mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Poke's Taiko:]

--> Looking the difficulty of this Taiko, In my opinion deserves a Oni in the title. (Poke's Taiko Oni)
--> I don't like how to play the Video in this difficulty, doesn't work fine is a bit confuse at the hour to 'Click' on the notes. Remove this Line from the .osu Notepad to delete the Video in this difficulty (I also think that you need to do full submit but on another difficulty to don't have any problem with the 'Whitout Video' Link. For example, delete the Video and then you need to go to the Insane difficulty to do Full Submit)

Video,0,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

Mod Info:

d= don (Normal Hitsound)
k= kat/katsu (Clap/Whistle Hitsound)
D= Big Don (Finish Hitsound)
K= Big Kat/Katsu (Clap/Whistle + Finish Hitsound)

00:36:131 (173): Totally agree with Leo and KPY, this 1/2 Slider doesn't work fine on a Taiko Difficulty, is kinda 'weird' to do that when you are playing the map. To be sincere I think that works better a 3-plet, try with a kdd, this give a better flow in my opinion
01:31:912 (50): Again this Slider, in this case you can fix the problem just changing this Slider to a don here. Looking that it's a dense Taiko map, you can give a little break to the players on here, also I can listen this pause in the music
01:46:912 (151): Same as above, but in this case you can use a Big Don since the Vocal Stop is a bit higher

Nice, but Why you did not map to the end of the song? You have a nice rhythm to a Taiko map, really. You should consider that, but it's just an appreciation by me

Leorda wrote:

I and eLtigreXXx did discuss about title song, and he fixed the title for correction. No kds

Bubbled

P.S. I would like to hunt Tewi for my lunch.....

eLtigreXXx wrote:

;^;

fixed

228,272,107381,6,0,B|200:228|228:180,1,90,4|0
296,228,107849,1,8
368,192,108084,2,0,B|392:240|360:292,2,90

Chewin wrote:

Hi, from my queue :3

[General]
taiko_bg.png is 875x767. You should to use one 800x600, 1024x768 ok
What about to rename the insane diff in "sewerty5's Lunatic"?

[Normal]
k

[Hard] all done
00:11:756 (6) - NC here and remove from 00:11:990 (1) for consistency
01:47:381 (1,2,3) - Improve this blanket plz: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/366416

228,272,107381,6,0,B|200:228|228:180,1,90,4|0
296,228,107849,1,8
368,192,108084,2,0,B|392:240|360:292,2,90

01:53:943 (1) - Remove NC
01:59:099 (2) - Improve the overlap
02:06:131 (5) - NC here and remove from 02:07:302 (1)

[sewerty5's Insane]
00:38:943 (9) - New combo
00:46:443 (6) - ^
00:53:943 (5) - ^

lolmap

Good luck with rebubble and rank :3

Chewin wrote:

Hi, from my queue :3
[Gabe's Easy]
00:17:381 (3) - Using grid level: 4 move the 3rd waypoint 1 grid left to make it symmetric. Done
00:18:318 (4) - ^ ^
01:00:506 (1) - Move the 2nd waypoint to x:76 y:196 Done
01:01:443 (2) - 2nd waypoint 2 grid down Copy/Pasted it.
02:02:381 (1) - Finish on the head Sure.
Nazi sorry o.o The map is good.

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Touhou - Iosys Tewis Mapaku To Endless Wi PV .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84881
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Endless Tewi-ma Park
Artist:IOSYS
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:sewerty5 pokedigi Gabe Tewi Inaba usatei

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Eirene wrote:

SPOILER

quickly looked at the insane diff... you can ignore the mod since the map is already good


[insane :]

few ideas to make the diff looks better

00:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you may try something like this http://puu.sh/H977. it fits the music really well OK
00:32:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - that the only pattern that doesn't follow the voice, that's really odd OK
00:41:756 (1,2,3) - could round a bit these sliders ? and the mirror pattern. It's not as awesome as what you did at 01:04:256 (1) ok
01:28:396 (9,10,1,2) - this new combo looks horrible. Try to move it on (2) ? ok
01:38:943 (5) - move middle point a square right ? It's ugly otherwise ._. ok
01:52:771 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - new combos on the stream don't make sens imo. At least the 1st ._. ok
01:57:693 (6) - try to follow the melody instead of that slider ? ok
01:59:568 (6) - add new combo ? ok
02:02:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to have new combos just after slider. e.g. 02:03:201 (6) - , 02:04:138 (12) - , 02:05:779 (10) - , 02:06:716 (4) -
having new combos every 4 beats is not everytime the best thing to do.
02:09:881 (7) - new combo here ? ok

updated
tanks C::::

Lizbeth wrote:

[Gabe's Easy]
Normal and Easy have same slider velocity and distance snap.... Plus notes every beat. both diff are too close in difficulty. You have to lighten it a bit.
same suggestion about the break for this one.

