 2 звучит невмеру активно. сбрось до 1 для всех сложностей Нет, потому что я его использую в нормале в качестве ритма.
источник: Shakugan no Shana Final Нет
тэги: Square the Circle Возможно, я проверю
^ кажется это - название альбома

[Insane]
овермап на овермапе. Я не думаю, что интересная карта - стримы и джампы. Я бы сказал, что "интересная карта - карта, которая идет в ритм" перепроверь пожалуйста все стримы, мне кажется многие из них овермапнуты. В каком месте овермап? ты вообще слушал песню? Если нет какого хера ты всякую чушь несешь?
01:07:635 (1) - лол, лишнее нк. не по вокалу + не по музыке. удали спокойно, +13 в стриме это ранкбл. Захотела и поставила, в чем проблема? При чем тут вокал и музыка? мое желание.

[Hard]
вообще, мне очень не нравится ломанный ритм, которому ты пытаешься следовать. Какие-то красные биты - замаплены, а какие-то откровенно пропущены, выглядит нелогичным и трудным для понимания. Я очень советую следовать чему-то одному, изредка миксуя вокалы и музыку.
Если ты делаешь джампы, то пожалуйста делай их хотя бы по вокалу/музыке. Чтоб их можно было почувствовать, а не просто протащить за счет бездумного ускорения курсора. Это не ломаный ритм, а я следую вокалу, если же ты не заметил, я тебе сообщаю.
00:40:244 (2,3) - неиграбельно с хидденом. Это конечно Хард и все такое, но все же иногда нужно задумываться и об игроках, которые играют.
00:50:516 - по ритму явно впишется 1/2 cлайдер. + он идет и по вокалам, так что да, советую поставить тут слайдер
03:28:668 (1,2,3) - по сути тут таже самая фигня, что и в 00:40:244 (2,3) . разве то ноты по другому стоят. Играется это нормально, просила потестить несколько человек, перед тем как выкладывать на форум.

[Normal]

note: i treat normal as Easiest diff in mapset.. keep it in mind

00:24:755 (1) - зачем пропускать основной бит? даже если кажется, что паттерн станет красивее, то это только кажется. Играется без серкла тут - не очень. В смысле без серкла? ты ослеп что ли? уже не видишь его, хм :/
00:34:537 (6) - лол,очень рандомно смотрится. Я очень советую поменять этот паттерн. если что, то я советую вот такой ритм Нет, спасибо.
00:37:798 (1) - пропуски основных биттов определенно не на пользу карте. Это играется странно [2]
00:43:668 (2,3) - раз уж это самая легкая сложность в мапсете, то лучше просто поставить ноту на 00:44:646 и убрать 1/2 слайдер. т.к. это самая легкая сложность + бпм высоковат, то лучше сделать Изи или сделать нормал легче. Нет.
00:48:233 (1) - прикрыт трехсоткой, не самая светлая идея для самой легкой сложности в мапсете. Типо ты один такой заметил, а остальные нет? Хорошо я спрошу
00:48:233 (1,2) - рандомный спэйсинг ради симметрии - не вариант. Такой "анти-джмп" сконфузит новичков и будет выывать массу ярости с дт+хидден
00:54:429 - вокал начинается тут, а слайдер 00:54:102 - тут, что играется/звучит рандомно + очень сложно для новичков. Я держу РИТМ, а не вокал, ясно?
00:56:385 - ты уже понимаешь, что я попрошу поставить тут серкл т.к. это играется не очень из-за пропущенного бита. Здесь все нормально.
00:56:711 (2,3) - по сути то же самое, что и на 00:43:668 (2,3)
00:59:320 (2,3) - аналогично с вышесказанным. я не буду писать ВСЕ подобные ноты, захочешь исправить - сделаешь.
01:35:842 (3) - он такой внезапный + с хидденом вообще становится неиграбельным. С таким количеством сайдеров, у которых 1 реверс, тебе просто нельзя ставить такой слайдер. Он очень внезапен и неудобочитаемый для Нормала (нормал - самая легкая сложность). Это вполне нормально.
01:37:146 (4) - очевидно выбивается из ритма и вокала, советую что-то вроде вот такого примера (примечание:нк там не очень-то и нужно, можешь убрать - если применишь) Нет.
01:56:059 (5) - для слоупоков новичков лучше побольше открыть этот реверс. я его не сразу заметил, а новички вообще могут пропустить его т.к. он слегка прикрыт 300кой Я пересмотрю и придумаю чтонить.
01:56:711 (1) - вроде старается следовать вокалу и музыке, но выбивается. Мой совет: пример
02:15:950 (3,4,1) - я бы не стал так делать, т.к. новички (а нормал - самая легкая сложность, которую они будут играть) могут сначала кликнуть (1), а потом (4). Такие паттерны вообще крайне нежелательны в сложностях подобного рода, да еще и при высоком бпм, когда нет времени сориентироваться.
02:18:885 (3) - такой поток невольно путает игроков. реверс появляется рядом с (2) и на него легче всего кликнуть, да и по ритму надо кликать на 02:18:559 , а у тебя не только нет кружка на 02:18:559, но и слайдер начинается не в самом удобном месте.
02:20:842 (5) - опять выбился из ритма. начало вокалов + явно слышимый бит, который нельзя просто заменить слайдертиком почуму-то оказался на каком-то слайдере (02:21:168 - )
02:30:298 (1,2,3) - такой оверлап нечитабелен для новичков, кстати. Ну и смотрится неаккуратно, офк.
02:56:874 (2) - а мне кажется, что вокал и бит звучат на 02:57:689, где и должен заканчиваться этот слайдер.
03:15:298 (1) - прикрыт трехсоткой и все дела, уже очевидно-понятно, что такой паттерн нечитабелен для новичков.
03:20:842 (1) - запоздал для первой строчки, но рановат для второй. Начало слайдера ощущается лучше на 03:21:168 - естессна его еще и укоротить надо будет
03:23:776 (5) - интуитивно отпустил слайдер т.к. реверс не чувствуется вообще. Вместо реверса хватило бы ноты на 03:25:081 - сильном бите.
03:30:624 (2,3,4) - тоже самое, что и было оверлап (кривой стак) который не только нечитабельный, но и смотрится не самым лучшим образом.
03:40:733 (4) - если карта началась по музыке, то и заканчиваться она должна по музыке. домапай пожадуйста конец. (same for all diffs)

