[Ranger] wrote:

[cRyo]
01:30:411 (5,6) - How about put in x:256 y:320?(Just suggestion) i think its ok ...

1. make the tags consistent
2. Source: '&' -Sora no Mukou de Sakimasu you ni-

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Leorda wrote:

Hello

General
* The blank hitsound file should be 44 bytes http://puu.sh/jh60
* Remove "-" in Source for title correction


Normal
00:23:233 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern


Kiiwa
00:29:491 (1,2) - Not stack correctly with tail slider
00:31:147 (2,3) - Bad rhythm. Remove (2) and move (3) to 00:31:147 for following vocal
00:41:822 (2) - Sudden slow slider are confusing, since this pattern is a jump
00:47:712 (1) - This note is almost offscreen
01:15:135 (5) - Snap the repeating slider to red tick for following vocal
01:25:812 (5) - Unsnapped note
01:25:996 (6) - ^
01:35:749 (6) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
01:40:536 (5) - Unsnapped note
01:40:720 (6) - ^


Ganbatte

arien666 wrote:

[Kiiwa]
01:25:996 (6) - Unsnapped orz
01:40:536 (5) - Unsnapped orz
01:40:720 (6) - Unsnapped orz



meow :3





edit. okay

Garven wrote:

[Cyro]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song. it was 2 when i updated..
01:28:019 (1,2) - Not really feeling this jump at all. removed

Garven wrote:

Did IRC modding on the ENI

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05:45 <Garven> : !
05:45 *Garven is editing (Itou Kanako - The Moon is Not Alone (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44187]
05:45 <Garven> : hima ga aru?
05:46 <Hinacle> : aru!!
05:46 <Garven> : ja
05:46 <Hinacle> : sure=w=
05:46 <Garven> : Easy
05:46 <Garven> : 00:55:626 (1) - end at 00:56:914 -
05:47 <Garven> : 00:57:835 (1) - This is a little too soon after the spinner still
05:47 <Garven> : Maybe just delete it?
05:47 <Garven> : sousite
05:47 <Garven> : 00:55:442 (1) - Spinner start here instead?
05:48 <Garven> : 01:25:810 (1) - This is a bit soon too
05:48 <Garven> : Maybe delete and add a note at 01:26:546 - ?
05:48 <Hinacle> : spinner end is 00:57:835 this point?
05:49 <Garven> : That would make it the same rhythm as before, and a little too soon for an Easy imo
05:49 <Hinacle> : ok~=w=
05:50 <Garven> : Also tick rate 2 fits the song better
05:50 <Garven> : I'd apply to all difficulties if you agree
05:51 <Garven> : Normal: 00:09:246 (1) - These short combos kind of disrupt the pattern you have with the rest of the song
05:51 <Garven> : I'd remove them
05:51 <Garven> : 00:12:190 (1) - ^
05:51 <Garven> : 01:33:172 (1) -
05:51 <Garven> : 00:19:184 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for a Normal.
05:51 <Garven> : 1 beat after is more of a Hard level rhythm post-spinner
05:52 <Garven> : Might be best to map through it like you did in Easy/Insane
05:53 <Garven> : 00:42:190 (1) - Kind of the same thing happening here
05:53 <Garven> : 00:40:718 - Maybe end that spinner here and adda note at 00:41:822 - ?
05:54 <Garven> : 00:54:154 (1) - End this at 00:56:914 -
05:56 <Garven> : Your custom normal-hitclap is super-loud
05:56 <Garven> : Try using this one: http://puu.sh/yxmi
05:56 <Garven> : I find it blends in better
05:56 <Garven> : Don't forget to make a backup of your current one before you add this one
05:56 <Hinacle> : wait~ x-x
05:56 <Garven> : Haha, don't worry. Just ask your questions as you get to them. We can review the chat whenever.
05:59 <Garven> : 01:25:074 (1) - This is also soon after a spinner.
05:59 <Garven> : No really easy solutions come to mind though
05:59 <Garven> : I guess you can end it at 01:24:338 -
06:01 <Garven> : 01:26:546 (3) - maybe end this at 01:27:098 - instead?
06:04 <Hinacle> : Please compressed. I cant download it
06:05 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/yxr7
06:05 <Hinacle> : thx!!
06:14 <Garven> : Insane:
06:14 <Garven> : 00:15:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would really like to see a more uniform spacing amongst all these notes
06:14 <Garven> : Right now you have jumps for 1, 2, and 3, but not for 4-7
06:16 <Garven> : 00:34:644 (1) - This flowed better when it was stacked under 00:33:356 (4) -
06:16 <Garven> : 00:49:552 (1,2,3) - Not understanding this rhythm
06:17 <Garven> : 00:47:804 (7) - nor this one, really
06:17 <Garven> : 00:54:338 (2,3) - and 00:55:074 (5,6) - ^
06:18 <Garven> : 00:57:098 (1) - This feels... extra
06:19 <Hinacle> : I'm confused by Hard English wwwww
06:20 <Hinacle> : Please give me a little time~>M<
06:20 <Garven> : Sorry, sorry
06:20 <Garven> : Which are giving you problems?
06:21 <Hinacle> : maybe... no problem
06:22 <Garven> : Hehe, okay
06:22 <Garven> : Rest of insane is okay, I guess
06:22 <Garven> : I really don't like the 1/4 stacks
06:22 <Hinacle> : that fixed
06:22 <Hinacle> : oh...sorry ww
06:23 <Garven> : Anyway, I'll post the log of this and for the guest difficulties.

easy and normal is All Fixed. Insane diff is 70% Fixed. I like this 3burst...


[kiiwa]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song.
00:25:810 (4) - This was kind of a weird spot to suddenly use a stack instead of the prior patterns.
00:27:651 (1,2,3,4) - Not really feeling these jumps considering the music...
00:44:215 (2,3) - eeh not really into this rhythm. Also makes your tick off. There are a lot of these rhtyhms in the map though. Meh.
01:15:135 (5) - This feels better on the red tick at 01:15:319 -
All Fixed!! I Fixed kiiwa diff. I am taking permission from the kiiwa

[Cyro]
Tick rate 2 works better with this song.
01:28:019 (1,2) - Not really feeling this jump at all.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:58:571 (1) - The problem with how you fixed this is that now it's back to the same amount of time for recovery that it was before. I thin kit' dbe best to end the spinner at 00:56:914 - and leave it at that.

[Insane]
00:57:098 (1) - Still think this is extra. There's nothing in the music to support it. It'd be best to delete it.

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Hinacle ~

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags. Fixed!!

[cRyo]

1. 01:04:828 - Maybe change whistle sound much better.
2. 01:08:878 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:08:509 (1).
3. 01:45:503 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish.

[Kiiwa]

1. 01:45:319 (4) - Add new combo and Remove 01:45:503 (1).Fiexd!!

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[cRyo]

1. 01:04:828 - Maybe change whistle sound much better. nope...
2. 01:08:878 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 01:08:509 (1). this NC dont fit with pattern
3. 01:45:503 (4) - Remove whistle and Add finish. dont like finish here..

Garven wrote:

Ranked!