Taiko diff seems fine to my eyes.

That's all.

Lizbeth wrote:

SPOILER

[sewerty5's Insane]
00:12:927 (7) - remove a repeat as you did at 00:14:802 (7) -
00:50:896 (8) - delete note
00:58:631 (1) - Too close to previous object
01:05:427 (5) - remove repeat
01:08:006 (1) - This is just an idea, delete this note, and make a delayed break starting here. Just pick the biggining of the break and drag it to 01:08:006 -
01:52:771 (7) - add new combo and remove it here: 01:53:006 (1) -

[Hard]
00:06:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure about jumps in the very beginning of the map, it threw me off.
00:42:693 (3,4) - turn this into 3 notes... I dont think it fits with the vocals here: 00:42:927 - using end of slider and a note. I prefer how you did here: 00:35:427 (4) - or here: 00:27:927 (6,7) - I hope you get my point, if not feel free to ask me.
00:44:568 (5,6) - same here
00:50:193 (4,5) - ^ you could just reverse them too. note slider.
00:52:068 (6,7) - same as above
01:08:006 (1) - same suggestion I made for insane
nice spacing increasing in the last kiai ~ well done

[Normal]
00:26:521 (6) - delete, I think a note in red tick would fit more here: 00:26:052 - I suggest to replace this slider with 3 notes.
00:49:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - do here the same you did here: 00:51:131 (1,2,3) -

[Gabe's Easy]
Normal and Easy have same slider velocity and distance snap.... Plus notes every beat. both diff are too close in difficulty. You have to lighten it a bit.
same suggestion about the break for this one.

Taiko diff seems fine to my eyes.

That's all.

all fixed
updadted

1. 00:07:078 (4) - for consistent hitsounding, add clap in the end too like before?
2. 00:15:516 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning. I can hear cymbal sounder although that's just a bit
3. 00:23:016 (1) - similar think with above
4. 00:35:203 (2) - please remove the whistle. that's weird to hear orz. beside that, you didn't add whistle in same sound with this spot before.
5. 00:38:016 (1) - add finish again for cymbal sounder
6. 00:42:703 (2) - same with 00:35:203
7. 00:45:516 (1) - same with 00:15:516
8. 00:50:203 (2) - remove whistle again
9. 00:53:016 (1) - add finish again in beginning
10. 00:57:703 (2) - remove whistle
11. 01:00:516 (1) - add finish again in beginning
12. 01:05:203 (3) - remove whistle
13. 01:32:391 (1) - add finish
14. 01:33:328 (3) - I guess, you forgot to add clap in the end. also, 1 grid right looks more better.
15. 01:39:422 (6) - finish sound should added in (1)'s beginning. not in here orz
16. Agree with Lizbeth's comment orz. just reduce the sv and some circle into slider for make it easier imo.

1. 00:11:766 (1,3) - honestly, finish sound in beginning isn't fit with the music bg imo.
2. 00:15:516 (1) - well, add finish sound in beginning for a bit cymbal sounder
3. 00:26:766 (1,3) - same in here, the finish sound not fit..
4. 00:34:266 (1,3) - ^
5. 00:35:672 (2) - remove finish sound
6. 00:37:547 (4) - you added whistle too in other same pattern, why in here not?
7. 00:41:766 (1,3) - same in here. remove finish
8. 00:45:516 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning
9. 00:49:266 (5) - add clap in slider's reverse for consistent hitsounding
10. 00:56:766 (1,3) - same too. remove finish
11. 01:00:516 (1) - add finish
12. 01:28:641 (1,4) - remove finish too
13. 01:41:766 (6) - add new combo? too long combo set in here orz
14. 01:53:484 (5) - ^ also, in here make the equal combo
15. 02:02:391 (1) - add finish in beginning