No change anything, sorry, i prefer my rhythm and patterns, thanks for reminding some mistakes, i'll look at Normal again

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yes. it's not even complete mod. i just told about overmap/rhythm issues.

oh, and i want deal. so.. m4m? \:D/

Idk..

edit: and i expect reasons for not accepting my suggestions. it will help me to improve my modding

Thanks for the mod, i changed some sliders and rhythm by my way.

Hello!M4M here~

[Normal]
00:33:885(4) try to make it stack with the beginning of 00:31:929(1)
00:36:494(3) don't let it touch the end of 00:35:189(1)
00:57:526(3) X:296 Y:64?
01:00:135(3) X:424 Y:68?
02:56:711(1) spacing with the note befor change bigger,fix it please

[Hard]
OD+1?
00:42:689(4) try to make the beginning of it stack with 00:41:222(5)
00:48:070 add note?
00:50:516 ^
00:59:646(4) stack with 01:00:298(7)?
01:02:907(6) new combo?
03:40:244 add note?

[Insane]
AR-1?
00:33:641(6) new combo?
00:34:048(11) ^
00:44:646(4) move one grid left
01:02:744(7) X:172 Y:212
01:03:559(3,4) strange shape...but not ugly to see
02:01:276(6) new combo?
02:32:744(9) why stack with the note before?
02:44:483(8) new combo?
03:20:352(2) X:384 Y:192?

can't find more.nice map and good luck! have a star~

m'kay. calm down, please.

Захотела и поставила, в чем проблема? При чем тут вокал и музыка? мое желание.

НК без причины - признак.. osu! is a rhythm game and we must follow rhythm at anything from note-placment till comboing. if you've ever played CTB you should know that in CTB "New combo = cleaning plate" which is important part of gameplay. that's why New Combo Should be reasonable

Типо ты один такой заметил, а остальные нет? Хорошо я спрошу

no need to insult others. also: yes, it's a problem. none of modders are perfect, obv

00:48:233 (1,2) - рандомный спэйсинг ради симметрии - не вариант. Такой "анти-джмп" сконфузит новичков и будет выывать массу ярости с дт+хидден

no reply? why?

