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haha5957

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haha5957 2011-02-16T02:22:57+00:00

Okay.

Normal-Hitnormal2 is now replaced with soft whistle.

It sounds bit weird but I guess this worked..

not graving this for now

Zelos

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Zelos 2011-02-17T23:46:22+00:00

Ur offset sounded off.

and i did redownload.

I got 358 offset. dont forget to resnap

Insane:

00:21:227 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - err this speed up and volume change dont play well. i suggest you keep the volume constant and that you SB in a warning for speed up if you keep it.

00:56:705 (1,2,3) - ugly volume change but speed ups i dont really mind here. they play random but this one is okay i guess.

Also a lot of your long 1/4th streams are slightly unevenly spaced. (im a nazi like that)

It looks better than last time. heres my star now.

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-03-18T12:22:30+00:00

Oh yeah finally graveyarded LOL.

Woll revive this after 280 days

ise77777

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ise77777 2011-06-20T12:47:10+00:00

KayeSara

KayeSara 2011-07-09T10:10:16+00:00

nice map~ don‘t give up~

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-12-25T04:09:33+00:00

Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this

Lami

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Lami 2011-12-25T09:44:21+00:00

[Easy]

00:45:169 - 슬라이더 모양을 좌우 대칭으로 바꾸는건 어떨까요?
01:24:821 - ""

[Normal]

전체적으로 좀 쉬워요 좀 더 난이도를 올리는게 어떨까요

[Hard]

대략 하드치고는 인세인에 비해 너무 쉽다고 생각해요 난이도를 좀 더 올려보세요
AR도 7정도로 올리시고 중간중간 비어있는 부분에 단타를 더 찍으신다던가..

[Insane]

1:23:256 - 연타부분이 모인만큼 노트가 많이 구석으로 쏠렸네요 슬라이더랑 묶어서 같이 좀 내리시는건 어떨지
2:05:456 - end : 난이도에 비해 점수가 너무 적게 나오는거같네요 슬라이더보다는 단타를 넣으시는게 어떨까요[*][*][*]

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2011-12-25T11:48:41+00:00

haha5957 wrote:
Finally revived after 280 days@@ I'll keep going on with this

wait this map 280days too

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2011-12-26T04:54:11+00:00

Hi ~ haha5957 ~

Mod time for PM In-game ~

Just like you said only mod last diff ~

[haha5957]

AR-1,because not high music and low BPM.
00:33:430 (8) - Remove whistle.
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't used short NC.
01:39:691 - Unwanted Add break time to here,Delete pls.
01:55:082 (1,1,1,1) - don't used short NC.
01:57:169 (1) - Add finish.

That' all ~ Nice BGM ~

Good luck ~

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-12-26T10:37:02+00:00

Thanks~

Last edited by haha5957 2012-05-31T11:18:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Armin

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Armin 2011-12-26T11:25:12+00:00

[General]

*I would suggest you to add a little skin that I used too for my Rozen Maiden's Map.
This:

(The result will be something like this
and this: http://puu.sh/bzxb. Don't forget to credit "XepherX3" for the hitcircle. :3
In addition, siriru made a Rozen Maiden's skin as well. You can find it in the "skinning" section of the site.

*Offset: +5ms, because it sounds a bti off at the end! (Don't forget to Resnap All Notes in this case)

[haha5957]

00:08:386 (x) One of the main hitcircle of the map should be put here, same thing here 00:08:517 (x); the reason is quite fair, here it starts the main instrument of the song. (maybe add them and stack those on the next (1)'s start?)
01:07:082 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Whops, a bit confusing in my opinion, due to 1/3's placements. What if you introduce in a better way the electric guitar?
Starting from 01:06:821, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206330
oh and I'd remove a repeat from 01:07:604 (2) in order to avoid the little jump with the next 1/3 "stream" (since there is a radical change of BPM, it would be a bit unintuitive for the player. Speaking through images, I suggest you to do something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206331
01:13:213 (x) - This part feels really "empty" during playing. What if you add a hitcircle here? (Little suggestion in order to avoid huge jumps: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206334)
02:13:995 (1) - Please silence this spinner at the end (a soft section with 5% volume would be enough at the end of it)

[31's Taiko]

No problems, I found it quite enjoyable :3

mercury2004

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mercury2004 2011-12-26T15:50:30+00:00

I'll get this done as soon as possible

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T09:30:51+00:00

I'll just go with my hard (since mercury didn't gave me his guest diff for some reason) and...

ok, The Long Marathon for this map continues!

Dark Fang

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Dark Fang 2012-05-31T14:50:14+00:00

HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER

.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(~~인지 노말인지~~)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?