1. 00:04:734 (2) - add clap in here for drum sound. also for consistent too orz
2. 00:07:547 (9) - similar think with above. but just add in beginning
3. 00:15:047 (6) - (nazi) 1 grid up for make linear with (5)
4. 00:21:141 (1) - why suddenly finish sound in beginning? remove it please
5. 00:30:516 (1) - and why no add finish in beginning orz
6. 00:45:516 (1) - ^
7. 01:00:516 (1) - ^
8. 01:32:391 (1) - ^
9. 02:09:187 (3) - nee, I guess add clap in here is make nice rhythm. try it? :3

1. 00:12:937 (7) - add clap in the end? but I'm more suggesting to add whistle to in the both spot. like 00:14:812 (7) -
2. 00:14:812 (7) - remove finish in the both. that's weird to hear orz
3. 00:15:516 (1) - add finish in beginning
4. 00:27:937 (6) - remove finish for consistent like 00:14:812
5. 00:29:812 (6) - ^
6. 00:30:516 (1) - add finish in beginning too
7. 00:35:203 (3) - samee remove finish.. also, in 00:37:078 (3) - too
8. 00:38:484 (5,5,3,9) - add clap. for (9), add in beginning
9. 00:42:234 (3) - add clap in beginning
10. 00:44:109 (3) - ^
11. 00:45:516 (1) - add finish
12. 00:45:984 (5,5) - add clap in beginning
13. 00:47:859 (5,8) - add clap. for (8) in the end
14. 00:49:734 (3,7) - add clap
15. 00:51:609 (3) - ^
16. 00:53:484 (3,3) - add clap in beginning
17. 00:55:125 (2) - add clap in the end
18. 00:56:297 (6) - ^ in beginning
19. 00:57:234 (4) - add clap
20. 00:59:109 (4) - ^
21. 01:00:516 (1) - add finish in beginning
22. 01:32:742 (4) - 1 grid right for make it symmetry
23. too many note missing the clap sound in drum sound orz

Video,-200,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

Kitsunemimi wrote:

Mod4mod! :O.... I-I hope it's not too late to mod this map...? <.<

Anyways, your video is out of time. Go into the .osu files of your maps and look for this line:

Video,-200,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"

Change the -200 into -140, and it should be virtually perfect (±10 ms). The insane diff seems to be missing this offset altogether. oks
The skinned hitcircle is a few pixels off from the center (as seen with the misalignment with the approach circle)... And I think you should fix this. If you're too lazy to do it, you can just ask me to it for you. o3o c: done
On another note, the lighting.png actually looks so sexy <3. Good job on it! Usually people who do these kinds of star-lightings make super cluttered messes. ::D

And now, off to the actual modding!~
[Gabe's Easy]
At 2.81 stars, it's not really an easy, but okay...
The problem here is that you put in a bunch of 1/2 sliders, and while those may be pretty easy, they make the overall pace of the map too quick. However, seeing that the map already has so many mods and it's been so long, I'll let that go. A tip for next time though, just keep it simple with Easys; make a bunch of super long sliders.
00:23:016 (1,2,3,4) - Rather nazi, but you don't have these arranged in a perfect diamond shape. Either shift (2) up and (4) down, or move (1) to the right and (3) to the left.
00:38:953 (3,4,5) - Looks ugly and crooked. Either make them more slanted or keep them straight.
00:46:453 (2,3,4) - Similar situation here. I'd advise to keep the same angle from (1).
01:33:328 (3) - Slider tail's missing clap hitsound.
Other than these little aesthetic issues, the diff looks good and ready to go!