01:07:227 - [insane] - extra 1/4

01:56:059 (5) - для слоупоков новичков лучше побольше открыть этот реверс. я его не сразу заметил, а новички вообще могут пропустить его т.к. он слегка прикрыт 300кой Я пересмотрю и придумаю чтонить.

if it means "i'll fix" this post deserves kudosu, btw

В каком месте они анснапнуты? показать трудно? я перепроверила ничего подобного не нашла.

02:22:472 - [Hard] (4ms later)

stop hating everyone who says "your map isn't perfect" we're trying to help you

Fixed green lines. Thanks.

yanguoke wrote:

Hello!M4M here~Hello~~

[Normal]
00:33:885(4) try to make it stack with the beginning of 00:31:929(1)Fixed
00:36:494(3) don't let it touch the end of 00:35:189(1)
00:57:526(3) X:296 Y:64?
01:00:135(3) X:424 Y:68?
02:56:711(1) spacing with the note befor change bigger,fix it please

[Hard]
OD+1? Fixed
00:42:689(4) try to make the beginning of it stack with 00:41:222(5)
00:48:070 add note?
00:50:516 ^
00:59:646(4) stack with 01:00:298(7)?
01:02:907(6) new combo? Added on next note
03:40:244 add note? Added

[Insane]
AR-1?
00:33:641(6) new combo?
00:34:048(11) ^
00:44:646(4) move one grid left
01:02:744(7) X:172 Y:212
01:03:559(3,4) strange shape...but not ugly to see
02:01:276(6) new combo?
02:32:744(9) why stack with the note before?
02:44:483(8) new combo? Sure
03:20:352(2) X:384 Y:192?

can't find more.nice map and good luck! have a star~

Thank you~

offset 1610
I think 1603 is a little bit faster

[Normal]

00:31:936-(1) I think you don't need to make this ds change
00:29:001-(1) ds
03:30:631-(2) ^
03:40:740-(4) move to x256 y176

[Hard]

01:01:276-(3) ds
01:19:863-(5) ^
01:24:918-(4) move to x512 y120
01:25:244-(5) x352 y152
01:43:994-(3) ds

[Insane]

... ._.


I love this song!

Twice wrote:

offset 1610 Ok ><
I think 1603 is a little bit faster

[Normal]

00:31:936-(1) I think you don't need to make this ds change Opps >< fixed
00:29:001-(1) ds yeah...
03:30:631-(2) ^
03:40:740-(4) move to x256 y176 Changed a bit

[Hard]

01:01:276-(3) ds o.o?
01:19:863-(5) ^
01:24:918-(4) move to x512 y120
01:25:244-(5) x352 y152
01:43:994-(3) ds

[Insane]

... ._. ._.


I love this song!

Thanks for the mod

hi

[general]

offest +4~5

[Insane]

00:28:994 (11) - this should be NC and remove this NC 00:29:320 (1) -
00:32:581 (5) - how about move to x348y132? adjust 00:33:070 (6) - 's placement if you change this
00:33:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stream looks strange, which isn't a standard circle shape. you may firstly draw a slider and then use convert to stream tool to get a better one
00:34:541 (1,2,3) - although the spacing is even but it still flows not very well
00:54:102 (5,6,7,1) - - well I'd like to say what should be used, circle or slider, in different part of a song. Just regarding this (circle,slider,slider,sldier), you could try to make it (slider,slider,slider,circle) and feel if it flows/plays better(not looks better). I uploaded this for you to DL and see the difference in feeling http://puu.sh/18MzM The principle is that when you firstly hit a slider with clap, then you move your cursor far away and then move it back, which leads to the sense of good flow during the process moving the cursor back and forth. Anyway I don't think I can break the language to deliver my thought to you thoroughly but just try to understand
01:02:744 (7) - stack
01:23:776 (1) - ^

[Hard]

02:46:439 (2,4) - 02:45:950 (1) - stack and spacing

[Normal]

00:31:603 (3) - spacing
03:30:298 (1) - spacing

open distance snap while mapping?

that's all

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

offest +4~5

[Insane]