[Red Rose]

SPOILER

01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER

01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER

OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time

Last edited by Dark Fang 2012-05-31T14:52:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jieusieu

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jieusieu 2012-05-31T14:52:01+00:00

스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다

[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T15:06:27+00:00

jieusieu wrote:
스타 패기에 지러부리것소;

[Red Rose]
00:44:126 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330218 난 이 모양이 좋습니다
=> 단호한 거절입니다(?)

[Black Rose]
00:56:648 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201 이건 어떤가여
=>ok
01:35:256 (5) - 디스탠스 맞추는게 좀 더 통일성 있을듯
=> 그보다 전 실제로 클릭해야 하는 서클들의 거리를 맞췄습니당
01:54:039 (3) - 01:54:560 (4) - 와 타이밍을 바꿔보는건?
=> ok~

[5957 style]
00:11:778 (1,2) - 이걸 00:12:300 (3) - 이 슬라이더랑 겹치게 놓지 말아요!
=> ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330222 이런 느낌?
01:56:908 - 여기에 노트를 추가하는게 어떨까요
01:57:039 - ^
=> no~!~!!~ㅋㅋㅋ

킁킁 어디서 똥모딩의 냄새가 나는군.

thanks~

Last edited by haha5957 2012-06-01T06:11:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T15:06:27+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
HAI~ HAI~
Let's mod~

Red : must fix or Unrankable
Bold : should fix

[General]

SPOILER
.osb 파일 안쓰는데 삭제하신다면 좋겟습니다.
키아이타임 불일치 왠만하면 통일해주시기바랍니다.
스타레이팅 3.0 미만의 난이도가 있어야합니다. 이지(~~인지 노말인지~~)난이도를 약간 쉽게 수정해보시는건 어떤가요?
=> EDIT : ok~
=> ok
=> ok

[Red Rose]

SPOILER
01:45:691 (3) - Ctrl + R 해보시는게 어떤가요?
=>아니용 굼벵이 패턴 귀요미이
Fine~~~~

[Black Rose]

SPOILER
01:15:560 - Unrankable, Hitsound volume is 0%
=> ok ㅠ.ㅠ
01:16:473 (3) - 이노트를 01:15:430 이것과 대칭이 되게두시면 어떤가요?
=> 그러면 좋겠지만 그.. 아래쪽 패턴과의 어울림을 위해 이렇게 배치했습니당
01:54:038 (3) - 혼동이 오기쉬운 패턴. 왠만하면 수정좀!
=> ok

[5957 Rose]

SPOILER
OD -1? '3'
00:19:604 (4,6) - 슬라끝을 곂쳐보는건어떰 어차피 내의견은 똥이니 무시해도되요
=> 저쪽 방향으로 나갈거고 저쪽에 패턴이 있을거라는걸 암시?하기 위해 일부러 안겹친거에용 'ㅁ'/

내게 모욕감을 주엇어.

My mod is not helpful.
but I try my best

Have a good time

Last edited by haha5957 2012-05-31T15:32:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-05-31T15:12:29+00:00

5957 Rose => Bloody Rose for the consistency on difficulty name

redone some stuffs 'o'/ hope It's little more better then how it was!

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-01T17:11:32+00:00

Helllo ~ haha5957 ~

Random check beatmap ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Add 'OST' in tags.
You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
```
SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)
```

[Bloody Rose]

01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:05:517 - ^
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]

HP,OD+1 much better.
00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
01:40:473 (1) - ^
02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]

Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-06-01T17:23:23+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Helllo ~ haha5957 ~

Random check beatmap ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
Add 'OST' in tags.
You are missing add 'approachcircle.png and hitcircleoverlay.png',pls add this(don't forgot full submit).
Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)
[Bloody Rose]

01:07:082 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:05:517 - ^
01:08:300 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove too short new combo,confused play here.
01:14:386 (5) - This should be 1/3, not 1/2.
02:13:995 (1) - Remove finish and mute end point.
02:13:992 - Unsanpped green line.

[Black Rose]

HP,OD+1 much better.
00:47:649 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:30:039 (2,3) - Should change like this rhythm.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
00:42:039 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
01:40:473 (1) - ^
02:13:995 (1) - Same as Bloody Rose.

[Red Rose]

Too low setting for HP, so +2 will be better.
01:23:778 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:13:865 - Change same parttern likes other diff.

That's all ~ Nice BGM ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

thanks o.o//

everything is done o.o/

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-02T00:40:53+00:00

OK ~ everything looks fine now ~

Here we go :3

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-06-02T03:08:41+00:00

thanks!!!!!

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-06-02T12:59:23+00:00

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.

[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><

haha5957

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haha5957 2012-06-02T13:08:13+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Make sure to add it and do a full submission.

[Black Rose]

00:30:039 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing here it's kind of confusing.

[Bloody Rose]

00:29:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:039 (2) - New combo.
00:57:692 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird to me. Also, it's not perfectly symmetrical.
01:34:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:473 (2) - New combo.
01:56:126 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry but I have to pop this for now ><