[Normal] all done
00:38:016 (1,2) - Very slight imperfection here - they're not aligned in the square pattern properly. Just move them 1 grid to the left.
00:39:891 (4,5) - These two aren't aligned perfectly horizontally either (5) is too high from (4) (by one grid).
01:19:851 - Is there a reason why this break has been pulled back by a tick..?
I really like the rhythm and hitsounding of this diff, very nice~

[Hard]
....So Tewi's actually a devil....
Anyways, it looks like you put in a few too many triples :< This is acceptable because it's a low BPM, but next time, keep the 1/4s out of Hards please >.<I'll keep in mind c:
01:08:016 - Maybe you should put a note here?
01:20:203 - Again with the shortened break?! DX oks
Spacing's rather inconsistent at the end... I think it would look neater if you made it uniform. oks
This difficulty looks decent :3

[sewerty5's Insane] all done
00:44:812 (5) - Slider tail missing clap hitsound.
00:50:203 (5,6,7) - My symmetry senses almost made me jump out of my seat. Fix this into a nice little triangle :< (It doesn't matter if you mess up the spacing to the next combo though imo.)
00:52:312 (6) - Missing clap hitsound like before.
00:57:937 (7) - From this point until 01:39:891 (1), every clap hitsound is missing.
01:44:578 (5) - I suggest you get rid of the repeat on this slider, and add one on 01:44:812 (6) instead (and bump it back a tick). It makes things less confusing.
That's it! I LOVE THESE STREAMS <3 MMMMNNFFSGSH THEY FEEL SO GOOD

[Poke's Taiko Oni]
I don't actually play any Taiko, so I don't know if a pattern's good or not, etc etc. However, I'll still try to point out any mistakes I find. At this point, I really hope there are none, so let's see...
EDIT: you know what, nevermind, no mistakes.

So that's it for the mod. I love this song and this map has turned out to be pretty good, so I'm glad. Don't get nervous because my post is so long; it's always like that. Most of it's just little nit-picky things to make your map perfect; you did a great job :3. I'd star the map too, but it doesn't look like you need any more at this point, so I hope you don't mind~ >u<

Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^^

Insane

00:26:766(1) - so ugly slider ;w; try this http://puu.sh/NXUE oks
00:48:562(7,8) - maybe make so http://puu.sh/NXWP bcz repeat slider 8 hides under note 5. It's not fine oks

Hard

00:17:742 - better add note here, it better follow the music http://puu.sh/NY0V oks
00:32:742 - ^ oks
00:36:141(1,3) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/NY3Doks
00:53:250 - ugly slider form ;w; http://puu.sh/NY4J oks
01:33:094(3,4,5) - correct spacingok

Normal

OD -1 ok

Good luck~~

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~ :3


[Normal]

00:19:266 (1) - This slider has 1.0x spacing, and the spacing you use is 0.9x, re-arrange or put it closer. done
00:26:766 (1) - Move to x:224 y:244 done
00:32:391 (3) - 1 grid left done
00:39:891 (4) - ^ dine
01:50:672 (7) - ^ done
01:51:141 (1) - Same observation as the 1st for this diff, re-arrange this slider in a way it keeps a consistent spacing done

I think that's all~ Good luck c:

Leorda wrote:

Ahhh, I remember this map


[Skinning]
* It is just me or the approachcircle seems off-centered? done
*default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, and default-x.png are unused. Remove these four done


[Normal]
00:49:266 (5,1) - Swap new combo for your combo pattern done
01:06:141 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern done
01:53:484 (1) - ^ done


[Hard]
00:31:219 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398284 done


[sewerty5's Insane]
00:07:547 (7) - Move 1 grid right for allign the pattern (nazi) done


@Gabe : so my bubble popped because of submission error?

oh, once you done, forum PM me for remind me

Leorda wrote:

@Gabe : so my bubble popped because of submission error? Yes. When you bubbled it, some errors happenned after the submition. When we tryed to download it, the mp3 was missing and some difficulties too. So yeah.

oh, once you done, forum PM me for remind me

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Touhou - Iosys Tewis Mapaku To Endless Wi PV .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84881
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Endless Tewi-ma Park
Artist:IOSYS
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:sewerty5 pokedigi Gabe Tewi Inaba usatei

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,-140,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"
//Break Periods
2,68216,79701
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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4266,468.75,4,1,1,40,1,0
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22078,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
22195,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
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84891,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
99891,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
114891,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0


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Kuroshi wrote:

May I work on a Taiko difficulty?

