HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[General]
Offset feel too off! try with 366ms ( +66 ), change it from the edit window selecting "Move arleady placed notes when changing offset/BPM"
the map is good >.< and i've arleady starred this >.<
no that timing is wrong
anyway onto Design mod
since you said "fitting to music - I guess I know more about this music though.. well, depends on, but I'll keep Mine " i should be able to mod this properly and you instantly understand everything i say then
Easy
could you lower HP drain bit please since this is a easy ;p
00:37:865 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern
00:39:691 (1,2) - i see here you are trying to follow the lead, the problem is for a easy it dont really work, by moving (1) back to 00:39:430 improves the flow of this part hugely
Normalyour AR really needs to be +1 it feels way too slow for the speed and style of the map
00:21:169 (5) - new combo to follow the patterns your breaking
01:08:386 (4,5,1,2) - this pattern really does not flow with the map, first off it only half follows the guitar which makes this totally confusing to play for a normal, a timing pattern like this follows what you are flowing to much better, please really think about changing this

01:52:995 (5) - again new combo here because your breaking your pattern
Hard00:43:082 (3) - kill the silent end on this slider, by having this end it helps to create a flow in the beat and improves the feels of the pattern
00:51:952 - feels totally empty at this spot and i really expected a note due to the clap hitsound style you are using, so i really advise to add a note at this point
01:08:126 - again by adding a note here you increase the playability of this pattern by a huge amount, as it is the spacing and shape make it feel like the (5,6,7) are a white tick pattern rather than a red tick pattern, but by adding a note here it becomes a lot more better to play
(suggestion) 01:12:300 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - it acceptable but this part dont really have a good flow, its like the pattern can't choose if it wants to follow the lead or the rhythm
Insanei have to agree with the other mods over the slider speeds, but you seem to want to keep them, so nothing i can do over that xD
00:14:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok i have to say this combo plays really bad, the main problems is the placement of (5) it just felt odd and i think you could do a much better placement for it, then the break to (6) also felt too long, for the map everytime i played i wanted to start the stream on 00:16:213 so i advise to add a note there
00:33:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i understand the reason behind this pattern and its a good idea, what i will say though is the first set of streams "loud note ones" needs abit less spacing, make the notes overlap abit, it gives it the same feel as the lead instrument then with fast but stiff movement, atm it feels too rash and spaced
01:02:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this played truely bad, the pattern of 2 note stacks makes the player want to do a (1/4 1/4 1/2) rhythm but yet its a (1/4 1/4 1/4) at least make this like a normal stream because atm it does play really bad :/
(suggestion) 01:23:256 (10) - i feel that this note needs more space
01:32:126 - same thing as before about the 2 different stream speeds, the first speed needs abit closer spacing to suit the feel and flow of the song
02:00:430 (6) - new combo to break up this pattern so you can feel the change onto using the main lead to follow
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everything i pointed out is pretty much stuff i really think need fixing since it keeps going away from the original feel the song has, i cant star untill i see your responce and which stuff you fix
