1. Hard (4,85 stars, 187 notes)
2. Normal (2,69 stars, 119 notes)

• General
  ● offset -10 better imo
  ● BG size 960x768 maybe better use 1024x768, like this:
  
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  or
  

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 01:13:942 (1) - hm, maybe use more smooth slide :3 just a litle move central point
  
  SPOILER

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  ● 01:13:942 (5) - ^
  ● 01:31:215 (2) and 01:33:033 (1) - sliders too low, please up it ^^'
  ● 02:07:124 (1) - remove nc?
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
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  Good normal

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 01:02:351 (5,6) - hm, maybe change this notes on slider o.o start 01:02:351 end 01:02:806 (6) ?
  ● 01:03:942 (9) - a little not symmetric, move this slider in x:297 y:38
  
  >Hitsounds
  
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  Mmm...nice

Thats all.
Good luck

1. 01:03:932 (1,2) - switch the NC because the other vocal was still going ></
2. 01:08:478 (1) - use ctrl+j on it and the fix the spacing. it'll look much better like that imo~
3. 01:13:932 (1,2) - same with 01:03:932 (1,2) -
4. 01:31:205 (2,4) - why not make them curved so it'll be more enjoyable to play like this?
   
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1. 01:38:478 (1,3) - it looks a bite weird to me >< so make them blanket the (2) like this?
   
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1. Offset sounds a bit off for me , try 61662 ( +2ms ) , better to me

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:13:932 (1,2) - I think you should swap New Combo here , if you want following the vocal here :3
   2. 01:26:205 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can make them symmetrical? Like this pattern
      
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   3. 01:47:569 (3) - Move centerpoint 1 grid up to make this awesome slider symmetrical? ( Tiny Grid Size )
   4. 02:00:523 (1) - I think this spinner is too short on easiest difficulty :3
   5. 02:07:796 (1) - Same as above
   6. 02:21:659 (3) - Reduce 1 repeat ? sounds better to me , It may follow the music well
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:59:387 (3) - Finish hitsound sounds a bit loud , maybe reduce to 30%~40%?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:27:114 (4) - If I map this pattern , I will add New Combo here , but it's up to you :3
   2. 02:19:160 (2,3) - Move circle 2 to slider 3's head , It may get a better flow IMO
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:30:296 (4) - Remove all of the claps on this slider sounds better
   2. 02:04:160 (3,4) - Swap whistle ? If you do then it will be better , follow vocal :3

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

1. Shouldn't the red line be before the very first note of the beatmap? Might aswell place it at 00:59:841.
2. Well, I see you have a 1x1 blank play-skip here, and I guess it's intentional. I just think it might be better to just leave the skip-button as is, because beginners probably don't know you can skip with space, so they'll be listening to the intro all the time. This might be fairly boring after a while, especially since beginners might need several tries to pass a beatmap. Just some thoughts.
3. Add Miyamoto Konatsu and Okita Sawa to tags?

1. Tickrate 2? Sounds better imo.
2. Well, I modded hard first, and I'm kind of lazy to do hitsounds again, so if there's anything you did in [Hard], then you might as well do them here too xD
3. 01:08:478 (1) - Personal preference, but imo it doesn't look nice with the combination of this and the earlier 01:07:114 (4). Make it a straight, horizontal slider instead?
4. 01:13:023 (2) - Would feel better to stack this with (1) imo. (Of course, you'll need to fix distance snapping a bit )
5. 01:23:023 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
6. 01:42:114 (2) - Move the grey middle anchorpoint to x:72 y:288 ;_; (extend the end a bit)
7. 01:43:932 (4) - ^
8. 01:57:114 (6) - Move to x:96 y:168 (and line up 01:56:205 (4) - if you want to do that too, xD)

1. 01:06:432 (5,6) - This jump just plays weirdly for me, mostly because I can't hear anything in the music to accompany it. Maybe rearrange like this?
   