00:28:994 (11) - this should be NC and remove this NC 00:29:320 (1) - Changed
00:32:581 (5) - how about move to x348y132? adjust 00:33:070 (6) - 's placement if you change this Fixed
00:33:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stream looks strange, which isn't a standard circle shape. you may firstly draw a slider and then use convert to stream tool to get a better one I think it's ok :c
00:34:541 (1,2,3) - although the spacing is even but it still flows not very well Fixed
00:54:102 (5,6,7,1) - - well I'd like to say what should be used, circle or slider, in different part of a song. Just regarding this (circle,slider,slider,sldier), you could try to make it (slider,slider,slider,circle) and feel if it flows/plays better(not looks better). I uploaded this for you to DL and see the difference in feeling http://puu.sh/18MzM The principle is that when you firstly hit a slider with clap, then you move your cursor far away and then move it back, which leads to the sense of good flow during the process moving the cursor back and forth. Anyway I don't think I can break the language to deliver my thought to you thoroughly but just try to understand Yeah, changed, looks good
01:02:744 (7) - stack No
01:23:776 (1) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]

02:46:439 (2,4) - 02:45:950 (1) - stack and spacing Fixed

[Normal]

00:31:603 (3) - spacing What? It's ok o.o
03:30:298 (1) - spacing

open distance snap while mapping? Ofc i have used, DS is 1.0 ..

that's all

Thanks for the mod ~

General
attention
please checked sonme slider's node,slider's surface important
every last node must be ended in slider ending circle center,not lazy

Normal

STR set 1

example:01:22:157 (1,2) - 01:24:766 (4) -

00:44:983 (1) - you can end this spinner in 00:47:103 -
02:55:418 (4) - i think this slider can move to 02:55:418 - it can be fit this music
02:58:027 (3) - this queue,you are better mod according this example
http://puu.sh/194Za
03:28:027 (1,2) - if you can,please move these objects in the window's


Hard

OD-1

00:26:559 (2) - not fit this music,and it 出现suddenly
00:28:190 (5,6) - ^
00:33:081 (1) - this spinner is not fit in this place
00:37:972 (1) - ^
00:40:255 (2) - spacing
00:40:418 (3) - ^
00:59:983 (5) - ^
00:41:885 (2) - this note,not fit
00:44:168 (3) - spacing
01:06:912 (4,5) - this 2 notes is no need
01:23:298 (5) - nc
01:19:874 (5) - move to 01:19:793 (5) -
01:25:092 (5) -
01:32:918 (2) - spacing
01:55:418 (5) - spacing
01:56:722 (1) - move to 01:56:559 (1) -
01:57:374 (2) - move to 01:57:211 (2) -
02:00:391 (4,5) - this 2 notes is useless
02:16:940 (5) - nc
02:31:858 (2,3) - useless
02:31:613 (1) - you can add reeniny
02:49:548 (4) - spacing
03:13:271 (1) - move to 03:13:353 - &fixed this slider's length
03:23:461 (4) - nc
03:23:787 (1) - remove nc
03:27:048 (4) - spacing
03:29:657 (4) - spacing,and this slider is not fit this music

Insane

OD-1 AR-1 HP-1

00:24:440 (2) - spacing
00:25:092 (5) - remove this note
00:25:255 (5) - move to 00:25:092 -
00:27:864 (6) - spacing
00:28:353 (9) - spacing
00:31:777 (2) - spacing
00:32:429 (4) - spacing
00:39:277 (9) - nc
00:39:440 (1) - remove nc
00:41:396 (7) - nc
00:48:081 (3) - spacing
00:48:570 (5) - ^
00:48:733 (6) - ^
00:51:179 (5) - delete
00:51:342 (6) - move to 00:51:179 (5) -
00:54:440 (6) - nc
00:56:885 (7) - move to 00:57:048 (7) -
00:56:885 - add a note
00:57:456 (8) - remove this note
01:02:755 (7) - 没有重叠好
01:04:222 (4) - spacing
01:17:266 (1,2) - this jump is hard to reganize /.\
01:17:592 (3) - NC
01:21:668 (4) - NC
01:31:450 (1) - move to 01:31:613 (1) -
01:31:613 - add a note
01:37:972 (1) - remove nc
01:38:298 (3) - nc
01:54:766 (3) - nc
01:56:641 (2) - this note is not fit
01:59:005 (9) - NC
01:59:331 (1) - remove nc
02:00:309 (3,4) - delete
02:11:070 (3) - nc
02:14:983 (3) - nc
02:21:342 (2) - nc
02:23:624 (5) - nc
02:25:255 (4) - nc
02:50:363 (3) - nc
03:13:271 (1) - move to 03:13:353 (1) -
03:19:059 (2) - nc
03:46:124 (8) - maybe it add a note?
03:50:037 (5) - spacing&NC