• 00:08:953 (5,6,7) - it'd be better if you adjusted 5 to 4's approach circle, also, I don't really like how 6 go off from 7, they don't take its flow with them
  00:12:937 (7) - since you have that high sound in the music here, which is quite stronger than the stuff before, I suggest a new combo and moving it further apart, as a jump
  00:14:812 (7) - ^
  00:20:437 (6) - ^
  00:22:312 (6) - ^
  00:27:937 (6) - ^
  00:29:812 (6) - ^
  00:35:203 (3) - ^ also suggesting to split it up into circle-slider instead of reverse-slider
  00:37:078 (3) - ^
  00:42:703 (4,5) - ^ but other way around (swap slider and circle)
  00:44:812 (5) - ^ (well without the splitting up)
  00:48:562 (8) - a tripplet feels more fitting here because of the vocals
  00:50:437 (6,7) - make it a jump
  00:52:312 (6) - ^
  00:55:125 (2,3) - this doesn't fit, the vocals go in 2-1/4 each "packs", you got 3-1/4 ones and thus, the following objects (especcially 3) feel awkward and unfitting to play
  00:57:937 (7) - jump
  00:59:812 (7) - ^
  01:02:976 (4) - starting on a blue tick, this is awkward to play and will likely break combos
  01:05:437 (5) - jump
  01:07:312 (4) - ^
  01:08:016 - why not add a note? (antijump)
  01:33:094 (6) - the following stream is extremely hard to catch because it starts on the blue tick, if you want a stream to start after a kickslider, the kickslider should have 4 repeats and the stream should start on a red or white tick; the current state rarely fits anything
  01:34:851 (7) - again, not-so-neat to play because it starts on a blue tick
  01:42:234 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i find this part highly overmapped
  01:45:281 (1,2,3,4) - the sliders having each a repeat arrow, starting on blue ticks and such don't make any sense, adjust it to how the vocals go (the vocals go each in a pair of 2-1/4s)
  01:47:625 (3,6) - so awkward to play 1/4-sliders inside a stream... also, they don't fit because the vocal-pairs aren't set on them
  01:50:906 (1,2) - @01:45:281
  01:52:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - to be honest, this is ugly.
  01:55:594 (1) - this should not have a repeat arrow, there are 2 similar sounds which make a 2-1/4 slider reasoned, though the reverse arrow ruins it here
  01:58:289 (4) - if you want a slider, remove the reverse arrow, move it 1/4 further and place a circle where it started but don't do it like it currently is
  01:58:992 (4) - there is no reason for that one in the music

• 00:04:969 (3) - this should be 1/4
  00:19:031 (6,1) - these are too close to each other, 6's hitburst will overlap 1's slidertrack in an ugly way; also, I highly dislike 90°-angles (especcially in sliderpoints), adjust the curve aswell, please
  00:23:250 (2,3,4) - as an example for how to "fix" the straight lines, it feels like the 3 here could be moved 1 grid (size 4) down to fit the vocals better since these aren't "consistent on the same level" (since that'd only be possible if they were all monotoneous) - as you can hear, the vocal on 4 goes up again, so 3 would logically be placed lower than that to harmonize better
  00:36:141 (1,3) - ewwww... adjust these so they are symmetric to the Y-axis, the current state looks... ugly, tbh
  00:42:469 (2,3) - i do not like this straight line
  00:45:984 (2,3,4) - ^ you can just place 3 a bit more down on the playfield
  00:50:203 (4) - the 90° sliderpoint-angle here makes the slider feel awkward to me; shape the slider so the reverse-arrow points back towards where 3 was
  00:55:594 (5) - 90° angle...
  01:00:516 (1,3) - these bows are too harsh and thus feel awkward, place the sliderend (where the reverse-arrow is) somewhat further away and balance the curve more out
  01:03:328 (7) - ^
  01:04:969 (4) - starting on a red tick, this one feels awkward to play and hold
  01:06:844 (4) - ^
  01:30:047 (4) - awkward angle
  01:29:812 (3,4) - why is this a 0.9x distance while 01:30:047 (4,1) - is an 1.0x one? More consistency here please.
  01:32:391 (1) - again, sliderangle
  01:35:437 (4,5,1,2) - another example for straight lines you should change/fix
  01:38:484 (3,4,5) - ^
  01:40:594 (3) - angle
  01:43:875 (2,3,4,5) - this square is not really a square and when looked at as a square it looks... ugly... please fix it
  01:49:031 (1) - awkward to play due to starting on red tick
  01:49:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - why does the spacing increase?