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2. 01:06:659 (6,7,8,9) - Try add whistles at 01:07:114 | 01:08:023 | 01:08:250 with reduced volume?
3. 01:11:887 (3) - clap on sliderhead.
4. 01:12:341 (4,5) - New combo on either of these?
5. 01:12:569 (5,7) - I would swap the claps to the 1st and 3rd note here, to accompany the song.
6. 01:14:387 (2) - Add clap?
7. 01:14:614 (3) - 30% volume finish on end?
8. 01:16:205 - 01:30:750 - Reduce volume a bit? Since it's instrumental here.
9. 01:36:887 (2,4) - Whistles
10. 01:43:364 (1) - Bah, this is kinda awkward to hit imo. Add a note at 01:43:250? Makes this part feel much smoother
11. 01:50:069 (4) - Just a personal preference, but move it to x:256 y:84?
12. 01:51:432 (1,4) - Whistle on (1) sliderend and (4) sliderstart?
13. 01:58:478 (3,4,5) - Well, it's a big jump compared to the rest of the map. You could swap (4,5), but it's also fine, so you can leave it if you want to.
14. 02:10:750 - 02:23:705 - Reduce volume because of instrumental?
15. 02:16:205 (4,5) - These feels really close when I was playing, and really tempted me to click faster =3= Possible to somehow rearrange this part a bit?
16. I would add whistles on 02:19:841 | 02:20:750 | 02:21:660 | 02:21:887 | 02:22:341 and remove the one at 02:22:114 (2) to accompany the song better.
17. 02:22:341 (3) - idk, clap on sliderend? xD
18. 02:23:705 (1,2,3,4) - Again a big jump compared to the rest of the map. Maybe it's fine since it's the end of the map, but I really feel the jumps should be a bit smaller

Lance wrote:

Almost half of the mp3 isn't used. Shouldn't this be cut?

ykcarrot wrote:

I think the aritsts must be actual name of singers.

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Same here, because in ANN says the artist is Hayami Saori & Seto Asami:
http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... p?id=14167

• Hitsound

1. 01:00:750 (1) - Add clap at the start like [Hard].
2. 01:26:205 (2,4) - I suggest add whislte in this circles because fits perfectly with the track.
3. 01:29:159 (2) - Same as 01:00:750 (1).
4. 01:29:841 (3) - Maybe clap like [Hard].
5. 01:37:114 (3) - Same as 01:26:205 (2,4), you can hear the whistles in the track? d'aww that sound cool.
6. 01:52:569 (1) - Finish at the start to emphasize the vocals.
7. 02:17:114 (3) - And here whistle at the start.
8. 02:19:841 (3,1) - Exactly the same as 01:26:205 (2,4).
9. 02:21:659 (3) - Same as 02:17:114 (3).
   Beatmap Suggestions
10. 01:37:569 (1) - Delete new combo here and add the nc to the next circle to remark the change in the vocals with this.
11. 01:45:296 (5) - Same as above, really considers it.
12. Another combo suggestion: 01:48:932 (4) - Add new combo here, then remove the new combo 01:50:296 (1), and repeat the same process of 01:37:569 (1) in 01:52:569 (7), now new combo in 01:56:205 (5).
13. 02:19:841 (3) - To be own consistent with the combos add new combo here, check you before pattern of two circles and a repeat slider, if you agree with this new combo then delete this 02:20:750 (1) furthermore this new combo pattern is symmetric and looks nice.
14. Just if you want add a new combo here 02:21:659 (5), now delete this 02:22:796 (1) and finally add NC here 02:23:705 (4).

• Hitsound

1. To don't be repetitive follow the same suggestions here like in [Normal]

ykcarrot wrote:

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Same here, because in ANN says the artist is Hayami Saori & Seto Asami:
http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... p?id=14167

I know that this song can be categorized character song.
Then the artist of every map that used character song should be character name? It's just NO.
GiNa, you are wrong.

GiNa wrote:

Why are "Seto Asami" and "Hayami Saori" in parentheses instead of the characters' name ?

GiNa wrote:

And, I'd say this is one of those songs that has special artist (just like the original ed, you would put the artist as "Shirahamazaka High School Chorus Club" instead of all the singers' name)

Melophobia wrote:

congratz~!