No changes. Thanks for the mod

Thank you for request \(^^)/
Sorry for delay ^^'

Normal

Hard

Insane

General

I like this song ^^ Good luck ^^

Thanks for the mod~ fixed some stuff~ i want to make SB..but later~

Sorry I dont think the map is really fun to play.. And Hard is too fast I think. orz

Kataliis wrote:

Sorry I dont think the map is really fun to play.. And Hard is too fast I think. orz

lol no, if you can't play the map it's your problem and Hard isn't fast..hm

Lizellota wrote:

Kataliis wrote:

Sorry I dont think the map is really fun to play.. And Hard is too fast I think. orz

lol no, if you can't play the map it's your problem and Hard isn't fast..hm

LOL

modreq~ from #taiko

[hich's Taiko Oni]
00:24:766 - k
00:24:929 - k
00:24:113 - k
00:39:766 - k
01:10:744 - D
01:25:255 - d k (instead of k d)
03:21:015 - d
03:21:179 - re

From Hichman request ~
Well you know you need a 2nd Taiko GD ~

Don't forget I can be wrong

Please use custom combo color modder will love you

K = BIG kat (finish clap/whistle)
D = BIG don (finish)
k = kat (clap/whistle)
d = don (normal hit)

Taiko oni :
Some suggest



Good luck with ranking ~

[Normal]

00:36:505 (3) - Maybe move this 2 grids up, I hate sliders touching sliders.
00:42:374 (1) - I think the end curve looks very ugly, You should move the 3rd slider point to make it look nicer.
01:28:353 (4) - This slider you should look like this http://puu.sh/1dMhd Looks better imo
01:35:853 (3) - Just to be aware, This might confuse people, since this is the easiest diff in your mapset.
01:56:070 (5) - Maybe you should change the position of this note, Looks not so good.
02:18:570 - Add a note here, I hear vocals here

That's all

[Hard]

01:37:809 (4) - Sudden pause may make some people feel weird, maybe you can reverse it like this http://puu.sh/1dMpo01
01:53:787 (1) - Shape is BAD, improve it.
02:43:353 (3) - New combo?
02:44:494 (1) - Remove it?
02:45:146 (6) - Add here

That's all

[Insane]

01:06:179 (6) - Reverse selection? (Ctrl+G)
02:18:407 (3) - ^
03:20:363 (2) - Put this note at the end of the incoming slider

Rest looks good,

Thanks~

you forgot to add tag hichman
:<


/me hugs hichman

sure, thanks for reminding

Pagliaccio wrote:

offtop

Lizellota wrote:

sure, thanks for reminding

WOW another Bakari's post and you do not say something like "shut the f**k up stupid boy!!!11"

I'm so proud of you <3

...

Pagliaccio wrote:

offtop

Lizellota wrote:

sure, thanks for reminding

WOW another Bakari's post and you do not say something like "shut the f**k up stupid boy!!!11"

I'm so proud of you <3

не выебывайся

Pagliaccio wrote:

offtop

Lizellota wrote:

sure, thanks for reminding

WOW another Bakari's post and you do not say something like "shut the f**k up stupid boy!!!11"

I'm so proud of you <3

Me too^^

hichman wrote:

Pagliaccio wrote:

offtop

WOW another Bakari's post and you do not say something like "shut the f**k up stupid boy!!!11"

I'm so proud of you <3

не выебывайся

Не лезь не в своё дело.

Just saying btw..

t/92508

~

What the...? stop it, Pagliaccio. Kataliis just go away, i dont know you, and dont spam here, thanks
Konei we are know it, thanks

Roses are Red,
Violet are Blue,
and I'm going to mod this soon.

Hello~ Sorry for the delay,,

Normal:

00:34:222 (5) - 1 Grid up?
01:58:842 (3) - 1 Grid up, Right
02:01:287 (3) - 1 Grid down
02:30:309 (1,3) - IMO, overlaps here looks ugly.. Maybe you can make a symmetry not at the middle, but a bit more left..
03:38:461 (1) - I don't like hit sound change in the slider here.. (Just my thoughts)

Hard:

-- 03:12:048 - Compare with insane, and choose what you what to maintain. (I prefer you to change in here)

00:53:298 (2) - 1 Grid Right
02:32:592 (5) - Instead of Stacking on (3), why not putting it somewhere Left?
03:21:831 (5) - Not a perfect symmetry. Pull the Red tick 1 Grid up
03:28:842 (2) - Imo, stacking on (5) is quite confusing to me..

Insane:

00:33:815 (8) - 1 Grid up
00:34:222 (13) - ^
00:54:113 (1,2) - Wouldn't his bee too far,,?
01:06:994 (9) - Delete note, there is no beat here..
01:26:070 (1) - Delete NC
01:38:298 (3) - Delete note here too, because there isn't a beat here
01:56:396 (7) - Finish here sounds a bit odd
02:17:592 (1) - Delete NC?
02:31:777 (2) - Same opinion
02:38:624 (3,4) - Though symmetry, I hope you will maintain the distance.
02:51:668 (2) - 1 Grid Right
03:20:363 (2,3) - Confusing.. Prefer you to put (2) Somewhere Left
03:40:581 (3,4,5,6) - 1 Grid down. Current shape doesn't make a perfect stack

Insane is to hard for me x.x
Good luck~

Some changes, thanks~

Lizellota wrote:

Tags: insert song

wat ?

Kin wrote:

Lizellota wrote:

Tags: insert song

wat ?

This is a Song so the mapper decided to add it to tags^^

Kataliis wrote:

Kin wrote:

wat ?

This is a Song so the mapper decided to add it to tags^^

Lol Kataliis... stop flood and trolling here please.

some variation of "soundtrack", i think.
good luck with map, btw

Taiko mod request by hichman ^ ^

all just suggestion.

[General]

remove "song" in tags ?

[hich's Taiko Oni]

Highly recommend to use slider velocity 1.4
00:01:614 (1) - d ?
00:02:266 (3,4) - k d ?
00:17:592 (1) - why you don't map this part ? also you can map follow the instrument.
00:34:059 (76) - k ?
00:34:222 (77) - D
00:39:440 (103) - d
00:42:048 (114,115) - Didn't hear the drums, add note to this part x_x
00:42:374 (116) - k
00:43:842 (123) - d ?
00:46:124 (5) - add d ?
00:52:483 (33) - it out of mapping page, make it 2/1 reverse slider ?
00:53:787 (36) - add d
00:54:603 (40) - ^
00:55:092 (42) - D
00:59:005 (60) - same as slider ^
01:00:961 (65,66,67,68) - d d k d
01:02:918 (73) - D
01:21:016 (108) - add k ?
01:23:624 (119) - k ?
01:23:787 (120) - D ?
01:34:222 (166) - D
01:37:972 (180) - add d ?
01:40:744 (199) - D
01:45:961 (218) - same as slider ^
01:51:179 (236) - K ?
01:53:787 (248) - add d ?
02:17:102 (391) - k
02:17:266 (392) - D
02:27:700 (437) - ^
03:14:657 (18,1) - This part, you don't know Taiko diff can't have break time X_X add some d here
03:35:526 (77) - D !
03:40:744 (103) - ^
04:01:613 (189) - ^

o_o

Done.
As I say it before, your diff have too many unnecessary sv changes. Try to fix it.

'Played for Pagliaccio. Here's my input on the taiko. If you would like a full taiko mod, please contact me and I'll fully mod the difficulty.

1. There are unnecessary changes in the slider velocities throughout this diff, especially at places such as 00:52:483 - and 00:59:005 -. It makes no sense as there is no slowdown / speedup in the music, and on a side note, the sliders feel extremely weird to play at their current placed points in this map. Please remove the unnecessary SV changes as they just ruin the map in its entirety.
2. As compared to the sections mapped before the kiai, the kiai is pretty bland and empty. I would say stick with following the Vocals AND BGM for this section of the song. You're trying to do both but it's leaning towards vocals on the most part.
3. I've noticed that you're overusing kats. This is probably not on purpose, but it's apparent to me as I test played this. I'd say don't put down a lot of kats in a row; spice it up a bit and add in some more dons instead.

Also, why is 'insert song' in the tags..? If it's from the anime's soundtrack, just add 'soundtrack' or 'original soundtrack'.

Thank you, Elly!

no problem kawaii bakari www